BPS 094: Deconstructing the Emotional Pulse of Your Screenplay with James V. Hart

I’m so excited to bring this episode to the BPS Tribe. Today we have legendary screenwriter James V. Hart. James is the screenwriter behind some of Hollywood’s biggest blockbusters like HOOK, directed by Steven Spielberg based on an idea by Hart’s then 6-year-old son, Jake, BRAM STOKER’S DRACULA, directed by Francis Ford Coppola, MUPPET TREASURE ISLAND, directed by Brian Henson, and CONTACT, directed by Robert Zemeckis. MARY SHELLEY’S FRANKENSTEIN, TUCK EVERLASTING, AUGUST RUSH, SAHARA, LARA CROFT: TOMB RAIDER: THE CRADLE OF LIFE, AUGUST RUSH and many more.

“No one has a job in our business until you type ‘the end’.” — James V. Hart

Dracula has a special place in my heart as it is one of the major influences that made me become a filmmaker.

James has served on the faculty of the Columbia University Graduate Film program. Served as mentor and advisor at the Austin Writer’s Ranch, Sundance Film Labs, and the Equinoxe-Europe Writing Workshops for over 20 years in 11 countries. Hart has also conducted the Puglia Experience for writers and producers held in the Puglia region in Italy.

During the making of Dracula Francis Ford Coppola called James up and told him he hated everything about the story and the movie they had shot. James sat down with Francis and beat up the film and story. Frustrated that this happened, James set out to develop a tool that could help him map out the screenplay’s emotion before they ever start shooting.  The HART CHART was born.

Originally launched online at the 2015 Austin Film Festival, James has developed a proven story mapping tool for serious writers working in television, film, novels, plays, and other literary forms, with a guarantee you will never face a blank page again.

James and I discuss THE HARTCHART, his journeys in Hollywood, how he became a 20-year overnight success, what it was like working with master filmmakers like Coppola, Speilberg, and Zemeckis, and how he breakdowns a blockbuster story idea.

This is one episode for the record books. Enjoy my conversation with James V. Hart.

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Alex Ferrari 0:48
I'd like to welcome to the show James V. Hart. How you doing James?

James V. Hart 4:55
So far, so good.

Alex Ferrari 4:56
Thank you so much for coming on the show. I am We were talking a little bit before we started recording. I am a huge fan of many, many of the movies you've done you, you kind of were there at the beginning of my journey as a filmmaker with with hook and Dracula specifically and we'll we'll get into all of those as well. But I mean, you've you've done a lot, sir. In your in your, your, your tenure in Hollywood.

James V. Hart 5:23
I did have a little help. Along with substantial help.

Alex Ferrari 5:28
Yes, exactly. And it's and of course, everyone always looks at you know, your careers like yours like Oh, God, he you know, he just started off with Spielberg but now he's, he was hustling a little bit prior to hook.

James V. Hart 5:41
I was 44 years old I was the overnight sensation has been standing in the corner for 20 years.

Alex Ferrari 5:47
So let's let's get into that. How did you get started in the business?

James V. Hart 5:51
Well, I grew up in the in the 60s, went to film school at a nondescript film school in Texas and and I had always my dad was a big driving movie guy. So he was always throwing us in the car and popping popcorn and going to the movies and, and we had a place in Fort Worth called the gateway theater. So on Saturdays, my mom would dump us there. 25 cents. We got two features, five cereals, 100 cartoons, and we spent the whole day at the movies. And then we go home and reenact the film's I didn't know you could I didn't know how to how to get in the movie business. And then and then we started going as teenagers on Friday night, we got really interesting. But I became obsessed with films and from very early stage and my parents were their credit never talked me out of it. And we didn't know. So I went to SMU which had no very little known film school but a gentleman named William Jones. Are the head of our department brought in some of the hidden relationships all over him all over the country. I mean, George Roy Hill came to you in 1969 with a wet gate answer print but you don't know what that is a way to answer.

Alex Ferrari 7:08
I actually didn't answer but I actually I actually shot film back in the day so I I'm aware I am a wet gate answer print of Butch and Sundance.

James V. Hart 7:17
Nobody seen it. There were just 30 of us. We spent five hours of George Roy Hill after watching the movie discussing Alan pakula brought still cuckoo Dennis Hopper hidden and and jack showed up with EZ rider. And I watched you know every co ed in the room sign jack Nicholson's arm with their phone number. So we didn't have you know, we could text in those days. Right. Right. So and so and we didn't know and we weren't we weren't UCLA we weren't, you know, NYU, or neither of us in the big film schools. But we had this amazing access. I mean, Robert armour brought mash the screen, oh my god, that's at SMU and it saved the film. They were gonna dump it because the they were doing Torah Torah or some big. They were just letters. And the reaction in Texas at the at our film festival changed the course of that film. So I was I didn't know how blessed we were. I thought everybody you know,

Alex Ferrari 8:16
Robert Altman and jack nicholson and Dennis Hopper walk and

James V. Hart 8:19
you're hanging out with him and stuff, you know, and and so and we made films, we made narrative, you know, 30 minute color films and at SMU and just nondescript film school and decided that, you know, I didn't go to Vietnam, I got lucky. And I just told my mom and dad I wanted to make a movie business.

Alex Ferrari 8:41
They said, okay, and this is what the time and this is a time when the movie business. That wasn't even a considered a career.

James V. Hart 8:48
Like that's not a thing. To the 60s and 70s were exploding in the indie film world national address. I have to point to lm Kit Carson, who came to kit was one of the leaders of the indie film movement. And David Holtzman diaries sort of set the standard the Jim McBride film, changed everything. kit was a journalist and also wrote criticism and everything was he was a an amazing person he got Wes Anderson started art BB was part of nobody starts with Andersen business. And he was part of that. So he came and lectured at our class that we only had 15 students in our film class. There were 30 in the department. Right? We were lined up bolex. As you know, I remember. And Kip came to show us David Holtzman diary, which if you haven't seen is an incredible first kind of mockumentary or first kind of documentary that wasn't really a documentary. And I asked a few questions during the session. And afterwards, he said, Come on, let's go have coffee. And he took me to the on the campus there and we went to the student center had coffee and he basically was saying, This is what you're going to do. You're going to Right. And in those days you didn't think about being a writer you thought about being a director, the director a superstar, you know, and, and it was right he was sort of outed me and got me thinking about the possibility and associate Coppola had started zoetrope there was independent film and didn't Dennis change the world with easy writer? Five Easy Pieces. Bob mapleson them in the in the money Helman. You know, were these groundbreaking directors that were doing stuff their way. So my friend and I got in our van. We sent our movie to Francis Coppola, American zoetrope and we drove to California in our van. And we went to Los Angeles and knocked on the door there at TPC at the rave, Wilson's production company, met with him. And then we drove up to San Francisco and set in San Francisco, his office reception room for a week. Really, every day we were the guys from Texas. We came here to see Mr. Coppola. We sent him our film, you know. And the dragon lady, of course said well, you know, he's really busy. And this was a British at the very beginning of zoetrope. This was like this was I mean,

Alex Ferrari 11:18
it had THX been released yet had THX been released yet or

James V. Hart 11:21
not yet. There's just just just released. He was doing rain people, right. And so George Lucas would come in and out, you know, there was a God who did the thing, the director who did write stuff,

Alex Ferrari 11:37
which was Oh, yeah, I know. He's talking about yeah, I forgot his

James V. Hart 11:40
San Francisco directors. That whole crew was brilliant. Brilliant. cinematographers cable Deschanel, Caleb Deschanel, you know, in and out. And we sat there all week long. We're back. You know, she will, you know, he's really busy. I've told him, you're here, you know. And finally, on Friday, we didn't get the hint. You know, it's like, finally she said, you know, he's leaving for the weekend. He's really not going to be able to see you. And we said, well, we'll come back Monday. She said, Well, he's going to be gone for a very long time. So about this time I see through the little glass hallway portal window, you know, your comms Copeland, he had Jerry Garcia hair in those days. Yeah. And he opens the door and walks into the reception room, we get Mr. Copeland Mr. Kabila where the guys from Texas, and I know the dragon ladies behind us going, you know, and Francis didn't say a word. He just wheels pivots and heads right back through the door and waved at us over his shoulder and says, keep making movies. And Steven and I went, Wow, Francis Coppola just told us to keep making movies. Wow. Not knowing of course, we were being really blown off. And Francis did get Steven, my my partner then in filmmaking, a drama, or Roger Corman kill that we're shooting in Texas. So he, he did come through, but years later, when we were doing Dracula, I told him the story. And he said, You know how many guys like you showed up my office? I have no idea. I can't remember a thing about this. Thank you, sir.

Alex Ferrari 13:13
Thank you. Mr. Coppola. Thank you.

James V. Hart 13:15
That gave us the bug. We went back to Texas at Princeton Kobo said for us to keep making movies, which wasn't a lot, which was a lie,

Alex Ferrari 13:22
which wasn't a lie.

James V. Hart 13:24
So we raised money in Texas and shot a film in Europe that Leon Capitan has directed who if you google him, you'll find out who he worked with the great directors and committee directors got in a lot of festivals. Ken brought it out to LA to sell it. It was it was when Dirty Harry was popular. We were doing a European style movie about two hitchhikers from North Carolina hitchhiking around Europe during the summer. And what was happening is we're more like Truffaut, we didn't have any killings or car chases or right but it got it got us It won a lot of awards at festivals and even Peter guber saw it said, I hope my first movie is this good. So we kept being encouraged. We kept being killed with kindness. You know, and, and I didn't start writing until I wrote in high school, but I never did know it was a job. And we were raising money for another couple of other bad Texas films that were nightmares. And the scripts kept coming in and I kept going, I don't, this is not good. So my friend Bill Kirby, William Chamberlain, Kirby, the Name of the Rose, that he wrote, he did Halla he wrote how he wrote stunt man a bunch of stuff, he was my mentor. And we started writing together and wrote several scripts and never got made but they they gave us a profile. And the first script I wrote by myself, I put my put another name on it. I was embarrassed. Anybody would think that I was raving about it was called frat rats, it was basically Animal House before Animal House became a big lawsuit. But I put a name of a person on it I hated in college. So you know, they're suddenly my disguise. And then people would give me criticism, not knowing it was me, which is a huge help. And also, it also taught me to be touched with developing a thick skin. Okay, and not react. But I started writing and got some I got a couple of blessing. I got hired to write my male cheerleader story, my Texas experience, which is a terrible film, but gave me a chance to get produced and find out what it was like to get paid to write. Because that's when it changes. So So paper, right, that's when it changes.

Alex Ferrari 15:51
You'll absolutely then it becomes Siri like, Oh my god, this is real. Yeah, I remember when I got paid to direct I was like, Ah, oh my god, this is this is a thing. I can actually do this. I'm not just do I'm not actually paying for the privilege of doing that somebody actually is paying me to do it. So okay, so from your male cheerleader, Texas movie, which I'm assuming that was the one that

James V. Hart 16:11
You give me an F

Alex Ferrari 16:13
Yeah, give me that's what I thought it was. Give me an FM assuming that give me an F. From Oh god, what was the covers like something from beaver?

James V. Hart 16:22
Beaver, beaver?

Alex Ferrari 16:24
beaver view or something like that? Like, oh, wow, I saw that. I was like, Yeah. Hey, you know, hey,

James V. Hart 16:30
we also when I wrote it, I wrote mash for girls. Yeah. The producers got a hold of them. Wait, we can't do that. We can't make this movie we'd have to do to an ass and you know. Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 16:39
of course. So

James V. Hart 16:40
I watched the movie and I just go That was my last. My last comedy. Yeah, exactly. What I wrote was really Savage. And and and the way the girls talked and the way they thought. So more, it would be more

Alex Ferrari 16:53
kind of like, like Fast Times at ridgemont High because that was actually that was a more It was funny, but it was actually really raw and really authentic. But the producer Slap Shot slap shot.

