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BPS 093: How to Write Complex Characters with John Winston Rainey

Today on the show we have screenwriter and script doctor, John Winston Rainey. John is the co-author, along with legendary script consultant Linda Seger, of the book You Talkin’ to Me?: How to Write Great Dialogue. John has written 25 screenplays of which 3 have been produced and 10 have been optioned. He has been a script consultant since 1989 and is the author of Screenwriting Style That Sizzles: A Primer For Polishing.

John had been a writer in the film industry for 35 years and won the Writers’ Guild award for best script. He had also been head of the creative department for three different studios. He is the author of the best-selling book, “The Perfect Pitch.” He tutored John on how to write screenplays that sell, and all of John’s acting and directing experience gave him the ability to analyze dramatic writing with a fine eye and ear.

In the March/April 2003 issue of Creative Screenwriting (vol.10; #2), John’s deeply closeted script analysis service was outed when he was rated the # 1 analyst in the country. Overnight, he was flooded with work. What an astounding experience! Instead of screwing up his courage to call producers, they were calling him! And there is nothing better for learning the craft of screenwriting than to analyze lots and lots of scripts and explore ways of fixing the distractions. John started getting a reputation as a great script doctor.

As a result, he not only became a script consultant in high demand, but he has also taken numerous options (deals) on many of his own spec screenplays. He is told frequently that his scripts are easy reads and he attributes that to the writing style that he has developed, which he shares with his clients, as well as his stories. Even if producers turn down one of his scripts, they frequently ask for other scripts that he has written. He has been through many development (rewriting with the producer) processes. Taking assignments and doing rewrites have been exciting creative measures of his craft.

Enjoy my conversation with John Winston Rainey.

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Alex Ferrari 0:03
I'd like to welcome the show John Winston Rainey. How you doing, John?

John Winston Rainey 2:16
Doing well, how are you doing Alex

Alex Ferrari 2:18
As good as we can be in this crazy upside down world that we live in today?

John Winston Rainey 2:22
Upside down, upside down

Alex Ferrari 2:25
I feel like we are in the upside down like Stranger Things like I keep telling people that I feel like we honestly are in Back to the Future to in the alternative timeline. Were a bit awkward. Yes, we're Biff. Biff runs the world. Yes. It's just insane world. I mean, there's a meteor coming now and

John Winston Rainey 2:49
Night before the election

Alex Ferrari 2:51
Yes, obviously, because the universe has a sense of irony.

John Winston Rainey 2:57
Well, we're we are going through a massive transition from the third dimension through the fourth dimension to the fifth dimension. So everything is becoming energy, less matter and more energy. We have to become acclimated to that. That's why we are quarantining ourselves so that we can become self sufficient, mentally and emotionally without having to go out and grab and push and shove.

Alex Ferrari 3:25
Well, well, man, I there's definitely something happening. There's no question about it. I've never seen anything like this in my lifetime.

John Winston Rainey 3:34
It is very quantum. It's very quantum very, very

Alex Ferrari 3:38
So um, so let's talk a little bit about screenwriting and that process, but before we do, how did you get into the business?

John Winston Rainey 3:48
Well, okay, so it was late at some time. And this young lady told me she didn't want to see me again. And instead of this was over a Thanksgiving weekend, and I thought, instead of crying in my beer, I'm just going to sit down this weekend, write a screenplay. I did. And I wrote, I wrote it longhand on on legal pads, because I didn't. I didn't have a computer back then. And of course, I have a huge background in acting and directing. And so you know, like, I kind of knew what dramatic fire was all about. And a friend of a friend of mine, new Ken, Rod cop, and we got the script to him. He read it. He said, Yeah, john, come on down. And so I was in his workshop for four years. I wasn't in there. Six weeks when he asked me to be his associate, which means the gopher, you know, but he's but I mean, he loved my writing and did all the way up to the day died actually passed away this past year, unfortunately. But anyway, yeah, so I wrote that script. Play that first green play got option, actually. And by Bill Duke.

Alex Ferrari 5:05
I now know Bill. Bill's a good guy.

John Winston Rainey 5:08
Yeah. Very good guy and really, really super intelligent. Very smart guy.

Alex Ferrari 5:13
Very smart.

John Winston Rainey 5:14
Yeah. Yeah. And so I went through a development process with him on that very first screenplay. And boy went to school their school there. And yeah, but before then I had been I'd been a big fan of love The Dramatic Arts, but also Joseph Campbell. The first time I read here with 1000 faces back and God I don't want to tell you, Ben because you know exactly how old I am. But, but it was, it was a long time ago. And it was extra curricular reading, you know, I didn't I just read it. Because it was there.

Alex Ferrari 5:54
It sounded interesting.

John Winston Rainey 5:56
Well, a professor that I knew, recommended it and, and so he wanted me to read it so we could discuss it. And so I knew about here 1000 paces before George Lucas started touting it.

Alex Ferrari 6:12
Well, now you give me a little bit of your age there just by saying that. Now I wanted to, I wanted to ask you in regards to the hero's journey, because the hero's journey has been, I mean, abused in Hollywood now for a very, very, very abused for four decades now. And it has been kind of set up as like that is the only way to tell a story. And that is the only story and everything falls into that story. Where I know by my own experiences and and working in speaking to other other people on the show that that the hero's journey isn't the end all be all it is one and it has a lot of elements to it. But can you talk a little bit about that? Because I always use the example of like, if you throw the hero's journey on the detective story generally does not work.

John Winston Rainey 7:06
Hey, it doesn't because the detect unless the detective has some inner issue that that needs to be resolved before you can solve the case. Because your theme really comes from Well, I mean, caffeine has two aspects to it. And I'm getting a little off subject because you have the your conceptual thematic things like racism, people call that a theme. What it's not really a theme as much as its subject matter. You know, the theme would be how does a racist you know, like take the defiant when the black band white band chained together trying to escape the law. And they hate each other primarily because they're conditioned to hate by virtue of skin color, and that's it period. And over the course of the movie, the story, they realize they have to depend on each other and they come to respect each other. So that inner journey is really the theme, coming to respect. You know, all things all life or what is considered the other. The subject matter is racism. So it's really two different aspects. But back to the hero's journey, you know, Aristotle said, you know, he said, You know, there's every story has a beginning, middle and an end. And then Gianluca dog comes along and says, Well, yeah, every story has a beginning, middle and end, but not necessarily in that order. And so you take a look at momentum, and you say, Okay, so how is that structured? Where's the beginning, middle and end up? It's there is there but you it or you take a look at traffic. There are five different stories to traffic. Each one has their own structure. It's Pulp Fiction, and Pulp Fiction, same thing. Pulp Fiction has three different structures, but the stories are just intertwined. And as yanaka dog says, you know, the the end is sometimes the beginning. There's another great movie that I like even more than Pulp Fiction is called before the rain. It's a Macedonian film written and directed by a photographer, and I can't pronounce his name mucho something or other. But it's a brilliant, brilliant movie that came out a year before Pulp Fiction, and it doesn't same thing. The theme to that is, the circle is not round. I mean, it's just so beautiful because and he does that structurally. He shows that structurally as well as thematically, I mean, as well as the character arc. So anyway, I don't know. So yeah. I don't think I'm answering your story.

Alex Ferrari 10:01
So I mean, so like, I just I just wanted to kind of, you know, bring it to to the audience the question because a lot of a lot of specially young filmmaker or young screenwriters, when they're starting out, you know, they read the hero's journey or Chris Vogler book the writers journey, which are amazing books, but not every story needs to fit in. So if you take a standard Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, Sherlock Holmes story, which Sherlock generally doesn't, it's he's not about changes, he never changes it.

John Winston Rainey 10:29
He's a James Bond type character, James Ryan doesn't change. Ethan Hawke and Mission Hospital, they don't change. The only James Bond movie that actually worked for me, in that way was Casino Royale.

Alex Ferrari 10:44
Yeah, but he changed it he changes in that movie.

John Winston Rainey 10:46
Well, that's what I'm saying. He's got an arc, he has a character arc. The rest of them, you know, they get boring after a while. Yeah, it's

Alex Ferrari 10:53
just a guy, you know, weaponized?

John Winston Rainey 10:57
You know, I think for me, actually, and this is going to shock a lot of people, one of the most boring films that I've ever watched was the hangover. Because not, you know, a lot happens and nothing changes. You know, in that in that movie, the cannabis market now there's no they don't they, they have a really nice Mercedes going to Las Vegas, they come back with a beat to shit Mercedes. And you know, and they find the guy, you know, so they succeed in their quest. But what do they learn? Now, I've had to come to terms of this, Alex, I, you know, because for me, there's no real point in telling a story, unless you have something to say in that story. And that you That's what I'm saying is really not about the plot, the plot is the vehicle, or the change that the character has to make in order to achieve whatever goal that they set out to achieve. And that goal that they set out to achieve is something that they originally were afraid to go after, but some compelling new information comes to them. And this is basic, Joseph Campbell stuff, you know, that the mentor, the boom, whatever, you know, I call it new information. And they say, oh, as strange as I am, I do have to make this emotionally challenging decision to go after it anyway. You know, and so then they do, and they get into the river, the unknown, and an act two, and, you know, and shit happens. And they have to make adjustment, inner adjustments, internal adjustments, until they finally reach some paradigm shift. And they go into Act Three. And, you know, that's the basic structure. Now, let me just say you're talking about new writers. I think that a new writer needs to learn that basic capability and structure before they try to do something really fancy when they do Pulp Fiction, or any power, or you and I think they should stick. This is for new writers. Now I think they should stick with a single protagonist. I generally separate protagonists, which is an archetypal story function story driver from main character, main character is the one that from whose perspective we see the story. And main characters, one who actually carries the emotional theme, thematic arc. They are often in Hollywood, the same character. But they are at times like a Million Dollar Baby where they are different. Right? I'm just saying Maggie drove that story in a Million Dollar Baby. But the Frankie character was the change character. He's the one that carried the emotional arc. He's the one that had to make the emotionally challenging decisions. Maggie, there was no emotionally challenging decision. I want to be a boxer. And by God, I'm going to be the best. And that was it throughout the story until she was hurt. But Frankie, all the way through. Yeah, and there are many reasons we won't get into analyzing that story. But there are many reasons why he was afraid to take her on as a boxer why he was afraid to take Iran again at the midpoint, etc, etc. Am I talking too much?

Alex Ferrari 14:20
No, no, keep going. Keep one It's fantastic.

John Winston Rainey 14:22
But But generally, I think a new writer is to combine those two aspects of character protagonist, which is the story driver, main character, which carries the emotional art makes him a singular character like Danny Kathy and a few good men. He's both protagonists he drives a story. He also has the emotional arc, he has to resolve his situation with his fear of being being compared to his very famous father litigating father and he has to resolve that And, and so he has an ally in what's his name that

Alex Ferrari 15:08
Kevin Pollak?

John Winston Rainey 15:09
Yeah, I think is it Kevin Pollak?

Alex Ferrari 15:11
Yeah. Kevin is or no Demi Moore the Demi Moore and Kevin Pollak?

John Winston Rainey 15:14
No, no, no, no Demi Moore is a conscious character. Right? He's the one yes forces him compels him to make the right choice. But the Kevin Pollak character, he's the one that corrects his his mindset about his father.

Alex Ferrari 15:31
Right, exactly.

John Winston Rainey 15:33
So really, right, what I'm saying there is the protagonist and the main character are the same. You can have in different, I'm a new writer, or someone who's you know, and there's first second third script, they need to, like, make sure they have the basic craft down the fundamentals down, then they can start, you know, playing games with it.

Alex Ferrari 15:57
Yes, the equivalent of a building a shack in your backyard before you go after a mansion or an office building.

John Winston Rainey 16:03
Well, yeah, and also, if you get it from IKEA, you want to follow the directions.

Alex Ferrari 16:08
Yeah, before you get before you start getting fancy, you should probably follow the directions. And then once you follow directions a lot and you understand the basic Yeah,

John Winston Rainey 16:16
you know, I You see, Robin, you see all these bookshelves, right? Well, I actually ordered 12 of those building Bob bookshelves or whatever, building bookcases from IKEA. And so I built one I followed the directions assiduously did I did the same thing with the second one. By the time I got to the third one, I knew what it was, by the time I got to the 12th. One, I could build those things in 20 minutes.

Alex Ferrari 16:42
Right? Cuz you have to have experience

John Winston Rainey 16:44
already. And that's exactly it. It's a craft, it's a craft. And you cannot become the artist until you first of all, have got the craft in hand. That's true of anything. You know, you go to play the piano, you start, you know, you learn your basic chords and scales and, and how to sight read in later on, you know, you start getting fancy,

Alex Ferrari 17:10
yes, get fancy. So So I wanted to ask you in regards to a specific genre film, The Revenge film, let's, I was going to use that as an example. And the revenge film, generally speaking, there is no refusal of Germany, generally speaking, like if you look at the Count of Monte Cristo, and please correct me if I'm wrong, but if you look at kind of Monte Cristo, he, it's not that he doesn't want to go is a he's afraid to go or doesn't believe he could go. But the want it's

John Winston Rainey 17:43
by going by talking about going going to break down break out of this

Alex Ferrari 17:47
event, just generally revenge and going after that, that mission. And because once he gets into jail, it's about not about his revenge sits in the background, but it's about survival. It's about trying to get and then when the moment when the moment appears that he can actually break out even if as miniscule of an idea that might be great. And then that he sees that the the old man can actually teach him all these things. And then revenge starts getting a little bit a little bit more coherent. But it's still a dream until he gets out. And then he finally go, there's no refusal there. I don't think

John Winston Rainey 18:22
well, I, I I understand your point. And, hey, you could argue that he's a, he's a, he's a victim of that circumstance. And he could be giving up, you know, like, there's no hope there's no, right that could be that could be considered as a refusal. But I'm glad you brought this point up, though, because, for me, generally, the refusal of the call is the beginning of the thematic journey. The refusal of the call bridge, you get a call to adventure, we're talking cam cam belly and structure here. For anyone who's not aware of that, me because a lot of people talk about inciting incident this and that inciting incident call to adventure can be the same, but they can also be different, right? And the refusal of the call, for me is the beginning of the thematic journey, because why would we refuse to go after something we want, except for some underlying, perhaps unconscious, like in a few good men unconscious fear, or an emotional armor that we're protecting ourselves from? And then some new information comes along, and then we said, Oh, damn, I've got to go after that. You know, I've got to take that decision. And there are there are places Yeah, I agree with you that there are Successful movies that have no refusal of the call, and I think that's a missing beat that would have enhanced the story even more. Had they had that.

Alex Ferrari 20:13
So what is the theme of a Monte Cristo? Then? Obviously revenge is the theme, but that's not a

John Winston Rainey 20:19
revenge is a Yeah, it's,

Alex Ferrari 20:21
it's the subject matter. But the thing that how does Dante change from I mean, he obviously changes a lot from before he gets, you know, you know, thrown into jail and all that stuff and to the end, but the thirst of revenge is like, towards the end, he realizes, you know, it's not worth it until he's drawn into the final

John Winston Rainey 20:42
battle. Well, and that would be if he I mean, Hamlet, the same way, right? Yeah, Hamlet, you know, he has that speech. In, in Act five, scene one with a ratio, you know, where, you know, just let it be, you know, whatever will be will be case or restaurant, you know, he's watching, you know, they take up your skull, and then they bury over you. Yeah. And, and, and he's shocked. And he, you know, he comes to, you know, there's a Providence is part of the sparrow. And then you're in So, in a sense, it's the same thing. There's another movie too. Oh, yeah.

Alex Ferrari 21:30
The graduate. Yeah.

John Winston Rainey 21:32
You have you have Dustin Hoffman going after Katharine Ross. And you know, he's banging on the windows. You know, any finding you and they run out of the church together they now this is a this is actually a Mike Nichols, Mike Nichols touch, because they rehearse that last bit where they're in the back of a bus. Yeah, of course, of course, is that iconic scene, and the actors were so tired. You know, they they completely beat it was supposed to be a happy ending. But the actors are so tired, got the shot was over. And they just kind of let go, and they start looking at each other. Mike Nichols left that in because it's like, What now? Right? What now? Yeah. What's the point of all of this? What now? And I think it's the same thing and counter Monte Cristo. And what's the other one that I mentioned? Yeah, yeah.

Alex Ferrari 22:33
Well, I forgot the other one. But Kill Bill. Let's use it because that's a very famous revenge film. Yeah. You know, how does? How does kiddo change? From the moment when she starts to where she is? Is that the bride? The bride? Yeah. I think they called her kids and her name was kiddo. I think, arguably, but the bride Yes. The bride. The bride.

John Winston Rainey 22:58
Let's just call it

Alex Ferrari 22:59
Uma. Uma. Let's go Uma

John Winston Rainey 23:01
oh my God. He never did that again. Never did

Alex Ferrari 23:08
that again. So um, so basically, at the end, I mean, that's just such a straight revenge film. There's no Yeah, I don't even remember towards the end if she actually I think she regretted it a little bit. At the end, like she was crying and this and that, that she had to go. I can't I can't. I can't remember. Yeah, she

John Winston Rainey 23:30
you know, I mean, she'd love this guy.

Alex Ferrari 23:32
Right. And she had to kill him because of that. Sorry. Spoiler alert, everybody. It's called Kill Bill. So I mean, sorry. But um, but she did love them but yet still had to to do it. And she didn't, I think towards the end. She didn't want what she got to that moment. I think she didn't want to do it anymore. But I don't even remember if she

John Winston Rainey 23:55
says yeah, but she had to watch it. Again. This brings up Hamlet again, you know, he's not really interested in killing anymore. But he's forced into this into this short bite, kind of short bite fitting thing. charities. And so you know, and everyone winds up dying. And and you know, and it's not his fault, because he's already resolved his issue, you know, with with Claudius. So yeah, and you know, like I said, Bring up hangover again. There are if you are adept, as a storyteller as Tarantino is, some movies aside. I never got through The Hateful Eight.

Alex Ferrari 24:39
I you know what, I'll go on record stating that's my least favorite of his films. Yeah, it was it was I think it was just a lot of talkie talkie but like once upon a time in Hollywood, I thought was well. Brilliant. That was brilliant. Yeah. Well, I

John Winston Rainey 24:52
there are a lot of, you know, Pulp Fiction.

Alex Ferrari 24:54
I mean, he's he he's generally has a really good batting average

John Winston Rainey 24:58
in his career in Glorious bastards I love doing that. Matter of fact, in our book, I'm gonna quote him. But the book that we wrote the dialogue you taught that

Alex Ferrari 25:10
Yeah, the dialogue books he wrote with

John Winston Rainey 25:13
us that I use that open. Thank you. I use that opening scene of the Nazi got into the bathtub. Really? Oh, you seem

Alex Ferrari 25:25
to match. It's a masterwork that that those seven or 10 minutes is a masterwork of cinema. It's Yeah, it is so good on so many levels. it's astounding how good it is. And he has those throughout his career. I mean, he is just such a unique voice in in cinema, there is never been someone like him nor I think will ever be anyone like him.

John Winston Rainey 25:46
Well, he does pay homage to a lot of people that he would that were in the heat that influenced him, or that he was influenced by

Alex Ferrari 25:54
which which is a good it's, which is really interesting, because which kind of brings me to another point, paying homage so if you watch the movie Point Break, which is a classic 90s 80s 90s but I I don't remember because it was during my generations time, like when I woke I was I was a teenager, there was a there was a

John Winston Rainey 26:18
fight in a bar somewhere, right? There was no

Alex Ferrari 26:21
bar fight, there was no bar fight in that movie. There was fights with alcohol around but there was no bar fight. But that movie essentially was taken and re completely paid homage to and fast and furious. So fast and furious is literally a blueprint from Point Break. Yeah, yeah. I feel that's a little heavy handed as far as like if you look at like it's the same other than you just switched out surfing for

John Winston Rainey 26:50
fast cars car.

Alex Ferrari 26:51
Yeah, for car racing, and then Fast and Furious turned into james bond with cars. I mean, it's ridiculous now. But fun. So but paying Oh, Mize how careful Do you have to be because I think as a screenwriter as storytellers we're all taking from everything and everybody. Yes, you know, Tarantino as much as they might be criticized for it. Everything he does is original. He might take from other people, but he just mixes it. He's like a giant mixtape. You know, he samples from everything and create something completely new.

John Winston Rainey 27:24
And and all artists do that. There. There's some famous quotes that I don't that I forgot. But paraphrase. It's like we're, we're all thieves. You're good artists,

Alex Ferrari 27:34
good artists copy great artists steal. There you go.

John Winston Rainey 27:37
Yeah. And yeah, and, you know, I've watched tons and tons and tons of movies in my time. And you know, you don't know. Like, for instance, I don't think George Harrison was consciously copying. He said fine was with his song, My Sweet Lord. But they won the copyright thing, because I think there was like, four notes that were the same. But I don't think he was consciously. But you know, he was such a sponge from using that.

Alex Ferrari 28:14
Something's gonna pop out. Something's gonna pop out.

John Winston Rainey 28:16
Exactly. It will. You know, Dylan used to take old folk songs and just rewrite them. Yeah, just rewrite the lyrics, you know, keep the melody and, you know, that's been done since time immemorial.

Alex Ferrari 28:31
I mean, shit. So as screenwriters, especially young screenwriters starting out, I mean, obviously, read as many screenplays as you can watch as many movies as you can as as a young screenwriter. Could you take structures from older films, and kind of start using them as a starting point to and start? Yeah, I mean, start using them as a starting point to get because it's not even if you start with like, I'm going to take, do the right thing. And I'm going to take its structure, and I'm going to translate it to another language or another set of circumstances or another thing like that. But at the end, by the time you're done with it, it's changed. It just naturally changes unless you're literally ripping off dialogue. And

John Winston Rainey 29:16
you can't you can't do that structurally. I mean, yeah, I mean, songs do this all the time. You have a you have a basic chord structure. And, you know, you've got your basic 1625 chord structure, which in the 50s and 60s was used. ubiquitously. You know, as a matter of fact, I was just doing a song. Oh, I was playing the theme to the apartment. Just yesterday, I think. And it is in the key of F. And it goes f D minor. What was it F. Jose. Oh, yeah. EP D minor, and then what's up with a poor boy didn't have See no see seven a back to app. So it's basic. It's a basic structure but it's got this elaborate harmonies to it and melody to it. Yeah. And you can do the same thing with screenplays I did it with North by Northwest. I took North by Northwest beat by beat and I just totally rewrote the whole thing. different characters, different situations, different locations. Certainly different dialogue. Because, yeah, I know August funnier than

Alex Ferrari 30:31
Hitchcock's.

John Winston Rainey 30:34
Yeah. And yeah, that's it. That's a good place to start. And otherwise, I started just sit down, start writing, and then structure it after that.

Alex Ferrari 30:46
Do you outline first or do you just go?

John Winston Rainey 30:50
Mostly I just go. I just started like, and I have a, something, some impulse hits me. I can. I can tell you two quick stories about screenplays I've written. JOHN Denver, you know, bought the farm back in 1997, I think and my wife and I, a few weeks later, we drove up to IOC. She was a choreographer, and she was looking for music for her next gig. And so I was touring around in the store, and I looked up at the billboards, top 10, top 100, whatever. And john Denver's three Greatest Hits albums. Were in the top 10. And his Christmas album was number 12. I turned to my wife, I said, Why this guy had to die because he couldn't have he couldn't give his songs away the last 10 years of his life, primarily because of marital issues. You know, he married after and he married somebody that was not support anyway. So I said this guy had to die in order to make his, you know, become famous again. And she looked at me, she said, that's a screenplay. So I mean, she just said that I said, What? And so on the way home, we were talking about all kinds of Elvis sightings and things like that. And I wound up writing a story about it over the hill country western star, who was Uber famous living in bel air, and they repossess his house, any he goes up in the mountains to talk to his manager, and everyone thinks he's dead. And he can't get back to LA for a reason I got to get into and winds up on a dude ranch Chevalier horseshit for a living. You know, because no one recognizes him, I'm not gonna get into why he has a major car accident. He's out for six weeks, and they have to shave his head and

Alex Ferrari 32:49
right, and then his music starts

John Winston Rainey 32:51
blowing up again, plays movie stars blowing up. And yeah, and so he has to get back to LA and cash in. But in the meantime, he's finding out who he really is, instead of this facade. Another one was, we owned some land in Iowa. And I was walking back through and 30 acres, all forests and fields and lots of Briar patches, lots of berry bushes. And so I'm out there one day, and there's this huge briar patch, instead of going around it. I said, I'm just going to go through it until I've gotten in the middle of it. And I started getting hung up on the briars, you know, as well dressed. And, and all of a sudden, I couldn't move. And this little bit of panic went through my body. And instant I had this whole story about a briar patch that eats people. And so I wrote that that's, you know, become really popular, you know, in the option world. So,

Alex Ferrari 33:48
yeah, and that I wanted also to touch on that because this is something that a lot of screenwriters don't understand about professional screenwriters in Hollywood, is that I know guys who have, you know, made one or two massive movies like they were big, you know, giant films. And yet, when you go to their IMDb, they might have not had anything else produced with the next 10 or 15 years of their life. But they've been non stop working for all of those times and and their scripts have been optioned left and right and it gets optimal once and then it gets optioned again, and it gets moved over to another studio. And they make a living off of things that never get produced. And can you talk a little bit about that kind of like, underground world that nobody talks about?

John Winston Rainey 34:36
I actually I actually make most of my money, or a lot of my money doing what I call vanity projects. You know, people come to me and they want their life story and on film and all that and your mind is so unique and everything no one lives a unique life. I mean, you talk about structure, our lives are structured similarly. Right. But anyway, yeah, people can They want a screenplay written or you know, a producer will come to me and want a screenplay written. And my spec scripts I've had numerous options on I've got about 15 spec scripts, 1500 ami. And I've had numerous options on them because my writing is very contagious. You know, you start reading my scripting you you can't I there was a story. I was in Morocco, doing a script for a producer, actually. And he was good friends with Ridley Scott. And he read one of my samples. I'll actually the one that I just talked to you about the budget over the hill country western star, which is a basically a rom com. And so he was sitting here on the on the, on the table, and Ridley Scott was hanging with his guy over in Morocco, and not Bangladesh. What's the Marrakesh marriage? Yeah. And he was gonna go to bed and he says, Can I take this to bear with me? You know, he just needed some reading material, something to put him to sleep.

Alex Ferrari 36:13
That's all what you want to hear is like, really, Scott took my script just to go.

John Winston Rainey 36:17
Well, interestingly, he comes down the next morning, he slams my script down on the table, and he says, this damn thing kept me awake till one o'clock in the morning. And he says, Is he fast? And my producer said, Yeah, well, I'm still waiting for that phone call. But nevertheless, the point is that your writing style has to be contagious. It has to be you've got don't get it in the way of your story with your writing style. And I mean, that has to do with structure, character development, and also how you put the words on the page period. So all of those things have to come together. What was the question? Oh, what do I do I just sit down and write or do I? No,

Alex Ferrari 37:01
no, the question was just to talk a little bit about the the the whole optioning and making

John Winston Rainey 37:07
Oh, yeah, yeah, well, yeah. So you can make a whole living without ever being on IMDB

Alex Ferrari 37:13
which, which I've met. I've met so many of those screenwriters, some, some of them literally have no IMDb credits, or like one or two little ones. And then there's other guys or gals who actually have one big credit one monster credit. And then silence nothing. Yeah, but there but in town. They're known as they're doing script doctoring there. And that's a whole other script doctoring. And in that kind of world that dude make a living doing that.

John Winston Rainey 37:44
Yeah, john sales, john sales. Oh, he makes a living doctoring scripts, rewriting scripts. He makes, you know, a ton of money from the studios doing that we're used to I don't know where he is now. And then he'll take that money and he'll go and make his own indie films, you know, on you know, you know, you basically Well, now he doesn't have to find that his own films, but yeah, and melius used to do that as well. back then. He

Alex Ferrari 38:11
was he was he was amazing. Screaming he's amazing script doctor.

John Winston Rainey 38:15
Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 38:16
he wrote, I don't know if you knew this. He wrote the scene. The scene in jaws when they're drunk, right before that whole scene was on the boat in

John Winston Rainey 38:26
the boat. Getting where they get out. That's Milly's.

Alex Ferrari 38:30
Yeah Spielberg Spielberg called him it's like can you do me a favor? And he's like sure. All right, that's he for he wrote that scene like the night before.

John Winston Rainey 38:37
fingerprints all over that.

Alex Ferrari 38:40
Millie's has his fingerprints all over it all the movie brats stuff he touched at one point or another

John Winston Rainey 38:46
well and the thing is is guys like that. You know, if you give them a thank you, you know they're fine with it. Just pay me basically that's what it really is. You know, just I I've got some skill. I've got the craft and you know, I got it down. Just you know, pay me

Alex Ferrari 39:03
is like gunslingers basically you're like, yeah, you're exactly. You're good. You're a gunslinger. Like, how do you how do you clear out this? Do you need me to clear out this outlaw for you in this town for me? I just I'm I'm a mercenary.

John Winston Rainey 39:17
Yeah. IBG pieces are a few dollars more exact have gotten out of Gun Will Travel.

Alex Ferrari 39:25
Yes, no, I remember those. I remember those.

John Winston Rainey 39:28
You remember, Paladin? The Richard Boone character? No,

Alex Ferrari 39:31
I didn't remember that one. I've read. I've seen so much stuff. And especially I worked in a video store. So I saw a lot of stuff when I was very young Jared, you know, I was five years in a video store for all through like before High School and after high school and then maybe a little bit after high school before I went to college. I worked at a video store. So I watched. I watched it. I was watching films at a time or I could literally watch everything released that week. Can you remember like it was like, because they would release five movies? Six movies a week? Yeah, I would watch all of that. That was a moment in time where you could actually do that. Now that's absolutely. I need multiple lifetimes just to catch up with what's right. Now, I mean, you've worked with a lot of screenwriters in your time, what is the biggest mistake you see screenwriter, especially young screenwriters make?

John Winston Rainey 40:23
Other than writing style?

Alex Ferrari 40:25
Yes.

John Winston Rainey 40:26
Other than using too many adverbs, too many passive verbs and that sort of thing. Would you guys be crazy? Or overdoing your dialogue? Another one, I'm listening a bunch of go for. And first of all, a screenplay is a lot like a short story. And people have to absorb that is not a novel. Short Story. Yes. You know, you you have to get in under two hours, because that's about as long as the bladder lasts for your audience member. Yeah, seriously. Yeah. And, and they need to sell more salt and sugar. Yep. In the

Alex Ferrari 41:06
backend? Well, back when, when we used to be able to go to the movie theaters, not so much anymore. So we'll see what we're at.

John Winston Rainey 41:14
I mean, there, there are a bunch of them. And I actually, and I talked about writing style, because I used to say the same things over and over and over again. And I finally just wrote a book. And when somebody wants me to consult with him, I just send them to book, you know, but the other thing is not setting up the emotionally challenging decision that drives the story. I, I don't know if this is proprietary or not. But I talk about emotionally challenging decisions are dilemmas and decisions and decisions of the main character are what drive the story basically. And then you have a reaction from the antagonist. And so they have to reconsider and revise. And so the intention changes, but the object, the objective remains the same. And those decisions are not well set up. And often people will put those major emotionally challenging just decisions off screen somewhere. And you can't do that. You got to put it on the page. And also overriding shame. That's another one. You know, that's a technical issue. So

Alex Ferrari 42:38
you mean to tell me this should be as little whitespace on this on the page as possible?

John Winston Rainey 42:44
As much?

Alex Ferrari 42:45
Exactly.

John Winston Rainey 42:47
Yeah, this is a case in screenwriting. This is a case where less is definitely more but you have to have the you have to have the correct less. In the right words. Choose every single word.

Alex Ferrari 43:02
I mean, I'll tell you when I wrote I mean, I've written screenplays in my career. But uh, but I've written I read I read a both I read two nonfiction books. One was based on a story of my life because my life was very interesting, sir, thank you very much. And it, but I found it so freeing writing a book. Because I did not have to be so easy. I found it's so much easier writing 60,000 words than it is writing whatever the amount of words is in a 90 minute screenplay. Because in the screenplay, you have to be so surgical, so surgical with your words, but in a novel, you could just and that he floated across the screen, and he did this. And you could just, you could just like, paint the picture. You could take a paragraph just to discuss how the wall looked if the wall is really important, but in the screenplay, you've got three words to explain the wall.

John Winston Rainey 44:00
Yeah, no, that's a designer's job.

Alex Ferrari 44:04
Right,

John Winston Rainey 44:05
but how can we make this wall important? There's a character in the story. So how can Yeah, yeah, so yeah, that and the way to do that Alex is you know, I'm a big one for avoiding adverbs at all costs. And if you choose the correct action verb, you will not need an adverb do not need the modifier. Also, never, ever I've written entire screenplays with not a single adverb, passive verb helping verb or passive present tense. And I challenged myself all the time there time. There are times when, you know, I'll spend an hour on a sentence on a single sentence, you know, and and I'm Believe me I'm, I'm not shy about going to thesauruses dictionaries and I'll look all around. So yeah, next to songwriting and writing poetry within a particular form, screenwriting is right up there with those guys.

It's like the Haiku of writing. It is Haiku. If you approach it like it's Haiku, yes, you will get you will get better. Absolutely. No, you cannot you cannot just sit there and, and splashing on the page, you have to, you know, maybe that's good for you to get your story out, then go back and rework that damn thing. So yeah,

Alex Ferrari 45:32
like if you I remember reading Shane Black's early screenplays and the the way he describes the scene, his descriptions were so vivid and so beautifully written, and so concise. It was wonderful. Then I read other scripts like that, literally, it's three or four paragraphs just to talk about like the alley. I'm like, dude, like, you need to move along here guys like I did the alleys. Not that. But in the writers I like the alley is. So

John Winston Rainey 46:00
the alley, the alley is for the location manager location scout.

Alex Ferrari 46:04
And that's something else I feel that a lot of young screenwriters make a mistake in is that they feel that they're almost proxy directing. When the writing I mean, worst thing you could do is put a camera move in, don't ever put a camera move in.

John Winston Rainey 46:17
I just took that note this morning, actually, I was working, I was consulting on it on the script. And I said leave the directing to the director, I said, you got you, you must acknowledge that you've got co creators here, you must lend them the space to do their work. Just all you do with a word is Be as specific as possible. And then you let them expand upon it.

Alex Ferrari 46:44
I mean, it's very similar like to an architect, the architect lays out the blueprint but blueprint. The blueprint is the foundation of everything as you're building the building. There's going to be a couple of shifts here and there. And there's going to be in the in the guy who's paying for it. This isn't Isn't this the way it is in Hollywood, the guy who's putting up the money that the finance this building is going to go You know what, I want to move that wall over there. I want to paint the pink cuz my girlfriend wants or the orange or

John Winston Rainey 47:12
what have you probably do is say, instead of making these, these studs 16 inches, what can we make them 19 inches apart? right? Exactly. It's it's all the time. And then a lot Yes, building code, but nevertheless,

Alex Ferrari 47:26
right? And they'll start doing that. And then that's when the building just doesn't if it all comes crashing down. But that's what happens in Hollywood,

John Winston Rainey 47:34
all the time. Where the structure just absolutely sucks. Now, I'm not a big one to talk about structure up front. Because I want because everything for me comes from character, right? Even structure comes from character because you have this symbiotic relationship between plot and theme. But if all of these elements together don't co here, because a producer wants to throw in because his girlfriend is acting as though she can't do that. Can she do it this way? No, no, we can. No it because it screws up your story. And I'm I'm actually amending my words here. But it yeah, it messes with the story. You can't do that, you know, write another screenplay. Don't use this one.

