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BPS 101: How to Make 2021 Your Year – Happy New Year!

Well, 2020 has been one hell of a year. Our industry has been turned upside down and inside out. The way business is done in Hollywood has been changed forever. There has been so much pain and suffering this year. People lost their jobs.

Legendary companies that were thought to be unbreakable filed for bankruptcy. The mear act of being on set became a highly dangerous occupation. So many beloved filmmakers and actors passed away. Film festivals closed their doors. Movie theaters giants shut their doors, some for good. COVID-19 devasted not only our business but the world.

2020 just f**king sucked!

With all that said I see a light of hope on the horizon. Like every New Years before Jan 1 brings with it a new hope, an opportunity to improve things, and for your life to be better than before. 2021 has a lot of pressure on it for sure. I know so many tribe members have had a rough go of it but the only thing we can do is to take charge of what you can control.

You might not be able to control the world, the virus, your employer, or the economy. But you can control what you do on a daily basis, how you act, how you think. You can think everything sucks and there’s no hope for you or your dreams or you can think that you have the power to change where you are in life right now.

Every dream, every success story started with one thought, I CAN DO THIS. As Henery Ford once said

“If you think you can do a thing or think you can’t do a thing, you’re right.”

The power of your own thoughts is so much more mighty than you think. Trust me I speak from experience. Looking back on my life I realized that in the roughest moments my thoughts were destructive and when I was experiencing great successes my thoughts were constructive. Whatever you focus on grows so if I were you I’d focus on the positive and not the negative.

This year I came to a profound truth that the key to success is to help others. The moment I launched Indie Film Hustle my life began to change. The more I helped others the better my life became. The opportunities I had been chasing for decades just started showing up at my door. Don’t get me wrong, as you know I hustled like crazy but not on getting things for myself as much as providing value to other people. As Les Brown said

Help othersachieve their dreamsand you will achieve yours.”

In 2021 make it a goal to help others with their dreams and I promise you that things in your life will change, it did for me. In 2020 I released my second feature film On the Corner of Ego and Desire, created BulletproofScreenwriting.tv, my premium online education platform IFH Academy, launched the IFH Podcast Network and multiple podcasts including The Filmmaking Motivation Podcast, The Directors Series Podcast, Inside the Screenwriter’s Mind Podcastand spoke to legendary filmmakers and screenwriters on my shows like Oliver Stone, Barry Sonnenfeld, Alex Proyas, James V. Hart, and John Badham just to name a few.

And most importantly I was inspired by you the Indie Film Hustle and Bulletproof Screenwriting Tribes. Your stories of overcoming obstacles, massive successes, and following your dreams moved me. Getting emails and messages from around the world gave me hope that yes we are in tough times but even with all that you, the tribe, continues to move forward like an unstoppable creative force.

In 2021 we will try, fail, and try again because remember…

“Failure is simply the opportunity to begin again, this time more intelligently.” – Henry Ford

The more you might fail the closer you are to succeeding. I’ll be trying a ton of new things in the new year and hope they will be a success but am ready if they don’t live up to my expectations.

In 2021 I’ll be launching a couple of new companies, partnering with amazing new instructors for IFH Academy, releasing my new book, adding amazing new content to Indie Film Hustle TV, publishing new audiobooks through IFH Books, producing a few new podcasts for the IFH Podcast Network, and developing new websites to further help filmmakers and screenwriters follow their dreams.

I want you to write down what you want to accomplish in 2021 and what steps you will be taking every day to get those goals. Do you want to set a goal of one or two screenplays a year as Oliver Stone does? Do you want to direct your first feature film? What needed tools do you want to put in your toolbox? What need skills do you want to learn to make you a more dangerous and knowledgeable filmmaker or screenwriter?

After speaking to hundreds of the industry’s most successful artists and business people I found they all had one thing in common, they never gave up! They all just kept going no matter what. Oliver Stone had the script for Platoon in his pocket for years before someone produced it. James V. Hart was in his forties when he had his breakout with Hook and Dracula. Barry Sonnenfeldwent from shooting adult films to having his movies gross almost $2.5 billion worldwide.

Every successful person you look up to failed and failed often on their way to success. They never gave up and you shouldn’t either. Every no is one step closer to a yes. I wish all of you an amazing 2021 and don’t forget to keep that hustle going and keep that dream alive!

Be well, stay safe, and Happy New Year.

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Alex Ferrari 0:02
Well, guys, 2020 has been one hell of a year and emphasis on the word owl, our industry has been turned upside down and inside out the way business is done in Hollywood has changed forever. There has been just so much pain and suffering this year. So many people lost their jobs, legendary companies that we thought that would be there forever, and they were unbreakable, filed for bankruptcy, or closed completely. The mere act of being unset became a highly dangerous occupation. So many beloved filmmakers and actors and writers and technicians passed away this year. Film Festivals closed their doors, some for good movie theater giants, shut their doors, some never to return. COVID-19 has devastated not only our business, but the world. 2020 just fn sucked. With all that said, I do see a light of hope on the horizon. Like every new year before January 1, brings with it a new hope and opportunity to improve things. And for your life to be better than it was before. 2021 has a lot of pressure on it, to say the least. I know so many tribe members that have had a rough go of it in 2020. But the only thing we can do is take charge of what we can control. You might not be able to control the world, the virus, your employer, or the economy. You can control what you do on a daily basis, how you act and how you think. You can think everything sucks, and that there's no hope for you or your dreams. Or you can think that you have the power to change where you are in life right now. Every dream, every success story started with one single thought I can do this. As Henry Ford once said, If you think you can do a thing, or think you can't do a thing. You're right. The power of your own thoughts is so much more mighty than you think. Trust me because I speak from experience. Looking back on my life, I realize that in the roughest moments, my thoughts were destructive and negative. And when I was experienced great successes, my thoughts were constructive and positive. Whatever you focus on grows. So if I were you I focus on the positive and not the negative. This year, I came to the profound truth that the key to success is helping others.

The moment I launched indie film hustle, my life began to change after years of struggle, after years of hustling and trying to hack the system and trying to get to where I wanted to be no matter what. It was launching indie film hustle that made the biggest difference in my life. The more I helped others, the better my life became. The opportunities I had been chasing for decades, just started to show up at my door. But don't get me wrong. You know, I hustle like crazy. I'm kind of insane about it, to be honest with you. But my hustle is not about getting things for myself, as much as it is to provide value to other people. As Les Brown once famously said, help others achieve their dreams, and you will achieve yours. I want you in 2021 to make it a goal to help other filmmakers, other screenwriters, other people with their dreams. And I promise you that things in your life will change because it certainly did for me. In 2020, I released my second feature on the corner of ego and desire, created bulletproof screenwriting.tv my premium online educational platform ifH Academy launched the ifH Podcast Network, and multiple podcasts including the filmmaking motivation podcast, the director series podcast inside the screenwriters mind podcast, and spoke to legendary filmmakers and screenwriters on my shows, like Oliver Stone, Barry sonnenfeld, Alex prayas, James v. Hart, and john batum, just to name a few. But most importantly, I was inspired by you, the indie film, hustle and bulletproof screenwriting tribes, your stories of overcoming obstacles, massive successes, and following your dreams moved me moved my soul. getting emails and messages from around the world gave me hope. They Yes, we are in tough times. But even with all that, the tribe continues to move forward, like an unstoppable creative force. In 2021, I'll be launching a couple of new companies partnering with amazing new instructors for ifH Academy, releasing my new book, adding amazing new content to indie film, hustle TV, publishing new audio books through my publishing company, ifH books, producing a few new podcasts for the ifH Podcast Network, and developing new websites. To further help filmmakers and screenwriters follow their dreams. I want you to write down what you want to accomplish in 2021, and what steps you will be taking every day to get to your goals. Do you want to set a goal of one to two screenplays a year like Oliver Stone does? Do you want to direct your first feature film? What needed tools do you want to put in your toolbox? What new skills do you want to learn to make you a more dangerous and knowledgeable filmmaker? Or screenwriter? What side hustles Are you going to try to create the generate revenue for yourself while you're chasing your dream? After speaking to hundreds of the industry's most successful artists and business people, I found they all had one thing in common. They never gave up. Oliver Stone had the script for a platoon in his pocket for years. And everybody in town rejected it. Everybody in town said will never produce this. Nobody wants to see this movie, but he never gave up. And in 1986 he won the Oscar for Best Picture. And Best Director James v. Hart was in his 40s before he had his breakout hits with hook and Dracula. Barry sonnenfeld went from shooting adult films, to having his movies grossed almost $2.5 billion worldwide. Every big screenwriter, every big filmmaker, every big director, every big producer, they all have one thing in common. They failed and they failed often on their way to success. They never gave up and you shouldn't either.

Every no is one step closer to a yes. In 2021. Educate yourself as much as possible. learn something new every day. Take a course read a book, experience something, work on a set safely Of course, do whatever you can to put more tools in your toolbox. The reason I was able to Go to Sundance, and shoot an entire feature film in four days, running around completely guerilla style was not only because I had an amazing group of people working with me, but it was also because I had been working for two decades, putting tools in my toolbox, being able to not only direct, but also right, edit, color grade, do the graphics, produce, and so, so many other jobs, I can't even keep track of them all that I did on that film. But I was able to do that, again, because I educated myself and I and I worked on putting those tools in my toolbox. In 2021, I want you all to add a ton of new tools in your toolbox. If you're a writer, learn new techniques, learn new approaches to the process, or hell just write more, because by writing more, you're adding more tools in your toolbox. I'm going to go back to my conversation with Oliver Stone. And I asked him how many screenplays Did you write before you got to direct your real first film because he did a film right out of right out of college. But he doesn't even count that one as much as he does a second one. And he had written about 1012 screenplays, something along those lines before a producer finally financed one of his projects. The road to success is not easy, but it's doable. And it's doable for everyone listening to my voice right now, anywhere in the world. If you think you have a tough, you should listen to that podcast about what Hollywood and how that amazing filmmaker makes his films for two $300 us. And he makes it he built an entire industry in his in his town. He's world renowned now. But when he started, he was just trying to learn trying to put more tools in the toolbox. I don't care where you are in the world. If you want to make something happen for yourself, make it happen. The power to change your destiny is in your hands. It might not be easy, but it's something that you can do. I want to wish you all an amazing 2021. And please don't forget to keep that hustle going and to keep that dream alive. He will stay safe and have a great new year. And of course, keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.


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Oliver Stone Scripts Collection: Screenplays Download

Below are all the screenplays written by the legendary Oscar-winning writer, director Oliver Stone available online. Watch the video below to get a deeper insight into his writing process. If you find any of his missing screenplays please leave the link in the comment section.

When you are done reading take a listen to Apple’s #1 Screenwriting Podcast The Bulletproof Screenwriting Podcast, with guest like Oscar Winner Eric Roth, James V. HartDavid ChaseJohn AugustOliver Stone and more.

Listen to Oliver Stone’s Interview on Bulletproof Screenwriting


Watch Oliver Stone’s short film Last Year In Viet Nam.

(NOTE: For educational and research purposes only).

BREAK (1969)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone – Read the screenplay!

MIDNIGHT EXPRESS (1977)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone – Read the screenplay!

CONAN THE BARBARIAN (1978)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone – Read the screenplay!

SCAREFACE (1983)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone – Read the screenplay!

PLATOON (1986)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone – Read the screenplay!

WALL STREET (1987)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone and Stanley Weiser – Read the screenplay!

BORN ON THE FOURTH OF JULY (1989)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone and Ron Kovic – Read the screenplay!

JFK (1991)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone and Zachary Sklar – Read the screenplay!

DOORS (1991)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone and Randall Jahnson – Read the screenplay!

NATURAL BORN KILLERS (1994)

Screenplay by David Veloz, Richard Rutowski, and Oliver Stone- Read the screenplay!

NIXON (1995)

Screenplay by Stephen J. Rivele, Chris Wilkinson and Oliver Stone- Read the screenplay!

U-TURN (1997)

Screenplay by John Ridley, Richard Rutowski & Oliver Stone – Read the screenplay!

ANY GIVEN SUNDAY (1999)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone – Read the screenplay!

WALL STREET: MONEY NEVER SLEEPS (2010)

Screenplay by Oliver Stone and Allan Loeb – Read the screenplay!

BPS 100: Avoiding the DARK SIDE of Hollywood: Oliver Stone EXPOSES SHOCKING TRUTH About OSCAR & FILMMAKING!

Today on the show I bring you one of the most influential and iconic writer/directors in the history of cinema, three-time Oscar® winner Oliver Stone. Throughout his legendary career, Stone has served as writer, director, and producer on a variety of films, documentaries, and television movies. His films have been nominated for forty two Oscars® and have won twelve.

Stone began his career as a screenwriter, though always had his eye on being a writer/director. He struggled years before being hired to write the true-life prison story Midnight Express, for which he won his first Oscar®. Stone further wrote Brian De Palma’sdrug lord epic Scarface, Year of the Dragon featuring Mickey Rourke, and John Milius’s Conan the Barbarian.

His first outing as a director was Seizure, an exploitation horror film he directed right out of film school, and the thriller The Hand, starring Michael Caine. Stone finally broke through as a director with his film Salvador, a violent look at the chaos of war as seen through the lens of an amoral photojournalist during the Salvadoran Civil War.

This is one of Stone’s most underrated works. It was critically acclaimed but commercially didn’t hit the mark.

After Salvador, he jumped right into directing Platton, the film that would catapult Stone into the stratosphere. Platoon would go on to be nominated for eight Academy Awards and won four including Best Picture, Best Director for Stone, Best Sound, and Best Film Editing.

Platoon was the first in a trilogy the Stone made about the Vietnam War, the other films were Born on the Fourth of July starring Tom Cruise and Heaven & Earth starring Tommy Lee Jones.

After Salvador Stone directed nine films in ten years. During that decade he created some of the most memorable films in cinematic history including the decade-defining Wall Street, JFK, The Doors, Natural Born Killers, and Nixon. 

Stone says his films are

“first and foremost dramas about individuals in personal struggles,”

and considers himself a dramatist rather than a political filmmaker. Politics definitely are a subject matter he enjoys making movies about. 2008’s W., a film about American President George W. Bush, was the first film in history released about a sitting president. This film wrapped up his trilogy on the presidency which he started with JFK and Nixon.

Stone’s filmography is peppered with notable films and masterpieces including 1997 road movie/film noir, U-Turn, 1999’s Any Given Sundaya film about power struggles within an NFL-style football team, and World Trade Center, based on the true story of survival during the September 11 attacks.

In 2004 Stone tackled another giant historical figure, Alexander the Great. His film Alexander, starring Colin Farrell, Anthony Hopkins, and Angelina Jolie, had a rough road and major studio interference.

Stone later re-edited the film into a two-part 3-hour 37-minute filmAlexander Revisited: The Final Cut, which later became a cash cow for Warner Brothersbecoming one of the highest-selling films in their back catalog.

In 2010, Stone directed his first-ever sequel, Wall Street: Money Never SleepsIn this film, he returns to Wall Street during the 2008 financial crisis. Famous onscreen villain Gordon Gekko Michael Douglas returns. Gekko teaches co-star Shia LaBeoufthe ins and outs of criminal investments.

Frost/Nixon’s Frank Langellaco-stars along with Susan Sarandon. I personally have a deep connection with his film Wall Street as it was the subject of the first short film I ever wrote, directed, and edited in high school.

Speaking to Oliver was a dream come true. Many of his films have impacted popular culture in a way that is uniquely his. During my time working at a video store, it seemed every film he released was a cultural bomb. Natural Born Killers was the first time I saw a modern director use multiple formats in one film.

His last film Snowden tackles the most important and fascinating true story of the 21st century. Snowden, the politically-charged, pulse-pounding thriller starring Joseph Gordon-Levitt and Shailene Woodley, reveals the incredible untold personal story of Edward Snowden, the polarizing figure who exposed shocking illegal surveillance activities by the NSA and became one of the most wanted men in the world.

He is considered a hero by some, and a traitor by others. No matter which you believe, the epic story of why he did it, who he left behind, and how he pulled it off makes for one of the most compelling films of recent years.

During our epic conversation, we discuss his legendary career, working with the Hollywood system, his time in Vietnam, struggling as a screenwriter, how he deals with rejection, and his amazing new book Chasing the Light: Writing, Directing, and Surviving Platoon, Midnight Express, Scarface, Salvador, and the Movie Game.

Chasing the Light is an intimate memoir by the controversial and outspoken Oscar-winning director and screenwriter about his complicated New York childhood, volunteering for combat, and his struggles and triumphs making such films as Platoon, Midnight Express, and Scarface.

Before the international success of Platoon in 1986, Oliver Stone had been wounded as an infantryman in Vietnam and spent years writing unproduced scripts while driving taxis in New York, finally venturing westward to Los Angeles and a new life.

Stone, now 73, recounts those formative years with in-the-moment details of the high and low moments: We see meetings with Al Pacino over Stone’s scripts for Scarface, Platoon, and Born on the Fourth of July; the harrowing demon of cocaine addiction following the failure of his first feature, The Hand (starring Michael Caine); his risky on-the-ground research of Miami drug cartels for Scarface; his stormy relationship with The Deer Hunter director Michael Cimino; the breathless hustles to finance the acclaimed and divisive Salvador; and tensions behind the scenes of his first Academy Award-winning film, Midnight Express.

Chasing the Light is a true insider’s look at Hollywood’s years of upheaval in the 1970s and ’80s. I highly recommend every filmmaker and screenwriter read this gem. Click here to read the book.

The main themes I took away from speaking to Oliver was struggle and fight. No matter how successful he got, no matter what heights he reached in Hollywood Oliver Stone had to fight to get each remarkable film in his filmography on the screen.

To this day he still gets rejected all the time. Throughout his career, he would jump from Hollywood studio to independent film. He wrote both Platoon and Born on the Fourth of July over a decade before they were produced because no one in Hollywood believed in what he was trying to say with those films. Platoon, The Doors, Midnight Express, Salvador, and Talk Radio were all indie films.

I hope this conversation inspires filmmakers and screenwriters to never give up. Oliver struggled for years taking jobs as a production assistant, cab driver, office assistant, and any other gig he could find to help him survive while he was chasing his dream. He wrote and wrote, meeting his goal of one to two screenplays a year, no matter what. Never give up, never surrender. As Oliver says

“Either you’re born crazy or you’re born boring.”

Enjoy my epic conversation with Oliver Stone.

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Alex Ferrari 0:53
Well guys, today is the day I have been teasing this episode now for a little while now. And you guys have been clamoring to find out who the special guests I have on the show today is and a few of you guessed it, but if you don't know already, it is the legendary Oliver Stone. I cannot tell you how excited I am to bring you this interview. Talking to Oliver was like a dream come true because I'm such a big fan in his films. I've had such an impact on me, as a filmmaker as a person has made me think in different ways. He is such a unique filmmaker, an artist. His films, not only entertain, but they touch you they they make you think they quit. They make you question many things about our society about different areas of our society, from Wall Street, to war, to politics, to the presidency. I mean, he's talking about huge, huge stories, huge figures in history. In in, he's just there is really not a lot of other filmmakers who have a filmography, like Oliver Stone. The films that he has been a part of either as a screenwriter, producer, or director have been nominated for 42 Oscars, and they have won 12 he personally has won three Oscars. His first one came as a screenwriter for the film Midnight Express in 1978. And then he tells the story about how even winning an Oscar as a screenwriter didn't guarantee anything. He was hustling for the next five years trying to get his movies made. He wrote platoon and Born on the Fourth of July in the 70s. And he was using platoon as a writing sample to get him work on other little films like Conan the Barbarian, Scarface, and Year of the Dragon, which he all wrote. And they might be huge and monumental films today but when they came out, they were not well received. So he had a really tough go of it. And then he had this amazing champion called john Daly, a legendary producer, who gave him a shot to direct his script, Salvador. And then right from Salvador, he went into directing platoon as this little independent film that he was shooting in the Philippines with a cast that if you look at today, you will be amazed at who was in that movie, but they were all just young actors nobodies at the time. And his his story is just so remarkable. He's worked on films, and I'm just going to throw a few of these films out that you might recognize from him. As I've already mentioned, Conan the Barbarian Scarface, as screenwriters in Salvador Platoon, Wall Street. Born on the Fourth of July, the doors JFK, Natural Born Killers Nixon, any given Sunday, Alexander World Trade Center, W. Wall Street Money Never Sleeps, and the most recent Snowden. I mean, his his filmography is legendary. And I was truly humbled to sit and speak with an artist of his statute. for an hour, I was just so oh my god, it was just like a like I said, it was a dream come true. Now, I hope this conversation inspires filmmakers and screenwriters to never give up. Oliver struggled for years, taking jobs as a production assistant, cab driver, office assistant, and any other gig he could find to help him survive. While he was chasing his dream. He wrote and wrote, meeting his goal of one to two screenplays a year no matter what Oliver Stone is the definition of never give up and never surrender. And we also go into a deep dive of his new book, chasing the light, which is his memoir, from the beginning of his career, all the way up to the peak of Platoon, where he won four Oscars and was nominated, I think, for eight Oscars that year. And his entire career exploded after that. And I have to highly, highly recommend his book. Because I've, I've read it, and it is such an amazing, raw journey into Hollywood of that time, and then also just a peek into a career. That is just remarkable. And I will give you links on how to purchase the book in the show notes at the end of this episode. So without any further ado, please enjoy my conversation with Oliver Stone. I'd like to welcome to the show. Oliver Stone. Thank you so much for being on the show. Oliver.

Oliver Stone 8:00
Nice to meet you, Alex. Frankly, I heard about you yesterday, and Okay, here we are. Yeah, I know it's the fastest. That's how I heard about you. I put I put up Facebook and, or Twitter. And I forgot what? And you answered and you asked very nicely. First of all, that you were interested in the subject matter which was about about nuclear energy, but the fact that you contacted him and the invitation was very nice to join your show. So here I am.

Alex Ferrari 8:27
And I and I and I appreciate it very much. Like we were talking a little bit before the show started, you know I am a lot of the films in your filmography have had a major impact in my life. And because during the time when you were coming up in the late mid to late 80s and early 90s that time period was when I was working at a video store. So I was watching obscene Lee about so many movies and that period of time you were prolific. I mean, you were shooting you were making movies every movie a year almost movies in 10 years. Yeah, it was it was pretty insane. It was like every year you would get an every single movie you would do would be just like this monumental thing from Platoon, radio, talk radio, JFK Born on fourth in Wall Street and all those kinds of things. So they were really impactful into into my life. And I'm gonna tell you something when I saw Wall Street because Wall Street really just immensely hit me in 88 and 8788. I can literally recite to you the greed, the greed speech, I learned it from from that age and I've never lost that. I'm not like I've been rehearsing it. It's just always stuck in the back of my head. And that character and what you did with that, that film The the commentary that you were saying about things was remarkable

Oliver Stone 9:51
Over commentaries. Yeah, they were injured. I used to really work at the I cared about and a lot of people noticed that the commentaries are pretty pretty pretty remarkable, pretty deep. And I like that because it's the only chance we you know, after the critics finished with you, dry you out in the laundry room, it's really nice to be able to say, Hey, this is what I really intended, maybe it didn't come across, but to be honest with yourself, and also it helps you creatively because it, it gives you a feedback and says, Okay, this gives you feedback and it gives you makes you think about what you did and did not achieve. And often in the commentaries, I tried to be critical.

Alex Ferrari 10:30
Now, you have a new book called chasing the light, which I'm a little bit over halfway through and I love it so far. And I can't wait to finish the book. And I'm going to recommend it to everybody I know. That is a filmmaker to read it. So we're going to get we're going to get started with the beginnings of your career because the book takes all takes you all the way up to Platoon, if I'm not mistaken, correct that to the end of platoon. And you did a couple things after Platoon, just a few, not many, but you did a few other films after platoon. But the story of how you came up is a story that I hadn't really heard about before from I mean Salvatore's and and obviously Conan the Barbarian and, and Scarface, and in some of your older films is some of your older films as well. But the first question I have for you is, can you tell people because I really think this is important. How many screenplays had you written prior to directing your first film?

Oliver Stone 11:27
Well, no, I directed my first film out of film school, basically two years afterward, budget horror film called seizure, which I wrote. And I had come out of film school in 71. With the as a writer, director in my mind, and that's what I set out to be that was my dream. And you know, Godard and Barnwell and the European bag, you Italians, to Fellini, among them, I mean, the obvious ones, but they were all leaders in the culture. And I wanted to be one guy, they were writer directors, most of them attracted me to the concept. And I had been a writer before film school, when I was 19, I wrote a book called The child's night's dream, which was eventually published in 97. But so the writing in me was always strong. But then after my service in Vietnam, I explained this in the book, as you know, the intensity of that experience required a concentration at the highest level of your physical senses, smell, sight, sound, you walk in the jungle, and you know, you have to pay really 360 degree attach that intensity, in some way became the camera eye for me. Because I'd never concentrated on the camera as much as I did there. My camera in my head. And that's what I tried to reproduce when I went to film school on the GI Bill, which paid my tuition there, but it was, you know, going out and making a short film is is very chaotic. For most of us, it's, you have to get the cooperation of your fellow students. It's not easy. It's like a Chinese cultural critique session, you know, but it ECOWAS made films over the course of those two years. Some were successful, some were not. Short films are tricky, but you know, there are an art form in themselves and you'll learn a lot. You learn a lot physically, technically, you produce you, you edit you, you shoot, and you write. Now most of the kids were not interested in writing. That was what was amazing to me. There was no requirement at film school to go to screenwriting class. Not none at all. That always bothered me, because I went, I mean, maybe a few kids went. And I wrote screenplays during that period. And I learned from these teachers they were they were good teachers. They were NYU teachers. And I bought a lot of screenplays, and I read them because they were becoming more available in the 60s. So you could read the screenplay, not from American movies as much as from European films. It's very interesting that in a sense, that study of film starting with the Europeans and it only, you know, it was over the 70s it became more and more Americanized. And finally, they started to publish some screenplays. But some of the greatest screenplays in American film are no I have never seen any copies of them. acceptances unless you go to the studio vaults. So there's a big hole there. And screenplays, their screenplay writer was regarded as kind of a warm in the back room, and the director was a star. He was wearing the scarf, Bertolucci, and he would come out on the set. And he'd make up his ideas as he went along. And there was a kind of freeform improvisation That was fun. It was the beginning of a new thing. And yet, there was not the burden of money, the commercial feeling that you had to make your money back about that system, because these films in Europe were made for very little. So that was the environment in which I but I always was I was disciplined as a writer. So I, after I got out of film school and drove a cab and worked in various jobs, got married went through the whole hard hardship of trying to make it in the film business, which is very difficult. Even in those days, far more perhaps. And in that period, I kept writing screenplays. Every year, I set a goal for myself of at least trying to write one one and a half, maybe two screenplays and a couple of treatments to turn out stuff, sending them out to agents, no response. rejections, rejections. So you say how many I don't really remember, I would say about eight to 11, as well as long treatments. One of those treatments to cover up was my first break, it sold option option sold almost me and I got to work with Robert bolt, who was a great screenwriter of that time in Chicago and Lawrence of Arabia. Bought was a serious student, but he was overstyled screenwriter that you lay it all out on the page, your architecture is there. Every line of dialogue is there. It's a whole other way different than film school. So were you more of a treatment. So I was always between the two. I was trying to write the fallout screenplay. And at the same time I was. And when I became a director of finally in the business in 85, with Sal 86 was Salvador, and then platoon. I never have I still I stayed true to this screenwriter loyalty, which is right to script write it as much as you can get on paper before you do it. And I have that mindset. And I think a lot of people underrate that don't make money.

Alex Ferrari 16:42
Right? And then so your your second film was the hand, which was a with Michael Caine. And it was a horror film. And I always found it interesting that you started your career as a director with two horror genre films, essentially, horror movies was can you tell me how those how the hand came to came around

Oliver Stone 17:00
The hand is very similar to the hands an interesting movie, it's going to be actually released by shout factory next year on blu ray.

Alex Ferrari 17:08
Yeah,

Oliver Stone 17:09
It was buried at the time. I liked the movie. I saw it recently. And it's kind of it's very interesting psychological thriller, based on a book I bought by Mark Randell called the lizard's tail. But it was very similar to seizure, because it's about it's a similar story and that the main character, Jonathan frid, and the first one Michael Caine, and the second one, are haunted people haunted in the sense that they bring with their minds, they bring the doom onto themselves. They think they think the horror, they think the har, and in what in the case of the hand that he thinks his wife is leaving him, and he becomes insanely jealous. And he sees everything as that he loses his hand in a car accident, he sees it partly as her fault. He sees the hand, ultimately as a weapon of vengeance and a weapon of anger, to get it to get back at the people who took his hand as well as his wife. So it's pretty far out and very ambitious as a visually as a first movie. Very difficult to make a small hand work as, as a shark might. And I will put I was crazy to do it. But that was a kind of it was difficult for me. Prior to the hand, you forgot that I came through as a screenwriter in 1977. Eight with Midnight Express,

Alex Ferrari 18:31
Which is my next question.

Oliver Stone 18:33
Yeah. Okay.

Alex Ferrari 18:34
Yeah. So Midnight Express actually was what do you do consider Midnight Express to be the project that really launched your career?

Oliver Stone 18:42
Yeah. I mean, it got me into the Hollywood side of the business. I was in New York, I was dead in the water. I didn't. I tried. I tried. I tried, you know, to get to get all these rejections. I mean, I got hundreds of letters I can. It's no fun. I mean, going begging for things getting small jobs, production assistant here and there. TV work. I worked for almost a year well paid advertising film company for baseball films. I mean, I tried to make it happen. My wife, thank God was working at the UN and had a steady job. So that was we know we made ends meet. And I have to say it was a it was a I almost gave up hope many times before. By the time I reached 30 years old, I talked about it in the book, like 30 years old and you feel like in those days, you feel like you had to have started your career, you know, if not something was something was wrong. And I felt like I had failed in my life. And I go into that and why. And my father, my mother, my grandmother, all this comes into play it's so that's why I ended the film with protune. Because when I ultimately realized my dream, which is to have a success of international proportions, The unbelievable I mean, every country in the world it played, made big money, number three in America domestically. And then on top of it Academy Awards, and then it wins. And Elizabeth Taylor is out there on the stage, giving me a big kiss, you know, she was this, the movie star of my youth as a woman, she was the most glamorous. So you know, this was all unbelievable. And but I had been. So it was, it was a golden time. And that's why I wanted to end the book because that the dream had been achieved. And I showed you how it was achieved and how how much work was required, how much rejection. And I think it'd be very helpful to young people, I got to see the path that we had where I had in the 1970s. It's different now because in many ways, it's a different system, because now it's a lot technically easier to make a film, you don't have to kill yourself. It's much easier to turn out quality with a video camera. And it's up to you. It's much more inventive medium, and techniques are much, much easier. However, you have the audio, you have the consequent problem that if everybody's doing it, you have a huge volume and a limited distribution system.

Alex Ferrari 21:15
Right, right, exactly. It's easy to make the movie now that now the place you have to kill yourself is actually get anyone to see it or sell it.

Oliver Stone 21:22
Exactly, Exactly. I've seen so many so many young filmmakers have sent me stuff. I have piles of films that nobody watches, you know, it's really and there's some talent here some talent there, talents, but I i champion many films that have filmmakers that have gotten some distribution, but it never worked out. I mean, they they died off in the very hard to get through this barrier of distribution and publicity.

Alex Ferrari 21:52
Now you talk about champion, champion filmmakers. Can you talk a little bit about what john Daly did for you as a champion, because we all need a champion, especially in this business, if we can get one.

Oliver Stone 22:04
I dedicated the book to john. I mean, the book for me would took three years to write off and on. That was just a lot of work. I have to tell you, it's like making a movie in his own way. And I take writing very seriously insensitive, I just not scribbling now, I did this I did that. No, I'm looking for themes in the in the book, the themes of growing up themes of going to war and the themes of relationships with your parents, your mom and your dad, your grandparents, the history of that time what was going on World War Two, into Vietnam. And I think there's a lot of consequences at out of World War Two. I was born on the on the right at the end of it in 46. And my mother was a French citizen. My father met her on the street in Paris during the liberation and as an officer in the army, and married her and brought her back to the states in late 45 and early 46. pregnant. So there you go. I mean, it's a war baby, you'd say right. My mother was an immigrant in her way.

Alex Ferrari 23:14
But john, but john really

Oliver Stone 23:16
Is also an immigrant. I mean, I've always done well with immigrants. For some reason, the American movie business was not was was just not letting me get myself done. It was so frustrating by the time I made the hand. I was even with the success of Midnight Express, I was kind of a black sheet people knew me as outrageous somebody who broke barriers, who was trying to say things do different things was fighting for this Vietnam script that everybody said AI it's well written, but we don't want to make it's not gonna make any money. So I mean, that was kind of the guy who was one of those guys around that was known as difficult or not that I was crazy when I was, but I really was upset that things were not going. I wrote a script called born the Fourth of July and I'm platoon in both in seven in the 70s. I neither want to get mad. It was just frustrating because human they were making apocalypse coming home Deer Hunter nice films, but nothing to do with my experience on the on the on the ground over there. They're both the mythic films that come in home very realistic, but about a woman in a marriage in LA. The other two are gigantic films, but they have nothing to do with reality that I saw. I can say that, you know, Michael, Michael Cimino, I worked with him on your the dragon. Big Vision, Napoleonic vision, but reality not so much. And so Francis, also the Godfather.Anyway

Alex Ferrari 24:48
But john was the one but john was the one that kind of,

Oliver Stone 24:50
Well, it's it's just that I was out. I was kind of dead in the water. I may I wrote Scarface and you know, although it's claimed as a Now, at that time it It had a hard road it was I had fight with the producer. And he bad mouth me and around the business and frankly, it was filled with obscenity and violence and people thought I was crazy kinda. I'd done Midnight Express Scarface. Conan the Barbarian. These were tough, violent films. So people saw me as sometime the hand, you know, who is this guy? So it was tough. And I had to I left LA and I. I talked about my cocaine addiction, too. So that was a big problem at one point. But I gave that up. And then I fought my way back with your the dragon, which amino didn't do as well as they'd hoped. So my career was dead. And I said, I can't do it the Hollywood way, the LA way. So I'm going to do it this way. I was in New York at that I had moved back to the city. And I really set out to do Salvador, which was a gigantic film again, I'm crazy. Set is a civil war country in 19 8080s. We started in 85. Journalists, I knew Richard Richard Boyle, a wonderful, wonderful friend, Irishman, had been there and had had a whole story with the death squads down there, and with a woman, and he written about it in his notes, and I took that and with him made it into a screenplay. And I dedicated myself to making this movie at any cost, I would not quit until we made it, I was gonna use my own money I had. At that point, I'd accumulated some money from screenwriting. So I, I had enough to maybe get a bigger loan at the bank. I had a couple of houses when I owned, and so forth and so on. So I was scheming to make this film for $700,000. Now this involves helicopters involves Civil War, it involves involves death squads, but Boyle was so sure that we would get cooperation from the Silva in Salvador, which is a very cost wise, very inexpensive country to shoot him but they never shot a film. It was insane proposition that shows you how desperate I was, I wouldn't give up. And I wrote the script with him. And it was a good script, but nobody wanted to touch it. Because again, it was critical of the US foreign establishment. Oh, God, I just been so many rejections in my life. I can't. I have about 10,000 now. I think you know, I'm sick of it. I'm good at rejection. When you can, something of mine the other day important to me, and I kind of shrugged. It just doesn't add rejection. me. I'm trying to. I think that's the best advice I can give. I, john Daly was introduced to me as an English independent film that he just come to Hollywood, he was making his first steps. He was doing a film with the Falcon movie was Sean Penn. And he was doing he'd been involved with Terminator, the first one, but had had problems with Cameron and him had not gotten along and blah, blah, blah. And also he was involved with.

Alex Ferrari 28:00
Okay, so many. It's hard to keep track.

Oliver Stone 28:03
He was doing that he'd done a nice job with the Gene Hackman movie. Yes. gene editing with the basketball movie.

Alex Ferrari 28:10
Ohh the Hoosiers,

Oliver Stone 28:11
Hoosiers, I love that movie. And so he was he was trying to make films he had some taste. Although he was not known for he was a boxing promoter in Africa during the the alley fight one of them and he had a shady reputation and so forth and so on. But he was a lovely scoundrel. I loved him because he was a Cockney, he was unpretentious from the lower classes and he, you know, he he wanted he didn't have any respect for the establishment. So he was that kind of guy. He he read Salvador and he read it too. I swear this is true story. You never hear it. Very rare story. But he read both he and I, I went in to see him. By the way, I met him through Gerald green who those people who care Gerald green has another character and they were both kind of con men, but they're nice. They were good guys, but they were they were scraping by and I sat in that meeting and john said to me, God, bloody hell good scripts, both of them. Which one do you want to do for us all over? That's a piece of a classic dialogue because you just don't never hear that shit.

Alex Ferrari 29:13
Never.

Oliver Stone 29:13
No one says yes. Like that. No one says they all say maybe and then they forget. Or they all say no, but they don't really know what they're talking about. So anyway, I said I want to do Salvador because it's fresh. It's new. And I'm not going to do platoon because I almost made it three times. And it got destroyed on the way and never get made. It's a curse. It's a fucking curse. Phil. Phil here, Salvador. So I started on Salvador and he actually helped me get it made. And there was some road it's in the book. It doesn't end there. There was so many problems making that film. Jimmy Woods was great, but also an extremely pre Madonna and at that time, and I've become great friends with him. But my god, he made this he made the road. He was the star of the film. And anyway, we We pulled it together with about 4 million, 3 million and the money was always questionable. You never knew if it was going to show up the next day, that kind of movie it was. So paste it was pasted together. And you know what it works? Go see it again, please do.

Alex Ferrari 30:16
We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor. And now back to the show. No, it's no it's a it's a fantastic film. I mean, there's a rawness to it. It's so raw, and it's so visceral. It is it's remarkable. So then you do Salvador and then then I get that almost killed me. Right? And then you just jump into another small movie.

Oliver Stone 30:46
90 speaking parts for civil war, helicopter fight battles, all kinds of shit tank battles. But we got it. We got we somehow finished it. And we ran out of money several times. It's a great story. Then john says to me, and we have fights all the way through the editing because john is concerned about the violence. And there was any length and all I had all the usual issues. Big Vision. Three hours, I had to cut it down to two hours and 10. And the violence oh god I had so they rejected it. Every fucking studio distributor in Hollywood rejected that movie that was heartbreaking. was good. It was a good movie, but too much violence too much

Alex Ferrari 31:29
At the time.