James V. Hart 17:04
Shot. That's when I saw that. I went Hey, there it is. Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 17:08
yeah. So Alright, so you go from, from your male cheerleader movie. How do you go from there to working on hook? Because this is a big jump there. There's a because in the IMDb the your IMDb. There's a big gap from 1984 to 1991. And there's I'm sure some stuff happened there. But I'm really curious on you know, that doesn't have to be the whole story. But just how did you get into the office? And how did you get that gig because I'm assuming in 91. This is pre Jurassic Park. So I know during that time, because my time my timeframe, I was working in the video store from 8788 to about 93.

James V. Hart 17:48
Kevin Smith,

Alex Ferrari 17:49
yeah, it can't turn to Kevin Smith. All that. Yeah, I was that time period. So in that time period, I'm pretty much excellent in trivia, like I know, all the movies got released during that time, and you made a bunch of them in that time. And I know from my recollection, Spielberg had already Stephen had already had a couple of, he was always Steven, and he was always a hit. But a lot of people were saying, Oh, it's over for Steven, you know, it's great. He hasn't really had a big hit in a while. This is pre special in this list and pre Jurassic Park. And a butt butt hook was a big deal when it was being produced. It was like, everybody wanted to be on the set. It was huge. How did you get that gig?

James V. Hart 18:28
Well, it wasn't a gig. I created it. My son, my son at age six at the dinner table, who's now my writing partner said what a Peter Pan grew up. It was a game we played this game. I was a very successful development deal writer who wasn't getting anything made. But making a living, making living in the development. Right, you know, made a living, put kids through private school, and my son would come home and say, dad, everybody wants to know what movies you've made. And I couldn't point to give me an app. Because when you said I showed him the wall of scripts I'd written I had written for Spielberg, I'd written for Frank Marshall, I'd written for Robert Redford and Paul Newman to reunite. I mean, it had some very prestigious gigs. None of them got made. So when it came time for I decided that there were two films that I had to make Dracula and hook. And I was actually fired by CAA and let go because I hadn't had anything made and I was in my 40s while I was writing hook and Dracula. Yeah, Dracula Dracula was set up as a USA movie for television with a budget of two and a half million dollars. And dear sweet Karen Moore, who were still friends today, paid me to write that script. At the same time, I was working with Craig, Craig Baumgarten and Adelson, Greg, Greg Thompson, on a development deal at Sony and they came to me and said, What do you have that nobody wants to do? I had tried I pitched hook all over again. When my son gave me the idea that my daughter now was part of that she just read her fourth film. When we came up with hook. It was blasphemy. You know, you were treading on sacred ground. You couldn't have been have a grown up Peter Pan. Steven was trying to do Peter Pan But Michael Jackson Coppola had tried to do Peter Pan Jose for a bunch of people had wanted, but john Hughes wanted to do Peter Pan. They all kept coming up with the same idea. The darlings, go back to Neverland are the darlings children go back in there. So there's always the same story. And it wasn't until Jake said in the doing our What if game, you know, dad did Peter Pan or up and I said of course he didn't. You know, that's stupid question being a good parent that I was. And Jake said yeah, but what if Peter Pan grew up and boom, the bells and whistles went off? we pitched it all over town. Everybody passed on it. Finally Craig Baumgarten said what do you have, that nobody wants to do? And I gave my 10 pages on Huck brought in Nick castle who I adored his film. Boy, you could fly we did. We made a lowball development deal with Jess against he had at TriStar Sony TriStar as a favor. Nobody gave a shit about what we were doing. So Nick and I went off for a year and smoke cigars and, and drink single malt and, and and took this took the idea of the story. From you know, what was the worst thing I could do to Peter Pan Europe making be a lawyer? You know? So we spent a year on the script just having a ball against he leaves Sony and Robert and Mike medavoy comes in. And usually whenever you know the drill, the studio head changes everything.

Alex Ferrari 21:42
Oh, yeah. It's all painted. It's tainted.

James V. Hart 21:44
Yes. The painted it didn't work with Mike medavoy reads the script goes, wait a minute. This is huge. I don't know this is going on. I mean, I'm trying to pay the light bill. You know. And so, Mehta boy got together with CAA, and they went out to five directors over one weekend. And I still don't know who all was on that list, but I know most of them. Stephen was the one who said yes. And and my wife always knew that if Stephen found out about hope that he would do it. Because it it lay it was a it was a it hit all of us, right. In our guts. This is we were all fathers, we were you know, Dustin was older. He had kids, Robin was was turning 40 he had kids and Steven was having a new family, you know, everybody who suddenly had that Father thing going on that responsibility of what happens when you grow up and and you've forgotten your childhood. So we were actually in Wyoming. Staying with friends, we'd rent and we rented out both of our apartments. We had the kids, you know, I was trying to help with my credit card work to pay the lunch bill, Cadillac jacks. And in those days, we didn't have cell phones. I had to go downstairs to the payphone, hope my credit card work and check my answering machine remember answering?

Alex Ferrari 23:07
I do sir.

James V. Hart 23:13
And there was a entry machine from john. And the message from john Levin has been mine was my agency a and it still isn't in my representative were like 35, almost 40 years. He said, call me. There's a very big director that that wants to do hook. So I called him and we spoke and I said, if it's not Spielberg, we're not having a conversation. Anyway, that's who it is. So I went back upstairs to my kids and to Judy, and we've all been there, you know, trying to figure out where we're gonna go next. And gave him the news. And it was, you know, it was it was a tremendous, it was like it, you know, it's one of those Hollywood stories, you know, you just it happened. And so, I and I had written the script long before Spielberg was involved. Right. Just still an issue, you know, that the so much creativity? I mean, I created roofie Yeah. You know, I created that whole multi racial last white thing we could, we had Wendy grow up with it be old and we did all the stuff we'd actually there's a lot more bury in the script. And that there isn't in in the, the Disney version, you know, so if suddenly the world everything changed. And, Nick, you know, Nick, it was difficult to watch Nick be replaced because we both worked so hard on it. That's why I insist and you get story credit, but within the same period of time, I turned in Dracula, six weeks later. Now this is an agency that fired me

Alex Ferrari 24:49
and you and but were they representing you at this point,

James V. Hart 24:51
I asked him to please stay us and I'm writing these two scripts. Well, nobody's gonna do those. Just represent me until I get to that point where I'm done. And then you can cut me loose. And my lawyers tried all over town to give you nobody wanted to represent me. While I was writing these scripts, Dracula had done 100 times, nobody was going to do Dracula. Nobody want to do grown up Peter Pan, and to john lemons credit john live and took cook, to Dustin and Robin. And they went, Stephen.

Alex Ferrari 25:22
Oh, that's how it went. So it was it was through the day went apple.

James V. Hart 25:27
Smart. Exactly. And john Levin went to Winona Ryder. And nobody could believe she wanted to do Dracula and she's the one who called Francis and said, will you read this script for me? Because I needed to know if somebody wanted to play a grown up, you know? Plus, you've stuck it to him on godfather three by walking out the door. And then we got to meet Sophia. Yes, I remember. Of course. So. So in a matter of two months, I went from the Abyss to the two biggest directors and in my world wanted to do two scripts that nobody wanted to do it that everybody everybody passed on. So I didn't handle it very well, I was, you know, all these agents, and they call you back and go, Hey, we were just kidding. You know, we didn't. I didn't make decisions, but somebody else's decision, and I'm just going you're on the same writer I was when you were gonna represent me. So I'll stick with john lemon. Yeah, that's a man. And that's, that's how I got the gig. And I watched I watched two of the greatest directors in the world struggle. I have such admiration for what they had to go through to get those movies man.

Alex Ferrari 26:41
Spielberg was dope. Yeah. Cuz hook was took was a challenging film to make, technically and creatively. And I mean, that's those sets. I remember hearing stories of everybody in Hollywood had to make a trip to the set because it says was so amazing. And it was a tough sell to I personally loved hook. And I thought it was amazing. And I and it gives me warm feelings inside every time I watch it. And now more than more than ever, because now I'm that 40 something with kids. And I loved it when I was 20 something but now it completely has a completely different connotation now, like, oh, wow, shoot, it's a completely different

James V. Hart 27:22
No, you know, your kids here.

Alex Ferrari 27:24
And now my kids seating and all that kind of stuff. But then with Dracula, Dracula was that first film, I remember seeing Dracula in the theater opening, it was a huge opening, I remember was

James V. Hart 27:36
at St. Francis his life and say, and set records, nobody could believe how big

Alex Ferrari 27:41
it was. And it was, if I remember correctly, one of the best trailers I had ever seen.

James V. Hart 27:48
It again is again, it's Oh, my God,

Alex Ferrari 27:50
whatever, a lot of trailer editor I mean, because that trailer sold the movie so beautifully. And the Witcher and then went in the way Francis went about it with this old kind of like turn of the century style filmmaking and using older technologies and reversing the film, and it was just so rich and the transitions and how he was able to do it. But you were telling me a story before we started recording that Francis made a phone call to you. Can you talk a little bit about that?

James V. Hart 28:19
grant, drat when Dracula sets for being built when hook was coming down, so it's kind of a heady time for me. But we'd had we'd had we were deep in post production and had a release date right around Halloween in 1992. And Francis had been in the editing room nonstop. And we've had two or three disastrous previews. I mean, just disastrous. And I watched this courageous man go, Oh, well, it's another rewrite. Let's go back, you know, and just the studio is panicking in there, want to shut it down and come and take over and what have you. So it was about mid, late summer. We're opening in October, mid December. I get a phone call at midnight in New York, from Francis. And when you know, Mr. Coppola calls you? You? Don't you wake up? And he says, Well, okay, Jim, I want you to get on a plane in the morning and come out here as fast as you can. To the I hate the film. I hate the script. I hate you. I hate the fact you ever wrote it. I hate the actors. I hate the studio. I hate the whole idea that I ever got involved in this piece of shit. I want to show you that movie.

Alex Ferrari 29:28
Wow. That's great sales pitch. Yay. I can't wait.