Alex Ferrari 48:20
Yeah, it happens.

John Winston Rainey 48:22
That's what happens in Hollywood, is they'll buy a property, and then they'll totally jacking around and rewrite them bringing theirtheir own kitchen sink for writers. And no one's communicating with anybody else. It's like, you know, well, I

Alex Ferrari 48:38
mean, it depends on I think the smart. I mean, look what Marvel did it the best as far as like they understand their properties, and they have complete control and this and when they went away from their model early on, and you can see that in I'm not sure how verse you are in the MCU. But the first film, I remember when Hulk came out angley did a Hulk years ago with Eric Bana. And oh, yeah, remember that one? It was a while ago when when the visual visual effects really not know. It didn't work out. Hulk was horrible. But they let the director and the creatives force rewrite the mythology of the Hulk. And it was this hodgepodge of craziness. He really was angry because of what his dad did to him and all this like supercycle, it was like, that's not the Hulk. We, we want to see Hulk Smash. That's what we wanted to see. We want to see Hulk Smash. I don't understand Hulk Smash. It's not complicated, but because all these other people came in. But then from that point on, they took control of their properties and and kept going. But

John Winston Rainey 49:50
yeah, but this goes back to our original topic of is there are there other stories other than the hero's journey, right? In this case, yeah, you know, and you know, I mentioned the hangover and other things like that, where you tell a story purely for entertainment, you know. And I, I had trouble getting on board with that. But

Alex Ferrari 50:17
apparently, a lot of other people didn't because it did very, very well and sponsored

John Winston Rainey 50:23
a lot a lot of movies, a lot of people just want like my brothers. I asked my brother, I said, Why do you go to the movie? She says to escape? And, okay, that's, you know, and that's what I think that's with a large a large demographic is I just wanted to go and let go of my life. What I mean?

Alex Ferrari 50:41
Yeah, absolutely. But if you look at hangover, hangover, I agree with you. They don't really change at all. I mean, there's not a change in the characters. They just don't

John Winston Rainey 50:52
they go on an adventure, essentially. But not only that, a lot of it wasn't funny to me. I mean, I could tear that thing apart, you know, but the funniest part to me actually was when the the naked Vietnamese guy. And that guy was funny.

Alex Ferrari 51:11
He's so great. Ciao. Ciao was great. There it looks so I mean, comedy is always relative. Some people will look at an airplane and go and be Blazing Saddles and get offended,

John Winston Rainey 51:20
like, Well, no, no. Okay, guy you just mentioned two of my favorite, which they're amazing.

Alex Ferrari 51:27
I mean, the airplane is is an absolute classic and so is Blazing Saddles. But there's a lot of people who look like my wife will watch airplanes. She's like, this is ridiculous. Why would I watch that? She's she does not get it. And there's so comedy is also relative. But on a structural standpoint,

John Winston Rainey 51:42
I'm so lucky. I'm still looking for the whacking material.

Alex Ferrari 51:49
Or the the the chanting or non chanting section, which is which is great, but they are Christians. But if you look at hangover, hangover one hangover two and a half or three are essentially the same.

John Winston Rainey 52:01
I don't I quit.

Alex Ferrari 52:03
When I went to see hangover two, which was basically hangover one. But in Thailand, it was all it was. It's just the exact same story.

John Winston Rainey 52:10
But just a bit Alex's because the audience loved hangover one. They love that structure. So let's give it to him again.

Alex Ferrari 52:19
Absolutely. But that same director then wrote directed Joker, which was arguably one of the better films in the comic book genre. In my opinion, I don't know what you felt about Joker, I haven't I haven't seen it. So Joker is basically a taxi driver. It's taxi driver, but with a comic book villain. And he's Travis Travis critical to the point where they hired Travis Brickell to be in the movie. So Robert De Niro is in the movie. And Scorsese was gonna originally produce it, he had to walk away from other products, because he had other projects. But I mean, it was it was so involved. So if you haven't seen Joker yet, you should watch Joker purely because it's taxi driver. That's why people were losing their mind. People were like this is because if you if you released taxi driver today, Peter wasn't that disguised? Oh, I mean, to anybody who's ever seen taxi driver could go, Oh, this takes place in the 70s. It's really I mean, he's not literally a taxi driver. But the themes, the everything. The aesthetics,

John Winston Rainey 53:26
it's like the psychotic.

Alex Ferrari 53:28
Yeah, the, the break the psychology, the psychotic breakdown, the the aesthetics of how its shot. It is so clearly taxi driver, and they make no bones about it. They're like, Oh, yeah, we weren't completely inspired by it was it was a combination of Kingdom Kingdom comedy and taxi driver. It's a mesh of those. Okay. Oh, go watch.

John Winston Rainey 53:48
You've got a lightweight. Speaking of taxi driver. You know, our title of our book is you're talking to me. The thing is, is it's a book about dialogue, how to write dialogue. Yes. I'm being revealed here. That line was improvised. Yeah, I know. It wasn't written.

Alex Ferrari 54:07
The funny thing is I one of my friends who passed away he was the first date. I think it was the first ad or the UPM on taxi driver, and he was in the room when they showed me that. Okay, so you know, he told me the solar He's like, yeah, that was just like the kind of Marty just gonna

John Winston Rainey 54:27
read it. No, no, Scorsese asked De Niro. He says, We need something with the mirror. Can you? Can you improvise something? And change? Oh, yeah, exactly. Did it once. And the gun mechanism didn't work. Right. So they had to do it again. Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 54:41
it was nuts. But those are the things that people also a lot of screenwriters also think that like, Oh, that was a genius writing like no, a lot of times they do come up with it on the set.

John Winston Rainey 54:51
Now here's, here's the thing. If I were directing something that I had written, we would first of all have a lot of table reads and I would make sure The script is ironed out. See, because I'm from the theater now. Yeah. And I've done Shakespeare and I've done Sam Shepard, and I've done all of these, you know, things in between. and I would want them to nail down the dialogue. Before we get in front of the camera. I don't want people you know, let's make sure that we have it. And we know what our beats are. We know what our our motives and intentions are. And let's, let's do it right, if you're good actors. I've worked with those actors who say, Oh, I don't want to mess up my creative thing when I would just say go back to acting school.

Alex Ferrari 55:38
Agreed. Actors need but like, like structure and understanding the craft, you need to understand the basics first, but have to have some leeway to play.

John Winston Rainey 55:47
Okay, I'll tell you that I watched, interestingly enough, I don't know how well, Jennifer Aniston is. But I saw some outtakes of her doing the same scene over and over and over again. She stuck to the script. Exactly. But every single take was different.

Alex Ferrari 56:06
Yeah, she just presented it.

John Winston Rainey 56:08
That's that's great skill. No, I think that she's in the moment. I think she's right there in that moment, and that's what what was it? Is it Sanford miser, or somebody who says that? a great actor. No, is Antonin Artaud is, the French crazy guy wrote a theater in his double. He said, a great actor is one who is able to repeat a moment as it for the first time. And that's what I'm getting at. If if the line doesn't work, let's fix the line. But then when you're in front of the camera by God deliver,

Alex Ferrari 56:51
right, exactly. But But with that said, there's also those magical moments that you can't write like in like a Midnight Cowboy in Midnight Cowboy crossing the street. I'm walking,

John Winston Rainey 57:01
walking here, yeah,

Alex Ferrari 57:03
that you can't write that you can't write. And then there was a taxi. He's like waving his hands like so.

John Winston Rainey 57:09
We actually had the same Bible on that. That that was absolutely a lot of people don't know that. That was an ad. And that taxi driver was real real.

Alex Ferrari 57:21
He almost almost ran over Dustin Hoffman.

John Winston Rainey 57:26
Writing character, though. I mean, it was brilliant. It was absolutely brilliant. Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 57:31
I know. We could keep talking for at least another two or three hours. So but I'm going to I'm going to ask you a few questions. I ask all my guests. What are three screenplays every screenwriter should read? Oh, God,

John Winston Rainey 57:43
I had no idea. I

Alex Ferrari 57:50
I I don't think three of your favorite screenplays any of them? Boy.

John Winston Rainey 57:58
Chinatown is a good one for me.

Alex Ferrari 58:03
And hang over obviously.

John Winston Rainey 58:06
You got that one? Yeah. China's chown

Alex Ferrari 58:19
if you can't come up with any other ones, that's fine.

John Winston Rainey 58:21
I mean, I I've got so many of them that I don't want to like

Alex Ferrari 58:26
me, it's not gonna be on your gravestone. You could just throw it out three names. It's fine.

John Winston Rainey 58:32
Okay, you know what? Butch Cassidy and back in the day, you know, William Goldman was the go to guy. And, and I constantly quote one of his or explain one of his scenes about, you know, Sundance, not wanting to jump off that cliff, but he has to make the emotionally challenging decision not because he's afraid of dying, because he's afraid of humiliating himself, which I think is just a brilliant, brilliant choice. You know, you know, for an actor to me. You know, that was emotionally that's what when I talk about emotionally challenging decisions. That's one of the things I talk about is fear of death. Is is less than the fear of public speaking or Yeah, or humiliation. Yeah, humiliating yourself. Yeah. So. Oh, god. What? I think you're good, man. It's a good

Alex Ferrari 59:31
it's such a crazy Sorkin Yeah. Sorkin Yeah.

John Winston Rainey 59:36
I wouldn't recommend godfather only because Coppola did his own thing. And I think for a new writer would be you know, it would take them off in a track they can't quite

Alex Ferrari 59:48
well. It's kind of like it's kind of like studying, you know, Beethoven and Mozart at the start at the start.

John Winston Rainey 59:56
Before Yeah, let's let's start with the baby stuff.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:02
Let's Yeah, exactly. Let's start reading hang over first and then we'll go into the Godfather

John Winston Rainey 1:00:08
would be would would be a distraction.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:13
Well, no, no, no, we got him. We got it. We got it.

John Winston Rainey 1:00:16
Well, no, I gave it to you know, I did copy North by Northwest but I totally changed the content, right? Well, my agent at the time he said take an old classic and then contemporize it and disguise it. And then so I had another very close friend say Oh, do North by Northwest. And so I did. And so I think that's a

Alex Ferrari 1:00:44
that's those are those are three. Great. Those are three great starting points.

John Winston Rainey 1:00:47
All right. Okay, so I'll leave that at that.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:49
Now. What advice would you give a screenwriter wanting to break into the business today?

John Winston Rainey 1:00:54
What advice when I give them? Yes. Well, what you just said read lots of screenplays, watch lots of movies, but read all the beginning books you know and read. I would suggest other than for the first two books I suggest for new writers is Bulger's book. And David tried two years book and read Linda's book to read Linda's making a good script. Great. Yep, read those three you can read the Sinfield book in the in the Michael Hague book. But also in conjunction with those books. Also study Darren Mark's book inside story because it's all about character character character character, DERA and I feel the same, that everything in a in a story comes from character, you name me something and I will take it I will track it all the way back to carry the only thing that doesn't is the outside the story genre. So the mood, the tone, the pace. And a good example of that is,you know who? Well you know who Dr. Anton Chekhov was? Yeah. And he wrote four great plays, you know, a seagull cherry orchard, three sisters and Uncle Vanya, and a bunch of one acts. And he wrote them as social satires. They were social satires and standard philosophy read them. And Constantine Stanislavski. But he says, No, no, no, these are not satire. These are tragedies. And so, and the rest is history. He produced them as tragedies instead of a social, but what I would love to do is take those plays and direct them as social satires. Okay, but anyway, the point I'm making is that everything comes from character except that except possibly genre.

Alex Ferrari 1:02:43
Now, what lesson took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

John Winston Rainey 1:02:50
Letting go

Alex Ferrari 1:02:53
Yes.

John Winston Rainey 1:02:55
Yes. Realizing that you cannot. And I actually, my father said this when I was 11 or 12 years old. But I didn't get it until many years of actually teaching piano and also consulting on screenplays that you cannot teach anything. You can facilitate another person's learning when they are ready to learn it. That's good. And, and even then you have to be able to I think the true gift of a teacher is understanding what doors are open that you can enter, and what knowledge can be dispensed as a result that will build upon what's already known. But you cannot teach and you cannot impose knowledge on anybody. That's the biggest thing I had to learn. That's great. In my obsessive compulsive manner, I had to learn to let go of needing to get other people to get something.

Alex Ferrari 1:04:06
Fair enough. And where can people find you and your work and your new book with that you wrote with Linda

John Winston Rainey 1:04:13
Well, the book is on Amazon,

Alex Ferrari 1:04:15
And the name of the book again.

John Winston Rainey 1:04:18
You talking to me? How to write great dialogue. And they can find me at john Winston rainy.com. And what else?

Alex Ferrari 1:04:29
That's pretty much covers and you do swip Consulting, and

John Winston Rainey 1:04:34
I do Yeah, I do. I I yeah, consulting analysis, but those are not the real fun things. The fun thing is just writing a good screenplay. And I do that on, you know, people hire me all the time to write a screenplay, and I'm pretty fast. Alright, and I actually am still not in the Union by design by choice. Because I can charge whatever I want to charge.

Alex Ferrari 1:05:02
Fair enough. JOHN, thank you so much for being on the show and dropping the knowledge bombs on the tribe today. I appreciate it, my friend.

John Winston Rainey 1:05:11
Well, it was it was a joy. It is absolute joy. I hope it works for you.

Alex Ferrari 1:05:16
I want to thank john for coming on the show and dropping those knowledge bombs on the tribe. Thank you so much, john. If you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, including links to his books, you talking to me how to write great dialogue and screenwriting style that sizzles. Head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/093. And if you haven't already, please head over to screenwriting podcast.com and leave a good review for the show. It really helps us out a lot. Thank you so much for listening. And as always, keep on writing no matter what. Stay safe out there. And I'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 092: Creating the Ultra-Violent World of John Wick with Derek Kolstad

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Alex Ferrari 0:05
Now guys, today we have a special cross over edition of the bulletproof screenwriting podcast I have today on the show, Derek Kolstad, who is the creator and screenwriter of the amazing john wick. Now this episode originally aired on the make your movie podcast hosted by Dave Bullis, which is part of the indie film hustle Podcast Network. And I had to bring this episode to the bulletproof screenwriting tribe because it is pretty remarkable. If you want to know how Derek was able to create this insanely wonderful world that john wick lives in, and how he was able to get the project up off the ground and how Keanu got involved in the whole ball of wax. This episode is for you. So enjoy this special cross over episode. Without any further ado, here is Derek Kolstad.

Dave Bullis 2:51
Joining me today is Derek Kolstad. Derek is a screenwriter of john wick, and the upcoming john wick to Derek, how are you doing today, sir?

Derek Kolstad 2:59
Doing well, man tired, I can't remember the last time I had a weekend. But those are good problems to have.

Dave Bullis 3:04
So, so just to get started, could you give us a little bit about your background?

Derek Kolstad 3:08
Yeah, I grew up in Madison, Wisconsin. You know, I'm 41 this year. And when I was a little kid in the early 80s, that's when the VHS boom happened. And, you know, people ask me how I got into this. And, you know, a lot of people don't remember but like in line at shopko, or wherever you shop, you'd have a bargain bin of VHS tapes. And my mom would would purchase them and we don't have cable, we could afford it on Sundays, especially Sunday nights PBS would actually show like the conversation of the Godfather, that kind of stuff. And so it's not downstairs, and my love of movies, you know, just began there. And what's really interesting though, is, you know, growing up Madison, Wisconsin, you have a very red family, very conservative, very supportive, like an ally coming home from sneaking into the theater, and they asked me what I had seen, and I'd seen Robocop which any other kid would have gotten into some serious trouble about. But in reality, they they looked at each other after I told them and just said, Hey, you know, we should probably support them in this. And so, you know, being a Midwestern kid though the idea of getting into film was a dream. And so when I went to college, it was for business, but I kept writing and became I worked for Dale Carnegie in Chicago. And what got me out here is my little brother called, and he's asked me how is doing like, broke down and started crying. And I'm not an emotional guy. And the realization was, I had to come out here to see if I was going to fail. It wasn't a matter of success, you know. And so I had my little golf PDI and half the backseat was taken out by a large fucking Dell computer and a CRT monitor and drove out here. You know, I was 15 years ago and apparently 15 years is an overnight success. So that's a little bit of a background man.

Dave Bullis 5:00
It was a great movie to pick By the way, Robocop.

Derek Kolstad 5:03
Oh, dude, dude. Yeah, you know the other favorite story I tell almost everyone I meet I was allowed to see, you know, raise last arc but Temple of Doom was to demon, you know? So my parents went saw it and they got back and I'm so excited to have I had my dad Sit down. Tell me that the movie right from beginning and it was awesome. So three years later realize my dad is falling asleep in the movie and just make up a story. It's still my favorite man.

Dave Bullis 5:32
That's absolute. Did you actually when you saw the movie? When you finally saw the whole movie? Did you go Wait a minute, this is nothing like what my dad said.

Derek Kolstad 5:39
Well, I could it was funny because I could tell the point where he fell asleep. You know, it was the opening sequence in Japan, which is you know, just legendary. And then you have that kind of slow jaunt between the first and second act. And my dad, my dad's notorious for falling asleep in movies, most notably animated ones. And so I mean, some of the stories we all share, is we the mood start, and I'd hear from the end of the hour. Oh, it's animated. 30 seconds later, you heard him snoring. So good guy, but still.

Dave Bullis 6:11
Yeah, my, my dad fell asleep at Star Wars Episode One. And he had like, afterward somebody asked him about the movie. And he was like, I had no idea. I don't even remember anything. So you know. So Derek, when you say, you know, you were you were in college for business? Did you actually graduate with a degree in business?

Derek Kolstad 6:32
I did. I did. And I went, got Business Administration, and then a minor in English. Well, a lot of minors, because let's be honest, it's pretty easy a bunch of minors. And then I went and worked for the family company back in Mesa, Maine, Wisconsin, which is WIC homes, which was a construction company. And then I moved to Chicago. And during this time, I was still writing, but I wasn't. I was writing short stories and screenplays I wasn't really sending them off. I was reading books about screenwriting is just in college, I suffered from insomnia. And the only thing that could actually get me to sleep is putting my dreams down on page, you know, and it wasn't until that phone call from my brother where it's like, fucking, I gotta try, you know.

Dave Bullis 7:15
So when we were writing, were you focusing on screenplays? Or do you actually, you'll focus on just writing like, you know, short stories, long stories or anything in particular,

Derek Kolstad 7:23
you know, I have huge respect for people who write novels, simply because, you know, the screenplay. It's like feigning exterior interior. It's one sentence and you read a great novel, and it's like, holy crap, they're spending time to just craft the world. And what I'm trying to do is, tell a good story that fits in 90 minutes, you know? And so what I loved about screenwriting, what I still love, love screenwriting is, I'm a tourist and fast, but more importantly, I can move from one story to the next. And that's why I like short stories as well. In fact, you know, when I was a kid, I was the guy who was teased at sleepovers because everything scared me. And so as a, you know, as a temperament to that I got into reading Stephen King and Stephen King short stories to this day, you know, are are a massive influence, and I still have them all. Behind me on my bookshelf. I mean, that, that's glory, dude, I can't I want to do what he can do in the short form, but he's the master.

Dave Bullis 8:19
Oh, absolutely. Did you have his book on writing?

Derek Kolstad 8:23
I do. It's one of the few books on writing that I I've read.

Dave Bullis 8:27
So I just what other books on writing? Do you do you recommend? You know?

Derek Kolstad 8:34
Not many. My thing is, like, just write, you know, I remember someone, I don't know what the book was, again, I'm a more of a writer nowadays and a reader. But someone told me once about the 10,000 hour rule. I don't prefer that. Yeah. In reality, like, I look at the stuff that I wrote even like four years ago. And it pales in comparison how I'm writing now simply because I've been doing it for so long, that it's not writing and rewriting especially that's where the skill comes in, it becomes like an algorithm like, it becomes something outside of the English language like you. If you make one change on page three, you know, the ripple effect, you know, to look for and to get to that stage. You just need to do it. So you know, people always like get the bad screenplay out of you in reality is that you first screenplay is terrible. And then you keep writing and writing and writing, rewriting. And at a certain point, you find your stride, not saying that everyone will become a writer, but you get better over time. And the other thing too, is, especially when I talk to college kids nowadays, I watch the films of my grandparents and my my parents. A lot of people haven't watched the films of their parents nowadays, like I'm very fluent in film, but a lot of people nowadays when you hear they haven't seen Casa Blanca are the godfathers if you name them, like you look around my office like Butch Cassidy or frickin Pulp Fiction or Miller's Crossing which is arguably my my Best Film my best. My favorite film. Watching right man? Listen.

Dave Bullis 10:06
What's that movie called? castle? What? fucker was funny? I heard Robert McKee whenever he does one of his seminars. You know, I don't know if you've read story by him, but he always shows Casablanca, like day two, or three or whatever. And he says, has anybody in here truly never seen this before? Or more people are raising their hands. And, you know, he's like, well, well, we're gonna spend the next 10 hours on this movie. So, you know, get conference funny, too.

Derek Kolstad 10:35
Because, you know, you hear when people do their top 10 lists of films, and you find yourself almost rolling your eyes like, of course, Citizen Kane. But then you put it in, and you watch it at minute 30 minute, five, you're like, God dammit. That's good. You know, and even if you're, you know, I know a lot of people who won't watch black and white films, which astounds me, you know, and yet you watch, like, for instance, it's a wonderful life. Everyone's like, Oh, that's a smarmy piece of Hollywood crap. It's an incredibly dark drama. I mean, he's killing himself. I mean, stuff like that. And when I encourage people to watch film, it's like, dude, ask your grandfather, ask your mom and dad, like, what their favorite movie movies was. Because even though, you know, the timing of movies has changed. You look at the Blue House horror movies compared to those in the 60s and 70s. They're sprinting, you know, Rosemary's Baby is really extremely slow. It's genius. But it's slow. But you have to watch at least once to respect what was going on, like, Lawrence of Arabia, you have to see once, I'm not gonna watch it again, it's long, but you have to see it once you know, just to know that everything on screen is real. They really shot that into respect that and learn from it.

Dave Bullis 11:53
Yeah, and very true. I remember in one of my film studies class in college, by the way, I have a degree in business administration, too. And I right, so you and I are very similar already. So

Derek Kolstad 12:03
I gotta admit, though, the BA degree is kind of bullshit. But you know, we got it.

Dave Bullis 12:08
Every day of my life, I tell everyone how it's bullshit. I sit here and go, like, what I still want to pay my student loan payments. I'm like, What the hell did I learned?

Derek Kolstad 12:18
Yeah, I think the big thing about college though, is it really doesn't matter. Like you know, what your degree is, you learn to learn. And I think you know, when people don't go to college and Come on, you're great. If you do to go to college, come on, you're great. But having a college degree gets you into the mailroom, you know, unless you know someone you still need to have that sadly.

Dave Bullis 12:40
And a true a lot of the positions that I see too for like anything if you want to work at the studio, or you know, like for instance Comedy Central, I just filled out an application to work there. And they all want a bachelor's degree, like that's a minimum requirement. You have to have a bachelor's in something.

Derek Kolstad 12:57
You look at guys like you know, Kevin Smith and Tarantino, br our flat men not flashing pants wrong saying they mean they're one a billion mean, these guys are incredibly talented forces nature, and yet, they're one of a kind, you know, not very few of us are, you need to actually have that degree in your belt to get into the industry. Even when it comes to, but when it comes to like screenwriting or acting, they don't care. Yeah, good is good.

Dave Bullis 13:25
Yeah, very true. And especially to cuz, you know, Tarantino, he just took a I mean, from what I've heard, he just got like a two day film course, to get an understanding and when he wrote Reservoir Dogs, that's where he met Terry Gilliam and Terry Gilliam really set him you know, this is what you have to do. And then when he finally got around to making Reservoir Dogs, he was like, prime and ready. I mean, having Terry Gilliam sort of mentor you. I mean, that was just like, you know, one genius showing another genius the way

Derek Kolstad 13:52
Oh, yeah, yeah. Well, and I remember reading an article with Django about Django and changed. And he said, the line that only Tarantino can say, and it was I had to teach myself how to make a Western. No one else can say that. I mean, Tarantino is a guy who devours film devours movies and has a respect for the shitty ones as well which you should I mean, you can you can pile shit on. Roger Corman flex, and the stuff that you know, a lot of these trauma is done and yet you watch you like to kind of get it I kind of get it and yet tanti loves it and he applies it, which is huge respect there.

Dave Bullis 14:28
I always heard Orson Welles too loved. I don't know if it's true or not, but he loved to have film parties at his house and he would show like these odd movies and I will be like, What the hell are you watching Orson? And he was like, No, this is this is just something unique and they didn't know if he was like, you know, making a joke of everybody or uses as this you know, playing is this practical joke everybody or he was dead serious.

Derek Kolstad 14:51
Well, that's what I love, though about where we are technical. Technologically. You know, when you think back that when I was in college, you know, 2020 years ago. I didn't have email yet. And there's no cell phone. And the only foreign movies that the video plays had with the douchey ones, like, of course, it's good, we want to get more that kind of stuff. But then as time progresses, and I remember being living in Chicago, and the video placed on the way had a large Asian section, as suddenly you're introduced to chalian, fat and gently and you're like, holy shit, well, how could I not know about this crap, you know? And now, you know, with Amazon and everything else, like, I can see movies like The Man from nowhere, I can see movies like I saw the devil, these ones that back in the day, I might have stumbled across on cable but now you're like, Okay, I get it.

Dave Bullis 15:43
Yeah, and it's very, it's very true to cuz I remember going to the video stores. And you know, just having like, look at different covers and stuff like that. I remember the some of the first time I discovered it. And it's like, you know, holy crap. This is freakin awesome, man.

Derek Kolstad 15:57
Yeah. Well, it's kind of funny when you think back in the day. Everything in Madison was the video station and you'd go in. And I still have a couple of horror titles just kind of emblazoned on my brain because of the whole how horrific. The VHS box looked. And you and I finally seen the movie like, Oh,

Dave Bullis 16:18
my friends. And I used to have this like little game we used to play where whoever could find the weirdest box art. That's what we did. They would have different deals like I think it was it was five movies for five nights or whatever. Yeah. And for $5. And what we do is we find like the, the craziest, like box art and whoever can find the craziest. That's one of the ones who definitely rent and stuff like that.

Derek Kolstad 16:41
What is funny about that is we used to do the whole, like, who can pick out the worst movie, right? So you get two or three movies. The problem with worst movies is they're boring. You know? You've never I mean, the worst movies that are fun to watch are actually fun to watch. When you do that. Let's find the worst you're gonna be going usually looking at your watch going, Oh, god, it's still going.

Dave Bullis 17:02
What was the worst movie I've ever seen by doing that?

Derek Kolstad 17:07
Let's see. I would argue that man skeeto is up there.

Dave Bullis 17:12
And

Derek Kolstad 17:14
they're kind of I think the worst movies I've seen tend to be the Friday night premieres on sci fi. And yet, what sci fi did is they embraced it. You know, like shark NATO. I get it. You know, you're totally making fun of the shit you're trying to, you know, give us years ago. I'll say this, that I've only walked out of two movies. The first one was the road to Melville, which was with Dana Carvey and a slew of characters back in the day. Do you read that one?

Dave Bullis 17:44
Yeah, Matthew McConaughey was in it. And a few of the I forget who the person was. But yeah, I remember wrote Well,

Derek Kolstad 17:50
it was just it was all and then the second one was sliver with Sharon Stone. Because it was like this psychosexual thriller that nothing happened. And every time we had sex, she like cried, and after about 20 minutes, I'm like, Yeah, I kind of miss the sunshine right now.

Dave Bullis 18:08
Anthony Hopkins, he was in Roseville. That's right. That's right. You know, you know, that movie was actually based off of Kellogg.

Derek Kolstad 18:15
Yeah, I know that guy. I mean, the movie is crazy. But that life story is even crazier. Still. I was really close to walk out of frickin episode one though.

Dave Bullis 18:26
Yeah, I remember episode one didn't leave much of an impression on me either.

Derek Kolstad 18:29
And I and part of the reason I stayed is, you know, everyone I was with was a massive Star Wars fan. So they had like the rose tinted spectacles on, but I was just kind of like going this whole thing's a cutscene of the PlayStation game.

Dave Bullis 18:46
When I was when I first saw it, I you know, I forget how old I was. I was like, you know, something's missing here. I I didn't mind at that point in time. I my my brain I didn't have I didn't wasn't into film like I am now you know. But something was was inside was telling me because I never felt this way about the original three, like the original three, like, I'll just watch and like I'm entertained from beginning to end. Episode One. I was kind of like, what's going on? Who's doing Who's this guy? And

Derek Kolstad 19:15
also, it's like, the plot is the is like a political Trade Organization treaty thing. You're like, wait, this is what we're after. But you know that everyone becomes a cynic at some point because I remember seeing Return of the Jedi in the theater, with my family, a bunch of friends and I was the guy I was one of those guys who was a growing number leaving going I think I hate he walks

Dave Bullis 19:41
Yeah, I don't really I haven't got that point yet where I hate the he walks but you

Derek Kolstad 19:45
will love it. Ah, I don't know why it just happens.

Dave Bullis 19:49
Well, Harrison Ford hated him right away. He called him the teddy bear picnic. You're at college. Where were you got your degree. You should writing your writing in your in your spare time. And you know, so where is it that you started to say like, you know, should I write screenplays was before your brother call to call you? Where's the answer your brother college

Derek Kolstad 20:11
I was actually in high school we went my family one on a Alaska cruise we know we saved up for this thing. And I wrote my first screenplay because I love movies on in longhand on a yellow notepad and came back and at a time, you know, we have WordPerfect and I built up a template. And I wrote it and gave it to my mom, who she gave me back my first notes, and they were brutal. And yeah, looking back and reading that first screenplay and senior notes, she was actually being very kind. I think it was just, I was I wanted to emulate what I loved, you know, and I love and I still love movies, you know, and short stories and movies were what I do, but I just want one show anybody you know, in fact, for a couple of years, the cousins, you know, I come from a large extended family. When I got someone's name, like, for Christmas, I would write them four or five stories and kind of bind it together. And that was my gift. I just enjoyed doing it. You know, it was never, it was never work. And even now, like, I would argue that your first draft of anything isn't work. That's fun. Work is the reracked and making 15 people happy and keeping it afloat, you know. But to answer your question, man, I just, I watched so many movies, and it gave me so much joy. I wanted to emulate that.

Dave Bullis 21:39
So, you know, a little feedback. So I moved to LA and then you you start writing again. So like what was your first, you know, professional screenplay that you would call it, you know, that you actually were using, as soon as I get your foot in the door, so to speak. And as far as

Derek Kolstad 21:59
the first one to get my foot in the door, I was called the wayfair. And it was a it was a sci fi thriller in the vein of matrix by way of the shining what's called and my two leads were African American. And I got a bunch of movies. I mean, got a bunch of meetings. And they were surprised because I'm a six foot two white dude with red hair. You know, they thought it was something else. But I was wanting to see Denzel Washington and who's Murtaugh? I can't remember his name right now. From

Dave Bullis 22:30
Danny Glover.

Derek Kolstad 22:31
Yeah, I wanted them. I wanted them paired up, you know. So got a lot of meetings. And, you know, what happens is, I was used to the, you know, the professional world, but you move out here and you get involved in the industry. It was different. And it was hard. And I just kind of I stepped away for a bit. And then I stepped back and I did a couple of you know, what would you call them direct to DVD or VOD movies was the package and one was one of the chamber. And they were hard, simply because you look at you look at the package. They had like 12 days to shoot. And you have very little money. And you have people who don't care because they pocketed their paycheck and other people who did care. Because it was a movie we known as movie they were part of. And so after, after those two, I was close to quitting again, because to pay the bills. Even with those I was doing a lot of nonprofit stuff like doing videos and websites for NGOs and like, and it wasn't until I wrote this wrote the screenplay called acolyte, aka simple man, that Sonia, who's we lovingly refer to as a script pitch, because she's the first line of defense for quality. She read it, and she said, I think you should try again. And a buddy of mine, Mike Callahan, who was a producer on those two titles I mentioned, introduced me to Mike Goldberg and Josh Adler were a new wave at the time. And they saved me, you know, everyone in their life at some point has individuals who saved them professionally, and those two saves me and they brought me to where I am today.

Dave Bullis 24:17
So, you know, just to dig a little deeper into the script, Eric, when you were writing out You You You told me you don't you didn't see a lot of screenwriting books. I don't know if you if you had read them at that point. But do you did you subscribe to any sort of of you know template, whether it's you know, enter if you read solipsistic Syd field screenplay, or save the cat by Blake Snyder,

Derek Kolstad 24:39
which I did. The cat I didn't say the cat that was great. I haven't read anything by Sinfield. But uh, I think my big thing is, when I was a kid, I was a my whole family were ravenous readers. You know, I would probably read when I was in grade school, I read a book a day, just because you know, I love I loved reading. And I've always been imaginative. But when you read and see where other people's stories go, it's awesome. And my favorite authors at the time were Alistair MacLean. You know, and Dashiell Hammett, and Tom Clancy, and then when I was in high school, it was shipped CIT who wrote the firm.

Dave Bullis 25:21
That was

Derek Kolstad 25:24
crap. JOHN Grisham.

Dave Bullis 25:26
Yeah, it's very, it's on my bookshelf behind me, I could just turn around.

Derek Kolstad 25:29
But a lot of like, especially when we play, you know, hearing of guns of navarone. And what I loved about his stuff is if you look at, for instance, what's the movie? Ronin did it best is? You know, at one point, Max says, ask the question, Do I know you by way of the germ or something like that? It's never addressed again. But by just by having that one line, the world kind of expands a little, like a little bit bigger, and asked him a claim. And Hitchcock especially, they would have these lines that made their their movies seem bigger and more complex than they were, when in reality, they were very simple. You know, you take john wick, I mean, it's a revenge story, but he's not. You know, I'll let people argue about it. But it's more than just the dog. You know. And I think the best movies are that it's more than just the sled, you know, Rose, but it's more than just the ring. It's more than it's it just, it hints at a larger purpose. And I think by not answering what that larger purpose is. That's where the movies I love come into play.

Dave Bullis 26:39
Yeah, and I know exactly what you mean. You know, in in john wick, you know, it is more than when they, when they do whatever happens, the dog. I don't know, if anyone who hasn't watched it yet. I probably should stop now and watch it, and then come back. So I am going to be talking about I do want to delve in deeper to the movie. But be at your I agree with you wholeheartedly. And you know, it isn't I always am fascinated when I ever, you know, talk to an accomplished screenwriter, like yourself, Derek, who, what they've read, and what method methodology they subscribe to. Cuz some people swear by, say the cat, and I've had others here on the podcast who say, Don't ever even read it, keep it away from you at all costs?