Oliver Stone 31:30
So what does he do? He says, fuck. I'm going to make my own distribution company. And he did. He made this Hemdale distribution company. And he literally distributed the film himself in April of 86. It doesn't it doesn't open I mean, he doesn't have any money to really distributed but at least it gets on the map. And there are some decent reviews that aren't people begin to see it and they get excited about it. But it takes time. Meanwhile, he says go make a go mate platoon in Philippines. So I'm going from Mexico, right to Philippines with $6 million now and I very little platoons a big movie. Again, I've been through the rough road now with my cinematographer Bob Richardson and Mike, and Mike and Bruno and various various people. And Alex Oh, so we made the movie at 6 million more efficiently than we did Salvador. Because we were more experienced. And we had all the usual problems with jungle and heat and sticky and rain and all that shit. It wasn't easy. But we plowed through it because we were tough. And, and, lo and behold, I mean, it really took off. I can't tell you how it took off right away. I mean, the moment there was nothing movie where it'd be be film in the Philippines, sort of a chuck norris thing or something. Nobody gave a shit. And you know, the moment we showed it, it was cut in a rough cut. People started reacting and Gee, oh my god, and there isn't anything like this. It's a reality that they did never seen before. A real a grid a reality, because I'd gone into the details of what I have experienced. And that was missing from film war films in general. I've seen a couple that close Korean films, Korean war films, but at that time, it was now it's almost standard, they do it. But it was hard to get the reality of the jungle and the perception of the jungle. And on top of it, it was critical. It was critical of the whole experience, which I think was the best part of it, it was a message saying this thing is a fraud. To say the whole fucking war was a fraud. There were three lies I mentioned in the book, I go into the details, you know, the concept of friendly fire people Americans right kill don't fire is much greater than people know, the concept of killing civilians in in Vietnam was huge. I mean, it was very abundant. And, and not always, but there was a lot of that going on, and accidentally spill overs and stuff like that. And number three, the biggest lie of all was that we're here to win. We're here winning. And that was never true. From the beginning. It was never true from 1947 on it was never true when we got involved with the French. So there was there's a lot of lying going on. And I go back into the concept, the theme of the lie and how the law influences American life. Because my parents had lied so much to me, at the age of 16, they rip apart. And I think we are the happiest family in the world. But no, it's not true. What's going on, boom, here's what's happening. Lie, lie, lie. This is what I learned in my life that people lie in not necessarily out of malicious intent, but out of comfort, or out of fear, various reasons. So that lie which extends from the divorce and 62 extends into Vietnam, for sure. Because that's all I see. I come back to the United States alive, fucked up. A lot of a lot of Vietnamese dope over there. But I learned a lot from actually from the black troops because they were really worried. To the music. I learned a lot about life humanity stain about love in a way it's it's an interesting story. That's suicide story. I got into some of that in platoon. Some of the Charlie Sheen's best friends are black and they kept me locked. They can't be human I say I say closer to me. And the character of Elias by Willem Defoe is very important too. He becomes a figurehead for the young man. You see him at the end of the war, he's divided, he very divided. He's a man of 242 fathers, he says, the sub two sergeants, the two sergeants represent polar opposites. And one of them one Sergeant kills the other. That's the crux of the movies, one sergeant, after he reports after he's reported for a war crime, but the other Sergeant kills that Sergeant under the cover of battle under friendly fire, and gets away with it, except that the young man sees it. And he has to get even. And it leads to its Dynamo, which is pretty strong, where you know what happens, I mean, it doesn't shut those, that kind of stuff doesn't get shown in more films. If you look at the ref, even the ones that followed, it's generally speaking to get the cooperation of the Pentagon, and the movie studios and all that you got to go along with the patriotic or the United States really cannot be criticized, or any of its wars. Now, considering that we relied our way into the six or seven wars since World War Two, I think the intelligence agencies have lied to us so much in the lie persists in American life. I this is a theme for me, obviously, you see it in JFK, and you see it in its, you'll see it again and again. And Snowden, my last one in 2016, I guess, the director who seeks out the lies

Alex Ferrari 36:50
And exposes them, and that's something that you've been that, since the beginning, since the beginning, almost,

Oliver Stone 36:56
I can't help it. And don't believe me, it's gotten me in a lot of hot war.

Alex Ferrari 36:59
I'm all I could only imagine what all over I can only imagine. Now, after the massive success of platoon by box off that success. And you know, Oscars and awards and all that kind of stuff you go into, in my opinion, a decade defining film, which is Wall Street, it really captures a segment of what the 80s were like, for people who wanted to kind of feel what it was like to be there at that time. And I feel that that's something that you do with a lot of your films, you you you define the era so beautifully, like with the doors and JFK.

Oliver Stone 37:34
I just set out to tell the story in the best style I could, I was able to get better and better at filmmaking. It's all about experience. You know, I'm no genius. And I said, I sat with my crew with Bob and Bruno and Alex, we set a style for each film that worked for that film. In other words, JFK was done in a very specific style for that story, as was Natural Born Killers. And so was in Wall Street was done this way. Born on the Fourth of July was very, very hard and almost cinema scope, vision of reality, literal linear story, we made it linear it was the book was not. So each film, I was never thinking about those as defining something. I think a lot of my work since then has also defined for me new things. But if people don't see it yet, they will wonder. I've gotten more and more into documentaries. I've done nine or 10. Now, eight or nine, including The Untold History of United States as well. I think one of my strongest efforts, it was done in 2012. And it was 12 hours long. It was the history of Untold History of this country from 1898 to 2012. with Mr. Obama. Please see it if you if you haven't seen it, you have to see it

Alex Ferrari 38:50
I highly recommend it. I highly, highly recommend it. Yeah, I see I saw when I came out back in the day and I see it. Yeah.I saw it.

Oliver Stone 38:59
You got to pay attention.

Alex Ferrari 39:00
No, it's Oh, absolutely. Absolutely. Now, when you when you were making Wall Street, did you have Do you did you work at the Paris Mercantile Exchange when you were a teenager? Is that correct?

Oliver Stone 39:12
Have you ever had you know that?

Alex Ferrari 39:14
Well, I do I do a little bit of research. And is that one of the things that kind of drew you to that story? What made you make Wall Street because there's so much passion behind there?

Oliver Stone 39:22
Yeah, I worked on this on this stock on the cocoa and sugar exchange in Paris one summer. And my father was on wall street for most of his life from the 1930s on 1930 234. in that era, know it for you became he was he was a four walk right in the depression and then he became a stockbroker, an analyst, an analyst in those he worked his way up, it was the old system. He was the hell Holbrook character in a sense, or the more Nietzschean character from Wall Street. He was the old fashioned values the way do it the right way. Wall Street for him was a serious religion. It was The engine of American business and I mean, he meant it seriously because it was Wall Street was where you would go to get money, you would go to capitalize your business, for research and for and for capitalization. I mean, it's very important to build companies was his idea of America, it was building. And he saw Wall Street as the most positive factor, which I believe it was for many people, although, obviously, there's some privilege and abuse. Some people take advantage of two more. But my father was a good man. And I don't think he was money was not his goal. It was about his he was an intellectual, he wrote monthly letters, so he really cared about this. He wouldn't have, he wouldn't if he had lived past 85, he would have been, I think, surprised to see a Gordon Gekko type. When when I made the movie with the business was changing, I'd had friends who were making millions of dollars at that age at a young age, my age on Wall Street. Well, actually, I was that that time I was actually 43. So I'm saying that people were making money in their 30s in their some in their late 20s. This was unheard of in My Father's Day, all right now. And of course, it was revealed a new business was revealed the concept of businessmen like Gecko going into companies and getting their stockholders to vote for them and Bill breaking up these companies and in some cases, cannibalizing them, that is to say, taking businesses like big business and take a subsection of it and sell it off. cannibalize it. So what he does in the movie that Charlie Sheen's father is a union rep is a union rep at the airline, he thought he runs the union. I'm sorry. ignore that.

Alex Ferrari 41:39
It's blue star Blue Star, if I remember correctly.

Oliver Stone 41:41
Yeah, he takes on a tip from Charlie that was given to him. He takes advantage of the naivete of Charlie. Douglas, Michael Douglas does any buys into the company. It's one of his many things he's doing. He buys into the company and eventually gets control of it, and then breaks it up, destroying so many jobs. And I showed that it was a pain in that and I think that's important. And the father feels betrayed by the son. The father has a heart attack the son understands the, the scope of his mistake was is huge. So many people get hurt. And all his life, you know, he, in other words, he repents he gets his way, you'll see what happens in the movie, he, he goes, he changes. And he goes after Gekko reveals him to the SEC, and takes the fall, he of himself takes the fall he gets involved, he gets to go to jail. And presumably he's learned his lesson and comes out of jail. And he'll be a good man a better man. That's a true story. But the surprise of the movie, of course, was that first of all, they didn't want to make that either. Because who cares about business? There was not many movies before that. There were serious. This was and they they they distributed it very weirdly. So whole story they all right, right about the next book, but it that it actually hung around and it made money over time, it became a big cult favorite more than that it became a, as you say it affected a lot of young people who went into this and went into Wall Street. Some of them I've met since then some of them made fortunes on Wall Street, they owe me

Alex Ferrari 43:23
A small commission.

Oliver Stone 43:24
In a way I was my father's my father's continuation, because he was a broker made money for people not himself. The but the, the shock was at Michael Douglas, who was the supporting character, the bad guys just becomes the star of the movie in people's minds. And of course, Wednesday, fucking wins the Oscar. The film doesn't get nominated for anything, not even a screenplay. And there are many witty lines in it. But now he went to Michael and Charlie went his own way in his own career. And I think he was a talented young actor. But you know where he went, he went into it wasn't into girls and money. But he was the first part of the film. I don't think he was his second book.

Alex Ferrari 44:10
Fair enough. Fair enough. Now, let me ask you, what do you hope people take away from your life's work,

Oliver Stone 44:17
I have no such intention. I I make the films for to satisfy each inner need. And I try to make it as broad and, and entertaining as possible that you can never tell me if people walk away from Wall Street Oh, man. I'm here. I'm studying engineering and science. And I'm going to drop that I'm going to go to Wall Street and make a fortune. That wasn't the intention.

Alex Ferrari 44:36
Exactly.

Oliver Stone 44:37
So you can never offer the box office success is a misunderstanding between the audience and the other.

Alex Ferrari 44:45
All right, fair enough. Now, what advice would you give a filmmaker trying to break into the business in today's world.

Oliver Stone 44:55
I would just do it the same way I would write direct myself. I would take The limited amount of money I would make the most creative imaginative film I could. Because you have easier tools, less money is involved. I wouldn't necessarily do it on an iPhone and unless I had to, but you know what I'm saying? It's you can get beat you can make the film The question, of course, is how good is it? And will it be distributed? that's a that's a tough game. And in that regard, I can just say, show it and show it at the right places. I a lot of people take the film festival route, which is pretty long and hard. Because there's so many film festivals now. But you know, you got to do what you got to do to show it to people show it. I would add a few few layers to that. I would say, if you can afford it, go to acting school. Yes, reading drama. Study writing. Acting is very important. You know, I took a triad. I wasn't very good, but you must watch actors, you must understand them to some degree. By going to acting class and seeing the fundamentals how they're formed, how people shaped the characters and some succeeds. I'm done. You see a lot. So that's a very important thing. And I would that's a no an acidic why Melanie? Okay. I have, oh, I would end writing. Keep writing. write a diary. Write write about incidents in your life. Write about your take it and translate the personal onto paper. Now on paper. It's a whole other ballgame. You this happened? It was serious. It was violent. It was this. It affected you. But now is it here on paper? And that's, that's another transfer of energy is it's it's what it's about.

Alex Ferrari 46:46
Okay, now, what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life,

Oliver Stone 46:52
and read

Alex Ferrari 46:54
and read, read, read lots, read lots and not just film books?

Oliver Stone 46:58
She plays that scene, you know, structure plays, and movies. Oh, God, I saw how many movies? You forget movies. That's the problem in movies, you have to see more than once to really absorb them. As you know. You probably seen all the junk movies three four times.

Alex Ferrari 47:14
I've seen a few I've seen a few junk movies a few I've seen a few healthy movies.

Oliver Stone 47:18
I bet you missed frogs.

Alex Ferrari 47:21
I didn't miss frogs. Yes.I have not seen frogs. frogs.

Oliver Stone 47:26
Check it out. AIP 1974 five is a great movie is scared the shit out of me. I've never go back to horror films since then. Except for one the witch that that broke me up to I can't see horror films anymore. And that's why I didn't succeed in horror films because I was too much of a masochist. And I was always turning the the the horror was going inward into the guy's head. So to be a horror filmmaker, you have to be sadistic to some degree you have to want to nail the audience like Hitchcock did or dipalma.

Alex Ferrari 47:57
Now the lesson that took you the longest to learn you were asking me about something else? I'm sorry. Yeah. What is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the business or in life? Barbara Walters time? If you were a tree, Oliver, what kind of tree? Well, the longest to learn to love. Okay, that's great answer. Great, great answer. Now, where can people purchase your book chasing the light? everywhere? No, you can't. It's

Oliver Stone 48:28
For all I know, it's on Amazon. It's on. You know, iTunes, wherever you you check for your books. That's obviously the place to go. There are good bookstores in New York and LA and I guess in Texas somewhere. There might be that I'm sure I've heard it's in New York. I you know, the distribution in LA, I don't know it's spotty. This COVID thing is ruined so much. So many books that have not been open flat. You know, this book is doing well in spite of that. And we you know, it's there is an interest in it. And I think it's a good biography. But you can always get it somewhere.

Alex Ferrari 49:09
And when can we expect to sequel? And when can we expect the sequel? The next one?

Oliver Stone 49:16
I haven't, I have it in my head. I have diaries. It will take it out a year or two, too long story. It's a hard story. It doesn't end in 86. It's a great pie. And it's the realization of a dream. And it's the end of the act in your life, so to speak. You arrive, I was 40 years old. And I was on in my way I was on top of the world is feeling good. But it's a hell of a hell of a load to carry success. You don't have any idea how many people hit on you, or need things from you. And all of a sudden you're growing and your circle is growing and you have so many people in your life. It's a whole other ballgame.

Alex Ferrari 49:56
I can ask you one last question. throughout your career. You have worked within the studio system, somewhat, you know, finding money here and there. It's in the studio system. How do you work within that system and still maintain the creative fight that you have in all of your work and main fight for that vision?

Oliver Stone 50:13
You have to do it step by step. I don't, there is no formula. thing is I did enter into the into the studio system. You can't say platoon or Salvador were done inside that system. No, they were not. They were independent films. And they were recognized by the Independent Spirit people. But after that, yes, I had an entree and Wall Street. Yes, was made by Fox, what 20th Century Fox under rupert murdoch, and Barry Diller. And that was an eye. And then I worked. But I have to realize I always did what I wanted to do. I never, except for once or twice where I was compromised by the studio and I managed to always do it my way. Was my script, or I co written or even if my name is not on it, believe me. It was my It was my story. It was something I had totally stick put my stamp on. I never, I mean, I never I never worked from it never got scripts from the studio never worked. They'd say, Are you interested in this or lands? Sometimes it was a very big commercial film, but I couldn't do it. I couldn't get myself in. Because a commercial film in their minds and action film has to have a climax every 15 minutes or an action scene. And that's for putting a shape on it right away away. You know, Tom Cruise has to run here and he has to do that. And after 15 more minutes, yeah, you know, you it's it fucks you up? You got to do it. I found my way through it. I don't you know, talk radio was done independently again, with Garth Verbinski in Canada. And then president. The film that was followed by Born on the Fourth of July was done under difficult conditions with universal limited money. But Cruz was a movie movie star. And it was a story about a paraplegic. So obviously, they're not too keen on seeing Tom Cruise in a wheelchair for half the movie. You know, you understand these kinds of problems come up, always fighting about it. JFK, I sold it as a thriller. I sold it to Warner Brothers. They love the idea. It's a murder story. We they didn't think about nor did I have all the political implications of saying this. So but I had no doubt that I was following that a true path of Jim garrison who had started this horrible investigation that shocked the world, but he actually stuck to his guns. He was the first public figure a DA in New Orleans who actually did that. Nobody else opened their mouth about that awful crime that was buried in the bullshit of the Warren report. garrison had tremendous godson paid a huge price, that kind of thing. Nixon was done in from inside me, so made by Warner Brothers wouldn't make it it was made by an independent mariachis, not Mariota, Eddie Andy Vanya. Independent doors was made independent with Mario, because you see, I would go back and forth. These were independent producers became empowered in the 80s. From video sales, that was a whole difference. We have video sales, and that group of people Dino Doris was one of them. But Mary Oh, Andy, john Daly, they were able to carve out a little kingdoms from an Harvey Weinstein out of their little out of these video sales. And that became a business until it became abuse as all these things do. The numbers changed. And by the late 90s, the middle 90s the numbers were insane. And people were expecting too much. It's always the golden goose, you know, every okay video sale, and then we're gonna get we're mark up the prices. And we say it's worth this much. And it changes it distorts, and people accurate started asking for 15 $20 million, a picture, it all changed and became more corporate. And that's what happens. The corporations move in because the money is bigger. And these independent producers start to disappear. You can you can track the flow of them through time. And a lot of them disappear because the core studios or the corporations take over that business.

Alex Ferrari 54:19
Right. Oliver, I appreciate your time so much. Thank you so much for being on the show. And and thank you for doing being you all these years. Yeah. Thank you very, very much for that. And I recommend the book highly for everybody to read. So think it's going to fit

Oliver Stone 54:35
The question. Are you going to finish it because

Alex Ferrari 54:38
It's right. It's right here.

Oliver Stone 54:40
I won't finish it.

Alex Ferrari 54:41
Oh, no, I will. I will. I love I love books like this and you're writing in the book. I can feel like I'm there. And that's such a wonderful experience. And you're here and I'm hearing stories like I'm a movie geek. So all these kind of stories I love listening to and the inside stuff of stuff and I want That was when I picked up the book I expected to be like, you know, this is an Oliver Stone book. If it's anything like his movies, he's going to be raw, and he's going to tell the truth. And that's exactly what I've gotten so far, as far as I've gotten in the book. So I really do appreciate you putting this book out. And I hope this book and the show inspires many filmmakers and screenwriters out there. So thank you so much for your time, sir.

Oliver Stone 55:21
Remember the lie?

Alex Ferrari 55:23
Is the is the theme is the theme. Thank you, my friend. Merry Christmas.

Oliver Stone 55:27
It's a line of dialogue. And Nixon, by the way,

Alex Ferrari 55:30
yeah, of course,

Oliver Stone 55:31
it Nixon says that he's a great scene. Okay. Take care of yourself, Alex.

Alex Ferrari 55:34
All right, my friend. Thank you again. Thank you. Bye bye. I want to thank Oliver Stone so much for coming on the show and sharing his filmmaking journey with the tribe. As I promised this was going to be a legendary episode of the indie film hustle podcast, and I hope I did not disappoint you guys. If you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, including how to read Oliver's new book chasing the light writing, directing, and surviving Platoon, Midnight Express Scarface Salvador and the movie game, all you have to do is go to the show notes at indiefilmhustle.com/425. And if you want to get a free copy of the audio book, just head over to free film book.com and sign up for a free trial of audible and you can download all of his books for free and listen, I will also put that link in the show notes. As a filmmaker Oliver Stone really loves to stir up controversy he is a larger than life figure. And again, such a unique filmmaker that was able to play it and still is able to play within the studio system, but many times is much more at home, outside the studio system working with less money and making independent films. And again, I hope this interview inspires filmmakers and screenwriters out there to never give up and never surrender their dreams. Thank you so much for listening, guys. As always, keep that hustle going. Keep that dream alive. Stay safe out there. And I'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 099: Screenwriter’s Guide to Plotting Stories & Theme with K.M. Weiland

Today on the show we have returning champion author K.M. Weiland. I wanted to bring her back on the show to discuss her new book Writing Your Story’s Theme: The Writer’s Guide to Plotting Stories That Matter.

“Theme Is What Your Story Is Really About.”

Theme—the mysterious cousin of plot and character. Too often viewed as abstract rather than actionable, theme is frequently misunderstood and left to chance. Some writers even insist theme should not be purposefully implemented. This is unfortunate because in many ways theme is story. Theme is the heart, the meaning, the point. Nothing that important should be overlooked.

Powerful themes are never incidental. They emerge from the conjunction of strong plots and resonant character arcs. This means you can learn to plan and implement theme. In doing so, you will deepen your ability to write not only stories that entertain, but also stories that stay with readers long after the end.

Writing Your Story’s Theme will teach you:

  • How to create theme from plot and character.
  • Why every supporting character and subplot should enhance the theme.
  • How to prevent theme from seeming preachy or “on the nose.”
  • What to consider in identifying the best theme for any given story.
  • And much more!

Conscious mastery of theme will elevate every story you write and allow you to craft fiction of depth and meaning.

Enjoy my conversation with K.M. Weiland.

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Alex Ferrari 0:20
I'd like to welcome back to the show, returning champion, Katie Weiland. How you doing, Katie?

K.M. Weiland 3:16
Good. Thanks for having me.

Alex Ferrari 3:17
Of course, thank you for coming back on the show your first, your first appearance on the show about character arcs was extremely popular, a lot of people really, really liked it. A lot of people in the tribe really, really liked it. So when I saw that you had a new book out, covering theme, of course, I had to invite you back to Yeah, to chat about

K.M. Weiland 3:39
Character arcs and theme are two of my favorite subjects. So

Alex Ferrari 3:44
And you're new, and your new book is called writing your stories theme. Yes. And it just came out a few weeks ago as of this recording. So yeah, and it's already number one on like, multiple lists on Amazon already and everything. So yeah, it's exciting. It's always exciting to being on. Yeah, I remember when I get when you get that little, that little orange thing next, like number one bestseller on you. It's like the see like, so nice. Nice when you do that. So Alright, so can you define what a theme is? The theme of a story is for the audience.

K.M. Weiland 4:20
Yeah. So I think that's kind of like why I wrote the book. Because I think that there's a lot of ways that we can think about theme. And there are a lot of ways that people approach it, you'll have one person talking about it in this aspect when somebody's talking to each other in there. There's a lot of confusion, I think because of that, particularly about applying theme because some of those descriptions are not practical. Some of them are just very abstract. So you can have theme as just like a unifying idea of the story, something like that if you can have dramatic metaphors in which the story represents something. It's it's an example of something that is it's demonstrating from within, but for me the way that I approach theme in the way that I have found it most interesting and most practicable, is to think of it, to realize that really what it is, is the meeting of plot and character. And that, particularly when I was working on the character arcs book, it became really clear to me that when you're developing character arc, what you're doing is proving your theme. And this is true, ultimately, whether people are trying to impose a theme onto the story apart from the character arc or not, what your character undergoes, and how he changes with over the course of the story. That ultimately is what your story is about. And whatever, we'll call it a lesson, although I don't really like that, because it's very moral of the story. But whatever lesson that characters learning, whether it's existential or moral, or I mean, it can be very deep or very shallow. But that ultimately is what your story is putting out into the world and what it's positing about our reality, and that, ultimately, is the theme of the story. So if you can identify that, that through line, where your blood and your character come together, and also like harmonizes, this this debate we have between plot versus character, and which is better. Because together, they come together, and they create the theme of the story, and this beautiful thru line. And then of course, there's so much complexity that arises out of that, and how we're then able to, you know, bring in symbolism and bring in all kinds of layers of metaphor, to to really garnish kind of the theme as we go along

Alex Ferrari 6:32
To support the theme, if you will, yeah. Well, that they'll does every story have a theme?

K.M. Weiland 6:38
I believe, yes.

Alex Ferrari 6:39
I've been the bad even the bad stories?

K.M. Weiland 6:43
Well, that's a good question. I think that I've always taken issue with this idea that people will talk about just a story. I think that's total baloney. Because ultimately, one way or another story is always saying something about our world. Sometimes it's saying it really well, sometimes it's not saying it very well at all, I think a big problem with a lot of stories that don't work, is they don't really know what they're saying. And so they're just kind of throwing out multiple messages. They're still saying something, but it's not a unified, cohesive and resonant kind of a hole. But yeah, I think every time you put a visual on the screen, every time your character says something, every sentence on the page, that's saying something. And within the patterns that arise in a larger work, you're always going to have a theme, whether it's well executed or not.

Alex Ferrari 7:35
So can we can I can I do like a couple of rapid fire movie titles and see if you can decipher a theme for me, just like her all the time. If you see no, I'm gonna try to choose some very popular ones. So any of the Indiana Jones is like, what is the theme of Indiana Jones? Because he's one of the more famous characters in cinema history.

K.M. Weiland 7:54
Yeah, so Indiana Jones is interesting, because he is a character that is typically seen not to have a character arc is very, very bond the same? Exactly. It's very episodic. And that's the way it was designed to be as like the old serial shows, Sherlock.

Alex Ferrari 8:10
Right.

K.M. Weiland 8:12
long time since I've seen those movies. I would say the first one, we definitely can see themes of responsibility. In the end, and the climax, we see how bad guys the Nazis are disregarding the Ark of the Covenant and are not respecting the history and the archaeology. And Andy does and Indy survives, and they die. So right there, I think even just in that we have a statement. You know, from the storytellers about what they think, you know, is is a truth. And inherent in that is a theme.

Alex Ferrari 8:47
So theme is basically like, I think you just said that clear word, this is a statement. So the storyteller is creating a statement for the world to understand through the story that they're writing, essentially. And that's what as a writer, you should start thinking about the theme or the statement that you're trying to make through character, which then termed goes into, through character plot, and then essentially theme and then I think, isn't theme essentially character and plot kind of?

K.M. Weiland 9:16
Exactly. Together? Yeah, I think a lot of there's this like misconception, I consider it a misconception that a lot of it was definitely something that I was taught a lot, or read a lot when I was starting out, it was basically like, don't think about your theme. Don't write a theme. Because if you do, one of two things will happen. Either you'll end up with this horrible moral of a story, or you'll end up you know, just trying to hammer this theme into a story and it doesn't fit and it's inorganic. And I think there's a lot of truth to that. But I think once you understand that theme just emerges organically when your plot and your character are working together. So I think yeah, it's really important and amazing when an author has a passionate statement that they want to make. But at the same time, I would be a little cautious of that, because you don't want it to end up, you know, being so moralistic that that's all the story is about. And it's the art of story is, is making the plot and the character arc and external metaphor or the theme. So you could use there many, many stories that never actually say what they're about. They never state what the theme is. But if they're really well done, then just simply through the scenes, the visual scenes through the characters and their interactions, and ultimately through how the characters have changed and what is decided, in the climactic moment of the conflict. The readers and the viewers get it, you know, we see very clearly what is damaged. I mean, Indiana Jones is a great example. Because we see it's very visual, we see exactly what is being said in this story. So like it or not,

Alex Ferrari 10:54
right, exactly. So just so everybody understands listening, so if you as if the author if we lived in an alternate universe, where I think there is a show called The the man, the man on the top castle or something like that, where the Nazis won, where the Nazis won, and Indiana Jones then would have been never called Indiana Jones, they would have called the Nazis are just trying to find some archaeological experiments. If that whole concept was switched, where then the bad guys win, the good guys lose. And that's just the way it's supposed to be. That's a statement by the storyteller stating that that's the way the world should be. That's the that's what they're trying to put out there into the world. That's the theme of the story. So and then it's up to you to believe it or not. So it's almost becomes a propaganda but propaganda. Now we're getting into another conversation where propaganda is all about point of view. And the point of view of the Nazis is that propaganda, it's a story, but from our point of view is like, that's just essentially perfect.

K.M. Weiland 11:53
Yeah. And I think that's a really good example, actually about point of view in that you we could, we could, and we have many stories that do not end well, that seem to be positing something that most of us would completely disagree with. But because of the way it's done, you know, it's done with irony. We understand like this, this is not like, this isn't literally what the filmmaker or the the writer is saying. But they're using irony to kind of say the exact opposite. Whereas in other stories, it's completely on the nose. And like, yeah, Nazis are great. That's, that's, and that is, you know, where we get into the whole thing of propaganda.

Alex Ferrari 12:29
Right? Well, I mean, so I mean, just using the movie, like Thelma and Louise, I mean, it does not end happily. I mean, they do not, they do not ride off into the sunset, they kind of do, but not in the way that we normally and I think that was also a beautifully twist that they did, they did lit they literally did right off into the sunset. But unfortunately, spoiler alert off a cliff. So but the themes in that movie are so powerful, and and and that story are so powerful. And so it, and it's I mean, it is pretty on the nose. I don't know, how would you like I mean, I'm assuming you've seen Thelma and Louise. Oh, yeah. Yeah, it's, it's on the nose. But it's, it's not though. I don't know. What do you think?

K.M. Weiland 13:13
Well, I was gonna say that, I think that it's much easier to do themes that are not on the nose, when they don't end, happy, happy. It's not to say Happy Endings don't work or aren't resonant. But when everything works out, you know, when the hero is the shining Knight of truth, and he's completely rewarded for this. It doesn't resonate, it doesn't ring true. And so I think in a movie, like Thelma and Louise, which ends tragically, there's this resonance, because there's also there's also a triumph. There's also a heroism in the way it ends, because they, they end in alignment with the story is truth, even though it also is, you know, the end of their lives and therefore a tragic end story. So but I think that's a that's a really important point. Actually, it's not that you can't end happy endings, well love happy endings. But it's important that that happy ending when you if that's what you're doing is earned, that the the character, whether they, you know, have represented the thematic truth throughout the story, or they've come to it in the end, that it hasn't been easy, because I think we all resonate with that, because in our own lives, it's not easy. And we kind of resent it when the hero is just like, everything's just super easy for him. And then he can shake his finger at us in the end and say, See, that was the truth. Everybody should do this. And we resent the authors as well. We resent when that happens. And then I'll use one of the movies I bring. I bring this movie up a lot because it's such a powerful story. Very popular story. Not powerful, but very popular story in the Zeitgeist of the world right now are the Avengers in the whole Marvel Universe, where I'm assuming Did you see the last Avengers the Big Bang game one,

Alex Ferrari 14:58
okay. So and again, If you don't no one's seen it, please stop the recording because I'm going to give you a couple of spoiler alerts here. But the end of that movie, it could so easily just been a normal. The good guys beat up the bad guys, there's no there's no risk. There's no no one no loss, no nothing. But yet, in that they they created not only a little loss, massive loss where Tony Stark essentially sacrifices himself because the the obstacle was so large that someone had to die. And that made that resonate so much more than everyone sitting around eating trauma at the end of the movie, which work which worked fine for the first Avengers, but not so much for the last one, because they had built it up over time someone had to die in order for this to work. And so would you agree?

K.M. Weiland 15:47
Yeah, totally. Um, I was really psyched that basically they brought the story to an end, you know, even though supposedly, supposedly, it's going to continue in other movies, they brought that story to an end. And that's something that I find is very problematic. And serial fiction, whether it's, you know, TV series that just go on and on and on, or things, you know, potentially like the Marvel Universe, there's no end. And if there's no, no, there's no, there's no meaning, ultimately, because you're not saying this is what the story is about. And also, it's really hard, like you say, to ramp those stakes and say, this matters, if there isn't an end, and there aren't consequences. So yeah, I that was something. I mean, that series is a whole big Marvel fan. But I mean, it was, like you said it had its problems. It wasn't a seamless presentation by any means. But I was very happy and very impressed with what they did by bringing it full circle in that final story in a lot of ways, first and foremost, for bringing it to an end. But also, I just thought it was just fantastic how they brought it for full circle, how to begin the very first movie, we go all the way back to Iron Man ends with him saying I am Iron Man. And then we get to come all the way to the end. And it means something completely different. In the beginning, it's totally egoic. In the end, it's totally self sacrificial. So I thought that was very powerful, a very powerful example of why we need to bring stories to an end.

Alex Ferrari 17:12
And also, I mean, and we want to talk about the magic. I mean, well, comic books, specifically the Marvel comic book characters. They are I mean, the themes are so they, I mean, Stan, you know, God, rest in peace has created some of the most memorable characters in human history, essentially, and but their themes are extremely powerful. And I think that's one of the things that resonates so powerfully with, with, with people around the world, every one of those, and it's not stories that have themes, but I feel that the characters have theme more, because there's a theme attached to Spider Man, and to Hulk and to Fantastic Four and two x men, x men is racism and stat being a loner and standing out, Spider Man is being a young kid just trying to figure things Hulk is obviously anger, fantastic for his family issues. But they're but their themes associated the character, can you attach themes to characters? I mean, obviously, you can. But what's your take on that?

K.M. Weiland 18:09
Yeah, and I think that's actually that's a great way to bring it back to plot and character. Because and honestly, the whole Marvel if we look at the whole Marvel Cinematic Universe, you know, through that story arc, there's a bazillion different plots going on, everybody's got their own plots, you know, every movies got its own plot. And really, at the end of the day, it's not the plots we remember, you know, we don't we don't think about Oh, that was such a great plot. And in, you know, that particular movie, because most of them weren't, a lot of the plots were very problematic. And a lot of

Alex Ferrari 18:39
like, I could remember that when you said that I'm like, which of the plots I remember, like winter soldier was really good Winter Soldier is probably one of the best. And there's like a handful of like, plots that I remember, but I don't remember the plots as much.

K.M. Weiland 18:50
Yeah, you remember the characters. And I think that it's exactly because theme is so rooted in character. And the story, the series works as a whole overarching, because that does have a plot that has a unifying plot in which everything kind of works together with fantasy as the antagonist. Which is another good point about how antagonists pull together the plot, which is why a lot of the individual movies had their problems with plot. But yeah, it's the characters theme is inherent in the character arc. It's inherent in the the internal conflict between the Matic lies and truths that happen on a character level. And you can stick you know, themes onto the surface of a plot and say this plot is about why war is evil, or whatever. But if it's not happening inside of the character, if you're not just feeling that struggle, then you're really going to struggle to execute a meaningful theme that is going to resonate with with viewers or readers.

Alex Ferrari 19:51
Now, what is the thin yet thematic principle?

K.M. Weiland 19:56
Okay, thematic principle is basically a term for any iteration of theme that you find in your story. So it's the unifying idea, though, when you are trying to figure out what is my theme. And you're, you know, looking at like, well, it's kind of about this. And it's kind of about that the thematic principle is going to be your through line. So that is something that once you identify it with us, once you identify what is at the heart of specifically the protagonists, character development, that is going to become that the magic principle for the story, and is something that you can then kind of use up as a plumb line to measure all the other little elements and decide is this working? Is this supporting the theme is approving the theme? Or is it just kind of extraneous and really telling a different story altogether?

Alex Ferrari 20:42
Now, how do you prevent theme from becoming a little bit on the nose or preachy? Because that I mean, we've all seen movies, or read books that are a little bit on the nose a little bit, like, stop preaching to me so much, and just tell me a story?

K.M. Weiland 21:00
I think that's a good question. Because I mean, so many of us, you know, if we're, if we're interested in theme at all, it's probably because we really are passionate about certain topics, and we want to be able to comment on them or share our views in some degree. And honestly, that's a, that's a tricky thing to do, and the medium of fiction, because when you are on the nose, when you say this is the way it is, this is what I think and you should think and do. It doesn't never go as well. Um, but I think one of my favorite ways to look at this and it isn't explicit. But one of my favorite kind of rules of thumb, is to think of it as if stories are not there to answer to provide answers. They're there to ask questions. And I think this is most powerful when the author himself is asking the question, because I mean, we all have our ideas about how we think things should be or how things will turn out if this and this happens. But I think when when the author him or herself really inhabits that question, whether they think they know the answer or not, and explores it from within the drama of the story, you know, throws the characters into the plot, and lets events start happening. You to really explore that you have to get down on the ground and get down and dirty and really question your own beliefs about things. Otherwise, the characters do not ring true. And I've always said that if you don't like you're not almost convinced, by your antagonists point of view, then you're not writing him, right. And your theme is probably going to come across very one sided. I think the most powerful themes are the ones where the protagonist, and to some degree, the author, and to some degree, the readers have a serious question about what about the worldview that's being presented? Is this working? You know, is this really how it's going to be because of the sacrifices that are involved in the the moral gray areas and all of that? I think Sam Raimi is speaking of Marvel I think Sam Raimi is versions of the his original two Spider Man movies first to get a really, really great job of this really explored the consequences of heroism and responsibility and, and I mean, we really see that even in the second one were Peters like completely questioning do I do I even want to be Spider Man, this stinks, I don't want to do. And that really flies in the face of kind of the surface. obvious way to go about, you know, being a heroes great. This is awesome. If everybody wants to, you know, have a need. That was a very powerful exploration of that subject.

Alex Ferrari 23:39
Yeah, I mean, because you're right, because everybody's like, everybody wants to have powers, but everyone, that's what what made Stan so amazing, is that he gave superheroes problems. like Superman never had any, you know, like issues with his relationships. You know, at the beginning, you know, Batman was pretty wonderment like he's like, you know, and Wonder Woman did dead and Aquaman did that. But when you got into the Marvel, I mean, you got spider man who had pimples I was dealing with, you know, being a nerd at school, like, oh, like everybody else has dealt with at one point in their life or another and gave it in giving those problems. That's, I think, what made those characters so they resonate so much, even to this day, and that's why I guess the popularity of the MCU so much, is because even the creator even like me, man, like you Guardians of the Galaxy. When Adam and Guardians of the Galaxy came out I was like, Wow, man, they are just scraping like the butt like and nobody wants to see a man movie. And yet Ant Man was like an amazing heist film. It was just like a fun heist film almost. It was just it's it's it's remarkable. But you also said something earlier regards to antagonists bringing together the theme. Can you kind of delve into that a little bit more like using let's say Thanos as an example because Santos was such a an overarching He was only this the true villain in two, two movies, right? It was the last two Avengers. He was that he was the actual villain, where he always was kind of like, you know, he was the puppet master for the first eight years or something like that. And then he just showed him He's like, Well, apparently no one else is gonna get it done. So I'll show up and take care of it. But how how does a character like Daniels kind of bring together the theme of that whole overarching, first 10 years of the MCU?

K.M. Weiland 25:27
Well, I think, to me, the the best entry point to that question is really to look at how the antagonist kind of defines the plot. And obviously, as we've been talking about plot theme character, they're all they're all three sides of the same thing, basically. So you can hardly talk about one without talking about the other. But the antagonist is, as the obstacle that is opposing the protagonist in the story, he's what creates the conflict. So no antagonists no conflict, no story, the protagonist, just, you know, goes straight to finish and gets $200 or whatever. And so the, but the antagonist is, as we all get that, so yeah, there's a horrible bad guy out there in the distance that we know is gonna show up and be the big boss in the climax. But if that antagonist isn't consistently what is opposing the protagonist throughout the structure of the story, then ultimately the story, it just, I mean, at its best, it's still kind of works. But it loses that deep cohesion and resonance because the protagonist is off doing other stuff. He's, you know, dealing with other antagonists. And I think we see that again and again, in the Marvel movies, it's like the the antagonist is is kind of the subplot. He's off doing whatever shows up for the big battle. And most of the time, it's more interesting personal problems that are actually the plot of the story as we like Iron Man to immediately comes to mind.