James V. Hart 29:34
So the next night on there and I'm in San Francisco and to God, I don't know how long I'm gone. I don't know what's happening. I don't know. The day trip. If I'm being fired the movies you know, I don't know what's happening. So, the next evening I'm down in The Godfather screening room there zoetrope is Francis called the Bohemian amblin you know, the big, big godfather couches and cigars and wine and liquor. And two women that spoke Romanian. I don't know why. They were there. But they were these two women. I think they were, you know, bite my throat. And Francis did even come down. He called me from the penthouse. Okay, good. You're here. You're fine. Yeah. Okay. So I want you to call me after you screen the movie, and I'll come down and we'll talk. This is about 10 o'clock at night. So, by 1030, I'm drunk. By the time the film is over, I'm kidding. I'm so angry. I'm so pissed. I mean, he was right. He was a piece of shit. You know, and I had been to all the dailies that we rehearsed, when we did this incredible prep that he prepped all the prep he did. I saw the storyboards we did. The screenplay was loaded by the actors, you know, there wasn't a bunch of people saying this sucks, throw it out, they wanted to add more. And then God, how did this happen? So then Francis comes down, and is dapper, you know, you were smoking robe and a Corvette and stuff, little pointed Turkish shoes, and, you know, and all happy and said, You didn't call me? I said, Yeah, I hate you, too. So he said, let me tell you that let me like a big kid, let me tell you the film I wanted to make. And I'm glad Didn't we just make this movie, you know, and he pitched me what I thought we'd shot. But what I begin to recognize is that during the shooting we had we set in the next two weeks and went through every footage, all the footage we had and went through the existing cut. And we begin to identify pieces of narrative that the film needed not whole scenes to be reshot. But pieces, transitions, piece of narration, and insert here, you know, and I kept saying, difference, there's got to be a way to head this off in the past. So you don't want to get the editing room, you fix some of this in the script, there's got to be a way to measure that script. And, and, and manage that script. So it's telling you a whole lot more than because we had we were thought we were golden. I had the greatest record in the world. And here we are in the interview and panicked. You know, especially indie filmmakers don't have the money to bring back, you know, when owner writer and, and Gary Ali, and everything, you know, they don't have that kind of money. They they're in the editor and going, we're pumped. Right. So this is where the heart chart came from. I'll just give you an example of the we didn't shoot any new scenes, we shot pieces, we realized that we had never seen Dracula and Mina together, I mean, his wife together before he went to battle. So when she hands him the helmet, you know, and he goes off to battle. The ending was the big controversy, because the ending didn't work. The ending, she stabs him and, and, and punches the knife into him, and she's redeemed and he dies at peace, and he's redeemed. And then she walks out the door and walks into the arms of Keanu Reeves. And the audience was like booing now, and I kept saying to Francis, that's not who they want to see. They want to see when they want to see when Ana and Gary stay together somehow, forever. Yeah, forever. So he had George Lucas and Mike. Ming, Ming Gala. Yeah. Hellboy. Watch the film, to see, yeah, we've done a cut we done, we spruce it up. And we told him where we were going to fill in these blanks and that sort of thing. We got to the end, and George said, You broke your rules, you you you don't have the right ending. She has to cut off his head, which is the rules you set up in the film, to totally redeem him. She's got to complete the mission, and then not walk out the door. Any kind of reasons aren't. So I'm here, Francis calling me and he said, okay, George saw the film. And he thinks that, you know, we got to do this. And he said, and he said, Do you think we can? I think Wynonna would, you know, come back and work with Gary, if she could cut off his head. And I said, I think that's the only way you would get her back. In law, you know,

Alex Ferrari 34:12
yeah, they had a rough a rough time on that set from what I heard legendary.

James V. Hart 34:17
So we came back and put that chapel scene backup together, he had built all those sets like theater sets, so we could just fold them out. That's incredible. Wow. Save the gargoyles. So in that last scene, where you see that all of that seamless work, some of the close ups and some of the shots are shot a year apart. And you've seen what they had to do wigs they had to do all this stuff, you know, and she cuts off his head and then Roman came up with the idea of the beautiful mosaic and the sealing of them together, you know, blend together. But I kept saying there has to be a way to in the screenplay form while you're doing the script to make Are these emotional journeys, your characters are going on in their head some of those off of the path, we should have caught the fact that she had to cut off his head. You know, we'd follow the emotional journey of what Kerry always had to do to say it by cutting off her head and taking out her heart, you know, if we, if I if I had been measuring that emotional journey instead of just admit a great scene, you know? So he said, Well, why don't you start with these three questions. And he gave me three journalist questions, which was the beginning of the heart chart. And the question were very simple. And I figured if I he said, Just answer those three questions before you start anything, again, before you start a story. And so I started using the questions. And then I expanded into 10 questions. And I started drawing these charts, these actual hand drawing charts to measure the heartbeat and the emotional journey of the characters. Not an outline, not cards on the wall, because even cars on the wall I get lost. Am I emotionally where am I pace wise? Where How important is this? So the chart? The chart was like your your EKG when you get your heart? Yeah, those of you who are old enough to do that. And I saw, so we started out by drawing them. That's the Austin Film Festival, one of the very early on. Yes,

Alex Ferrari 36:17
yes. Yeah, that's it.

James V. Hart 36:19
And then in 2015, guy, Goldstein came to me who did writers do it? And he said, I can do an app. But now we're an online app. Right? That is, that is the Dracula chart. The very first chart I ever did. Okay, there, there's the drawn one. So and I started doing it at the Austin film festival every year, but doing my films. And then people said, Well, do you wrote those films? Your your, you, you know, you did that on purpose. And so we started doing other people's films I've done Jordan Peele, get out. I've done Jamie, this is eels. lala land. Bo Burnham, eighth grade, the Wedding Crashers, you know, Batman, I mean, suddenly, you start applying these principles to it. And if you just follow this, you'll never face a blank page. You'll never be you'll never be writer's block. It does. I don't believe in writer's block. But my daughter just said it yesterday on her podcast, she doesn't believe in writer's block, either. That there are ways if you know crap, you're always jumpstarting, you're always writing and answering questions and solving problems. So the heart chart is this is my booklet. It used to be printed up and given away. That's how thick it is. How thick is Robert, Mickey's book? A bit thicker. And how much dust is it collecting on your show?

Alex Ferrari 37:45
A lot.

James V. Hart 37:47
Christopher Oliver has the only book that's as thick as makitas that should be used and listened Makita to great, did a lot for the screenwriting Training Unit. This is all you need. And it says right there and never face a blank page again. You have some shitty ones, you know, but you won't be blank. So this they finally begged me to put this together at Austin. And we just started it about three or four years ago, and it's caught on. And the app, the chart you saw is now available online. And it's an opt in opt out as a monthly subscription. And you can save everything in the cloud, every conversion you make every every change you make. And if you go to the website, you can see the examples. And you can see it come to life, I needed it because it showed me an emotional journey. What was pulling my characters through the narrative is that of being pushed. And that's what I've been doing all up until Dracula, you've been pushed, pushed everything. And even even hook I learned a lot on hook a finding character. If you do this, you will be writing character driven narratives as opposed to plot driven. And it's even now being used in some by some showrunners and TV to where they can take the chart and do a whole season. You know, really lets you see on one page, the emotional journey your characters go through, instead of an outline. You know, now there's a lot of work you do before that I mean, there's a lot of writing you do before you put it on the chart. But those three questions that Francis gave me is where where this all started, I went oh my god. And then people go, Oh, that's easy. You know, what does my character want? What do they need? What are they afraid of? What do you know? What what what what is their visible tangible goal? What is you know, is it a satisfying ending to the biggest one for me is do you have a satisfying ending? Not happy, not sad, not good or bad. But have you satisfied your audience with a journey you've taken? And I know everybody's got plenty of movies and TV series where they didn't like the ending of the series or like the end of the season. They didn't like the end of the you know, like last or so last is the battle or, you know,

Alex Ferrari 39:54
a good example of a movie that a show that did had a horrible ending that people hated was lost, but another Great one I feel is breaking bad. Like brick breaking badly ending was perfect and satisfying. And like, Vince did a perfect job. And that was a heavy, that was a lot of weight to carry, because he was so good. Almost every episode of that series was amazing. And it just kind of kept growing and growing. And if he if he missed the landing, the whole thing.

James V. Hart 40:29
Right Sopranos urban the last episode of Sopranos, you know, people like are the last even the last episode of Game of Thrones, like people pulling their hair out. So these are all things that I think you can vote on. I both agree on this, there's certain storytelling principles in the ether of the universe, you can't fuck with. Yeah, you can try and they're going to get you, right, or you could learn to manage them and use them to your benefit, like structure for me isn't is not a formula structure for me is like putting in a model. It'll actually liberate you, if you know structure. So my whole thing is about structure and about character driven narratives. And it's the only way I've survived it. You know, it's not one of those things where I'm a working writer, I use this every single day in my in my craft, I'm adapting a book right now for Scott Weiner. That's how I adapt. I actually do notes. Every day, I'm using this I use these principles, these questions, these signposts in every single thing I do. And you'll see some quotes from from some pretty big writers that that didn't want to know about it until they saw what I did with the chart. They went, Oh, my God, you know more about the movie than I do. Yeah. And I directed her I wrote it. So. So it's great for threshold writers, a lot of writers that are struggling to try to figure out how to how do I get to be that they I've seen him stop in the middle of my sessions and go and solve a problem and come back and say, I just solved it. I know what I'm missing. Now. And it's, I want it to be mechanical, not some, you know, spiritual guided talent that you can only half if you're special. It really, there really is a mechanical process to what we do. as writers.

Alex Ferrari 42:13
The one thing the one thing I and I just literally just had Chris on a couple of weeks ago, again, because it was 25th anniversary of writers.

James V. Hart 42:22
And I was on the trip. Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 42:23
Yeah. And he and he's, I mean, I love Chris to death. And the one thing I was talking to him about in regards to plot and character plot and character because that's always a lot of people like on plot first only it's all only character based or um, or, you know, theme and all that. And people just try to pigeonhole themselves. But the one thing I think it was him or I think it was another guest that I spoke to, but this concept of all the great movies. What do you remember? Do you remember the plot? Or do you remember the character? Like I vaguely remember, I know I mean, I've seen all the Indiana Jones's. I remember Indiana Jones, I and I do remember some parts of Raiders of the Lost Ark plot like quote, unquote, plot, but I remember Indiana Jones. So characters are what we we don't identify with plot as a as a species. We identify with other human beings, other characters. And that's what you connect with, like you connect with Andy dufrane. In Shawshank. You know, the plot is the plot is fantastic. And but it's all about his experience in that. Did you ever heart chart Shawshank? Yes, I

James V. Hart 43:31
did. Frank. Frank, and I go way back. We did Frankenstein together. That was the last film he didn't direct. Frank talks about Shawshank in a very interesting way because a lot of writers don't want to know about structure and don't want to know about they want to be taught. They don't need any they don't have to learn anything. And Frank says will tell you that hey, I wrote Shawshank in five weeks. But he thought about it for eight years. Yes. When he sat down to write he had figured all of this out in his head structurally, character wise, where he needed a scene and why you know, he made so he did his chart in his head. Frank doesn't need my help. There's a lot of writers who do need this help. It helps a lot of threshold writers get off the dime. And I have I have writers from my Columbia classes that are now on directing and running companies and stuff and they still teach the heart chart, you know, to their incoming to their incoming writers. Shawshank Shawshank is probably one of the top 10 movies ever on anybody's list. Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 44:34
it's my number one. I

James V. Hart 44:35
mean, everyone in this industry, looked at it his character, but it's also incredibly well structured. I mean, he'll be like yo bellows get shot. You know, you had to be you had to structure that character up to that point where you could not afford to lose him. And that's the point of no return. When he's dead. all bets are off. Right? Right, cuz you were like he's gonna get out. There's hope. Oh, Gotta hope there's hope and bang, pulls you right down the chart, you're up here, going, Okay, he's got there's news he's got he's gonna outrun you right down here.

Alex Ferrari 45:10
And then of course makes the villain even the the villain, even that much more villainous and like it completely just cements him as the absolute pure personification of evil. And by the way, that move that the end and by the way, anyone who hasn't seen Shawshank, sorry, spoiler alert on all this, but if he does that, and you will talk about satisfying endings. Yeah. I mean, that is that is a satisfying ending, seeing him do what he did the the, what's his name, Clancy, Clancy Browns character, get taken off, and then he's going to basically deal with whatever he was dishing out for the last 20 years himself as a prisoner. And then just that beautiful ending and from Roma, please tell me if this is true or not. The original ending wasn't what Frank had in mind, from my understanding that the studio executive said, No, they need to see meet each other on the beach. And that was added after Is that true?

James V. Hart 46:02
Yeah, that's true. Because I do think well, and that's, that's when the foot is, I don't know, where they where they came up with that where they came up with the ending part scripts days, if my my, my whole theory is you should be able to figure that out in the script stage, you're always going to learn something new from the footage. But if you track that emotional journey of those two characters, they have to meet on the beach. They have to

Alex Ferrari 46:27
and know when you say a match, so can I just kind of dive in a little bit deeper into the heart chart, because when you're saying you're tracking the emotional journey, what is exactly the heart chart doing to the character's emotional journey? Like how are you tracking this? Because it's, it sounds fantastic, but physically, like, physically, how is it working?