Derek Kolstad 27:17
Well, you know, everyone functions differently. everyone learns differently. I don't know, like, people ask me, like, where did these ideas come from? To be honest, I don't know, a lot of it is, you know, what I've read, and who you are and where you are, and where you see and how you see it suddenly comes into play. But what I tell everyone is, as soon as you've finished a screenplay, write the first page and the next one. Because it's kind of like, you have to keep that flame stoked, or else a lot. For me, personally, I've talked to other writers is, when I finished a screenplay, it's kind of depressing. You know, because you've been with this story. And now it's done. You're like, shit, you know, you you are crafting this world. I mean, they hand it off, you have to start the next one, or else you know, for some of us, you know, you know this, when you talk to writers, I understand a great deal why people turn to the bottle, or turn to the needle or turn elsewhere. Because when you get to the end of that novel, bring you the end of that screenplay, or even a short story, you feel very alone. But if you keep it going, you feel very alive.

Dave Bullis 28:26
So Derek, I want to ask you, are you? Are you a part of a writer's group of any kind? I mean, mean? Like, do you have like a group of that you meet with me once a month just to exchange, you know, whatever you're working on?

Derek Kolstad 28:36
I actually I don't, you know, Sonia, is very key. She comes from a house of readers as well. And so between her and Josh and Mike, they tend to be my readers. And but what I am a part of is, you know, a guy named screenwriter named Matt altman invited me to his screenwriter forum on Facebook. I can't remember what it was Josh invited me anyway. And what's really cool about that is the first thing I want to do until I, until after the first week, I realize it's just a bunch of people encouraging each other. And I think that's incredibly important. You know, to have that group of people that when you have a question to ask, they're excited to answer because you were excited to answer them. And I love it.

Dave Bullis 29:25
Yeah, I'm a part of a writer's group right now. We we started about two years ago, when it was a will. A friend of mine got inspired. Because we were watching the Oscars, and Tarantino gave a speech about Django, and it just sort of hit me like a lightning bolt. And I was like, holy crap, why don't I just that story of writers group with some of the people that I know in the area who I trust, and just see what goes from there, you know? Yeah,

Derek Kolstad 29:49
right. And that's the thing though, is like you I'd argue almost in every capacity, you can't be a solitary person. Even though I'm happiest alone. I'm happiest alone with my computer. No music on and just I love that. And yet I know if I stay within that bell jar, I'll get worse because I have to have those outward influences to make what I do better. And, you know, those who writes, I'd argue, you know, seek out even on Facebook or any other site or even locally, people who think like you, because a lot of things that you worry about, they do too. And that's important to actually connect on.

Dave Bullis 30:28
It's a very good point. And so, you know, as we know, we talked about writers groups and everything like that, you know, a little later, I wanted to ask you another question. Sorry, sorry, for the bad segue. But I, I have a note in front of me, I want to ask you say after, afterwards, but you know, as we're writing, you know, I, you, you, you had the May fers, you, and then you I assume now, once you were done that you started your next project. So what was your next project to that?

Derek Kolstad 30:58
I don't know. He's, here's the thing is I write, I write a lot, and I write fast, you know, and, but a lot of times too, and you might have been the same place, like a lot of times write the story to get it on my head. It might not be good, you know, but at the same time, like, it's haunting me that it's still in there. I think I think of stories as people in line at the bank, you know, if it's 15, deep, you're pissed. But if it's 3d be fine, you know, so I try to get those 12 out of the way. But I would argue that acolyte, which is, you know, making the rounds again, that one got me on the radar, and it was john wick. That made me may be able to say that I'm a professional screenwriter now. And you know, what's really fun about the john wick process was, I'd written it, and it was originally entitled scorn. And the character was in his early 70s, because, again, I loved the movie, Ron, and I thought, how cool would it be to grab like a comedy Jones or a, you know, a, you know, just an older actor, and do an action piece that made sense, because, you know, I just wanted to see that the dog was like 15 years old, the wife had passed two years ago. So my, my agent at the time, Charlie Ferraro, well, you know, but over UTA, he called me after the screenplay and went out and he's like, we've got like, three or four offers. And I'm not going to tell you the numbers, but I really think we should take the lowest one because they want to make it now. And you know, you got a great agent who is looking at the long game, you know, it's more important for me to get an okay payday and a made movie than a million dollars and no man movie, you know. And so, they set it up with basil monic, over at Thunder Road. And, you know, we developed a back and forth for a while, and then he went out to directors. And on a Friday afternoon at like, one o'clock, Keanu Reeves called basil. And he's like, Hey, man, I heard about this screenplay. I really liked to read it out. Can you send it over? So they couriered it over? And at 430 Keanu Reeves called back and he said, I want to do it. Now basil called me again. And I grew up with a guy. And I was I was, I was excited. No, because this is a very violent movie. And I'd love to see him do this again. And the first time I went over his house, I walked past his den. In his desk, I shoot, you know, like 200 screenplays. This guy's hobby is reading screenplays. And in that moment, it was probably the most humbling I've ever known going. Holy shit. I was one of those who picked it, you know? So that's how I want Canada and honestly, the title came about because Canada would not refer to it as scorn. You'd always refer to the project as john wick and it stuck.

Dave Bullis 33:44
You know, I, by the way, did you actually get to meet Canada? Oh, yeah.

Derek Kolstad 33:49
Yeah, I mean, Canada is a incredibly bright cat. I mean, you sit down with anyone and their first two notes. You're like, man, oh, shit. He got to his third note. I was like, damn it, that's better than what I had in mind, you know? And so he was. We spent a ton of time together on every character in every scene outside of his own. And he is equally responsible for what's up on that screen. I mean, Chad, Dave, basil, Erica, and I mean, this is an awesome production crew. But at its heart and soul, it's Canada because Canada loves the character. And I can't you know, honestly, I'm not pandering. You can ask around. You've probably heard stories, but he's a genuine dude. And he's, you know, for instance, when we shot in New York, he got to know all the guys at the coffee shop, because he would join them for their smoke breaks. And I was last day it was like saying goodbye to your best friends at camp. And you don't see that a lot with especially guys of his caliber.

Dave Bullis 34:50
Yeah, I've always heard that he is an absolutely awesome guy.

Derek Kolstad 34:53
Oh, yeah. In fact, you know, my, my most surreal story like something like that. Nice guy, but I, I like being alone. He everyone knows his address out here. You know the

Dave Bullis 35:06
little little

Derek Kolstad 35:08
buses that go by with tourists. They stopped by his house and you know all that kind of stuff. My favorite was one day we're working on john wick. His doorbell rang and he's got a little you know, you know, it's like Who's there? And this woman says, Hi, my name is so and so from Boise, Idaho or something. Huge fan of yours or just wondering the the picture and he's like, okay, she goes outside and hangs out with this teenage girl in her family for like five minutes taking pictures then comes back in. Like who does that? That's, it's unbelievable. It's awesome. But that's the kind of guy he is.

Dave Bullis 35:44
Yeah, that is absolutely hilarious. I mean, I don't know if this is true or not. But I saw that apparently, he gave his matrix two and three money away to the special effects guys. I don't know if that's true or not, but it is

Derek Kolstad 35:55
true. And the other thing that I thought was really cool is because you know, Chad was his stunt double in the matrix. He can Oh hired who's the guy who makes the custom bikes motorcycles that Jesse didn't know. I'm talking about?

Dave Bullis 36:12
Yeah, it was Jesse James for a while it wasn't it

Derek Kolstad 36:14
was I think, I think it's Jesse James. But like, Kanno as not only do they give away his bonus money he had everyone on the stunt team made customized motorcycles that were delivered by Jesse James. and stuff like that, where you know, you don't have to do that. And yeah, you could argue that he's a multi millionaire, whatever. But again, he's just he's a unique and genuine, you know, generous man.

Dave Bullis 36:41
And it's no, it's absolutely awesome. And, you know, for him to get into the john wick character, you know, when you finally saw the movie, and you finally you know, saw everything playing out, you know, what, what were your initial thoughts when you finally saw his finished product?

Derek Kolstad 36:54
That's a great question. Because we, when we saw the friends and family, you know, that like the first cut in the movie with I had no idea I because when you get to a point and rewriting, you're not seeing words anymore, you're just seeing kind of numbers, if that makes sense. And so when we saw it, I remember looking over it, it's Sonia, first join. Was it good? Like, I didn't hate it? I didn't I didn't know. And she was and she by her expression. I know, it was, you know. And the moment that hit home for me is we when we did our initial screening at the dome out here at the arclight. We're doing a q&a afterwards and said I don't it's 700 seats, and it is a pretty big forum. But I you know, I showed up and I didn't watch the movie, because at that point, you'd seen it so many times. But I scan the audience to find the people who don't want to be there. And at about minute 20 everyone would have this huge grin. And you know, my favorite movie going experience in my life. And I tell almost everyone I meet is when the raid came out. Have you seen the ride? Oh, yeah, absolutely. Okay, When the rain came out, I love the trailer. And I love to Meranti which are think that's mainly when the movie made before that. We walked into the theater with the arclight here in Pasadena and it's a smaller theater like 130 seats, or even maybe even less. And if you look at the audience, it was every sex every age, every color, every creed. It was weird. It was like a serial killers Daydream. It was bizarre. Like, if you ask people what are they here to see, you know, but we sat down it was sold out. And when the reverse door guillotine happened, I leaned forward and my seat and looked around like you did when you're 12 years old. At the end of the I was a 17 year old Korean man who's doing the same thing. And he pointed at me and mouth.

Dave Bullis 38:44
Did you see that?

Derek Kolstad 38:46
Oh, and when I watched people watching john wick, especially during that house invasion, and to see a guy who's 68 years old lean for as chairman around that may my MA my life man, you know, cuz that's, that's what that's what I wanted to bring out of people. And so I want to bring on people now, you know?

Dave Bullis 39:05
Yeah, it is phenomenal with that, you know, movies can bring people together like that.

Derek Kolstad 39:11
Especially what I loved about a john wick process or even release was the number of older people or, you know, again, yes, action movie, but it's got a huge female fan base. Just because, you know, a lot of people will say, you hear the term grounded, which means deep, elevated, which means good. You know, it's like I want to make an elevated horror, like we you know, we want to make a good horror or good action piece. And what I loved about the john wick process is from this, the original spec of the bones and the muscle mass remained the same. It was just the skin and the hair that was massaged in by everyone involved. And again, Thunder Road and the directors and Kiana about Lions Gate. They just, you know, at any point, any production, everyone hates everybody because you're just tired and yet when we do That q&a following that you just saw the joy in gone. You know, it's, it's a major miracle to have a movie made. It's even more so to have it be anything good or let alone critical and financial success. So I use the term a lot like I'm humbled and I am, you know, because, you know, you look at all the other stuff I have on my platter, it's It's horrifying, because you're like, Can I can I can I do what I just did? We'll see.

Dave Bullis 40:27
And speaking of that, you know, I saw john wick, too, was just announced.

Derek Kolstad 40:30
Yeah, yeah, in fact, I mean, he has got the latest draft his script, and we're going to be talking about this Sunday. He loves it. I mean, the body count is probably three times bigger. And that what I love about piano too, is you look at a guy who is he 5051. I don't remember. But he wants to do. He hates when people refer to what he does his stunts because it's not it's him. He's really doing this stuff. And when you look at that movie, and try to copy what he does, I can't 12 years younger than him, it's like, I can't do that. And yet he beat the shit out of himself. And he did it with a grid. And he is kind of like, you know, he sees that, like, I I love that man's workout.

Dave Bullis 41:16
And that, you know that that's awesome. And that's indicative. Everything I've always heard about Kiana was that he is, you know, a guy that's willing to go the extra mile, you know, and so when so I want to ask you is Derek is? How, from what point did you start working on john wick? Two? Did you know that? I mean, did they did they immediately greenlight it and say, Get to work on it, Derek, or did you start working on it already?

Derek Kolstad 41:39
No. I mean, I, I hadn't started working on it. Because when you start when you get a movie in production, your life is rewrite hell, and it's just, it's continual. And what I learned too, is when I was out in New York, on the shoot, it was hard for me to do anything else. Because every 10 minutes, even though you're doing very minimal labor, you have someone coming in asking, Hey, what's the nurses name? You know, the hospital, like I, who gives a shit, but, you know, they came to me for that. I spent I spent about five weeks just playing civilization five on my laptop, because I couldn't, I couldn't work on anything else, you know. And yet, you know, for a couple of days, every week, Kiana would come back, we'd have lunch, and we'd lunch with a buddy of mine named Todd, who, you know, he does all the, the, we call it all the artwork, you know, all that kind of stuff. And canowindra asked me is like, so you know, where do you see john going next, you know, how many have you seen in your head? And I liked him. I was like, I got seven. I got seven of them. And he laughed, and I pitched him two and three and four. And you could see him kind of not grow pale. But go Okay, let's just focus on the next one. All right. So I didn't start it. And to be honest, it's even in you know, even with the greenlight, we've we've chaotically gone between different storylines. And yet, what we've remained true to is, I don't want to look at it at it as a sequel, I want to look at it as you know, john wick chapter two, because what the Fast and Furious did so well is after the third one is they weren't sequels anymore. They were chapters, and I think those are the best. Those are the best franchises to have, you know, I would you know, Empire Strikes Back is not a sequel is a chapter, you know, most sequels or remakes are the first one. And with this one, you want it to be unique, but familiar, you know?

Dave Bullis 43:38
Yeah. And that's a great way to put it to different chapters.

Derek Kolstad 43:42
Yeah, I mean, and that's why you can't help but respect about the Fast and Furious movies, even if you don't like them. Each one got better, you know, at a certain point. And, you know, people ask me what I watch and like, I gotta be honest, I haven't seen it yet. But you know, I'm gonna love Mad Max. I mean, I've been watching that trailer every day on a deafening TV screen with my arms out wide grinning, because that's what I want to do, you know?

Dave Bullis 44:08
Yeah, everyone I know who was seen as not that. I haven't seen it yet, either. Yeah, did you see fast, furious seven.

Derek Kolstad 44:16
I'm really behind on everything. And you know, what I've learned too is when you when you write like this, or you get to this, you know, degree of success, I would argue, I don't, I don't like going to the theater. Simply because I'm alone most of the time. And when you sit down with a bunch of strangers, it's a bit of anxiety. And you're watching a movie and when you find yourself not liking it, you're suddenly reminded that people don't like what you do. It's weird. You know, I like it. It's It's weird. I mean, I love movies, man, but I like him now in the privacy of my own home.

Dave Bullis 44:50
Did he teach his own you know, and and sometimes I I totally get what you're saying because I sometimes just like to watch movies in my own home too. That's why like when it follows was coming out and they were like, oh, by the way, we're gonna do VOD the same day as theater. I was like, go good. I can just stay home now order a pizza, and I go watch it follows at home and they pulled out the VOD. So I ended up, you know, because it did better in theaters than they expected it was going to do. Yeah. So now I, I've pulled up Netflix and watch or watching something else.

Derek Kolstad 45:19
Well, it's like the event movies. I, you know, I go see in the theater. And to be honest, my favorite movies to see in the theater are the ones that are aimed directly at kids. Because, you know, the cynicism really hasn't sunk in, and to go watch, like, you know, anything by Pixar, you know, are a lot of Disney stuff, and to look across, and, you know, when we saw the movie, Frozen, it was a couple of weeks out, and the little kids in front of us were singing along to every song And in that moment, like, you could be irritated, oh, man, or you can go like, that's movie magic. You know, these little kids love the movie so much. They're singing along and you know, in this day, that was all that's love that memory.

Dave Bullis 46:00
And, you know, that's what movies do. They help me give those memories. Yeah.

Derek Kolstad 46:04
And I mean, you think of the movies that make you cry. I was a little kid. I mean, I wept a frickin Fox in the hound. You know, I wept when he came back to life, you know, then as you get older and older, it's always it changes like what affects you. I think the last movie I cried in was big fish of all movies. Like I was dating Sony at the time. And it's, you know, any kind of father son by any story gets me. And when he tells his father, the ministers breaking down, I was a blubbering mess. And it's like, you got me, man. Congratulations.

Dave Bullis 46:40
Yeah, man, what's

Derek Kolstad 46:41
the last movie that made you cry?

Dave Bullis 46:43
That made me cry? Yeah. I'm not even sure.

Derek Kolstad 46:48
Yeah.

Dave Bullis 46:51
That's a good question. I have to think about that. Derrick.

Derek Kolstad 46:54
My favorite was I went to go see Wally. And I would argue the beginning of Wally's one of the best in cinema, because it just showed you true loneliness. And as a writer, you'll know that you tap into loneliness. And at the end of the island, my buddy JC it's, there's a quiet moment. I just hear I hear quite tears from his eyes like goddamnit Pixar, you got me again.

Dave Bullis 47:21
They are phenomenal at that.

Derek Kolstad 47:23
But they respect the process, man, they take their time.

Dave Bullis 47:26
Yes, they there's so many good points about Pixar that like of what they do with their stories and how they structure them. And the characters and the and everything you know, and it's just, that's why there's so many. I mean, if you go like speed of screenwriting books, if you go like, look online, there's so many screenwriting books now about like doing it the Pixar way, whatever, you know what I mean? Yes, because you know, they are the guys you want to emulate.

Derek Kolstad 47:51
But also, you know, I think the best filmmakers Love, love their characters, you know, in the Pixar movies, you can tell that they love their characters, even the bad guys, you know. And I think that's important. I mean, what's been great in developing john wick, too, is we love john wick, you know, I mean, he was the Baba Yaga. He was the devil. And there may be a bit of that still inside of him. But there's something about that you love, you know. And the best movies are either the ones where everyone hated each other on the set or loved.

Dave Bullis 48:24
Yeah, and I heard there's a lot of frictional madmax it so Oh,

Derek Kolstad 48:27
yeah. Well, did you read that article with Tom Hardy hardy said, as soon as he saw the movie, he apologized to George. Yeah,

Dave Bullis 48:35
that's that's what I saw. And then I saw apparently like it at the Cannes Film Festival. They were like, he apologized for some of his behavior or something, or apparently something. There was some friction about something.

Derek Kolstad 48:45
Well, you know, and that's the thing about the industry that a lot of people don't understand until you really hear is, you can we can bemoan the fact that stars can be odd people who are assholes from time to time, but I do not envy their position. I mean, especially when you see it firsthand how people treat them. And I wouldn't I can never live in that kind of world, you know?

Dave Bullis 49:12
Is it really? Do you ever see anyone ever like trying to treat Kanto bed?

Derek Kolstad 49:17
No, it's not a matter of treating them bad. But it's, it's a matter of going, Hey, I recognize you from all your movies. See, I say we're buddies now, you know. But like when he's having dinner and just having people come up, and, you know, continuously come up to them. I don't get that, you know, New York is different. And I'd argue various sections of Hollywood are different simply because they're used to it and it's a different culture. But when you have you know, people from the Midwest, where I come from, you have two kinds, the kind of comes up to Canada goes, Hey, I love your work and then move on. And then it's the or the Hey, I love your work. We're friends now. Right?

Dave Bullis 49:57
So do you have a lot of friends in the Midwest, calling you They'll be like, hey, Derek, you sold a screenplay. I have a screenplay idea. Do

Derek Kolstad 50:04
you know? Not really, because I, I'd argue one of the greatest things about the Midwest is you're instilled with a work ethic. But more importantly, it's like one of my best friends out here is Austin Bryan, he played a little kid in Last Action Hero, you know, his Lawnmower Man, and all that kind of stuff. And he's a very successful photographer now. And he was kind of stressed one day when he was going to meet my cousin, who was a big fan of his. And my cousin, Joanna, came to a party, she walked up to him, shook his hand said, Hey, I really love your movies. And I went to the kitchen to start cooking something I don't know. That's, that's what I grew up with. And I think that's awesome. But every now and then you have people come out of the woodwork, of course. And that's just kind of nice Facebook is you can ignore them. And yet at the same time, like, the reality is no one helped me, you know. And what I mean by that is, of course, people helped me. But when it came to this, to getting into the industry in the screenwriting, it was years of incredibly hard work and work for free to get to this point. And yet, I kind of wonder, would I be the same guy had the success happened at age 30? Then 40. Hope so. And so a lot of times when students reach out to me, or people reach out to me, those conversations tend to be very healthy, because they're grounded. You know, I'm, I'm a screenwriter, man, the crazies don't come to me.

Dave Bullis 51:30
And sometimes, Derek, do you have annoying people to ask to be on a podcast?

Derek Kolstad 51:34
You know, what I what I love about podcasts, though, is this medium has given so many people like yourselves an opportunity that didn't exist 10 years ago, you know, I love that. And I mean, who knows what the next generation is gonna, you know, face as well. But you have the opportunity to be and create and manage your own brand. And how cool is that?

Dave Bullis 51:56
Yeah, absolutely. Um, you know, and I think the next generation is gonna be robots are just gonna, are gonna call you and they're gonna interview you, and then, you know, just whoever's around, be listening to it.

Derek Kolstad 52:07
Let's see, that's what I like about podcasters though, is, you're not, you're not a cynical bunch. I mean, you're doing what you love. You know, it's one thing doing an interview for the international press. It's nothing doing this because we're, we're fanboys to a certain degree of films themselves. You know? I'm, I have not seen the most movies, any, any person I know. yet. When I see a fellow person who loves a certain movie, like, you know, I asked last night on Facebook, like what movies you watch when you're down or drunk, or, you know, alone. And my response was, like, I've seen cabin of the woods and Evil Dead to too many times to count. And yet, when people hear that, you can kind of see the Amen, brother.

Dave Bullis 52:49
Yeah, it's just so interesting. You know, I remember this, this this anecdote that Kane Hodder, I don't know if you can't hotter race, but he was Jason Friday 13th from seven on. And he wants they actually were talking to him once. And they said, who was the best actor you've ever worked with? And his response was, Charlie's Charlie's Theron. And he said she was just absolutely phenomenal monster. And he said that she just blew everyone away. And he's never worked. Someone you know, it's just it's it was she was just beyond, you know, what he was used to? You know, I mean,

Derek Kolstad 53:22
yeah, a friend of mine who saw Fury Road was just like, thrones, amazing, because she's looking in the rearview mirror. And acting. And you're kind of like, I can't do that. Like to have volumes of backstory in a look. It's huge, you know?

Dave Bullis 53:42
Yeah, absolutely. I mean, that's why I think does work. I mean, I haven't seen it. I'm just here. works behind him as well. But, you know, I mean, you've got Tom Hardy, who's phenomenal. And you have her? who I think is absolutely phenomenal. I loved her. promethease I don't know if you saw previous.

Derek Kolstad 53:57
Yeah, I wasn't the biggest fan of that one, man. I loved her, though.

Dave Bullis 54:02
Yeah, she was I you know, I just have a big soft spot for that movie. I know it has for

Derek Kolstad 54:08
everyone has. That's the thing is everyone has those movies that connect to you on a certain capacity. So there are very there are very few movies I will refer to as horrendous or terrible, simply because you connected with them on a certain level. I mean, I have movies that are indefensible, but I love them. Because they they amuse me in a way that only that movie could, you know?

Dave Bullis 54:30
Yeah, I totally, totally understand. So, you know, they're talking about and an hour now, I know you have, you know, I don't want to have too much your time. So, you know, I have one question or actually two questions that came in from the fans if you don't mind. The first question I actually I briefly referred to earlier was about what the question is, I'm just gonna paraphrase this is, you know, with a lot of talk in the industry about script consultants. Where do you feel that they fit in to the whole screening process?

Derek Kolstad 55:04
You know, it's hard for me because I'm Sony is my script consultant, you know, and so, between her and Josh Adler's my manager. You know, that's, that's where I've gone. But I would argue that, you know, my dad used to say that phrase that when you bring in someone to do a job, and you're getting a quote, get five quotes, you throw out the biggest one, throw out the lowest one, and was screw consulting, is if you look at the numbers, if it makes sense for you, great. And a lot of times, especially nowadays, you can find some good ones that all you need is to hear back. Both that criticism and encouragement make you better, you know, I would argue that a lot of us have people who serve the script, consultation, capacity in some respect. But for the pros, they're reading tons of scripts, they know that they know, they know what's selling, they know what's not. And I think, even though I haven't done it before, I can see the value in it. Just don't spend, you know, an ungodly amount, you know.

Dave Bullis 56:11
So, in your opinion, you know, what's, like, do you think there should be like a cap of $100 $1,000 or something like that?

Derek Kolstad 56:16
But, you know, you can't really say a finger because Who is it? You know, you know, at a certain point, like, if you buy a luxury ice cream container for $8, you're like, Oh, sweet, would you buy it for 80? fuck knows ice cream at a certain point. What is it that you're buying, you know,

Dave Bullis 56:35
very true. Just as a funny side note, I actually just saw in, I think it was Abu Dhabi, or somewhere in the Middle East, they actually have ice cream. Now. That's like $1,000 an ounce.

Derek Kolstad 56:49
What's in it?

Dave Bullis 56:50
gold flakes, got diamonds, and caviar and something else. But it's, but it's like the way they make it is they it's all freeze dried. Right. So they make it literally, they make it right in front of you from scratch everything from scratch. Totally not not not the diamonds, of course, but like the ice cream. And then what they do is they put it into this, they mix it up with everything. And then they top it with gold flakes.

Derek Kolstad 57:13
I don't know who told me this years ago, but they're like, it was when the Trump hotel I think was serving up this $800 hamburger, you know? And he said, If I ever found myself wondering about that burger and ordering it, I should just give that money away. And I think that's the truth or most likely Well, if I find myself wanting to buy a Bentley, I should give that money away if I had it.

Dave Bullis 57:39
So yeah, I know what you mean. Although I would say I probably would buy a Bentley. You know, it's funny. Joe, Esther Haas once said that, there's a there's a great way, if you ever stuck on a screenplay, he has found the perfect way to get unstuck and cure writer's block. And he says what you do as you go down to find your local exotic car dealer, and you either get like a Lamborghini or Ferrari and you take it out for the weekend. And he said, What by the time you get back, you're going to do anything in your power to make sure you come by once you could drive out again.

Derek Kolstad 58:15
I like that.

Dave Bullis 58:17
Yeah, and I'm actually trying to get him on the podcast, by the way. Might be a little subtle. Is he

Derek Kolstad 58:23
still writing? He kind of had a big blow for the industry and kind of took took some time off.

Dave Bullis 58:29
Oh, he's the writing. Okay. And because he is he his last work was actually a book. It's an E book called heaven and mail. And it's all about working with Mel Gibson. Nice. And the other question that came in, Derek was how do I go about getting a screenplay mentor?

Derek Kolstad 58:49
Good question, man. If I look at my own life, find someone in your life who reads and reads voraciously, simply because when you read you, you know what's good, you know, what's, you know, what works. And, you know, the other thing too, is my thing about screenwriting, especially the industry, I said at the beginning is you have to be here. I know you can hate LA and hate New York even but you have to be here. You could honestly move to LA right now. jump online and find a group of people who will read your screenplay in 48 hours because they're trying to do the same thing. And it's kind of like the Brotherhood, the script. And you know, that's the bet if you really want to see if you can fail at this move here, you know, but if you don't and you want advice, seek out the people who love the medium. And it's amazing too. The other thing too is you'll know if you have a good script when you have your friends sit around and read it out loud. Because it's amazing, especially with comedy something that intimidates the shit out of me where It's funny to you. It's funny on a page when it's spoken out loud. It's just like gravel, you know? And that's what I'd say.

Dave Bullis 1:00:09
That's a very good point. Did By the way, directors that sort of add on to that, did you see the blacklist has its own podcast now? They're actually reading some like unproduced screenplays. Oh, really? Yeah. That's a really cool idea. Yeah, the the first one they did was a balls out.

Derek Kolstad 1:00:24
I've I haven't read that one. I've heard of it.

Dave Bullis 1:00:27
Somebody once told me about it. And then I heard Craig Mazin mentioned it again. Craig Mazin, you know, he is right. Yeah. Okay. So he mentioned it, and I looked it up. And I was like, Wow, it's easy to find. And apparently, it's been circling around Hollywood for years, but nobody actually wants to make it. But everyone's like, this is fucking hilarious. Haha. And they just pass it on. And and it's been like, why the hell so? Apparently, it does get like pretty outrageous and stuff. So I'm actually going to read it one of these days. But I've read the first 20 pages. I thought it was hilarious.

Derek Kolstad 1:00:59
Like, have you read the screenplay? passengers?

Dave Bullis 1:01:02
No, I haven't. Dude,

Derek Kolstad 1:01:03
that's that's one right now. I think. I think Chris Pratt attached? I don't know, do the female leaders right now. That's one that every exact I talked to us. Like, that's the best game plan read in five years. But we passed on it. And the realities of this business are it's like, let's say you read a screenplay, and it's your favorite ever. But you're like, that's $120 million. You know, pG 13 R rated sci fi thriller. That's unique. You know, it's not based on anything. You know, you've got shareholders, man, it's, it's a huge risk. So when people pass on certain stuff, like I've talked to a number of people passed on gravity. You're like, wow, and then you realize, Oh, yeah, if you hadn't seen the visuals, and read it, I get it, you know? And yet, every now and then, especially being an aspiring writer, like yourself. Oh, fuck that. You're a writer, you know, is when you go to the theater. You're like, you get 12 minutes into the movie, like, how is this made? And a lot of times, even the people involved like I don't happen.

Dave Bullis 1:02:09
Yeah, there's a there's another podcast too. called How did this get made? And? And I first I was like, What the hell? But But yeah, I know exactly what you mean. You know, they even mentioned you What the hell happened here. But you know, it's funny Derrick member landed the last one that came out with Will Ferrell. Yeah, that that studio, they they bought the book so much on that. And then what happened was when a failed, everyone got fired?

Derek Kolstad 1:02:35
Yeah. That's the kind of thing though, that you can you feel for certain people involved because I remember talking to the producers of Jonah hacks. And they, you know, this was after the fact they were like, Derek, the screenplay was fun. It was a blast. The table reads to great. Three weeks for shooting, they carved off like $15 million for a budget, we thought we do fine. And then when we started seeing dailies, we were like, what happened? It's just, again, it's a miracle, and you get a good movie. And it's simply because, you know, it's it begins and ends with a script, sure. But at certain points, people step in, and the script gets muddied. And things happen, you know, often a bad movie. That's only bad when it hits the second act, you know, that's more often than not.

Dave Bullis 1:03:27
Yeah, very true. Yeah. Something I've always heard is the the second act is where movies go to die.

Derek Kolstad 1:03:34
Yeah, yeah. I mean, I would argue that the movies I write the I love, just actually I love thrillers love sci fi. The work is an act to me an act one you come up with, when you're out for a walk, or you're having a meal. x three is just fun, because you can finish the fucker. But act two. That's where the writing comes in. And when you start receiving notes, all your notes are an act two, not one or three.

Dave Bullis 1:04:06
So you know, Derrick, in closing, uh, you know, I mean, we could talk all day, you and I could tell we have you know, we have we have the same taste in movies we've got

Derek Kolstad 1:04:14
we're both give a shout when the next film comes out, man.

Dave Bullis 1:04:18
Okay, definitely. Because you're both have degrees in business. We both do writing. We both have red hair.

Derek Kolstad 1:04:25
Losing my I shaved my head.

Dave Bullis 1:04:28
But thank you for that writer comment, by the way. Yeah.

Derek Kolstad 1:04:33
I have to stop myself because it's kind of like Kiana said about he doesn't do his he doesn't do stocks. He's really doing it. And so when I talk to people, it's like, you're not to say you're an aspiring screenwriter means you want to be a screenwriter. He's being paid, but to be writers to be a writer. And as soon as you have one person read it, you've affected their entire life. And I think it's it's a difficult career, and yet it's a it's a fun one. I'm not saying john wick is going to be out there changing people's lives but I want making movies that like predator diehard for instance, we are you're at a hotel one night. It's 11 o'clock you're tired. You turn on the TV halfway through predator like fuck gotta watch it. Those the movies I love.

Dave Bullis 1:05:16
I mean, I remember when I when I was beyond the commercials for john wick. I was on Facebook one day and a friend of mine who's kind of a hard guy to please movies actually was like john wick Anyway, you know, dot dot dot the ellipsis anyway, that was pretty fucking good.

Derek Kolstad 1:05:31
See that's the best. That's what I want, you know. And in fact, I had people on Facebook who were like, in their late 70s, early 80s friends of my grandmother, who hadn't seen an R rated movies since maybe the Godfather. They went to see it sparked me there just like that I really enjoyed that.

Dave Bullis 1:05:49
He gigs, I mean that there's a couple things in john wick. Like I said, people if you're listening to this troja job was gonna dig into it. But just you know, real quick, I know, you have to go. But when john wick he was going through the nightclub, and he's all action scene, and we're following the whole time. And it's just everything about that we're just all came together beautifully. And I was like, and I was like, Damn, that's a really good action scene right there.

Derek Kolstad 1:06:11
Yeah, it was fun is, you know, Chad and Dave, their background is, you know, his his stunt direction and that kind of stuff. But what I loved about working with them. And what I love about where he would have now is a lot of the action beats I wrote into the script are on the screen, like to see that john shoots the guy's foot aliens for and shoots his head. And like that was in the screenplay. And so I know for a lot of like the Marvel movies or the bigger properties. They say john wick fights 15 guys, like in the script, they gave me the opportunity to help them along the action, action wise. And what I love about their directing style is there's no quick cuts, they're doing all these moves, they're landing all of these blows. And it's it's kind of like an ode to the kung fu I grew up with, you know, and we had fun with it then and we're gonna have a blast with it when the next

Dave Bullis 1:07:05
is there a rough date for the release date for the next one? Not, not, not

Derek Kolstad 1:07:09
really. Lionsgate really wants one there. They're talking with various people in Cannes right now. So we could shoot in the fall, or we could shoot in the spring. The Lions Gate has been very, very generous. I mean, it's very rare to be in a place where you have a greenlit movie, you know, and it's greenlit, and they're like, the sooner the better. And yet they want to massage this into a franchise and Kanno who's, you know, implicit in all of this is very careful to do so as well.

Dave Bullis 1:07:40
And that's absolutely phenomenal. And you know, Derek, I want to say congratulations on all your success. He's you know, you've definitely earned it. And you know, I wish you nothing but the best with you know, john with two and hopefully john wick three and you know, all the other future products you have.

Derek Kolstad 1:07:54
Thanks a lot, man. I enjoyed talking to you.

Dave Bullis 1:07:56
Oh, my pleasure, man. Anytime we get talking about like movies like anyone who's seen man skeeto or were killed dozer or future or you see rubber. Yes, I did see rubber Yes.

Derek Kolstad 1:08:11
That you know,

Dave Bullis 1:08:11
if you ever really want to punish yourself, and this goes for finale, you Derek or anyone listening? If you want to see the worst film that I've ever seen, I know exactly what it is. And it's called Nuki. What Nuki it's NUK ie, it's a movie about two aliens that crash land in Africa. And it is it was supposed to be like a kid's movie like a ripoff of et. And it is so odd and bad and boring and dead. It's It's It's hailed as you know, they usually have the worst movies ever made. They usually put plan nine on but plan nine is actually entertaining. This is just bad. So so if you ever and I'll link to in the show notes too, if anybody actually wants to venture out to see Nuki but it is absolutely barn on the worst movie I've ever seen in my life.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:01
Obviously, martyrs, martyrs No, that is one of the most disturbing horror movies I've ever seen. So

Dave Bullis 1:09:07
okay, I'll make I'm making a note of that.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:09
That and three extremes is awesome.

Dave Bullis 1:09:12
Yeah, I've seen extreme extremes.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:14
Yeah. And go for hours, man.