Alex Ferrari 26:53
You are like, I mean, like Black Panther had a great antagonist, he has a, there's a handful of really good villains. Very few, though, I want to say probably like, five, out of all the movies that were like, holy cow, these are really good. I mean, I think warmongers actually going to get his own spin off movie. Really, I heard, I heard, I heard through the geek, the Geek vine, that, that he's actually gonna get his own spin off. Because he was, he was just the opposite side of the coin of Black Panther. And he arguably was, was right. And in regards to what his his point, his world point of view was even Black Panther agreed with him. He just didn't agree with how he was doing it. But he agreed with it. That's what made it so amazing, because the hero is not supposed to agree with the point of view of the villain. But yet you're like, Look, you're right. You know, things were bad, but you just can't go around killing people. Yeah, I

K.M. Weiland 27:49
think that Black Panther is actually a good example of kind of both sides of the coin. And that structurally, it struggled with the antagonist a little bit it had some issues with the antagonist, being there throughout the story. And being you know, he kind of doesn't show up until I want to say like, halfway through almost really, like he said that the build dead, the setups.

Alex Ferrari 28:07
Yeah, that that kind of set everything up, right,

K.M. Weiland 28:09
anyway. But he's also a great example of what I was saying about how we need to be almost convinced by the antagonists point of view. And when that happens, you get that really is like the generator of all of this potential for amazing change within the protagonist. And when the protagonist starts changing, or any character but particularly the protagonist, that's where a theme is generated, because it can't help but just spontaneously emerge from what's happening from the events in the story.

Alex Ferrari 28:37
Well, yeah, like, I mean, Thanos his point of view is like, Look, everything's overpopulated. We need it, we need to thin the herd. I mean, again, rough conversation to have, do we agree with the concept of like, Yeah, all the resources are being taken away. And there are too many, you know, creatures in the war in the universe and things like that. But you can't just kill everybody with the snap of a finger. So the point of view is, it's like not, it's not, that's what I think always find a good villain to be in a good theme for a villain is the the twisting of the mustache character sucks. Oh, there's just horrible. They just like, oh, he's just being bad. Because there's no point I've just been, we've been watching a lot since we've been locked up a lot of old movies, again, a lot of old shows again. And and when you see a villain, you're like, oh, that villain has no point of view, and it's dead. The whole movie dies. The whole the whole story falls apart when the when the there's no real strong point of view. But when the villain does have that strong and you write theme just kind of just just flourishes right out of that, because it has to there is no other way. It has to be there. Yeah, it's like the protagonist, you know, comes in and says, you know,

K.M. Weiland 29:45
this is the right way to do it. And then as soon as the antagonist comes up with a convincing argument, why that's not so it's just the the protagonist is kind of like, Oh, well, Plan B, I guess. There is no plan B and so then all sudden, there's like, genuine You know, character development, story development, unexpected, you know, original events that come out of that because it is so genuine in that the author or the storytellers are really, you know, having that discussion with themselves. Like, Oh, well, maybe maybe my hair was not as bright as I thought he was. What does that mean? and all kinds of interesting things come out of that.

Alex Ferrari 30:23
Absolutely. Absolutely. Now, thematically a film series and a character like James Bond, James Bond, original James Bond pre Daniel Craig, what is the theme of those movies? You know, woman eyes, drink a lot of alcohol, then just kill people and distract and indispensability.

K.M. Weiland 30:42
Like, like any of the ones before Daniel Craig, but of course, I'm familiar with the gist of him. I don't Yeah, see that? That, to me is an example of every story has a theme, but just because it's saying something doesn't necessarily mean that it's having a positive influence on the world. Right,

Alex Ferrari 31:05
James? Because James Bond, honestly, before Daniel, once because, you know, of course, I always consider Casino Royale, probably the best James Bond movie, in my personal opinion. Yeah,

K.M. Weiland 31:13
I really like that.

Alex Ferrari 31:14
I mean, it's just, it's a masterpiece in that genre. But But he he was a character, he had a character arc. James Bond never had a character arc before. Like, you know, Sean Connery, his car, you know, and Pierce Brosnan, they were the same dude, from the beginning to the end, they never really changed. They just kind of went along, not even the people around them changed. I mean, maybe some of the, the female toys that he used along the way, like the bond girls, which is so out of date, and but that for the time that it came out, it was it was it but you go back and thinking like this is not a message that kind of resonate. Now, if you just forget all about the message, just enjoy the ride, then I get it, it's a ride, and you're going along. So he's the good guy is going to stop the bad guy, but it's not really deep.

K.M. Weiland 32:03
Yeah, and I think that's fine to a point. But that's why I say there's no such thing as just a story is anything that you're bringing into your environment that is becoming a part of your own, you know, view of the world and your own reality that's changing you in some way or another, you know, whether you're it could, it could be conscious, it could be not. So I think that's a great example. I haven't seen those movies. So I'm not I can't directly comment on them. I've only seen the Daniel Craig ones. And but I think it's a great example of how mindless entertainment is never actually harmless entertainment. There's always something that is affecting your view of the world.

Alex Ferrari 32:43
You know, you're absolutely right, because like, like mindless video games and things like that people are like, because video games are stories, and we're telling a story with the video games, you're just performing the story yourself. But a lot of times those those stories and those kind of mindless movies or mindless shows, they there's something coming through it sometimes it's not good. And it does, it does have an effect on people, whether that be ultraviolence whether that be massage and whether it be you know, the Nazis you know, any of those kinds of things. It's as storytellers we have a very big responsibility. With especially if you're given the platform of and millions and millions of dollars to make a movie or show. We have a big responsibility. And the creators have a big responsibility to what I love what you've been saying this a couple times that deposit. What are you depositing into, you know, the statement you're making, you're depositing this into the world's narrative. Now, that's a very powerful statement. And I love that you said I might actually steal that. Because it's, it's true every time you you tell a story, you're depositing it into the library of the human experience that might live for a long time, I might just fall off to the into the wasteland. But it is extremely important that you know that you have that you have this responsibility. Would you agree?

K.M. Weiland 34:10
Yeah, totally. That's something I'm, I'm very happy you said that, actually. Because that's something I'm really passionate about. Just in that, I think there's so much entertainment is so available to us now. And it's so easy for people to create it. You know, we're and I think that's great. I mean, I think storytelling is a deeply important thing for anybody to do that. It's it's very powerful. Just on a personal level, never mind if you're actually able to, you know, share that with other people. But I think we are able to share what we're creating more and more easily with people around us. There's just so many platforms, and it's so easy, you know, in easy to you know, get out there and have an audience and most of us do it because it's fun. It's entertaining. It's fun, you know, and we just want to, we think we just want to entertain other people. And that's fine to a point. But I do think we have to truly recognize the responsibility of what we're doing. Stories are, it's one thing to say, this is my view of the world, I want you to believe it. It's another thing to write a story about it, particularly a relatively well crafted story, which ultimately is a subliminal message. You know, most people are not conscious of what they are of the truth that they're receiving, through stories. If the themes are really well done, nobody's saying them, but they're there and just the same, they're being proven, you know, through the reality of the story through the visuals, and the events. And I, I believe very strongly that it's deeply important for artists of all stripes, but particularly storytellers, in this context, to recognize that, you know, the power is yours to do what you will with, but be conscious of it. Because there is no such thing as just a story. Even if you're the only person who reads it, it's still affecting you. It's changing you. And insofar as it changes you, it's going to have a ripple effect that changes the world around you.

Alex Ferrari 36:07
It is arguably one of the most powerful things that the human, the humans have created a story because it is a story can change a person's perspective point of view, it could go bad, or it can go. Good. And that's also relatively speaking, like I always tell people, you know, Hitler didn't wake up every morning thinking he was the bad guy. He woke up every morning like I'm doing God's work, like, you know, that's that was, that was him as a villain, you have to think that Darth Vader is not sitting around going. So add? No, he had, it's always about a point of view. And but it is, we as filmmakers have to think that and i and i know you've probably seen this as well, when you read stories, by first time writers or young writers, that that's not there, they're not thinking that far ahead. In regards to the story of how this story could actually affect people, they're just trying to get a story written that that's hard enough, let alone like, Oh, god, you're gonna throw this responsibility on me now that I have to, I have to like, Oh, my God, what? Like, I have a loaded shotgun, and I'm walking around with it like, no, look, look, yes. But don't worry, you're not going to kill anybody with a story, hopefully, hopefully, hopefully. But but it is a responsibility, but you don't see that. And only when you start seeing like the Masters work, then you start seeing the just weave theme in so effortlessly, characters almost so effortlessly, that you just go Okay, so when you start reading Shakespeare, you know, that dude, or you start reading, you know, even current day masters like Stephen King, or JK Rowling and the Harry Potter series, like you start looking at the stuff that they did and how they wrote it, it's just, but the themes just pop so heavily in all of those things.

K.M. Weiland 38:04
Yeah. And I think you use the word master. And I think that's the key there is that they've mastered the plot, they've mastered the character. And because of that, like I say, the theme emerges. And it's there. And it's so powerful, because the stories they're writing are so cohesive, they're so resonant. All the pieces are there for a reason. And they had, I think, both Stephen King and probably rolling they have, they have things they want to say. And they say them, you know, well, they say them, you know, through the honesty of their own stories, and that has clearly resonated with billions of people. But yeah, I think I think it is perhaps, good for writers who are starting out to realize that Yeah, you're you it's not the weight of the world, on your shoulders, it's more about just a consciousness just, I mean, don't approach it, approach it with fear and trembling, but don't approach it with this, you know, sobriety approach it with that same childlike wonder that you had when you were a kid, and you were making up, you know, probably the stories of greater truth than you will ever write as an adult. And it was just fun, you know, you were just tapped into it. And it was fun and exciting. And then I think we kind of we start overthinking it as adults, we were like, so serious with the responsibility of our adult ness, and how we've got to make sure that everybody else is just as responsible and, you know, then we start writing stuff that's on the nose, we lose the muse, we lose that childlike innocence. Really, it's not just the Wonder but the innocence, that allows us to ask questions, you know, to just step into that story world and look around and see, you know, what, what do I think? I don't know, let's let's find out. Let's you know, throw some characters out there and see what happens. And maybe by the end, you know, I will have been impacted by this more than anybody who reads it. But it's exciting. It doesn't. It needs to be something that we take seriously. But I definitely think that ultimately, it's still about having fun. It's still about entering that. Kind of that dream zone and just playing?

Alex Ferrari 40:03
Absolutely. Now, we talked a lot about character affecting theme. How can you use plot? specifically? How can we use plot to help create our theme?

K.M. Weiland 40:16
Yeah, so like I say, plot character theme, they're what I call the big three. And really, if, if all, if your story is working well, then they are seamlessly, organically, even effortlessly going to be working together. So if your plot is working really well, then it's almost certain that your characters and your theme are also there. And if something's wrong with your plot, it's probably because something's off with one of the other two. But specifically, if you look at character arc, and how that works over the entirety of the story, you can see how deeply tied in it is with plot structure. And, you know, more or less all plot structure systems are pointing to the same thing, just with, you know, different perspectives. I specifically use the three act structure, and you can just pretty much just overlay, you know, a basic character structure onto the plot structure and they interact. You can't have one without the other. It's not like the characters off doing his little subplot development. Well, you know, the James Bond action is happening over here.

Alex Ferrari 41:16
Yeah. Because then they wouldn't be on live. But that's also then you wouldn't be the main character, you'd be a sub character.

K.M. Weiland 41:22
Yeah. So it's, it's happening together, the internal conflict is what is prompting the character to act in the external conflict. And then the external conflict is, you know, coming back and asking him to question within himself, what he's doing and why he's doing it. And so it's, it's from within that the character has certain mindsets and ideas that he wants to accomplish. And the plot is then through the conflict, you know, and the consequences and the stakes is going to prove one way or the other, whether the characters you know, initial ideas are true. And from that is where the emerges. So

Alex Ferrari 42:00
what can you talk? Can you talk a little bit about the difference between theme and a message? Because that is that there's a, there's a subtleness to that.

K.M. Weiland 42:09
Yeah. So I think it was Michael Hauger, who wrote writing screenplays that sell I believe,

Alex Ferrari 42:15
Michael Haig, Michael Haig,

K.M. Weiland 42:19
Yes, so, um, I believe he was the one that that that differentiated that or that was the first person I'd seen who differentiated theme from message. And I thought that was such a keen observation. And the way he defines them basically, is that theme is a universal principle. It's some will just say love conquers all, something that everybody resonates to, regardless who they are, where they live. Their their circumstances, message, however, is very specific to the situation within the story. So the message is something that is, is only going to apply to people who are like the protagonist, people who are in this same situation. You know, like, trying to think of something that has to do with love conquers all. But you know, your specific love story, right? It's like, it only applies to you and your partner. It's not something that's necessarily you know, the lessons that you learned, and that the theme of that isn't something that's necessarily going to apply to all people everywhere, even though we all relate to the idea of love. Right? I think that's really important because it allows you to play out the specifics of a scenario, and yet still have something to say to a much broader audience. beauty in the beast, love conquers all.

Alex Ferrari 43:34
I was racking my love conquers all. Beating the beast. Perfect. Okay, there.

K.M. Weiland 43:39
Yeah. And how many of us, you know, have to go through that where you're, you know, it's the beast, and you have to redeem him? And yeah, well, that's

Alex Ferrari 43:45
pretty specific. That's, uh, well, I mean, arguably, that is it's according to my wife. Not that not that specific.

K.M. Weiland 43:55
That's true. That's the beauty of it, because it is like a premium archetypal story. And yet again, the specifics of it, you know, particularly in the fairy tale medium, very specific, the message you know, is, you know, don't make the fairy mad when she comes to your castle, you know, or she's gonna curse you and you're gonna have to go through all this.

Alex Ferrari 44:14
So let's, since we've talked about since we've touched upon the fairy tale, the fairy tale is, is these stories have been around for hundreds, if not, some of them even 1000s of years, some of these stories, and they so archetype they're so often they're so on the nose, like Beauty and the Beast is fairly on the nose. There's nothing subtle about Buting the beast, or Little Mermaid, or Lion King, or I'm going through Disney movies now, but but they're, they're very on the nose. There those themes are such but those that kind of those kind of stories are extremely important to the human condition. The hope the love conquers all is a very powerful and important theme that As humans, we should understand, or at least have Have some sort of inkling of what that is, these stories. Like I always love that George Lucas said this He's like, myth is essentially the meat and potatoes of our society. And that's how we pass along the core elements like love conquers all good versus bad, you know, beyond this, you know, the, the boy who cried wolf, these kind of like very struck these kind of themes. I'd love to hear your take on that on fairy tales and what the power of what they do I

K.M. Weiland 45:34
archetypal stories I or something else I'm very passionate about. And I think I would argue that they are not on the nose, I think that they are because they are so metaphoric. I mean, they're not literal, you know, nobody to actually turns into a beast, you know, they're not cursed by fairies and turned into a beast. That's a metaphor. And therefore, even though the stories are very straightforward, and even simplistic, in some ways, they're not on the nose, simply because they're not literal. If you had a boy, Cried Wolf, you know, if you had if that was a story where the boy, the mother told the boy Stop lying, and the boy came in, and, you know, it's no longer about what's actually, you know, being dramatized. It's specifically like, in in, in my book, in the theme book, I talked about how, when I was in middle school, I had to read these stories about kids who, you know, did kids stuff that you had to mow the lawn to earn some money they had, they found, they found a lost wallet, and they had to return it. You know, it was like these these little lessons about how to be a good kid, you know, and that's all they were, there was nothing about them that wasn't literally, this is what you're supposed to do as a kid. And I hated them, even as a kid. They're so preachy and on the nose, but stories, I think, like, you know, anything where you find that really archetypal element, fairy tales, or Star Wars or comic books, I think it's because they transcend the literal Spider Man is just a teenage kid who reminds all of us of ourselves at some point in our lives. But he has spider powers, you know, that's nothing that any of us actually relate to. It's just a metaphor, not a hyperbole of our own lives.

Alex Ferrari 47:22
Now, we've talked about theme in regard to like, I think you were talking about? Well, it's a concept of love conquers all, and certain themes, within stories. But genre has such a powerful point in regards to theme. Whereas there's certain things that you just can't do with theme because of the genre they're in and then sometimes, when you can transcend that, because then you've really hit, like, get out is an amazing example of taking the horror genre and completely flipping it on its head. dramatically. Yeah, yeah, I

K.M. Weiland 48:02
think genre actually, genre stories are very archetypal. I think the essence of genre is archetype. We have most obviously, perhaps in the romance, romance genre, but also in many, many different I mean, the very fact that there are tropes. And there are templates, though, that readers expect you to follow, that creates an archetype, but most of them are even more deeply rooted in an archetype than than even just modern conventions about the actual genre. So yeah, there are certain themes that are inherent in certain genres. love conquers all, being an obvious one for for romance, or the you know, good conquers evil being an obvious one for Action, Adventure stories, things like that. And so yeah, I think we can see that these are their archetypes, because they're stories that are perennially asking the same questions, because we say love conquers all, or good triumphs over evil. But then there's that part of us that has a question. You know, like, there is a deep part of us that believes in those things. But for most of us, there's also a question too, does love conquers all? does good, always triumph over evil? And so I think,

Alex Ferrari 49:11
yeah, no, that's just No, the answer is because we live in the real world.

K.M. Weiland 49:15
Exactly. And I think that the really good genre stories are the ones that keep asking those same questions over and over in ways that give us fresh insights into really are not perennial statements, but are perennial questions within the human existence. One thing

Alex Ferrari 49:33
that I find one of the storytellers that I've always studied and loved I'm a big fan of as a director or writer director is James Cameron, because he is obviously he knows how to tap into something because his his track record is nobody else has ever tried to track right? Nobody not even Spielberg not even it's a very specific track record that he's created for himself. But what I've noticed an all of his stories he does so thing that is really interesting he, he actually not only smashes genres together, but also, I'm not sure if he's john. he smashes themes together, but he definitely matches genres together. So if you look at Terminator, his first real work, it's an action adventure, but it's a love conquers all story. You know, you look at the abyss, action, adventure, love conquers all, Titanic, action, adventure, love conquers all. And then some other themes in there as well about classism, and that kind of stuff. Same thing with Avatar, action, adventure, love conquers all. And then then there's also you know, environmental themes and other things like that he threw in there, but he slams all of this stuff together. So avatar is a really good example of that there is a lot of stuff going on in avatar thematically. Yeah, I

K.M. Weiland 50:51
think that that it's, first of all, I think it's he, what you've presented, there is a good example of how you can have a main through line of the where the theme and the plot and the character all come together and provide that cohesion or resonance. And then you can still explore, you know, other things that come up naturally through the story's premise. But specifically like to reference Terminator, and Titanic, because I think that the thing to me about James Cameron, because he is, like you say, does all these crazy things with genre. And yet, underlying it, particularly for those two movies, I feel is this rock solid archetypal story. And I think we don't always notice it, because it's not the hero's journey. And this is something that I'm really excited about right now. And I'm going to start writing about on my site, hopefully next year. But I'm just the realization that we are so fixated on the hero's journey, like that's the only archetypal underpinning for all stories everywhere. And of course, it's not. And I think that actually something that I realized in reading Kim Hudson's, her book was called the virgins promise, I think. But she posits as specifically like, a counter type, character journey that's more feminine based. And in that two, she talks about how really, that's just the first act. The hero, the Virgin and the hero are just the first act of human existence. Most stories do not even tap, you know, the more mature archetypes of the second act, much less the our elder archetypes in the third act. So this is something I've really been researching this year, and I'm really excited about, but to me why James Cameron was so fantastically on point in Terminator, and Titanic specifically was he nailed the virgin journey. He nailed that version, that feminine journey, and not not just within the character, but specifically in Terminator. The whole thing is a metaphor for that feminine journey. You've got the protector and the predator, and then how in the end, they both die, and she's the one who has to deal with it. And it's just fantastic. I love Terminator.

Alex Ferrari 53:00
The first Terminator and the second one is just that the best of the series.

K.M. Weiland 53:05
Anyway, but really I think what it is for me anyway why those stories work is not just because they're well told, well plotted not just because they're entertaining or have something to say. But because they are rock solid on that archetypal level.

Alex Ferrari 53:17
Yeah, and yeah, they they take the virgin story, but then they also take I mean, if you look at Terminator is such a brilliant just a genius piece of literature, like not literature but of cinema, but just writing the storytelling and that is so complex. But on its but it's on its surface. There was a big dude with a gun trying to kill two other people. That's, that's on the surface. But that's what that's the brilliance of Cameron, I think is that on the surface? It's about the Titanic. It's about we all know what we all that's what the thing when I heard about Titanic, like, James man, like we all know, the ending. We all know where this is going. Like how can you be excited about a movie that you know the ending to, but yet, he was able to pull that off in such a way and I'm always fascinated. I always love talking to story. People who really analyze and study story about avatar, because avatar story and theme theme thematically avatars pretty. It's It borders preachy. Sometimes it borders preachy, yet, how was it because it wasn't just the cool visuals because we've seen cool visuals before. There was something else that resonated in the human condition that made it the biggest movie in the world of all time, and and arguably still is one of the biggest movies of all time. What did he do in that story from your point of view that connected thematically? Because I think the themes are extremely love conquers all. You have to protect the obviously the environmental themes of good versus very big, good versus evil themes. Like what what did you think about that?

K.M. Weiland 55:00
long time since I've seen that movie, and I only saw it once. So I'm trying to remember. I think all everything you've said, you know, is really true is what gives it a big feel. I would say though, that, really I'm, as far as I remember, because, again, it's been at least 10 years since I've seen it. Um, it's, it's that character, the main character, and how he's, we get a good character arc from him. And also there's that, this relatability, because of the situation that he's in, he's crippled, he, you know, gets to go off into video game land, and you know, have a whole new body. And I think there's something there's always something powerful about, first of all, completely understanding why a character is the way they are and why they're doing what they're doing. Because he's kind of a jerk in the beginning, if I remember, right, it was, yeah, but we still, you know, you can still get why, why he's doing what he's doing. Why, because of, you know, this deep motivation that I, you know, I want my body back, basically, I want to be able to walk again. And then to be able to take that and archit it's a really tricky thing, when you're doing a positive change arc. And so the character has to start a basically a deficit, you know, he starts in a negative place, and then arcs to the positive. So how do you make the character in the beginning, somebody who's likable, not the character, the readers, you know, aren't just immediately fed up with because he's not he doesn't get it, you know, he's not on the right side of it. And in a, in a complex story that particularly arises out of, you know, complex lies that the character might believe in why he's, you know, confused in the beginning, because we all are, you know, so there's, there's a deep relatability there. But even in characters who aren't as inherently likable, I think when we understand where they're coming from, that's really a really powerful way to begin the character arc, and therefore the because will follow them. If you're, if you're not going to follow the character, you're never going to get the you know, the juicy parts of the theme. Well, I

Alex Ferrari 56:59
mean, I think you touched on something that characters are driven by the story that they've told themselves about the world about, about how the world works. And that's James Bond has a very specific story, he tells himself to get up in the morning, Indiana Jones has won Luke Skywalker at the beginning of Star Wars as one as opposed to at the end of the trilogy, he has another story he tells himself, in a lot of times, humans specifically now in the story, but also in real life, we will fight tooth and nail to defend our point, our story point of view, our life point of view. And it's extremely difficult to change that perspective, because that could be societal, that could be experiment, experience. It's the experiences you've had in life. Like if you're, if you're a girl, and were beaten by your father, all your life early on in your in your, in your childhood, the association that all men are bad, is a very tough conversation to have, because it's a story that you've told yourself. And it's honestly the story that's holding you together. Yes. It's an idea. It's exactly it's the identity that you've put yourself together and to break the identity. People will, will die to defend it is that so as a story, as I know, we're going deep now. We're going a little deeper than theme, but but actually could it actually could touch back to theme. I'd love to hear what you think about that. Yeah, I

K.M. Weiland 58:29
think in essence, that story, and I think that's definitely at the foundational principles of character arc. The way I approach it, it's character arc is basically this conflict, this inner conflict between a lie the character believes, and the thematic truth. And depending on the type of arc, the character might start out, believing in the lie or the truth, and he might represent the truth steadfastly throughout the story. But in a positive change arc, where you have a story of character who starts out with a story with an a, a limiting belief of some kind, that's the essence of the story, the entire story is going to be built to put that character into situations that are going to challenge that belief, show him the limitations. And you know, if he arcs positively is going to bring him out of that into a greater truth. But again, in in, you know, the conversation of not having it beyond the nose, the way we keep that from happening is it's not easy. You know, there's a reason we hang on to these limiting identities and these limiting beliefs and we all do it every single day,

Alex Ferrari 59:32
Every human being on the planet, does it. Yeah, absolutely.

K.M. Weiland 59:36
And it's, you know, we're at we're quite happy to stay that way. And so is the character until something happens that you know, that first plot point happens and completely rocks the characters normal world. And suddenly they have to start questioning not just, you know, how do I defeat the bad guy, but, you know, what am I going to have to change within myself? You know, what views, what stories what identities Am I going to have to paint Fully shed, in order to be able to grow and move forward, or, you know, refuse to do that and stay where you're at, basically.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:08
And that is basically the analogy of life. I mean, it's, that's what that's why we resonate so much with story and and theme in general, because it's just an example of what we're going through, it helps us deal with this existence. Right?

K.M. Weiland 1:00:28
Yeah, I think that, you know, people, people, you know, start learning about story theory and story structure, and in all these ideas about the main character arc, and a lot of times there's this feeling of like, No, you know, I don't want to impose all these rules, onto my my creativity onto my story. And, you know, it can feel that way. When you're, you know, you're first making all of this conscious, but the truth is exactly the opposite. The only reason we have these ideas, these theories about structure and character arc and theme is because we've seen them arising from, you know, 1000s of years of stories, and 1000s of years of our lives, the psychological journey of a potent character arc is only potent in a story because we recognize and resonate with it from our own lives,

Alex Ferrari 1:01:14
Right, the hero's journey, which is, it's something that resonates pretty much in every culture around the world. It's because we've all done that we all read, we all understand that that's why it's such a powerful, that's what Joseph Campbell was talking about with, with the hero with 1000 faces is that that is a very through line, I just literally had Chris Vogler on the show, who wrote the writers journey. And I was I actually tell him, I'm like, Chris, let's, let's talk for a second Chris. A lot of people say, you know, this Hero's Journey things out of the like, it's completely out of whack. You know, it's, it's done. Everybody knows that. We've all seen Star Wars, it's kind of blahs a, you know, is it even worth dealing with the hero's journey in today's very advanced storytelling audience? You know, the audience is so well versed? It's so much harder to be a storyteller today than it was, yeah, 400 years ago, 100 years ago, you could get away with so much. Yeah, that's totally true. And now you really got to know what you do. And he said something very, very. And I wanted to see what he said. And he's just like, Alex, I agree with you. 100%. It is one of many ways to do but elements of the hero's journey, all of those archetypes are in every story. Yeah, it's just that's regardless, if you want to believe it or not, there is always going to be a trickster somewhere, you know, depending on the story, you're telling, a trickster, a mentor, the old man that the young, the Young Buck was trying to, you know, become a man and all this, all of this kind of that's always gonna be there. But he goes, but of course, there's 1000, different kind of story structures, there's 1000 different ways to tell that story. But the hero's journey is, is a model that we it's it is the meat and potatoes, it is the foundation that we all kind of need to understand as a storyteller. Is that a fair statement?

K.M. Weiland 1:03:05
Yeah, I would agree with that. And I think that, you know, what I'm researching and exploring right now is, is the idea that the hero's journey is not the only one, specifically within just the basic, you know, really simplistic level of archetypal, mythic storytelling. And I think that's a lot of the reason why people you know, wonder, like, come on, hero's journey, one story, you know, one ring to rule them all.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:29
And by the way, you can, you can throw the hero's journey on almost any story, like, like, after the fact after the fact.

K.M. Weiland 1:03:37
And the truth of it is a because it's that occupied type of story, but also because it is, you know, it adheres to that three act structure. And so those beats, that's something that I am realizing is that, yes, it looks like the hero's journey applies to all stories, and it does often. But a lot of it is that we think we're not aware of these other these, you know, these other archetypal journeys. And so we just kind of say there's similarities, right, they all follow a similar arc, it's just more of a life progression as instead of it just being you know, the young buck the hero. So I think that's part of why people don't always it was why I didn't resonate with the hero's journey for a long time. I felt like it was just too confining. But then I started realizing like, this is totally, it's the three act structure it is it's right there. But the nuance, I do think that it changes and evolves. And that's something that I like, I want to start exploring more in my in a series on my site soon. Very cool, but yeah, I'm really excited about it. Um, but yeah, I think that the hero's journey is an incredibly important archetypal story. And that it's important because it's so simple. And I think that there's there's a difference between we think sometimes that complicated Stories are the way to go, you know the way to talk to our very sophisticated audience. And I don't think that's the truth at all. What we want is complex stories and complexity is born out of simplicity. It's that simple archetypal layer that's provided by archetypal stories like the hero's journey. And then we get to build the complexity on top of that, by really exploring those themes and asking those questions and, and looking at the million different, you know, angles on a story. That's, you know, its its complexity, but it's all coming out of the same base instead of, you know, being who knows what,All over the place.

Alex Ferrari 1:05:36
And that brings us back to James Cameron. Which is a perfect example the Terminator is, is is a is a question of like, will the machines eventually take over? There's that That's right. That's one question. But will love conquers all.

K.M. Weiland 1:05:51
And it's a very simple story. You know, it's basically three characters running. That's the story. Yes. Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 1:05:59
Exactly. But there's so much complexity in that. And the themes that he the themes that he asks questions about, he asks a lot of questions in his in his movies. And that's a really, I think that's what really drives is his kind of storytelling. And all the films that he's made it is very um, that's why I'm really curious about the new avatars all four of them I think he's gonna be to wait for the next eight years or something. Like but anytime I anytime he comes out with something, people like, what do you think I'm like, dude, and Cameron I trust like, yeah, I can't like I stopped not betting on Cameron after Titanic. I was like, You know what? Just, if you can make this work, Brother, you can make almost anything work and just do what do you you do you James? Now I'm gonna ask you a few questions. I asked all my guests. I usually ask like one to three screenplays that every screenwriter or storyteller should read. If that if you don't know anything specific, three screenplays, three films that which I mean, obviously, we were talking about Terminator. But yeah, other films. Yeah,

K.M. Weiland 1:07:07
I'm not much of a screenplay reader. So I will. I mean, I think that it's like super obvious, but I have to always go back to the original Star Wars, because I feel like that number one, I feel like it's gotten lost kind of in the, the new movies. But for me, there's no comparison. And I feel like that. I mean, that to me is that's the essence of our modern myth. And so I say, you know, go back to that one. I go back all the time constantly.

Alex Ferrari 1:07:36
But that's the you know, that's the hero's journey

K.M. Weiland 1:07:39
exactly

Alex Ferrari 1:07:40
perfect. personification of the hero's journey. And yet you go back to it constantly, even as as simplistic as the hero's journey is and everything but it's it's executed. It's like eating a really good apple pie. Like it's a simple thing. It's not a complex dessert that's going to explode. But if you do it well, you've got a business. Yeah.

K.M. Weiland 1:08:02
Well, and I think we see that with rallying right with the Harry Potter series again. I mean, so similar to Star Wars, and people just ate it up again, you know, and honestly, to me, Well, I mean, we'll leave that to the books. I guess I was gonna say the movies, but I know I recommended this the last time that I was on the show, but it's still my all time favorite movie. So I have to say it again. And that is the classic World War Two movie The Great Escape. This is directed by john Sturgis. Yeah, that's that one. To me. There's so much. It's such a simple story. Again, you know, guys want to escape. That so much complexity, so much character development, and the themes are so subtle. They're never stated. They're just, you know, there, but there's all of this, just this, this richness and this subtext that's happening there. And then number three, oh, why not say Terminator? I feel like, there's there's just a lot of goodness in that story. And I think it's, it's a really good counterpart to Star Wars. And that Star Wars is is very much the male hero's journey. And Terminator is this, in my opinion, Pitch Perfect female, the feminine journey, the feminine psychological journey. So I think that they're really good bookends. And it's so it's so awesome. It's so amazing that a man has written so many scripts and quit like some of the most impressive female leads in cinema history.

Alex Ferrari 1:09:32
He's written between aliens, and Terminator, and all of his films that he's worked on. A lot of them have really strong programming rows. I mean, she's a pretty strong, she's essentially the she ends up being the character that runs Titanic, as well,

K.M. Weiland 1:09:51
I think and I do think that that, you know, why not? You know, I think that archetype but we all have this deep archetypal understanding, and when he's telling archetypal stories, So Well, to me, it's like, Yeah, why not? And I think we see it with a rally. You know, there's a woman writing a story about what hero's journey and a boy Yeah. So it's like, that's the fun of writing, you know that we get to explore all of these things that are different from us. And do it from a place of deep psychological understanding that sometimes we don't even know we have.

Alex Ferrari 1:10:22
I wanted to ask you a side question because it just came up, you know, as a as a storyteller, you know, myself, and with the work that I've done over my life. As you get older, that that that's that perspective, that story, you tell yourself morphs and changes a lot. And a script that I might have written 10 years ago, I go back to and go. Ouch, that is definitely a perspective of a 30 year old. That is not the perspective of a 45 year old man who's gone through some other stuff in the last 15 years. There's such a focus on youth and telling that youth story of the young buck turning into a man or the virgin story of the on the woman set. But yet, you kind of touched on this earlier, there isn't a lot of story about the third chapter in our lives, or even the second chapter, there is a they're starting to get me in, you know, lifetime, pretty much. The the midlife crisis story for men or women going through like, Oh, god, I'm just joking, but but there is more stories now about people our age, and this kind of this kind of second chapter, you know, midway through chapter of our lives, but there is very few good stories about that, that the, the third chapter of our lives. Can you make an A make a it's also because it's harder to sell? Is that the main reason you think?

K.M. Weiland 1:11:55
Well, I think it's an interesting thing, because yeah, as I've been preparing to do this, this series, it's been very challenging to find really good examples of these later life arcs of the third act, you know, the third act of the human life? It's because there aren't a lot of them. And I think yes, to some degree, it's a hard sell, because you, like you say, we're a very youth centered culture who's terrified of death. So we really don't want to go there. Um, and because I think a lot of times when we do see stories about the, you know, the end of life, that they're not empowered stories, they're stories about, you know, coming to terms with death in a pretty limited way. And what I'm discovering is that, you know, there, there are empowering arc, the arcs in the second act, midlife and the arts and the third act for the elder years. They're just as powerful and magnificent, in some ways more so than what we've grown used to with the hero's journey. And I think it's just that we as a culture have so lost touch with our elders, you know, it's not a, we don't have very few of us really have people in our lives from that time in their lives, where they can, you know, we can see that and they can mentor us. And I think that's part of too even, you know, we don't have the mentor character, who shows up for us in our own Hero's Journey when we are young. And so there's a there is a missing piece, kind of I think that's that has happened within the archetypal story of our culture. So yeah, I think it's a hard sell. But I think there are some amazing stories to be told from those later arcs. And I'm not thinking of any examples off topic

Alex Ferrari 1:13:37
that I can give you one that is probably as Pitch Perfect as humanly possible, which is up. Yeah. Okay. Up is as perfect, opposite masterpieces that I mean in the first, basically that first three minutes is the best, the best summary of a human life I've ever seen. In my entire life. It's so well thought. But it's a it's an older character going on a hero's journey. He goes and his mentor happens to be a Boy Scout. Anyways, what

K.M. Weiland 1:14:10
it is, is it's the little boy who's going on a hero's journey, as he's the mentor, but it's told from his point of view, the characters all come full circle, right? It's the mentors in the hero's journey, who are the heroes of the third act character arcs, right? But we don't ever see that.

Alex Ferrari 1:14:26
Right. That's why I was so like everybody, and it's an animated kid's film, which is so brilliant. I can't like only Pixar could do something like that. But yeah, there aren't many good stories like that. But that's funny though, if you look up resonated with kids around the world as well as every every stage of life, from a kid all the way to, to someone in their elder years watches up and goes, Okay, I get it. I get it. And that's the kind of the if you can, if you can pull that off. You're doing so as a

K.M. Weiland 1:15:00
storyteller, that's that's the power of archetypal stories.

Alex Ferrari 1:15:04
Now, where can people find your new book and more about you and all the cool stuff you're doing?

K.M. Weiland 1:15:11
Yeah, so obviously the books on Amazon and all of those places that if they want to specifically look at what I'm doing, they can visit my website at helping writers become authors calm.

Alex Ferrari 1:15:21
Very cool. Katie, thank you so much for being on the show. I know I want to keep talking to you. I just want to keep, I just want to keep talking. I love I love talking story. I love going deep into this kind of nerdy story stuff. And it really helps me Just think about in all honesty, it just helps you think about life more.

K.M. Weiland 1:15:39
Totally

Alex Ferrari 1:15:40
It just makes you think about life and we are in a weird time.

K.M. Weiland 1:15:45
There's a lot to think about

Alex Ferrari 1:15:46
A lot of stuff going on right now in the world. And I feel like that's one of the reasons why we're gravitating to story and our Netflix, I have Netflix, Hulu, HBO mad like I got all of them, but like I just need, I need something to escape to. I need something to attach myself to to escape this crazy world we live in. But it does just help us get through the day of this insane existence that we call life. So I want I really, really appreciate you coming on the show. Thank you so much, and keep doing the good work that you're doing.

K.M. Weiland 1:16:16
Yeah, you too. Thank you so much for having me.

Alex Ferrari 1:16:19
I want to thank Katie for coming on the show and dropping her knowledge bombs on the bulletproof screenwriting tribe. Thank you so, so much, Katie. If you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, including how to buy her new book, writing your stories theme, head over to bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/099. And if you guys are as good as math as I am, you will know that the next episode will be Episode 100 of the bulletproof screenwriting podcast, it is a big, big landmark for this podcast. And I am so grateful and humbled and honored that you have allowed me to continue to make this podcast a reality and helping hopefully helping screenwriters around the world with their craft, and with how to survive, and to mark this monumental episode. Next week, I will be releasing a huge, huge guest on this podcast. I will not tell you anything else. Because I do not want to ruin the surprise. But it is going to be a fairly epic episode. And if that wasn't enough, ifH Academy is going to be bringing a big new course for screenwriters, which is going to be a game changer for the tribe. And I'll let you know more about that in the coming weeks. So keep an eye out for that. Now Christmas is just a couple days away. So I want to wish everyone listening who celebrates Christmas. Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays. And I cannot wait till next week for you guys. Thank you again for listening. And as always keep on writing no matter what. Stay safe out there. And I'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 098: How to Get Your Screenplay on HBOMax with Jason Shuman

I have a treat for the tribe today. Last week we had screenwriter Eduardo Cisneros on the show discussing his new film Half Brothers. Today we have his co-writer and producer of the film Jason Shuman. Jason is a writer and producer who has made over 20 motion pictures grossing more than $500 million worldwide as well as produced over 100 episodes of television.