James V. Hart 46:45
I wonder, but they're gonna try to call up, call up one and show you. But by answering the questions, you get a series of pluses and minuses. This is good for the character. This is bad for the character, this progresses the character. This is an obstacle that stops the character, this decision that character makes is going to have a consequence is that consequence good or bad? So you begin to measure ups and downs, got it? setbacks, successes I have, I have a signpost I call the top of the mountain. And I have another one called the Cinderella moment, I have another one called resurrection opportunity. These are terms that nobody's heard before. I have veteran writers go I've never heard of a resurrection opportunity. What a great you know, and then where it goes and why on top of the mountain what I began to learn through fairy tales and really good narrative was that there's a top of the mountain dead center in your narrative. Where's as good as you're gonna get? Your it's the success that your main characters have had or something they've accomplished, where you're going. Yes, they've done it. Is it and where is it Chris Vogler. His center is the ordeal. Right? Oh, my ordeal is over here a little deeper in the top of the mountain. is is is become a term now. And how you structure the first half of your story. But this

Alex Ferrari 48:07
is the mountain but as the top of the mountain in the first act, second act, third act.

James V. Hart 48:12
Memories dead center, middle of a second. Okay. Even if you do five acts that matter. It's the dead center of your narrative. And I begin to measure certain films and look at them and go wow, I'm right. Indeed, they're good. The first one the good. Indiana Jones, the Primo

Alex Ferrari 48:31
Raiders of Lost Ark. Yeah,

James V. Hart 48:32
literally one hour into that film. He's got the ark. He's in the truck. He's got the girl he's on the boat. He's about to get a backrub you know, and, and boom, the movie is not over. everything after that is a serious complication to whether or not he's going to make it or not, or whether he and Marian are going to survive or how they're going to get to the end of the movie. Yeah. And I and Cindy and Dracula. I went back and looked at Francis cut and I timed the rules cafe scene where he gives you the diamonds and the tears and they actually meet. He takes her back and connects with her one hour and four minutes into the two hour and seven minute film. And that's as good as it gets for them. Everything else after that is complicated. And everybody's trying to pull you down the mountain Cinderella, which is where this started. Cinderella. She goes to the ball. Everybody has her phone number. You know the prince goes I'm not dancing with the sissy Edwards anymore. Mo Who were you? You know, she achieved her goal, which was in the real story was to get to the ball and plead to the prince for her father's estate to be given back to her. The Disney paid version and made it you know, I want to get married to a handsome prince. But that's the top of the mountain that's dead center in the narrative. And what happens Oh, damn, she stays too long at the ball point of no return can't be undone. You know consequences. Plan falls apart. You know the end of the second act. She's back home to change the toilets again. You know she'd never gonna get out. resurrection Oh, there's this glass slipper that she doesn't know about circulating town looking for resurrection opportunity. It gives your it gives your character that second hope and for the third act, so and I begin to measure really good filmmaking and really good even Tarantino is heavily structured.

Alex Ferrari 50:19
Oh, see, that's the genius that's the genius of quitting is because he's his films look like they were throwing together. But even Pulp Fiction you watch Pulp Fiction

James V. Hart 50:29
is perfectly perfectly perfectly structured. No, it's insane begin to be and begin to give me the feeling that structure and character go together. They're not. They're not competing with each other they are they are complementing each other. And if you, you learn this skill, mechanically, it teaches you how to do this. I don't think we're toward teachers, right? I don't like saying teach. It gives you strategies on how you're going to compensate for your work. In our chart also tells you how long it's been since you saw a character when they entered Oh, my God, I haven't had that character in 30 pages, or 15 pages or you know, so it begins to measure a pacing for you about when your exit stage left interstage right. You know, when, when a character shows up, and what their what the impact is they have one the other characters, sometimes your characters are going in opposite directions.

Alex Ferrari 51:18
But what I love, but what I love about your book, what you're with the heart, charm, love. And trust me, I'm doing this show, I've interviewed everybody. I've talked to everybody about all their different types of structures. I'm always fascinated when I hear something new that gets me excited. Because at the end of the day, we're all trying to get to the same place and we're all it's just different maps to the same place and some people might like Vogler better or true, be better or heart better. It's all relative. But what I love about what you're talking about is that you can see visually, the entire blueprint of your story. In a good word. Oh, yeah, a map or a blueprint of the whole thing, because the cards are one thing, but you can't physically you got to go into a graded. Yeah. But visually to be able to see how the emotion of your characters and the emotion of your store is being charted. Each one along the way, is fairly powerful. And when you see like there's a, there's a dip, oh, wait a minute, there's, there's no, there's a problem here. They're flat. They're flatlining. Well, you

James V. Hart 52:21
don't want to do Yeah, right. You're flatlining, you're dead. So that means there's something wrong over here. I

Alex Ferrari 52:26
haven't seen this character for a while. Maybe we should bring this back in. That is really fascinating. Can you tell me just the resurrection moment or opportunity in Shawshank? I'm trying to think in my head. I'm like, Well, where is that? Because he's lost? Oh,

James V. Hart 52:41
yes. Yes. When the restaurateur opportunity is when he was when Morgan goes into the goes into the the, the the review that he goes through all the time, and is he's been through all of this shit. And you know, they always turn him down. And this time he goes and tells the truth. He finally stops lying. And he tells the truth to the committee.

Alex Ferrari 53:05
But that's a resurrection for red but how about for Andy? Or is there an end?

James V. Hart 53:10
I gotta go back remember the movie?

Alex Ferrari 53:11
Because because i i agree with you. I think that the main character of the movie is red. It's not it's red. Red's the storyteller. It's his point of view. Everything's coming from reds point of view. But Andy, you don't see His resurrection moment because his resurrection moment is kind of shown to us.

James V. Hart 53:28
Let me think about that. Because it could be because when Gil bellows wood character gets killed, that's that's like disaster. It's all falling apart. So it's going to come after that whatever that resurrection. Opportunity is brandies and to come after that. And it may be it may be his that may be what prompts his brilliant escape. You know, his when he when he decided to get out. So in a way what he's facing in prison after Bella's is killed and he knows he knows that he's next that you know he'd the poster is the posters his fucking resurrection opportunity.

Alex Ferrari 54:07
When the one that when he when he clicks off in that first piece of plastic comes on?

James V. Hart 54:11
Yeah, but that was years before he puts the poster up. Right? Yeah. I don't remember when he did that. But the poster. It comes after guild's death. So whatever it is, it comes after Gil's death where he gets the impetus I'm getting out of here.

Alex Ferrari 54:31
Yeah, and it's it's difficult to kind of narrow it down because red is the main character and Andy's look and Andy's the back but but we actually the the resurrection moment for Andy is actually revealed to us at the end, when his entire story is kind of laid out. You're like, Oh, that's when it happened. So it's actually shown to us, but read you're absolutely right. And it's tracked so beautifully when he just goes you just tell the truth. Oh, it's people, the people who listened to the show know my affection for Shawshank Rita Frank efra and Green Mile I love Green Mile, love, love Green Mile as well. Now what is the biggest mistake You see? screenwriters make because you work with a lot of first time screenwriters. What is the one thing that you see like, Oh, god, this is the one thing?

James V. Hart 55:14
Well, again, that's why I did the toolkit. They don't understand structure. at all, they think that they think it's, it's really not your enemy. It's your, it's your friend. And once you discover the structure doesn't make every single film the same. Even though the signposts are in my work are the same. You can rearrange them can't change, appointed, overturn, can't change, plan falls apart, can't change, resurrection opportunity can't change top in the middle. You know, if you have those four things you can write, back, you go by I try to I try to unsatisfying ending. If you if you haven't know what those are, you can write backwards, you know what your first sight has to accomplish to set you on that journey. The other thing too, is I think that they're they overwrite dialog, and they say, they're not able to write behavior into their scripts, they say everything on the on the, on the nose dialogue, or acquisition all being being verbal. So I miss behavior. And executives don't like to read behavior. They like to read dialogue with a lot of white on the page. So tell me what's going on. But good writers who can write behavior into their characters. So the plan for indie, it's being afraid of snakes? You know, there's a phobia, you know, that that you know, is going to show up again, you know, that that snakes going to show up again, it's just when so that structure is anticipation structure. Maybe it should make you anticipate not go Okay, well, here comes the part where, you know, the monster is not really dead. Yeah, we know that. He's right. It's how it's delivered. And I get the my favorite example is always tell I've worked, I watched I've worked with Robin Williams, who was he and his family were great friends. And we

Alex Ferrari 57:03
know, I can imagine, here,

James V. Hart 57:05
but I watch Robin, the best structuralists I ever saw at work was run whims. Interesting. I just think that all this stuff came out of his mind he was pulled in from everywhere, you know, and all India, he did have a great database. But I watched him film live his stand up show for HBO three nights in a row. And at the end of in, at the end of each night, he would take the card out of his back pocket and start making notes and scratch things out and move, you know, and he would he would talk to you maybe maybe had dinner before or something, he would pick your brain on something and he would show up in the show. But I watched him rearrange his his cards every night. You know, to find to try to find that smooth ride that he wanted one thing led to another but it seemed like it came out of nowhere. You know? And the for those that don't believe me if you've ever seen the history of golf? My Robin Williams

Alex Ferrari 57:57
Oh, that was an amazing I love that doesn't matter how many times you watch it? How

James V. Hart 58:01
many times you see him do it. Same fucking punch line every time. Yeah. And you're laughing at all the same players that you've heard it for the first time, that structure, you know, and all your friends that do improv and dazzle you with Oh, how do you do that? It's structure. They have a set of circumstances and a set of Givens and a set of sign posts and a set of circumstances that they always resort to, to then invent inside that box.

Alex Ferrari 58:25
And and that's the interesting because I know exactly the bit you're talking about because I pissed myself every single time I saw him play do that. And and it was so and I you know what thinking back when I when I heard him doing that bit, which is like why did the Scottish create golf, and how and then the story of the dude that actually creates it, and how he builds stages sections and it's plotting and I never thought about that in joke writing because I'm not a joke writer or stand up. But he actually structured that so beautifully. Because when you think he's done, he's like, no, wait a minute, we're gonna do this, this this 18 die, and then we're gonna do Oh, yeah, we'll throw it sand in it. We'll do this. And then hey, let's do it. Eight to 10 you're just like, oh my god, this is amazing. We're gonna throw this little ball of 1000 you're gonna feel like it's a string. We'll call it a stroke. That's right. Because every time you miss you feel like you have a heart attack.

James V. Hart 59:20
You can't you can't you can't argue that he makes that up as he goes along, but it feels like it. That was his brilliance. That was it. And also anybody knows where they say about a comedian. He has good timing or she has good time he or she really knows how to land a line or that structure.

Alex Ferrari 59:35
Interesting. Interesting. So that yeah, it was it was and i and i had a short interaction with Robin, about three months before he passed and I he was such a gentle soul. And I just, I don't know, but because you were really good friends with him. There was something I felt off when I met him. I felt this kinetic thing that was coming off of him, even though he was quiet and calm that day. But you could feel that that was just the energy. I don't know, maybe it's just me, but he's just like this, this energy that just kept going on like, Oh my god, I must be insane to deal with because he was that thing that you saw on stage.