Dave Bullis 1:09:17
Yeah, seriously. I mean, we could always be talking I mean, that's a that's what helped me fight you know, find somebody like yourself, who just says seen all these random movies that I've seen. And I'm gonna check out that movie Casablanca you mentioned I

Derek Kolstad 1:09:30
don't Hey, when you're out, man, give me a shout, dude.

Dave Bullis 1:09:35
We'll do Derek.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:42
I don't do Twitter anything.

Dave Bullis 1:09:44
Okay.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:46
I just I just a private guy, man.

Dave Bullis 1:09:50
Cool. And, you know, everybody can find me at Dave bulls.com. You can you can find you can find me I'm a I try to be private but I got way too much social stuff going on. You don't even need channels. Um, but actually, Derek, I want to say thanks again for coming on. And please, anytime want to come back, just let me know.

Derek Kolstad 1:10:08
Sure. Thanks. Good luck, man.

Alex Ferrari 1:10:10
Like I said, that was an awesome, awesome interview. Derek. I'm a huge fan of Derek and I'm a huge fan of the john wick franchise. So if you do want to get more episodes by Dave Bullis on the make your movie podcast, just head over to eye f h podcast network.com. And check out all of the other amazing podcasts that we have in the network that is focused on filmmaking, film history, analysis, and screenwriting. And if you want to take a deeper dive into the mind of screenwriters, definitely check out our new podcast inside the screenwriters mind, which is an archive of all the best screen writer interviews that the IFH Podcast Network has, and you can check that out at screenwritersmind.com. Thank you guys for listening. Next week, we will be back to our regularly scheduled program, and I got some amazing new stuff coming for you in the coming weeks. Thanks again for listening guys. As always, keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.


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Tim Burton Scripts Collection: Screenplays Download

Before you see Tim Burton’s Dumbo take a listen to the legendary director as he discusses his screenwriting and filmmaking process here. Afterward, you can download Tim Burton Film’s Screenplay collection and learn how the masterworks from page to screen.

When you are done reading take a listen to Apple’s #1 Screenwriting Podcast The Bulletproof Screenwriting Podcast, with guest like Oscar Winner Eric Roth, James V. HartDavid ChaseJohn AugustOliver Stone and more.


Watch Tim Burton’s short films Vincent And Frankenweenie and Hansel And Gretel.

(NOTE: For educational and research purposes only).

PEE-WEE’S BIG ADVENTURE (1985)

Screenplay by Phil Hartman and Paul Reubens – Read the transcript!

BEETLEJUICE (1988)

Story by Michael McDowell, and Larry Wilson; Screenplay by Michael McDowell and Warren Skaaren  – Read the screenplay!

BATMAN (1989)

Story by Bob Kane and Sam Hamm; Screenplay by Sam Hamm and Warren Skaaren – Read the screenplay!

EDWARD SCISSORHANDS (1990)

Story by Tim Burton and Caroline Thompson; Screenplay by Caroline Thompson – Read the transcript!!

BATMAN RETURNS (1992)

Story by Bob Kane (characters), Daniel Waters, and Sam Hamm; Screenplay by Daniel Waters – Read the screenplay!

ED WOOD (1994)

Book by Rudolph Grey; Written by Scott Alexander and Larry Karaszewski – Read the screenplay!

Tim Burton: The Master of Odd

Tim Burtonis one of the most talented film directors, film producers, artists and writers who live on this planet. He can be considered as a perfect example of a combination of innovativeness and talent. Tim Burton has been blessed by nature for his excellent imaginativeness. He also possesses excellent drawing skills. The painting was the hobby of Tim Burton during his childhood. When he grew old, he converted his hobby into his career.

As soon as Tim Burton completed his graduation, he started working in the Walt Disney Studiosas an apprentice animator. The experience he got while working created a tremendous impact on his future as well. In fact, this experience helped him to make his mark as a poet, writer, producer, director, and a stop motion artist. He has also contributed a lot to the success of the American film industry.

Tim Burton has contributed towards the American film industry for four decades. He was the person to come up with fantasy, quirky horror, and macabre, gothic and dark movies. That’s why he is known as one of the most innovative film producers in the history of the United States. His influences can even be seen in movies that are produced by other directors.

According to the statistics of Tim Burton, he has produced 12 films and directed 16 films. Few of these movies have achieved super success. Batman, Batman Returns, Pee-wee’s Big Adventure, Planet of the Apes, Alice in Wonderland andCharlie and the Chocolate Factoryare few examples to prove the above-mentioned fact.

At the Beginning of the Rabbit Hole

Tim Burton was born in Burbank city to Bill Burton and Jean Burton. His father was working for the Recreation Department of the Burbank Park and was a former baseball player. The mother of Tim Burton was the owner of a cat-themed gift shop in the area. Therefore, he did not get the opportunity to have the most luxurious childhood.

“I started to do stop-motion when I was a kid. You take a Super 8 and make some models, and move, click, move, click. All that. I love all forms of animation, but there is something unique and special to stop-motion: it’s more real and the set is lit like a set. But I think it’s also a kind of lonely and dark thing to want to do.”

Tim Burton attended Burbank High School for his primary education. He was just an average student at school. He paid more attention towards drawing and painting instead of focusing on his studies. He also enjoyed watching movies throughout his childhood.

When Tim Burton turned 12, he made his first step in filmmaking. In fact, he started shooting short movies with the help of crude stop motion techniques. He was able to make his first ever movie when he was 13. This movie was named as The Island of Doctor Agnor.

As mentioned earlier, Tim Burton enrolled in a course in character animation at the California Institute of Arts. He didn’t give up his passion for making movies even he was studying at the university. In fact, he made movies like “King and Octopus” and “Stalk of the Celery Monster” while he was studying at the university. He obtained his graduation in 1979 and started working in the Walt Disney Studios.

Finding Love on Set

Tim Burton got married to a German-born artist named Lena Gieseke. However, the marriage in between them ended after 4 years. After that, Tim Burton decided to live with an actress and model named Lisa Marie. Later he developed a relationship with an actress named Helena Carter. Tim met Helena when he was working on the movie Planet of the Apes. Tim Burton and Bonham Carter have 2 children, a daughter named Nell and a son named Billy.

“Things that I grew up with stay with me. You start a certain way, and then you spend your whole life trying to find a certain simplicity that you had. It’s less about staying in childhood than keeping a certain spirit of seeing things in a different way.”

How Tim Changed the Film Biz

Tim Burton has contributed a lot to the American film industry. Even though he had a very short stay at the Walt Disney Studios, he was able to learn a lot, which created an impact on his entire career.

During this short stay, he created a short film named Vincent. It was even showcased at the Chicago Film Festival. It became a successful one and he was able to win many awards for it. Before leaving Disney, Tim Burton created his first ever live action movie as well. It was titled as Hansel and Gretel.

The success that Tim Burton experienced from his first two short movies motivated him to give life to many other productions. This made him create the movie titled Pee Wee’s Big Adventure, which became popular in every corner of the world.

The success of this movie opened many new doors for him. In fact, it created an ideal platform for him to make movies such as Batmanand Beetlejuice. These two movies helped Tim Burton to establish his reputation as a successful director. The movie Batman even became a box office hit at that time. The success of Batman made him come up with Batman Returns after a couple of years. It also became a box office hit within a short period of time.

“I have a problem when people say something’s real or not real, or normal or abnormal. The meaning of those words for me is very personal and subjective. I’ve always been confused and never had a clearcut understanding of the meaning of those kinds of words.”

The year 1993 was a special one for Tim Burton. That’s because he produced the movie The Nightmare before Christmas, which was an animated musical. This was a new concept to the world at that time and it helped him to impress people in all parts of the world. As a result, he got the opportunity to gain a massive critical and commercial success.

In the following year, he produced two more movies named as Ed Woodand Cabin Boy. However, these two movies didn’t get popular as the previous ones. In the meantime, he was making plans to produce the next Batman movie, which was titled as Batman Forever.

Like the previous Batman movies, it became a box office hit and was able to earn more than $336 million. He came up with few more films such as The Legend of Sleepy Hollow, Superman Lives andMars Attacks during the 1990s.

Tim Burton gave life to Planet of the Apesin the new millennium. Even though this movie received mixed responses from people, it was a huge commercial success. Charlie and the Chocolate Factorywas his next hit and it was released in 2005. This movie was also able to win many awards including the best costume design award.

In 2010, Tim Burton came up with another box office hit, which was titled as Alice in Wonderland. This movie was able to win 2 Academy Awardsfor the Best Costume Design and Best Art Direction. This movie was followed by Dark Shadows, which received mixed comments from the audiences.

Burton was working as a co-producer in the movie Abraham Lincoln – Vampire Hunter, which was released back in 2012. This movie also received mixed comments from the audiences because of the performance by actors and their plot. In this year, decided to remake the feature length stop motion film that he produced back in 1984 as well. It gave life to the movie Frankenweenie.

These are few of the most notable contributions of Tim Burton. He has made plans to come up with many other movies in the future. Deep, Monsterpocalypse andBig Eyesare to name a few. He is also working along with the world famous novelist Seth Graham Smith in order to come up with a new movie.

The Batman movie series created a tremendous impact on the entire career of Tim Burton. He had the unique ability of producing movies under a very tight budget. This ability of him impressed the studio executives. As a result, they motivated him to come up with the movie Batman.

It was a low budget movie, even though it doesn’t look like a one. Due to the tight budget, Tim Burton was clashing constantly with the other producers of the movie. However, he wanted to make this movie a box office hit and his commitment created a positive impact on the success of the movie.

This is the main reason why he took the initiative to create the other movies in the Batman series. All the other movies were low budget ones as well. He had a clear understanding on how to manage the available resources and get the best out of them.

Awards for the Unique Artist

Tim Burton has received many awards and achievements in his life. In 2007, he was awarded with the Golden Lion for Lifetime Achievement at the Venice International Film Festival.

He also worked as the President of the Jury for the 63rdCannes film festival, which was held back in 2010. Back in 2008, Tim Burton was awarded with the Scream Immortal Award for his innovative and unique interpretation of fantasy and horror.

In fact, he took the initiative to introduce a brand new sub-genre to the world with it. Tim Burton was able to receive insignia of Chevalier of Arts from the Cultural Minister of Mitterrand.

These are some of the most notable achievements that Tim Burton received during his four decades long career in the movie industry. Apart from these awards, he received many other awards including the National Board of Review Awards, Golden Globe Awards, Producers Guild of America Awards and the Emmy Award.

His latest film Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Children opens this Friday.

Based on the best-selling novel, comes this truly magical adventure. When Jake unravels a mystery that spans alternate realities, he uncovers a secret world for “peculiar children” with supernatural powers. But Jake soon realizes that danger is everywhere and he must determine who can be trusted and unmask his own true identity.

BPS 091: How to Use the Monomyth in Your Screenplays with Chris Vogler

Today on the show we bring the legendary story analyst and best-selling author Chris Vogler. Chris wrote the game-changing book  The Writers Journey: Mythic Structure for WritersI read this book over 25 years ago and it changed the way I look at “story.” Chris studied the work and principles of the late master Joseph Campbell. His book The Hero with a Thousand Faces was the basis for Star Wars as well as almost every other Hollywood feature film in the past 60 years using what Campbell called the monomyth.

What Chris Vogler did so well is that he translated Campbell’s work and applied it to movies. The Writer’s Journey explores the powerful relationship between mythology and storytelling in a clear, concise style that’s made it required reading for movie executives, screenwriters, playwrights, scholars, and fans of pop culture all over the world. He has influenced the screenplays of movies from THE LION KING to FIGHT CLUB to BLACK SWAN to NOAH.

“I teach sometimes, and always say that Chris Vogler is the first book that everyone’s got to read.” — Darren Aronofsky , Oscar-nominated Screenwriter/Director, Noah, Black Swan, The Wrestler

Many filmmakers and screenwriters believe that the hero’s journey or monomyth is out of date and doesn’t work on today’s savvy audience. Nothing could be farther than the truth. The hero’s journey is the meat and potatoes that all storytellers need to understand. Elements from the monomyth is in every story ever written. As screenwriters, you need to study and understand the monomyth then use it as you wish in your story. Take a look below at some of the monomyth’s character archetypes.

Chris’s ground-breaking book is celebrating its 25-year anniversary so someone is reading it. Enjoy my conversation with Chris Vogler.

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Alex Ferrari 0:48
I'd like to welcome back to the show returning champion, the legendary Chris Vogler. How you doing, Chris?

Chris Vogler 3:51
I'm doing very well. Thank you.

Alex Ferrari 3:53
Thank you so much for coming back. You know, last time you were on the show, which was about three years ago, I think at this point. You know, I said to you many times, then, and I'll say it again, when I picked up the writers journey, as a young screenwriter, filmmaker, it, it completely changed my life. And it was it was my gateway drug into Campbell, in general, which I'm sure you hear 1000 times. It was my gateway drug. And it really, really just changed the way I looked at storytelling. And it is a it is a foundation that every screenwriter and storyteller should know whether they use it specifically or not, whether it applies to every single story or not. It is definitely the it's definitely the one of the building blocks of a good story. So I am a huge fan. And now you are you're back because you just did you're just releasing the 25th year edition, the anniversary edition of the writers journey. And we're going to talk a little bit about the book, the updates. how the how the hero's journey has changed. It's changed at all over the years, and so on. So for people who don't know who you are, can you tell us a little bit about you and the book?

Chris Vogler 5:10
Yes, I made a career for myself in Hollywood as what they call a story analyst at first, reading scripts, and writing reports evaluating not just scripts, but every kind of literary property, even down to cartoons, comic books, epic poems from the ancient past. I mean, you have an army of people like me, in every studio, who are evaluating the material. So this was how I sort of cut my teeth, and got a lot of examples under my belt to compare to this Hero's Journey idea that I had come up with in film school at USC. You know, as a kid, I was absolutely transfixed by movies and certain TV shows, and I just wanted to pull the screen apart and claim in there, you know, I had this desire to be part of it. Growing up in the Midwest, it was a remote possibility for me, as a farm boy from Missouri, but I found my way there and got involved in the studios, and was lucky. To find an answer to my question, I came on a quest to figure out the unwritten rules of screenwriting. I knew there had to be some principles, what we would now call algorithms for how do you decide what to put in what to leave out what to emphasize how to blend all this together, I was looking for that system. And there wasn't anything there were very few screenwriting books at that time. And I was lucky to find it in the work of this man, Joseph Campbell, who was a big influence on Star Wars, and George Lucas and many other films and books since then. And it just hit exactly the right note for me at the right time, when the first Star Wars movie came out. So I had the collision of those two things in my brain. Here's Joseph Campbell's ideas about this ancient form from the theology. And here's a modern cutting edge technology, entertainment that's making use of all that stuff. So the two things slap together in my head at the right moment. And then I had a long period of time, working for the studios to test it out on 1000s, literally 1000s and 1000s. of examples and found it to be really a lifesaver. I don't know how I would have done that job without some orientation, about what makes the story interesting and gripping to an audience. And how does it hook you and all these other things that you get from looking at mythology?

Alex Ferrari 8:00
The Great and then and I remember there was a memo that a very famous memo that kind of brought you to the the forefront when you were working over at Disney, if I'm not mistaken, correct?

Chris Vogler 8:11
Yeah, that's right. I started at Fox worked there for a couple of years and then switched over to Disney. And I've been working there for a while just doing the routine job, but I was getting a little bit more attention within the company and a little bit more responsibility, because they knew I was good at pop culture, things like comic books. I was good at General research so they could throw things at me. And I could respond quickly and give them an answer. I was like Google before there was Google. But we were in a culture at the studio at that time, where memos were were big, and they were being very well written by the head of production at that time, Jeffrey Katzenberg, he would just throw down a memo, and it would like shake everybody up and give it a completely different perspective on how we were going to operate. So I turned this idea from Campbell into a nice tight little seven, eight page memo that I sent around the studio with an intention and I think this was important. I intended for that thing to work like nanobots, like little robots that would go and spread my message around and get people talking about this Hero's Journey idea, which I thought was it's not theoretical, it's not academic, really. It's practical and useful. And like right now, we can put this to work on commercial films, and not just adventure films and fantasy films, but it worked for me for everything. So that memo, spread around Hollywood very quickly, it went viral. Again before the technology that we don't have This was faxes and Xerox machines, but it's spread all over. And I got feedback right away from people saying, Oh, it was mentioned at the top meeting at Paramount the other day, or somebody over at Sony said, Hey, have you read this memo? So it became the flavor of the month for a while. And I watched to see, is that gonna last? Or will it be a flash in the pan, and it ended up sticking? You know, it was something that made sense. It was simple, it was clear. And the memo did its job. And then eventually, I added to it. But part of the legend and this is about branding yourself, which I think everybody has to do you have to think this way. How do you distinguish your work from all the other people who are doing similar things? My brand was I am associated with this material, Campbell, Lucas, Star Wars, Disney. Eventually, I worked on the Lion King because of it. But part of the branding legend is the true fact that the memo was plagiarized. Almost immediately, some executive at Disney tore the cover sheet off with my name on it, and put his own cover on it with his name and submitted it to the highest levels of the company. And there was a big thing about oh, my gosh, this is an amazing system.

Alex Ferrari 11:23
But you couldn't get away with that. I mean, like everybody else in town saw that it was yours like,

Chris Vogler 11:28
Well, this was the value of spreading it because I had salted it around so thoroughly that as soon as it came up in the meeting, people they left the meeting and immediately started calling me and saying, hey, this guy's taking credit for your work. So I did something that was way out of character for me, because as a reader, you're generally passive. And you sort of operate on a doggie door approach where you they slide the script through the door, and you slide the report back again, like a

Alex Ferrari 11:57
like a prison, sir, like a prison.

Chris Vogler 12:01
You never see them, except maybe the tips of their shoes, you know, you don't really deal with the brass. But I stepped out of that just a little bit. And I wrote a letter directly to Katzenberg over the heads of many department chiefs in between. I jumped the the track there. And to my amazement, he responded immediately, he said, I know what happened, I got it. I see you're the guy who wrote this, and I have something for you. Because I had asked, I said, I want something I want more. If you think this is good, I've got plenty more. And I want deeper involvement in the company. And he said, Yes, I see that. And I think where you belong is over with the animation guys, because they were just ramping up. They had done. They were working on Aladdin and on Beauty and the Beast and so forth. And they threw me in on Lion King,

Alex Ferrari 12:59
which is not a bad, not a bad film to get thrown in.

Chris Vogler 13:01
That's right, although nobody knew that at the time, was kind of amusing thing. They, we really thought of ourselves as the B team, you know, because the bigger productions we thought were, you know, further along, and we were just this little experimental thing that was something something a little bit different. In part because it was based on no pre existing thing. It was an original creation and almost everything Disney does is based on some legend or myth, although there were things in it like a little bit of Hamlet, a little bit of Bambi that gave it some some support. Right. And

Alex Ferrari 13:45
I have to I have to ask you there was that one Japanese animation movie that everyone brings up with Lion King is that I mean, you were there. Is that real? Like I don't know if you could say it over the over the mouse come and get you

Chris Vogler 13:56
know, I don't think anybody's going to police me about it. I was not aware of that myself. But I did hear the animators talking about it saying isn't it This was their take was isn't it an interesting coincidence that we picked up this thread of lions in Africa we started working on it and we ended up developing something you could put the two things side but yeah, oh yeah. There's Kimbo here Simba. And you know that there were there were there were these similarities. And animators love this. they they they love paying homage. They say to other filmmakers, they put in jokes and references. I worked on a Japanese style comic book a manga comic book and I was just amazed by how many times they inserted salutes really to other artists and other other comic books. So it was just part of the culture there but I I don't feel I didn't see any signs. Got deliberately you know, ripping anybody off but that's not a matter for us it's for the courts to decide.

Alex Ferrari 15:07
Exactly, exactly now so we you you jumped in at Lion King and I think this is during the the Renaissance Katzenberg brought in the renaissance of the animation Renaissance because Disney animation was pretty much in the doghouse for for a while it has been a long time since any majorly hit big hit and come out and I think it started with little mermaid and then jumped to the beauty the piece was a monster hit then Aladdin came out and I think was a lot of before a lot almost before Lion King, right? Yeah,

Chris Vogler 15:36
there was Yes. Right.

So but then Lion King exploded. And then I think that was the peak of that Renaissance. And then there was still a lot of good movies after that as well. A lot of if you go back to Disney Animation, you can apply the hero's journey to it and you can apply the hero's journey to a lot of movies pre Star Wars. Sure. How do you how do you like how is that no one really was taking the the hero's journey blueprint and going okay, this is how I write the screenplay. But yet when you go back to Casa Blanca, and you go back to Citizen Kane, you go back to Hitchcock films, there are Hero's Journey elements in those How is it just because it's literally programmed inside of our DNA?

Yeah, I think it is. I think it's hardwired. It's baked into the human nervous system. This is what Campbell said. He said that we are wired to respond to certain scenes and images and ideas. And we respond in the organs of our body unconsciously they just respond. When you see a fireman carrying somebody out of a fire, or a mother holding a baby cradling the baby in a triangular composition, like those Virgin Mary things and ISIS holding the baby in the Egyptian mythology, you just go off you respond, you see an animal with big eyes looking up at you, you go off you just you can't help these physiological

Alex Ferrari 17:07
Yeah, I mean, you look at you look at boots and track, and then you just go, you just gotta go. It's like, it's like, it's a feeling inside. You can't even if your heart is a rock, you go inside. That's cute.

Chris Vogler 17:19
You know, I thought it was it was brilliant, really, that they they may use it at all that cat does is turn and look at you in the eyes get huge. And you got you can't you whatever he's just done, you forgive him. It's

Alex Ferrari 17:31
so so Campbell is tapping into these images. And these kind of scenarios that are hardwired, like you said, If someone's saving somebody else, you're going to feel something in real life, or in a film or in a story. If someone if someone kicks the dog that is a specific field. Like if you're hurting an animal, if you're hurting a child, if you're hurting someone that's weaker than you instinctively in our core, we we generally feel the same. We all feel it, unless you're a bully too. And you go, hey, that's great that you kick the dog. But generally speaking, normal human beings have those innate feelings. And I think what you're saying in the writers journey, as well as what Joseph Campbell was saying is that if you can tap into those images, that kind of storytelling and incorporate it in your, in your films in your scripts, you're just tapping into something that is universal?

Chris Vogler 18:29
Yes, I think, you know, the answer to your general question here has to do also, with levels of consciousness. I think that the hero's journey was present and operative in filmmakers and storytellers from the very beginning. I mean, you go back to the Odyssey, and to Gilgamesh and you know, the earliest things written are gonna you can open them up and you find there's that this, that and the other element of the hero's journey, but people were not openly conscious of. And I think that's the difference of the time we're living in that because partly, my book and Campbell and the notoriety and notice that those things have gotten has moved these patterns up into consciousness a little bit more. So that even the audience is aware of them as meta patterns. And they kind of have, what's turned out is that people have a certain pleasure in finding them. And going Oh, yeah, I know that that's the thing they did in Star Wars, that that's the thing they did in Superman. And there it is, again, that people like to spot those patterns. So all of that even the language of it has come up more into consciousness. And for me, that's actually a bit of a danger, because I don't want it to be completely conscious. I don't want the audience. Oh, yeah. Step 13. Oh, yeah, yes, there. There's the blah, blah, I don't want them thinking that and I don't even want that, when I'm watching something. I mean, I get a certain workman's pleasure in identifying step 123. And you know, saying, oh, they're three minutes late, on revealing something. But what's really fun for me is going to the movies and having no idea what's going to happen next. And not knowing what's happening internally to my organs in my body. Just just responding is wonderful. And then I might go back later, and analyze it, but I like to be just swept away by a story that's unpredictable. And, you know, looks maybe looks rough when you analyze it by these standards, but, but it's still it still can sink to you,

Alex Ferrari 20:52
isn't it? I mean, it's so much tougher to be a writer today than it was five years ago, or 10 years ago, or 20 years ago, or 50 years ago, because the audiences are so much more educated in the process. I mean, I mean, in the 80s, when I was when I was coming up, you know, when I was working in my video store, you know, I couldn't find behind the scenes of movies, there was no DVD extras, there was no YouTube, there was nothing. So the information about the filmmaking process, let alone the storytelling process was there was just nothing there. But now, you could just go on YouTube and find 1000 different, you know, people talking about the hero's journey, or the or multiple different storytelling techniques and things like that people have become so much more educated about the process, you know, how do you how do you suggest screenwriters working within that world? Because it is so much more difficult to do it? I mean, my feeling is that if you can execute the hero's journey perfectly, really well, it doesn't matter. That's my feeling. I don't know. What do you think?

Chris Vogler 22:06
Yeah, well, I think the key to all of this is to be aware that the audience does know a lot, they are very well educated, as you say. But you can still work with that. And sometimes set them up, you know, okay, I'm going to show you, here's a wizard, alright, and the wizard is nice. And he or she is going to help the hero. And they're going to give the here all this is doctrine, according to the hero's journey, and then reveal, not what you thought, the this person who seems to be helpful is actually working for the bad guy is trying to undermine the hero, jealous of the hero, you know, some other unexpected twists so that it's always new again. And this is what I tell people is you are obligated as a filmmaker to know this set of instructions or patterns. This and many others, this is not the only one. And I, in my own work, I don't exclusively use the hero's journey. There's lots of other ways to do this. But you know, to know the patterns, and then deliberately break them somehow do something unexpected, do something that that jumps out of the pattern, like, you know, in referring to the mentor figures that I'm talking about. The pattern sort of predicts that somewhere in the first act, one of these figures is going to show up, reassure the hero when he or she is afraid, give them something that helps them and then they're wheeled off. And that's the end of it. But what if there isn't any figure like that, and the hero is completely on his or her own. And they have to go to internal sources. That's a different kind of dynamic. And it leaves a hole sometimes that's one of the key ways to make this fresh and alive again, I think, is to leave some gaps. And there's a wonderful thing that I see filmmakers doing which I'm very interested in this, which is sort of narrative compression. Where they take it for granted the audience is quick and they can catch up and you can throw stuff in a series you can start and I've seen this on shits Creek for example, shits Creek will sometimes start bang deep in the middle of something and you go did I miss an episode because now they're talking about the baby. The parents are just making this up. But maybe the parents are talking about getting a divorce and it starts with the son and daughter going, Oh, I'm really worried mom and dad are talking about getting a divorce. And you go What? I didn't see that. Did I miss an episode and then you realize no They're, they're trusting you as an audience that you can catch up. And you can imagine those scenes that they left out. And I think that's a healthy way to approach things is to kind of push to the edge of what the audience can keep up with, and throw them some curveballs.

Alex Ferrari 25:21
Now, do you I this is my feeling. I love to hear what you think that the reason why the hero's journey has been so long lasting in our existence, I mean, it's going back to is as the oldest stories ever written, or recorded. It is basically an analogy for our own lives. It is, you know, we are all on our hero's journey. We are always the, you know, everyone, no matter if you're the good guy or the bad guy, You are the hero of your own journey. I always like people like, Hitler didn't wake up thinking that he was the craziest madman in the world. He thought he was good. He thought he was the hero. So everyone has a perspective. So we're all heroes in our own journey. And there are the tricksters, the mentors, the the all these character archetypes that come into our lives and and and there are obstacles, and we have our own dragons, and we have our own things, sometimes internal sometimes external, all these things is that do you think the reason why the hero's journey has lasted? in our, in our existence for so long?

Chris Vogler 26:25
Yeah, I think so I think that it's a useful metaphor, it's one way to look at it is it's a kind of a lens that allows us to look at somebody else's situation, but read it back as reflective of us. And I think this is a real deep thing, that people are looking for themselves in their entertainment, they want to see something that in some sense, is about me, because people are profoundly self centered, and they want to take in everything around them. You know, somebody walks into a room and they're dressed a certain way, you can't help it, you compare yourself to them, Oh, she has better shoes than I do, oh, they just got their haircut, oh, they have a nice bag, oh, there, you know, you, you measure all this stuff. And you just do it unconsciously did that. It's like a mathematical formula that runs through your head. So we compare our behavior to that of other people. And what I've observed is if you are not hooked up to those characters, in some way, either they're like me, or their plight is something I can relate to, or they desperately want something as I desperately want things, then I just check it out. And I back away, almost literally back away from the screen. You know, I've learned a lot from watching audiences and how, when they're involved in the picture, they're more or less absolutely still, and they're leaning forward. And if they are bored and detached, they start shifting around and they back away. So you know, I think this is part of the The key is to give people things in the characters that you want us to relate to, that a lot of people can identify with that they are victims of misfortune, undeserved, that they are striving for something wanting something. A good example is there's this new show just just coming out, called Emily in Paris.

Alex Ferrari 28:34
Yeah, heard about that. I haven't seen it yet.

Chris Vogler 28:37
And it's a beautiful show. It's lush, it's gorgeous. It's you know, superficial, beautiful salute to Paris, and, you know, young ambition, so forth. But in every show, every new show that that I look at, I'm trying to decide, am I in this for the long run? Or am I gonna let it go after one or two episodes. And with that one, I had very little impulse to continue, because they didn't do one essential thing in the first episode, which is telling me what that character wants. And you know, she didn't want anything. She was given a trip to Paris, and she never expressed a desire to travel, a desire to go to Paris, a desire to, you know, we never saw her ambition to rise in the company. She just was like, flooded with these gifts from heaven and his walking around in about about Paris. And you could guess that she had the general desire every young person to succeed or to have an adventure, but if she never said it wasn't expressed nobody around her said it. So I found myself not not really involved. So I think this this is, you know, important to let people know what what does the character want, as soon as I know what They want, I want it for them. And I have now almost merged my personality with theirs. Even if it's a villain, and the villain is trying to undermine society, I'm kind of going Oh, he, he almost lost this chance to undermine society. You know, you automatically plugged in.

Alex Ferrari 30:20
Now, in a lot of the a lot of the concepts that you talk about in the writers journey, and Campbell talks about the hero's journey are very, you know, broad, meaning that the hero, like let's take, you know, you identify with Luke Skywalker, because you know, all the things that Luke Skywalker wants to do and things like that. So it basically appeals to a very broad audience. In today's world where that works wonderfully for a studio film, but not as much for independent films or smaller projects, how can you apply the writers journey into a niche, so like, you were saying, I want I want to see myself in it. So I, in my book, I talked about the power of the niche in, let's say, instead of making a romantic comedy, so which is just about generally to people like the general feeling of falling in love or not, you know, losing love all that stuff, I say, use the vegan make a vegan chef, a romantic comedy, where a vegan chef falls in love with a barbecue pit champion. And, and now we can target that movie to a much more powerful, deep, deep and focused audience, as an independent filmmaker can as opposed to abroad because as abroad, I can't, I can't, as a filmmaker, independent filmmaker with a 345 million dollar budget, unless I have some major stars, and even the major stars is gonna be very difficult. So as a storytelling element, how can you apply the writers journey into more of a niche model? And do you suggest what I do agree with what I just said?

Chris Vogler 31:57
Yeah, I do, I think that that's actually a growth area, carving off, maybe increasingly smaller slices of life. And, you know, I think, always continuing to lift the cover off things and look deeper into corners of society we haven't looked at before, so that itself has a value. But then there is the general human condition. And that's where general and and these Hero's Journey things do come into play. Because as different as people are, they are driven by, you know, the same list of, of drives and needs, no matter what their conditions are. So there's, there's a pleasure I think the audience has, in going, I'm gonna educate myself about a new walk of life. I don't know anything about we're watching Ricky Gervais show, I think it's called Second Life where, where he is a guy whose wife has died, and he basically is suicidal. But he just says, I'm going to do whatever I want. Because what difference does it make, and we're watching on two levels. One is the general problem, anybody losing someone they love. And then on the specifics, he's opening the door into this little town in England, that has all these different levels of society that you get to see and it's so enlightening, I just feel educated in a painless way, about the way other people live. This is a lot of the appeal of literature throughout time, of course, it's that it gives you that vicarious experiences somebody else was running because the basics are still there.

Alex Ferrari 33:58
So with so I want to talk a little bit about the, the concept of the niche and kind of starting to, to go a little bit deeper in that world. Because, you know, when you do a, when you're a writer, you you you have an audience you're trying to go after, generally speaking, so even Star Wars is going after a sci fi audience. It did. transparent, it did grow out of that and turned into a broad market, like everybody watched Star Wars at the time it came out. Obviously, if Star Wars shows up today, it wouldn't even see the light of day really, no one would really care because it's Star Wars already presented. It's that that that whole introduction into the world, it is definitely a movie of its time. It's time and its place. And that's why it exploded the way it did. But moving forward with as a writer, as a screenwriter, the different genres that you write, focusing on a niche that eventually has those common elements like my romantic comedy, there's love lost love you Romeo and Juliet, all of that stuff. But with the way the world is going, which now is becoming much more curated, where before it wasn't curated, like HBO was HBO. But now HBO has a flavor to it. Disney plus has a flavor to it, Hulu has a flavor to it. And before all these companies were trying to maybe even be more broad for everybody, but now they're just like, that's not where the money is, the money is less specialized in this world. So as writers as screenwriters again, I think we think we're saying the same thing, working within the the more curated niche worlds, but, but keep those elements that are universal in there. But if you're focusing as a writer on a universal, broad topic, it's going to be a difficult sell. Would you agree? Yes,

Chris Vogler 35:56
yeah, I think things have to be specific, you know, this is something I've confronted a lot because I work sometimes in very abstract thought forms. And and think about, you know, a big epic subject, for example, but or a fantasy, but it doesn't really land either to sell it or to present it to an audience, until you've narrowed it down to this takes place in Chattanooga, Mississippi, in 1952, you know, and you, you have to anchor it in something real. To to get that, that double residence of the big, general thing. And then the specific thing. So yeah, I think there's nothing new about this development, which is very interesting, what you've said about how these producers of content are developing personalities. And there's, as I say, nothing new about that, because this happened early in the studio,

Alex Ferrari 37:00
Warner Brothers films Disney film Warner

Chris Vogler 37:02
Brothers was it was distinct. You know, and, and down to detail, like the gunshots in a warner brothers film sound different. And you can spot a Warner's film from the 30s 40s 50s, because they were using the same gunshots, the same pieces of tape. And, you know, it was distinct, and they were appealing to people who liked bubbly musicals and gritty stories of crime in the streets, that sort of thing. And then they got into, okay, Errol Flynn, and we could do these swashbucklers, they developed that whole site, and then other studios were doing other things. So and I, I've always loved that, I've always loved the fact that the companies I worked for had personalities. And it it paid to know the personality of your studio, what was possible at Disney, what had been before Disney and what could be again, this, this was part of sort of the institutional knowledge that I tried to encourage, I sort of held myself up as a champion of the, the personality of that whatever studio I was working for, and I tried to find opportunities to, to feed that, in working at Fox or Paramount or whatever I was, I was always a curator, in a way, looking to, to find where that heartbeat was, and to feed it with, you know, more of that kind of content or expand on so

Alex Ferrari 38:51
it's, it's really interesting how the business is changing so, so dramatically now, and in that curation aspect of storytelling is, is a survival mechanism, I think because, I mean, did you just read that article that came out that Disney is reorganizing their entire company to focus on streaming? Oh, no.