Shuman has produced four films that reached number one at the box office with Darkness FallsThe MessengersBangkok Dangerous, and the critically acclaimed Lone Survivor. Other well-known films include the 2017 docudrama Rebel In The Rye, Little Black BookDaddy Day CampMiddle Men and the beloved comedy Role Models.

On the television side, Shuman has also produced shows including TBS comedy Are We There Yet? with Ice Cube, and served as Executive Producer on the FX show Anger Management and the Emmy® nominated TV movie, Dawn Anna. His new film is Half Brothers.

Renato, a successful Mexican aviation executive, is shocked to discover he has an American half-brother he never knew about, the free-spirited Asher. The two very different half-brothers are forced on a road journey together masterminded by their ailing father, tracing the path their father took as an immigrant from Mexico to the US.

I first met Jason years ago at the Sundance Film Festival where I spoke to him on the Indie Film Hustle Podcast about the film he had in the fest called Rebel in the Rye. In this episode, we discuss his career as a producer, how he went “all in” to become a serious screenwriter, how Danny Strong (Gilmore Girls, Empire, Billions) helped him become a better storyteller, and his epically funny new film Half Brothers.

Enjoy my conversation with Jason Shuman.

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Alex Ferrari 0:03
I'd like to welcome to the show Jason Shuman, man, how you doing Jason?

Jason Shuman 0:24
Hey, good. Great to be back. Alex. Good to see you. Thank you for having me.

Alex Ferrari 0:34
Yes. This is your first time on the bulletproof screening podcast but you are a friend of the show from indie film hustle back in the day. We we did a when I did my I think it was my first Sundance interviews. When I was at Sundance doing interviews and you were one of my I was lucky enough to talk to you while you were there with rebel in the Rye.

Jason Shuman 3:51
Man, that was a for me. That was an amazing Sundance, my favorite Sundance that I've ever experienced. It was so great.

Alex Ferrari 3:58
And it was the shining outside it was snowing so much that year it was like, like, but no joke was like a like a dilution of snow outside. It was insane. how crazy

Jason Shuman 4:12
It was special because I loved rebel and working long and so I was so proud of the movie, but also because I had so many friends that wanted to come to be a movie premiere. So I rented this like house and it was like about 14 of my friends. Some who brought their wives. So it was couples and it was like a fraternity house I had there were like four rooms and the rooms had bunk beds in it. So they were like husbands and wives sleeping together and bunk beds all so if there was this I had a great sort of thing and I was like, Hey look, I'll I can promise you as if you come with me everywhere. I can get you in if you roam on your own. Good luck to you. And so everyone was like it was like my little entourage Had the whole time it was best.

Alex Ferrari 5:03
Do you remember? Do you remember what we what we did the interview in that in that penta. And that kind of like penthouse area was like it was like that. That's where I was staying. So it's like this kind of kids camp for grownups going to Sundance. It's like camp for grownups, if you stay anywhere within the vicinity of Main Street, unless you're rolling really hard, and you're one of the big stars, you get your own private everything, but generally, but generally, there's just no space. So that you have to get you got people, you know, who are very high end, like people in the industry, big producers and directors and actors. And they're, they're doing exactly what you said, they're sleeping bags around the corner somewhere to Matt. They're like the two of them in a bunk bed. Like it's,

Jason Shuman 5:50
Happy to be here.

Alex Ferrari 5:51
Yeah, it's, it's, it is such an it's just an amazing experience. And I can't wait to actually experience it again. Hopefully, I don't get it back, you know, hopefully after it. But so before we get started, can you tell the audience how you got into the business because you have a unique path to your screenwriting side?

Jason Shuman 6:11
Well, I mean, I look i was i was a film geek. Since I was 10 years old, I was riding my bike to the mall to see everything in anything. I had a note from my mom, that in the movie theaters knew me to let me see R rated movies if I wanted to. Because I had that note that would never fly today, by the way, like I was just a little film geek dreaming of going to Hollywood and making movies and, and my dream was to go to USC film school. So when I got in, I thought like the heavens had parted. And like I was anointed the next coming. And then you get to orientation. And you realize, so did the other 60 people that got in everyone felt the same way. So you kind of have to have a big wake up call and say, all right, you know, I'm just an 18 year old freshmen time to work. And so I got to go to USC film school and meet the most incredible group of friends that I still am very close with to this day. And I had a wonderful experience there. I got to do internships because I was living at USC, and you get to be so close to Hollywood. And so I didn't know I was just doing everything in anything making movies on the weekends, doing internships on days, I didn't have classes, and one of my internships led to an internship with a guy named Marnell, Koeppel Sim, who passed away two years ago. But that was a big thing. Because he was he was a huge producer at the time, she's huge and won an Oscar for Petunia, just a couple years earlier, it had the fugitive, which was not only ox opposite, but got nominated for an Oscar. And he was in the middle of making seven devil's advocate eraser. outbreak. And so there I was interning for this for this company, this man, he had this huge production company at Warner Brothers. And so I felt like I had like the king of the world, even though I was just making copies and getting coffee. And that led to a job when I graduated. So I got some my first, you know, big break coming out of there. But to be honest, I kind of had wanted to be a writer, director, as we all do, and we, but because I was offered this job, everyone was like, Well, why don't you just take it? You can just learn what do I know? I'm 22 years old. So I took the job. And I spent a couple years there and it was a great sort of induction into the business from a Reno film school is not real reality.

Alex Ferrari 8:48
No, stop, stop. Stop it. You mean to tell me when you're out in the real world. They don't talk about Kurosawa all the time.

Jason Shuman 8:59
My favorite freshman year, my buddy herb Ratner, still a close friend. He goes, he calls me up. It's like a Tuesday night and he goes, man, there's like a sneak preview of Philadelphia, with Denzel and Tom Hanks, we got to go and I was like, I have a geology test tomorrow. And he's like, we're talking about, you know, who cares about the geology is let's go see this movie. And I was like, you're right. I'm a college student. Now I don't have to study for the geology does that though. So my, my, my going rogue as a college student was not going to that party and getting drunk on Tuesday night. It was like going to the man's Chinese and see a sneak preview. That to me was like being the rebel.

Alex Ferrari 9:45
This was your Animal House. This was your house.

Jason Shuman 9:49
So there was a lot of that in college, a lot of sneaking off. So, um, so I worked for Arnold for many years and rose up there. And then I had this most amazing opportunity to start my own production company with a guy named William sherek. And so we went off and I quit, I quit that job, I went, and we started to make some movies. And one of the original ones was darkness falls, which I can't believe now was like 18 years ago.

Alex Ferrari 10:24
And if I, if I can stop you for a second, because when we spoke the first time, I actually know the story of darkness falls, how it got produced. I'm, like, one of my co hosts was with me, Sebastian, he was like, how do you know that? I'm like, dude, I'm a film geek. And any story about a filmmaker who made it like that any because that was a lottery ticket. Essentially, he had a great short, that he had a great short that got picked up. And then they turned it into a feature, which then was a big hit at the time. And I was like, of course, I know that story every you know, if you have to know that just kind of like they'll mariachis and the clerks and like he was one of those. He was one of those guys that had that that window. Yeah. So it was great.

Jason Shuman 11:08
Like he was he is and was the nicest guy Jonathan, he became close friend of William and eyes. And so it was a magical experience, because we go off and make this movie. We're all in our mid 20s. And we shot it in Australia and, and anyway, we bring it back in the studio didn't know what they sent these three guys off doing. And then they just put it God bless Tom sherek. Who, who was like, let's put it out on Superbowl weekend. And everyone was like, Super Bowl Weekend. That's a two day weekend. No one goes to the movies on Super Bowl Sunday. And he's like, Yeah, but there's no competition. So we came out in 2003 Superbowl weekend and we were number one for this little movie. And that sort of helped William and I get a deal at the studio and and and then we were off to the races making a bevy of movies over the next 10 years. And we just flying over genres like we did the Messenger's Sony we did little black book, we did role models, we were just hopping all over the place with comedies with horror with romantic movies, some family movies, so it was a great run. I really loved it.

Alex Ferrari 12:24
Now, let me ask you a question though. How as a as a producing team or as a production company? Yeah. The the standard frame of thought is to pigeonhole yourself or at least it's your, your, the heart like Blum house, he's like, you can't Blum house, you know, slapstick comedy, I'm not gonna probably go see. But, um, maybe I would, because I'd be curious. But generally as a as a production company, or as a producer, you kind of want to knit yourself like Arnold was an action. He was the action dude, he was the actor. He was like, he reminded me very much of Joel Silver like him and and Joel

Jason Shuman 12:56
Intern are as well.

Alex Ferrari 12:58
Yeah. So that's, we have to have a conversation about that another day. But, but yeah, those kind of guys. So you were jumping all I saw me when looking at your IMDb, you're everywhere, like role models horror, like it's all over the place.

Jason Shuman 13:11
That's my own fault. And probably to my own detriment, because we had we came right out of the gate with two fairly successful horror movies and darkness falls and the messengers, and we were getting a lot of offers for people like can make horror here can make horror there. But the truth is, I'm just I love movies, and I love stories. And I love all kinds of movies. Like I'm just not I see everything. I don't care small, big, which genre you are. I see it all indie movies, and, and I just was like, William, I can't sit in another meeting and talk about the mythology of these of the ghosts and what their motivations are. And I started to become creatively stagnant because, you know, yeah, we had to meet in a row and they were hits but we probably developed 15 others at the time. So I was in so many meetings and reading so many scripts having to do with this thing and that thing, you know, blumhouse came later and certainly he grabbed that with paranormal and he wrote it and that's probably what William and I should have done. But I was so excited to read little black book. I was so excited to read Bangkok dangerous, so excited to deal with being meetings on role models and talk about like, the big set pieces because I loved Judd Apatow and I our offices were right next to Judd Apatow and I was like, but I want to make movies like him too. So it's great. Just to have my own wanting to flex the that muscle of like being just telling different kinds of stories. So that's what we just kept doing.

Alex Ferrari 14:53
And it seems to have worked out okay for you. You've done, you've done no complaints. It's like and I think Once you've set yourself up as either I mean for screenwriters would you recommend screenwriters stay kind of on, on on a genre at the beginning, so at least they kind of put themselves in that box. And then they can kind of spread out like once you're Aaron Sorkin, you can write whatever you want. Once you're Shane Black, you can pretty much write whatever you want. But at the beginning, the town kind of likes to know what you are, if you're a horror, got your horror, got your comedy, comedy,

Jason Shuman 15:24
because your reps need to know how to sell you they need to know how to introduce you to the town. And that is done easier for them. And for you, if you kinda like this is the I want to make the next blumhouse movies or I want to be the next jet Apatow if you can kind of sell yourself that way. It just makes their job easier, whatever that is,

Alex Ferrari 15:45
right. But but you actually because you were jumping all over the place that became kind of your brand. Like, oh, he he does everything.

Jason Shuman 15:54
That's what people don't. They're like, Well, yeah, you you can look at my IMDb and you're like Jesus, but I you have to understand when I went in to make daddy day camp, which seems funny now, right? But Sony called William and I and said, Would you be interested in producing it? Like the kid in me is like I grew up on those Herbie the lovebug movies and can't movies like meatballs. And I was just like, Wait a second, I am going to submerse myself in can't movies. And I am going to try to make the greatest can't movie for the this generation of eight to 12 year olds. So it's like you think like, Schumann, why would you go off and make daddy day camp? It's like, well, because to me, that was an exciting opportunity to give kids of that generation, a camp movie that maybe they would watch over and over again. And I went nuts. I watched so many camp movies, not just the ones that I remembered. I was trying to submerse myself and what made camp movies fun, what kids would want to see today. So it's like, even though the result may have not been this beloved, like legendary can't movie that was the attempt that was and that goes for everything. When we were making Bangkok dangerous, you know, it's like, we were thought we were making, we tried to make an action movie that could parallel, you know, the action movies that they and we thought there would be like, this was Bangkok dangerous, then there would be like Shanghai dangerous, then there would be we were trying to set up so people have to understand sometimes it works like role models, lone survivor, etc. And sometimes it does, you tried everything and just fell a little short. It's not like you didn't work any harder. Right? You did any more to make it a great movie. So you just put them out there and go, let's see what happens.

Alex Ferrari 17:56
Now I was when we spoke. When we spoke at Sundance those years ago, you were at that point talking about getting into screenwriting, and that you were moving to New York to work with the work with Danny Thank you, Danny, with Danny strong and, and kind of just like, you know, go under his wing a little bit. You were telling us like, Hey, I'm gonna, I'm gonna learn how to be a screenwriter. So what made you jump from being a producer to wanting to go into the very non competitive world of screenwriting?

Jason Shuman 18:30
There's many things, it's just you get a little older. And you start to say to yourself, how do I want to keep challenging, but there was also that kid in me who look I had what William and I got to do at the young age, we got to do it and the opportunities I had learning from Arnold at 22 years old. I wouldn't take that back for anything. But there was that 1415 year old and me that was like, but I wanted to, I wanted to write I wanted to create stories from the beginning not to sit with writers who and I love and respect Good, good screenwriting. So I thought either I put my money where my mouth is, and see if I have it in me, or just, you know, go and continue to be a producer and keep trying to evolve that way. And it was Danny who called me and said, I want you to drop everything. And I want you to move to New York. And I just want you to like, Come meet with me every day. And just let's talk screenplays let's I want you to write and I'm going to read your stuff. And I'm going to critique it. And I'm just going to give you a bootcamp and I was like, how can I turn this down? That's amazing. We had been pals since 18 since USC film school, but like Danny at that time was, was at the like he had just won every award for game change and the height of the butler coming out and he he hadn't even created Empire yet. Which I got to be sitting there with him while he wrote the pilot for empire that was pretty cool. He kept like turning his computer going like, Is it me? Or does this seem seem really fun to you? And I'd read it and it'd be like cookie, doing something like they have the vision for cookie way, way at the beginning. So I owe it all to Danny. Like, really?

He I did. I did what he said, I left my life in Los Angeles, and I moved to New York. And I sat and wrote every day with him, he texts me in the morning, here's the cafe I'll be at, I'd show up. I do my stuff. He'd be doing his stuff at lunch, I'd asked him a bunch of questions. And when I was ready to show him stuff, he'd read it. And he was brutal. He was brutal with me, but it was helpful. He'd give me all the ways he approached writing all the sort of mottos that he would take how he approached a blank page, how he would approach characters, how we would approach everything. And I just tried to make that habit. And it took a while he, it was a year and a half of writing, handing him stuff and him Wow. shitting on it. And finally, after a year and a half, he thought that maybe I had morphed myself into a writer who could be consistent. I don't think he was looking for a good scene here. And there. He was looking for consistency. He was looking for, like my storytelling to have evolved to a place where he felt like, now I could go off and maybe sell some stuff or, or or had honed my voice. I mean, that's a hell of a friend.

Alex Ferrari 21:39
I gotta say,

Jason Shuman 21:40
yeah. One of the greatest things he taught me. So any screenwriters listening was, he was like, sit down and write write down a list of things you love, and things you hate. Like things, things that anger you because that's where recount came for him. It's like, it's like, he hated that election process, the 2000 election, he was angry about the outcome, and it really boiled his blood. And so, you know, then he goes and buys some books and reads about the Florida recount. And that turns into a story that he outlines. And so that was a big thing for me. You know, like, if you look at a lot of the projects I'm working on now, this show I have at Apple. Eduardo and I are writing short circuit, my HBO show about the Lakers. It's all stuff in the 80s because one of the things I wrote down on that when I would do those exercises is I love the 80s I just do. Yeah, that was my era. I love the music. I love the television. I love the movies. I love the campiness, I love the outfits, I love my memories. I like what malls looked like I liked just that. And so it that list he had me do really reverberated in the work. Not all the work that I've done in the last four or five years, but a lot of it is like things that really angered me are things that I just love so much that I want to live in that world and with those characters. So that was just every I could we could do a whole couple hours on the Danny strong method and how well it works. But it really was,

Alex Ferrari 23:24
I'm not sure I'm not sure everybody can afford that, that that seminar for a year and a half. And I'm not sure Danny has the bandwidth. I know I'm joking, I'm joking. You should you should actually call Danny. Like Danny, I'm just gonna I'm just gonna put out a seminar, it's gonna be called the Danny strong method. I'm not paying you anything, unfortunately. But I think Danny strong. That's amazing. So you said something really interesting. Like, how do you approach a blank page? How is there? is there is there are there some tips because that is the most one of the most daunting things a writer has to do is, and it's not a page anymore. Is that blinking cursor? Generally speaking, yeah. How do you approach a blank screen?

Jason Shuman 24:10
This is it was Danny had always sort of taught me that. Don't get it right, get it written. I don't care if it's the worst scene you've written in the world. And Eduardo subscribes to that same theory. So when I started working with Eduardo was nice to see that like, I have friends I have very successful screenwriter friends, who they'll spend the whole day on that one page so they get it perfect. And God bless them. But I found that what Danny's method and Eduardo's method, which is just just write the worst version of the scene, I don't care because the rewriting it to us is the fun part. So I feel like I've written the most amateurish worst awful scenes that I wouldn't show like my closest friends, but then you go back and you immediately start to realize how lazy it is how cheesy the dialogue is. But at least you're not looking at a blank page anymore. At least you're looking at some semblance of a scene. And somehow, even if you're rewriting the whole thing from scratch, it somehow to me makes it mentally easier. If I'm rewriting a scene that exists, then then staring at that blank page. So that's what I've always done these last couple years.

Alex Ferrari 25:29
I mean, from I can't agree with you more, I always find the rewriting process so much easier than the writing process for me. And when I'm like, I write a lot of Britain, but my books and, and I do my writing, I write, like seeing the announcement from our iPod, my blogs and stuff, but it's just starting sucks. It sucks. But the rewriting part, so sometimes I'm writing I'm like, this sucks. I know. It sucks. I'm just gonna keep Yeah, that Oh, that was horrible. Let me just keep going. Or is this is this is atrocious. I'll never let anyone read this. And I'll just keep going. And then the next morning, I'll come back and like, Okay, this is exactly what I thought it was really hard. But why don't we do this? Why don't we move over this over here. And let me rewrite this, oh, I have a brand new that this really bad paragraph that I wrote, has now set me on another path in my mind. To write a brand new paragraph has nothing to do with the old paragraph. But it's a complete rewrite from basically and just go. So it's, it's it keeps it keeps the thing flow. And it keeps the things it's kind of like editing I've been I've been an editor for 20 odd years. So like when you edit the scene, you edit a horrible, just get it all just cut it just cut it. It's master shot theater, there's no nuance, get it up there, then you could start slicing and dicing

Jason Shuman 26:42
same, it's the same. And I wish you know a lot of writers beat themselves up and like everyone has their process. Everyone approaches it however they want. This works for me. And the tidbits that Danny's taught me or at least the ones that I retained are that way because I think they spoke to me. But like I remember I showed up one day. And I got a terrible sleep. And I was just kind of groggy. And I was like, Danny, I don't know if I feel it today. And he's like, doesn't matter. Keep writing. And I'm like, I got like two hours of sleep. And he's like, let me tell you something. When you read your screenplay, you got 126 pages of crap, that you're ready to sit down and read through. You won't remember which scene you wrote on that day when you came and you're like, Oh, I feel great today. Remember which scenes we felt great about which seat because it's all just sort of blends in. So the goal every day should just get those two pages done, get those three pages each day, just get that done. Because then when you stack it all together, you probably won't even remember and it probably won't even be as bad. Just like on those days where you think you wrote brilliance. And then you go read it next day. You're like, wasn't that brilliant? I mean, I walked away. I walked away the day before thinking like, Man, what a great day of writing. It's, it's it's the same thing. It's never as good as you thought it was. But it's also never as bad as you thought it was. And so just keep doing it. Just keep writing. Don't let yourself get excuses. And just kind of keep powering forward and like that. That's what makes Danny Danny because it's like yeah.

Alex Ferrari 28:31
I and I think it's I always find it to be better to be prolific than to be perfect. Yeah, there's a lot of directors, a lot of screenwriters out there who just put out stuff. And yeah, they're not all home runs. But a lot of them a couple might be strikeouts, but there's a lot of singles, a lot of doubles, a lot of triples, and there's maybe a one or two homerun situation in there. If I may, if I may be as cliche is to use a baseball metaphor with it, but but I always find that it works. Baseball metaphors work. That's why it's so cliche.

Jason Shuman 29:02
One of my favorite stories from Forrest Gump because I got to work with this guy, Charles Neuwirth, who was the UPN line producer on Forrest Gump. And he said like Zemeckis had been talking about the shots he wanted to get, and it took like six hours to set up, and they could only do it during a certain time of the day. And so they get it all ready, they're rehearsing it, they go to shoot the scene. It's not quite what he wanted, and he just turned to Charles and what they can all be gems. can all be gems, but when you mix it in with Forrest Gump, you have so many great things about it. Does it matter that not everything is and I try to remember that they can all be gems, but if you've got enough gems in there, yeah, it'll be good stuff. it sparkles. It

Alex Ferrari 29:48
will sparkles. Now, as you know, obviously you've been around town for for a while you've been working in town when you started to go out as a screenwriter. How did the town respond to you? As you know, because everyone used because this town is very loves boxes and loves putting people in boxes. So when you came out from, hey, you've been a successful producer. But here's my script I need you to read. How did the town respond to you? I'm curious. Um,

Jason Shuman 30:19
I had to fight that I had to convey my conviction in my heart and soul that that this was like, not just a thing I was trying that this was a full commitment that I was making, that I wasn't looking to just sort of dabble my foot in it. And I meant it. When I packed up and moved to New York. I was like, I'm all in. And so I had to convey that this was not just some hobby, and I was hoping that I was going to succeed by hook or by crook. And so yeah, I had to deal with it was nice that when agents would read it, and they didn't know who I was, because I'm not, I'm not Brian Grazer. I'm not just like, not everybody knew who I was. So I ended up having some, when I started sending my material out to agencies, tried to send it to people I thought maybe didn't know who I was, but who I knew and admired. And so those were some initial meetings that went really well. And I did, I was honest with them that I have a producing career, but I'm hoping I'm hoping that my knowledge and my background of producing will only make me a better, better writer, especially in television, where TV or TV show running and TV writing, a lot of it is producing too, I have hung around enough a TV shows to see that the the show runner, half your job is overseeing the writers and the other half is dealing with the network and the studio and dealing with the politics of and that is in itself producing. So I knew I could combine both in a way that could be advantageous to the writing. And then along the way, I almost wanted to call up every writer I've ever worked with as a producer, and say, I'm so sorry that you have to take notes from me, because now that I've given myself a grad school in screenwriting, and I feel like I understand screenwriting, so much better now than when I did as a producer. I'm like, you had to sit there and listen to my notes. Like, and now I feel like I was just talking out of my ass. Like, how did I not do this sooner, at least sort of dive into screen, right? I feel it makes you a better producer to sort of understand the nuances of not only being a writer, but just on how story works and structure and characters and God just like it's just crazy to me that that the way this town is built where you could get a really good job like I was given right out of college, and in a room with million dollar writers and have Arnold Coppola single, like Jason read the script, meet with me with that million dollar writer give him notes. And they have to listen to me. And they're very cordial and respectful. Because I represent Arnold COPPA Xin. But I'm like thinking back upon that now, not only was I I should call those people up and be like, thank you for not just being like your biggest moron Jason, who sent you into this room.

Alex Ferrari 33:39
And that's isn't that amazing. But that is that is the way this town works. It is just ridiculous that there's a huge producer, a legendary huge producer, who sends in a 20 something and goes, I kind of like I trust your taste, Jason, go read it. And then go talk to this million dollar plus screenwriter and give him notes. Who's been who's written probably 30 or 40 screenplays in his life, probably even more, you've never written one. And you've written you've read maybe five, so maybe 10 I'm being generous. So give him you're giving me notes based on the video store experience you have.

Jason Shuman 34:20
I would do that. I would prepare all night. I'd be like in order to make this character more three dimensional. This is what you should do this to do. And I was prepared on it. But Jesus Lord, okay, all right. I guess my youthful, like, fake it till you make it kind of stuff.

Alex Ferrari 34:41
And that's and that's, you know, that's a really good lesson for screenwriters listening today, because you're gonna deal with young Jason's. And by the way, Jason is one of the nicer ones that I've I've ever met in this business, but you're gonna get, you know, we all deal with people who are put in positions of power that don't have they shouldn't be there. Especially talking to creatives who might know it's, I mean, it's this. It's the oldest, I mean, manque. I mean, manque just came in late. I mean, so it's been happening since the dawn of our industry. Someone just said, you know, someone told Chaplin, you know, when you fall, it's not really ringing true. So can you put the banana peel over to the like, there's telling you, you're doing it wrong, or wants to put in their stuff. But so how did you deal with? How would you? How do you suggest screenwriters deal with notes? Because that is something that every screenwriter no matter what, what level they're at, unless you're Tarantino, or one of these big writer directors who have every does every Yeah,

Jason Shuman 35:46
sure. Yeah. Um, look, I think one of the skills of the good screenwriters, the ones who have a lot of success working within the studio, and the network system, is learning how to address notes and interpret notes without just being a typist, like your job. And I think they expect this of you is not to literally take the notes and just go and do note number one, and just go into the document and change it. They're giving you what's bumping them about what you've written, and they're trying to articulate it, hoping that you will get it. And then that's, that is an art form that I'm constantly trying to work on. And having Eduardo getting to work with Eduardo makes it easier because we're just two of us. So we can talk it through. You know, people like Danny who works solo, Danny just has an interpretive mind. So he's like, Okay, I know what they want. I, I can read between the lines. And so I guess it's just something you should, if you're a writer, if you have a partner, a room that you work in, talk it through, maybe from talking it out loud, you kind of like, oh, here's Okay, I see what they're and then you bring your own creativity to the note and your changes, so that it doesn't mess up the overall tone and theme that you were going for. That is an art form and of itself. And if you can become good at interpreting network and studio notes, you will be a successful writer. I'm still working on it to this day, I do feel like my past as a producer helps. But believe me, there are still plenty of documents I get, or I'm like head scratching like shit. This is bumping them. But the note is confusing me. It's confusing me and I don't understand what exactly they want. And sometimes it takes a few days of it. And I like talking it through like did they mean this? I mean, look, if you have a good relationship with them, you can call them and ask them to explain it. But a lot of times we've done that, and I'm even more confused.

Alex Ferrari 37:58
Exactly. Now how did you get it? Now how did you get involved with Eduardo and and what is it like writing with a partner? You know, because I'm also a soloist I I've written with partners before and sometimes it's been great sometimes it hasn't been good. Eduardo loves working with you because I had him on the show as well obviously. So he speaks nothing but high highly of you sir. Except off off air off off air. off air. He was destroying you, but on air. He really really enjoyed working with you wasn't working with how is it working with it with Waldo? And how did you guys meet?

Jason Shuman 38:36
Well, look, Alex, I'll go deep. I have had no luck in my personal social life finding a like as to my mother's dismay, like, finding some married started family. Yeah. Not for lack of trying. I just can't seem to click with with someone out there. I know. It's harder. Now we're in a pandemic. But even before I can't use that as an excuse, somehow in my business world. I've had two partnerships, me and William sherek. And me and Eduardo. And they both came very naturally. It was not forced. It was not anything. It was like I met William. In college, we totally clicked. And then naturally we got we just started working together. There was no sort of like, like formal like, thing. It just felt so natural that we were into each other's Yang like and then the same thing with Eduardo like I just met him. Coincidentally, it was kind of full circle from co Pilsen because my sort of mentor at Cobo Wilson was this executive named Sanford panitch. And he's sort of the opposite of what I was just describing. He was a young executive who was brilliant, just brilliant, even at a young age, and he found Arnold so many of those movies like like, seven and future And devil's advocate, and eraser, he found those scripts and he developed them. And he was like 2526. At that time, he's amazed. And now he runs. Well, he's president of Sony under Tom Rothman. And he's just that good. He's just that good. And I was having breakfast with them. And he had read some of my stuff that I had been writing and he thought it was good, thank God. And he said, Look, I just signed this deal with this guy, Eduardo Cisneros. He just wrote and produced this massive hit called instructions not included, which Sanford couldn't speak highly enough of. And he said, The guy is like the Judd Apatow of Mexico. He He's created all these hit shows. Now he's created his movie. I just signed an overall deal with them. Why don't you meet them? And if you guys come up with an idea that you can work on together. Great. Do it here at Fox at that time, Sanford was at Fox. And so it was Sanford. He kind of like

Alex Ferrari 41:01
Matchmaker, he's a matchmaker.

Jason Shuman 41:04
And so we we met in a conference room at Fox, and I came with like, literally 10 ideas that I had prepared. I was always the Judd Apatow when I had offices near him. He always said like, when he worked the comedy clubs, and when Sandler would say like, Hey, man, could you write me like three jokes. And he would write like 20 jokes, because he just wanted to show Sandler like that he was up for the challenge that like, he wasn't going to waste this opportunity. So that always kind of like, Okay, I'm gonna come prepared every time and I wrote down 10 ideas. And I pitched them all to him, and Eduardo hated all of them. So then we were like, well, then we just started shooting the shit. And then we just started talking. And then I somehow stumbled on a germ of an idea that he was interested in, but it was not fleshed out. And then we ended up meeting for coffee another day, talking about the idea more, which led to more meetings. And then we eventually took the idea to Sanford, he bought it. And then we were able to write our first script together. And I'm not kidding. It's kind of like, it was so easy. It was so natural, that, like, his strengths were my weaknesses. Vice versa. His work ethic was the mine, in terms of like, you know, being available for each other, we didn't have other stuff going on, like, that frustrated each of us. And so it was such a wonderful process that when that was over, he was like, hey, I've had this other idea. Maybe we could work on it together. And we ended up selling that as a TV show to Fox didn't get made. But we got to write another thing together. And in during that is when he said like, Hey, I have this idea for this movie called half brothers. And then he's like, now we just pitched that one together. So it just happened very naturally. Where would there was never like an official, hey, let's shake on it. We're working.

Alex Ferrari 43:05
We're writing tea.

Jason Shuman 43:07
It just happened naturally. And so I'm just grateful. I'm just grateful to the universe, that in my work life, they brought me to partnerships that have just been magical, where in my personal life, I'm like, still waiting, still dealing with the phone calls from my mother being like,

Alex Ferrari 43:26
Oh, my God, I dealt with that so much that my mom, my mother actually connected me with my wife, she actually matched make me with my wife, believe it or not. And it worked. It works. By the way, it was a swing and a miss of a handful of times before. But it was Oh, man. on that. Yeah. Cuz it was like, every time she would try to hook me up with something I'm like, this is Do you even know who I am? Like, why did you Why would you send her to me? Like, this makes no sense. But yeah, so that's, that's great. And then as far as writing, I mean, cuz you wrote by yourself for a little while before you start writing with a partner. So yeah, when you're writing with a partner, what Eduardo said at least was that you guys just kind of, you'd be you have, you'd have someone to bounce ideas off of, and you can kind of bounce things back and forth.

Jason Shuman 44:14
A lot of people have asked me, What, don't don't you get frustrated because I have my own voice. As a writer, I have all my life experience that I bring to it. Do you get frustrated and I could see how people could ask that because when you're just up by yourself, you may be get frustrated with yourself but you're not arguing over this jokes, funnier, that jokes funnier. But I think that with Eduardo and I, we just haven't had that issue. It's been a total sort of two one plus one equals 10. We feel like we get 10 times more done. We're not hurting each other's voice. Sure. Do we argue about like I think that's funny and he doesn't think it's funny or vice versa. But we just let it go find keep your joke. Um, early on, I Eduardo, getting getting to know him. He had such a mission with his writing. You know, my mission was just to try to make people laugh. I just grew up Jerry Seinfeld, David Letterman, Mel Brooks, I just I just wanted to make the world laugh. I didn't have specificity specificity that Eduardo did with what he not only wants to make the world laugh. But he wanted to change the stereotype of, I'll say, Latin x people for him, specifically Mexico. But he really had a goal with his laughter. And that changed my world, to be honest, Alex, because I had just sort of grown up thinking like, oh, laughter is the best medicine. But to meet Eduardo, and have him talk about, yeah, I want to make people laugh. But I also want to create characters that defy the stereotypes. And I'd like to do it by sort of, like putting cheese on the broccoli. Like, maybe we can change hearts and minds by creating positive Latinx stereotypes, like having characters that would normally just be a white doctor, or a lawyer or a successful businessman. But why can't we can Mexican Cuban, South American, and somehow the comedy can just come and somehow People will laugh and see the movie, but then they'll walk away, not realizing that like, Oh, it was a Latino character that wasn't just a garden or a made a Narcos, a rhino. And so, when, when he started to talk to me about that, it was to me, I was like, sign me up, Eduardo, sign me up, because I want to go on that mission with you. So to me, helped me understand where the last many decades have gone wrong in in their portrayal of Latino characters, and let's try to let's try to make a positive impact on the way it brought a whole nother depth to what I was just thinking of just gonna be another funny Jewish guy, to being to having more of a purpose to the writing. In an entertaining way, obviously, first and foremost, we're trying to entertain Sure. And so, with that goal in mind, can we also elevate what we're trying to do?

Alex Ferrari 47:45
That's, uh, if you can combine those two things in your professional life in your creative life, that is a very honorable way to to approach it. It really truly is. I mean, for me, I mean, I'm Cuban. And only two main Cuban influences in pop culture are Ricky Ricardo, and Scarface who happens to be Italian. So he, you know, so, and for years, you know, like, Hey, man, how you doing, man? Like it was constantly that throughout me when I was growing up, you know, because Scarface was the 80s By the way, nothing gets missed a poem. I think Scarface is a tastic film. And I think Chino did a fantastically a performance of what it was, it's a it's a bit over the top, I'm just saying just a bit over the top, and it's just a bit but he's a patina. But it's but it's true. And and I think now with what's going on in the world, and there is a lot more awareness of, of bringing these kind of characters, and I think you guys are at the forefront, and I can't wait to actually see half brothers, but from the trailer. It looks hilarious. Like, I'm like, I told my wife about it. Like, we kind of watch this when this comes out. This is gonna be amazing.

Jason Shuman 48:54
Thank you, I love the movie. It was everything Eduardo and I wanted to do when we set out to write it, to produce it, and bring on the team of Luke and Luis. Like, it's, I'm, I'm so proud to have been able to make a movie like this that is very contemporary, very, we think, but also follows the classic structure of movies that I grew up loving, like planes, trains, and automobiles. I mean, I, I worship these movies, and I've watched them hundreds of times. So to get to kind of live in the genre of some of my all time favorites, but try to create a modern movie with also the intention of like what we were saying to to just change the stereotype a little bit change the perception. So it was it was a fulfilling experience from top to bottom.

Alex Ferrari 49:52
You know, you know what's funny is when I was watching the trailer, and I saw that scene with when he's running towards the car with the goat By the way, everyone You can see the trailer at the at the show notes. So it doesn't sound like we're like talking weird, but definitely watch the trailer. But when he's running towards the goat first image that popped in my head, I don't know why it was planes, trains and automobiles. Like I just like it just it just felt very john Healy to me, which was great. And I was like, oh, now that you said that, it makes all the sense in the world because you can see that, that that kind of tang to it, it has a flavor of of those kind of old midnight run. Especially midnight, I just recently watched midnight run again.

Jason Shuman 50:34
Oh, my God grown and consider anything, anything, even if one little moment in a movie that I'm a part of reminds me of john Hughes, like, we're good. I'll take it cuz that's, I don't I could never make planes, trains if I tried. It's such a brilliant movie. But we just tried to bring the funny in the heart and the warmth and the characters that were that could make it an entertaining movie, and still take you on a trip and take you on a journey. And so we can have another conversation after you watch. I'll come back anytime.

Alex Ferrari 51:10
I can't wait. No, I can't wait. I can't wait to see it. And, okay, just let me lose my train of thought. Um, we were talking about john Hughes. All right, I forgot. We'll go on to the next question. So with with half brothers, in you, obviously now, sitting on both sides of the table as a producer and as a screenwriter. What advice do you have for screenwriters on approaching a project approaching a producer? How What does that screenplay? How does that screenplay have to be? How should they approach it? What's the do's and do nots? Should we just show up at your house? and knock on the door with a screenplay? I mean, I heard that's the way it's done in Hollywood. I've seen movies. How do you? How do you look at it?

Jason Shuman 52:00
choosing a producer? It's it? You know, you got to be careful because there are a lot of producers around around town. And like I don't know. And

Alex Ferrari 52:12
can we use the air quotes with the words producers, because I

Jason Shuman 52:17
Hit a producer.

Alex Ferrari 52:18
But also you could just go down to the FedEx store and or UPS store and get a business card made up and say you're a producer? There's no accreditation.

Jason Shuman 52:27
That's the scary part. Yes, sir, is so important. Because as I've learned, if they give up on your script, it's good as dead, like the producer has to keep that boulder being pushed up the mountain, you're a screenwriter, you know, unless you happen to have a career as producing like I had luckily done. So we sold in this case, we sold the pitch to focus there were no producers attached at the time. But I knew what to do as far as how to get keep the studio as as we kept doing drafts. And we got Luis attached to star and we got Luke interested in directing. That was me just instinctually taking over and saying I've got a script that I'm really proud of. And I think there's a movie here, I'm just gonna keep putting it together. So when it came time to the studio saying like, I think we're gonna make this, then they were just like, Well, why don't you just produce it? Why don't you and Eduardo just produce it since you've kind of been acting as producer anyway. So that was just a lucky situation where I turned to Eduardo. And I was like, wow, that's, that was it? We get to make it ourselves. But I do I do. Really. I don't take for granted good producing. Because even in my writing career, I've I've now been able to work with producers, that unlike they have skills that I don't have as a producer, I think they are they've helped me see things that I'd like to do in my producing game. And people that I just respect immensely. And so if you're a screenwriter, and you've got a script, like you can, you can either take your chance on a young ish producer or a new producer, if they have a lot of excitement for your script. But don't, don't, don't, don't sell your soul away. Like if they dropped the ball, you got to be willing to change it up. Because you can just sit dormant with a producer's kind of given up on it. And then it's just the if you go with a big company, like a big grant, Brian Grazer type company, well, they're great and Brian's amazing, but you're probably going to be dealing with their executives which is okay to just make sure that you get along with them. Make sure that you have a rapport with that executive and you feel like this executives got your back has the same vision of you do of trying to get it where it needs to be? There's no right answer, Alex, because every producer is gonna have a different set of skills, they're gonna have different contacts. Like, I only know the people that I know. Right? So if you bring me your script, I know the agents that I've known for 20 years, I know the talent that I know. And I have a way of doing things that might be totally different than somebody else who's like, been doing it the same amount of time I have and their connections are totally different. So the attachments that they might pitch you the agents they might talk to. So it's sort of an instinctual thing. You got to meet with producers, you got to hope there's enthusiasm, you got to look into their eyes, male or female, and you got to say, I trust them. I got a good feeling. You know, bring another Danny strong story when when when he wrote recount, and HBO was like, Danny, like, Who do you want to team up with on this movie? Because Sydney Pollack, who was the original Director Producer of recount passed away, like months before they were going to go shoot. And so Danny was given carte blanche to like team up with so many different and I find named you some of the director and be like, Lord, but he met with Jay Roach, and Jay Roach at the time. This is before Jay Roach has gone on now to do a bevy of dramatic work. That's amazing. But at the time, he had had the Meet the Parents movies, and the Austin Powers movies. But Danny met with them. And I'm gonna steal his story. He felt much better. But he just said, I met with him. And I was like, this guy's a winner. This guy, it's like, could I go with some of these other people who have more dramatic stuff on their resume that I admire too? Sure. But I sat there with Jay. And there was just something about this meeting, where I was like, Yes, I want to, I want to go down a road with this guy. I want I just this guy's a winner. And everything he touches turns to gold and I'm in and that was just Danny's instincts. That was just Danny's instinct saying like, I you could talk me out of it. But But am I gonna let you because? And I feel like that's what as a writer, you gotta send your stuff out there. You got to be fearless in that and then the meetings you take. If somebody seems shady. If somebody seems a little suspect, don't do it. Don't do it.