James V. Hart 1:00:11
Yeah, he's actually very shy, right? Very common, very quiet and reserved and, but but if you threw the match in the haystack, he felt obligation to he felt that obligation to perform and entertain and make everybody feel good. But I mean, when we dinner with his kids, I mean, the kids dominate the conversation and Robin would just sit, listen, but he, he was very attentive that way. And, and it was the side of him that you don't expect to see. And also just that he had a hit a lot of things going on in his life in himself anyway. I'll do a robin story is sure, please, it's my wife and I were there with them and happened to you know, what did never show up in a routine. But, and Marsha is good, his incredible life with kids. We're still very close. We were at we went to San Francisco and I introduced him to Albert do up until the very famous French comedian who he loved. And we all went to dinner at one of their cool restaurants in San Francisco, big high ceilings, and we have a long table, you know, and everybody's looking at Robin, you know, and, and on the wall, there's a group that are from Texas, or I can say this because I'm from Texas. And when I've had big hair, you know, and they're loud and having a good time. And all of a sudden we I see Robin Robin, would you do this a lot, you know, and I watched him looking up and he was starting to get kind of nervous and like he kept looking up and it was above his woman and sitting across from us and kept looking up the ceiling. And we were going and we all sort of took sneaky peeks and and there's this giant Roach climbing the wall in this super held in ritzy high in San Francisco with this giant rush the rush is that big. It is climbing up the wall to the ceiling directly above this woman's head.

Alex Ferrari 1:02:18
And Robin she's going Oh god, no.

James V. Hart 1:02:22
Yeah, and we're all going oh my god, is it gonna fall? And she starts looking at like, looking at the table, roll it and he didn't want to call the manager over Hey, there's a fucking Russian. And finally it happened. fall right up with her hair. No, Robin falls out he cannot control his laughter any longer. He is on the floor. He is guffawing you know he is sitting with the whole replaces lit up and she's like

Alex Ferrari 1:02:52
oh my god.

James V. Hart 1:02:55
And he's like I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to you. And she stands up and announces to the whole restaurant she points writer at writer Robin says Robin Williams. You're not funny. And of course then the whole Yeah. And he bought dinner and everything else but it was it was a you couldn't It was like a guest kitchen a skit a sketch out of center nightlife. paranoid calm no sound like an old old like Charlie Chaplin, you know, BIT bit, you know, and we're all we watched it play out in real time. And it was hysterical. And also fishy. They left the restaurant but he bought dinner and the manager came out and combined and a big fucking Roach in her hair. To get it out. You don't step on it.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:41
Oh my god, I must have been amazed.

James V. Hart 1:03:45
I'm so sorry. You know, you're not funny.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:48
First of which, of course, which of course everybody knows he is

James V. Hart 1:03:52
and was quiet. When she when she said that? He started laughing Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 1:03:56
because he's like, Oh, this is brilliant. This is I can't write this you can't write that you can't write.

James V. Hart 1:04:02
And to have sat there and witnessed it. It was even like I can't believe it's gonna fall it's gonna land right on her head.

Alex Ferrari 1:04:10
We're just waiting. You know that I could just as you're telling the story my director mind is like shot here. Shout out shout of the close up eyes like you could just you're just like it's a Hitchcock scene.

James V. Hart 1:04:22
It is it is very Hitchcock you know and and of course what what we all says was a roach went up there to commit suicide it had it I'm going to dive into a bowl of spraying it you know and suffocate brooch I'm done with this world. I'm we're out of here. We're Gone. And if I'm

Alex Ferrari 1:04:41
gonna I'm gonna do this right. Let's go all the way to

James V. Hart 1:04:47
whatever if you get tired, you couldn't hold on here with you. He give up

Alex Ferrari 1:04:51
on I'm sure Robin kept going. I'm sure he kept building up a

James V. Hart 1:04:53
backstory on top of the mountain and then put into return and disaster. That's amazing. A resurrection opportunity you're not funding changes. Anyway.

Alex Ferrari 1:05:05
Um,

James V. Hart 1:05:05
that's that now I can work that into a structure lesson. Okay?

Alex Ferrari 1:05:09
Yeah, absolutely. You should absolutely work that into a structure lesson. No question.

James V. Hart 1:05:12
I have a story. I'm sorry if I digress.

Alex Ferrari 1:05:15
No, no, no, I think it's, we it's an amazing story. And it actually works about structure, you actually turned it into a structure lesson as well. Now, I wanted to ask you, well, first of all, I mean, you've written all these amazing movies and and worked with amazing people. But I mean, obviously, the top of your mountain was writing for The Muppets. Obviously.

James V. Hart 1:05:37
They were my favorite experience. I did just under Brian Henson, I just exchanged notes recently on any birthday. Yeah. That was the that was the I guess that's the cat's pajamas or the bee's knees or, you know? That's, I mean, it was totally unexpected. Brian, Brian and I had met during hook. And another book that we wanted to do the Calico was a mandamus magic, which is a Gallico. novolin. Deputy now. And they, he, we've met and like each other. And he came to me, Disney was going to pull the plug on about the dirt around. It didn't like where it was going. And they came to me and Brent said, will you read the script? We're about that we're about to lose this project. You know, and we're having problems. Can you just read it? Give me some feedback. And I read it and there was no human beings in the script. There was no Jim Hawkins there was no lunch on sir. We were all met.

Alex Ferrari 1:06:37
Bob By the way, for people who are not catching up. You wrote Treasure Island, Muppet Treasure Island. Yeah, people might not know

James V. Hart 1:06:44
I mean, I came in and put my orange water with great people like Jerry Jewell and sir bill bought a lot of stuff later, but um, and I read it and said there's no humans you can't make this movie with no humans. You can't have Jim Hawkins be a puppet and, and and Robin long john silver via puppet you can't do it. It's like Lucas when he first did star wars are all robots. You know, you got to have the human being element. You know?

Alex Ferrari 1:07:12
Is that is that true is when Star Wars when he wrote first wrote it everybody

James V. Hart 1:07:16
was CPU Ember CPU and our 2d two they were the heroes.

Alex Ferrari 1:07:19
Okay, right. And then look showed up afterwards. Got it.

James V. Hart 1:07:22
So we would shut it up at my house in the Hudson River, which and and actually Brian's brother lived nearby and we snowstorms and piles of snow. So we spent three days working on the script. And and the reason there were no humans in the script is that Frank Oz did not like to work with children. He's got 12 of his own, but it isn't my work. And so I said, Well, let me write some scenes and see if we can convince Frank. differently. So we wrote some scenes, and they were they loved the scenes because I brought some some humanity back into the story, especially the relationship between Jim and London silver has been a seminal relationship in my my upbringing about villains. I mean, I have a whole thing on villains. why they're the good guys. You know? And so it was a you're able, we were able to do that emotional connection between Jim and john. Keep all the jokes and keep all the stuff in you know, but the funny part was casting the Muppets in their various roles because they are like movie stars. Yeah, I mean, I would, I would never suggest we they are having a hard time casting Kermit. So I would suggest and Brian was it now Kermit won't play that role? He's not he won't be good in that kind of part. Oh, okay. And, you know, what do we do with Miss Piggy? You know, but she had to have just the right role where she wouldn't do the film. But a bigger trailer or something. So you begin to understand that this that this, this world of Muppets is like an archeological dig. They have a history of the way movie stars have a history. Yeah. Oh, absolutely. Incredible. And and the people that created the character are the only ones that could do them. There was a big controversy when Jim died if they were going to continue to Kerman. Oh, wow. So and that's what's interesting. I mean, when Frank has his hand goes up Miss Piggy skirt. He's Miss Piggy. Nobody else is Miss Piggy, but Frank Oz. You know. And so that was interesting to see that that the guy JOHN RIZZO, you know, I can't remember the performers name but they were created by the puppet here by the puppeteer. So as long as they were alive, they did the characters. Did you had other puppeteers who came in and did this sort of characters but casting Kermit and casting Miss Piggy was the most difficult part of the of the show. And we missed we may Miss Piggy Benjamin again. We've been marooned on the island and had a string of pirate lovers including London silver, And actually it was fun to watch Frank work on set because he had he was staying character in between takes

Alex Ferrari 1:10:07
did he read it you see

James V. Hart 1:10:09
yes that's a terrible line. Brian Let's shoot it again you know about the ship and and so and Brian and Miss Piggy would have a dialogue you know between takes with Frank because Miss Piggy Same thing with Steve Whitmire, who did Kerman they would normally stay in character between takes unless they took a break and right should that you know shift the shadow. And then when my kids were with me on the set in London and we had that in your they're alive I mean they don't have eyes that don't their eyes. eyes don't move they don't have you know, they're not marionettes, right? No, No, they don't. And we're leaving the set and we let x etc think about a Brian, the end of the day and there's a whole trolley full of all the Muppets hanging and payable on their on their spikes, you know? Oh my god and Julia, who just arrived just to register for film? She was I think 10 then she free tested. Oh my god, they're dead. Yeah, I don't want to see this. I mean, their eyes are suddenly there is of course. Right? So it was and getting to work with juries rule and the whole Muppet Henson team was extraordinary.

Alex Ferrari 1:11:32
Wow, it must have been so much fun working with them

James V. Hart 1:11:34
such a culture such it's such a culture of caring and concern about character. You know, those characters don't change they're like movie stars. No absolutely themselves.

Alex Ferrari 1:11:48
My my my Kermit the Frog I grew up which was Jim and the Kermit the Frog that lives today. The character is the same. His all his principles as him as piggies is the same. gonzos is the same. It bazis is the same. It's they are they're movie stars. But they it's they're they're actually it's fascinating. I just wanted to touch really quickly. You said something very interesting. You believe villains are heroes. Yep. Can you touch on that? Because that's fascinating. I'd love to hear your take on that real quick.

James V. Hart 1:12:17
Yeah, well, villains are how I made my career. And it all started with as a kid when I again, why is why is longines over the bad guy. Why is why is Captain NEEMO the bad guy. You know, I started as a kid I'm gonna wait to make Captain even wants to end slavery. He wants to abolish weapons of mass destruction. He wants to end war. You know, I'm voting for President. You know, my guy is and then you are in any any advanced nuclear energy. So so far I'm getting people's going good, good, good nuclear energy. Well, no, no. And then he destroyed nuclear energy because he knew what we do whether we got our hands on it. I cried. When? When James Mason goes down with a Nautilus. I wanted to kill nedlands and Kirk Douglas for throwing the bottles and having him blow up his stuff. I couldn't figure out why he was the bad guy. Right? Same thing with lunch on silver lunch. And so we're taught so taught Jim Hawkins so much about being a man and being loyal and being a mate. You know, when Jim had a chance to kill, to shoot blown John's team and he's stealing the treasure he let him go. He learned so much from lunch. Same thing with with with Dracula. When I finally started researching Dracula, Dracula was a fallen angel. He wasn't a guy in a tuxedo just wants to suck your throat there was a story. So villains to me are the villains, advanced history, villains, forced society to change. You know, they force us to advance and to achieve new and also they're visionaries. We may not always agree every one of us, Jules burns. The man who conquered the world, you know, the all these guys were visionaries. JOHN, john Galt in, in atlas shrugged. The visionary didn't agree with his politics, but he was a visionary. Yeah, so the villains sort of come jumping out to me like, wait a minute, why why am Why is the villain so misunderstood? And so you know, and then suddenly, we don't have all these are all villains from literature. You know, for me, Jekyll and Hyde is a big one for me that what Robert Louis Stevenson intended? His wife burned his first manuscript. That's the one I wanted to read. Yeah, yeah, she burned it twice. Sure, it reveal too much about them, you know? He but he led it, he led a double life in real in real life. He led a double life with his mates, he would take him to London, give them nicknames, give them identities. They'd horn winch around. Then you come back up to his little Calvinists, you know, so, suddenly, the villain was more interesting to me than the hero. The least interesting character in Star Wars Luke till he finds out he was Father is in. Something's interesting.

Alex Ferrari 1:15:03
You're absolutely right.

James V. Hart 1:15:07
Harry Potter is another kid who's gonna learn bad magic for bar mitzvahs until he finds out who his father is. Right? Yeah. So it the villain is also what makes you special. And I think Bob and I both agree on this is what it's what? It's what forces the call to action which forces a hero to emerge the villain. So the hero, the hero is really indebted to the villain and I don't call them villains anymore as much as a nemesis. Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 1:15:32
right.