Chris Vogler 39:09
Well, yes, actually, I do know what you're talking about. I mean, that was a buzz in the last couple of days. That Okay, we're gonna turn like that. And that's

Alex Ferrari 39:18
a huge that's that's a bomb going off in our business, because Disney is essentially the biggest studio in town. And for them to say, you know, theatrical thing is not where it's at, that we were going to start moving towards streaming, and why it makes all the sense in the world. And I agreed. We're getting a little off topic, but generally speaking, it was going to happen. We all knew this is where it's gonna go. It's just that COVID really amped everything up and sped everything up.

Chris Vogler 39:47
That's right. Yeah. Yeah. Yeah, it was it was that that odd accelerant that, like I say about developing this way. Communicating was something that was there and not appreciated for its value until we really needed it. And then all of a sudden, Oh, I'm so grateful that we already had zoom and all these other things. So I think same thing, same thing here that people have been talking about all these evolutions, but it wasn't necessary. Now the trigger is here, and people are going with it. And like wonder what will happen in the long run about, I don't think going to movies even going to drive it has come back a little bit. I don't think that's going to die. But it's not you, we're going to go back to a normal, but it won't be the same norm, there'll be a new normal, just like with COVID. And there will be experiences where you go to a theater, but it'll be different somehow.

Alex Ferrari 40:55
And now and and I'll end this conversation this this this topic, because we could I could talk for about another hour just on this. But I agree with you 100%. I don't think that movies will ever go away, the theatrical experience will never go away, just like Broadway is taken over plays. I mean, it won't go away, I think it will be a different experience, I think that it will never get back to 2019 levels just on the screens level. And on people going to the movies, again, it's going to take a while for this hangover, the COVID hangover, as I call it, because people are just, you're used to not going into a crowded room. I mean, it's it's gonna take a minute for your mind to kind of wrap yourself around going back to the theaters, and doing all of that but also the screens are going to be less regal, just shut down. I promise you, Amazon is probably going to buy AMC or regal all these all these big streamers are going to buy these theatrical components, and then start doing them in a completely different way. Because if you own the theater, and you own the content, well, that's a different business model than just selling popcorn. So and this is all first for screenwriters and for storytellers to understand what you're what you're doing as a story. As a storyteller, you need to understand where your movie your script is going to go. If you don't think about the audience, if you don't think about what Who are you trying to sell this to? at every level, from the point where you write the script? Who am I gonna? Am I selling this to a producer? Am I trying to sell it to a studio? And I try to sell to an independent filmmaker? Like who that and then from there going, Okay, now, who is the audience for this film? And I think that's where so many screenwriters fail is because they do they just write because I'm gonna write. But unlike a novel, which you could just put out, because you just want to write a screenplay is that blueprint that could be millions, if not hundreds of millions of dollars? blueprint. So there's a lot of pressure on that art. And if you don't really think it through, you're not going to make it Is that a fair statement?

Chris Vogler 42:50
Yes, I'm really big on this idea of having the audience, whether it be an agent, or the producer, or the actor, or ultimately, the audience itself. Having that in mind, and opening up a conversation with them, I think, is very important. It just makes me think about a time when, you know, before I got to film school, I was in the Air Force. And I made documentary films about the space program and so forth. And I wrote the script one time, and I showed it to one of the old editors. And he said, Well, you've got you've got some good information here. But you have to remember one thing, you've got to make it so simple that even the general can understand it.

Alex Ferrari 43:38
That's great.

Chris Vogler 43:40
You know, I knew I had to adjust to the ultimate audience for this, which was going to be some general in the Pentagon. And I had to make it clear enough. So it was communicating with him. You know, that's, that's, I'm very strong on that, that you really have to cultivate this sense. And I've always thought of myself, as an evaluator of material. As you know, I'm a specialist, and I've had my training and background and all of that. But basically, I'm just a movie goer. And I think I think of the way most, most audience members do. I know what I want to see and don't want to see. And I trusted that.

Alex Ferrari 44:25
Now there's a there's a section in your book I'd love to talk to you about because I'm not sure if it's a new or if it was in the last edition or not. But can we discuss the rules of polarity?

Chris Vogler 44:35
Yes, this is in the earlier editions as well. You know, this is a thing that became obvious to me in the very first week, I started reading scripts for the studios. They operate on a sink or swim basis, and they just hand you once they've read a sample of your work. They say okay, I think you can do this Here's seven scripts, come back on Friday and give us the reports. And I noticed right away on the first two or three scripts, that they were polarized, that every universe that the film writer was creating was divided into two camps, it would be the men and the women in a romantic comedy, it would be the upper levels of society, the lower levels, or the cops and the robbers or the Indians or the Calvary or some other oppositional frame would be created. And then it became a dynamic process where it seemed the filmmaker was presenting you with like a court case with the Okay, here's the arguments for it, here's the arguments against and then that somehow invites the audience to take aside or to evaluate, like an undecided voter, you know, like, I'll listen to all those arguments, I'll listen all those arguments, and then I'll make up my mind. And it seemed that it was an engine that drove the story forward, that the opposition of those two polarized forces really got the story, rolling and created this kind of tension, and made it made it have a heartbeat, like, tic Tock. And then I started thinking about more specific rules. And this was a little later as I worked at Disney, and especially as we were getting scripts, intended for animation, where they would take an old fairy tale, and try to like Rumpelstiltskin, or something and turn it into a feature like 90 minute or so screenplay.

I started seeing that there were some rules about the polarity. And also, this comes from observing, especially the buddy comedies that we were doing a lot of at Disney on the live action site at that time, this was in the 80s and 90s. And those operated on a strict polarity, there would be one style of living of a cop from Detroit, who was of the streets I'm talking about Beverly Hills Cop. And, and he was rough and tumble and almost a criminal himself and irreverent. And then he'd be clash together with somebody who was the opposite who was at by the book, strict button down just as different as possible. So those two things clashing together, made an interesting dynamic, a lot of conflict and opportunity for comedy. But also there was a mechanism in it that I detected, which is that at some point, the polls would switch. And the person who was wild and crazy, would be forced to put on a disguise and look like he was buttoned down and clerical, and, you know, more West Point. And then the other guy who was rough who was by the book, would be forced to change clothes and be in the wild position. And they would experiment with that for a while, but then come back again, to their comfort zones. It's like, well, that's your basic nature, you're a wild man, and you're a buttoned down guy, but you've had a visit to the other side, and you aren't going to land right back where you started, you're going to come out somewhere a little closer to the middle, not smack in the middle, because that would be paralyzing. But a little closer to your opposite. So that you can experiment with it, you can take advantage of some of the good things about that other way of living. And yet, you're still close to your comfort zone. And if you get scared, you can run back there. So it served as a model. And then I found it validated by things that were happening in my own life in relationships of men and women marriages and things like that. I saw these the same forces at work. So I tried in the chapter to think almost like I was dealing with some force of nature, like magnetism or something. That magnetism has some rules and polarity is like that. You turn one of the magnets so that they're both negative poles, they're gonna fly apart. You turn it the other way. So it's negative to positive, they're stuck together. And polarity. And stories can work that way. Two people seem to hate each other at first, and then something shifts and now they're wildly attracted. Yeah, so fly apart again, but to come back together.

Alex Ferrari 49:48
Yeah, so like the bodyguard with Whitney Houston. And Kevin Costner has characters that that was a perfect example of them hating it or not wanting to be with you and then eventually coming together. So I remember stir crazy with Jim Wilder and Richard Pryor, 48 hours, lethal weapon, all of those have everything you're talking about.

Chris Vogler 50:05
Yeah. And it's funny because just mentioning the titles and this idea, it comes into your mind right away. And you can see the two sides, even on the poster, sometimes they're looking at nose to nose, you know, and just as different contrasting by casting, if nothing else, they, they carefully choose who's going to embody these opposites, that's automatically attracted. That's one of the rules of polarity is that if you put up two things that are the same, that has very little value, in attracting the eye, but if you put something it just did a piece of art in a drawing, if there's a heavily shaded area, and then one little area of light, you're attracted to that and you are interested in the contrast, so yeah, so

Alex Ferrari 50:54
so if lethal weapon was two white guys, it wouldn't be nearly two on a visual standpoint, as opposed to Danny Glover and and, and Mel Gibson. Yeah, just the guy remember the poet cuz I worked at the video store. So I remember that cover. So clearly, it just grabs your eye or 48 hours, Eddie Murphy and McNulty like to complete opposite looking gentlemen, bring you and they were also dressed differently and ones like, you know, funny, and the other one was like, you know, like, like you said, almost, literally, he was a prisoner. He was literally a criminal, and and mean, teamed up with a nose. no nonsense, not straight by the book, but just like a no nonsense cop. Yeah, the hated criminals. I mean, it's, it's really, but you're absolutely right, the more contrast you can create in the characters, visually, as well as thematically, it's more interesting of a story, if it would have been too if it would have been two criminals in 48 hours, if it would have been tuned technologies. Like Imagine if there were Danny Glover was suicidal, as well as Mel Gibson and lethal weapon. If they were both crazy man like that would that's that nobody wants to see that. It's like, well, they're just gonna die.

Chris Vogler 52:10
Well, this is actually what happens in this dynamic I'm talking about is that the naturally suicidal one, or the one who was suicidal to begin with? is shown in contrast, but then maybe the other one develops the one who is all Hey, Pepe for life and don't kill yourself. It's crazy. suddenly, something happens. And now they're both standing on the same base. And that's crowded. So that might make the one who was originally suicidal, have to go to the other side, and try and talk the other guy out of it. And say, you know, I know I want to kill myself, and I've made a good case for it, but you can't kill yourself. So you know, it allows that movement. It's like a sort of sliding scale, and you want to slide back and forth a number of times.

Alex Ferrari 52:58
I remember that. And by everyone listening, spoiler alert, only the weapon. Sorry, after 20 odd years or 40 years or whatever it was. 3030 years, whatever. But I remember the end was so specifically because obviously, Riggs had no problem killing people. Like he killed people left to right. And Glover was like, why are you killing everybody stop killing everybody. And the last fight with Gary Busey in the in the in the lawn? He has the moment where he's about to kill. Oh, yes. He was about to kill Gary Vee Gary Busey. And he decided to let go and not so the the rigs at the beginning of the movie would have killed them in a heartbeat. But he decided not to do it and let him go. Because Danny Glover's character Murdock infected him with this. Like he pulled them closer to where he was. And then there's other scenes in the movie where Murdock definitely starts moving towards the crazy man that Riggs is in the movie. And then at the end, you know, obviously, you know, Gary Busey decides to go up, and they both shoot them. And they both kill him, which is like both of them literally coming together. To to, I don't know what the term would be to not rationalize. But I've got actual allies, their characters, finally, and at the end, they're both they're both a lot different. But yet they're they're still Riggs is not Murdock, Murdoch's not Riggs. But they're definitely closer to each other than they were before.

Chris Vogler 54:30
This, this brings up a larger point, which is, you know, the question of, what do people want from entertainment, they want to be taken obviously, out of themselves. They want to go to a different world. They want to experience it some of the some of their life vicariously, and people will say, Don't lecture to me, don't give me a moral. I don't want that. I'll make up my own mind and so forth. And I think that's absolutely wrong. I think people want to Murrell essays, they want prescriptions about how to live better. They want examples, and they want to see people learning. And and this is all kind of subterranean. Their first thought is, okay, show me some explosions, car crashes, sex, interesting stuff. But so so I say they come in for all that stuff. But they stay for the learning for the lesson for this thing that sticks with you afterwards, where you take, maybe it's just for a fleeting second, but you take a look at your own life. And you say, you know, I've been a little bit too much of this, or too much of that. And I need to shift a little bit. This is one of the beautiful things about this work we do is that, you, you, you can't really change people 180 degrees, but you can shift them shift their consciousness a little bit. And that's fantastic. That's incredibly powerful. To make sometimes these little increments of awareness, that's really deep actually. Now, there's

Alex Ferrari 56:15
a there's a chapter in the book, I'm dying to ask you about the vibes chapter and talking about chakras and, and how to use that, those that concept in your storytelling. So can you please explain a little bit about vibes, the chakra element that how you apply it to storytelling?

Chris Vogler 56:32
Yes, this is a new chapter for the 25th anniversary edition. It's kind of the meat of the what makes it new. And this is the result of several years of traveling around, and sort of shyly tentatively bringing out this side of me, which is, I grew up in the Midwest in the St. Louis area on a farm. But I came out to California in 1971. And I ate it up. I mean, I landed in the middle of the hippie era. And that was just great for me. And I absorbed a lot of ideas. And that was one of them, that we live in a universe of vibrations. And we talked about it, you know, we had the Beach Boys, song Good Vibrations, and we'd say, you know, did you feel the vibes in that room last night, and oh, my God, I got such a bad vibe from the guy at the meeting. And, you know, we, we had this idea that everything we touch and feel and see and hear is his vibration, you can hear my voice right now, because I'm vibrating a column of air in my throat in this room that's making this element in the speaker, go to the mic, go back and forth and so on, transmitted down to the vibes in your ear. So everything's vibration. And this also came from, you know, I went on a course of study of spiritual things, and the art called and, you know, mysterious mystery religions and all that sort of stuff in my 20s. And I studied the chakra system, which is this idea. From India, basically, it's 1000s

Alex Ferrari 58:09
of years old

Chris Vogler 58:10
1000s of years, a very, very old thing that even you know, is probably well understood before anybody discovered how to write. But the idea is that up and down your spine, you have different spiritual centers, and they're pictured as lotus blossoms that are either just, you know, in imaginary form, but imagined as flower blossoms that are either open or closed. And as you develop spiritually, you open higher and higher centers until, you know, theoretically, everything is open, and then your Buddha. But most people only experienced a couple of those things being sort of turned on or open at at any particular time. But how this all came together, was that when I worked for the studios, I went up a ladder, and got away from the doggie door, part of my career, where I actually was now going to the meetings, this was at Fox on my second term at Fox. I was part of the team that decides on Monday morning, we we talk about the scripts we read over the weekend, and we argue and defend or attack everybody's projects. And if three people say, I think it was good, it gets bought, and it gets made. So those are very, very important meanings. And I noticed most other people were commenting on the scripts in a kind of a numerical way, by saying well, that we think it hits this demographic and it's probably gonna hit 30% of the male audience and, you know, they had it sort of rigged almost mathematically, and I didn't do anything but to different parts of my body, I said it got me, it choked me up, and it made my heart race or it tighten me up in the guts, and then I just lifted the top of my head off in the last act. So I realized that I put it together, I'm pointing to the chakras. And I began thinking about these as potential targets, for your emotional effects. So that I, because I think everything is or should be intentional in this business, you should lay down an intention. And maybe the audience interprets in their own way, and they go off your attention. But you know, you really need to be thoughtful and conscious and intentional. And so why not study the different areas of the body and think I want this to reach out from the page from the screen and hit him right in the gut. And I want them to be thinking about their guts right now. Or I want them to feel protective of their heart at this moment, or just feel a stab when somebody betrays someone on the screen, or this wonderful moments in movies, like in the King's speech, where he struggles to speak and he's got all the heart in the world, and he loves his people, but he can't get it out through the stroke chakra. And eventually, he does make the breakthrough. And it's such a big moment. That, you know, everybody loves that. That kind of scene where somebody speaks their truth, and and was able to hook up one or more. And that was another aspect of it is that I realized the good scripts that I was describing on Monday morning, were hitting at least two of these centers and creating a kind of a circuit between them. So the heart and the throat, the heart and the throat were connected. More people say about Hitler, he was very open in the power chakra down in the guts, he was closed tight in the heart chakra had no compassion for other people. But he was very open and powerful in the throat. So he hooked up the power from his guts and use it as a microphone through his throat and was able to you know, move the nation. So these connections of one or more centers are I think necessary to whether you're aware of it or not. This is what you're doing is you're you're triggering reactions in different places in the body.

Alex Ferrari 1:02:45
So is there any character in movie history that connected more than four or more of those chakras or God forbid, all of the chakras were were opened up in the course of that story or hit all of those energy points?

Chris Vogler 1:03:02
Yeah, I think so. I think you know, first of all in religious areas

Alex Ferrari 1:03:07
like Buddha, Jesus, yeah,

Chris Vogler 1:03:09
you know, Buddha, Jesus, etc, have have hit most of those marks. But it comes up in films every now and then. There was one little film that I kind of cherish called phenomenon with.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:24
I love it. Yeah. With with john travolta. Yeah, yeah, I love that movie.

Chris Vogler 1:03:29
Absolutely ordinary guy kind of down to earth, even a little selfish and unaware. And then something happened to him. I forget what the trigger was.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:39
It was a light from the from the sky came and hit him and gave him these phenomenal, if I remember it was his mind. He just became insanely smart. But he also had powers, some sort of telekinesis of some sort.

Chris Vogler 1:03:54
He was like an angel. There was another film he did called Michael, I think, yeah, it was an angel, but, but he had these kind of unusual powers. And I remember a couple of things. Although my memory is very dim about most of it, a couple of things stuck with me. And one was that moment when he received this information, and it was done so simply and elegantly, and yet it touched those chakras, which was they simply hand up to a tree and you saw maybe a little slow motion, the leaves of the tree addling and can feel it, like my hands are doing now a little bit of light, dark, light, dark, and that is intensely stimulating to the eye, the whole chain of to the brain from the eye. But it just said without anybody saying anything. God is present in this scene, and, you know, or some other worldly force, because they didn't name it. And and it transformed him and then he was operating as a fully realized human being And all those things were were open and functioning for him. You're absolutely

Alex Ferrari 1:05:06
you're absolutely right. Yeah, his his character became almost, you know, godlike or guru. Like, on Earth, he was essentially walking, you know, the Christ Consciousness path, the Buddha consciousness path. I haven't seen that movie it since it came out, I gotta I gotta go back and revisit that movie because I remember loving, that was the same year of goodwill hunting and that that whole I think Titanic 97, if I remember correctly, was a great, great film. Now when it asks you, can you apply the hero's journey into arguably the most profitable place for a screenwriter to be in? Which is television? How do you apply the hero's journey in a series in a season and a complete series? How does it do it? I always like using Breaking Bad as an example, because I consider it one of the best television shows ever created. But what would you do? How do you do it?

Chris Vogler 1:06:03
Well, I think this is where awareness comes in, that the hero's journey somehow operates what I would say holographic. And what I'm referring to is when you make a hologram of something, you can say you've got it, you've taken a picture of a penny and and you load that somehow onto a piece of glass. And with a light with a laser light shining through it. If you turn it around, you see the backside, it's just a piece of glass, which you turn it around, you can see the backside of the penny. And that's remarkable enough, but they say if you smash that glass, the image of the penny is there in every little piece of it. And so that's one of the qualities weird qualities of a hologram. And so it is something that seems to operate at every level of magnification. So an individual shot can express a hero's journey element or the whole hero's journey. When somebody's fighting a dragon, just that's all you need to see. And you kind of can infer all the rest of it. So it, it operates it at all those levels all the way up to the arc of the entire series where somebody's soul is at stake as it was in Breaking Bad, or their way of life is at stake as it was in Downton Abbey. Where you know, this question hangs over every episode. And this is the real answer here is that it's a series of questions of different sizes. And there's one giant question mark over the whole thing is Tony Soprano gonna live or die? Is Walter in Breaking Bad, gonna survive or be redeemed or whatever happens to him. And then in the individual seasons of let's say, a five year show. Sometimes I've noticed they will carve out a certain aspect of the hero or the heroes world and say, okay, for this season, we're going to look at the family dynamic. And the next season we're going to look at building the business and the next season we're going to look at competitors coming in and messing up our plans. And that over five seasons can be a hero's journey. And you can plot where the highs and the lows would be and so on down to the level of the individual episode. There's a question mark over every episode. And then there are sub questions in every scene. I've looked a little bit in this respect at Downton Abbey. Downton Abbey starts with a telegram that says somebody has died on the Titanic. And now the police is up for grabs, basically. And it could go any, any way. And meanwhile, there's a servant arriving whose little question mark is, will they accept him even though he's lame from the war? He's got a war injury and he can't be as effective. So you're looking at the big picture? Will the whole thing fall apart? Will the the beautiful princess get married in? Maybe that takes a whole season to develop? Will the servant be allowed to stay despite his infirmity and so on down to the individual scene? Will the master overhear something or will will, the person who has the information betray somebody else? So you're working basically with sliding scale of questions

Alex Ferrari 1:10:04
when you just said, when you just said, Will this the princess get married by the end of the season or whatever that is. It brought back two shows that played with Will they ever sleep together? which drives a lot of shows. moonlighting, which was Bruce Willis, his big thing with syllable shepherd. They were just like, will they won't they will they won't. They will. They won't. They will. They will. They hate each other. But they want to get together with hate. And when they finally got together, the entire show cratered. It just cratered. And it never never recovered. Then you got to show like friends, which had Ross and Rachel, which was another? Will they ever get together? Will they ever and they held that on for like two or three seasons they held? Till finally they get together? And then that's death a lot of times because that's why you're watching, you're like, Okay, finally got together. Now what do you go from this? Well, then you rip them apart. And then they get huge, and then you're constantly ripping, and then that that relationship becomes so much more complicated over the course of whatever 10 years that they did that show to finally, you know, again, spoiler alert, they finally end up together at the end, because that's the only place they could end up. But they were able to keep that going for such a long time. So that is a very powerful tool to throw that question over a series. So the thing is something that that screenwriter should really think about when constructing a story and constructing a series and applying the that that little tool is so powerful, like will the like will Tony Soprano live? Will Walter White survive? You know? Or will Downton Abbey? Like will? Will we lose our way of life? It's such a powerful thing.

Chris Vogler 1:11:45
And then, you know, episode or season by season, they'll look at the sub questions like will he? Will his marriage survive in either case? Will their relationship with their kids go south? Will you know the competition come in? Will they be undermined by some mistake that they've made? That's a very strong and kind of almost Shakespearean thing that was operative in the sopranos that he tripped over some moral trip wires. And then you were in suspense? Is this going to come and get him eventually. So I enjoy watching those. Watching the question, as it unfolds, people will ask me, where's the best place for the love scene of the sex scene. And there are several answers, I can say, get them together in bed or kissing, before they go into the big ordeal in the middle roughly. That's one way because then they go in to get their joint or you have the intimacy in the actual ordeal in the middle and the difficult test, they're grabbing each other or they maybe that's the test is can they get together and survive that. Or after just after is another nice place because we've been through something dangerous together. And so it's natural to hug each other and become intimate, but the very best place is after the story is over. That's when you want to let the audience imagine what it's like for them to to get in bed together because the audience is better at constructing sexiness than the best feeling in the world. They their imagination to do a fine job.

Alex Ferrari 1:13:36
Yes, and Hitchcock. Hitchcock knew that very well with don't show the murder, show them let him hit listen to a behind the closed door. And that's terrifying

Chris Vogler 1:13:46
and don't answer every question. Because that makes room for the audience to participate. I think that's a basic distinction you can make about Hollywood versus independent or European style. Hollywood is a little more parental and cut and dried. And so we're going to resolve every plot and answer every question and there are many more question marks at the end of an independent or basically European story. They they don't sit in God's chair and they're more speaking adult to adult and leave room for the audience. You know, Hitchcock doesn't answer everything. One of my favorite of his stones is notorious. And there's a mystery that from the beginning, which is Cary Grant is weirdly nervous about intimacy. And he's got this beautiful woman Ingrid Bergman right in his lap, but he can't pull the trigger. And he's, you know, hesitant about it because he's torn with his duties. And you wonder, why is he so weird about women that first of all, it's his God but Yeah, there's that. Also, there's room for you to enter in which I did. And I made up my own backstory for him that he was weird about women because he was in love with a spy. During the war, she betrayed him, he had to kill her. And, you know, he doesn't trust love anymore, because he figures eventually they're going to be training. So, and that's not in the script. But it's in my, you know, expanded version, in my mind. And, and I think that's great. You want the audience to do some of that work for you. So a wonderful thing, even on the microscopic level of scenes and dialogue, there's a wonderful thing you can do, where somebody says he's talking about his mother, they're meeting for the first time getting to know each other, he talks about his mother. And the girl says, I noticed you don't talk about your father. And the guy doesn't answer he changes the subject. So Wow, big arrow points that the relationship with the Father is really screwed up somehow. So that's probably going to pay off later or it means something. And that's one example of how you can invite the audience to participate. And of course,

Alex Ferrari 1:16:15
and when, my last main question, I know so many screenwriters who think that the hero's journey is a very dated concept, and that everybody knows about and all the audience knows about it already. And it really doesn't apply in today's world. Does the hero's journey have a place in modern storytelling?

Chris Vogler 1:16:37
Yeah, I, of course, I'm gonna say that it does. models based on that. But I do believe it, because I think the audience is programmed that way. And they actually like it and enjoy it. When they see it, they feel ownership, they feel possession of it. And I think that it's extremely difficult for a filmmaker to tell a story that doesn't touch a quarter of it somewhere. Because it's as prevalent as air or color, you know, like, I, I'm going to make a painting that doesn't have any colors in it. Or I'm going to make a composition without any sound, you know, no notes, you know, that that's how essential these things are. Even, you know, you can make a composition where all the notes are sour, or where all the notes don't make sense. Or they don't have a sense of rhythm. And that would be maybe an interesting composition, but it's still using the notes, you really can't escape these things. It's a frame. And the only thing you can do is say, I'm out of that frame. But you're still saying there's a frame. And, you know, you you you can judge me by how far I distance myself from it. But I'm still stuck dealing with that Frank, very hard to escape.

Alex Ferrari 1:18:07
And now I'm going to ask you a few questions as well. My guests? What are three screenplays that every screenwriter should read?

Chris Vogler 1:18:13
Ah, yes, very interesting. First thing that comes to mind is the script for risky business. Yeah, which was Tom Cruise, one of the pictures that put him on the map. That's a script I read at the studio and I wrote the shortest response I'd ever written. Just buy it. Do it. Make it it's near perfect. Don't mess with it. Don't screw around with this. Just make that that script. It was a near perfect screenplay. I think along those lines, let's see. Gosh, I'm stumped on. Other other great screenplays that I've read. I think the shape of water, which I wrote about in my book would be an interesting one to look at, from the point of view of how do you put in the fanciful things into fairy tale things. It has wonderful eccentric dialogue. That's one of the beauties of that script. And I don't know because I haven't looked at the screenplay, per se. But I suspect it was written in there's a kind of a halting, I don't know, what's it. I've always tried, you know, with this kind of erratic rhythm. That is in Richard Jenkins dialogue, particularly he's, he's the, the friend of the girl who takes on the monster. And I appreciate that very much. And then I'd go back and look at which I did look At some Hitchcock, look at the script for notorious and see how economical they were, and how they wove things into the threat. It's a it's a tapestry. And what I mean is that Hitchcock would use dialogue as musical. And he would introduce themes through his screenwriters. Like if you look at, you did just a word search on notorious, you would find the word trust comes up, probably more often than a lot of other nouns that have to do with feelings. You won't hear much about love, but but trust comes up often. So I think looking at classics is probably the best Avenue.

Alex Ferrari 1:20:49
What advice would you give a screenwriter wanting to break into the business today?

Chris Vogler 1:20:54
Well, again, read a lot of screenplays. And, you know, no substitute at all, for just general reading and knowledge. That was sort of my calling card, that at the studios was that I had broad, general knowledge, because I was interested in a lot of things. And, you know, in your career, almost anything is going to come your way, and you have to become almost an instant expert on everything. So reading, and, you know, for me, I sort of take the pulse of the of the world every day by reading the New York Times and the LA Times and looking at Facebook. And from that comes some kind of picture of where the consciousness of the world is going at that time. And then that feeds back into my writing sometimes. So just was pretty well informed.

Alex Ferrari 1:21:56
And what is the lesson that took it? And what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

Chris Vogler 1:22:03
Let's see. I'm just I think it's a personal thing, that I am probably my own worst enemy, and I set my own limitations. And largely, they're baloney creations of my own mind. And it's really Mr. Fear of talking. It took me a long time to learn that fear was actually an ally. If it's acknowledged, if you realize I'm not going where I want to go, I'm not getting where I want to go. Why is that? Oh, it's funny, Mr. Fear. I know him. I've dealt with him before. So I just have to go. Hello, Mr. Fear. I acknowledge you're there. I know you're there trying to protect me from being hurt. But I'm okay. So step aside, buddy. And let me go ahead and take the plunge. So it took me a long time to figure it out that fear was both an enemy and an ally.

Alex Ferrari 1:23:05
And where can people find the new book and more about the work that you do?

Chris Vogler 1:23:10
Well, the greatest sources for that, I think, would be Michael weezy. productions, which is m wp.com. They have the full list of books, not just mine, but a really good library of all kinds of books about filmmaking, independent filmmaking, and then Amazon. I also have a WordPress WordPress blog, which is Christopher blues writers journey. And those are the best sources I think, for for hunting. Be down.

Alex Ferrari 1:23:46
Chris, thank you so much. This has been such an enlightening conversation. And I just I just love talking to you because you're such a wealth of information. So thank you so much for for writing this book 25 years ago, and now giving us an updated version. For today's world. I really appreciate what you do in the work that you do. And thank you again for being on the show, my friend. It's been my honor.

Chris Vogler 1:24:07
And thank you very much. Your questions are great, and I love the work you're doing so keep it up.

Alex Ferrari 1:24:14
I want to thank Chris for coming on the show and dropping the monomyth knowledge bombs on the tribe today. Thank you so much, Chris. If you want to get links to anything we talked about in this episode, including his amazing book, and his course the screenwriting and story blueprint, the heroes two journeys, which is of course available on indiefilmhustle.tv, head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/091. Thank you so much for listening guys. I hope this episode was a value to you on your screenwriting journey. As always, keep on writing no matter what, stay safe out there. And I'll talk to you soon.


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Wes Craven Scripts Collection: Screenplays Download

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NIGHTMARE ON ELM STREET (1984)

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ISM 009: Inside the Mind of Screenwriter Rob Edwards (Disney’s The Princess and The Frog)

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Inside the Mind of Screenwriter Rob Edwards (The Princess and the Frog)

Today we go inside the mind of screenwriter Rob Edwards (Disney’s The Princess and The Frog). Rob Edwards has written two classic animated films for Walt Disney Feature Animation, the Academy Award-nominated Treasure Planet, and the Academy Award® and Golden Globe-nominated The Princess and the Frog. He also consulted on Tangled, Wreck-it Ralph, and Frozen.

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BPS 090: Creating a Billion Dollar Horror Franchise with Screenwriter Jeffrey Reddick

Today on the show we have screenwriter and director Jeffrey Reddick, who is best known for creating the highly successful Final Destination horror film franchise. The franchise has grossed over $650 Million world-wide. Not bad for an idea that was first conceived for an X-Files episode.

Jeffrey also co-wrote the story for, and executive produced, Final Destination 2 (2003). Jeffrey made his first connection to the film industry at age 14 when he wrote a prequel to Nightmare On Elm Street (1984) and mailed it to Bob Shaye, the President of New Line Cinema. Bob returned the material for being unsolicited. But the young man wrote Bob an aggressive reply, which won him over.

Bob read the treatment and got back to Jeffrey. Bob, and his assistant, Joy Mann, stayed in contact with Jeffrey for over five years. When he went to The American Academy of Dramatic Arts in New York at age 19, Bob offered him an internship at New Line Cinema. This internship turned into an 11-year stint at the studio.

Aside from Final Destination (2000), which spawned four successful sequels, Jeffrey’s other credits include Lions Gate’s thriller, Tamara (2005), and the remake of George Romero’s classic, Day of the Dead (2008). Jeffrey’s directorial debut is Don’t Look Back.

When a young woman overcoming her traumatic past is among several witnesses who see a man fatally assaulted and don’t intervene, they find themselves targeted by someone, or something, out for revenge.

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Alex Ferrari 0:52
I'd like to welcome to the show the legendary Jeffrey Redick, how are you doing Jeffrey?

Jeffrey Reddick 3:43
I'm doing well. How you doing? Brother?

Alex Ferrari 3:44
I'm good man. I'm good, man. It's as good as we can be in this horror script of a year.

Jeffrey Reddick 3:52
I know. I know. It's just like when you think you hit the final act, killers dead killer pops back up again. And it's like,

Alex Ferrari 3:59
I mean, like I was talking to another guest the other day about is like this is so on the nose. Like, you know, studio would produce the script of 2020 it's just too It doesn't even make sense.

Jeffrey Reddick 4:11
Yeah, absolutely. No, it's been. It has been like, you know, you try to stay stay grateful and you try to stay positive about stuff but you can't not take in the fact that like the world is like suffering through something really. Absolutely.

Alex Ferrari 4:26
Absolutely. And getting getting crazier and get it getting crazier but but we as filmmakers and screenwriters are insane enough to go yes, I know the world is burning. But how do I get my my screenplay produced? I need the budget for my film.

Jeffrey Reddick 4:44
We can still make this movie we can do it safely.

Alex Ferrari 4:48
This insanity of the psychosis of a filmmaker or screenwriters you're just like how do I get this movie made this crazy this is that I imagined there filmmakers in the Mad Max world and I know we have no gasoline, or cameras, but we got to shoot something.

Jeffrey Reddick 5:05
Yeah, I would say no starting an only fans page, not not doing the stuff that they normally do on there, but just only just me typing just to somebody. I'm sure there are some people out there that will be like, Oh, that's so relaxing to watch every type all day. Just pay me a couple of bucks a month.

Alex Ferrari 5:23
You could just walk why, exactly. It's the it's the new generation of the burning log or the fish tank video. Yes. So Jeffrey, how did you get into the business?

Jeffrey Reddick 5:37
Um, how I, how I got in business is a pretty funny story. It all started when I was 14. And I was a, you know, 14 year old hillbilly living in eastern Kentucky. And I saw this movie A Nightmare on Elm Street that blew my mind. It's still my favorite movie ever. And I went home and I banged out a prequel on my little typewriter. And I found out who owned new lines in it, who ran New Line Cinema, Bob Shea. And I got the address. And I mailed it to him. And he sent it back to me. And he's like, you know, we don't take unsolicited material. Thanks for sending your thing. So I had to look up unsolicited because I'm 14. I didn't know what that meant. And then I wrote him back. I sent it back to him. Because I was kind of perturbed. I was like, Look, sir, I've seen three of your movies. And I spent $3 on your work. So I think you can take five minutes to read my story. And he actually read it.

Alex Ferrari 6:29
But this is so what yours is so we're talking like at this was at five. So this is the time that you could actually call up Bob Shea's office, get a receptionist or get her his assistant and actually maybe possibly get through.

Jeffrey Reddick 6:44
Why didn't get through to him on the phone, but I okay, yeah, I got it,

Alex Ferrari 6:47
but even get through them, period.

Jeffrey Reddick 6:50
Yeah, I think but then I wrote the letter. And and, you know, once I wrote that second letter, he wrote me back and he's like, thank you for your aggressive introduction. And he read the story. And he was very constructive. And basically his assistant joy man who was a wonderful woman, she's not with us any longer. She her and Bob kind of took me under their wing from afar. And so they would send me scripts, and movie posters and just things that, you know, a 14 year old kid in Kentucky like flips out over. And they stayed in touch with me till I was 19. And I went to college in Kentucky at this great University College called Berea College. And I went to New York for study for a summer program to study acting, and Bob and Joyce said, Well, how do you want to intern at new line? I'm like, Are you kidding me? Of course I do. And I got an agent and decided to stay in New York. And you know, my internship turned into a position at new line. And I ended up working there for 11 years, and they ended up you know, producing final destination. So

Alex Ferrari 7:46
that little thing yeah, that little little film that you liked what you just dropped that into? Yeah, that's the final destination. Well, one of the more successful horror franchises in history. Now, how did you get well, first of all, how did you come up with the idea for final destination?