Alex Ferrari 57:37
But that doesn't happen. That doesn't happen in Hollywood, Jase. I mean, everyone who is so nice and upfront, and they didn't do anything shady here. Right. That's sarcasm, if anyone did not pick up on the sarcasm, that sarcasm, I'm just both Jason and I have gray hair for a reason.

Jason Shuman 57:58
I was always taught, like, a good deal with a bad person is a bad deal. Yes. And a bad deal with a good person is a great deal. And I don't forget that like if I meet with somebody, and they're offering me less money, but, but I just feel like such a good person. And I asked around about them and people speak lovingly. And then there's this other person who just don't know but but they're offering me more money 10 times out of 10 I'll go with the less deal but with the good person because it will in the long run it will pay off to me.

Alex Ferrari 58:39
That's a great, great advice. And I've just remember what I lost my train of thought the one thing I was gonna say it's so great that Focus Features you know, is producing films like a half brother because in the studio system that's that was very commonplace, but nowadays, yeah, you don't you don't get films of this because that halfway there is not a tentpole. You know, it's not $200 million movie so generally the studio's that's what that's what they're doing. And now specifically with the way the world is like no, but like what Warner Brothers just released the other day was just like, holy cow. This is this is changing the game. I mean, who knows what's gonna happen in the next year? So it's so cool that they actually are putting so many resources in a really, it truly is. It truly is.

Jason Shuman 59:26
That was a testament to Eduardo his work with Oh, honey. Oh, derbez. Um, you know that that Eduardo had worked with him not only on instructions, but Latin how to be a Latin lover had helped him out with overboard. And so those movies, Oh, honey, it was a brand. So those movies performed really well. And focus was willing to take a shot to kind of create their own division or at least their attempt to kind of get into that market. If we're just talking about from a business standpoint. They saw that there is a niche being created by Eduardo and no henio and Ben Odell and their company. And it was just sort of like, and look, we're in a pandemic, so the movies come out. And it's doing fine for pandemic wise we're doing great. But you know, in a real world, the box office would have been more on par with like Latin lover and overboard and instructions, but the world's changed. And so most people will safely watch it on their on their things. But if they happen to be in and around a theater, or drive in, I went to the drive in this weekend to watch it was so fun. And but if you're in Phoenix, or Texas, or Florida, or somewhere where there's a theater and you feel safe, you can experience it how Eduardo and I intended it to be experienced, but eventually it will come out and hopefully still do the same kind of numbers that that those other movies did. Over the lot.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:00
Yeah, and I want to ask you a few questions. I asked all of my guests sir. What are three screenplays every screenwriter should read?

Jason Shuman 1:01:10
One, my first and foremost is network.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:14
So good. It's been Yeah, that's, that's been on that list a lot.

Jason Shuman 1:01:18
A lot. I refer to it quite a bit. And it's just brilliant to me in every way, shape and form. I could never use the word so easily that he uses. so brilliant. I really do love a Paddy Chayefsky as a writer but also the movie network. The other ones I sort of flip around from a genre perspective. I love Cameron Crowe's Jerry Maguire script. Because I think that drama D is a difficult, difficult genre, trying that the critics often crush you. And it's like, when you get it, right, though, when you do Terms of Endearment when you do a movie that has comedy, but also has a ton of drama in it. And it's about someone like Jerry Maguire, like just taking a small step forward in life. And so I love reading that script all the time, because I think how he pulled that off, we created a big movie about a sports agent is quite brilliant. And then, God, the third one that I would say, because I read so many scripts that I often refer to, I, I would this is gonna come out of nowhere, but Oliver Stone, his script for wall street is very influential to me. Because he created a world created a world that I'm very fond of. He created a pace and a character. And that character's goal is to make money and to be like this. This like Gordon Gekko guy who's supposed to be the bad guy, but turned into this iconic, like, good guy. And so when I read Wall Street when I read Wolf of Wall Street, also another great script, similar vein, they create these worlds that are so fun to live in. They're so intoxicating. Yeah, though, they're sort of nefarious worlds. And so I often refer to the wall street screenplay as well. So I know that's kind of all over the place. But I use those those three scripts have inspired me a lot.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:55
Well, you and I are of similar vintages. So Wall Street, in my video store days, I must have seen Wall Street It was a religious experience to watch Wall Street for me. I can read I can recite the greed speech right now off the top of my head. I'm not joking you I could go off the top of my head and read that because I just, it was such a you and I never really understood it. But you actually said something really, very pointedly there that it's intoxicating. That that world at that time was I wanted to be Gordon Gekko so bad when I was a freshman in high school. Like I was just like, um, like, I started reading Wall Street books. I started reading, you know, investing books. I started like, you know, oh, yeah. I mean, I had the poster, the greed poster. There's they said they sold greed posters, with the whole speech. And I had it framed in my room. Oh my god.

Jason Shuman 1:04:50
Wait, it's not just the greed speeds. It's like when he's in the limo and he says, You're either inside or you're outside. And I'm not talking about some schmo making 300,000 living comfortably I'm talking about liquid rich enough to own your own jet, you know as a 15 year old the movie's supposed to be a tragic of a guy who's sold his soul to the devil. Yes pays the price. But But our generation saw it as as like a beacon of light of like how to live our lives.

Alex Ferrari 1:05:28
The funny thing is that the devil is the thing that you love the most about the film and that's what the devil is good at. Yeah, he's good at it at a toxicated bringing you in. And and I actually like the second one, Wall Street. Money doesn't sleep.

Jason Shuman 1:05:42
I don't want to talk about that you don't like my good friend Allan Loeb wrote it and I love him. He's one of the best screenwriters. But it was hard for me to watch because I the first one is so perfect. why he's such a perfect movie, that it was just I don't think there was any version of the sequel that would have made made you happy. It's just like, if somebody made Apocalypse Now, too. I probably go like I can't.

Alex Ferrari 1:06:06
I can't do it. I can't I don't care if it

Jason Shuman 1:06:09
Perfection. How do you top that? Just let it be.

Alex Ferrari 1:06:12
I don't care if Coppola goes back in time and writes it in the in the jungle while he's shooting? The first one. I'm not watching it. I'm not watching

Jason Shuman 1:06:21
Can't do it.

Alex Ferrari 1:06:22
Now. What advice would you give a screenwriter wanting to break into the business today?

Jason Shuman 1:06:27
Very simply, I have a couple mantras I live by them. It's like, first off, you got to be all in. Yeah, like playing poker, you got to look at your hand, whoever you are, if you're whatever culture you come from, whatever males like female, binary, whatever you see yourself as whatever you look in the mirror and identify as you've got to look at the hand you've been given. And you got to say, I've got a lot to say, and I'm in it to win it. And you got to put your chips in and say I'm all in. I'm all in. And I'm gonna keep going until I die until I have a heart attack. And because it is so tough, it is so competitive. And you gotta just say, I'm just like, whenever my time is, and I do feel like everyone gets their shot. That you got to just keep writing every day. No excuse. Just tell your stories. I don't care if it's, as Danny would tell me. I don't care if it's making a list of things you love and hate. I don't care if it's just going off book and just in your journal writing extemporaneous scene, you've got to write every darn day, you have to even Sundays, like you got to adjust. Jerry Seinfeld says he has a calendar. And he makes sure he writes at least one joke every day. And then he puts an X in his calendar so that he looks back on the year. And it's like, okay, I wrote 360 a minimum I wrote 365 jokes. So you should be able to look back and say I wrote every single day. And I promise you, if you do that one year, then two years, then three years, stuff will happen. It just Will you unless you're just too scared to show it to anyone then I don't know what to tell you. But like, if you just do it, just just put your chips all in the middle and say whatever this hand is, I've been given in life. I'm all in on it. And I'm gonna I'm gonna keep evolving obviously as a human being and as a writer, but I'm I'm in it to win it as a filmmaker and a storyteller. That would be my

Alex Ferrari 1:08:41
that's awesome advice. Yeah. And again, just perseverance man, perseverance. Just that's it's it's a lot of times I found in this business. It's not about the who's the best or the most talented. It's the one who just keeps grinding it out and keeps going keeps showing up.

Jason Shuman 1:08:55
I don't love Jay Leno. I wasn't the big Jay Leno fan. But man, that guy had a work ethic. He would write he jokes on Saturdays on Sunday is in the morning at night. He was like, I'm not the best looking guy. I'm not the funniest guy, but I'm gonna work harder than everyone else. I'm gonna just if I'm, like, I don't have that natural charisma, like Letterman does, or everyone just loves Letterman. But you know, and my I have a lot of respect for people like that. And so that these are just the people like the Judd Apatow story I said, where he'll wrote 15 jokes. There's a theme to what we've been talking about. And that's just how I see it. I'm just like, I'll put in the work. I'll deal with the rejection. And it's no fun Look, I don't like it. I have plenty of friends who have dealt with lots of hours of phone call me being like, uh, uh, but then I get up the next morning and just keep going. Just keep keep it going.

Alex Ferrari 1:09:55
Keep keep keep the keep the hustle. Keep the hustle. Last question, what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

Jason Shuman 1:10:06
So easy to answer that enjoy the process? Mm hmm. So results oriented, that you can't, you just cannot be, it can't just be the selling of the script, or just getting the movie made or the TV show made. You gotta try to enjoy the process of writing that you're like, every day, you get to sit there and tell your stories, you know, and some days are good, some days bad, but try your best anything in life. Try to enjoy that you today, the goal is to write three pages. And if you did that successfully, go have yourself a beer or a nice meal or pat yourself on the back. Because that, you know, enjoy the little victories enjoy the process, and then the outcome will be what it's going to be. I don't I have no control a lot over that. And yes, I used to. I used to start having grandiose things of like, oh, maybe I could sell this for a million dollars and get it made with Brad Pitt. And great, great when it happens. I've been lucky enough to have it happen a couple times like that as a producer. But in general things happen in ways you never saw come in. So just try to the process. And and then half brothers is out right now as we as we speak in theaters, and then as a coming up. Do you know when it's coming out? Oh, no. We'll be out on VOD, Amazon, all that stuff, but it will at some point.

Alex Ferrari 1:11:39
And I will I will put all that in the show notes. Jason and I appreciate you coming back on the show man on this show. First time, it was an absolute pleasure talking. I know we can keep talking for at least a couple hours. Just and I'm the first one to sign up for that Danny strong seminar you're going to be creating soon, so I appreciate that

Jason Shuman 1:11:58
Thank you Alex anytime.

Alex Ferrari 1:12:01
I want to thank Jason for coming on the show and sharing his journey with us if you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, including how to watch his new film half brothers. Head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/098. And guys, if you have not checked out, indie film, hustle, TV, and all of the amazing screenwriting courses and filmmaking, lessons, workshops, movies, documentaries, things like that, head over to indiefilmhustle.tv and check it out. Thank you so much for listening, guys. As always, keep on writing no matter what. Stay safe out there. And I'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 097: How to Make People Laugh & Cry with Your Screenwriting with Eduardo Cisneros

Today on the show we have screenwriter, Eduardo Cisneros. He began his screenwriting career in his home country of Mexico. Working on countless television series including Saturday Night Live: Mexico. His career took an upward trajectory when he began working with one of the biggest comedy actor/writer/producer and director in the Latinx world,  Eugenio Derbez.

Eduardo help develop the massively successful crossover smash Instructions Not Included.

Eduardo Cisneros’s latest project hits close to home. Half Brothers, who he co-wrote and produced with Jason Shuman, is based on his experiences as an immigrant from Mexico in America. His father was the basis of the main character’s father in the story.

Renato, a successful Mexican aviation executive, is shocked to discover he has an American half-brother he never knew about, the free-spirited Asher. The two very different half-brothers are forced on a road journey together masterminded by their ailing father, tracing the path their father took as an immigrant from Mexico to the US.

Half brothers is about bonding. It’s about empathy. It’s about the challenge of developing the ability to put yourself into somebody else’s shoes and realizing that you have more in common than things that separate you.” – Eduardo Cisneros

It was an absolute pleasure speaking to Eduardo and discuss how he approaches each story, what it was like work on SNL Mexico, how it’s like writing with a partner, and how he hopes his films change the conversation on how Latinx people are perceived in our culture. He wants to bring his Spanish-speaking audience a greater representation in Hollywood.

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Alex Ferrari 0:49
I'd like to welcome the show Eduardo Cisneros. How you doing my friend?

Eduardo Cisneros 3:33
I'm pretty pretty good. How are you doing?

Alex Ferrari 3:35
I'm as good as I can be in this upside down world that we live in today.

Eduardo Cisneros 3:40
Yeah, isn't it wonderful?

Alex Ferrari 3:42
It is it's something it's something it's something like I like I said the mole people haven't risen up and Atlantis hasn't hasn't risen either to take over the world. Yes yet. But that's the only thing missing from 2020 honestly. Alien aliens Meteor. Yeah, what else is there?

Eduardo Cisneros 4:02
Well, they found this big sculpture of like a Buddha and then has had like a dead person inside Did you see that? And I might not leave that leave that alone. This is not the year like please put it back in the ground like bury that stuff like I don't think we can handle any more of that stuff.

Alex Ferrari 4:20
Don't open that today

Eduardo Cisneros 4:22
Just. Like dont

Alex Ferrari 4:25
Just let Indiana Jones just close the door and walk away slowly, slowly.

Eduardo Cisneros 4:31
Brendan Fraser closing

Alex Ferrari 4:36
A Brendan raise your friend Brendan Fraser reference. I appreciate that. Old School mummy.

Eduardo Cisneros 4:44
All sorts of stuff under my sleeves man.

Alex Ferrari 4:48
Well, listen, man. Thanks so much for being on the show. Man. I'm so excited to have a screenwriter but also a Latino screenwriter because we don't get many of those on the show. And as as a lot You know, filmmaker. When I found out about you, I was like, Yes, yes, I'd love to have him on the show. And let's, let's talk screenwriting from, from your perspective, sir. So before we get started, how did you get into this ridiculous business?

Eduardo Cisneros 5:16
Good question. You know, I was born and raised in Mexico. And in Mexico, and I would say in the Spanish language, world, radio is a big thing. So I always wanted to be a filmmaker, but we have less avenues, you know, to get to that goal. So my first opportunity was as a radio DJ. And specifically, because a lot of the radio there is very driven towards like comedy and humor would not so I would write sketches for radio, but that's basically what you would call it. So when I moved to Mexico City, which is the bigger hub of entertainment in Latin America, and the springboard in, I first started going around the radio, radio stations, who produce a lot of content, but it was all comedy. So I started writing the, you know, I took my tapes and my scripts and, and people liked what I did. And they hire me. And I happen to cross paths with one of many other business staff writers, and no henio was already at the top of his career. And he hasn't climbed down since he was it was, I would say, the first peak on the series of peaks. So I was fortunate enough that because of the funny stuff that I've written for radio, then I was then brought on to write TV. I'm summarizing it. It was a little bit of a trek, from very, very baby junior level writer to a full time staff writer for tenure. But that's, that's that's how it happened. And

Alex Ferrari 6:53
yeah, generally, it's not the overnight like, yeah, just one day, I got this. And the next day, I'm a staff writer, I just kind of worked out. Yeah. Now what is it like being a staff writer for at Haneul? And in also in just a staff writer, because your staff writer basically for anything he does or was a specific show? How

Eduardo Cisneros 7:10
does that work? Now, when you're, it's a weird system. And I rarely, I mean, I don't think that I will experience anything in my life like that as a writer. And I also think it's a very different experience for any writers. I don't know how many people in the world would have a situation like this, but because he is, but even more so at the time, he was a big commodity for fertility. So which is the biggest network and the only game in town for decades. And he was their biggest star. So they let him hire two or three writers. Full time it was job was only to write for anything that he did. So he was always surrounded by a team of two or three writers, which meant if he had a TV show that you would write for a TV show, if he was dubbing a movie, then you would add some jokes. If he was going to do some kind of public experience appearance even as a speech, then you would have to help him write the speech like you were, you'd be at his best 24 seven for a full year round. Didn't matter if he was shooting a show or not so but the reason why I think it's also unique it was because he, he basically was an artist who shaped pop culture in Mexico. So it was a very bizarre experience with you a write a sketch, and sometimes it was like a one off thing where his show was on hiatus, but he wanted to make fun of something that happened. So we would write a sketch, shoot it and put it in some morning show or something. And it would be water cooler conversation. This was pre Twitter kids. This was pre social media days. So you would go out on the street, you would go to the supermarket, you would go to the gym, and everybody was talking about this thing. It was like Game of Thrones,

Alex Ferrari 9:11
or something or Seinfeld back in the day.

Eduardo Cisneros 9:14
I always tell people that it was it was the most important thing was Seinfeld because ohanian was not only very commercially successful, but he was also admired because his brand of humor was very different and very observational and smart compared to other comedians in Mexico. So that was very bizarre. And we had another taste of it when instructions that included came out and we get to that in a minute but I was in Mexico City working on another project of henio when construction and include come out of Mexico, and I decided to live a more New York style way of life. I ditch my car and I would take public transit to the office every day and from my like from my door like my house. public transit during the gym to go to the office, everybody was talking about me. So it is it's a very weird and also very gratifying as a writer that you create something. And you put something on a sketch show where he shows up at an award ceremony and he does a funny thing. And everybody's talking about it the next day. It's also a big responsibility, but it was it was a great experience.

Alex Ferrari 10:23
So for people who don't know, Daniel is he's, he's an annual. He. He's like, like you said, a cultural icon in Mexico. And then he has crossed over he's done movies, like construction is not included like overboard. Who was with what's her name?

Eduardo Cisneros 10:41
I know Ferris.

Alex Ferrari 10:42
Thank you Anna Faris Yes. Which is, which was a remake of an old Kurt Russell Goldie Hawn film back in the 80s. And he's actually done a he's been in a bunch of American movies. So he has definitely crossed over. So the equivalent so for everyone listen to it's the equivalent of you getting a staff position with Seinfeld in the height of his powers in the 90s. Basically, where he is anything you wrote, people saw, and you were talking about, and you were just there in that, that hurricane in the center of the storm.

Eduardo Cisneros 11:15
And it was it was a weird experience. Because the truth is, I was I was barely out of college. I was very young as in my early 20s. I did go I mean, I did get the what I call a media degree in Mexico for my bachelor's degree. So I, I studied everything. I then I took a specific production workshop for like NYU, I went to New York Film Academy in New York, I shot I shot a bunch of short films. So I was always geared toward filmmaking and writing, but, but to have a job like that within a year or two, graduating college is insane. And it's why only so much that I thought, Oh, this is what life is gonna be like, this is the life of a writer. It's gonna be amazing. This is the first two or three years of my career. Wait until you see. But it didn't work out though. It didn't pan out.

Alex Ferrari 12:12
Yeah, generally, when when when I had a small amount of success when I came into the business, and I was making crazy money as an editor. And I'm like, Oh, this is just the way it is. Right? You just you just roll hard like this until one day, the gravy train stops.

Eduardo Cisneros 12:30
Yeah, and you have no control. You're, you're waiting there for the phone to ring and it's not ringing. And you're like, Oh, I guess I'll find a way to pay the bills. So it's Yeah, it's a very eye opening.

Alex Ferrari 12:45
humbling. humbling. It's a humble,

Eduardo Cisneros 12:46
It's very humbling, very humbling

Alex Ferrari 12:49
This business. This is what this business will definitely bring you to your knees. Every and I don't care who you are everybody that it happens to every mega star in the world, every success story, they all get humbled to their knees at one point or another in their career. Right? You know, it's not only the

Eduardo Cisneros 13:06
line, never too big. You're never too big to fall in your house. You're never too big to to eat humble pie. So, and by the way, the first person who told me that was when you know, can you tell me he wanted to warn me. He was saying he would always say there's always gonna be someone around the corner. Who's funnier than you? Who is more charismatic than you? So don't coast don't, you know, don't don't take these things for granted. Like, always make sure that you're always putting out the best version of the work in and I might Yeah, yeah. You know, he's like, You're like a kid. And you're like, yes, that you know, like, but he it worked for him. So like, Oh, I guess it should start paying attention. to it. This successful man is saying

Alex Ferrari 13:55
to be yes. Oh, yeah. I know.

Eduardo Cisneros 14:00
I learned my lesson.

Alex Ferrari 14:02
So uh, so you you were you were Tell me how you were involved with instructions not included, which was, I think, his first big hit here in the States. And I you know, was released by I think Lionsgate at the time. So it was a it was a big release. It's a big release for the film. So how did you get involved with it?

Eduardo Cisneros 14:21
Well, I was it was we started writing the movie at that point precisely in the early aughts, where we were writing this show and we were writing about I was writing a bunch of stuff for you. But it within that team of two or three writers, I just happened to be the person who had studied more of me when regards to screenwriter who is more interested in film, so when he said, You know, he called us to his office and he said, You know, I'm the most successful comedian on TV, but at the time, there was no real commercial business in Mexico was all art house a mortise barrows eat mama tambien. We've made they made like four or five movies a year. And he said, like, all those directors Don't take me seriously. So I'm going to have to come up with my own script of the movie. And he talked about his idea. And I was one of the one of the only people who was like, Yeah, I really would like to do that. Anyway, it was it was, at the time, it was kind of like a vanity project, he might as well have said, I want to record an album. Like, it was one of those things where you're like, Alright, sounds like, I'm sure. And then we talked about so him and I got a little more time to talk about the movies we liked. And at the time, we're very, we're very inspired by all this. movies that came from Italy, right? Oh, in cinema part of it. So Life is beautiful. And pristine, like all these movies that were very unabashedly emotional and cheesy and corny, but they were also had like a, they have paces and depth. And they also have a streak of comedy. And that kind of jive very well with the Latino sensibility. Um, so he wanted to do that he wanted to show that he could do, he uses comedic chops, but also make people cry. So we started watching those movies. And then we he partnered up with console as compared to produce comedy sparrows. And he brought on like a more seasoned screenwriter to kind of, so we can break the story together. And then eventually, after a couple of drafts where there was a bit of a story, then ohanian, I and another of his writers cope with MP, we worked on the script for another four years after that, again, because of him, he is a perfectionist, and he will do draft after draft and we would get every scene to his liking. And even then, after five, six years, if you could believe this, still, we can find people to Who would think that Daniel was a movie star. And I laughed because there's really nobody bigger than him at the moment in the Spanish language world. But at the time, it was more like now who wants to put money in the hands of the movie. But the thing is, like, I would spend so much time with him, that I would see firsthand how people responded to him and how the effects I was like, I think that I think there's a little bit of snobbery going on back then. So, but long story short, we got to make the movie and it came out and was a great experience. At the time, I had already moved to LA, I had learned my lesson I had, I just think that I decided to cross over before the movie came out. So by the time it came out, I already had an agent and also was in a position to kind of like capitalize the success of the movie. But, you know, I'm thankful that it came out when it did and it did the way it did.

Alex Ferrari 18:14
Yeah, it was it was a huge success, especially in the in the Spanish speaking world here in the States, but it also found a bigger audience. It's not just that Latinos who went out to see it. I mean, a lot of other cultures have seen it because it's just such a beautiful film. It really really is a beautiful film. And I my wife, and I just loved it when we saw it. Now you you also worked with SNL, but Mexico's SNL, right? I I've never spoken to anyone who's worked with any an SNL outside of here in the state. So what's it like? Like, is it just another sketch comedy show? But with a obviously with a Mexican twist to it? How is that how's the whole thing work?

Eduardo Cisneros 18:55
Well, so at the time, I was telling you that I was in Mexico City at the time, the reason why I was there, because I was already in LA, but Ohio called me and said, we're doing this now. And I was alright, I'll be there. So I, you know, he relocated me to Mexico City to work on this project, and he got the rights you have the rights to do the SNL franchise which I didn't know existed by the way. I didn't know that SNL had turned into this thing where they had an SNL and in Korea, Brazil, and one in Spain, which Funny enough, it's on Thursday night. I hate each one. That's amazing. Yeah. But it's so they because they've done this a few times. Now Broadway video has the whole way. This whole system to kind of train you to do this and they explain the process to you. And then you sit down and watch this video, of like behind the scenes of step by step how to put the show together. And then when we turned around and tried to put it together, they sent horatia stance to work with us along the way. They also sent somebody from Second City to make sure that we were kind of building upon all these tenets of improv comedy. They're the core of SNL. And it also happened that. So when I moved to the US, and I try to cross over, I was hoping for things to go as, as quickly and as well as they did when I moved to Mexico City. That was not the case. And so I, I said, You know what, I have to prepare as much as possible. And I went to NYU and took a bunch of screenwriting classes. I took every class that I could, there was a thing called media Bistro. I don't know if it still exists, but I would like went through, like, simulations of writers room that they did with like real writers from like the Simpsons and whatnot. But one of the most important things that that I did was take improv. And I went, I joined UCB. I completed the program. I joined a couple teams. So I was one of those annoying people that would go Hey, you're gonna come watch my improv show. I was I was at La guy.

Alex Ferrari 21:21
At least it wasn't a one man show. I mean, this is an improv show. Because there's, there's the improv show. And then there's like, Hey, can you come see my show? Are you right? And I have, and I have been to an LA one man show or one woman show. And it is. It's, it's, it's kind of like a rite of passage of Rites here in

Eduardo Cisneros 21:42
LA. Yeah, I think I would still, I think if I have to choose, I would rather do the band because at least you're like words. It's music. They can it can always play up Converse. But yeah, there was one man show. It's like the one man on stage and other just another one men in the audience. And that just show for one man.

Alex Ferrari 22:05
Exactly.

Eduardo Cisneros 22:07
Not no woman show. So so because I had that training, I was also able to transmit some of that too, because there was very little improv comedy. In Latin America. And in Mexico, it's growing more. But at the time, this was a few years ago, there were very few improv companies there. So I had improv training. And I used that so that was a great experience. And, and a lot of it was being truthful to to the brand, which is being topical, which is being political. You know, knowing how to cap, you know, capitalize on whatever is happening at the moment. So it was a great experience.

Alex Ferrari 22:53
Yes, it sounds awesome. Now, you've been you've written a lot of different, you know, comic comedy and characters, what is it, especially in the future world? Or even in scripted television? What is how do you create a memorable leading character for comedy?

Eduardo Cisneros 23:14
I think one of the things that was that heard that was more helpful, was, more often than not a script problem is a character problem, right? And I realized that was a very helpful thing to learn in general, but specifically for comedy, because when you have a character in comedy that has a strong point of view, and that you know, what they think about the world, and you know, what they do in the moment of crisis, then it's, it becomes easier, all of a sudden, to, to, to write and then I used to, you know, because when, when I was in Mexico, after I've been part of my, what I call it, the, was kind of like my Karate Kid training, which I was kind of training without really knowing that I was training but I was working as a consultant for Sony television in America. And part of my job was to do something like you see the ad Everybody Loves Raymond documentary with Phil Ruffin. Oh, yeah. Russia.

Alex Ferrari 24:25
Yeah. So great. So great.

Eduardo Cisneros 24:26
So I was working exactly with that with that company, doing exactly that. But for Latin America, it would take the nanny or what um, you know, what have you right? So a lot of I went through a lot of character Bible series Bibles, and I was exposed in a short amount of time, to a lot of, of the engines of very different shows. And in the process, I had to train writers and some of the exercises that I would give them, one of them was you Ask a question. And then write the answer according to each one of the characters from the Simpsons, right? So the characters on The Simpsons are so well defined that you know what the answer is gonna be, like, you know, what Homer is gonna be, you know, when this is gonna say, you know, what Bart is gonna say. So that's a great example of what do you want to do in comedy, you want to make sure that every one of your characters has such a specific point of view, that the audience knows what that point of view is. But also, they will be surprised, and kind of looking forward to see how they're going to express their point. So it's more about what how, Karen on willing Grace is expressing what they have to say how its array, like how each person on TV, you know, what they think you you're just waiting to see how they're going to express that point of view that you know. So as a writer, I think creating a TV show, or creating a feature comedy, where the character has strong point of view is essential. You really need to know that before you start doing any more writing. And I would say in TV is even more important because characters are even more important than story on TV, like people will forgive a bad story. But if it's a character they love, they will watch them do anything. They will watch them make coffee, if it's an interesting character. So from a community point of view, I think that's that's, that's very helpful.

Alex Ferrari 26:40
Did you ever watch Breaking Bad?

Eduardo Cisneros 26:43
I watched the pilot.

Alex Ferrari 26:44
You watch the pilot, okay.

Eduardo Cisneros 26:46
Yes, sorry.

Alex Ferrari 26:49
There is no reason why we can't we have to end the interview Now, obviously, no. Um, so there was an episode in that series, a very famous episode where they basically sat around and followed a fly the entire episode. And they like talked a bunch and they just and it was, it was honestly the worst. It's like a legendarily worst episode of the entire series other than bad and maybe a couple of other episodes. The it's almost a flawless series. But the reason why you stick with something like that is because you love the characters. Because if that was a new show, you're like, Oh, hell, no, I'm out of here. But you die. You know? Yeah. But I never thought of it that way that with comedy specifically, you know, you go through all of television, especially comedy and television, not as much in because it features the character can change. They have a point of view, like Axel Foley has a point of view. But he changes, you know, he

Eduardo Cisneros 27:43
you want them to change. It's a transformation machine. Right? Right. So movie, that's the distinction by television

Alex Ferrari 27:50
character. But Seinfeld is Seinfeld and Kramer is Kramer and, you know, Monica from friends is and they're they don't change, they might change a little bit. But overall, that point of view of who that character is never leave. So if you are writing for television, especially comedy, you definitely have to hold on to that point of view. Yeah, when is it? Not with comedy to? You know, I don't know if it's as much I'd love to hear your thoughts about it. The villain or the antagonist. You know, a lot of times comedy, the antagonist is not a Darth Vader style figure. It could be the situation, it could be, you know, odds or things like that. But, um, like, airplane, you know, which, all I have to say is the word airplane, and everyone just laughs because if you see that it's just such a brilliant film. But there is no villain there is the planes gonna crash that is the antagonists the plane almost as becomes the antagonist. So when you're writing comedy, either for television or for, or features, what's the key to a good antagonist, whether that be a situation or actual character?

Eduardo Cisneros 29:00
Well, there's two things, I think the key to any antagonist in any particular format is you just have to be able to see the story from their point of view, because everybody's the hero of their own story, right? So you have to understand why this person nobody does thinks to be evil, right? unless you really write a nutshell or writing that cartoon. If tonally, that's what it is. All right. But for the most part for a TV show, you would probably want something that is more grounded, unlike what is what is the why is this character doing what they do? What what why do they see themselves as the hero of the story? But even going further than that, I think that in comedy, The, the main antagonist is always that the main character, they usually in comedy, The reason why we laugh Because we see that this person is undermined by their own character flaws, right? So if you think about the comedic version of to your point like the the, you know, the airplane is not the airplanes fault that all these people are idiots, right? So it's the same thing that, that if you're in a car with four comedic characters with strong point of view and they get a flat tire, you know that because they're incompetent or because they have such character flaws, that this thing is just going to snowball into anybody walking three hours. Like if they didn't, if they didn't have these character flaws that were undermining them at every step. They would, it would be jack Bauer, right? It'd be like 24 B, people who are like fiction. I think usually comedy is a way for us to highlight how in life, we are the first person to step on toes, right? So yeah, so that I mean, it's the Road Runner story, like he's case, in the end is like, yes, the Road Runners can be smart, but this guy's like, so stubborn and in such an idiot. And just we laugh at that.

Alex Ferrari 31:17
Right, exactly. And I always thought I always thought the road winner was the villain personally, and that fill in those shorts, because I feel for Wiley so badly. Actually, the other day on Facebook actually saw a meme where there was a coyote who actually had a road runner and there's mouthy, like, Oh, my God, he finally did it, it was just finally did it. But that's really it. That's interesting, because I never really kind of thought about the point of view. I mean, the flaws, you know, if you look at a movie, like hangover, which is a classic now, you know, each of them have a very distinct point of view, each of them have a belief system. And what's exactly Zach Galifianakis his belief system is just brilliant. But the combination of those those points of views is when you get thrown into and those point of views, they kind of change a bit, but they, they, they stay, they are who they are, at the end, they may definitely have changed a bit. But those point of views have stayed pretty solid. But that point, but those point of views is like you said that the flat, the flat tire, like, okay, that's where the comedy comes in. I'm trying, I'm trying to dissect the comedy a bit more, and I just want to kind of dig into your brain a little bit. But you're, you're you're bringing it up in my head now that it? It is, it's just coming clear to me, I hope the audience is getting clear as well. Are they picking up a couple of nuggets along the way about what makes what's funny, because, you know, a dude stepping on a banana peel and falling? Well, that's funny. But when you but when you actually get that point of view of who that guy is, and a backstory, then it becomes even funnier. And then that's, you know,

Eduardo Cisneros 33:02
when it comes to movies, we think about the best comedies out there, what I consider classics, and if you are of those people who believe, like I am that, you know, after the midpoint in the second act, and I'm glad I can take talking to specific terms for all the nerds out there. But like after your midpoint is specific, the second act, you want to, obviously raise your stakes, right? And if you are writing a superhero movie, that's what they call the bad guys close and like this is more like an external villain coming in. And, you know, coming closer to where you are in a comedy, it's more about like, how can I put this schmuck in or how can you bring this all the all the look character flaws in this character that they're gonna just, you have to face them with those shortcomings to the point that you're going to push them to that turn. So one of the best examples out there is Groundhog Day, right? Which I think is one of the best screenplays when it comes to comedy. And he is really leaning into almost like the worst of him in, in the second act is really coming out and it just gets to a point that but what happens like pushes him so hard that he can't over. It's not until he is able to see those shortcomings that he's a jerk and selfish and uses everybody to his to his own agenda. And that is able to change as a character but before that he's blind and he's going he's repeating the same behavior literally the definition of insanity, right like repeating the same behavior and and you know, he wants to kill himself he can. So that's that to me, like look at every comedy with a with has a strong comedic point of view and you will find that that's the part where you're really challenging your main character because that that With the comedy, the first half, we're going to have all the laughs But then the second half is going to turn a little more challenging because this person is going to make everything very difficult for themselves. Yeah, what I love and then that's, that's only when they will change. Right? Yeah, I

Alex Ferrari 35:16
mean, what I love about Groundhog's Day it is it is, by the way, top five comedy scripts ever written. I mean, it's and performing at that movie is an absolute masterpiece. But put yourself in that scenario, which I know everybody in the world who ever watches that movie puts themselves in that scenario, like what would I do if I had to do everything again today? And a lot of us would probably just do that, like we would go down those kind of those places, especially, I mean, especially the younger you are, absolutely. But you just got to he gets to a point where he's like, I've, I've eaten everything I can eat. I've enjoyed every spoil I can enjoy. I've I've slept with every woman that's in this town that I want to sleep with. I've stolen all the money, I've had all the experiences. And it's not fulfilling me until he finally gets to a wall where he hacks to actually just gives up and it goes, I got it. I gotta change. I got to do something else. Because this thing is not letting me get off the hook. I can't kill myself. I can't go anywhere. That's the brilliance of that script. And that story, that character until at the end, he does finally he's like maybe I should do something to better myself. So I learned how to play piano I you know, I learned how to I sculpt that starts in this dish helping people on the way it is such a wonderful, wonderful, I'm sorry, I'm geeking out about Groundhog's Day with you. I'm sorry.

Eduardo Cisneros 36:31
About Groundhog Day, groundhog day all day. But as I think I don't know if it applies to every genre, because I've had the opportunity now to do but I think when it comes to just straight comedy pure comedy. You I like the idea in Mexico, we have the same no Kaito Kaito Kaito salir de la tonetta means like, I don't want any more cheese, I just want to get out of this mouse trap. Right? So to me, that's the moment where the characters like I don't want to chase anymore. Just get me out of the mousetrap. And I think Groundhog's Day is an example. And when you watch everybody goes in watch to watch half brothers, you will see you know you in even the trailer, you get an idea this, this character that we set out of the place is very judgmental. He thinks he's like a higher level than everybody else. And we found a very external manifestation of that he's an aviation engineer, right? He's literally flying above everybody else. So when you without spoiling much, but I think in that after the midpoint, you'll find him really trapped in this place where he just, he doesn't want anything else. But to get out of the mousetrap. And his biggest enemy is not even going to be this half brother is just going to be its own shortcomings as a character. Right. So I'm hoping that you get to watch it soon. And then we'll then I'm really happy to geek out and yeah, the mechanics of the script.

Alex Ferrari 38:02
So so so that's a wonderful segue, sir into your new film. It was very subtle. No, no accident. But no half brothers is your new film. Which can you tell everybody a little bit about what the movie is about? I saw the trailer of it. It looks it looks fantastic. I am dying to see it. I really am. It's definitely a Friday night, Saturday night, you know, movie night with your with your spouse kind of film, at least for us. But it's funny, it looks great. So tell a little bit of everybody about what it is.

Eduardo Cisneros 38:33
Half brothers, I'm very proud of this movie. I'm very happy with the work that everybody did in the movie. Obviously, not only myself, but like I think we got a really, as a team. And this movie is was a chapter right? Because Robbie and I feel like the road movie is often seen as low hanging fruit, right? Like, oh, it's good to be on a car, get them from A to B. How hard can that be? Right? And it's it's precisely the simplicity of it. That makes it super challenging. So I approached this the way I start approaching everything. Since ohanaeze words were resonating in my head I just prepared along with my writing partner we just prepared even before we wrote the first scene to be as familiar with this genre as possible. And we watched every version as from the most biggest commercial comedy to the smallest, more esoteric, indie porn like we watch everything to see what worked, what didn't work. So that went behind the brand. I think it was worth it. The other circumstance that was very special about this movie was that in a world where, you know, we know that the studio's are more more inclined to buying IP and superhero movies and this and that this was an original pitch, we presented it to Focus Features who and who don't get into producing that movie that easily, right. They're very, very picky about what they produce in house. It's normally either co co production or just an acquisition. So we were very lucky that they believed believed in the pitch. They bought the pitch and they developed it with with us. And that was also extremely helpful. Because these are people who have excellent taste in, in movies, who very experienced and who were again, because I was kind of coming off the Actually, I literally started fleshing out this idea. Right after around the time instructions included came out. So it was in this wave again, of thinking about all those 90s movies from Miramax that inspired me. And I was like, well, you don't really see those movies anymore. And part of it is because you know the people.