James V. Hart 1:15:33
The villains me sound like a cartoon cardboard thing in a video game or, you know, tort mustache twirling.

Alex Ferrari 1:15:40
And that's what and that's one of the things about villains that even without a good villain, that the story doesn't go forward. Like you could have that you could have Hercules. But without, you know, all of the the like, well, perfect example in today's age Marvel movies. I mean, Thanos was an amazing villain, and that they built it up over a decade of films and how they built that up to the point where at endgame when everybody literally the entire universe Marvel Universe has to, has to come to fight him all at the same. That's why it's that's such a cathartic moment. But that without that knows, it's just, if it's a weekly and he's not as you know, it's, it's a balance, too, because when you have when you have a villain that's so powerful, that there's no hope that he could ever be beaten, then it's like, why are we watching this? Yeah.

James V. Hart 1:16:29
And that's why Darth Vader when you get Darth Vader's backstory, and that's why Georgia there brilliant job in Jedi of actually getting to see anniken as that gentle old elder man who you can see as being Luke's father, you know, and even anniken I mean, I I do this is just to my students. Why is why is Darth Vader bad? But did he do so terrible? Well, then you go back to the lore and he went to the dark side to save his wife. Yeah, he chose, he chose the dark side, he saved his wife's life. That's love. So that also gives you some redemptive quality of this worse, the script I'm writing right now, another Gallico novel, The love of seven dolls as a horrible, terrible Nemesis in it. And, and slowly began to reveal what it why he's like this. Why he can't stand it or be anything pure and uncut. He has to corrupt everything. There's a reason why. And when you find out that reason why when you find out what that villains Achilles heel is, it's not just a way to kill them, it's a way to understand them, and empathize with them.

Alex Ferrari 1:17:34
Well, like in perfect example. Thanos he just wants to know, he is overpopulation. It's too much overpopulation in the world. My solution is wrong, which is wrong, he's not wrong, how he approaches it is wrong and that's where the villainous aspect is to these characters. But it's not like the olden twisting the mustache to be bad just to be bad there's no depth there and that's what drives a good story. I mean, James I can keep talking to you for at least two or three more hours, but I'm just gonna I'm going to ask you a few questions I asked all my guests and and and then I will leave you on to write more more things.

James V. Hart 1:18:07
All the answers are in here. Okay, www bit hard. chart.com us is a 20 inch or discount code.

Alex Ferrari 1:18:16
So what three threes? What three screenplay should every screenwriter read?

James V. Hart 1:18:22
Wow, Shawshank.

Alex Ferrari 1:18:24
Oh man after my own heart. I'm

James V. Hart 1:18:28
probably godfather one. Great. And not just a transcript of the movie, but you get you know, get the get to publish the public screenplay. I'm trying to think probably Bonnie and Clyde.

Alex Ferrari 1:18:50
Another great one.

James V. Hart 1:18:54
It's me again, with the characters, not the plot, two characters. And I would I mean, I'm proud of some of the stuff I've written. But if someone someone's read, I actually read. Actually, we'll actually have George's first American RPG script. We were supposed to try to finance it for him. Godfather one, Shawshank. I would read some TV episodes too. I'd read some I read some events, his episodes of Breaking Bad. Let's see to show you what you can do in 45 to 50 pages.

Alex Ferrari 1:19:32
That pilot is a genius.

James V. Hart 1:19:34
Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 1:19:40
If someone was going to read wonders, if someone's going to read one of your screenplays, if you're like he could only read one of my scripts. Which one is it?

James V. Hart 1:19:48
100 I read Dracula.

Alex Ferrari 1:19:49
Yeah. That would agree with you. Yeah. Yeah.

James V. Hart 1:19:52
I don't know how it exists in some form or not because we we did all that extra work. Also the August restaurant I'm real proud of August 1 of the last time I worked with Robin. I thought Pearson does such a good job directing reading that film. And it didn't get the acknowledgement that it should have, because I should have put once upon a time. It's a really it's a screenplay, right? I used everything I knew about the heart chart, everything I knew about character, everything I knew about structures in that film. And to me, there's a talk about a satisfying ending. Some people are not satisfied because they don't see them together. But for me, is credibly satisfying. He, he accomplished his goal. He brought his parents together. Now I can watch it 100 times and it still gets me every time I get to that part.

Alex Ferrari 1:20:39
Now what now What advice would you give a screenwriter trying to break into the business today?

James V. Hart 1:20:44
Well, the business has completely changed and it's wide open for for writers that way it wasn't for me when I started out. blacklist, inc, inc. Inc. Well, Austin Film Festival, screenplay contest, all of the fellowships that are being offered through Nichols and through Warner Brothers and Disney and if the international screenwriter Association, I think are wonderful. Yep, they've done a lot of I've done a lot of work for them. screencraft, stage 32 these are all platforms that didn't exist when we were trying to start out there was no helping hand. The Austin Film Festival is worth submitting to keep submitting your and your scripts are now being read. They're not just going into the black hole, they're actually being read. You know, you've got 200 readers on the on the on the blacklist that are there to find scripts, that's their job for their for their, their producers, their studios, their networks. They're they're looking that's how my daughter got her first film made was his blacklist. She just read her fourth film and Amazon I'm I'm your woman is Julia Hart. Star girl is Julia Hart. And the n plus the business is looking for the new threshold writers. There, they had it with me, you know, when they don't want to put up with us anymore. They want the new fresh voices who are coming out of not necessarily film schools, but you're coming out of workshops and masterclasses and we didn't have that access. You've also got 100 more buyers than we had.

Alex Ferrari 1:22:19
Oh 1000 probably Yeah, yeah.

James V. Hart 1:22:22
And then it'll change the COVID COVID thing will come and go, not nothing is going to go. But we'll find a way to live with it. And we're already trying to get into production. As soon as production starts. And some of that development moves off the shelf. They're looking, okay. And I think it's a great time to be a writer, especially in TV, we're finally that it is true. The writer has the power and television. You know, they used to say that and then but now it's true.

Alex Ferrari 1:22:50
What is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

James V. Hart 1:22:56
To listen? Okay? No, that's I learned that from Francis and a few other people to never be, never speak first in the meeting. And, and listen, and listen to everything they have to say. And nod your head a lot. And go, that's a good idea. Well think about that. make notes. And then go back and press two said whatever. Even if you disagree with everything they said. You know, you go back and you take you look at your notes, and the ones that keep haunting you the ones that keep coming back and bite you in the ass. Those are the ones you have to address. No, but I think listening is the listen and collaborate.

Alex Ferrari 1:23:37
And work can work.

James V. Hart 1:23:38
You don't want it you don't want to collaborate, go sculpt or you know, go do a painting. You know, we're if you if you're not able to collaborate, you're gonna have a hard time. And where can people find more about the heart chart and everything you do Heart, heart heart. chart.com is the website you'll find there. We just put up our for masterclasses that we filmed in Austin last year, they were available for a special bundle. The toolkit is there for download which I'm going to send you one good sir.

Alex Ferrari 1:24:04
Thank you. Sorry, I look forward to that.

James V. Hart 1:24:06
And the chart is a monthly subscription. You can get in and out anytime you want to it's 899 a month. But I recommend that everybody sort of spend time with the toolkit before they try the heart chart. It's a great tool I've just had just in this last week, we had like another 30 or 40 subscriptions based on the last masterclass that I did. And we're updating the we're updating the the story mapping tool all the time. You get a two week free trial, you can go in and play with the examples and see what the other films that we have there. Like us on Facebook, like us on Twitter, and I will be doing some more classes in some online classes in in 2021

Alex Ferrari 1:24:45
Sounds good. James, thank you so much for taking the time out to to share your story, share your information, and talking talking to our tribe. So I truly appreciate it and thank you for all the good work you've done through your career and continuing

James V. Hart 1:25:00
Now you've got to do what you told me you're gonna do now you know about the heart chart so yeah, I'll be talking about it Don't worry about it said you know this is a great I think what you guys are doing a great the podcast is a whole nother network that we never had access to so I appreciate the exposure. Last thing. Just remember when you're down and out on yourself that nobody no director no writer no no actor no producer no costume designer no dp nobody has a job in his business until a writer types the end so as the advice I can give you is go type the end.

Alex Ferrari 1:25:38
Thank you, James.


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BPS 093: How to Write Complex Characters with John Winston Rainey

Today on the show we have screenwriter and script doctor, John Winston Rainey. John is the co-author, along with legendary script consultant Linda Seger, of the book You Talkin’ to Me?: How to Write Great Dialogue. John has written 25 screenplays of which 3 have been produced and 10 have been optioned. He has been a script consultant since 1989 and is the author of Screenwriting Style That Sizzles: A Primer For Polishing.

John had been a writer in the film industry for 35 years and won the Writers’ Guild award for best script. He had also been head of the creative department for three different studios. He is the author of the best-selling book, “The Perfect Pitch.” He tutored John on how to write screenplays that sell, and all of John’s acting and directing experience gave him the ability to analyze dramatic writing with a fine eye and ear.

In the March/April 2003 issue of Creative Screenwriting (vol.10; #2), John’s deeply closeted script analysis service was outed when he was rated the # 1 analyst in the country. Overnight, he was flooded with work. What an astounding experience! Instead of screwing up his courage to call producers, they were calling him! And there is nothing better for learning the craft of screenwriting than to analyze lots and lots of scripts and explore ways of fixing the distractions. John started getting a reputation as a great script doctor.

As a result, he not only became a script consultant in high demand, but he has also taken numerous options (deals) on many of his own spec screenplays. He is told frequently that his scripts are easy reads and he attributes that to the writing style that he has developed, which he shares with his clients, as well as his stories. Even if producers turn down one of his scripts, they frequently ask for other scripts that he has written. He has been through many development (rewriting with the producer) processes. Taking assignments and doing rewrites have been exciting creative measures of his craft.

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Alex Ferrari 0:03
I'd like to welcome the show John Winston Rainey. How you doing, John?

John Winston Rainey 2:16
Doing well, how are you doing Alex

Alex Ferrari 2:18
As good as we can be in this crazy upside down world that we live in today?

John Winston Rainey 2:22
Upside down, upside down

Alex Ferrari 2:25
I feel like we are in the upside down like Stranger Things like I keep telling people that I feel like we honestly are in Back to the Future to in the alternative timeline. Were a bit awkward. Yes, we're Biff. Biff runs the world. Yes. It's just insane world. I mean, there's a meteor coming now and

John Winston Rainey 2:49
Night before the election

Alex Ferrari 2:51
Yes, obviously, because the universe has a sense of irony.

John Winston Rainey 2:57
Well, we're we are going through a massive transition from the third dimension through the fourth dimension to the fifth dimension. So everything is becoming energy, less matter and more energy. We have to become acclimated to that. That's why we are quarantining ourselves so that we can become self sufficient, mentally and emotionally without having to go out and grab and push and shove.

Alex Ferrari 3:25
Well, well, man, I there's definitely something happening. There's no question about it. I've never seen anything like this in my lifetime.

John Winston Rainey 3:34
It is very quantum. It's very quantum very, very

Alex Ferrari 3:38
So um, so let's talk a little bit about screenwriting and that process, but before we do, how did you get into the business?

John Winston Rainey 3:48
Well, okay, so it was late at some time. And this young lady told me she didn't want to see me again. And instead of this was over a Thanksgiving weekend, and I thought, instead of crying in my beer, I'm just going to sit down this weekend, write a screenplay. I did. And I wrote, I wrote it longhand on on legal pads, because I didn't. I didn't have a computer back then. And of course, I have a huge background in acting and directing. And so you know, like, I kind of knew what dramatic fire was all about. And a friend of a friend of mine, new Ken, Rod cop, and we got the script to him. He read it. He said, Yeah, john, come on down. And so I was in his workshop for four years. I wasn't in there. Six weeks when he asked me to be his associate, which means the gopher, you know, but he's but I mean, he loved my writing and did all the way up to the day died actually passed away this past year, unfortunately. But anyway, yeah, so I wrote that script. Play that first green play got option, actually. And by Bill Duke.