Jeffrey Reddick 8:05
The, the colonel for the idea came when I was I was flying home to get a lot of stuff was as Kentucky base, I was flying home to Kentucky, and I read an article about a woman who was on vacation. And her mother called her and said, don't take the flight you're on tomorrow, I have a bad feeling about it. And so she changed flights. And then the story, they said the flights that she was supposed to be on crashed. So that put the idea in my head, but I didn't know the story to go with the idea. And then, you know, years later, I was trying to get an agent for writing. And so I had to write a spec script for something that was on TV. And I loved the X Files. So I use that idea is a setup for an X Files episode. And I got the agent. And then my friends and newline were like, this is a great idea. Like don't, you know, don't send the script in, like for an X Files episode, like make it a feature. So I ended up writing a treatment, you know, because back in the day, you could sell treatments for her projects are no pitch or a pitch. Yeah, you can do that back then. And now it's like, hey, pitches the story and tell us who your star is.

Alex Ferrari 9:04
And you have and you have 50% of the financing in place already. And you have distribution in place.

Jeffrey Reddick 9:07
Yeah, it's like, yeah, the business is, is changed so much. But But you know, I one of my friends, Chris bender that worked at New Line had just started working for Craig Perry and Warren Zeid, who were producers that had to deal at new line and I knew that even though I worked at new line, and I had a straight kind of pipeline to the creative team, I knew that it would give me more juice if I had producers on board because they would just take it more seriously. But it was a hard Honestly, it was a hard sell. Like they were like we don't get death being the killer. Like you can't see it. You can't fight it. And we're like, that's the point. And so it wasn't until we threatened to take it to Miramax or like we'll buy it. All right, well buy it. It will take a chance on it.

Alex Ferrari 9:54
No, it's a great it's a it's a great idea. It is such a you know in your And you're right. I can only imagine back then, because there was like you had Jason, you had Freddy, you had Michael Myers, you had Chucky and all these, like, you could put that on the poster, you can't put death that has no figure on the poster. So it must be it must have been a difficult sell for the marketing team.

Jeffrey Reddick 10:19
It was and I think they did a great job with Oh, yeah. But, you know, the whole reason that we, you know, the whole reason that I, I want, and I'm glad that when James Wong and Morgan came on, they fought to make sure that that that death never had a forum, and they came up with some some other amazing thing, like the whole Rube Goldberg aspect of it. But the reason that I wanted to not give death a form is because I wanted it to be as universal as possible. And if you put like, if you put like a Western kind of Christian version of death, you know, like Grim Reaper with sickle or something like that, then then it doesn't appeal to people who either are have different religious beliefs or spiritual beliefs or don't have spiritual beliefs. So I thought it was very important to not do that. And, and I think that's why it's been as successful as it has been.

Alex Ferrari 11:05
Yeah, it travels very well around the world, because everybody has death in their culture, that is something that concept is in every culture, the figure of it is different from culture to culture, right. But that's it. You can project they can project their own version of what death is on to the movie, which is fantastic. And I remember the trailers of that film. They just as the sequels kept coming, they kept focusing more and more on the deaths. Like that was like, that was the selling point. Like, what is the craziest way we could kill? So?

Jeffrey Reddick 11:38
Yes.

Alex Ferrari 11:41
That became the the hook I guess, as as these kept going, how many? There was five? Right?

Jeffrey Reddick 11:47
Yeah, there have been five of them. And there will be a sixth one. There. It was definitely in the works before COVID hit and now COVID just kind of put the brakes.

Alex Ferrari 11:56
Are they? Are they good? Are they going to kind of reboot the whole thing? Are they going to just make a straight up sequel? Or you don't know? You can't tell?

Jeffrey Reddick 12:03
I don't Yeah, I mean, I don't. I don't know if reboot. I think reboot is too strong of a word. Um, you know, because it's the final destination, you know, films have their formula, you know, a big set piece at the beginning and then death comes after people. So I don't know if reboots the right word, because that that intimate,

Alex Ferrari 12:23
but bring a new generation, I guess. I mean, but but every but every cast was like you didn't have one cast member that ran through the whole thing.

Jeffrey Reddick 12:30
Did you remember Tony Todd is the is the recurring has been the recurring character and Ali Larter was in the right and second one. Yeah, Tony Todd's been, you know, he hasn't been in every single one of them. But he's been in like, a lot. Yeah. Yeah, he should be in every one of them. There are a few where they can put him in there. And they they they got they got the message that people love Tony Todd. And

Alex Ferrari 12:54
now I do remember when you and I originally met 10 years ago on a panel here in LA, a horror film panel. And I remember you saying on the panel that like, Look, I they can make as many of these as they want. Because every single time they make one I get a check. So yeah, I know. residuals, residuals

Jeffrey Reddick 13:16
know what that sounds like. Good. Yeah. Yeah, that sounds better on a panel. There are people there, then I sound like a douchebag.

Alex Ferrari 13:25
No, no, no, and I don't even I don't mean to make you sound like that. I completely. And I know that and I listen, I look, I know a lot of I've had a lot of screenwriters on board that like they work on a few of the first ones. And then I had the guy who did Air Bud, who created air bug. And they made 12 of those films. He was only involved in the first two or three but every single time they make a new one, he gets a residual check. So that's nothing to be ashamed of as a screenwriter. Well,

Jeffrey Reddick 13:56
I know when it will even as a horror fan, though, it's like I want there to be yes, the money is nice, but I want there to be more because I can't think of any other franchise that's been this successful. And they've only made five of them in 20 years, like every other. There have been like 20 Halloweens and 20 Friday you know there have been like even you know even nightmare downstream there have been like it's like come on, make some more because the fans want it and I need to get some new shoes.

Alex Ferrari 14:27
As we were saying residual checks are nice. They're very very nice. Now how did I wonder I always like to ask this of a screenwriter who has a hit because when Final Destination came out it was a fairly large hit for for the but it was a fairly small budget to I'm imagine it wasn't a huge budget.

Jeffrey Reddick 14:44
No, that was that one. I have to say they It was 20 million which is actually big for a horror movie back then. Big Four horror film. Um, but yeah, it was a it was a big hit. sleeper hit it opened it like number three or four and then the next week it went up and then the next weekend. Number one, so it was definitely a word of mouth hit two, which was nice to see happen. And that rarely ever happens. Especially with horror. Yeah, usually they open big and then they drop. Right, exactly.

Alex Ferrari 15:10
So I always like to ask screenwriters who had that kind of success? How did the trap the town treat you? What was the experience of being in the final destination? hurricane, if you will?

Jeffrey Reddick 15:22
Well, the funny thing is I, I missed the hurricane because I was in New York. So I worked out of the New York office of new line. So I wasn't in LA, we're kind of all the, you know, the hurricane like action happens. So I was, I was aware of how well it did. But I was in a different world. And so I stayed at new line because I, I just loved the company so much. I'm just one of those people, you know, creatures of habit that gets very comfortable. I actually stayed at New Line, until I sold the sequel, the story for the sequel, in 2000, in 2000, and then finally, my bosses were like, you know, everybody knew I was like, we love you to death, Jeffrey, but you sold two movies. Now it's time, it's time to

Alex Ferrari 16:09
go out into the world, Jeffrey, it's okay. Like they were pushing you out of the nest,

Jeffrey Reddick 16:14
out of the nest. And, but I was happy in New York. So I was going to stay in New York. But unfortunately, you know, 911 happened. And I lived in Battery Park City, which is not far from the World Trade Center. So once that happened, I then I decided to move out to LA. So you know, typically, when something like that happens, even when you sell a project, you kind of, you know, looking back, you kind of you know, you move to LA immediately, you milk that movie as much as you can till it comes down. And if it's hit, you're out here, but I kind of missed all all of that stuff. So by the time I got out here, it was funny because people, my agent, you know, I got an agent, he pretty much had to introduce me to the town. Because, you know, James Wong, Lynn Morgan, who, you know, co wrote the movie and also directed it, you know, they were out here in the hurricane. So people didn't really know who I was until I actually got out here. And then they read my script. And they're like, Oh, I'm like, Well, my name is all over the poster. But they don't you know, it's a town where if you're not sitting in a room with somebody, they don't actually go and look at a movie poster in the credits.

Alex Ferrari 17:19
Yeah, out of sight, out of mind,

Jeffrey Reddick 17:20
basically, out of sight out of mind. So, so I missed the craziness of the hurricane, which I think was probably a good thing. For me, just as a person, because I think if I got out here, I may have got sucked into like, just the world of craziness that I wasn't prepared for I I got sober like 15 years ago. So I think if you know, and mine was my my advice was drinking and it was, you know, just wasn't anything like super crazy. It was just kind of more like, sitting at home being sad, drunk and not being happy. So I think if I had been out here, in that celebratory party kind of scene, healthy. I think it would have been very unhealthy for me. So I think it was a it was probably, you know, God looking out for me in that that that way. But um, it's funny now kind of, you know, as the years go by, though, seeing how much of an impact the movie has had, like, you know, when I hear somebody say, this is a final destination moment, like, even when I'm not around, like, they don't know that I'm involved with it at all. I'll just be out in public and somebody's like, Oh, it's like, final destination. And it's like, holy shit. Like, this is like part of the culture now like,

Alex Ferrari 18:31
Oh, it's in the it's in this guy. So yeah, it's it's definitely transcended, like, I mean, I'd argue kind of like a Freddy or a Jason or a Chucky or Michael, but in its own its own very unique space. I mean, you have a final destination is a very unique niche within the horror genre, because there is no killer. Yes. Visual killer. It's a very, you know, very, very unique in that has more than one movie. It has five movies, you know, so that it's in itself, and I guess they kept being successful because it kept making them.

Jeffrey Reddick 19:07
Yeah, absolutely. You know, and it's, you know, it's, it's just as somebody who's been a horror fan my whole life. It's been, it's been very gratifying, you know, it's but it's also a dragon that you're chasing, you know, you find yourself chasing that dragon dragon. Something's like, Well, why don't you bring to something like Final Destination? And I'm like, What? idea and they're like, Oh, that's too much like final destination. Well, that was not enough like final destination.

Alex Ferrari 19:28
So that is something that is something that's real because a lot of filmmakers and screenwriters don't realize that but when you're you're a hit in town for something. That's the box you get put into and you a lot of times have to fight your way out of that box. I know. I know, for a fact that Wes Craven, one of the greatest horror directors of all time, I knew his personal assistant. That was his personal system for many years and he was dying to get out of he wanted to do something different. He'd been doing horror for such a long time. And that movie music The heart which was called 500 violins. The only reason he got that was because they wanted scream to He's like, what do you want me to do scream to Harvey? I need Give me the budget to make. Yeah, to make this. And that's how he got it. But he was I felt that he was, from what I understood. He was frustrated that he was only able to do horror. I know he wanted to venture out as an artist. Yeah, and that happens, doesn't it?

Jeffrey Reddick 20:27
Yeah, they it's it's it's it since I love horror. It's I don't mind being in that box as far as writing goes. But yeah, the idea that it's like, we need you to bring us something like, final destination, that unique thing that you created. But then we didn't actually we were very concerned about it because it was unique until it became a hit. It's just a hard place to be in but you know, I The good thing is I find myself like branching out a little bit like right now I'm working on two animated series for the car for Netflix. You know, in their, their their kid animated series, and one of them has some creepy, fairy tale dark fairy tale elements and the other ones like a spin off of the saga Yojimbo, the Japanese comic. So that's like Samurai rabbits, you know, and it's so much fun to do it. So I'm finding myself Finally, branching out a little bit, but I always will come back to genre like I love this genre so much that

Alex Ferrari 21:22
well, if you love it, you love it. But you but you also want to break out from like, I don't want to write another final destination. I did that. Let's, let's move on.

Jeffrey Reddick 21:29
Let's do something else.

Alex Ferrari 21:31
Now, were you involved with the sequels? I know you were involved with a second sequel? Did you? Were you involved with the other sequels at all?

Jeffrey Reddick 21:37
No, not not not physically involved. I mean, I I'm very good friends with a producer Craig Perry. So, you know, he'll call me up and a lot of times and bounce ideas off of me and let me know what's going on. So I definitely kind of know what's going on with the franchise. And it's, it's actually been fun to see. Other people kind of come in and put their their mark on the brand. I mean, the first one, it's always been this almost incestuous circle with the first four. It's like, you know, I worked on the first one in the second one and James Wong and Glen Morgan worked on the first one and the third one, Eric brass, and Jay maca. Gruber worked on the second one, and then Eric rested the fourth one. And then we brought in somebody due for the fifth one. And it was like, you know, I love the fifth one. But it's just fun to see, like other people kind of come in and take that concept and put their spin on it.

Alex Ferrari 22:21
Right? I'm imagining what the George Lucas feels like with what they've been doing with Mandalorian. And, and all the other cool films and stuff that they're doing with his his baby that he had put out so many years ago? Yeah.

Jeffrey Reddick 22:38
I think it all depends probably on personalities. Like if I like I'm not sure like that, cuz I know some people get very protective and precious of their work. But you know, I think that's part of working at a studio, what that helped me kind of separate my ego from a lot of that stuff. Because I realized, like, you know, once you write a movie and somebody else buys it, you're kind of handing it over to other people. So you just hope to create a good enough relationship with those people that you can have some say and how they execute it. But again, it's a quality problem. It's a quality problem to have if you have other people doing sequels to your stuff. So I definitely don't complain about

Alex Ferrari 23:15
writing first world problems. As I say it's first world problems. Now, you are such a fan and a student of the genre of horror films, what makes a good horror screenplay?

Jeffrey Reddick 23:28
I mean, I think for me, it it all, it starts with the basics of, you know, having relatable characters. I think if you make me fall in love with these characters and care about them, then I will follow the journey wherever it takes me. Sometimes scripts go off into bizarre directions, but if it's grounded in characters that I can really relate to and care about. That's always the most important thing for me. I do think, you know, for horror, you know, you want to, you know, you want to have some kind of hook that can bring people into the story, some kind of concept that doesn't feel like we're reading the same story of, you know, a family moves into a house and, you know, something horrible happened there. And now a ghost is like haunting them. It's like, we've seen that so many times, it's like, you do want something that we haven't seen 100 times unless you're putting a very unique spin on it. scares and suspense are obviously important. And if you're doing a straight up horror film, obviously, the kills in the set pieces are important too. If you're doing a movie, because you you, you're also you're writing something for for people, but you're making it for an audience out there. So there's certain things that the audience expects in a horror film. So you either want to deliver on those expectations or subvert them in a cool way.

Alex Ferrari 24:47
So very cool. Now, what are the biggest problems you see with horror protagonists? Because, you know, it's almost a cliche. You're like, why are you doing like you're yelling at the screen. Don't go in there. The Killers in their The what? What is the biggest problem you see with protagonists in horror films in general?

Jeffrey Reddick 25:06
I think that you pretty much ended on the head. I mean, I think a lot of movies require and you know, and I'm sure, like, there, there are movies that I've written where this happens to. But you know, when you require, because the thing is audiences, I read this somewhere where a psychologist said that that film audiences always think that they're braver and smarter than the people on screen. So like, you know, when a character wouldn't do something in the film, they're not, they're like, well, if I was there, I'd have jumped on that killers back and done it. But the worst thing you can do is have like, an I've seen so many good movies just get undermined by this, where they just have the main characters, stay in a location when any rational person, right have left and do stupid things that any rational person wouldn't do. So if you have a character that keeps making bad choices, just to keep the story going, that's the biggest mistake I see are I wrote somebody scripts where it's like, you know, this is the city, this is any good movie talking. This is like a human being like, I cannot think of any person, no matter how tough they are, that would stay here after what they just saw. Right? You know, like, you know, I read a script recently, where, you know, a person gets invited to like, some mysterious party and doesn't know who invited them and walks in, and there's like, some weird orgy going on. And, you know, she backs up into some strange guy. And he's like, Oh, don't worry about that. Follow me, I'll show you what's where the host is. And I'm like, Oh, this would be gone at that point. You know, she's, she was horrified by the origin wasn't like she saw the orgy was like, that looks fun. She was like, horrified. And so who's gonna follow some strange man, you know? So when I see stuff, like when I read stuff like that in scripts, especially when that happens over and over again, I think that's the biggest mistake I see in horror films is making your characters continually do silly things just to keep the story going. Well, when

Alex Ferrari 27:00
I when I was thinking, thinking of three films, specifically that are horror films that are so good, that they transcend the genre, almost, which is Jaws, Exorcist and Silence of the Lambs. The stories, the characters, everything is so well constructed. There's never a moment in Silence of the Lambs. I'm like, don't don't like why are you doing that? Like jaws is perfectly it's as as perfect of a film, it's period as you can get. And the actresses like, those, the situation is structured in a way where, well, the priest is trying to get the devil out of this girl. So he has to be in there. Because that's his job as opposed to, you know, oh, let's get this all split up in the woods. Yeah, so the killer could knock us off one at a time.

Jeffrey Reddick 27:52
Right? And you don't get a pass because I see a lot of this in the scripts to where people will be like, really? Now you want to split up now? Have you seen a horror movie and then they still split up? It's like, that doesn't give you a pass by

Alex Ferrari 28:04
exactly now, and that was the perfect thing. Well, that started with scream when scream actually was so self aware of its own faults. Yeah, I mean, that is a brilliant script. And that's Yeah, love scream.

Jeffrey Reddick 28:16
I that's one of my favorites.

Alex Ferrari 28:18
I mean, so brilliantly done and the first opening sequence with Drew Barrymore I mean, it's it's the psycho and you killing it. I mean, spoiler alert first 10 minutes drew dies. But, but it like it was shocking for a new generation. It was basically what what psycho did back in the day, but it was so brilliant. I remember when that came out. It was just like a revelate like everybody, it was such a monster hit

Jeffrey Reddick 28:44
at the end because I went to a screening of it and I didn't I you know, I saw the poster in the trailer. I thought Drew Barrymore was the star of it. I just went in there with my sweet ass going, Well, I can't wait to watch Bruce. Bruce scream for like 90 minutes and get and I was like,

Alex Ferrari 28:59
What? What? What's going on?

Jeffrey Reddick 29:01
Oh, it's like one of the most brilliant 10 minutes of cinema.

Alex Ferrari 29:06
Yeah, it's it's amazing. Now, with the blue we know what the problem is with protagonists. But what can you do as a screenwriter to make a horror villain legendary? Because we've already rattled off a handful of names that are all you need to do is just say their first names and in the horror genre, they know what it is. So what do you do? Like what makes Michael Meyers Freddy? Jason you know, those characters so so legendary, as opposed to other horror, you know, other horror either franchises that either come and go, that have those kind of looks from the poster. The same elements is Jason or Freddy, but they don't live up to it and they don't what's that magic? What's that thing? In your opinion?

Jeffrey Reddick 29:54
You know what I think? I don't think that there's I don't think that that that's almost an answer because it's it's almost like catching lightning in a bottle. Because sometimes the characters are so like you mentioned Simon lamb like Hannibal Lecter is such a delectable like, you know with its with just the portrayal and the way that he was filmed and everything is that it's mesmerizing that so you have sometimes you have villains like that, or Freddy Krueger, I think is probably the best example of the of the slashers. Because especially in the first movie, like he was so feral, and so there was just something so wicked about him, like he cut himself, he cut it, people he was just horrible. Like, we'd never seen anything like that. And Chucky had such a distinct, you know, it's a toy, you know, it's like, look like a little toy. You know, you almost had as much fun with the Chucky movies when the dolls getting knocked around, knowing that, knowing that it's possessed, like, so it's, there's something about that. But, you know, I think, you know, with Michael Myers, he didn't say anything. And it was just, he was an embodiment of evil. But also that movie came out at a time, you know, we were kind of in, you know, the suburbs, everything was about the sub suburbs and how the suburbs were safe and the last bastion of safety in America. And, you know, Michael Myers came in and kind of took that over. And with Friday the 13th, you know, like people forget, you know, Jason's mother was a killer. And the first one, he wore like, a sack over his head. And the second one, he didn't get the hockey mask on the third one. And I think that that, that by that point, it you just were our culture was at the time. slashers are so hot. And that just happened to be the one that like exploded Friday, the 13th exploded. I don't know if it's necessarily because of Jason per se. Time Bomb.

Alex Ferrari 31:38
It was timing,

Jeffrey Reddick 31:39
I think with timing on that one. Because again, most people think of him with a hockey mask. It's like, well, he didn't have the hockey mask till the third movie. And he wasn't the killer in the first one. So I think timing has a lot to do with when certain movies take off and when certain movies hit but I think good. No, I was gonna say, but I think when you create a villain for a horror film, especially if it's like a slasher film, you do kind of want to come up with some kind of iconography, some kind of look that's unique, where people will like, they'll remember that, that that killer if your movies fortunate enough to like, really strike a chord with people and take off. Like, that sucks about finals nation. It's like, we could have had a Halloween costume and a toy line, but we don't because it's we don't have a killer. So

Alex Ferrari 32:25
we have five but we have five movies. And hopefully, yes, yes.

Jeffrey Reddick 32:29
But it's funny because it's Yeah, because I love like collecting, like, you know, stat you know, movie posters and statues and tchotchkes. So it'd be nice to have one for mine. But that's our

Alex Ferrari 32:41
they should they should actually sell the statues of the kills. So like the, the sequence of a kill like that chap.

Jeffrey Reddick 32:50
That would be awesome. Like the log going into sheriff's car. Exactly. All those kills a B on the balance beam. And the fifth one, like I love that kill, too.

Alex Ferrari 33:00
Yeah, but you look at things like leprechaun, and I'm like, how did that thing become? How did that become a thing? Like they ran off? Like, how many of those are the things that they just took off? So and then something like candy man did it? Like there should be 20 candy men?

Jeffrey Reddick 33:15
Yeah, there should be. I mean, well, you know, what's interesting, too, is we have to also look at the time when these movies came out as far as what was accessible. So, you know, back when, when I was young, you know, there were like three networks in HBO. So everybody was watching the same things. And so people were seeing the same movies. There weren't as many movies that were coming out as there are now so, you know, you didn't have a, you know, when scary movies came out, like everybody rushed to see them. But everybody across the country was seeing like the same movies and watching the same things on television. You know, like, back in the day, it was like 60 million, you know, viewers was like a hit for a network show. And now it's like, well, we got 10 million viewers, it's a hit. So you know, the country used to be much more the choices used to be a lot more limited. So a lot of the people would get around, especially the horror fans with with reading Fangoria. You know, you'd see what was coming up and Fangoria, and then all the horror fans would rush out and see those movies. And they're, you know, they're cheaper to make and they turn a profit. So I think that's why you have a lot of horror franchises. You know, they seem to have burned themselves out a while ago. Just because I think the marketplaces got bigger with like the streamers and so many theater chains now with so many movies coming out like it's you really have to like rise above all the clutter out there.

Alex Ferrari 34:32
Right and and I can't imagine being I think it's in the camera ready that Jordan Peele remake

Jeffrey Reddick 34:38
Yes, Kenya is gonna come out but they had to push it but you know, Candyman is one of those movies I mean, it's it's it definitely appears in like the top rated you know, as far as it's a it's a beautiful movie. Um, but I do think you know, people you know, I don't I like to say delicately because people get their hackles up when when you start talking about at all, but you know, you have to look at the time when that movie came out. Right. And, you know, it's basically an interracial love story. And, you know, people weren't quite ready for that. I mean, I just read an 85. You know, there was when they put up commando, there was a love scene between Arnold Schwarzenegger's character and the female lead. But when they cast right on Chong, they cut this loveseat out because they're like, the country's not ready for this yet. And there was there was still a lot of that I think itchiness that people had about interracial relationships. And I'm like, screw you. Because if it wasn't for interracial relationships, I wouldn't be here so.

Alex Ferrari 35:37
Exactly,

Jeffrey Reddick 35:38
exactly. But But, you know, it was a different time back then. So I you know, but that I mean, that movies from the acting directing?

Alex Ferrari 35:47
Yeah, I remember it.

Jeffrey Reddick 35:49
I mean, everything is like, it's a I mean, it's a masterful movie, like you. Such a beautiful movie. And I thought the sequel was good, too. I liked I liked the sequel a lot. But yeah, it did. I think the reason it probably didn't take off as it was, it was, it was it wasn't the, you know, hot teenagers getting slashed up. You know, it was like dealing with like, you know, racial inequality and racial injustice. And it also had an interracial love story at the center of it. So I think people you know, I again, I just think people weren't quite ready for that at the time that it came out.

Alex Ferrari 36:22
So how do you see from from the moment that final destination was released to now and moving forward? How has horror changed because I don't see as many slasher films anymore. That's not as in vogue as it used to be. Right. You know, it's not like the 80s the golden the golden era of slasher films and that kind of horror, what kind of and then there was the Was it the horror porn or not poor porn, but, um, so I saw it torture. Yeah, the saw and the hostel and that that whole era of, of kind of horror, where do you see horror going? And it Are we going to come back to some of this, you know, nostalgic slasher, because I know they tried to remake Friday, and they did it. They did as good of a job, but you can't catch that. Robert England is ready.

Jeffrey Reddick 37:12
Yeah. Yeah. I mean, I think right now we're, we're very much in a supernatural kind of

Alex Ferrari 37:19
write up, contract,

Jeffrey Reddick 37:20
kind of horror kind of world. But but I honestly, you know, because I know that the business tries to the business tries to stay ahead of the curve and kind of run the ball about what's going to be popular, but then something popular comes out and then they everybody tries to start making that so everybody's, you know, trying to make the next get out now, like socially relevant kind of horror films. So I think we'll be seeing some more of that coming out for a while, but I think we're just one, you know, fresh slasher film away from having any of these genres come back. I mean, I still love it good slasher movie. You know, I, you know, there have been a glut of zombie movies, like, you know, and I get on Netflix and Amazon Prime and Hulu and everything. I'm like, you know, from every country, it's like, there's a good zillion zombie movies out there right now. So I don't know. I mean, I think people go to see horror films to escape, though the horrors going on in the real world. So I feel like escapism or like supernatural kind of stuff, is probably going to always be popular, and slasher stuff, because that's still escapism if it's not sadistic. You know, like, just mean spirited. I certainly know when COVID first hit, you know, all my friends were like, we're writing a COVID script. I'm

Alex Ferrari 38:41
like, No, no, I said the same thing. And like I had, I talked to some executives, like we got 20 COVID scripts a day, and nobody is going to produce a COVID script. Because the last thing I want to watch is a COVID script. Like you didn't want to watch a 911 movie after 911 or Vietnam movie while Vietnam was going on. Yeah,

Jeffrey Reddick 39:00
yeah. So I think that um, I think the escapism horror You know, I think supernatural still goes strong for a long time, but, you know, I think slasher movies are always going to be popular, it's just you got to, you know, you got to hit that right slasher kind of combination with characters in the slasher together.

Alex Ferrari 39:17
And in the end, that's the one thing I love you said that said something a second ago mean spirited with those those slasher films of the 80s that we all kind of love and grew up with. They're not mean spirited. I mean, Freddie is funny. Like, he got funnier, he got a lot funnier, after sec, the second and third and fourth, he became almost a comedy act, you know, killing people towards the end and towards the end of that series, and, and, you know, it wasn't mean spirited, even Michael and those in Jason who are kind of basically voiceless, they don't say anything. And when Freddy vs. Jason came out, I mean, that was hilarious. That was so much fun, but That is a key isn't it not being mean spirited in the way you do it and I think a lot of those torture kind of torture porn films, kind of, I think a little bit were a little bit mean spirited, like salt one was amazing.

Jeffrey Reddick 40:13
Yeah. And I think that's it, you know, it's all a personal it's a matter of taste for sure. Like I don't, you know, cuz I know certain people, like certain types of movies, but I shouldn't there's, there's a difference, like, and I'll just use hostel as an example. Like I thought the first hostel was very entertaining, like it had an add humor to it. You had, you know, male antagonists for the first time in a long time in horror movies. So and it was also kind of commenting on how like, you know, you know, American men will American anybody will travel internationally and they're just we have an arrogance about it. Like we, you know, we go to like France, and we're like, annoyed that people don't speak English. And then we're here demanding that everybody speak English, but when we travel, we're like, why does anybody speak English everywhere? So they kind of played up that whole thing and made the character you know, the characters were kind of, some of them were sympathetic, but some of them were kind of jerks. And the torture didn't come to later was I think, if you watch saw too, you know, in my humble opinion, I like it. It kind of did everything right that hostile did I think hostile to did wrong? You know, because it had, you know, women it had the, you know, Heather amaszonas character who's like, tied up naked, hung upside down, like begging for life as this woman like, slowly like, slices her for, you know, it's just, there's a difference in tone. Like, there's a Yeah, there's just a mean spiritedness about, like hostile to and there's a mean spirited is about certain of these kind of torture porn movies, where it's, you're not just you know, because you want to go have fun at these movies. It's not like, it's not like watching it. You don't want to go and watch somebody you know, you don't want to watch a mortician dissected the body correct in real life. So for a horror movie, it's not like you want to sit there and watch a killer slowly like to torture a person to death. You know, it's like watching somebody torture academ you know, online it's like, that's not entertaining. That's just feels gratuitous and is mean spirited. And I think that that's why those films don't tend to have as big of an audience because even the Saw movies they're, they're not I don't feel like they're mean spirited. there's a there's a sense of like, with jigsaw, you know, giving people a choice to like, save themselves or save somebody else. You know, sometimes, I don't feel like they're, you know, they're gruesome but I don't feel like they're mean like it feels like you're like

Alex Ferrari 42:30
I remember hospital being like costal was a hostile to specifically was I agree with you was mean. Yeah, like, there there was just like, I don't want to watch this like this is, then you watch Friday. And you're like, well, this is fun. Like it this is this is just fun. Chucky is you know, like, when when my wife saw Chucky the first time she's like, and she watched it years later after it was really she's like, this is ridiculous. I would just kick the damn thing. It's a doll. Like, it's so it's a doll. What's wrong with you people like it's like, but that's kind of what makes it funny, and that he's so wonderfully written and his dialogue and everything is so yeah. And the bride of Chucky and all of that. It's amazing. Now, what do you feel? Because you've I'm sure read a lot of scripts in your day. What is the biggest mistake you see young screenwriters make?

Jeffrey Reddick 43:24
Um, I don't know if this is a quantitative light. If this is like a literal mistake, I can say I think the problem that I find with a lot of young screenwriters is they think they're great. writers are a script. Right? Right away. Yeah. And, and any, in any, you know, just if you think logically, no matter what if you're no matter what you're, if you're an artist, whether you're a painter or a writer, thing, or you get better with practice, and the more you do it, and if you're a craftsman, if you make stuff out of wood, you get better, like the first thing that you carved out of wood isn't going to be the best thing that's ever been carved out of wood before. So I think the biggest mistake that I see with a lot of young writers is they kind of come out with this attitude. Like, I understand that you have to believe in yourself, because trust me, this business is like, you get rejected, you know, 1000 times and then you get one person saying yes. So you have to keep your ego. You know, you have to keep your spirits up and your ego right sighs but I just see a lot of young writers where they're like, this is the best script, you know, I've ever written and you got to read it. And if you read it, you start giving them notes, they start arguing with you. And you know, not that I think that my notes are the end all be all, but it's like, there's an unwillingness to recognize that they're young, like, trust me my first couple of scripts, I went back and read them. I'm like, wow, these are, you know, years later, like, these are crap. You know, these were awful. I can't believe I thought these were great. But you have I think the biggest mistake young writers make is they don't understand that. You know, it takes You've got to keep doing it to get better. And you know, every script that I write hopefully is better than the last script that I wrote. Because I've learned something in between. So I think being open to that process and realizing it takes time, like there's a lot of people that think there's some easy shortcut, like, and I'm sure you've heard this, too, every time. You know, I speak at a, you know, any place, whether it's a high school or a college or a horror convention, or a screenwriting convention. The two questions that people ask me are, how do I get my script to a studio head? And how do I get financing? How do I get an agent? Yeah. And how do you know and it's like, there aren't any. think that there are like, it literally, like I heard, there was a 10 year old somebody, and I can't remember who it was, I wish I could, somebody very smart and famous at the time, it said you have to be if you're an artist, you have to be willing to dedicate 10 years of your life to struggling before you finally succeed. And they said, we say succeed, we don't mean that you're going to all of a sudden be rich and you know, have all the money in the world, we mean to get something done. And, you know, I thought that Rose Bowl, when I went to you know, New York as I was 19, I got an agent, I was interning at New Line, I was like screw that 10 year rule, it was 10 years to the to the year I graduated high school that I sold final destination. So it took all that time of me writing scripts, getting them rejected, almost getting jobs, not getting them, it took 10 years to actually get my first project like produced and made for when I graduated. So people have that's, you know, I think that's a rule that people need to keep in the back of their head. Because there's so much clutter in the business, where you have people who are like, Alright, I'm going to try this acting thing for two years, because my dad has a lot of money, and I'm pretty, or handsome. And if I don't make it, I'm going to quit. So you, you have like people who are dedicating their lives to this plus, you have all this clutter of hundreds of people coming to Hollywood every day, you know, with with rich families, and you know, their good look, the best looking person at their school. So there, they've got to be the most beautiful. And so you have to outline it's almost like survivor, you have to like Outlast

Alex Ferrari 47:04
What is it? What is it? I'll think out last?

Jeffrey Reddick 47:07
Yeah, it's like, You got it, you gotta, you gotta, you gotta be in it for the long haul. Like, you know, this, this isn't a business, you know, like that you that can be kind of a side hobby. You know, it's something you really have to like, jump into the pool, and you have to, like swim in that pool for up to maybe 10 years. So there aren't, there aren't any shortcuts. You know, because it's even this stuff. Like when I wrote that letter, Bob Shea, I wasn't I didn't have any grand plan about oh, this is going to lead to this. And this and this in the future. I was just like, I have a story I want to tell and I want this. He He owns the he does the Friday movies. And I want him to read it. You know, like that was my only goal. Because I had a story to tell that I wanted somebody to read. So I could never have planned that, oh, he's going to kind of take me under his wing. And then I'm going to get it Yeah, I could I you know, I never planned any of that stuff. So I found that what people call like luck has, has often been years of me working really hard over here and it not paying off like I thought it would but then somebody else on this side of the you know, this side of town reads a script. And they're like, oh, let's call Jeffrey and, you know, so there's been a lot of that. So all the work that you put out there will benefit you somehow, but you just don't always know how it's gonna be. So you can't expect like a shortcut, like, somebody at a convention is going to, you know, have their agent sign you and then all of a sudden you're gonna sell your script and then that's it, you know, it's just

Alex Ferrari 48:40
it's no it there is no shortcut. I completely agree with you. And and I, I we both got wrapped up lots of it in our business, lots of shrapnel, lots of wounds, lots of wounds. And when you say put work out there, you know, when I with this podcast I've been, you know, that's why a lot of podcasts fail because they just like I'm gonna do 20 I'm just gonna keep dude like after 20 they're like, well, no one's listening. I'm not making any money. I gotta go. And it's the outlasted almost all of my contemporaries. And by putting out these episodes, it's amazing. Who listens to this stuff. Yes. And all of a sudden, I get a phone call or I get an email going, Hey, I listened to this one obscure episode. And this guy who directed some of the biggest movies ever wants to be on your show, because it'd be a good fit for what he's doing. Right. I'm like, like, what? Like, how is that? But that's the thing. It's it's putting work out there without any attachment to the outcome? I think is I think the biggest piece of advice.