Alex Ferrari 41:15
Yeah, exactly.

Eduardo Cisneros 41:17
But leaving that aside, I think that, you know, there was there was something not cynical at all about those movies. And I think that the pendulum right now still in a very darker cynic cynical side of the spectrum. But I think because of the times we're living in, I'm like, I think it's time for a movie that wears its feelings on its sleeve. So well, long story short, we developed a script. And we were aiming for a similar thing, if you watch destructions, they're difficult tonal shifts that might look seamless, because we work very hard, but they're very tough to everybody to people who love and enjoy the movie. And luckily, it's been the majority of people who watched it. Even in script form. They said, I just loved that. And one minute, I'm laughing my ass off. And then the next one or two minutes later, I'm crying with this character genuinely going from and I'm like, well, that's life, right? Isn't that where we live? Like, we started out storytelling with tragedy and comedy. And I think it's become more and more more and more complex. I think we start need to start making mixing the sweet with a savory, you know, we need to start mixing one thing with the other and see what comes out of it. So this is all to say that that was a way to try and do that. And apparently, we did something good, because people are responding very positively to to the movie.

Alex Ferrari 42:46
And how was it working with your, your writing partner, Jason because Jason was on my show indie film hustle with his film, his Sundance Film, back in two, three years ago, now, Catcher in the Rye. And I had the pleasure of talking to him. And he was when I was speaking to him, he was starting to take writing seriously. He's been a producer for a long time. And he wanted to start writing. He's like, you know what I'm going to start writing. And this is what I'm going to do. So how did you guys get together? And then what is the process? Because I've only written? I've written with partners before, but I generally they didn't work out. Because I have I have since I've realized that I write well by myself. I can I can recall it. I could collaborate, but like the actual writing part process. How did that work out with you?

Eduardo Cisneros 43:37
Well, I again, this happened right around the time that instructions not included, came out and luckily sanfur panitch, who ran Fox international at the time, the International production division of Fox, he I said luckily he he knew what my role had been shepherding instruction on included creatively. Even before the movie came out, he was familiar with the process. And so when the movie came out, it was a hit. He offered me a to picture deal. So I I wrote my first movie for for them. And then when it came time to write my second movie, out of my two picture deal. He said you have to meet this guy pieces. Shuman, he's a producer. He wants to be a writer, etc. So I think you guys have a similar sensibility. And I was like, all right. Why not? So we, I you know, when you're in Hollywood, you have like, 100 meetings like this. Yeah. So I'm like, Okay, I guess one of those general meetings where you're like sitting there, awkwardly, it's almost like one of those,

Alex Ferrari 44:52
Like blind date. It's a blind date is essentially

Eduardo Cisneros 44:56
a blind date. But to me, it's almost like a play date where you're like, Your mom and this other woman are really good friends with you. Now you have to play with this kid. You might not even like them, you're stuck here with the sucker. Where do you go? Right? So, but in this case, it just, we started talking and he came, he came very well prepared, he came with like 10 log lines that he had, it was going one after the other in a minute now. And then, at the end, he's just started telling me this story that happened to him once and I'm like, oh, that that could be, that's a good, you know, jumping off point for a story, and we started fleshing it out. And we sold it and we're rooting for Fox, and that script has changed hands, and now it's now a searchlight. But I don't know what's going to happen to that story with it. But, you know, regardless of what happens to that script, we found that we just had a, you know, good chemistry, writing. And it's also so great, after years of being on my own, with the laptop, and inside my head, to have somebody to expedite the process where you're like, going back and forth, and ping pong, you know, mentally, and then something great comes out, I've been paired up with writers before, especially, you know, working for Hani or this and that you're always like, Alright, you two have to work on this, and I need to do your best, but you're like, I'm not enjoying this at all. Like, I have two ideas that very clear my head. Now, how would you explain this to this person, I don't understand what they're saying. I'm definitely laughing at their jokes. So this was just all I don't know. And he's a really nice person. And I also think that I, again, I keep mentioning handy, because he's such a formative person in my life, and as an artist, and professionally, but he's such a nice person to everybody. And he's the biggest star out there. And I might give, he can be the biggest game in town and the biggest person that market and be remember your name, and say hi to you, and each person in the room and treat them with dignity. Like I want to be that person to you. No, absolutely. So I think Jason shares that value. So we're like, I want to work with them. I want to work with somebody who's who shares those values as well, not only creatively on the page, but also how to behave as a human being. That's important.

Alex Ferrari 47:31
So this is essentially a buddy a buddy comedy, essentially correct? Yes. So what what is what makes a good buddy comedy?

Eduardo Cisneros 47:43
Good, buddy, buddy, come buddy, comedy. And comedy means it's, anyone makes the comedy work, it's, again, it goes back to two POV goes back to point of view. What I find useful when come when it comes to writing any story, but also comedy is just to know what you're talking about right to know what your movie is about? And to know what is the subject matter. And for a comedy, what do you want is to people who have different ways to approach this same subject matter whether is fame, or love or sex, what do you want opposing points of view, but at the same time, they have to have complimentary abilities. So they kind of need each other. And so, again, you have to decide what your your tone is, but there is Philomena, one of the movies that I watched and was very influential also right and half brothers. Steve Coogan is, I think a comedic genius. I love the old trip series. It's a road movie series on it on its own. And but what makes the movie even more than whatever their mystery they're trying to unveil as Judi Dench and her point of view and she's this very, quote unquote, simple woman who's very earnest, and she's has all this faith, and she's superstitious and this and this super skeptical, cynical, snarky British guy who Steve Coogan into the interaction of the two of them, whatever they do, they can follow them on the fly, right? The sparks that are flying from the conflicting points of view. I think that and I think that's what makes the comedy work.

Alex Ferrari 49:54
So it's something like so something like 48 hours, you know, you have very two different point of views with Eddie Murphy. acknowledge these characters and Lethal Weapon and, and and obviously half brothers as well. They're very and you can you actually like the main character when you see him? You can tell he's uptight. He's an uptight and uptight dude. And then you just put the complete mirror image of them the other dudes Like what? It's like very, very, it's so you just want to see the uptight dude get poked constantly. And it's even funnier. And the other guy, I think it's funnier to when the other guy doesn't even realize he's poking them. And look, I'm just doing, I'm just doing me, man, I didn't mean to. Yeah. What do you mean is, it's wrong to run with a goat? Yeah, just having the goat. Having the goat that was beautiful. By the way. I love that like, having a goat as part of like, walking around with a goat is amazing. Great image.

Eduardo Cisneros 50:56
Again, I think, you know, you're giving me a good, good opportunity to talk as an example of what is your subject matter? Right? We really we were really trying to keep always, in, always inner sight that this wasn't a movie about empathy, and about the ability to put yourself in somebody else's shoes. Which Renato, the main character completely lacks, right? He's very uptight. He thinks he's the smartest person in the room all the time. He thinks he's very hard working self made. And obviously, what life is going to give him is the chance to meet his half brother who is the completely opposite, or what he thinks is, is the completely opposite, right? Because Renato was born in Mexico, his father left never came back him and his mom had to fend for themselves. And he was he teased himself because he himself like a self made man, and everything that he has, like, because he busted his ass. And so he has no patience for excuses. He has no patience, we will not drive. And then lo and behold, he has what he perceives as greeneville brother, you know, this millennial kid was like, wants to be an influencer and you know, make money really quick. And he's awesome person with a lot of empathy. He's a little bleeding heart person who like loves animals and the planet and culturally sensitive like us things. So it's the right kind of person that will test his patience, and he would not be anywhere near prison like that, if it were not for the circumstances of the movie. So that was, that was a lot of fun to write.

Alex Ferrari 52:42
And when when is the movie coming up?

Eduardo Cisneros 52:45
December 4, in theaters, in whatever is safe to go to the movie theaters. And I'm, I mean, there's also drive in theaters, etc. I again, this is a movie came out of watching all those movies that we talked about all the films from the 90s. And a lot of it is a collective experience, right? Like a movie that's a little democratic, that we can all enjoy together and share the laugh. And the laughter, the the emotion, the tears. So I'm hoping that people get to do that whenever it's prudent to do so. Right? And, and that they find a way to enjoy it in a collective experience,

Alex Ferrari 53:32
and I'm gonna ask you a few questions asked all my guests. What are three screenplays every screenwriter should read?

Eduardo Cisneros 53:43
Um,

Alex Ferrari 53:45
I mean, won't be on your gravestone. So just off the top of your head.

Eduardo Cisneros 53:51
There's a few that I love. I love 28 days. Yeah. Sandra Bullock. The movie sent me She didn't write it. This is Santa grant. I think it's the writing. If I'm not mistaken, that's a great, dynamic character that I feel in this script form. They do a great job of earning every step of her turn, without hitting you in the head with anything. By using all these tools from a and recovery, it's a great it's a very smart way to show you how this character is evolving in a way that they need to evolve. Well, it turns out Sunshine of the Spotless Mind is another one.

Alex Ferrari 54:40
I mean, Charlie Kaufman is a general statement.

Eduardo Cisneros 54:44
I feel like should I say that?

Alex Ferrari 54:47
And Groundhog's Day, obviously, we spoke about Groundhog's Day.

Eduardo Cisneros 54:50
Yeah, I'm deliberately trying to not mention movies. So I can get a little bit more room but mean Casa Blanca, probably.

Alex Ferrari 55:06
And then the comedy. I always tell people like if you want, if you want good comedy to Blazing Saddles, you can't go wrong with Blazing Saddles.

Eduardo Cisneros 55:15
Yes.

Alex Ferrari 55:17
I have almost anything Mel Brooks Spaceballs, even even Robin Hood Men in Tights. Stuff that

Eduardo Cisneros 55:25
Well, I think, you know, I think the South Park movie has a

Alex Ferrari 55:29
What an amazing that what anything they do is amazing.

Eduardo Cisneros 55:33
And they they're amazing, amazing writers. And here's the other thing with comedy. It's, it's, it's so personal to that and we live in a world is becoming more and more personal because you can cater so specifically the comedy that you consume to your taste. And that because the content content exists, right before you like, well, there's one studio movie in the store. We have

Alex Ferrari 56:00
five nominees. That's it.

Eduardo Cisneros 56:02
There's five comedies this year. Yeah, exactly. You're bored TV networks, and that's whatever. Now there's like all these other avenues and all these other platforms. And you can if you're like a queer, brown, Latino, bilingual, there's something for you.

Alex Ferrari 56:18
So there's a platform for you, sir. 799 a month?

Eduardo Cisneros 56:23
Exactly. With a seven day free trial. So that's why studio comedies are suffering a bit because now comedy has become so such an individual experience. Right? But But again, and again, like if you can, at some point hit gold when you find the right comedy, and people do like being a room with other people. And when, when it's normal to do so again, but you haven't experienced again, I'd say comedy and horror, that when you do get a good one, and you're in a room with other people in screaming and or laughing out loud. That's such a great catharsis, that when you find it, and it's good and smart, and well made, I think it's gone. And there will be more.

Alex Ferrari 57:08
Yes, hopefully soon, hopefully. Now, what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

Eduardo Cisneros 57:18
How to keep interviews short? Answer say I don't think I've learned that lesson.

Alex Ferrari 57:28
And we'd love you for that, sir. We'd love you for that. And, and if and what do you have anything else coming out soon? Are you working on anything else?

Eduardo Cisneros 57:37
I'm working on a short circuit. I think we're talking another hour about it.

Alex Ferrari 57:42
Are you working on Short Circuit the reboot?

Eduardo Cisneros 57:45
Yes. And I want to say this, because I read this when when the mood when the news came out. This is a movie that I loved as a kid and been offered a lot of remakes after injection included, a lot of things came my way. I've turned down many remakes because out, because it's just tough to write a remake. It really, really is. And it's not that I'm like, this great amount of dignity, which I want to think I do. But it's more like, I want to do a great job, I want to do a great job writing the script is just really tough. But when I learned that the rights were available, and a light bulb went off in my head, and I was like, Oh, I got it, I know what it is. And on top of that, because I am a brown guy and Latino man, I'm always gonna tell stories from that perspective. So it wasn't like, Oh, I'm gonna brown stuff, stamp the story. And I'm gonna like just take this old story and put it which which happens a lot. In this case, I'm very passionate. I think Jason I found a very special new take on the story and even more so to see within the context of Latin x characters, which we rarely ever get to claim anything that is fantasy or comedy. So if I can call dibs on that sense. It's really amazing. So this is where we're working. We're writing a remake?

Alex Ferrari 59:21
Well, I've spoken to john on the show, john Burnham, the original director of the original short circuit many times and John's a just a treasure and a wealth of knowledge and I've told them so many times short circuits like one of my favorite 80s movie like I when I saw when I saw that when I was I was like, fifth grade I think when I was when I saw that so it was like Johnny five Johnny Oh my god, it was amazing. So I'm looking forward to seeing your your you and Jason's new take on it. It could definitely use with an update. It didn't didn't age. It definitely a movie of its time. So I'm really curious to see what you do with it. But But thank you so much for being on the show. I I appreciate what you're doing. I can't wait to see half half brothers. And I hope everybody goes out and sees it, my friend. Thank you so much.

Eduardo Cisneros 1:00:07
Thank you.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:08
I want to thank and why there's so much for being on the show and sharing his screenwriting journey with the tribe today. Thank you so much, Eduardo. If you want to get links to anything we talked about in this episode, please head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/097. And don't forget to check out half brothers, his new movie available in theaters as we speak and hopefully soon available online as well. Thank you guys against so so much for listening. As always keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 096: Screenwriting with Brass Knuckles with Scott W. Smith

Today on the show we have screenwriter and Emmy-winner Scott W. Smith. Scott is an OG in the screenwriting blogging space. His blog Screenwriting from Iowa has been around since 2008 and has been nationally recognized. His new book Screenwriting with Brass Knuckles is a bare-knuckle approach to the screenwriting process.

Every screenwriter faces fear and failure. The legendary screenwriter William Goldman once said he was “programmed to fail.” Yet he went on to have a long career that included winning two Oscar Awards. Susannah Grant put a positive spin on constant failure saying “that free-falling feeling you get right on the knife-edge of total disaster may, in fact, be an essential ingredient to doing anything worthwhile.” Arguably the worst failure for the new screenwriting is either not finishing a script —or not even starting the writing process.

You’ll find throughout this book that talent and hard work are essential to succeed at any level. You can’t teach that. But distilled from over 3,000 posts from Emmy-winner Scott W. Smith’s nationally recognized blog Screenwriting from Iowa . . .. and Other Unlikely Places, these 10 chapters will hopefully guide and inspire you to improve your writing and output. Sprinkled throughout these pages are quotes curated from an eclectic and diverse mix of many top screenwriters and filmmakers throughout the history of film and television.

CONFLICT – Why is this a key foundational concept in all storytelling? It’s one thing that movies, plays, television, and streaming shows, documentaries, and dramatic podcasts all have in common.

CONCEPT – Screenwriter Terry Rossio (“Shrek”) believes new writers make one common mistake at the start.

CHARACTERS – Why does David Mamet think Wile E. Coyote can be a good role model for your characters?

CATALYST – How did screenwriters Debra Granik and Anne Rosellini grab the audience’s attention early in their movie “Winter’s Bone?” No matter what genre you’re writing (drama, comedy, horror, action, etc.) something disruptive must happen in the first act.

CONSTRUCTION – Why Rian Johnson (“Knives Out”) says structure seems antithetical to the free-wheeling creative process but is actually essential to understand.

CLIMAXES/ CONCLUSIONS – What does “Toy Story 3” screenwriter Michael Arndt think makes the difference between a good, a bad, and an “insanely great” ending?

CATHARSIS – Francis Marion, the first screenwriter to win two Academy Awards (and she wrote one of the first books on screenwriting back in 1937) understood that the goal of writing for film is to make a spectator feel.

CONTROLLING IDEA – Perhaps no concept is more divisive than the idea of a theme. Find out how screenwriters Ryan Coogler, Rod Serling, Kelly Marcel, Francis Ford Coppola, and Wes Anderson differ on handling theme.

CHANGE – Why is asking the question “What’s changed?” so critical to every scene you write?

CAREERS AND COWS – Aaron Sorkin, Diablo Cody, James Cameron, Callie Khouri, Barry Jenkins, LuLu Wang, and Alejandro G. Iñárritu all had day jobs (some “survival jobs”) before they found filmmaking success. Where one artist found inspiration in an unusual place. And what’s the one thing you can do to help get Shonda Rhimes to ask what your spec script is about?

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Alex Ferrari 0:40
I'd like to welcome the show Scott Smith, man, thank you for coming on the show, brother.

Scott W. Smith 3:22
It's great to be here.

Alex Ferrari 3:24
Yeah, thank you, man. So before we get into your awesome titled book, screenwriting with brass knuckles, which we're gonna get into why you called it that, by the way, let's I'm gonna ask you the question. I always ask, how did you get started in this insane, ridiculous business that we we'd love so much.

Scott W. Smith 3:45
You know, I grew up in a time when movies were special. You know, it was before internet before cable before DVDs before VHS. And for a lot of younger listeners, that's just hard to compute. But movies were really something that I would say the 70s or when I really started going to movies as. And that was a great era to be going to movies, you know. And so when when you went to movies, it was exciting. It was thrilling. You stood in line. And if you didn't get in line, you waited again to the next showing. And it was just an exciting time. And I think as someone who played a lot of sports movie making was not on my radar in Orlando, Florida. It wasn't something that someone did. That was something that happened in Hollywood, maybe New York, but it was way off the radar, but that there was one connection. And it was Burt Reynolds. Burt Reynolds was a football player who was a movie star and and i think somewhere deep down in me it was like, Can I do that? Could I be a part of that somehow. So I think Burt Reynolds was like step one, and step two was taking a class who I dedicated the book to. With an refloat. She was a creative writing teacher that I had in high school. And she said, This class is about being creative. And whatever hesitation I had in school of jumping into to harder subjects, creative writing just sounded like fun. Like you get, you can just make up stories. And then this was 1979 1980. She said, we're gonna make a video. And there was like an AV person that came in with a camera. And I think we did a video that was a spin off of A Christmas Carol. And then and then we did a few other videos, and I was just as a high school senior, that's what you want, you want some teacher, this is going to open the door for you. So I kind of still had football on the backburner. I was a decent athlete in football and baseball. But I also had this thing about, Hey, I think I want to get involved in film. And so eventually, I went to a community college where I took every photography class, I could, they didn't have any film classes, I worked as a intern with the the Sanford Herald where I'm writing stories and and then I transferred down to the University of Miami where I was a part of the film program there and took that eight millimeter class where you produce you direct, you shoot you write you edit. And I often say that, that class, everything I've done since then, is, especially today, because you know, there's a time when I was working on with crews of 20 people, and then it contracted to where it's two or three people going out into shoot. And then sometimes because of budgets, it's just you, you know, doing all those things, so that that first teacher and refill really kind of opened the door. And then University of Miami film school, and then I went went out to Los Angeles to finish out there. And and it's just been exciting. It's been exciting to just ride all the changes. And I think one of the the key things that that I learned along the way was to embrace your limitations. And I think Robert Rodriguez says that, you know, he often has filmmakers come to him and say this would have been better but but this happened, and this happened. And and and Rodriguez says that's, that's what filmmaking is things don't work. And he tells a story about one of his sets actually catching fire

Alex Ferrari 7:28
from dusk to dawn. Yeah, from

Scott W. Smith 7:30
early on. And and they had to look at it and say, well, we don't have time to rebuild it. It kind of looks cool. Let's keep going. And and I think that's the lesson for all of us is is you got to just keep going and brace the limitations. You know, it was it was film when I started out it was eight millimeter film it was 16 millimeter film. When I graduated from school, I ended up working as a 16 millimeter. We had an Eclair NPR bed steenbeck. flatbed editor.

Alex Ferrari 8:02
I'm stopping talking to stop talking dirty, sir, stop talking dirty Stop it.

Scott W. Smith 8:06
And my first shoot at 25. They said, Oh, and you're flying to Aspen next week to shoot America's downhill. And I thought, Man my dream of doing a feature film by 30. You know, I'm sad. And and, you know, it's like, when I start the first chapter of the book about conflict, it's like you find out pretty early on that there's just there's conflict in your life. There's conflict in movies. That's one of the things that that keep them from, from not being boring. And Richard Walter, he used to be at UCLA, he always said the number one screenwriting rule is don't be boring. Right. And, and I just I just think all along. It's it's been, you know, intention, obstacles. That's one of the things that that Sorkin says his his all of his films and TV shows are about intention and obstacles. And I think, for every filmmaker out there, no matter what level you are, you have an intention to do this. And there's going to be an obstacle in your way. And those of us that persist. Just keep saying, Okay, well, this is the obstacle today, when I was setting up for this interview, I decided, Hey, you know what, I think I might throw up a 150 in the background, a little airy 150. And I put that thing in, and what happens? The ball pops. And I'm like, man, I haven't used this lamp in a while. I wasn't even sure how to open the lamp up. So I'm going to YouTube. And I have to say, Where do I keep my 150 bulbs? You know, and I just laugh and I just that's we're in a pandemic right now. It's just you have to realize at some point oh, this is the way it is. It's there is no once I get over that hump, I think when I was younger, I thought once I get over this hill, once I get past Oh, sure.

Alex Ferrari 9:58
Oh, yeah, yeah, that whole concept. The whole like, if I just couldn't get here, or if this thing just happens, then everything will be fine. Or if I could just get that one meeting the money's going to drop for my feature like all these things things. On a side note real quickly, I have to tell you my my Burt Reynolds story in Florida happy Have you ever happened to go to the Burt Reynolds museum? Is that in Jupiter? It isn't Jupiter. It isn't sure I was invited to speak to a film organization. And they told me or reading at the Burt Reynolds museum. I'm like, I'm sorry, the what? That like the Burt Reynolds museum. I'm like, Okay, sure. And I drove up to burn to Jupiter and I went in. And lo and behold, it's an entire museum dedicated to all Burt Reynolds memorabilia, his entire career from football, all the way. And it was just a very odd, it's a standalone building on top of it, and it's just a very odd place to like, it's just he was alive at the time. It was just a weird place. But it was like one of those stories you're like, that's just a weirdest place I've ever spoken in mind. You're surrounded by pictures and magazine covers and posters and rentals and memorabilia. It was a weird experience.

Scott W. Smith 11:17
For some reason the the the Johnny Cash hurt. video comes to mind where you know you have all this you know, I mean, at one time Johnny Cash in the 50s coming up with Elvis, you know, was close to the center of the world. And then that video is just I still think it's one of the greatest music videos ever made. hurt hurt. Yeah, yeah. hurt. Oh,

Alex Ferrari 11:39
and the song is amazing. I love love.

Scott W. Smith 11:41
Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 11:42
I'm a huge Johnny Cash fan in general, I'd love Johnny Cash. But anyway, we're not here to talk about that. Let's let's get into into what we're here to talk about. So you wrote a book called screenwriting with brass knuckles Why Why did you title the book screenwriting with brass knuckles, because I've had a lot of authors on the show that have screenwriting books. That's probably one of the best titles. Okay, good branding, good branding, good marketing. It catches the eye. I like it. So why did you call it that?

Scott W. Smith 12:10
Well, again, at least as a good title, that's,

Alex Ferrari 12:13
I mean, inside is crap. I haven't I've read the book. But I'm joking, joking. Joking, though. So why did you Why did you call it that? What How did you come up with that awesome title.

Scott W. Smith 12:22
You know, I'm not sure when it popped in my mind. I think, you know, one of the takeaways from Steven is he talks about always, you know, you're always looking for stories, you're almost like a paleontologist you you see this little white thing on the side of the road and you pull over and you dust it often turns out that it's a bone and then you just kind of follow it where it's gonna go and so I'm not exactly sure where the exact title came up with, but I do know as a kid. I watched a lot of this is before WW II and WWF and all the all the glamorous whole Cogan and and beyond after that back in the 70s when I was just a wee little boy it was just fascinating you know, just like it is for a kid today but but it was much more limit to the storylines were much more limited

Alex Ferrari 13:17
production value, they kind of roll it out.

Scott W. Smith 13:20
Yeah, they would pretty much have the body slams, you know, the the against the ropes type of stuff. Somebody would would pull out a trailer and hit somebody on the back. And then when somebody was really getting beat down, then Gordon solie was the great announcer and he'd say he'd say, Well, you know, it looks like he's almost done and then he he reaches and he's like what's that he has in his hands wait a minute that's he's got brass knuckles and and all sudden the guy that was getting beaten would start beating the guy that was beating him until he was like some kind of fake blood but you're a kid so you don't really know and it was like you just knew that that brass knuckles had some kind of superpower and there was something about the way that that flows brass knuckles and then throughout time it just it's you know from rappers today to as I point out Spike Lee at the Was it the 2019 Oscars where he's got his his his throwback brass knuckles the University of Miami football teams got their own they call them brass rings because that's probably a little bit less violent but their knuckles

Alex Ferrari 14:28
well that's the thing it's it's a violent imagery, but then I love like screen right so I'm gonna like I'm gonna, screenwriting in general is so difficult to do. It's one of the most difficult art forms in literature to do because it's so concise and you get every word actually means something and it's really difficult to do that. I love the concept of the brass knuckles like I'm gonna beat this script to a bloody Paul but you will not beat me kind of thing. So that's why I love the name so much.

Scott W. Smith 14:57
Well, you know, it's it's funny how Blake's Snyder's save the cat just it just it just became part of folklore you know, and and it really didn't. It didn't say screenwriting it didn't say whatever it had that cat hanging I remember the first time I saw that in the bookstore. And fortunately, I got to have a little bit of communication with Blake before he died. And he was just a nice guy. And, and so I think that, that that clean cover of the of the cat and something kind of like what's that about something that was intriguing. So, and I definitely wanted to have screenwriting in and again, you know, there's only been what like 200 screenwriting books written this week.

Alex Ferrari 15:41
This week, because we are in a pandemic. So now there's a lot more screenwriting books out.

Scott W. Smith 15:45
Yeah, I will say that without the pandemic, this book would not have been finished because I, I've been at it a long time. And And really, the goal was to just curate a lot of, you know, those 200 books, I think I read 190 of them. Sure. And, and every book has one or two great thoughts in it. And basically my goal in starting my blog, screenwriting, from Iowa and other unlikely places, when I started that in 2008, I thought, you know what, I'll just pull all my production notes together, maybe this will be helpful for someone else. And I really thought it would be a year process, I didn't know that it would be a 12 year process. And one of the one of the quotes that I've always loved, and unfortunately, I don't remember who said it, but he said, we tend to overestimate what we can do in one year, and underestimate what we can do in 10.

Alex Ferrari 16:34
Yeah, absolutely.

Scott W. Smith 16:36
It's such a great and, and yeah, it's it's it that that's almost the theme of the book is that, you know, it's going to take a lot longer than than you think it's going to take. And so let me You mean to tell me that I'm not going to sell my first script for a million dollars is that, you know, you may it's, you know, one of the great stories before I started the blog, one of the one of the things that really got me involved in blogging was I went to see Juno, so I I saw it in January of 2007. And I followed that story, which, you know, I don't know how much of it was true, but I do know that she had, you know, grown up in Chicago, went to University of Iowa. I was living at that time and Cedar Falls Iowa, which is, you know, maybe an hour hour and a half from from the campus at University of Iowa. And, and then she went up to work, various jobs in Minneapolis, and she started blogging, and eventually, a Hollywood agent said, Hey, if you've ever written I like your writing, have you ever written a screenplay? And she says no. And she said that she was gonna write about the 85 Chicago Bears. That would have been awesome. Yeah, it would have been awesome. And so she didn't she didn't write that she writes Juno. And then and then Jason Reitman picks it up. And before you know it, she's collecting an Oscar

Alex Ferrari 17:58
with that, but with that said, that is like I always tell people that is the lottery ticket. That is exactly the outlier. Like

Scott W. Smith 18:06
it's the top of the pyramid. It's, you know, it is the top of the pyramid. And that's, you know, when we, when we get interested in, in anything, if it's sports, we want to be Michael Jordan, we want to be LeBron, we want to be Kobe, if it's football, we want to be Tom Brady, we want to be Jerry Rice, you know, we want to be we look at these, you know, in film, it's Spielberg and Tarantino and, and we look at that, and it's, you know, we kind of need that to get out of the gate. And then you you realize at some point, you know, there's just not that many, you know, whether it's Bach, Beethoven, whether it's

Alex Ferrari 18:42
in any field in any field,

Scott W. Smith 18:44
yeah, Springsteen, you know, it, it's Jay Z, there's just not a lot at the top. And, and so we can learn from those people and aspire to be those people. You know, as everyone points out, you know, Tarantino what once wasn't on the pyramid, and he just, you know,

Alex Ferrari 19:03
he wasn't even in the desert. He wasn't even in the desert. He was, he was at a video store, you know, geeking out and watching films like four or five times a day. That's a whole other conversation. Well, all right. So let's, let's get into the meat of the conversation, sir. What does football and screenwriting have in common?

Scott W. Smith 19:23
Well, I think it's, you know, that it has Burt Reynolds,

Alex Ferrari 19:26
obviously, besides Burt Reynolds, this is specifically from your book, so I wanted to see what I'm giving up. I'm robbing you up a softball.

Scott W. Smith 19:33
Yes, that is fine. That is fine. It I think my original my original line first line was just so weak. And I sat there mulling it over this, what's the opening line of the book gonna be? And and I remember when I was a walk on at the University of Miami, so I went to Miami because at a film school, but I was also a decent football player. And so I was going to walk onto the football team and and So the I dislocated my shoulder. And so I might my shoulder is popped out, after a play, I can't get it back in and I hear one of the coaches say, Get that fucking walk on off the field. And it was like, I don't know, that I ever felt lower in my life. You know, it just was a fortunately there was a doctor there, he popped it back in. And I later had surgery. And then I just like I walked on, I walked off and I continued the film production path, but, but it was just that, that moment just stood out as just a life changing point. It was the end of it was the end of my football playing. I mean, I played organized football for 10 years. And that was the end of it, it needs some big conflict, some big moment where you go, Okay, that was then this is now and we've all gone through that. And if you haven't, you will go through it. And you'll go through it multiple times in your life. And, and I think the best movies are just full of that. And I think a lot of people get caught up in story and plot and characters and all those things are important. But I wanted to start the book with the dramatics, you know, bam. And so that's that's what they have in common is that, you know, football is a violent sport.

Alex Ferrari 21:21
You know, there's conflict everywhere is conflict. There's

Scott W. Smith 21:23
every play. Yeah, every play. And, you know, there the stakes are high. And, and so yeah, that that was just, you know, not, there aren't a lot of people that come from, from sports. I listened to Matthew McConaughey talking recently that when he was in film school, he was a frat boy. And he was the only frat guy in the film department. And I was like that at Miami. And, and, and later when I went to Columbia College in Hollywood, you know, there weren't a lot of jocks around you know, and, and I had never seen a KSL film, you know, I mean, I there was, there was things I had all of all of the cockiness, even though I was probably, you know, I dressed out for one JV football game at University of Miami. So I may have had the shortest college football career of any Miami hurricane ever, you know, if Jim Kelly and Michael Irving and Warren Sapp are at the top, I'm right there at the bottom. And so yeah, it's it. It's just, it's just, it's just funny how that all that all works. So

Alex Ferrari 22:28
when you with conflict, how do you add conflict to your story? Because that's, I mean, the signs of a bad movie is that there's not enough conflict. Well, I'm on many sides, but that's one of the big ones.

Scott W. Smith 22:39
Yeah, it's it is, you know, I don't think there's a scene and you know, this will save you on film school if you haven't gone to film school. Because again, as somebody who didn't grow up in the age of internet, there was an indie film, hustle there wasn't saved the cat. You know, I think, I think I think Sid fields book was out. And I don't know if you've ever gone back and read when it came out, I think I read it when I was. And I was there from 80 to 84. So I think it might have come out in 79, or 80. But I read it somewhere in there. And if you read it today, it's it's, it's, there's not a lot of meat there. It was revolutionary. At

Alex Ferrari 23:24
the time. I remember when I read that I was in college, and I wasn't even in film school yet. I was like, just out of high school, going to like my community college before I figured out I was gonna go to film school. And I read that book. And I was like, Oh, my God, all movies are the same. All the story like, you mean, so like, there's points in a story that like every the tipping point that, you know, the pointer returned the whole Hero's Journey concept that he threw in there. And then the structure of a structure it was it was mind blowing, just to understand for somebody who doesn't know anything, that book is revolutionary. Yes. But once you've been around a bit, you go back and go.

Scott W. Smith 24:03
Yeah, yeah, it's, it is, you know, what is great about, you know, having a class where we had one class that we watched, and again, I did not watch a, you know, when a movie played, you know, you might be able to catch it on TV. But I was, I was outside playing sports. I, you know, I grew up in a house without air conditioning in Florida, so I didn't want to be inside a lot. And so we didn't, you know, seeing an old movie was very rare, and there wasn't an appreciation for it. And so we watched a place in the sun, which is Megaman clip. And Elizabeth Taylor and Shelley Winters. And the teacher showed us the film, and we watch it. And then he gives us a quiz and it's not really a graded quiz, but he basically says, What music do you associate with? Elizabeth? Elizabeth Taylor. And then he starts talking about conflict, and he starts talking about layers of filmmaking. That I didn't see any of it. And so I think that was like a whole awakening for me to realize. And one of the things that came out of that was how every scene has conflict. And if it doesn't, it's rising conflict, it's setting up, that conflict is coming. Every scene, every scene has to have a form of conflict or setting up. Future concept, that conflict that's coming up very soon. Yeah. Oh, yeah. And, and so once you once you get baptized into that, and then you, you can't stop seeing it, it's like, the floodgates have opened up and you're watching a movie and you're watching, you're watching an actor who is trying to open a bottle of something, or he's trying to do this, or he's, you know, you go back and watch Chaplin and you're like, wow, that's that's all conflict, you go back and watch Hitchcock. And it's like, that's all conflict. And you realize, like, Oh, that is that is just the missing ingredient. And a lot of stories that when someone gives me a screenplay to read, I'll say, what, nothing happened in the first 10 pages? Well, that's because I've setting up the story is like, you don't really have time to set up the story. And even if that's what you're doing, there needs to be conflict within it. And so conflict is what gets our attention. And when we, when we talk about great films. And, you know, at least, you know, this will resonate, you can just transcribe it into whatever films you like. But, you know, I think of, you know, the chainsaw scene, Scarface is just when I saw that in the theater.

Alex Ferrari 26:37
So good

Scott W. Smith 26:39
You know, I've still never seen saw and those kind of movies. I mean, Scarface was a regular dramatic film. And so to witness that on screen, you know, back in the day was just like, Oh, you know, that's, that's conflict, and that the films that we tend to remember, we tend to remember scenes, and the scenes that we tend to remember, tend to be highly emotional, and full of conflict. And you know, which, when you watch that film, somebody did a film about rocky going up the steps and how many people over the ages have done that trip? That's all about conflict, that's all about conflict. And, you know, the first time when he gets up there, and he's sucking wind and, and whatever, and it's like, it's amazing. It's amazing to see, you know, somebody come all the way from Japan to go up those steps. It's like, wait a minute, you're 23 years old, you're from Japan, and you're coming all the way to Philadelphia, to go up these steps

Alex Ferrari 27:37
from a movie that was made in 1975 or 76.

Scott W. Smith 27:40
I think it's a five or six. Yeah, yeah. I mean, it's, it's, you know, a lot of the film references I make in the book are our films like that films that seem to stand the test of time and it's it's films like Castaway and Jerry Maguire, their films that resonate with me but but I find a lot of young people that I talked to today. It's a different way they might be playing a video game and watching a movie. They're watching a little bit on their phone and they're doing something else or texting a friend and so the the movie experience is so different now. And, but I do find that when I'll mention certain films, there's certain there's certain and I don't call them tentpole movies because I think if if, you know, if you're starting out screenwriting, you're not writing 10 poles, you know, and especially in a post pandemic world, you know, look at you know, look at those indie films, look at those films are being made with you know, either the DSLRs or even cell phones like like Shaun Baker, did. He you know, it's but but those films, those, the one thing that they all have in common, the big tentpole movies, the superhero movies, the mainstream movies, the indie films, it's all conflict and conflict all the way in many different levels of conflict, you know, so

Alex Ferrari 29:01
because I was thinking what you're saying conflict I was like, Okay, let me because I remember a movie obviously. A classic lethal weapon. So Lethal Weapon written by Shane Shane Black, who is a legendary screenwriter. If whoever's listening has not read a Shane Black scripts, you need to go to bulletproof screenwriting.tv and download all of his screenplays because I have them all. there for you a lot of them for you to download and read and educate yourself on his on his way. But if you look at lethal weapon, obviously there's conflict. The second, Riggs and Murdock meet the entire movie is conflict. Same thing for 48 hours like the second they meet. That's easy, but the setup of the conflict is so well done because even with if you remember and I've seen the movie dozens of times in like I haven't seen it in a while, but I've seen that movie so many times during my video store days that I know it fairly well. But setting up rigs. There's a he has internal coffee Like massive internal conflict trailer right? He's in the trailer. Yeah that see I could still see it. You're panning from the sunset the dog. The dog is running on the beach. Then the dog goes in and wakes. wakes up Riggs, who walks up walks off without any pants on goes takes a piss then drinks beer in the morning it's breakfast and

Scott W. Smith 30:20
Christmassy playing on the TV.

Alex Ferrari 30:22
Oh, it's all Christmas. Yeah, this Yeah, this Christmas music playing

Scott W. Smith 30:24
Gun and there's a bottle.

Alex Ferrari 30:26
I mean, yeah, and he's been drinking.

Scott W. Smith 30:28
You're getting conflict if

Alex Ferrari 30:31
you smoking and there's just like, he's and then even just setting up before he you you meets Riggs. I mean, Murdoch, there's conflict then you go over to Murdoch side, which is basically the complete opposite of like he's alone internal conflict. While Ray Murdoch is he's not alone. He's got a full blown family. And his conflict is just like family conflict and conflict within themselves. There's like, Oh, I'm gonna I'm gonna retire. Which sounds so cliche now but when he did it, it was a cliche. And then it was just so brilliantly done and then when these two immovable objects clash, it is the brilliance of that script and how it's so beautiful It's just conflict every scene is dripping with conflict every scene yeah

Scott W. Smith 31:19
you you you kind of get an idea of rigs from that that big one i think i think i'm confusing the Christmas scene with diehard there at that point but there's no

Alex Ferrari 31:28
like there's no there's no there's music there's Christmas music playing because it's it's what the beginning the beginning scene is a woman jumping off the building went off to jingle bell rock so the I mean, it shaved it Shane Black Shane, black shoes, everything's at Christmas, even Iron Man three was it during Christmas time? Like that's, that's his thing?