Alex Ferrari 5:05
I now know Bill. Bill's a good guy.

John Winston Rainey 5:08
Yeah. Very good guy and really, really super intelligent. Very smart guy.

Alex Ferrari 5:13
Very smart.

John Winston Rainey 5:14
Yeah. Yeah. And so I went through a development process with him on that very first screenplay. And boy went to school their school there. And yeah, but before then I had been I'd been a big fan of love The Dramatic Arts, but also Joseph Campbell. The first time I read here with 1000 faces back and God I don't want to tell you, Ben because you know exactly how old I am. But, but it was, it was a long time ago. And it was extra curricular reading, you know, I didn't I just read it. Because it was there.

Alex Ferrari 5:54
It sounded interesting.

John Winston Rainey 5:56
Well, a professor that I knew, recommended it and, and so he wanted me to read it so we could discuss it. And so I knew about here 1000 paces before George Lucas started touting it.

Alex Ferrari 6:12
Well, now you give me a little bit of your age there just by saying that. Now I wanted to, I wanted to ask you in regards to the hero's journey, because the hero's journey has been, I mean, abused in Hollywood now for a very, very, very abused for four decades now. And it has been kind of set up as like that is the only way to tell a story. And that is the only story and everything falls into that story. Where I know by my own experiences and and working in speaking to other other people on the show that that the hero's journey isn't the end all be all it is one and it has a lot of elements to it. But can you talk a little bit about that? Because I always use the example of like, if you throw the hero's journey on the detective story generally does not work.

John Winston Rainey 7:06
Hey, it doesn't because the detect unless the detective has some inner issue that that needs to be resolved before you can solve the case. Because your theme really comes from Well, I mean, caffeine has two aspects to it. And I'm getting a little off subject because you have the your conceptual thematic things like racism, people call that a theme. What it's not really a theme as much as its subject matter. You know, the theme would be how does a racist you know, like take the defiant when the black band white band chained together trying to escape the law. And they hate each other primarily because they're conditioned to hate by virtue of skin color, and that's it period. And over the course of the movie, the story, they realize they have to depend on each other and they come to respect each other. So that inner journey is really the theme, coming to respect. You know, all things all life or what is considered the other. The subject matter is racism. So it's really two different aspects. But back to the hero's journey, you know, Aristotle said, you know, he said, You know, there's every story has a beginning, middle and an end. And then Gianluca dog comes along and says, Well, yeah, every story has a beginning, middle and end, but not necessarily in that order. And so you take a look at momentum, and you say, Okay, so how is that structured? Where's the beginning, middle and end up? It's there is there but you it or you take a look at traffic. There are five different stories to traffic. Each one has their own structure. It's Pulp Fiction, and Pulp Fiction, same thing. Pulp Fiction has three different structures, but the stories are just intertwined. And as yanaka dog says, you know, the the end is sometimes the beginning. There's another great movie that I like even more than Pulp Fiction is called before the rain. It's a Macedonian film written and directed by a photographer, and I can't pronounce his name mucho something or other. But it's a brilliant, brilliant movie that came out a year before Pulp Fiction, and it doesn't same thing. The theme to that is, the circle is not round. I mean, it's just so beautiful because and he does that structurally. He shows that structurally as well as thematically, I mean, as well as the character arc. So anyway, I don't know. So yeah. I don't think I'm answering your story.

Alex Ferrari 10:01
So I mean, so like, I just I just wanted to kind of, you know, bring it to to the audience the question because a lot of a lot of specially young filmmaker or young screenwriters, when they're starting out, you know, they read the hero's journey or Chris Vogler book the writers journey, which are amazing books, but not every story needs to fit in. So if you take a standard Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, Sherlock Holmes story, which Sherlock generally doesn't, it's he's not about changes, he never changes it.

John Winston Rainey 10:29
He's a James Bond type character, James Ryan doesn't change. Ethan Hawke and Mission Hospital, they don't change. The only James Bond movie that actually worked for me, in that way was Casino Royale.

Alex Ferrari 10:44
Yeah, but he changed it he changes in that movie.

John Winston Rainey 10:46
Well, that's what I'm saying. He's got an arc, he has a character arc. The rest of them, you know, they get boring after a while. Yeah, it's

Alex Ferrari 10:53
just a guy, you know, weaponized?

John Winston Rainey 10:57
You know, I think for me, actually, and this is going to shock a lot of people, one of the most boring films that I've ever watched was the hangover. Because not, you know, a lot happens and nothing changes. You know, in that in that movie, the cannabis market now there's no they don't they, they have a really nice Mercedes going to Las Vegas, they come back with a beat to shit Mercedes. And you know, and they find the guy, you know, so they succeed in their quest. But what do they learn? Now, I've had to come to terms of this, Alex, I, you know, because for me, there's no real point in telling a story, unless you have something to say in that story. And that you That's what I'm saying is really not about the plot, the plot is the vehicle, or the change that the character has to make in order to achieve whatever goal that they set out to achieve. And that goal that they set out to achieve is something that they originally were afraid to go after, but some compelling new information comes to them. And this is basic, Joseph Campbell stuff, you know, that the mentor, the boom, whatever, you know, I call it new information. And they say, oh, as strange as I am, I do have to make this emotionally challenging decision to go after it anyway. You know, and so then they do, and they get into the river, the unknown, and an act two, and, you know, and shit happens. And they have to make adjustment, inner adjustments, internal adjustments, until they finally reach some paradigm shift. And they go into Act Three. And, you know, that's the basic structure. Now, let me just say you're talking about new writers. I think that a new writer needs to learn that basic capability and structure before they try to do something really fancy when they do Pulp Fiction, or any power, or you and I think they should stick. This is for new writers. Now I think they should stick with a single protagonist. I generally separate protagonists, which is an archetypal story function story driver from main character, main character is the one that from whose perspective we see the story. And main characters, one who actually carries the emotional theme, thematic arc. They are often in Hollywood, the same character. But they are at times like a Million Dollar Baby where they are different. Right? I'm just saying Maggie drove that story in a Million Dollar Baby. But the Frankie character was the change character. He's the one that carried the emotional arc. He's the one that had to make the emotionally challenging decisions. Maggie, there was no emotionally challenging decision. I want to be a boxer. And by God, I'm going to be the best. And that was it throughout the story until she was hurt. But Frankie, all the way through. Yeah, and there are many reasons we won't get into analyzing that story. But there are many reasons why he was afraid to take her on as a boxer why he was afraid to take Iran again at the midpoint, etc, etc. Am I talking too much?

Alex Ferrari 14:20
No, no, keep going. Keep one It's fantastic.

John Winston Rainey 14:22
But But generally, I think a new writer is to combine those two aspects of character protagonist, which is the story driver, main character, which carries the emotional art makes him a singular character like Danny Kathy and a few good men. He's both protagonists he drives a story. He also has the emotional arc, he has to resolve his situation with his fear of being being compared to his very famous father litigating father and he has to resolve that And, and so he has an ally in what's his name that

Alex Ferrari 15:08
Kevin Pollak?

John Winston Rainey 15:09
Yeah, I think is it Kevin Pollak?

Alex Ferrari 15:11
Yeah. Kevin is or no Demi Moore the Demi Moore and Kevin Pollak?

John Winston Rainey 15:14
No, no, no, no Demi Moore is a conscious character. Right? He's the one yes forces him compels him to make the right choice. But the Kevin Pollak character, he's the one that corrects his his mindset about his father.

Alex Ferrari 15:31
Right, exactly.

John Winston Rainey 15:33
So really, right, what I'm saying there is the protagonist and the main character are the same. You can have in different, I'm a new writer, or someone who's you know, and there's first second third script, they need to, like, make sure they have the basic craft down the fundamentals down, then they can start, you know, playing games with it.

Alex Ferrari 15:57
Yes, the equivalent of a building a shack in your backyard before you go after a mansion or an office building.

John Winston Rainey 16:03
Well, yeah, and also, if you get it from IKEA, you want to follow the directions.

Alex Ferrari 16:08
Yeah, before you get before you start getting fancy, you should probably follow the directions. And then once you follow directions a lot and you understand the basic Yeah,

John Winston Rainey 16:16
you know, I You see, Robin, you see all these bookshelves, right? Well, I actually ordered 12 of those building Bob bookshelves or whatever, building bookcases from IKEA. And so I built one I followed the directions assiduously did I did the same thing with the second one. By the time I got to the third one, I knew what it was, by the time I got to the 12th. One, I could build those things in 20 minutes.

Alex Ferrari 16:42
Right? Cuz you have to have experience

John Winston Rainey 16:44
already. And that's exactly it. It's a craft, it's a craft. And you cannot become the artist until you first of all, have got the craft in hand. That's true of anything. You know, you go to play the piano, you start, you know, you learn your basic chords and scales and, and how to sight read in later on, you know, you start getting fancy,

Alex Ferrari 17:10
yes, get fancy. So So I wanted to ask you in regards to a specific genre film, The Revenge film, let's, I was going to use that as an example. And the revenge film, generally speaking, there is no refusal of Germany, generally speaking, like if you look at the Count of Monte Cristo, and please correct me if I'm wrong, but if you look at kind of Monte Cristo, he, it's not that he doesn't want to go is a he's afraid to go or doesn't believe he could go. But the want it's

John Winston Rainey 17:43
by going by talking about going going to break down break out of this

Alex Ferrari 17:47
event, just generally revenge and going after that, that mission. And because once he gets into jail, it's about not about his revenge sits in the background, but it's about survival. It's about trying to get and then when the moment when the moment appears that he can actually break out even if as miniscule of an idea that might be great. And then that he sees that the the old man can actually teach him all these things. And then revenge starts getting a little bit a little bit more coherent. But it's still a dream until he gets out. And then he finally go, there's no refusal there. I don't think

John Winston Rainey 18:22
well, I, I I understand your point. And, hey, you could argue that he's a, he's a, he's a victim of that circumstance. And he could be giving up, you know, like, there's no hope there's no, right that could be that could be considered as a refusal. But I'm glad you brought this point up, though, because, for me, generally, the refusal of the call is the beginning of the thematic journey. The refusal of the call bridge, you get a call to adventure, we're talking cam cam belly and structure here. For anyone who's not aware of that, me because a lot of people talk about inciting incident this and that inciting incident call to adventure can be the same, but they can also be different, right? And the refusal of the call, for me is the beginning of the thematic journey, because why would we refuse to go after something we want, except for some underlying, perhaps unconscious, like in a few good men unconscious fear, or an emotional armor that we're protecting ourselves from? And then some new information comes along, and then we said, Oh, damn, I've got to go after that. You know, I've got to take that decision. And there are there are places Yeah, I agree with you that there are Successful movies that have no refusal of the call, and I think that's a missing beat that would have enhanced the story even more. Had they had that.

Alex Ferrari 20:13
So what is the theme of a Monte Cristo? Then? Obviously revenge is the theme, but that's not a

John Winston Rainey 20:19
revenge is a Yeah, it's,

Alex Ferrari 20:21
it's the subject matter. But the thing that how does Dante change from I mean, he obviously changes a lot from before he gets, you know, you know, thrown into jail and all that stuff and to the end, but the thirst of revenge is like, towards the end, he realizes, you know, it's not worth it until he's drawn into the final

John Winston Rainey 20:42
battle. Well, and that would be if he I mean, Hamlet, the same way, right? Yeah, Hamlet, you know, he has that speech. In, in Act five, scene one with a ratio, you know, where, you know, just let it be, you know, whatever will be will be case or restaurant, you know, he's watching, you know, they take up your skull, and then they bury over you. Yeah. And, and, and he's shocked. And he, you know, he comes to, you know, there's a Providence is part of the sparrow. And then you're in So, in a sense, it's the same thing. There's another movie too. Oh, yeah.