Jeffrey Reddick 49:38
Absolutely. Absolutely.

Alex Ferrari 49:40
Now, can you tell me about how you transitioned from just being a lowly screenwriter to now being a writer, director of a new film?

Jeffrey Reddick 49:54
Well, yeah, it's so funny because you know in features Yes, the writers are like look slowly at TV.

Alex Ferrari 49:59
But yes,

Jeffrey Reddick 50:00
I started, I worked, I worked. I started working in TV recently, I'm like, I've been missing out. On the party, like the good stuff is in TV, oh my god. But you know, it's it's funny, like I, I had a couple projects that I said, I have to direct these because if I give them away, I already know how people are going to change them. And I These are things I want to direct. And when I first went out with good samaritan, I just went out with it as a project I didn't go out with, you know, with the idea of me directing. But the thing with this story is, you know, you're not sure if it's a supernatural force that's after them. Or if it's a killer that's after them over, it's all on the main character's head because she's had some trauma in her past, and every place that wanted to do the movie was like, just make it straight up supernatural, or just make it a straight up killer. And then we'll do it. And I'm like, but that's not the story, I want to tell like, that's, that's kind of the easy story until like, I want to tell something a little different. So I realized that if I wanted to do this movie, the way that I wrote it, then I would have to direct it myself. And I'd been on enough sets and been a have been in the business long enough that I knew the basics, I directed a short in a in a, you know, like an indie music video for a friend. So, you know, I knew that I knew the basics, but you definitely don't know what you don't know until you actually get on a set and start directing yourself. So, you know, that was a little that was some hubris on my part. I'm thinking, well, I've been on a lot of sets. And I did a short, so I'm ready. That's awesome. But I have to say it was like, such, you know, now that now that we're done, it was it was such a fulfilling experience. And it was such a learning experience, too, because now I know the areas that I need to fill in that I didn't know before. So I'm excited to do it. I'm glad that I did it. It was you know, again, and my friends, always, my director, friends were like, well, you trust me, when you direct your first feature, you're going to be like, screw that I'm never directing again. Or you want to do it again. So I definitely want to do it again. But yeah, the reason the reason for me doing it was out of necessity of not wanting them to change. You know, the story into like, just a straight up supernatural movie or straight up, you know, slasher movie. And it's, you know, like Final, but I mean, this definitely didn't have anywhere near the budget of final destination. But like final destination. It was a, it was a concept where the people that wanted to do or like well, it's not horror, supernatural enough to sell it as a horror movie. And if we sell this as a thriller, then you need a list stars. So we have to get a list stars attached so that, you know that whole all that business kind of crap that came up with even with final destination where people weren't there, like, Oh, you can't do something that's not easily put in a box. I'm just kind of motivated me to like do it myself.

Alex Ferrari 52:50
Yeah. Because you were you were trying to go down the road with the film, like traditional like, go to the studios trying to get financing, do it a little bit, you know, do it the normal way. But you kept getting so much stuff, so much resistance on your vision, you're like, well screw it, let's just go do it indie. Yeah. Can you talk a little bit about first of all the name of the movie, what the name of the movie is? And what is it about?

Jeffrey Reddick 53:11
Oh, yeah, the movie is called don't look back. It was originally titled Good Samaritan. Some people might get confused by them. It's called don't look back. And it's about a group of people who see somebody getting fatally assaulted in a park. And they don't help and one of the people and it gets the video goes public, the victim's brother outs, the witnesses and somebody or something starts killing them. So our lead character is a woman named Caitlin who's gone through some trauma in her past. And she's convinced that something supernatural is after them. So she's trying to solve the mystery of who killed the guy in the park. And everybody else is like, there's a killer after us. And then she kind of ends up popping up but a lot of the scenes where the dead people are because she she's kind of seeing these supernatural signs around her that are pointing her into a direction of It's Supernatural, but you're not sure if it's in her head or not. So yeah, that was a bad elevator pitch because I kind of jumped around a little bit.

Alex Ferrari 54:09
I can't I'm gonna have to pass on this one. I can't I can't, I can't I can't finance this one. Jeffrey, I'm sorry. Yes.

Jeffrey Reddick 54:16
Five, six sentences. And, but, but yeah, it's, um, it was it was a really fun film to make. And, you know, again, what was great for me too, is I got to, I just had a lot of creative control, like, again, and there were definitely areas like, with locations and things like that, where we had to, you know, compromise because we didn't have a budget to do certain things. But, you know, I got to work with a wonderful cast. You know, our lead Courtney Bell is a wonderfully talented black actress. And, you know, I got to find the Best Actress for the film who was, you know, a black actress, which, you know, if I done this with a studio, the people that they were throwing at me were, were not, they were like, you know, and you know, that's, that's Always an important that's been important to me for so long because I've written, diverse cast in my films before. And they always end up being cast with all white actors and actresses. And I just tried to explain to people because again, people, when you talk about diversity, it's again, like certain, you know, hackles start rising because people start getting like defensive. But it's, it's, it's more about, you know, when people read scripts in Hollywood, or when they cast movies, their default for every character is a white actor or actress. So that's just the default for a leading, like, we'll send out a casting notice for leading ladies or leading men, and we'll say, you know, all ethnicities, and 99% of the submissions will be white actors and actresses. And even if we send out, you know, note saying, we were looking for black actors and actresses, they'll send us a lot then but then, you know, they're still throwing in more white people at us being like, look at these people first. So for certain roles, people of color are just not in people's brains, even the casting people's brains when it comes to leading roles, and so we're starting to course, correct that now. But it is frustrating when they've cast like, you know, white actors and actresses in roles that were written for people of color. And they always say, well, we just went with the best person. But I've seen so many, I've been in the rooms with casting with people casting projects, and their thinking is what is going to be the most palpable to people across the United States and across the world. And that's why they make that decision most of the time. So now we're seeing that course corrected a little bit. And I've just seen so many wonderfully gifted, lead talented actors and actors of every race, you know, white, Latino, man, you know, Asian, black, it's, there's so many talented people, that just giving people an opportunity that, you know, like Courtney would not have been cast as the lead in a horror film, if it was done by a studio, but I think what people see your performance now they're gonna be like, holy shit, who is this girl? So I'm really excited about that.

Alex Ferrari 57:00
Well, I'm looking forward for it to get to released and I will put links to all of that in the show notes. I am going to now ask you a few questions. I ask all of my guests. What are three horror screenplays every screenwriter should read?

Jeffrey Reddick 57:17
Um, well, I am going to say A Nightmare on Elm Street. I think that's a really, really strong script. I think the A because I consider aliens or a sci fi ish.

Alex Ferrari 57:31
It's it dances the line of horror I get you, I get exactly where you're coming from. There's a monster. a predator arguably is is a monster film. I mean, if you think of monsters of the Frankenstein, and Dracula of our generation is aliens and predators. Yeah. But they they danced the line between action sci fi horror. But yes, aliens. Aliens is just an amazing film period.

Jeffrey Reddick 57:54
And it's a it's such a great script. And that's a script where you can tell a director wrote the script, because when you visualize the movie, you visualize exactly what ended up on the screen. So that's how James wrote that script. But that's probably not a good rule, because I always tell screenwriters not to direct in their scripts.

Alex Ferrari 58:13
But alien, the alien script also was terrifying. Yeah, the original the original alien was terrifying as well.

Jeffrey Reddick 58:21
And what's another great script? I feel like I'm cheating because it's just like, I just think of silence the lambs to like, that was another script that I read that, you know, I'm trying to think of those obscure horror scripts. Like, you know, the scream script is really fantastic.

Alex Ferrari 58:37
Yeah, but extra ILOG extra extra cyst obviously, is is a good screenplay. jaws. I'm not sure if the screenplay is as powerful as the film. I haven't read the screenplay. Have you read the screenplay now? Yeah, I don't know if that translates. But But I think the exorcist if I remember correctly reading that script. That was pretty terrifying.

Jeffrey Reddick 58:59
Yeah, yeah.

Alex Ferrari 59:02
Okay, what advice would you give a screenwriter wanting to break into the business today?

Jeffrey Reddick 59:11
Write a lot. By, you know, reading scripts online, I think finding a genre that you're passionate about is very important, because they again, the business does tend to pigeonhole you or put you in a box based off your first kind of hit. So I think, you know, if you like, horror, if you like sci fi, feel like action. Find some of your favorite movies in that genre and find the scripts online because reading scripts will give you a lot of, you know, a lot of inspiration and, you know, even instruction on how to write stuff. So I think that's really important. And I tell people to it's like, you know, we live in an age now where people can shoot movies like 4k movies on their iPhone. And, you know, the reason you write a script is because you want to get it made. And if you're I think if you're a young screenwriter, especially surround yourself with the creative people like find a good friend of yours who's a director. You're especially if you're in like school, studying screenwriting, you know, like, I was talking to Craig Perry at UCLA to like their screenwriting class and Craig asked the class you know, screenwriters, raise your hands, directors, raise your hands. And he's like, how many of you all hang out together, and none of them did. And Craig's like, guys, you're crazy. Like, you're a writer, you should be a director, you should be hanging out with the writers because you need scripts to write. And I think people don't think that way. When you're, when you're younger, it's like you think a little bit more myopically. And I think if you think about that, you know, connecting yourself with a good director writing a really amazing short and having a director direct, it can get you a lot of attention. You know, I think that that those are the things like it's, it's continued making sure that you keep growing as a as an artist, like, have friends who will give you honest feedback, you'll, you'll find out your friends pretty quickly, you'll have the friends that hate everything you do, like, you don't need those friends to give, because they just hate it, they're gonna hate everything you do. And you don't want your mom reading your script, because she's gonna love everything you write. But you'll find that right balance that people who give you constructive criticism, and it's just be open in that to be open to learning more, because you're always going to grow as an artist.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:13
And what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

Jeffrey Reddick 1:01:21
What if I haven't learned it completely. Trying to control things that I have no control over? is, is, is the lesson of life that I still also struggle with? You know, I still try it. I try not to, but I think it's a very important lesson is to, to, you know, let go and let God because there are certain things, you know, you can beat your head against the wall for 20 years trying to do something or, or be angry about something that you have no control over and kind of letting that go as much as possible, I think, let you have a much less stressful life. And you can kind of go along with the flow of life. Like when you know, when the acting thing hit a wall for me. I didn't quit the business. I started writing, you know. So it's kind of going with that flow and seeing what life brings your way being open about. Jeffrey, I

Alex Ferrari 1:02:09
really appreciate you being on the show. Thank you so much. I want to congratulate you on making the jump from screenwriter to Writer Director and finally getting I know that's a big step. It is a big step. It's not done very often. It's definitely not done well very often. So I am I am I congratulate you. And thank you for bringing Final Destination into our into our world into the Zeitgeist. It is still very entertaining when I go back and watch those films. So thank you so much for everything you do my friend and I continue success.

Jeffrey Reddick 1:02:45
Thank you for all your support. And yeah, yeah, just now you got me all like blushy Yeah, I just really, I do. I appreciate the support. You've been a great supporter for so long. So and you know, you know, I've got your back on this side, too.

Alex Ferrari 1:02:59
Thank you, my friend. I want to thank Jeffrey for coming on the show and dropping the horrific knowledge bombs on the bulletproof screenwriting tribe today. Thank you so much, Jeffrey. Please don't forget to check out his new film, don't look back and get links to that. And anything else we spoke about in this episode, after show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/090. And if you guys haven't checked it out already, please head over to ifhacademy.com. And check out all of our amazing courses, including screenwriting courses, how to get money for your film, how to produce a film, film distribution, blueprint and so many more courses and education to help you guys on your path. So thank you again for listening. If you are going to go trick or treating, please, please be safe. And as always keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.


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George A. Romero Scripts Collection: Screenplays Download

What can be said about the legendary creator of the modern zombie myth, George A. Romero. He was single-handily responsible for launching the zombie myth we all know and enjoy today. Unfortunately, because of a mistake he never trademarked or owned the copyright to his masterpiece Night of the Living Dead. (You can read more about the horror story here)

Below are all the screenplays written by George A. Romero available online. Watch the video below to get a deeper insight into his writing process. If you find any of his missing screenplays please leave the link in the comment section.

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NIGHT OF THE LIVING DEAD (1968)

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DAY OF THE DEAD (1985)

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BPS 089: Has PIXAR Lost Its Storytelling Magic with Dean Movshovitz

Ever wonder how Pixar continuously puts out hit after hit? What is the story secret sauce that has created one of Hollywood’s most amazing track records? Today’s guest might be able to shed some light on the answer. On the show, we have screenwriter and author Dean Movshovitz. Dean wrote the best-selling book Pixar Storytelling: Rules for Effective Storytelling Based on Pixar’s Greatest Films.

PIXAR STORYTELLING is the first book to offer an in-depth analysis of the screenwriting techniques and patterns that make Pixar’s immensely popular classic films so successful and moving. Each chapter of the book explores an aspect of storytelling that Pixar excels at. Learn what Pixar’s core story ideas all have in common, how they create compelling, moving conflict, and what makes their films’ resolutions so emotionally satisfying.

First released in October 2015, the book has sold over 15,000 copies without any marketing or PR. PIXAR STORYTELLING is taught on campuses worldwide, from Norway to Argentina, to Northwestern’s Qatar extension, and is cited in works and books from Finland to the US to Russia. It has been translated into Vietnamese and is being translated into Russian.

PIXAR STORYTELLING has proven to be an inspiring, insightful, approachable, and popular book, which can be used as a gift, a manual, and a textbook

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Alex Ferrari 0:49
I'd like to welcome the show Dean Movshovitz, how are you doing?

Dean Movshovitz 2:36
I'm good. It's great to see you. Great to be here.

Alex Ferrari 2:39
Thank you so much for being on the show. I know we've been trying to do this interview for I met I met you at the ESA events, what, like a year ago?

Dean Movshovitz 2:48
Yeah, pretty much

Alex Ferrari 2:50
About a year ago, and we've been traveling between their schedule and my schedule we've been it's been crazy. But you're finally here. And we're ready to talk all things Pixar, which is based on your amazing bestselling book, Pixar storytelling, which we were talking about earlier, I can't believe no one sat down and wrote a book about how Pixar tells their stories. Like that's insane. But you were first. I was of course.

Dean Movshovitz 3:13
Nowthere's another one out there,

Alex Ferrari 3:14
Which was shot which was shown that it will shall remain nameless.

Dean Movshovitz 3:18
Exactly. But I was the first when it came out. There was nothing else that talked about Pixar that way.

Alex Ferrari 3:26
Now. And when you directed all the films yourself, how was that?

Dean Movshovitz 3:31
Like divine inspiration? Sort of was like, you know, writing from God,

Alex Ferrari 3:38
it's just, it's like conversations with God. It's just just straight, just straight. Yeah. Toy Story came to you that way I understand. We joke because there are people out there who think that you've worked with Pixar, but you're angling this book is based on analysis of how they tell their stories. So to be very clear, you are you do not work for Pixar or Disney. But you have broken down their secret sauce, if you will. Yeah.

Dean Movshovitz 4:05
It's really reverse engineering to try and figure out what makes them so special why they work so well why they have this rivard revered place and all of our hearts.

Alex Ferrari 4:16
Yeah, so that's my first question is why are Pixar film so good. I mean, there's very few companies and studios who have their track record.

Dean Movshovitz 4:25
I mean, to be fair, the number one reason is really the company culture which which I don't get too much into in my book My book is more about how you know the nuts and bolts way you can do that as one person at home alone with doesn't have all of the resources. But we have to admit that it's their standards like their when you see their movies, you see how every line every bit part is worked on to be as good as it can be to be to to be utilized in the best way in a repetitive way. Like nothing is just there. They really work. Hard to make every element, serve the theme, or serve the story have its own arc have its own sort of life. And I think that's a standard that you need to hold yourself to. I think, as writers, we often especially something is working, it's sometimes hard to push yourself to make it not just work would be great. And the other thing is their flexibility and the brain trust everyone knows about. And my personally favorite story, or most inspiring story is how they storyboarded most of inside out for like a year, year and a half, before they and they did that when fear was the main antagonist. And after a year, year and a half of working on it, they realized, Oh, no, no, no, this is not what it should be. It should actually be sadness, and went and redid the whole thing and reshaped the whole story, which a lot of studios wouldn't do or wouldn't have the flexibility and the motivation and the values to do that. And I think that mentality is something every writer should adopt.

Alex Ferrari 6:05
Yeah. And can you talk a little bit about the brain trust because I know you and I know what the brain trust is. But a lot of people don't understand that. That's how stuff gets done over a Pixar.

Dean Movshovitz 6:16
Oh, yeah, of course. So what they really have is all the pillars used to be john Lasseter. Now, he's not there, but all the top Pixar filmmakers, you know, Pete Docter, and Brad Bird, even though I don't know who's still there, and who's not. But basically, all those directors of Andrew Stanton for sure. They meet every couple of months with every project and the people working on this project will present a real or a couple of scenes or a storyboarded, you know, sequence or act. And they will just all go into it and talk about it. And in Ed catmull his book where he talks about their company culture that really embraces failure and embraces criticism, and its people go into those meetings ready to discuss anything, anything is up for grabs. And you know, it's kind of like a in in TV shows where you have a writers room, and you have a lot more ideas to draw from and a lot more input. And I think it definitely makes their films richer. And I also was in a panel and I heard their head of development, talk about the research that goes into living in the very beginning, when they just have a concept, they will often give the director, often their ideas, start with the directors, even if they later hire a different writer, who will have an area where they want to do like I remember they talked about cocoa, how he set up three different rooms, each one with a different idea, I don't know where the other two, but one of them was cocoa and that room was filled with sort of Day of the Dead foods and those, remember the word those presentations, they have the dead people with the food and the picture. And sort of all of that vibe and the way he talked about that, and his ideas about that were so passionate and rich, that the brain just went, you should go for that. So there's a lot of work into very, you know, seed of the idea, the very seed of the concept before you even move ahead. It's like, it's the to maybe hardest thing as a writer on one hand, to really work very hard on the concept before you go to an outline or treatment or script. And on the flip side, to have the flexibility and honesty and, and values and ambition to even when you have everything set beautifully to be able to go like No, you know what, this can be better. Or this is how it should be even if it means really breaking a lot of a story in you.

Alex Ferrari 8:55
Yeah, I have a friend of mine who's an animator over at Disney and at Disney Studios and a lot and I've been he's been there since Lord like princess in the frog he worked on yours years ago. And he's also worked on frozen and Zootopia and some other big ones as well. And it never ceases to amaze me that they will completely scrap an entire story and go back and he's shown me told me that the influence that Pixar is culture has had on on Disney Studios. And did you notice like Disney movies have gotten much, much better? Over the years much, much better over the years ever considered? Like Zootopia is, I think is a masterpiece. I mean, what they did and and, and he told me what the original ideas were they and he's in the desert and they were just completely different. Like the animals were much more vicious. They all had collars on that would determine that they would like if you go into the wrong area, it would sting like they had a bunch of stuff. And they and they would like fully design. Like there's an entire aisle. saw the the artwork for tangled. When it was bait like tangled entire world was based on Da Vinci's designs, it was dening to see. And they had been working on tangled for a decade, that the guy who was a great artist there, I forgot what the artist was the director. But for whatever reason it, it changed, and all of a sudden, it turned. But a lot of that has to do with Pixar influence on them and in the story structure, because they will, they will make a complete 180. Whereas a studio, you really can't if you're doing a live action, it's very too many too many think gears are moving, where it's an animation, especially with all that pre pre pro that they do, you can shift if you want to.

Dean Movshovitz 10:49
Yeah, and even if you can, sometimes other studios have a lot more value on this is when we want to release it. This is really nice. We want it out. And if you see they push their movies very often.

Alex Ferrari 11:01
Now, what does Pixar look for when choosing an idea for a film?

Dean Movshovitz 11:08
choosing an idea? Well, it seems to me if you look at her films are two main things. The first is a world of very, very rich world, a world that offers you a lot of characters and a lot of danger when you think of superheroes, toys, the ocean, the world of the dead, the inside of your brain, these are worlds that are immediately very rich, like you can immediately imagine you almost real What do you think of the logline of insight out there could be 50 different elements they could use in the brain or in the person that it didn't even put in this to scrap list of that movie must be, you know, exciting and enticing. So, one part of it is really a world that is rich, and you can explore and has some danger of constantly. But then the other side is to really find emotional states. My favorite example is Toy Story. Because you start with Oh, the world of toys a child's toy that's so exciting. It's such a rich idea. And you know, kids would relate to it. But when you think about it, the movie, the real outliner what's really makes us love that movie is what happens when a child's favorite toy is thrown aside for a newer tie. And that is, you know, hurdle. Rudel. Yeah, it's heartbreaking.

Alex Ferrari 12:39
I mean, that song in Toy Story,

Dean Movshovitz 12:42
dance drama, it could be an indie drama, you know, it's like, it's like a brother, the unfavored brother, right,

Alex Ferrari 12:49
though that Sundance I mean, the Sundance the Toy Story to song about being left on the side of the road and stuff. I'm like, oh, like you just are devastated. Listen to that. I mean, listen, the first, what is it the first four minutes or five minutes of up is probably the best representation of a human relationship I've ever seen. The history of like, it's amazing. And how and how do you do it? How do you go in with up and pitch up? Like, we're gonna do a movie about an old dude, Boy Scout, and a house with balloons in it. And it's just like, the marketing department must have had a field day like, you want us to sell like, little dolls of an old angry guy. Which they did, by the way, but

Dean Movshovitz 13:37
I mean, up, I know, it started something's very, very, very different. I don't remember the details, but sort of something very, very different. And I wonder like, and they started talking about sort of the book, like, because that image of the house with the balloons is such a great image. It's so amazing. And they bet they I bet it could be wrong, that they had that first. And they're like, Okay, so how do we justify that? And all of that beautiful opening in is, is sort of all of the only explanation I can imagine for someone tying a balloon and being so connected to their house. You know, that ridiculous thing of flying away with your house becomes so natural when you see that opening and what that house means and everything that comes from that.

Alex Ferrari 14:29
Yeah, I mean, they they have done what Hitchcock said he wish he could do which is like literally play a piano key and hit an emotion if you want him to cry. You hit this button if you want him to laugh, you hit this button. Pixar films do that in a way like I mean, personally, one of my favorite Pixar says Coco, like I absolutely love cocoa and how they did in the music and the visuals. It's just all so beautiful. In your chest like you know, I see myself as a grown man like tearing up content. stantly ever these movies, Wally. I mean cheese is the guy doesn't even talk. And you completely are invested in what happens to this little trash can. It's like so they're so brilliant in the way they do it is remarkable.

Dean Movshovitz 15:16
My favorite is Toy Story three the ending of Toy Story I, I just lapse.

Alex Ferrari 15:23
No, absolutely. I mean, it's, it's, um, and, and to be fair, like, you know, we always talk about pictures, hits and they're, they definitely outweigh the ones that didn't do as well and in my like one of the ones that I saw, besides cars to which we should not discuss, but but The Good Dinosaur, I thought Good Dinosaur failed, not only in the box office, but it failed every major Pixar thing, like when I saw a good story a good time. So I was like, this, this isn't a Pixar film. This feels like something else. I don't understand. What what what went wrong on that in that movie, in your opinion.

Dean Movshovitz 16:05
I mean, first off, I want to say that I do cried twice in the good dinosaur. Like

Alex Ferrari 16:09
there's moments there's, there's glimpses there's glimpses of Pixar, but it's definitely not a full package.

Dean Movshovitz 16:16
So the Pixar formula, like the structure they have is really balancing three different stories in each movie. One is action adventure. It's Indiana Jones. It's it's part of that Caribbean, it's just life or death. You know, it's joy, writing like tower of boyfriend's to get to the train. It's all that crazy stuff. Then they have a bonding story, which is you know, it's Woody and Buzz it's Carl and the boys and and Russell The Boy Scout, right? It's two people who who have deep emotional reasons why they can't coexist. Woody and Buzz can't coexist. One doesn't understand that he is that he's a toy. And the end Woody. When he sees buzz, he sees his irrelevancy. Right, they can be together until they grow. And then the third thing is this sort of emotional change this sort of education or attention, a plot that a character goes inside themselves. And I think the good dinosaur, minimize a lot of the action adventure, like there's some of that there. Remember, flood, I remember, there's this paradox souls that are evil, but it doesn't have that same level of tension and action that some of the other movies have. And I think it makes it feel a little slider. And, and the same thing with the bonding part, there is this great moment with the human child, those are my favorite moments. But it doesn't, I don't think it has the same sort of complexity and richness that some of their other movies create between their conflicting characters. And then when you get to the third marker of growth, I remember Arlo was an inventor. So I think he had that thing about making your mark or overcoming his fear. And, and that's sort of what the whole thing is hanged on. But I think again, it's not something as almost as mature I want to stare as complicated as some of the other examples like Woody learning to give up a spot or joy learning to accept sadness into her life and into Riley's life like those. Those things are adult emotions, those things are sort of things adults deal with Mike in Monsters University, failing giving up on his life dream, you know, so I think, and Arliss Ark is a little more, I'd say, oriented towards children, like as a as a teenager as an adult, his art doesn't resonate with the same strength.

Alex Ferrari 18:58
Yeah, as we're talking, I'm going back in through my head. I'm like, okay, Pixar films, and I'm going going, I'm just clicking them off. And the majority of them do have those characters that can't get along. Or they can't live with each other or like even Wally has Eve who they're opposites. They're generally opposites, either opposites and they can't get along and generally opposites don't get along at the beginning and they figure a way out to come towards the end. Incredibles I'm not sure about I know cars had.

Dean Movshovitz 19:28
So

Alex Ferrari 19:29
yeah, yeah, but that's also that was the first kind of outside the box outside of the brain trust because they brought Brad Bird in from the outside to do that, so that's why it makes sense that that film was kind of on its has its own thing, but even cars with Mater and

Dean Movshovitz 19:45
so credit on his films, I'm sorry when Pixar films have like seven rock credit writers between story and screenplay. Brad Bird is the only one where he right he has the sole credit. Right exactly. So

Alex Ferrari 19:57
his his stuff is a little bit Different than the other Pixar films, but everything else like, generally speaking, like in cocoa, you know, the his, his his uncle, his dad eventually, but it was always a spoiler. But, but those kind of, but those characters in your right and there is generally always massive action adventure even in Toy Story. I mean, the the there's constant adventures and like but the adventure is going downstairs or out a window. But it's still the stakes are extremely high. Wally had a lot of that as well. I mean, it's you start analyzing it because I know a lot of people listening right now. I mean, most people listening should have at least seen one if not all Pixar films. They're just those kind of films. But it is when you start to deconstruct them. This way it starts taking on a little bit different light. Now, what are the themes that Pixar goes back to again and again? And why do they do it?

Dean Movshovitz 21:00
I was gonna touch on this when you talked about me and you crying like children? I think one of the crucial reasons that that happened is the themes they choose. If you think about, you know, Disney movies or general movies we see, they don't always touch on the themes. Pixar talks about Pixar talks a lot about death. About Yeah. And not not even like The Lion King way where Lion King has a death in it. But it's a coming of age story. Toy Story three is about aging in a way it's about. Yeah, it's about time not coming back. Inside Out is about depression. It's about the cost of having complicated emotions and how life will never be as simple as it was when we were children. I mean, Toy Story

Alex Ferrari 22:01
for Toy Story for which I just saw recently. I mean, yeah, it's brutal at the end, and I get guys, by the way, it's just spoiler alert from this point on. I mean, anything we're gonna just I mean, if you haven't seen these movies, I'm sorry. But um, but yeah, the end of that, like, what do you leave, and you just like, that's another stage of life where you leave your family you go off and you know, you leave your friends that you made when you were when you were younger? You know that many people hold on to friendships, all their life, those are very special relationships, because people change times change situations change. Finding Nemo perfect example as well.

Dean Movshovitz 22:39
About parenthood my mom raised me by herself, it was just me and her. And she maybe was a little overprotective of thought at times. And when we start Finding Nemo and she told me because there is this line that Dori has where she says like, but if you don't if anything happened to him, how would anything ever happened to them? And my mom gas my mom gas one day she will will quote that line to me and talk about the effect it had on her because pictures about parenting and Finding Nemo is about parenting and inside out you know? She talks about how she has to be their happy little girl and in the end is her saying that she can't be that those are things that a few filmmakers much less than a commercial children oriented high budget you know film will dare touch and dare touch so honestly Yeah, that's

Alex Ferrari 23:41
one thing Pixar does honest it's authentic and honest. I mean, they they really really they're they're brutal they're absolutely the stuff that oh god and inside out when what's his name dies? Oh my Oh, what's this big as a big bond? What

Dean Movshovitz 23:58
is it? bond? Yeah, big

Alex Ferrari 24:00
but when big bond fail I'm like a bawling and I'm like, oh, Mike like was sober because you go back to either your own imaginary friend. Or when you're in Toy Story, you go back to that toy that you left at the side of, or somewhere you donated to the to the to the goodwill or something. And you're just like, you feel terrible. So now I like anytime my daughters are like gonna throw something away. I'm like, No, no, no, they'll throw that away. We'll put them in the garage. Put them in the garage. We can't just throw it away. You could give it a home if you can find someone for him but we don't just gonna give it to the goodwill. That's just it's so ridiculous.

Dean Movshovitz 24:42
In a car now after Toy Story three, you're scared to give your toys to daycare?

Alex Ferrari 24:46
No, exactly. Because it's such a brilliant transition from like, where will toys go? Will they go to daycare and the the politics inside of daycare and what happens in that? Did you ever see the commercial Spike Jonze director, this amazing commercial for IKEA. It was years ago and it was the story of a lamp which which just makes makes perfect sense here with it's exactly the same lamp from Pixar that what are the I forgot the name of those lamps. But you go through the life of this lamp with this person like oh, it's wearing this and the different things that happened and at the end it she unplugs it and puts it on the side of the on the side of the road like in the garbage like in a city like right there so it could be thrown away. And then a new lamp gets put on. And you just and then they start like closing in on this let there's no dialogue in the entire thing. And you just start closing in. And you feel horrible for the lamp until this guy walking by goes What's wrong with you? It's just a lamp. It's just, it has no feelings. The new lamp is much better go home. I was just oh my god. It's one of the most brilliant commercials I've ever seen. Oh, it's typing IKEA lamp commercial on Google. It is amazing. But the guy had like this Swedish accent for IKEA. And he's like, what's wrong with you? It has no feelings. What's the new one is much better. But that's the power of storytelling. Like you felt you felt something for an inanimate object. And I mean, for God's sakes Toy Story is the best example of that all the Toy Story films are such an amazing example. Because now you as a grown man, and me as a grown man will look at our toys from our childhood or look at our daughter's toys and just maybe what if when we close the door I don't want my pork. It's amazing. But that's the power of really powerful storytelling. Now, a Pixar has some amazing characters. What is their trick on creating these characters that just stick with us? like Woody and Buzz? You know, like no Dory, like they these characters? How are they make these characters so rich and sticky?

Dean Movshovitz 27:13
Well, one of the main things for me that I find is all of their care, characters care so deeply about something, they all have something that without it, life is meaningless. Like one of the smartest decisions they made in developing Toy Story is saying, oh, there's nothing that toy wants more than to be played with. That premise is the engine for all of those films. And it seems natural to us. But you can imagine different ways to go about that, like, maybe just don't want to be left alone. Maybe it's more about like you it's not, it's not natural, it's not an accident, it's a choice. And that choice drives all the emotional journeys, like when we cry those movies is because we know how much getting played with means to woody means to Jessie means to lock so even it's Andy doing all of their films, you know, obviously Finding Nemo have the connection to the house joy and that opening, right where you see how Riley's mind develops. Joy says it's my job in life to keep this girl happy. When this girl is unhappy, I as a person, I'm failing, you know? And they do. I think a lot of times when people develop a story, they find what the character wants, or they find a problem the character have. But they don't necessarily set up why it's so important to them or how deeply it's ingrained into their identity. Pictures characters cannot live without the things Pixar then takes away from them.

Alex Ferrari 28:59
Right so like Wally, his whole existence is about cleaning, putting things away, organizing and doing

Dean Movshovitz 29:10
what is the first thing we see him do right? He's cleaning all those things is alone on the planet. He has this one friend that's a cockroach that sort of goes along with him. Then he goes home and what does he do? He watches a video from Hello, Dolly. And close up if you remember that close up of his hands touching each other. Yes. In the movie. And that's what he wants and don't Eve shows up and you're like, Oh my god, this is his chance. What is another robot gonna be there? He can't fuck this up. You know, you can't screw this up. I don't know what you're

Alex Ferrari 29:45
fine. It's fine. It's fine. It's fine.

Dean Movshovitz 29:49
And that just that and think about what's working here a robot watching a scene from an old musical but it shows you how How much he yearns for love. And, and that's what they do whether it's Remy risking his life to get a spice from an old woman's house, right? Because he has to make something that's artful. They said these things that these characters can't live without.

Alex Ferrari 30:21
Yeah. And going down the line, almost every Pixar movie that I can think of there is something that the main character cannot live without your eye from Ratatouille wanting to cook, to Finding Nemo, Finding Nemo. To Wally wanting love to it's just it just you start going. This is what's wonderful about this conversation, because every time we're talking about a new concept that I go back as we're, as we're talking, I'm going back in my back of my head is going cars got it, and you just start checking off like Yep, they did it there. Yeah, they did it there. Yeah, they did it there. And it is it's fascinating to see, but they that need. I mean, it's kind of like, you know, Disney with Pinocchio, like you feel that Pinocchio wants to be a real boy. You know, that's the power of of that is especially when he goes off to that crazy Island and starts smoking and drinking and all that kind of crazy. It was a different time. It was a different. It was a different. It was crazier, crazier times. But that wanting for a character is so powerful. And I've never really thought about it that way. You're absolutely right. You never think of you start thinking going back to what I mean. If you start going back to some of the most successful films and characters of all time Luke Skywalker wants to get off he wants to get off the planet. He wants to be a star fighter. You know, and and you start you know, you start going back to all these famous movies all the main characters have this amazing powerful need that if I can't get this it's not my world is over even Tootsie like you know,

Dean Movshovitz 31:58
so funny I was thinking of like to see like before we started talking I was thinking about and this sort of relates to your question about character because what Tutsi does amazingly well which is very Pixar ish is how every character in it is a reflection of the theme and brings out some side of the lead. Like if you're talking about men women so you have you know, the director and the actor is sort of our you know, harasser is and look down women you have that one female boss you have his roommate was sort of more about his artistic side that he's neglecting. And Pixar does that to think about Incredibles, right? Every galley for has, they cannot agree about what being a superhero is none of them. So that's another good trick that Pixar often does.

Alex Ferrari 32:47
Which is what can you explain it we Every character

Dean Movshovitz 32:49
has a different point of view. Every character has a different role different function, every character different inflection of the theme. If you think about Remy and linguini they're opposites linguini has the heritage and the opportunity but no talents rarely kids or rats but has all the spirit Yeah, he's a rat in the world and then you have Cousteau and ego who are polar opposite like everyone is a different way in to to theme to the character to but my favorite line in Ratatouille

Alex Ferrari 33:25
is like it was you it was getting funny with it was it you was getting funny with the spices? The delivery of that line was so brilliant man. I mean, I like people who are listening can't see that I literally have a smile. Because I'm constantly thinking of Pixar movies in my head all the way down. And just thinking about the good times that you have watching those films. It's it's pretty remarkable. There's not any studio that I can think of that has that reaction, even Disney itself. You know, even Star Wars films don't all hit exactly the right place. Marvel is close, but even Marvel is not. You know, you will never get what you got at the end of Marvel Avengers endgame like that. It took 10 years to get there. I mean, it took 10 years to get to that specific 30 minutes of film.