Scott W. Smith 31:48
Yeah. You're just adding you know, here's, here's a couple things I have in my book where I just talk about, you know, it's conflict, conflict conflict. It's like, he misses his space ride, Juno discovers she's pregnant, Rocky loses his boxing job. His boxing gym locker, a barracuda kills Nico's mother and siblings. And then all that great dialogue just turning the page you know, Houston, we have a problem. I'm melting from the Wizard of Oz. We are at war from the King's speech. I have this problem with my apartment from the apartment. Yeah, I'm gonna need you to come in on Saturday from office. It's, you know, I could have been somebody I could have been a contender. Yeah, I'm ignoring you, Dan from fatal attraction, run Forrest run. I mean, all those great lines that we all repeat over and over again, they're just packed with conflict. And

Alex Ferrari 32:38
so conflict is driving a conflict should be the driving engine. One of the driving engines have a good story. Yeah, it's,

Scott W. Smith 32:45
it's, it's, you know, I'm just trying to get somebody's attention with screenwriting with brass knuckles. And so the next logical step is, is is, is conflict. I mean, later, you know, everybody's got strengths and weaknesses when you watch movies, you know, obviously, if you watch Aaron Sorkin, you know, that whole thing where David Mann movie, which is one of

Alex Ferrari 33:11
can you say that one movie in that you dropped that for a second? You dropped that second, he said that again with David Mamet.

Scott W. Smith 33:18
Oh, so when David Mamet says, you know, what you should be striving for is to write a silent movie. And that works when you look at something like a quiet place. I mean, it's it's almost a silent movie. But then that doesn't apply to Aaron Sorkin. And so that's one of the fun things I have with the book, as I'm showing how different writers work in different ways. Some people start with, with theme, some people find the theme somewhere in the middle of it. Some people even say, I don't care about theme, you know, and and other people say, well, that's for other people to you know, put onto my film. So that's, I think when you're starting out especially when I was in school, I wanted what Just tell me the ABC steps and and what you realize over years of reading interviews and DVD commentaries and books and you know, I went to asi seminars and I went to UCLA extension I went to hear any writer talk about the process and maybe one of the things that sets me apart is is I look at that like just ingredients into the blender and I'm trying to point out like hey, you know what, so and so writes that way but so and so doesn't write that way at all you know,

Alex Ferrari 34:36
there's always yeah there's always an interrupt but there's always an exception like what works for Tarantino does not work for spark and what works for Sorkin does not work for Shane Black AND and OR Diablo Cody or any any other it's it's very individual and there is no and this is the only business I feel that in the world I mean, I my only business but one of the few that there is no recipe There is

Scott W. Smith 35:02
there isn't there isn't. That's it. That's what I basically boiled down the 10 chapters like, this is what they have in common.

Alex Ferrari 35:09
They all have that in common. But the point is that you can, conflict is obviously a part of the recipe. But how you apply that part of the recipe is up to you. It's not like crack an egg. And all eggs are the same, you can't crack conflict, and all conflicts gonna be the same. It's gonna be it's different for at that it is for for is that it is for Rocky, like it's completely different. So that's the very frustrating and exhilarating part of being a screenwriter and a storyteller is how you craft the recipe. Because if you if you're an educated screenwriter, you understand all the elements, all the key ingredients of telling a good story, you've studied, you read books, you watch movies, you inherently know all this. It's how you combine those all together. And that's what makes you that's what makes your voice special. I mean, Tarantino is the ultimate example of taking from everybody else, throwing it into a blender and filtering it through his through his point of view, which is so unique. There is like you can't try and people have tried to write like Tarantino, you can't you can't you can't write like Sorkin. It's hard to write like Shane Black. It's hard to write like, all of these, these really accomplished masters. Because they have that they figured it out that they're like, Oh, it's it's my recipe. I just oh, I don't have to follow everybody else's recipe I can take from everybody else. And I'm just going to filter it through my recipe, which is I think the key of good writing good storytelling point of view.

Scott W. Smith 36:39
Yeah. And it's, it's, you know, there's craft, and there's, there's talent and hard work and talent, hard work, you can't really teach that's on you. And if there's, if there's, you know, when someone says, Well, you know, why should I read a book from you, you know, instead of Aaron Sorkin or, or talentino, I said, well, as soon as Tarantino and Aaron Sorkin write a book, you should buy that.

Alex Ferrari 37:05
I took the Sorkin masterclass, it was fantastic.

Scott W. Smith 37:08
I like it. There's no doubt that these guys are making lots of money, writing screenplays. So to write a screenwriting book that's not going to have a big payoff. I got contacted because of my blog, the blog won a regional Emmy. And so I got contacted by somebody they said, We would like you to ghostwrite a screenwriting book, and they were gonna pay me X amount of money. And, and they, they, the one caveat they had was, you have three months. Now mind you, it took me 12 years to write this. And and I thought, you know, what, if I've read a lot of screenwriting books by well known produced screenwriters, and I think where they fall short, is they have those one or two things that I glean from and put it, put it into my book and, and in a short quote, form. But I think when you have three months to dissect, not only what makes your writing special, but all the other writers out there, and what I'm trying to do is, is curate all this kind of different things out there. Show the contrast. I went to a workshop once with a writer who had won a an Oscar, an Emmy, a Tony, and a Grammy.

Alex Ferrari 38:27
And he got an he got he got

Scott W. Smith 38:29
he got Yes. And he said, You know, he had a play that was in town. And then he agreed to do this little masterclass on the side. And one of the first things he said was, I'm not sure that writing can be taught. And I'm not sure why they asked me to do this. But I really don't. I don't think there's any rules and and I raised my hand and I said, What about conflict? He goes, conflict is good, you need to have that. And we were off to the races. And he did not have a systematic way of talking about writing. But what he did have was some incredible stories about, you know, the process and what worked for him. He just didn't have it packaged in any kind of way that he could, he could tell students so sometimes I do think there's, you know, there's the old adage of those who can't do teach. And I think there's a little bit of those who can do sometimes can't teach. I think the script notes guys, you know, Craig Mazin, and, and john, Aug are two guys that are able to do it and articulate what they do. But there are other writers sometimes you're like, how did that guy ever write a screenplay because he's all over the place as far as giving a talk or whatever. So so I'm trying to be that middle guy that's pulling throughout film history. I think it's also a book that I really make a concerted effort to. You know, to go back and find women, people of color, you know, just throughout film history because they're all there. But they don't always get, you know, a spotlight all the time. Yeah. And, and there's a lot to learn. I mean, Francis Marion was somebody that I was not familiar with at all until a couple years ago. But turns out she was not only the first woman to to win a screenwriting award. She was the first screenwriter, period to win two screenplay awards. You know, and this was, you know, back in 1929 30. When screenplays were a little bit different, but her her career is just fascinating and interesting. And so I so I give her a little bit of you know, and she had actually later in her life, she went back and and wrote some wrote a screenwriting book or two and, and it's amazing how it lines up with, you know, Aaron Sorkin's masterclass or retirement. I mean, they're all different. But I'm just trying to find that sweet spot where, how do you? How is a romantic comedy, a gritty indie film, you know, a silent movie, what did these all have in common? And so that's kind of what I'm tapping into. And, and again, if you go back to this, if you go back to, to Shakespeare, you'll find plenty of calm, right? Oh,

Alex Ferrari 41:23
Yeah, of course. Of course. Now, can you discuss a little bit the difference between the great script and the right script?

Scott W. Smith 41:32
Yeah, you know, that's a Christopher Lockhart story editor over at Derby, ma. He's, he's, you know, the blog allowed me to connect with, with a lot of people in Hollywood, even though I'm in Cedar Falls, Iowa at the time. And now in Orlando, Florida, it's been great to just, you know, just today I connected with, with somebody that I hadn't connected with before. And I'm here I am talking to indie film, hustle. And so it's, you know, it, if you had told me back when I was a 20 year old film student that, you know, you know, this, this might take you 3040 years to know, I know, I would just say enjoy the journey. I mean, there's there's been a lot of mountaintop experiences that that production has, has afforded me. And, and I hope to be around a little bit more.

Alex Ferrari 42:21
So yeah. So what is the difference between the great script versus the right script?

Scott W. Smith 42:25
Yeah, you know, it, Christopher Lockhart would be the better one to unpack that, but basically, what he's saying is, you know, there's, there's a movie that that's screaming to be made, you know, and I'll probably butcher his, his, his thinking, but he's really kind of talking about the good script, really, you know, is it is it is it a movie that's one of that's one of his phrases, I think he throws out a lot. And he's got a great Facebook group called the the inside pitch which is a lot of wisdom is he will be a

Alex Ferrari 43:01
guest soon on the show. Thank you very much, or good

Scott W. Smith 43:11
Hollywood guys that just calls it like he sees it and but I really think that I watched the movie last night, I won't even go into what it was. But I almost turned it off. After five minutes. The dialogue was bad. There was just in it, this had major stars in it. And it's it's a fairly new release. And I was just like, this is so bad. And I kept just sticking with it kind of nudging it forward a little bit and seeing where I was going to go till I got to the end. And I kind of think I thought, why did this film get made and it was shot in an exotic location. I thought, okay, that's probably why everybody signed on is, and maybe to a certain degree, that was the right script, because it got it got made it you know, it's just hard to get a film made even even harder now, but, but I think it's, it's where those ingredients just all come together. It doesn't have to be. There's a lot of flaws in a movie like, like, like Juno, as much as I love Juno. You know, you could chalk it up to being a first time writer. I mean, everybody has that same sassy voice. It's like, does everybody have to be as sassy as Juno? But there was something about that. That was just the right time. I mean, even the topic, the topic was like, but for whatever reason, it was the right script at the right time. That brought the right director, the right actors, that resonated with an audience. So somewhere, a producer said, yeah, we think this is is going to have an audience. I don't think that anyone thought it was going to be the blockbuster that it was in the academy award winning that it was but I do think it's all those elements. I think Juno is a good film to really look at, especially for new writers, because it's it's a fairly simple story. It's a, there's not a lot of complexity to that.

Alex Ferrari 45:03
Well, there's a lot of good. I mean, I've read screenplays that are, I mean, just amazing. Like, like from screenwriters from sometimes known screenwriters. And you just like how has this not been produced? And you will and I just saw Chicago seven, the Chicago seven Aaron Sorkin's new movie that he directed and wrote. And it was amazing. It was so well done. And so well put together and he's like, I've been trying to get that movie done for a decade. He goes, but the timing was right. Because of what was going on politically in the in the us right now. Right. And they and then they got greenlit, and then Netflix was around and like how much do you need? Only only 50 million? That's nothing here take it. And and and that's what he was able to do. But you're right, it's it. All you could do as a screenwriter is just write the best script, you can, if you try if you try to target the market or try to corner the market, you're never you can no one can see that crystal ball.

Scott W. Smith 46:03
Well, if it was as easy as as rubber stamping it, then Juno would just be duplicated over and over again. And I think I think even Ellen Page says I may not have that kind of success again, you know, where you know, where she's just, you know, it's her thing. Diablo Cody has said, I may never have that again. There was just something special about that. The right script, according to Lockhart, really, he talks about and we could look at Juno, you know, I don't think I make that connection in the book. But he talks about three things, the concept, the execution, and the marketing. And you know, when Juno came out, was that about 12 years ago, the concept was simple. But it was fresh.

Alex Ferrari 46:49
And the way it was shot and the performances everything Yeah,

Scott W. Smith 46:52
yeah, the execution of it was I mean, oh, wow, the the small parts were just great. And the dad Oh, my goodness, JK,

Alex Ferrari 47:03
JK, JK, right. Yeah, let's check it. Yeah,

Scott W. Smith 47:05
yeah. Just just yeah, I could just watch those scenes over and over again. And it's it's a remarkably rewatchable movie and then the marketing of it. I mean, I remember when the trailer first came on. It was the quirkiness of the of the movie, but the music the characters, the banter, which, you know, obviously she's you know, she's she's well known for now, but it was like, this looks different. There was something just about it. So that would be the you know, concept execution of marketing that would be the sometimes we you know, plot and it's just like, you know, I always look back at stand by me as a good example, you know, the plot of it is let's go find a dead body that we heard about right. But the plot nobody really cares about the plot you know, the that's not what's driving us it's that relationship. It's the emotions it's I mean, that film is another another incredible so

Alex Ferrari 48:07
masterpiece no that's it that's a masterpiece in itself so Stephen King

Scott W. Smith 48:12
Will it conflict with the leeches and the

Alex Ferrari 48:14
oh no everything and the train the train the train the train Oh, so good. So good.

Scott W. Smith 48:22
There's a theme there's a theme building there. There's there's these films that we're throwing out are full of conflict. They're great concepts.

Alex Ferrari 48:31
Well, good movies have conflict. Jerry Maguire has conflict, you know, Castaway, has conflict even comedies good comedies have conflict airplane which is amazing. Has this conflict is there conflict in airplane? I mean there is but is it is there conflict and in comedy there should be good conflict. Let's talk about that for a second because I really do want to I want to kind of dissect that for a second let's let's pick a great comedy or hangover obviously has a lot of comments.

Scott W. Smith 49:04
Yeah, from the get go like the phone it doesn't start with the phone.

Alex Ferrari 49:07
It's like there's something really like yeah, they're all beat up with like to miss it like it's all crazy.

Scott W. Smith 49:14
But not only are we not make not only are we not we're not gonna make the wedding we don't know where the groom is.

Alex Ferrari 49:19
We've lost the groom. He's missing so alright, so it's the hangovers obvious that but like airplane lead airplane is well Blazing Saddles, Blazing Saddles. I mean, conflict. Oh, all over the place. The humor is in the conflict in that movie, where something like a slapstick comedy like airplane. I mean, the conflict is the planes going down?

Scott W. Smith 49:43
Yeah, yeah. Yeah, the plane. Go to you know, for those people that want to write for for TV shows and streaming. You know, the office is is one of the most amazing shows, you know, Seinfeld. Seinfeld is not a show about nothing. Seinfeld is a show about conflict. It's just really my new conflict. Like, you know, George's wallet is too thick for this entire episode. It's the brilliance of Seinfeld. Seinfeld is about little minute conflicts, but we can all relate with that. And, and I forget who, you know, one of the comedies and it's kind of a classic is Tootsie bash apiece, you could remove all of the comedy from Tootsie. And it's about an unemployed actor in 2020. You know, let's say it's a Broadway actor, and Broadway is closed. Now, what are they going to do? You know, are they are they doing commercials? Are they doing things that? You know, you could pull all of that out, because the conflict is, you know, that whole opening sequence where Dustin Hoffman is, you're too short. You're too. You're, you know, you're too old. Every audition, and every actor out there knows that. It's just, there's always something not. Right. And so yeah, conflict and comedy. And again, go go back to to Buster Keaton go back and watch the general it's just conflict, conflict conflict all the way.

Alex Ferrari 51:12
Now, what is the one thing you wish you knew when you first started your journey? as a storyteller, filmmaker, screenwriter,

Scott W. Smith 51:21
You know, I think it's just it's, it's artists work? You know, that's it. That's a that's a good,

Alex Ferrari 51:27
That's good.

Scott W. Smith 51:28
Yeah, it there's a book called artists work. And I think it's by the, the designer who did I heart New York. And, you know, I grew up, you know, as someone who grew up in Florida, this is hard to believe, but I dreamed about going somewhere warm, you know, somewhere where I could wear shorts and flip flops all year long, instead of just 10 months out of the year. And, and

Alex Ferrari 51:55
That's, that's firstworldproblems, my friend that has some, some firstworldproblems right there.

Scott W. Smith 52:00
So I discover as a teenager, Jimmy Buffett music, you know, just around come Monday and, and Margaritaville. And and, you know, that run that he had and you know, that he's still having to this day, amazingly, you know, I mean, but, you know, part of his mythology, and part of his things was that he's laid back and you know, and I saw an interview where he was on 60 minutes, and I think it was Ed Bradley was interviewing him. And Buffett was talking about all the things he was doing, which he's continued to do. And oh, yeah, he's one of those. One of the most successful entertainers in the history of entertaining, you know, with it with a net worth, I think, around 500 million, something like that. Definitely at the top, you know, in that top little corner of the pyramid there with, with Oprah and Tyler Perry, and Jerry Seinfeld, you know, there's just, there's just a few that are that are up there. But Ed Bradley said, your persona is very laid back. But it seems like you're a workaholic. And Jimmy Buffett's like, yeah, I I realized, talking, you know, I'm in my 30s. At that point, I, I think the whole thing that we think of about art is that it's, it's gonna be, you know, Margaritaville, it's going to be Let's go have some drinks and sit on the beach. And, and as I study writer after writer after writer, it's amazing how much work goes into it. And Buffett did an amazing job of making it look easy, which is, you know, the sign of a master. Oh, Erin's Yeah. I mean, you look at the output of Aaron Sorkin. It's just stunning. It's just stunning. I mean, how many of those shows in the West Wing? Did he right? You go back and you you look at at the early episodes of Twilight Zone, how many Rod Serling route. And, you know, it was probably cigarette induced, which eventually killed him, you know, you know, so you don't want to kill yourself. But I think there is a sense of that it's work. And I think that's, it's worked for the cinematographer. It's worked for the editor. You know, when I made that leap from all my editing, to all of a sudden video editing, and then all sudden this thing called avid came in, for me, it was 1994. It's like, I gotta learn computers now. And then I did five years of cutting on an avid and then it was jumping over to Final Cut. I did that for 10 years and then I jumped over to Adobe Premiere and now I've been flirting with Final Cut x and black magic, you know, so

Alex Ferrari 54:41
With a black magic so that's that's the attitude you

Scott W. Smith 54:44
Realize it's all work.

Alex Ferrari 54:46
It's it's never it's not it's it's nonstop, it's nonstop. And I'm gonna

Scott W. Smith 54:50
It is the process.

Alex Ferrari 54:51
Now I'm going to ask you a few questions asked all my guests. What are three screenplays that every screenwriter should read?

Scott W. Smith 54:57
I think the three screenplays that Every screenwriter should be would be the three movies that you love the movies that you just keep going back to again and again. You know, there's no obviously when you look at Tarantino, and you read the movies that fascinate him, he's going to give you some drive in movie that you've never heard of, you know, biker biker babes in a bar, you know? That's, you know, if you go back and you look at Scorsese, he's gonna say, these 1930s crime films, that's what he was watching as a kid growing up, that's what he's fascinated in. You watch. You look at his films, how many times has he revisited that theme over and over again, of gangsters and, and whatever, so. So I would say, you know, Citizen Kane is great. But if you watch that you go at this doesn't do it for me. But you're watching, you know, a Marvel movie or you're watching. You know, where to find something. You just obsess about that you want to write something like that. For me right now. I'm obsessing about Moneyball. I cannot watch Moneyball enough. It's great. I mean, I go back, and I read the book. And I go, how did they get a screenplay out of this book? I mean, the book by Michael Lewis is brilliant. But you look at that, and you know, that various writers came in at different points, but I watch that movie over and over again, why does it work? Why does it it doesn't have that traditional, you know, running up the steps and, and, you know, but I mean, as has been pointed out, by many people, Rocky doesn't have that incredible ending, you know, he basically loses the fight, you know, he gets the girl, he gets a self esteem, he's got that. He's, he's got a different kind of victory. It's, it's, you know, I would call that an ironic ending or whatever. So, for me, and this is just gonna be me and, and that you find what works for you. I love Moneyball right now. I wish once upon a time in Hollywood comes out, would come out in screenplay form, I haven't seen it. I actually saw that movie nine times in the theater. And I thought, I would not call myself a talentino fanboy. But I just I went to that. And and I'll tell you, I, somebody said, Why did you see that so many times, I said, Well, part of it is I went to LA, for the first time in 1981. And so the remnants of 69 Hollywood was was still there. And, and I got a job, one of my first jobs was with the broadcast equipment rental company. And so I got to go around to all the studios and deliver equipment. So I got to get onto Paramount and warm. So I feel like I got to see old Hollywood, actually, I was doing host work at a house once and john Houston was being rolled in there. And it was the year that he died. And it was just, I feel like I had that bridge to old Hollywood with that film. And I felt like he tapped into that. And so I would love to see that a film that I I can't watch enough is on the waterfront. Again, there's a book that a book of newspaper articles about the waterfront at that time. I liked it Spike Lee, you know, kind of brings that to a contemporary audience, from his perspective. So, you know, films like that, that obviously multiple people touched. Multi, Arthur Miller actually wrote a version of on the waterfront, which I haven't read, that would be amazing to read. But yeah, I mean, there's just so when you look at what was going on in the 50s, you know, it there's so many layers to it. And I think that's what what I love, you know, if there's other screenplays that that I would say, you know, Tootsie is a brilliant screenplay, especially for a comedy, it's just against so many layers, and there's just so many things that people connect with. I think, you know, if if conflict is on one side, I think emotion and catharsis if you can tap into that, I think the movies that if you're honest with yourself, the movies that you love, and you watch over and over again, there's some emotional heartbeat in there. And so for for Moneyball, you know, if you want to, you want to, you know, be a psychologist you could get into why Moneyball is so fascinating to me, but I think find something that you obsess about, track that screenplay down. You know, I think it's almost a mistake to try to read every screenplay ever written. And because some of those, you know, that's fine to read a lot, but I, I think obsession is is what Tarantino does. I think the best writers, even if you step back from score, from Aaron Sorkin's work, you'll see a common thread. You know, there's, you know, there's, there's similar characters, similar dialogue, somebody could probably be creative and intricate dialogue set in west wing and move it to Social Network, which again is another, you know, maybe the Best Screenplay in the last 20 years.

So we'll go with that Moneyball social network and on the waterfront, and on the waterfront, and where can people find, find the book and find your websites and your blog and all the stuff you do?

The you can find me at ScottWSmith.com, and that'll kind of spin you off to other places. My blog if you just Google screenwriting from Iowa, because I've, I've written like, 3000 posts on that. That'll, you know, that's the bones of the book are in those 3000 posts that I wrote there. And then I tried to find a way to curate it and, and rein in that stream. So screenwriting from Iowa, screenwriter from iowa.com, but if you just Google it, it'll come up there. You know, kind of like being on this podcast about 10 years ago. Tom Cruise, the official Tom Cruise blog, gave me a shout out and I thought, wow, that's, that's kind of cool. You know, what, what air are we living in that Tom Cruise, or his people at least are pointing people to my blog. So, you know, all along the way, you love to get little bits of encouragement here and there. And then the book you can find on Amazon. It's in paperback version. It's in the digital ebook version, and I'm working on the audio version now.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:27
My friend, thank you so much for being on the show. It's been a riveting conversation. I really do appreciate not only this conversation, but the book and I hope it helps more and more screenwriters beat the hell out of their scripts?

Scott W. Smith 1:01:42
Yeah. It's been a it's been fun. It's my first podcast ever. So I appreciate the opportunity.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:49
Alright, thanks again, my friend be well.

Scott W. Smith 1:01:58
Thank you.


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BPS 095: The Hollywood Screenplay Formatting Standard with Chris Riley

Have you ever wondered how to format your screenplay so Hollywood would take you seriously as a screenwriter before they even read your script? Today’s guest Christopher Riley can definitely help you with this.

Christopher Riley is an American screenwriter whose first film, After The Truth, a multiple-award-winning courtroom thriller, sparked international controversy when it was released in Germany in 1999. Other credits include 25 To Life, a dramatic thriller written for Touchstone Pictures, The Other White House, a political thriller written for Sean Connery’s Fountainbridge Films, Aces, an action-adventure written for Paramount Pictures and Emmy-winning producer Robert Cort, and a screen adaptation of the book Actual Innocence for Mandalay Television Pictures and the Fox television network.

A veteran of the Warner Bros. script department, Riley is the author of the screenwriting reference The Hollywood Standard: The Complete and Authoritative Guide to Script Format and Style, now in its second edition with a foreword by Antwone Fisher.

The Hollywood Standard describes in clear, vivid prose and hundreds of examples how to format every element of a screenplay or television script. A reference for everyone who writes for the screen, from the novice to the veteran, this is the dictionary of script format, with instructions for formatting everything from the simplest master scene heading to the most complex and challenging musical underwater dream sequence.

This new edition includes a quick start guide, plus new chapters on avoiding a dozen deadly formatting mistakes, clarifying the difference between a spec script and production script, and mastering the vital art of proofreading. For the first time, readers will find instructions for formatting instant messages, text messages, email exchanges, and caller ID.

BTW, if you want to go a bit deeper in not only formatting feature screenplays but also one-hour dramas, 30 minutes Multicam sitcoms, and documentaries take a look at IFH Academy’s Foundations of Screenwriting: Formatting

Enjoy my conversation with Christopher Riley.

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Alex Ferrari 0:46
I'd like to welcome the show Chris Riley. How you doing, Chris?

Chris Riley 3:25
I'm doing well. It's good to be with you, Alex.

Alex Ferrari 3:27
Oh, thank you so much for being on the show. I know we are we are hunkered down here in LA. With trying to survive apocalypse that is around us at all times. It's insane, isn't it?

Chris Riley 3:41
I've lost track of which month we're in? I think we're about in month seven. But I don't know.

Alex Ferrari 3:46
I don't even know. It's just like we were saying off air. It's it's amazing how the universe continues to make the plot more complex than it already is the 2020 plot. It just keeps getting crazier and crazier and crazier.

Chris Riley 4:02
Yeah. They say if anything can go wrong, it must go wrong in a movie. And things that we couldn't even imagine going wrong are are going wrong. It does impress me when life has that ability to just keep twisting the plot upping the stakes, so we're all living. We love to watch movies where the stakes are high, and we don't like to live in it. But that's what this year has been.

Alex Ferrari 4:35
And would you agree that if 2020 was a screenplay, it would never get produced? Because it's too fairly on the nose.

Chris Riley 4:41
Yeah, and it's you know, it's this mishmash of genres. It's a disaster movie, political thriller, it's all

Alex Ferrari 4:50
Its outbreak meets a political meets all the President's Men meets. It's, it's amazing. It's insane.

Chris Riley 4:58
My wife and I were watching contagion the other night.

Alex Ferrari 5:01
Why would you do why would you do that?

Chris Riley 5:04
It was I couldn't tell if I was watching the news or a movie, it is canny how close they were the one thing they got wrong and contagion was all the healthcare workers had ppe. What what they couldn't imagine when they were imagining the worst disaster was that we wouldn't have protective gear or frontline workers. Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 5:33
Again, the note back from the reader would say, Yeah, you've got to get what is this? What is this that the PP they don't have? PB that's unrealistic. That would never happen in life.

Chris Riley 5:44
Yeah, I've realized that. You know, I began to talk about this time as post apocalyptic. And then I realized, no, we're trying to get to post apocalyptic. This is just straight up apocalyptic.

Alex Ferrari 5:59
On a we're not we're not in Mad Max, we are in the, in the beginning, the prefix, the prefix of Mad Max, the part that we never see that gets mad max to where Mad Max?

Chris Riley 6:11
Yeah, this is why the world is as it is, in Mad Max, we get to live that part of it.

Alex Ferrari 6:17
Isn't that fun? Oh, joy. But we're here not to talk about the insane world that we live in. Currently, we're here to talk about the very important work of formatting screen. Because only screenwriters and filmmakers are so insane, as we all are, that I speak to them on a daily basis. And like, I know the world is crumbling around us. But how do I get my screenplay read? How can I get the budget? To my film to be how can I shoot my film in this? Like, that's the insanity of an artist. An artist is like this, I'm sure the whole world's burning, but I need to figure out how I can create my art. So this is why we're here, Chris, to help them on this journey.

Chris Riley 7:01
Are your shot headings are formatted properly?

Alex Ferrari 7:07
Obviously. So before we get started, how did you get into the business in the first place?

Chris Riley 7:12
I came to LA with my wife to be a screenwriter, both my wife and I wanted to be screenwriters, and I found myself standing outside the Burbank lot of Warner Brothers, wondering how in the world do you get into this place? And after about, I don't want to leave out the year that preceded getting through the wall because often we tell our stories, and it just sounds like oh, that's fantastic. It just all these great things fell in order. No, it's it's normal, that there are these huge gaps between the wonderful things that we put on our list of credits or resumes. So after a year of not being able to find any work in the industry at all, a friend of mine, called me from Warner Brothers and said, hey, we've had a script, proofreader go out on medical leave. I know you're a writer, I imagine you would be able to do this. Do you want to, you know, do you want to interview for this job. I had actually left town because I had run out of money, borrowed gas money to leave town go back home to Kansas City. And then I get this call. Warner Brothers interviewed me over the phone, I came back out to LA and started this 30 day temporary assignment proofreading scripts for Warner Brothers, which led to 14 years in the script department. They're rising up through the ranks until I managed that department. But inadvertently by formatting 1000s and 1000s of scripts. For every studio in town features and television I learned a whole lot more about script format than I meant to. And so that was that's what brought me to the place where I wrote the Hollywood standard, which is my reference for screenwriters on format. At the end of that 14 years, I left the studio because I, my wife and I had sold our first screenplay, got an assignment with touchstone to write another feature. And so that began our professional writing career. But I spent 14 years doing that apprenticeship at Warner Brothers really learning from other writers whose work I read, and so enjoyed and benefited from.

Alex Ferrari 9:43
So you must have, you must have come across a couple of doozies in your day reading those scripts, things that you're like, How did this get on to my desk?

Chris Riley 9:54
They're both the good and the bad. The good and bad. I mean, there there were things That many, many things that are awful and had no made it. It wasn't like I was a reader for you know, an agent or for studio things coming in over the transom. I was reading things that were in development and in pre production or production, and still just a lot of things that weren't wonderful. But then I did see Lethal Weapon when it first came in. You know, and it just exploded our minds to have a screenwriter talking directly to us as the reader I read early drafts of Forrest Gump and Rain Man, I read the pilot for er, when it had a typo on the cover. It said e W. And we read the script and we thought, Ooh, yeah, that work.

Alex Ferrari 10:56
It's called genius. That's genius. Now we were talking OFF AIR about specifically about Shane Black and his his the way he writes description is so amazing that the economy of words he uses and I think all great screenwriters have to have that skill of economy of words of using, as you put it, the right words in the right order, which is basically the definition of a good writer as a general state.

Chris Riley 11:28
Yeah. I think that it can appear effortless. So you read a shame plaque script, and you think he, this stuff just spilled out of him. And maybe he is such a genius that it just builds effortlessly from him. But I suspect that he's just a really hard working writer, and that many of his sentences have many more words. And then he ruthlessly cuts and searches for just the right word to replace the two or three words. And so he does what all of us do. The best writers, I think, still write mediocre stuff. They just don't show it to us. They they keep at their keyboard, polishing, looking for the right word, the right image, what is what is the telling detail about this character that I can tell you one thing about this character, and you will know who that character is, rather than four different things? What's the one detail about this location that defines it? I don't think that the great writers just have it easier than the rest of us. I just think they work harder. I had a student one time who was one of my first students to really break through and have a career and and she made a point where she would come into the classroom and talk to my students, she would bring her computer and hold it up and say, you know, kids, look at the keyboard, all the letters are worn off the keys. Maybe I'm lucky. But the harder I work somebody said the luckier I get. She's she made her own breaks, the quality of her writing was high because she just didn't let low quality work go out the door.

Alex Ferrari 13:26
Yeah, we all we all got to get that sludge out. Like when you turn the faucet on the sludge starts coming out first and then eventually that comes in the water gets a little brown water then it's a little clearer until it's finally crystal clear. Fiji water artists in Fiji water that comes out. But you've got to get through that that crap. And then with with writers, it's about going back and it's good writing is rewriting essentially,

Chris Riley 13:51
it really is and that that's a little depressing At first, I always got so frustrated with myself when I would get notes on my writing because I thought I had done it wrong. If I had done it correctly, then the first draft would have been solid. Yeah, I'd be be just keeping and saying it's perfect. Don't change a word. But that's not how screenwriting works. And my years at Warner Brothers taught me that our bread and butter was the second and the 12th and the 51st draft that would come through our doors. If we only had to do one draft, I could have laid off, you know, 90% of my staff. But scripts develop. They're too complex. And so they develop draft after draft. We have to do that hard work otherwise, we are hobbyist. We are not pros. Correct. The Pro accepts that. There are going to be notes and I can make it better.

Alex Ferrari 14:55
And really quickly just on a side note when you read lethal weapon, how many versions that mean? drafts of lethal weapon were there. And I'm sure Shane did Shane, because he was a fairly young writer at that point that was like his breakout, if I'm not mistaken,

Chris Riley 15:08
I think, I think that came right out of USC. And I don't recall the number of drafts, but there certainly were a bunch. Now Shane was on the page with that, all the time that I'll write from the beginning. And, and that's the thing about a, a writer with a voice. their voice is there on the page. Figuring out how to structure act to or something, you know, sometimes, there are a lot of drafts to figure that out. Rain Man did many drafts of the third act that could not figure out how to end that movie. And it took them years. Before they nailed it. You watch the movie, and it looks again, effortless, and inevitable. It had to be this way. Forrest Gump also came through our hands. And that was at multiple studios, many different drafts. It's radically different from the book, the innocence of the character of Forrest Gump, we know in the movie, very different from the forrest gump character in the book, and I think much better for it. So scripts actually can get much better as they go through these drafts. I know we like to trash talk, the executives who give us the notes, or the producers who give us the notes. I have to just acknowledge, honestly, I am a better writer, when I'm working with a good producer. I get good notes. I get. I have I love being in story meetings with smart story people. And it makes me better.

Alex Ferrari 16:49
Where do you think this myth came from? Where the writer sits down to screenwriters, where it sits down for three days, writes the screenplay, and that wins the Oscar like, at what point? Did that? I mean, I know the Stallone rocky myth back in the 70s. When he supposedly wrote I think he wrote rocky in five days. But then I actually saw an interview with him. And he's like, yeah, I wrote the first draft in five days. It took me months to tighten that up. But I wrote, yeah, I wrote the first draft in five days, but they leave that part out. So where did you all your travels? Is there a thing that goes, Oh, that's where this kind of started?

Chris Riley 17:27
I mean, I, I think it's the it's what we do. We're I mean, we're Hollywood. We we tell a good story. And it's a better story. I wrote it on the back of an envelope. And so we hear the story of, you know, Sofia Coppola writing Lost in Translation on a napkin or something. And I, maybe some ideas got written down that way. But then it's, you know, you wouldn't go in a skyscraper that somebody said, Oh, yeah, we threw that up overnight. No, I'm not.

Alex Ferrari 18:02
Isn't that great analogy. I'm gonna steal that one. I love that analogy. It's so true. Because that's what filmmakers do all the time. They'll just like, oh, let's just write something on this. Let's see what happens.

Chris Riley 18:12
Yeah, I really wish for the sake of all the people who are struggling and aspiring that we would be more honest with them. So I can, you know, I can show you my resume, I can show you my credits. And it just looks like I've had all these wonderful things in my life. But if I really told you the story is like, Oh, yeah, that's the gap where I pitched non stop for two years and didn't get a single job. I would, you know, what you see on there the results of the three pitches in a row I did, where three studios in a row hired me, right, but those gaps, you know, and where I'm looking in the one ATS going I don't think I know how to work in a machine shop, or drive a truck. And that's, those are the jobs that were advertised. All I know is how to how to make scripts. That's all I've done all my career. But even at Warner Brothers, which sounds fantastic, you know, I had a decal that let me drive onto the line every day anytime I wanted. There were times I was sitting in the middle of the night by myself in a room in the corner of the lot looking out toward Forest Lawn Cemetery, paper clipping 300, Copics, 300 copies of revision pages for the Dukes of Hazzard. And

Alex Ferrari 19:36
is that the screenplay? Sir? I'm assuming the screenplay.

Chris Riley 19:39
That was the the to

Alex Ferrari 19:41
the to the TV series. A series sir. You You You look much younger than someone who worked on the script, sir. So whatever you're doing, keep doing it.

Chris Riley 19:53
Thank you. Thank you. It was the later seasons when they had destroyed every version of the General Lee and they had to use metal pitchers because they couldn't find any more of the cars to

Alex Ferrari 20:03
get with those jumps. Yeah, with those jumps, they had cheeses and they changed the Duke boys. But we that's a whole other conversation. All right, so actually, let's let's actually talk a little bit about formatting since we've just basically been talking about, you know, the business. What are a few deadly formatting mistakes that screenwriter should avoid?

Chris Riley 20:24
So the first is to ignore format, and think that you can just kind of freelance it. I'm a creative person, I can do it however I want. You are writing for a very specific audience. And actually, you're writing for a number of audiences. So yes, the general audience you're writing for. But way before that you're writing for readers who read screenplays all day long. And for buyers who know what professionally formatted screenplays look like. So ignoring format, you do so at your own peril, it would be like going to the most important job interview of your life in your pajamas. That's not a good strategy. I would say the second thing to get more specific is just using the wrong font. So use courier font, wellpoint we know if you cheat. So if you think, you know, a script should be about 108 110 pages. If you've got 135 page script, the answer is not to go with 10 point font. The answer is to cut that thing down to an appropriate size. readers will recognize when you cheat the margins when you cheat the font size. So those kinds of things matter. Getting fancy with pictures, and anything that where you think you're going to jazz up the script, don't do it where we just want to read the words on the page. Don't put all of your effort into the script cover. I remember as an executive producer of a TV series who spent more time apparently on the script cover than what went between the covers. And that didn't end well. We are used to just reading the words on the page. Create the movie for us on the page so that we can read it and have the experience of seeing the movie or seeing the television pilot so that five years later, we can't even remember whether we read the script, or watch the show because you've created the experience of seeing the movie on the page which shouldn't be possible,

Alex Ferrari 22:47
but it is. So I'm gonna I'm gonna play I'm gonna play a young screenwriter who's hearing this for the first time and they and they're gonna say that I know they're saying this right now someone listening is saying this. But Chris Quentin Tarantino, Han writes the cover of all of his screenplays to make them very distinctive and he signs his his covers. Why can't I do that?

Chris Riley 23:09
Quentin Tarantino's autograph is worth more.

Alex Ferrari 23:14
And he's Quinn, Tarantino. He could do what Aaron Sorkin Quentin Tarantino, Shane Black if they want to handwrite the title on their screenplay. It's okay because they are who they are,

Chris Riley 23:25
that they can and they are masters. And so we know that when we crack that script and start reading, we are going to be swept away. I I feature the first page of one of Tarantino's scripts in the third edition of my book, which is coming out in May of 2021. He does not follow all of the guidance in my book. But it doesn't matter because he is such a master storyteller. He is sweeping us up in his characters in the emotion and in the drama of what's happening in those characters. And no one is going to mistake a Tarantino page page one of Django Unchained for the work of an amateur, you start reading those words, you know you're in the hands of a master.