Dean Movshovitz 34:19
Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 34:20
But Pixar hits that every time almost every time they're hitting that. Now how does Pixar create so much empathy in their stories?

Dean Movshovitz 34:31
It's a lot of what we talk about sort of giving that very, very deep need. I think often you really want to know why they need it. Like why is it so important to them? Wiley is really my favorite example of this because we have nothing in common with them. Like Yeah. And the first 30 minutes as you also said are silent. There's no dialogue and they have To make you love this guy, and it's really a talk about the three reasons we like both people and characters, like there's a first layer that's very superficial, where you know, maybe someone's very attractive or very confident, or you think about high school, right as a popular kids that you didn't know, but you like them because they had these like, external, discernible traits. And that can work in a movie, but it only gets you so far, and it dissipates very quickly. Movie Stars help, then you have a second layer, which is a little more intimate, it a little more personal, maybe you know, their hobbies, or maybe they have this neat little point of view, or there's something exciting about them. I always the the prologue of The Incredibles is does a great job of this where you see sort of, right, yeah, you see the two of them, in their heyday, they're flirting, they're stopping crime. And you're like, Oh, these are cool people, I enjoy hanging out with them, you know, but it's, but you know them a little more now. But the real important layer, and the one that you have to have to generate these sort of to make people cry is, is what happens when you think about how you met your best friend. Right? How you get to know those idiosyncrasies about them that don't make sense. But you know them because you're close to them, how you understand what they want, and why they want it and how it comes from. And maybe even most importantly, think maybe the main difference between a friend or a character that we love and everyone else is, we can forgive their flaws. You need to get that level of understanding of clarity of a person, so that you can look at their flaws in a way that doesn't stop you from loving them, and in a way where you're in their corner, to sort of defeat them. So when you see Wally, you don't see a robot that's cleaning the earth, you see someone who is devoted to their job, who loves their job who takes pride in it. You see someone deeply curious, because he collects all those things every day, and he does them around. You see someone who has a very good friend, a lot of friends takes care of right, he runs over him and then he's worried and then he makes sure he's okay. And do you see that deep yearning for love? And when you talk about in that way, that's every one of us. Oh, absolutely. You know, if I were left alone in a dystopic wasteland, that's the ideal life I could watch.

Alex Ferrari 37:41
Pretty much, pretty much. I mean, I remember when he got kissed by Eve in this in in space. And he just like, freezes it just like floats in the air floats in the air away. It was like, it's it's remarkable. I mean, going to Incredibles you know, I'd argue and I think a lot of people say this, but it's arguably one of the best superhero movies ever written and ever produced, you know, up there with Dark Knight Deadpool and Logan. You know, it, you know, it's just so what like the day ended, Brad Bird understood the plight of the superhero. And they were brand new superheroes we'd never heard of. And when you see Mr. Mr. Incredible in a cubicle. That is that image, that image, this giant monster is dude sitting in this little cubicle. And then he's got this little boss who's just the biggest pain in the air. How more perfect. I have an analogy for a lot of people's lives. Because I've had a boss we've had, we've all had bosses we disliked. And we all were like, I'm really a superhero. Why am I in this cubicle?

Dean Movshovitz 38:49
That's a great way of putting it. You're right. And they think, and it comes back to something they try to find in all of their ideas are like, This character is x, how can we make them the most uncomfortable? How can we torture them? If you want to call it like, if you're writing about a superhero? It's natural to have them fighting crime. That's, that's that's our comfort zone. Ironically, in a cubicle. Yeah, put him in a cubicle. That's, that's, that's a tension that that drives character, right, that drives a movie that has to be fixed and addressed before the movie is over. So

Alex Ferrari 39:27
I think i think i think DC could do something with that. Because if you take Batman and Superman and put them in a cubicle, I want to watch that movie. I want to see what happens there. Oh, it's just it's they they you also mentioned that they torture their characters they like rip the heart out of their characters. Can you discuss a little bit about that and use some examples of how they do it or why they do it.

Dean Movshovitz 39:51
It's it's it they torture them, but they torture them in a very, very specific way in a way that's very, very tailor made. If you want to think about up, maybe when I say torture, we're thinking about that opening sequence, which is very tragic and very sad. But that's, that's not an example of what I'm talking about. The way they torture Carl in an up is by giving him a kid who's upbeat, a kid who has selfless values, and a kid that needs him.

Alex Ferrari 40:26
Right, who said he was literally a Boy Scout?

Dean Movshovitz 40:29
literally a Boy Scout, right? Yeah. Because all current once after that opening is to be left alone. He's, I think, in many ways he's dead. Right? Right. He's breathing. He's alive, but he's dead. And he's stuck with this kid who forces him to sort of act in the world. And then when you get to the bad guy, I'm blanking on his name. Who wants to kill this exotic board who wants to hurt Russell is like he is forced to, to find a new purpose to live again. And that's sort of what I mean when I say torture, right? Marlin meeting Dory, is what saves him. But it's also a form of torture torture. Oh, because exactly right. She just wants to go this and do that and not think ahead and be reckless and talk to the whale? And he's like, No, no, no, this is not how we do things, right? It's it's these very smart ways of torturing their characters. Like you, you know, if you cut someone's leg, if you put them in danger, every character would separate from that right? Again, Toy Story, getting a new favorite toy and seen in Toy Story one, in Toy Story two, they have this great mechanism where he's given a chance to be in a museum, right? And he's like, Oh, you will be respected forever, you will never have to worry about being thrown away or donated, right? They set it up in the beginning of the movie with a character that's put on the shelf. And then you'll be in a museum, but you'll never have known it. No one will ever play with you. And yet, yeah. And that's toward tourists choice, right? That's something that's very hard to do. keep finding those ways.

Alex Ferrari 42:17
So so really quickly, I don't interrupt you, but because before I forget, normally, everything we've been talking about this, but you're basically giving the main character, its opposite. It's getting to its Yang. But with that specific example of woody in Toy Story two, it's not a person, which is a Ying and the Yang. It's his want is a yin and a yang, meaning he wants to be played with. But boy being, you know, encased and never have to worry about being discarded again, and being revered and honored for the rest of his life. is the opposite of being played and thrown away with. Yeah, is that accurate?

Dean Movshovitz 43:02
I think it's Mickey calls this either the lesser of two evils or the greater of two goods, which I think is always a very good way to approach dilemmas and choices because you know, if it's being played with or not being played with, what do you have a simple an answer to that, right. But what they do really well is stack the deck in a way, it's a very hard choice, and then the choice comes down to values. Here's this lovely moment where he's trying to convince him to come back, where woody rushes off the new coat of paint that's on its shoe to reveal Andy's name. And, and that's like, oh, and and Woody goes, and we go, Oh, that's right. That's who you are. That's what your values are. And they also give him Jesse, who suffered the same thing he did. But she's just like, two shades on the spectrum. more extreme. She's like, screw owners. I don't ever want to know her again, you can trust them. So she's sort of pulling him in that direction. So yeah. It just all works to serve the core dramatic question the core idea, the core flaw, it it's a funnel, everything they add is going through a funnel to that to the very core of their story and of that character.

Alex Ferrari 44:24
It twist or two is basically the godfather of animation. Because I embrace it when I saw it, I was like, well, this is it's I can't believe they made it better than Toy Story one and they did in my opinion, I think toys r two is even better than one even though one is amazing. Toys R two just hits on. So that's just a song alone. Just the

Dean Movshovitz 44:43
other three was like Toy Story three.

Alex Ferrari 44:46
That's not so much not so much. Now, let's discuss Pixar drama and conflict. I guess we kind of touched on it which is basically the drama and the conflict is throwing two opposites together. And then there was let me see. So Buzz and Woody. Buzz is delusional. So it doesn't have any wants Really? In the first he's just, yeah, I guess he's kind of he's just delusional. He doesn't even know he's a toy.

Dean Movshovitz 45:17
Yeah, that's right. But But the thing that happens is woody very clearly, as we all remember, tells him You are a toy. Right? And then it becomes this whole thing about about buzz either protecting that, or later accepting that there's that moment later on, where he tries to fly. When they're already at SIDS house and he falls. And it's an avian remember, there's like Randy Newman specifics on playing at that moment. And he needs to deal with that. Because until he deals with that, he and Woody can't work together. Now, though, he and Woody can't work together. And these room as an ecosystem will never function. So right, you're right, in the sense that because he's not the protagonist, like he doesn't have a clear one. But he has, he has a problem.

Alex Ferrari 46:08
Oh, you know, he's, he's got he's got stuff to deal with. He's got he's got he's, he's working. He's working through stuff. There's, there's no question that buzz is working through stuff. And so brilliantly done in that first in that first movie is when when buzz goes to fly the first time, because he bounces and everything, he actually flies so that the illusion continues. And that's such a, that's such a fascinating analogy for life. Because a lot of times this story that we tell ourselves, for protection for whatever, you know, that thing is for our ego. A lot of times things happen in our life that feed into that. And you see, you see I am a genius. You see, I am I am this or I am that. But when that facade comes crashing down, that is what that's what buzz has to deal with. He has to like, wait a minute, my identity has been Buzz Lightyear, this this astronaut, you know, action astronaut, and I'm like, No, I'm just a toy. That is so powerful. That theme is so powerful among other themes that are so powerful in that movie,

Dean Movshovitz 47:09
I think almost all stories. And in real life, all growth, start from a moment like that, start from a moment where your image of yourself or your set of values, failure. And to use a metaphor from inside out that I think is helpful for writers like variety has all these islands of personality. Right? Yes. Honesty, Island family Island. And I think a good script, or a good story starts when one of those islands is destroyed. When a character has one of their items destroyed, and though they need either to rebuild it, or find a new one, and figure that out. And if we talked about drama and conflict, I think Pixar does a great job of making sure that all their conflicts offer on one hand, an opportunity for destruction, you could lose everything you had, but also an opportunity for construction where, oh, you might not live your life the way you have until now. But to create something new, something stronger. Right? And they always find these great visual ways to show I think I call it the book like at first as a fly in the world. And then at the end, they always showed the new world and how it's better. In inside out. If you remember the end for control panel, it gets so much bigger. And yeah.

Alex Ferrari 48:36
Right. And they're mixed in the memories are mixed together.

Dean Movshovitz 48:39
Exactly. So you're like, oh, okay, Ryan, he won't always be happy we lost that battle. But look at all the emotional riches, she will now be able to experience. I think that

Alex Ferrari 48:54
if we can if we can get a little cycle analytic on on screenwriters. I mean, for myself, I could talk about myself, but I've seen other screenwriters and filmmakers as well go through this, which would they have this image of themselves whether that be I'm going to be the next Tarantino I'm going to be the next Sorkin I'm going to be the next big writer, and they start tailoring their writing around that idea. And when that idea doesn't germinate, because the reality sets in, because they're just like, you're trying to be the next guarantee. I'm like, Well, I'm sorry, there's no one's ever going to be the next Sorrentino, because you've got to be the best you that you can be because Tarantino became who he is because he is true to himself. He understands that he did not try to imitate not one person he imitates everybody he imitates everybody does it so masterfully that we just go Okay, that's fine. But I think for like for me, for, I don't know for my whole 20s every time a certain year would go by you would I was 23 that's when Orson Welles made Citizen Kane. Well, I guess I'm not gonna be Orson Welles. And then you hit 20 like 27 Oh, that's when that's when Spielberg made jaws.

Dean Movshovitz 50:11
Okay, oh, 38 sizzle winning and Oscar bet the rest director, what? 28? Exactly.

Alex Ferrari 50:18
So you start going through all those milestones. And as you get older, you start realizing that those are not realistic, not because you can't do it, because that's that your path. You know, those are outliers. Those are complete outliers. Those are magical moments. And that's a lot of times I feel that so many filmmakers and screenwriters get caught up in the lottery ticket, and not in just being themselves. And when you get comfortable with being yourself, which is like what most of these Pixar characters do, at the end, they get comfortable with themselves, they break the illusions of who they thought they were, like, Woody thought he had to be something right at the end, he changes all of them change NEEMO, you know, that anemos dad, and everybody changes to finally going, Oh, this is who I really am, as opposed to the illusion. And that's an extremely painful process in life. extremely painful. It could be from when you were a kid, and you think you're the hot the hot shit of the moment, and the girl just rejects you, Boom, crash, the island that you're talking about is this very, very quickly. And that is the process that you go through life. But I think in a creative standpoint, I think so many of us have these illusions, I think we grab onto them. And please let me know what you think. You grab onto these illusions you grab onto these kind of constructs, as a defense mechanism. Oh, yeah.

Dean Movshovitz 51:46
Yeah, it's I think someone talked about the difference between fixed mentality and growth mentality, right? You know that, right? So fixed mentality is I'm talented, I'm smart. I'm a good writer, I'm growth mentality says is not occupied doesn't care how good you are, it only cares about making your work better. Right? And, and this is crucial, I think, when it comes to criticism, because if you approach criticism with this need, that could be you know, unconscious, or almost unconscious, like, I need to protect my image of myself as a good writer, then criticism is painful. Because you're constantly negotiating, what does it say about me? What's this? What does this mean? Where am I on that timeline. But if you, if you try to get to that growth mentality, then a criticism is a gift. Even if you don't agree with it, it's, it's, it points you towards what matters, or it makes you sharpen, which you think is right, you'll you go like, Oh, no, no, no, this is right, because XYZ and I can double down on that, like, you know, it's a whole different issue. But when you adopt a different mentality, it frees you from the need to protect that image. And that lets you grow that that to accept criticism that lets you you know, toss away that brilliant scene you wrote and write something new. Instead, it frees you to write a first draft, that's bad, because you're not worried about being a good writer, we're just we're worried about getting to this project. It is. It's instrumental, I think, to free yourself from that need. And, and to go off what you said about Pixar, Pixar characters learning to accept themselves. I think they also accept learn to accept their limitations.

Alex Ferrari 53:36
Right? And that's also very difficult because the ego does not like that at all, you know, especially when you're younger. Especially when you're younger, you really think like, no, look, I had a conversation with myself, I'm like, I should be at the Oscars by at least 25. You know, and then when 25 like, no, 3030 I gotta move to LA, you know, and then, and then 30, okay, with really like, 35 really. And then I actually had clients in my edit suite that turned to me and like, I'll see you at the Oscars next year with this movie. The delusion was so great in their mind that they, the construct that they built around that ego in the in the image that they had in their head. It was so they needed it so much. And then that's when fights occur. That's when, you know, conflict happens a lot of times because if you threaten that image, and it happens in the Pixar movies, everything Woody, Woody literally becomes violent. Towards he kicks them out of the

Dean Movshovitz 54:40
room. If he's not Andy's favorite toy, he has no idea who he is. He exists.

Alex Ferrari 54:46
Right and it's, it's an I hope we are discussing this which is Pixar, non Pixar kind of stuff. But it all works into character because that is why Pixar is characters and stories. touches so much because it is is close to the struggle and all good movies were written Well, it's the struggle that we go through as humans throughout through our lives. And when you see that authenticity, you are attracted to it like a moth to a flame. And that's why Pixar I feel that Pixar films resonates so much internationally. Oh, yeah,

Dean Movshovitz 55:21
clearly. Yeah. I think you talked about pain earlier. And I think that if you want to measure conflict, it's like, oh, does my script and have enough conflict? You need to measure it by how much pain your character is. That that's the that's the measuring unit. And, and to be fair, when I tried to think about the difference between Pixar and Disney, right, why you immediately know when when a movie is a Disney movie, and when you meet you know, it's a Pixar movie, because they're both on the surface similar, right? And legacy travelers that you mentioned, a lot more Pixar than Disney.

Alex Ferrari 55:57
Oh, absolutely. It's one of their it's one of their best animated films, in my opinion. Like I love frozen too much more than frozen when I thought frozen one was, but it did, obviously, what do I know? My daughter's bought five dresses. So they did okay. But um, but Zootopia Big Hero six was also wonderful, but it's very Pixar ish. Big Hero six is very, very Pixar ish.

Dean Movshovitz 56:23
And it's not even talking about quality like given stories, these bets are like Lion King Lion King is great. Doesn't feel like Pixar. And I think the difference is Disney films are more than mean is in the best way possible. There's a fairy tale. The characters are archetypes. They're abstract, they represent something, it's these coming of age, it's family. It's stuff like that. Pixar tries to feel realistic, right? The characters aren't archetypes in that way. They're they feel like they exist in our world, just in corners, we don't see or don't know. But they they feel they feel like us. They feel like a work place. They feel like you know,

Alex Ferrari 57:08
they're not kings and queens other than other than brave, and even brave, you really identify with I forgot her name but the princess because she's like, oppressed that she wants to get free. Yeah. And then, and that is also mixing it with relationships with your mother and your parents and all of that stuff. And it's just, and then the whole there's so many layers. Yeah, and to be fair,

Dean Movshovitz 57:32
I love great, I think brave is is underappreciated, but it's one of their movies that didn't do as well. I always when she when she talks her mother at the end and the sun comes up. I always cry but but I know a lot of people consider it like second tier Pixar. And I think it's partially because of this thing where it feels like 10% more of a fairy tale than Pixar sort of realistic adult complex characters and emotions and issues.

Alex Ferrari 58:03
What did you think of the latest Pixar film? I forgot the name of it.

Dean Movshovitz 58:06
Well, that's one. Oh, onward.

Alex Ferrari 58:08
onward. What did you feel about onward because I saw onward. I liked I liked it. And I could see a lot of I mean, the dad style, the dad stuff, and not at the end and all of that stuff. But it was it didn't resonate like Wally, it didn't resonate, like inside out. But it had its moments. It's It's better than good dinosaur, in my opinion. And it's still a quality Pixar film. But it It didn't hit exact like in stock cocoa. So why is that you? And that's just my opinion on what you thought of it?

Dean Movshovitz 58:42
Well, I'm sort of in the same space as you I'm a little biased with onward because my father died when I was very young.

Alex Ferrari 58:49
So connection.

Dean Movshovitz 58:51
But ironically, it made me have the opposite reaction, because I was like, Oh, that's not what I that's not a reaction I would have would have no way I would go meet him without bringing my mother along. Because I find that just to be self like, there's stuff like that that made a little harder for me. But to answer more concisely to your question, I think the lead wasn't didn't have a deep enough want or need like yes, he wants to connect with his father, but he didn't have that personality flaw we've been talking about. Like you see him not being able to talk to the girl at school or not being able to not having confidence. That's something we've seen so many times and so many other films. Correct and it works. You like him, you're on the journey. The moment when he goes through the list and realize it's been his brother is deep and it's profound right in what it says about appreciating the family you're with and the people who are there for you. I love that I have a rush of emotion and tears when that moment happens. But I think the lead character and is not as you niQ and their flaw isn't as neatly tied to their journey, right? meeting his father all this, it doesn't quite tie to the problem he has in the beginning. And I think those things sort of keep it from reaching its full potential. I also think that the world they created, which is fun and funny and interesting. I think it could have been explored further, I think it could have had, again, if you think about Monsters, Inc, right? We have that neat relationship, like, screams run this, you know, beautiful. These little assumptions or rules, toys of being played with, right, that make the world tick.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:47
There wasn't anything like that in that. I don't remember that.

Dean Movshovitz 1:00:49
Yeah. It talks about how they lost the magic and there's some stuff about you know, but it didn't quite. It wasn't hammered home. I think it wasn't.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:00
Yeah, I see what you're saying. But it's not there is that which is the whole magic and I lost the magic. And it was, he talked about it, like it's in its past and stuff. It but it's not as powerful as like, all toys want to be played with. Everything runs on screams, where then laughter is 10 times or 20 times as fast as good, you know. And that twist is I mean, it's just so it's, it's remarkable. It's a remarkable way to look at things. Now I want to touch one more thing before we go. villains. Ah, pics, Pixar villains. Can you talk a little bit of how Pixar creates those villains? Because in my mind, there aren't any villains that I can think of that steal the show. The protagonist generally is the one who steal like Darth Vader steals the show. Yeah, yeah. Hannibal Lecter stole the show like it completely. But in Pixar, the villains are good. Like an Incredibles. He was great. The kid and it was really complex. But they don't steal the show. What What, what is a Pixar villain?

Dean Movshovitz 1:02:10
Well, I think that's actually a great point that I haven't quite thought of that way. And I think the main reason is because Pixar often places the bulk of the antagonism on what I call a troublesome villain or a troublesome antagonist. And that's someone who isn't evil isn't malicious. Someone means well, but he's just in the protagonists way, like Buzz and Woody, right, but isn't Woody's way. He's his main form of conflict. He's in no way shape or form of villain.

Alex Ferrari 1:02:43
There really isn't a villain other than what's this kid that that crazy kid across the Yeah. Said is is this close to him this week? And he gets what he deserves. That's all I'm saying.

Dean Movshovitz 1:02:54
Yeah. So we think they often even up has a clear villain, right? Right isn't a month.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:01
Exactly. I don't remember his name. The see though is he like, like, I can picture him and I know he has the dogs. And that was it. I don't remember. But I remember the bird squirrel. The kid the block. The dollar is great. All of that I remember the villa is kind of like in the background.

Dean Movshovitz 1:03:20
Because most of the conflict in that movie is between him and the kid or him himself and a lot of nature. There's a lot of like talk about you know, same thing with Finding Nemo right. So a lot about the ocean the obstacles, and when the two does have a villain they are very often so you humanize lotso who's as evil a villain as Pixar may have made Yeah, it's that amazing flashback about how he was left out. They made hacking equals replaced and you know, and then he also becomes a mirror image of woody who's has the same fears. And and when you watch those who are with you like Oh, if woody doesn't get over Andy, he could become lotsa, right? So even when they have someone who's more nefarious, they often give them very human reasons for why they're doing it. And I think my favorite Pixar villain who's also a villain is Anton ego, right? Who's really designed as like, even I broke it down for a lecture I gave and there's a top shot of his office and it's the shape of a coffin. You know, it the first minutes of the film is introduced as the grim eater like he's really

Alex Ferrari 1:04:43
so good. So yeah, but he ends up not being a villain. That was the bed really, which is brilliant in Ratatouille is just so it's, it's fascinating, but I've always been, I've always heard and I've had so many, you know, amazing guest on the show who knows story and screenwriters and consultants and, and scholars. And the consensus is in order to have a good protagonist, you need a good antagonist. But Pixar kind of breaks that rule.

Dean Movshovitz 1:05:15
So I would love that definition. You don't necessarily need a good antagonist, you need good antagonistic forces, correct?

Alex Ferrari 1:05:23
Yeah, because finding the Finding Nemo is a perfect example. There is absolutely no villain in that movie. There's nothing that's there's a girl there is the little girl with that said, That's. Yeah, but that's basically said, it's like, it's not a villain. It's just it's a little girl who's doing what a little girl does? Yeah. Isn't he said his nature. He's he's on the different spectrum of nature, meaning that he's a little bit you know, you know, but how many of us don't know that kid? Yeah.

Dean Movshovitz 1:05:57
So yeah, so they always have these forces, but not necessarily a clear cut villain. And I think that it goes back very much to what we talked about what makes them unique. Because when you make a story, you have a limited amount of real estate, right? And the more time you spend on, you know, a Dr. Evil villain is time you're not spending with conflict that brings out your character, or with that troublesome antagonist who's a friend and an ally, but you can bond with them. And then both of you have to grow, right? It's less ways of developing the world I think about inside out right? Where you have maybe that clown or you have all these other things, but a lot of it is physical, and the main antagonist to make them antagonist is sadness. Right? She's the one who's stopping joy from making writing happy, and

Alex Ferrari 1:06:50
pushy. So passive aggressive. She's so passive aggressive isn't even funny. She's not like twirling her. She's just like, I'm sad. This is what I do. I'm sorry.

Dean Movshovitz 1:07:01
I mean, when you think about inside out the problem, and inside out, is that joy refuses to lead writing. I'd be happy if at the beginning of the film, don't like oh, yeah, sure, no problem. That would be sad. There'd be no movie. She is. She's the villain. But But the problem is with her. And so to an extent does that in a lot of their movies, the problem the real problem, right? Like Bug's Life has the grasshoppers, but I think the more Pixar went on, the more they went away from those real real villains. And even in Wally, right, where you have that auto pilot auto,

Alex Ferrari 1:07:39
yeah, the how, basically how,

Dean Movshovitz 1:07:41
yeah, basically how he's also he's trying to protect humanity, right. It's from a good place. And, and eventually they defeat him, of course, but he represents. He's an opposite of Wally in many ways. And if he had all the information, if he believed that Earth had a chance, he would let them come back. He just doesn't think they have a chance.

Alex Ferrari 1:08:06
It's It's remarkable, and I'm thinking of films in the Zeitgeist that have this non villain esque you know, because obviously Star Wars has Darth Vader. It's such a clear archetypal, you know, Hero's Journey story, but you look at a movie like Forrest Gump. I mean, for Forrest Gump. It's very Pixar esque. In the in its in its storytelling. I mean, without the drugs and the sex and stuff. But but the but there is no villain. Jenny is the closest thing we have to a villain and oh, no, listen, listen. Listen. Listen, we can have a conversation Jedi Jedi. Look if Jenny was out of forest his life completely. Yeah, you know? No, but Jenny is this close, like I said, as close to a villainous thing. And it's not something that she's trying to hurt forest. She's just who she is. She has sadness, doing what sadness does. And she's been doing it because of all of the baggage and things that she dealt with as a child that she carries along throughout her entire life. But Forrest, his main antagonist is the world who doesn't understand understand him. He just goes, you know, just completely oblivious to life. Just and in many ways, you know, I

Dean Movshovitz 1:09:22
never thought about it because it was just about as you were talking, I was like, What is Forrest Gump want? What is what is driving it? Like all these things we're talking about? It'd be you'd be hard pressed to say Oh, Forrest Gump deeply wants it maybe Jenny but even that doesn't you know, I don't think I wouldn't say the drive the whole film. And the way you said it with the world as an antagonist. I would say Forrest Gump is watching scene after scene of Forrest Gump goes to somewhere that won't accept them or that he shouldn't belong where that he shouldn't thrive at and finding a way, either through his sort of earnestness or through luck, where he does thrive there. Like that's literally what happens the entire movie scene.

Alex Ferrari 1:10:00
Yeah, the entire movie he just fails up. He failed. And that's I think one of the things that can't be good and it's also if you take the historical aspect out of Forrest Gump the story doesn't work like the, the leveling up constant like, Okay, he's a great football player why cuz he runs Why did he run because he ran away from bullies is just something he did. And then that takes him to okay now he went to Vietnam, how did he get there? Oh, here's Red Bull, and he meets three presidents. And he does. Like, if you take those aspects out within the story doesn't have, you know, it's just a dude just walking through life. But because everything gets amped up constantly like and we invested in this little fruit company called Apple, and we don't have to worry about money no more. Like it's it's a it's almost a dream like thing because you're like, man, wouldn't it be amazing if, if our if you know, as the person listens, like, wouldn't it be amazing to go through life? just constantly just winning without even trying? Yeah, but the one thing he can't win that

Dean Movshovitz 1:10:57
you're so vulnerable, like he succeeds, but he's also he's so

Alex Ferrari 1:11:00
yeah. But the one thing that he can't, the thing that he struggles for is Jenny. Yeah, Jen is the only thing he can't, it doesn't fall into his lap. Everything else falls into his lap, right, Jenny does not fall into his lap. And that is basically the arc like, you know, without Jenny, there's no movie. And if and Lieutenant Dan is just the whatchamacallit. He's he the

Dean Movshovitz 1:11:26
antagonist

Alex Ferrari 1:11:26
Yeah, ally antagonists exactly through the whole thing. And he just kind of he doesn't really affect full force doesn't he changes but he doesn't change.

Dean Movshovitz 1:11:37
Or it doesn't change? No, I mean, he changes.

Alex Ferrari 1:11:41
Oh, everybody else around him changes.

Dean Movshovitz 1:11:42
Exactly. Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 1:11:43
Even his mom, every every every character he touches changes perception thing. But so going back to Pixar, it is as close to a Pixar film as I could think of in the in the real world.

Dean Movshovitz 1:11:56
Yeah, yeah, that's true. I'm a fan. Think about movies, other movies don't have villains. And one movie that came to mind is, in a way, ordinary people. And I think people would rush to say, Oh, the moms the villain. But you can't you can't say that everyone there is so hurt and vulnerable. Everyone there. Like it's the situation where you know, the father can't lead. The mom is unable to to give the child the love He needs. He's going through his own thing that he needs to forgive. And so they're really just problems to each other. No one is. Literally, if you're talking about tailor made tasks or fees. The worst thing a mom like that could get is a child who needs her love of vulnerable childhood needs are love. The worst thing that Father character could get is a broken family that needs him to meet it. Right? It's separately, all of them are fine, just when you sort of put them in opposition to each other when the tragedy happens.

Alex Ferrari 1:12:59
Very cool. Now we can keep talking about Pixar for at least another five hours. But I'm going to ask you a few questions. I asked all my guests. What are three Pixar screenplays and or movies that everyone should every screenwriter should study?

Dean Movshovitz 1:13:15
Hmm. So the first No. So instead out for sure, because it's the most original most dramatically complex. And another one, I'm debating between Ratatouille and Finding Nemo because those are my just two personal favorites. So let's let's cheat and put both of those number two, because number three is less about the writing and more about its message. And I think everyone who's pursuing something artistic or risky, should watch Monsters University. Yeah. Because Monsters University deals with a character who tries their best and exhaust every option and realizes they're not going to be who they want to be. And I'm not saying that to be defeatist, I, I think everyone should, and I'm living my life that way to pursue what they want, as best they can. But I think Monsters University message of Oh, even if you don't get that you can still become In my case, the best coach in town, the best care coach in town or anything else. I think that's very comforting. And I think if we talked about being more flexible with your image of yourself, then to me Monsters University exemplifies that.

Alex Ferrari 1:14:28
I would say that there this town LA is riddled with the corpses of film directors who thought they were going to be the next Spielberg. Because Because Spielberg it basically inspired multiple generations because he was such a popular, popular director that they were going to be the next Spielberg. And it's okay that you're not the next Spielberg. It's okay, it's okay. You know, Nolan wanted to be and Nolan and Fincher one To be the next Kubrick Yeah, they both they both actively said, we want to be the kind of the next Kubrick. But they ended up being the next Nolan the next Fincher. Yeah, you know, and obviously, that they're still at a very high level. Yeah. But not everybody is going to get to those levels, because that that's the upper echelon of any industry. Like, you're not going to be the best cookie chef ever. Like, you know, but if you make good cookies for people, and you love what you do, and you're happy, well, that's the dream, isn't it? Like,

Dean Movshovitz 1:15:36
Absolutely, that is the dream

Alex Ferrari 1:15:38
If you can be happy doing what you love to do, at whatever level you're at, then that's why a lot of people like, you know, a lot of times, you see in these films, you see a janitor, who's super happy. And he's just like, I just love my job. And for somebody else outside just like I don't, I don't understand that. But for them, that's happiness. You know, for you know, the, the guy who sells the hotdogs in the corner. For me, or like, if someone working at a job, like, you know, going to work everyday going to a cubicle, there are people in the world who love doing that I, I would, I would slit my wrists. Like I that's not who I am, you know, and people see what I do on a daily basis and go, you don't have a job. You don't have a steady income, like you don't have a check coming in every week. I'm like, dude, I've been doing that for 25 years, I've been a freelance. Oh, but that's I'm happy there. So it's, it's, it's really a definite definition that you have to make for yourself.

Dean Movshovitz 1:16:40
I can tell you I, I served in the Israeli army, and I was a computer programmer there. And almost all of my friends went on to have a career as computer programmers. And and some of them were very happy with it, some of them found ways to pivot. And a lot of them just have like, this is my job. And in my free time I'm doing all these things I get allows me to freedom and allows me to live my life this way. Like some people define themselves with their jobs. Some people define themselves in different like, everyone, you know, I have two friends who were very polar opposites. And it always used them as sort of my role models, because both of them create a life that is in their image. And I think that's really what everyone should aspire to. Now, what

Alex Ferrari 1:17:23
is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life,

Dean Movshovitz 1:17:26
I would really go back to what we talked about earlier with the fixed and growth mindset. And I'll, I'll give you a very concrete example, when I finished college in Israel, I got a great job in New York City promoting Israeli cinema for Israel consulate. And it got me into film festivals and sort of working with Israeli filmmakers, and meeting all these artistic directors in New York. And I go to all these fun events, and I felt like sorry, and I felt like on top of the world, and then it ended and I got some job offers in the US, but they fell through because of a visa and went back to Israel. And suddenly I was like, wait, what, it's sort of all my plan that she was going to go from there somewhere. And it really made me sort of reassess myself and see, okay, if none of this happens, or if I don't have all these cool things in life, who am I independent of that. And really, that lesson of tying your happiness and tying your self esteem, not to accomplishments, not to external markers, but to your values, to your ambitions to your work. And that's it, that's not something I've learned, that's a direction I've learned to aspire to every day, I try to get better at it. Because I think I think you can be oblivious, or you can be preoccupied with your image when things are going well. But I think everyone at some point hits a bump in the road. And I think the way for those bumps to be less painful is to when you're writing high pivot to this mentality that is about your work, it's about how to be better in whatever you do at and retire to your to your values and to your effort to knock your achievements into sort of external

Alex Ferrari 1:19:22
markers. And where can people find out more about you and your where they can get your book and and get in contact with you.

Dean Movshovitz 1:19:30
So the book is available on Amazon. And they can sign me at Dean mops events.com where you can read a little more about the book, you can read a little more about me. That's where I talk a little bit more, a little more about my speaking engagement or sort of my screenwriting coaching side hustle and and I also have a project there right now where I'm going through the WGS top 101 screenplays. Whatever Seeing what lessons we can learn from each other. That's what's happening there.

Alex Ferrari 1:20:06
Very cool. Thank you so much, Dean for being on the show. It has been a wonderful walk down memory lane, to thinking about Pixar films again. And I know there's so many lessons storytellers can take from the Masters because they really have mastered the form in a way that not any other studio in Hollywood has done. There's nobody with their track record. So it is. They are a wealth of information and storytelling technique that I think every screenwriter should look at, regardless of genre. Regardless of what you're writing, you can learn something from watching and reading Pixar work. So thank you so much for shining a light on this processor.

Dean Movshovitz 1:20:48
Thank you, Alex. It was my pleasure. And I really feel like we could be going on for hours. So right, thank you.

Alex Ferrari 1:20:56
I want to thank Dean for coming on the show and sharing the secrets of the Pixar storytelling machine. If you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, including a link to Dean's book, Pixar storytelling, just head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/089. And if you haven't already, please check out our new podcast inside the screenwriters mind, and it is a deep dive into the minds of some of the greatest screenwriters to ever work in cinema. It is an archive of the best interviews throughout the ifH Podcast Network. To take a listen head over to screenwriters mind.com. Thank you again for listening. As always, keep on writing no matter what. Stay safe out there. And I'll talk to you soon.


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