Alex Ferrari 24:18
So formatting doesn't matter as much, because I've said that a lot of times as well. And I've seen that where there's typos. And Shane Black scripts. There's typos in in Sorkin scripts, I mean, blatant typos, and there might be even formatting issues. But they have earned the right to let that go. Right. Am I right? As opposed to somebody who

Chris Riley 24:40
I think that's right. I think it's like you and I wouldn't show up for the most important meeting of our lives in our PJs. I think Trentino can get away with that. That doesn't mean that that's a good model for us to follow. I think we have to earn the right to be that person. Now. Hopefully. We continue to be professionals. And even though there are typos on page one of Django Unchained, there is everything there that Tarantino's crew needs, right to shoot that film. There's everything the studio needs, the budget and schedule. So he is not being unprofessional in the way that he does his work. He is a really serious professional and he labored over that page. He doesn't care what Chris Riley says about what you capitalize and what you don't capitalize, and neither do his readers. But for the rest of us, there's no reason to take that chance. We want to create a professional impression we want to be taken seriously. I tell writers, I think you deserve to be taken seriously. So don't undercut yourself by not providing that professional polish that format provides.

Alex Ferrari 26:02
Now can you tell me the difference between spec scripts versus production drafts of a script, because a lot of screenwriters don't really understand the difference.

Chris Riley 26:13
The the one defining difference is production scripts have seen numbers on them. And spec scripts don't. But otherwise, we are when I was reading something at Warner Brothers, these were spec scripts, the early ones spec scripts that came through the door the studio had bought, and then they would progress toward production. We weren't adding more shot headings or more camera direction. And speaking of deadly mistakes, putting a bunch of camera direction in a script. Because you really secretly want to direct this movie. That's also a deadly mistake. Get all of that stuff out of the way. Don't put any camera direction in unless you have a really compelling storytelling reason to do. So sometimes, sometimes we do. But the format is really the same. Whether it's a spec script or a production draft, the changes are our story changes, character changes. And then eventually, when we start to prep a script before you can budget before you can schedule, the scenes need to be numbered production coordinator or a script supervisor will do that. Or my department did that writers don't number scenes. And when you put scene numbers on a script, it signals that you aren't familiar with that process. Apart from that there's not really this moment where lots of news shot headings or slug lines are added or a bunch of new camera direction is added. And even you know you can read Writer Director scripts like the Coen Brothers, Tarantino, Christopher Nolan. They keep all that stuff out of their scripts too. And you would expect that as well. A director is entitled to put all their thoughts about angles into the script, but they don't because they understand as professional screenwriters, they want to create a really readable document, we are trying to create a dream state for our reader, just like the movie creates a dream state for the viewer. And so as much technical language as we can streamline out of that script as possible. That's, I think, a winning strategy.

Alex Ferrari 28:55
So would you because it would you say that the story that you're writing is for the audience, but the script is for all of those gatekeepers that are going to get you to the place where this thing is actually produced, and then gets it out to the world for an audience to watch.

Chris Riley 29:13
I'm never thought of it in those terms. But I think that's really well said yes. So the audience is not going to see the script unless they're,

Alex Ferrari 29:20
you know, buying, buying sick buying the Star Wars script at Barnes and Noble or Amazon got it.

Chris Riley 29:26
So yeah, so the story is, is for the audience, the script. I while I do I do argue that a script is a lot of people say a script a blueprint for a movie. It's like a technical document. I think it is a piece of literature in its own right. I love reading a great script. But it is for a limited audience. It is for those gatekeepers and it's for your colleagues who are going to be working with You to put this movie on the screen and so you want to be clear for them. For the sake of your colleagues, clarity is the watchword for the sake of the gatekeepers. Entertainment is, is the thing, you have to draw them in on page one. These are people who back when people read physical scripts, we would send the creative executives home every Friday afternoon with a big box full of scripts that they that was called the weekend read. That was their homework for the weekend, Monday, they would come in talk about all of the drafts that needed notes as well as scripts they were considering buying. These people are tired and busy and reading fast. And so you've got to grab them on page one, you want to be clear because you don't want them paging backwards. The last thing you want anyone doing when they're reading a screenplay is going in reverse. screenplays are all about forward motion. And so that's why clarity, economy, professional format all are working for you to suck the reader in and hold on to them all the way to the end, hard thing to do. And there are few who do it really, really well. But when they do, it's like seeing a miracle on the page.

Alex Ferrari 31:30
Now, what are five shot headings, that should be in a script, five different kind of hedge shot headings and what a shot heading is as a general standard for people who don't know what it is.

Chris Riley 31:40
Okay. So, a shot heading tells us where we are. So movies are stories. The author Claudia Johnson has said movies are stories told in scenes or the screen. And so scenes are these distinct pieces of storytelling that happened somewhere some time. And so the shot heading tells us where and when we are so right now I'm interior Chris Riley's house day. And so that would be we would call a master shot heading off. And that's all we need. And then we just describe what happens and we have the dialogue. Each character says this in this order. That theme and format doesn't have to be any more complicated than that. But once in a while, we then want some intermediate shot headings. Sometimes I write action sequences. So we are I wrote a film for Paramount called aces, which was about these biplanes in the 1920s. And they were in a hurry. So they flew into a thunder head, which is really a terrible idea to fly an airplane into a thunderstorm because there are winds that will rip your plane apart. So there's maybe a seven page action sequence, exterior stormy sky, night. But then as I'm moving around from this plane to that plane, I've got a shot heading. Maybe with Ben. So one of my main characters is named Ben. And I want to focus your attention on him. And so I have these intermediate shot headings. And then I might go, I might now call out an extreme close up. So let's say that wild Ben is trying to make his way through this thunderstorm and lightning striking his plane he's also running out of gas. So I might want to focus your attention as you would on screen with an extreme close up on the fuel gauge. The needle hits empty, I might say extreme close up fuel gauge. And then indirection under that I would say the needle hits empty. I might leave out and I would advise mostly leaving out the extreme close up language and I can just use as a shot heading fuel gauge. What you see in your mind is an extreme close up of the fuel gauge so I don't need the technical language. There are other times I'm going to need a flashback and so I'm going to indicate that in the shot heading the first word will be flashback interior Chris Riley's house that we might have a dream sequence that's indicated. Another really important one is a POV shot which POV stands for point of view. So if I say Alex is POV, his computer screen that means we're looking through your eyes at the computer screen. Now, the correct way to format that is to say Alex's POV, some people will say POV Alex. Now I'm confused because I don't know if that's your POV. Or if that's somebody else's point of view of you know, we don't want to leave the team confused about that, nor do we want to leave our reader confused about it. So Alex's POV is unambiguous. And that's the best way to, to set that up. So I would say those are, maybe that was five of the really shot heading types that a writer would use. So when you're in an action sequence, so before, when I was writing my scripts back in the day, I would write, if I was an action sequence, I would write, interior warehouse,

Alex Ferrari 35:46
corner of the room, this corner of the area, let's say by the boiler, then cut to I would write cut two, but then the next sequence would be interior warehouse, other side of the, you know, by the stairs, and then I would constantly go back and forth, and I would write the full heading every time where because I was inexperienced, and I didn't know any better, but you're saying like you once you establish that we look guys, we're all in the warehouse. Now. It's like, at the boiler room, Ben, at the boat, you know, at the, at the stairs, this, you know, if you want to come back and forth, because when you're shooting some of these actors, let's say let's take the opening sequence of Saving Private Ryan. That's pretty chaotic. We're all on the beach. Essentially, the whole thing takes on the beach, maybe underwater, sometimes maybe in the boat for a minute or two on the beach itself by by a barrier. But we're all on the beach. So I doubt that the same kind of writing script says exterior. Where's the beach? Oh, God, the name of the peach

Chris Riley 36:49
earlier? Oh, thank you.

Alex Ferrari 36:51
Yeah. Oh, Mojave tech. Exactly. Omaha Beach exterior, boom. It's not there all the time. We like we established already there. And then they're just jumping back and forth to different areas of the beach. Is that? Is that fair?

Chris Riley 37:03
Right. Yeah. Yeah. If it's clear in context, we know Yeah, we've got, I don't know, 25 pages. I know, we know where we are, there's no reason for us to be confused about that. So we don't need to repeat those words that streamlines the read. It may be. And this is where your weigh in one value against another. So a production person may have to like page back a little bit to to confirm. Yep, still on Omaha Beach. They've got their job. Because I wrote a script that grabbed the reader. So I'm going to, I'm going to lean a little bit toward making it streamlined for the reader and not bogged down with a lot of technical language, the, you know, location manager is going to maybe do a little extra paging to confirm, oh, yeah, we're still in Chris Riley's house, even though it the shot heading just said, bathroom. They've got their job, I'm happy if they're a little frustrated with me, if the movies

Alex Ferrari 38:14
getting made. And then also, though, in a production draft, I found that when I'm working with first 80s, that they will go back and write, interior, you know, warehouse interior warehouse, because just for a breakdown, it becomes a lot easier for them. So it becomes more of a technical document, like you said, as opposed to an enjoyable piece of literature. It's like, No, we need to make sure that scene five is in inside the warehouse. It's just a different area of the warehouse, but we want to make sure that we're still in the warehouse, is that what you found?

Chris Riley 38:45
So in, I find that for, you know, script, supervisors, abs, everybody is writing tons of notes on their scripts, whatever is relevant to to their job. We don't always go back into the script and add that for everybody. You know, and it could be that budgeting and scheduling software, you know, prefers that because it can pick out then the interiors and the exteriors, the days and the night automatically for you. But often, an ad will just go in and hand annotate their own own script. And then you get all of that stuff in, in the shooting schedule, broken out with maybe detailed, it's been added. I don't know we see that being added to this.

Alex Ferrari 39:40
The script that everybody is seeing God, it's so good. That could just be the personal script of the first ad and maybe the director just so we know what's going on. clearbrook based on the software. One thing that I an old school first ad once told me when you're writing, especially if if you're writing a Marvel movie, this is not uncommon. First of all, you're one of 30 screenwriters or 50 screenwriters in the world who are doing that, but if you're writing a big budget, it's not as big of a deal. But when you're writing when you're writing budgets that are not specifically big studio tentpoles you know, anytime you see every time a first day, DCs exterior night, the budget just went up. Exterior exterior night is not just if you could, or the exterior night dusk or dawn, those are the those are just like, brutal for production because of the costs involved with it. So he always told me if you can write it just morning, night, you know, like bit Night, night, morning, midday, something else? can it take place interior at night, that would be helpful, because lighting outside is a lot more expensive.

Chris Riley 40:53
For writers often can spend their whole careers not being on a movie set and not actually knowing a lot of these production considerations. But yes, whatever you write, somebody has to do. So all those nighttime scenes mean people are working through the night. If it's expensive, it's tough on people. And so yes, an interior night is, is attractive, because you can shoot that anytime we don't know whether it's day or night outside when you're shooting that. Crowd scenes, children, animals, boats, on the water, all things drive up budget, and I became very aware of that. When I was producing and rewriting a very low budget $200,000 feature, then you're counting your actors, you know, how many people can we afford? Because we're paying for the hotel room, and we're paying, you know, we're paying to travel them, all of that stuff becomes, you know, those are hard costs, you have to pay, you can't defer that stuff.

Alex Ferrari 42:04
Alright, so do you think as a young screenwriter, so a screenwriter who's just starting out to keep that kind of stuff in mind, if that is the target audience that they're going after? If you're writing a tentpole 100 million dollar plus movie, this doesn't, you know, doesn't make sense. But does it give your script a better chance with the gatekeepers to go, Oh, we can shoot this, like this is ready to go as is because they kept their costs in mind when writing it not to stifle creativity, but yet to be conscious of the production needs. Because I don't know if you agree with me or not, productions are getting cheaper and cheaper, the budgets have to be are coming down and down television, and streaming pilots, those budgets are coming down. And these 100 million plus dollar projects are becoming rare and rare, where now they're betting two to $300 million. And now without the theatrical component that we currently have in our world, I don't even know how much longer that's gonna work out with that. That's a whole nother conversation. But anyway, what do you think?

Chris Riley 43:05
Yeah, I think you do have to always bear in mind, who is my audience? Who is my buyer. And so if I'm writing, you know, if I'm sending biplanes into a thunderstorm, I know I'm writing for Paramount, and I know this is a at least an $80 million budgeted film, make it more spectacular, right. But I also know, you know, if I'm working with an indie director, and writing something that we're intending to produce together, then I'm going to write for that budget, and even conceive of the story for that budget. The lower the budget, or the lower the budget could be potentially, because, you know, a list stars can drive up the budget on you know, people are talking to each other. But the production demands, the lower those are, the more people can say yes, to make this movie at 100 or $200 million. There's five people in the world who can say yes, as if we get down to a million dollars. There are a whole lot of people who can say yes. And so you know, different stories have different demands. And you know, as you were talking about the demands of shooting at night, I was just thinking, Oh, yeah, that thing I'm writing right now, the entire third act happens at night in the rain, the rain, but it has two doors, he demands it. But there's a trade off there. That's going it's going to cost and I, Cathy and I, early in our career, had a project that we wrote a treatment for. It was all about 1906 San Francisco earthquake and fire and our managers in a agents were really excited about it, I thought it could sell. And it went to an A list action director, who ultimately said, You know, I just don't want to spend all that time surrounded by fire. And so there are practical demands that the storytelling takes makes on filmmakers, and they may not want to be in the snow for six months, or surrounded by flames for months or at night in the rain. And those are things to consider. Yeah, because

Alex Ferrari 45:33
I know a lot of actors who, you know, that got scripts sent to them. They're like, you know, where's the shooting? Oh, it's in it has to shoot in Alaska. Yeah, I don't want to spend four months in Alaska. But if you write a script in Hawaii, chances go.

Chris Riley 45:50
Yeah, exactly. We said something in the hills above Malibu? Because then it's like a five minute drive for all the actors who live in Malibu.

Alex Ferrari 46:01
Right? Exactly, exactly. Um, now, what are a few things that you should absolutely not put into a shot heading.

Chris Riley 46:15
Sound Effects should not go in the shot heading, they should be pulled down into direction any action should not go into a shot heading. action should be in direction or you know, we also call that action. So none of that should be there shouldn't be any transitions, no dissolves or cuts, cut tattoos. There are kind of five things that that do belong there, the interior or exterior location, the type of shot, the subject of the shot, and the time of day. Now, that's five things that would make for that big interior warehouse shot heading that you described. We don't have to repeat that every time a shot hitting can contain all five of those things shouldn't contain anything else. But it doesn't have to it can be as simple as Alex, right? So that if the shot is have you, it's a sufficient sub shot heading to say, Alex, the shot of me can just say, Chris, if we've already established the location and the time of day,

Alex Ferrari 47:27
right? So if we're going to write the scene that we're having right now, where you and I are talking over over a video conference, and we're like, we wouldn't say interior, Alex's office, Skype, then the next words that you have his interior office, Chris, Skype, and we don't get a back and forth. We're like this is and we just did basically we just put up at the top Skype, interior offices Skype conversation, how do you write this? How do you write the this this setting?

Chris Riley 48:00
Alright, so a couple of ways. Yes, you're, you're onto it. So we want to establish your location, right? Near Alex's office day. And then we could say slash interior Chris's zoom studio. Day. And we all have multiple zoom studios throughout our homes are all the different people who need them. Yes. And and then you can just indirection after that say intercut. And so you only need to call out the locations one time, we could also start, let's say we start with you, you introduced the show. So we're into your Alex's office day, Alex sits before a microphone wears headphones, speaks with a molded fluent voice. And so then we have a dialogue. And then we say intercut with interior Chris Riley's video conferencing studio day. After that, we just have the dialogue. And we may, you know, have, you know, Chris reaches for clear beverage could be water, we'll never know. You know, and then it's back to just the dialogue,

Alex Ferrari 49:17
basically. Okay, good. Because that's, like, this is a perfect example. Like, how would you create this without it being so like, back and forth? Because what that brings me to my next question, though, like, a lot of the a lot of these formatting books that been around since the 80s, and 90s, and early 2000s did not take into account a lot of the things that are now being incorporated inside of scripts, like text messaging, instant messaging, how do you handle formatting texts, which are now becoming more and more not like a description? Like, she looks down at the phone and sees a text? No, there's like text on the screen going back and forth. So how do you format that?

Chris Riley 49:56
So the I mean, this simple rule is that you just describe what we see. So when you see any kind of visual effect, and I would put text on the screen in that category, you know, if, if my typewriter levitates, at some point I would just described, you know, his old Underwood levitates. And, you know, circles his head, and nothing special needs to be done other than the description of that. And so I would handle that sort of text messaging the same way, I would just describe it, text messages appear around her as she dresses for the day,

Alex Ferrari 50:43
and then the text messages would add that dialogue.

Chris Riley 50:46
Yeah, I would, I would either put those in dialogue margins with quotation marks around them, or indirection with quotation marks around them, I think it's always useful. If we're going to see text on screen to see quotation marks around it, you could put it in all capital letters, if that makes it pop a little bit for the reader. I have to keep doing new editions of my book, The Hollywood standard, because these new things keep happening. So in the second edition, we added text messages, things like that. Now we've had to add, well, how do you handle like a zoom meeting where you've got, which we've just talked about video boxes on the screen, and you know, and you're sitting in your laundry room, and you know, the load is out of balance, and so the shoes are thumping, and you know, and the kids are bothering you, all of this stuff is happening, we've got the movie screen, but we've got our computer screens or our phone screens. So I've had to apply the principle principles of be clear, be economical, and invent ways to handle those things. And so, in the third edition, there will be a section on how do you handle video conference calls? Because there's no there's just no chance that we're not going to see those showing up? Oh, they're now a permanent, I think permanent part of our lives. Yeah, without question. And on a side note,

Alex Ferrari 52:18
so when I write my computer levitates all the time. So I'm not sure if yours does. But that's generally means that I'm doing good writing. That's just the way I see it.

Chris Riley 52:28
That is a very, very positive sign. I wish this thing would levitate it. I suppose they considered it a portable, but you got to be strong to carry it. You got to be really strong to hype on it.

Alex Ferrari 52:42
Right? Like you have to work out your fingers you like pop it like you got to really, really want those words.

Chris Riley 52:49
You do and you have to be confident because to change that was so much work. You had to retype the whole page. And if you cut something that changed the page length the rest of the script you're going to you're going to retype your whole script. So we would the early days of my time at Warner Brothers we'll call them the Dukes of Hazzard days. cut and paste really meant scissors and scotch tape

Alex Ferrari 53:17
and a photocopy and a photocopy. Yeah,

Chris Riley 53:19
you get strips of paper stapled onto a page and and then we would retype all of that because we had one computer system on the lot and then proofread and print hundreds of copies for everybody.

Alex Ferrari 53:34
I kind of remember those days. I mean, even when I was even when as a PA working on a fox show on the universal lot in Orlando. I worked in the office and I saw snip snip snip paste paste base on the pink and the red and the yellow and

Chris Riley 53:54
yeah, yeah, the here I'll show off the the color sequence of pages when scripts go through different drafts and it's so burned into my mind. Okay, like blue pink, yellow, green, gold buff salmon, cherry and tan. And then you start over unless you are in Great Britain and then you also have gray and ivory.

Alex Ferrari 54:18
I'm not sure to be impressed or terrified by that.

Chris Riley 54:22
That's what you call at this point in my life that is useless.

Alex Ferrari 54:26
Useless absolutely useless.I'm so when you How do you handle dialogue when there is like five people arguing or five people talking all at the same time, which is something that happens in movies constantly. Like, I can imagine writing the script for mash where everybody was talking over each other. How do you even work? How do you approach that as a screenwriter,

Chris Riley 54:52
there are two different strategies. So one is to just line them all up side by side in columns and you can fit at Mac's about five characters talking at the same time and columns. That way, you get really narrow columns. If you've only got two characters, now you've got half the page to share. And that can work. The problem for me with that is, I can't read five different people talking at the same time, I have to read them in sequence. And so it doesn't really approximate the experience of hearing five people talking at once. And it's a, it's just an awkward reading experience, which, of course, I'm trying to get away from awkward reading experiences for all the reasons we've talked about. So often, what I will do is, I will still stack them, like normal dialogue. But I'll break off one speech with a dash as somebody else introduct interrupts. And I really am giving, I might say, in direction, talking over her, and so you read it, and you get the sensation of talking over each other. But I'm not asking you to figure out which order to read into the speeches and I. So I think that that makes for, in most cases, a better experience for the reader. But at the end, when the production happens, it's going to the actors are going to do what the actors are going to do on set and the director is going to direct them the way they're going to direct. So it's not going to be exactly how you read. So you're basically creating theater on the page for the reader specifically, and it's not. It's going to change. Well, that's

Alex Ferrari 56:35
a general statement. It's going to change with the set. Oh, gosh, it's

Chris Riley 56:39
going to change location for the movie twister. And Steve Zaillian had had his eyes on that script, it was Steven Spielberg gone, you know,

Alex Ferrari 56:53
did he produce that one, he produced that one, didn't he?

Chris Riley 56:55
He produced that one. It was a Michael crighton script along with his, his wife, I believe. And I was on location. This was while I was still with the script department at Warner Brothers because they went into production without having finished the script. Sort of the time of year dictated if you're going to shoot a tornado movie, in a cornfield, this has got to look like spring, we got to go now. So they said, Would you come and be here with our writer, and type the script as he writes it? And that sounded like an adventure to me. So I did that. I had a trailer with the actors. And so I would sit outside my trailer and just talk to the actors throughout the day, and some of the actors came back. And these were not the the lead actors. These were the supporting actors. The team of tornado chasers, you

Alex Ferrari 57:47
know, Bill Paxton and Helen Hunt

Chris Riley 57:48
with accident, Helen Hunt. And they came back one day from sets so excited. They said, Oh, my gosh, it was so great. We went out there and yonder bond, the director just said, Why don't you guys just ad lib? And I thought, all right, Michael crighton Steve's alien, Steven Spielberg, and you're out there. ad libbing ad libbing my writers heart just sort of broke a little bit. But that's a that's an education. No, yeah. You're creating theater on the page, so that the rest of the team is in a position to go and create the movie, and you want to get them close enough to that movie, so that when they're ad libbing it's consistent with those characters you've created, and it's supporting the story that everyone together is trying to tell. Fair enough.

Alex Ferrari 58:46
Now, one thing that I always had an issue with when writing was the continued that the continued at the top and the bottom, I've read scripts that have it on every single page, because arguably, you're continuing the story. So can you kind of clarify when to use it and when it's appropriate to use it?

Chris Riley 59:10
Yeah, so actually, that gets added to the script that should get added to the script, when the scene numbers are added and not before. And so when a numbered scene is continuing on the next page, scene, 21 reaches the bottom of the page, scene 21 continues on the next page, if that's where you want a continued at the bottom of that first page, and that a 21 continued at the top of the next page. And then if 21 keeps going, then at the bottom of that page, another continued in parentheses all caps, the top of the next page 21 continued. Now that's continued no parentheses with a colon. That's why I wrote the Hollywood standards. You could look at it And see how it works. And then it's continued. And then the number two. So we know this is the second page of scene 21. Continuing. If a scene ends at the bottom of a page, then there should be no continued. Yes, the movie is continuing. But that scene is not continuing. That's what the continued is meant to indicate.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:21
Again, so wrapping wrapping this whole up, I think we can safely say that the job of the screenwriter in the formatting process and in the writing process of a screenplay, their main, their main purpose, or their main job, besides telling a great story, is to clarify what is going on on the screen. So you can take away any confusion from the reader, that at no point should the reader go back a page or two, because they're lost, then you have failed in the formatting and in the storytelling, because you're not clearly telling them where you're going. As opposed to a novelist who doesn't have to deal with any of this. They just write because I know when I write books, it's so much more freeing than writing a screenplay. screenplay is the combination of a great Craftsman and a great artist mixing together to come up with this product. Whereas a novelist is just a great artist that has craft, but much more free.

Chris Riley 1:01:27
I think I think that's exactly right. It is that marriage between the poet and the engineer? Yeah. And it's why it's really hard to find a person who is both a poet and an engineer, but you are, you're designing a potentially a $200 million machine. Blake Snyder called movies intricate in motion machines. And that's so there's design that goes into that, that craftsmanship. But there's also the the poet, the artist, the mad scientist. And we need both of those sides, I have written most of the things I have written with a writing partner, most frequently my wife, because you need that wide swath of skills. But yeah, you want, you want to be clear. And you want to be a poet at the same time. And that's where the great writers really do it. And that's why reading a screenplay can be such a joy. Now,

Alex Ferrari 1:02:33
there's one thing in the third edition of your book that is exciting that I know you want to talk about, and I want to hear how you did it is how you are you actually taking improv, or improv? Is it improvisations from the Masters, like Tarantino and Nolan, and showing you how they formatted the screen from from a scene, let's say in Pulp Fiction? Can you talk a little bit about that? Yes.

Chris Riley 1:02:57
So this started with a lot of readers asking me, how is format changing as time passes? You know, are all of these old rules still, we still have to follow them? And I thought the best way to answer that question was to just go to the masters and see what are they doing? How do they work with this form on the page to write their movies. So for example, that opening scene in the shape of water. It is it's a piece of dream. And, and yet I am in the in this new chapter, and in the third edition, I show you that page. And I say Look how using shot headings, and paragraphs of direction and dialogue, just those simple elements. This dream is pinned to the page with nothing but words. And yes, sometimes Tarantino misspells his words, and he doesn't follow every capitalization guideline that Hollywood standard provides. But he is still working within industry, standard script format, ish to to create a Tarantino film on a piece of paper, using nothing but words. And so for me, it was such a delight to scour all of these screenplays and find these gems, these beautiful examples of these masterpieces of writing for the screen and then put them in the book and be able to put them in front of the reader and say, Oh my gosh, look at this. Do you see where she does? This? Do you see where Vince Gilligan does that thing in that pilot episode of Breaking Bad? Can you believe that? That he just did that with words on the Page. I hope it's an inspiration. I hope it's also instructive to writers and helps them understand how they can take the scenes that they imagine and do them justice on the page so that the reader really has the experience that the writer wishes to give them.

Alex Ferrari 1:05:24
Now when you are going back and studying, you know, cat and they're basically careers of screenwriters like Tina Nolan, how did Nolan How did let's say Tarantino structure, Reservoir Dogs or Natural Born Killers or True Romance, which are one of his earlier scripts that got sold versus Django Unchained and once upon a time in Hollywood, like how different in the formatting did was he is braised and let's say specifically turned to was he as brazen with Reservoir Dogs as he is with Django Unchained on like, screw formatting? I am terrington. He was just a dude trying to make it at that time.

Chris Riley 1:06:03
Yeah, I think, you know, I, I, I can't answer that question precisely because I didn't go back and look at all of those scripts, but my sense is, he probably has, has not evolved too much in his formatting. And, and he has compensated for that with other qualities.

Alex Ferrari 1:06:29
Right, it'd be bad and a lot of times people look, I love when screenwriters or filmmakers point at these masters, and use them as an example like, well, they did it. I'm like, Yeah, but they are one in a generation. Like there won't be another Tarantino ever. There won't be another Nolan. There won't be another Coppola. These people are at the height. their masters, they are literally masters. And to use them as an example of what you should be doing in the sense of like, what you could get away with, in let's say, simple. The thing is formatting. you're setting yourself up for disaster.

Chris Riley 1:07:07
Yeah, with any, you know, with any discipline, right, we hope to get to mastery. But we start with the basics. We start with the rudiments. I remember being at the Hollywood Bowl. Steve Martin was there with his steep Canyon Rangers are the bands, the banjo guys. And there is there's a guy who plays the fiddle, and is literally like dancing on top of the, you know the form, he has so mastered the fundamentals, right, that is now free of them. And he, it is such a delight to watch somebody do that. But they don't start there. They start with the fundamentals, you know, he can play his scales. And he may be playing notes that aren't on the scales. But he can only do it because he has played his scales. A friend of mine had a sister who was a an opera singer. People thought she sang like an angel, how wonderful. They didn't know that she was in the basement, eight hours a day singing scales so that she was able to go soar like a bird when she performed. So yes, format is a part of us doing our scales. My friend, Dean Vitaly, the TV Writer Producer has set a script without a format, like hearing a singer who's out of tune. Those of us read a lot of scripts have a fairly finely tuned ear. And it's not only unpleasant, we just sort of turn that off. We're not likely to read all the way to the end of a script, which is a shame because could be a wonderful script.

Alex Ferrari 1:08:59
And would you would you use the analogy that writers need to just like an athlete needs to work out those muscles doing the basics before they can do the extraordinary meaning in order for the these some of these Olympic athletes I saw doing like the gymnastics, my God the things that what's her name does I mean that she's constantly like all other gymnastics, gymnast are going, how did she do that? She worked on the basics so much that now she's capable of doing things that nobody else is doing. Because she has so mastered those basics and those muscles are so strong that are capable of doing that. I would I would assume I would associate that with writing where the more you write, you write 20 scripts, and you you're going to be a much stronger writer than on script one.

Chris Riley 1:09:49
Yes, no, that's absolutely true. It's it is a rarest thing for somebody to to achieve the highest That they're capable of on their first try. They write. I mean, I think there are these exceptional stories where something like that has happened. But that is not. Nobody should count on that. Yeah, count on it being your 20th script, I think john wells described, you know, you need like 12 to 18 inches of paper, script pages that you've written. And that's not. Now I may write 12 inches of paper to end up with a screenplay. It's the finished screenplays that need to stack us up to stack up. And we which means don't be precious with the words, there are more where those came from. I used to really get anxious about my ideas and hold on to them so tightly if there was a note, because I feared I would not be able to replace that idea with another good one. And so you sort of dole these ideas out, ration them. Do away with that. There are more good ideas where those came from. You keep living life, I many times I feel like I've poured out all of my soul onto the page. There's no other story for me to tell. And then it turns out sure there is.

Alex Ferrari 1:11:14
So it's an endless Well,

Chris Riley 1:11:17
it isn't endless well, but it does flow more freely. When you let it flow, get the sludge out, let the words flow, let them be bad, cross them out, replace them. But when you sit frozen before your screen, there's nothing. You can't rewrite, you can't improve it. That perfectionism is the obstacle that I see for so many writers. I was on jury duty writing what turned out what became the first produced film that I had. And I, I was sitting in there like the jury room waiting to be called. And there was a businessman sitting across from me, he looked at me because I had that little piece of paper and I'm scrolling in the corner and he goes, What are you doing? paper is your cheapest resource. And that was great writing advice. I started just like writing all over the front and backs of pages. When I'm writing dialogue. Now, I just fill pages. And then I go back and circle the one sentence, that's really good. And that becomes the seed of a seed. But you have to unfetter yourself and just start writing words that will move you forward.

Alex Ferrari 1:12:35
I'm in the middle of writing my my next book, and I'm telling you it like it took me a minute to just get that engine, the sludge had to come out a bit and then and now I'm starting to feel the flow like okay, now I can now I'm just like, like it's just flowing very, very easily. But it takes a minute to get that. That that thing to come out of you. And the more you do it, the easier it becomes. It really is.

Chris Riley 1:13:01
Yeah. And if you work I another trick is work on it every day. Because then you're excited to get back to the project. Because you had to stop, you got interrupted and you had that other thing that you wanted to get down. And that gets you started. It gets you through that. There's always a barrier at the beginning of every writing session for me. And yet, if I'm doing it every day, I'm going to sleep thinking about it, I then wake up with a solution or an idea. And so there's that effortless than start sometimes because it's like, oh, I had to write that idea down. And now I have another idea. And now I'm going yeah, if you start from a dead stop, it's like starting a freight train. takes a lot of energy to get that thing moving. So even if it's 30 minutes a day, an hour a day, you will make progress. You can write a feature in a year by putting in an hour a day. I wrote I used to ride the train to Warner Brothers who ride the shuttle from the studio to the Burbank Metrolink station. I that first screenplay that Kathy and I sold much of that was written while I was on jury duty sitting on a Metrolink train sitting at a train station, the train one time pulled into the station while I was writing pulled out of the station. And I was so absorbed in the writing I never even I don't know, was four feet away from me.

Alex Ferrari 1:14:37
And I don't know about the about you but now that the engines off and that train is going in the right in this writing process that I'm going through my impatience to get the damn baby birth. Like I want it out of me. I just want that first draft done because the rewriting process for me is a lot more honestly it's more fun because then I know I'm closer to the end and it's a lot easier to cook one Then once the food is on the table, it's just getting that food on the table. The raw materials out again, I just want like, I can't type fast enough. And it's that's my frustration right now.

Chris Riley 1:15:10
Yeah, if we were sculptors, we would have rock, right. But yeah, as writers, we have to make the rock before we can sculpt it and ready. Making the rock, that raw material you talk about that's, that's hard work. And it's scary work because it's coming. It's like it's coming out of nothing. And that, I don't know if I can do it. Once I've got that first draft, at least I know. I got from here to there. Now I can go back and and tweak and cheat and then throw another piece of slab of rock on and chisel that piece off. But there's something there to work with is the creative. That's very I've never thought about that way. But writers we we actually are creating our raw material to actually go back and chisel away and add and tweak. But the adding and tweaking and chisel is a lot easier than going out to the to the mountain side. Cutting off a big slab carrying it back with you is the equivalent of what we do as writers. It is and that phase of the work makes my brain especially tired.

Alex Ferrari 1:16:15
I'm exhausted just thinking about it. Well, Chris, thank you so much for being on the show. I'm gonna ask you a few questions. I asked all of my guests. And by the way, there is so much more to formatting in your book. Like there's just so much more information about it. But I think we covered a lot of, you know, great little tidbits to get people started on the process. But if you definitely want to know more about formatting his book is the the authority on formatting without question. Now what are three screenplays every screenwriter should read?

Chris Riley 1:16:51
Ah, well, I think Chinatown because it has the reputation as being maybe the greatest screenplay ever. I don't want to I guess I'll stay in that Classic Mode. The Godfather is wondering one

Alex Ferrari 1:17:09
or two sir one or two.

Chris Riley 1:17:11
I'm partial to one.

Alex Ferrari 1:17:13
Okay. Okay.

Chris Riley 1:17:16
I think my wife may prefer to. And then Boy, you know, Shane, black blacks. Kiss Kiss Bang Bang is wonderful. The brothers bloom is wonderful. Room is wonderful. Not the room. But that room. Room is wonderful. I'm I'm a melancholy drama kind of sucker. I like things that make me cry. So you know, something from from that area. One of my favorite films is in America. Yeah, I remember that. I was so disappointed by the screenplay. It's almost unreadable. It's so dense with with words. So I don't recommend that script. I absolutely recommend that movie.

Alex Ferrari 1:18:10
Now, what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film industry or in life?

Chris Riley 1:18:15
Oh, be honest. Be honest about the characters. I think I spent a lot of time hiding. I think I was taught very, very early. Nobody will love you if they know the truth about you.

Alex Ferrari 1:18:30
Yes. Yes.

Chris Riley 1:18:34
That's not helpful for storytelling. And so I would get notes from producers like your, your characters seem really well adjusted. It's like they've already been through therapy. Can we like dirty them up a little bit? And I had to, I had to recognize that Oh, yeah. People are going to relate to the characters more, if they are flawed, if they're broken, if they're hurting, just like the rest of us. And when I used to speak or teach, my wife would say, you know, all the stories you tell are like the heroic stories about you. Why don't you tell the stories where you like messed up. People will like you better if they if you don't pretend like you're perfect. took me a long time to risk that because I had this lied, built into my operating system. But if people don't think I'm perfect, they won't want to have anything to do to me. And it was actually a guy I was seeing for counseling. He said, Chris, if they're your friends, they already know. And I thought, Oh, of course. And that was incredibly freeing, but it allows me to bring more of my own struggle to my stories and and so you get characters who are relatable, and it allows me to bring more of myself. To the people,

Alex Ferrari 1:20:01
I love. And would you agree that authenticity, and truth is what is needed, and what makes you stand out that is your secret sauce that nobody else actually has in your writing. And that's where a lot of writers hide from. They don't want to open themselves up. They don't want to put that on the page because it exposes them. But when you are able to release that, that's the stuff that makes you who you are, and makes you stand out, right?

Chris Riley 1:20:29
It absolutely does. And I've, since I've started,

Alex Ferrari 1:20:35
You can't stop now.

Chris Riley 1:20:37
I, you know, I've sat with a director, who said, Well, what do you think the theme of this is? And my first reaction is, well, I'm not telling you the theme, because I'm afraid, you'll think it's corny or your take it out. But I told him the theme, and he said, Yeah, I think that's what it is to and I think that's really beautiful. That's what I want to do. Wow, then I wasn't hiding the cards from him. We really were collaborators. I was with a producer who, you know, we were talking about, what do we think the theme of this TV series is. And he said, let me play you this song from this Broadway musical that I just really love. And it really moves me. And we sat listening to this, and he was almost in tears. And I thought, Oh, if I can understand what that's revealing about my producer, and put that into the script. Now, we were really together, His heart is in this, my heart is in this and we found a way to to find common ground. So I pay attention to those things, I hope, when my collaborators share with me, and then I'm trying to take more risks in revealing who I really am. And I do think that that's what the audience wants. It's what drew me to movies in the first place I was seeing behind the facade of characters and recognizing, oh, you look like you have it together, but you are hurting as much as I am. You are just as has fumbling and trying to do the best you can, as I am. That is just so relieving to know I'm not the only one and I really want to offer that in my work to my readers and to film audiences. And where can people find out more about you and the work that you're doing? I let's see I don't have a huge social media presence. I'm so I don't have a website to send send you to

Alex Ferrari 1:22:42
So then just on Amazon by the Hollywood standard.

Chris Riley 1:22:46
Yeah, by the Hollywood standard. There's a little blurb in the back about what I do. I I teach screenwriting I, I write screenwriting books, and I write movies and tv

Alex Ferrari 1:23:00
I'll put I'll put your IMDb link and a link to the book in the show notes, Chris. So thank you. Thank you so much for being on the show. It has been a pleasure having you and and thank you for dropping these amazing knowledge bombs on the tribe today. So thanks again, my friend.

Chris Riley 1:23:15
Hey, it's been a delight. Thanks, Alex.

Alex Ferrari 1:23:19
I want to thank Chris so much for coming on the show and sharing his formatting knowledge with the tribe today. Thank you so much, Chris. If you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, including links to his book, The Hollywood standard, please head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/095. And if you want to go into a deeper dive into formatting, you should check out ifH Academy's foundations of screenwriting formatting course. And you can check that out at IFHacademy.com. And currently is on Black Friday sale for just 27 bucks. So head over to if h academy.com. Thank you so much for listening, guys. Happy turkey day, have a great and safe holiday. As always keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.


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