Alex Ferrari 21:30
The graduate. Yeah.

John Winston Rainey 21:32
You have you have Dustin Hoffman going after Katharine Ross. And you know, he's banging on the windows. You know, any finding you and they run out of the church together they now this is a this is actually a Mike Nichols, Mike Nichols touch, because they rehearse that last bit where they're in the back of a bus. Yeah, of course, of course, is that iconic scene, and the actors were so tired. You know, they they completely beat it was supposed to be a happy ending. But the actors are so tired, got the shot was over. And they just kind of let go, and they start looking at each other. Mike Nichols left that in because it's like, What now? Right? What now? Yeah. What's the point of all of this? What now? And I think it's the same thing and counter Monte Cristo. And what's the other one that I mentioned? Yeah, yeah.

Alex Ferrari 22:33
Well, I forgot the other one. But Kill Bill. Let's use it because that's a very famous revenge film. Yeah. You know, how does? How does kiddo change? From the moment when she starts to where she is? Is that the bride? The bride? Yeah. I think they called her kids and her name was kiddo. I think, arguably, but the bride Yes. The bride. The bride.

John Winston Rainey 22:58
Let's just call it

Alex Ferrari 22:59
Uma. Uma. Let's go Uma

John Winston Rainey 23:01
oh my God. He never did that again. Never did

Alex Ferrari 23:08
that again. So um, so basically, at the end, I mean, that's just such a straight revenge film. There's no Yeah, I don't even remember towards the end if she actually I think she regretted it a little bit. At the end, like she was crying and this and that, that she had to go. I can't I can't. I can't remember. Yeah, she

John Winston Rainey 23:30
you know, I mean, she'd love this guy.

Alex Ferrari 23:32
Right. And she had to kill him because of that. Sorry. Spoiler alert, everybody. It's called Kill Bill. So I mean, sorry. But um, but she did love them but yet still had to to do it. And she didn't, I think towards the end. She didn't want what she got to that moment. I think she didn't want to do it anymore. But I don't even remember if she

John Winston Rainey 23:55
says yeah, but she had to watch it. Again. This brings up Hamlet again, you know, he's not really interested in killing anymore. But he's forced into this into this short bite, kind of short bite fitting thing. charities. And so you know, and everyone winds up dying. And and you know, and it's not his fault, because he's already resolved his issue, you know, with with Claudius. So yeah, and you know, like I said, Bring up hangover again. There are if you are adept, as a storyteller as Tarantino is, some movies aside. I never got through The Hateful Eight.

Alex Ferrari 24:39
I you know what, I'll go on record stating that's my least favorite of his films. Yeah, it was it was I think it was just a lot of talkie talkie but like once upon a time in Hollywood, I thought was well. Brilliant. That was brilliant. Yeah. Well, I

John Winston Rainey 24:52
there are a lot of, you know, Pulp Fiction.

Alex Ferrari 24:54
I mean, he's he he's generally has a really good batting average

John Winston Rainey 24:58
in his career in Glorious bastards I love doing that. Matter of fact, in our book, I'm gonna quote him. But the book that we wrote the dialogue you taught that

Alex Ferrari 25:10
Yeah, the dialogue books he wrote with

John Winston Rainey 25:13
us that I use that open. Thank you. I use that opening scene of the Nazi got into the bathtub. Really? Oh, you seem

Alex Ferrari 25:25
to match. It's a masterwork that that those seven or 10 minutes is a masterwork of cinema. It's Yeah, it is so good on so many levels. it's astounding how good it is. And he has those throughout his career. I mean, he is just such a unique voice in in cinema, there is never been someone like him nor I think will ever be anyone like him.

John Winston Rainey 25:46
Well, he does pay homage to a lot of people that he would that were in the heat that influenced him, or that he was influenced by

Alex Ferrari 25:54
which which is a good it's, which is really interesting, because which kind of brings me to another point, paying homage so if you watch the movie Point Break, which is a classic 90s 80s 90s but I I don't remember because it was during my generations time, like when I woke I was I was a teenager, there was a there was a

John Winston Rainey 26:18
fight in a bar somewhere, right? There was no

Alex Ferrari 26:21
bar fight, there was no bar fight in that movie. There was fights with alcohol around but there was no bar fight. But that movie essentially was taken and re completely paid homage to and fast and furious. So fast and furious is literally a blueprint from Point Break. Yeah, yeah. I feel that's a little heavy handed as far as like if you look at like it's the same other than you just switched out surfing for

John Winston Rainey 26:50
fast cars car.

Alex Ferrari 26:51
Yeah, for car racing, and then Fast and Furious turned into james bond with cars. I mean, it's ridiculous now. But fun. So but paying Oh, Mize how careful Do you have to be because I think as a screenwriter as storytellers we're all taking from everything and everybody. Yes, you know, Tarantino as much as they might be criticized for it. Everything he does is original. He might take from other people, but he just mixes it. He's like a giant mixtape. You know, he samples from everything and create something completely new.

John Winston Rainey 27:24
And and all artists do that. There. There's some famous quotes that I don't that I forgot. But paraphrase. It's like we're, we're all thieves. You're good artists,

Alex Ferrari 27:34
good artists copy great artists steal. There you go.

John Winston Rainey 27:37
Yeah. And yeah, and, you know, I've watched tons and tons and tons of movies in my time. And you know, you don't know. Like, for instance, I don't think George Harrison was consciously copying. He said fine was with his song, My Sweet Lord. But they won the copyright thing, because I think there was like, four notes that were the same. But I don't think he was consciously. But you know, he was such a sponge from using that.

Alex Ferrari 28:14
Something's gonna pop out. Something's gonna pop out.

John Winston Rainey 28:16
Exactly. It will. You know, Dylan used to take old folk songs and just rewrite them. Yeah, just rewrite the lyrics, you know, keep the melody and, you know, that's been done since time immemorial.

Alex Ferrari 28:31
I mean, shit. So as screenwriters, especially young screenwriters starting out, I mean, obviously, read as many screenplays as you can watch as many movies as you can as as a young screenwriter. Could you take structures from older films, and kind of start using them as a starting point to and start? Yeah, I mean, start using them as a starting point to get because it's not even if you start with like, I'm going to take, do the right thing. And I'm going to take its structure, and I'm going to translate it to another language or another set of circumstances or another thing like that. But at the end, by the time you're done with it, it's changed. It just naturally changes unless you're literally ripping off dialogue. And

John Winston Rainey 29:16
you can't you can't do that structurally. I mean, yeah, I mean, songs do this all the time. You have a you have a basic chord structure. And, you know, you've got your basic 1625 chord structure, which in the 50s and 60s was used. ubiquitously. You know, as a matter of fact, I was just doing a song. Oh, I was playing the theme to the apartment. Just yesterday, I think. And it is in the key of F. And it goes f D minor. What was it F. Jose. Oh, yeah. EP D minor, and then what's up with a poor boy didn't have See no see seven a back to app. So it's basic. It's a basic structure but it's got this elaborate harmonies to it and melody to it. Yeah. And you can do the same thing with screenplays I did it with North by Northwest. I took North by Northwest beat by beat and I just totally rewrote the whole thing. different characters, different situations, different locations. Certainly different dialogue. Because, yeah, I know August funnier than

Alex Ferrari 30:31
Hitchcock's.

John Winston Rainey 30:34
Yeah. And yeah, that's it. That's a good place to start. And otherwise, I started just sit down, start writing, and then structure it after that.

Alex Ferrari 30:46
Do you outline first or do you just go?

John Winston Rainey 30:50
Mostly I just go. I just started like, and I have a, something, some impulse hits me. I can. I can tell you two quick stories about screenplays I've written. JOHN Denver, you know, bought the farm back in 1997, I think and my wife and I, a few weeks later, we drove up to IOC. She was a choreographer, and she was looking for music for her next gig. And so I was touring around in the store, and I looked up at the billboards, top 10, top 100, whatever. And john Denver's three Greatest Hits albums. Were in the top 10. And his Christmas album was number 12. I turned to my wife, I said, Why this guy had to die because he couldn't have he couldn't give his songs away the last 10 years of his life, primarily because of marital issues. You know, he married after and he married somebody that was not support anyway. So I said this guy had to die in order to make his, you know, become famous again. And she looked at me, she said, that's a screenplay. So I mean, she just said that I said, What? And so on the way home, we were talking about all kinds of Elvis sightings and things like that. And I wound up writing a story about it over the hill country western star, who was Uber famous living in bel air, and they repossess his house, any he goes up in the mountains to talk to his manager, and everyone thinks he's dead. And he can't get back to LA for a reason I got to get into and winds up on a dude ranch Chevalier horseshit for a living. You know, because no one recognizes him, I'm not gonna get into why he has a major car accident. He's out for six weeks, and they have to shave his head and

Alex Ferrari 32:49
right, and then his music starts

John Winston Rainey 32:51
blowing up again, plays movie stars blowing up. And yeah, and so he has to get back to LA and cash in. But in the meantime, he's finding out who he really is, instead of this facade. Another one was, we owned some land in Iowa. And I was walking back through and 30 acres, all forests and fields and lots of Briar patches, lots of berry bushes. And so I'm out there one day, and there's this huge briar patch, instead of going around it. I said, I'm just going to go through it until I've gotten in the middle of it. And I started getting hung up on the briars, you know, as well dressed. And, and all of a sudden, I couldn't move. And this little bit of panic went through my body. And instant I had this whole story about a briar patch that eats people. And so I wrote that that's, you know, become really popular, you know, in the option world. So,

Alex Ferrari 33:48
yeah, and that I wanted also to touch on that because this is something that a lot of screenwriters don't understand about professional screenwriters in Hollywood, is that I know guys who have, you know, made one or two massive movies like they were big, you know, giant films. And yet, when you go to their IMDb, they might have not had anything else produced with the next 10 or 15 years of their life. But they've been non stop working for all of those times and and their scripts have been optioned left and right and it gets optimal once and then it gets optioned again, and it gets moved over to another studio. And they make a living off of things that never get produced. And can you talk a little bit about that kind of like, underground world that nobody talks about?

John Winston Rainey 34:36
I actually I actually make most of my money, or a lot of my money doing what I call vanity projects. You know, people come to me and they want their life story and on film and all that and your mind is so unique and everything no one lives a unique life. I mean, you talk about structure, our lives are structured similarly. Right. But anyway, yeah, people can They want a screenplay written or you know, a producer will come to me and want a screenplay written. And my spec scripts I've had numerous options on I've got about 15 spec scripts, 1500 ami. And I've had numerous options on them because my writing is very contagious. You know, you start reading my scripting you you can't I there was a story. I was in Morocco, doing a script for a producer, actually. And he was good friends with Ridley Scott. And he read one of my samples. I'll actually the one that I just talked to you about the budget over the hill country western star, which is a basically a rom com. And so he was sitting here on the on the, on the table, and Ridley Scott was hanging with his guy over in Morocco, and not Bangladesh. What's the Marrakesh marriage? Yeah. And he was gonna go to bed and he says, Can I take this to bear with me? You know, he just needed some reading material, something to put him to sleep.

Alex Ferrari 36:13
That's all what you want to hear is like, really, Scott took my script just to go.

John Winston Rainey 36:17
Well, interestingly, he comes down the next morning, he slams my script down on the table, and he says, this damn thing kept me awake till one o'clock in the morning. And he says, Is he fast? And my producer said, Yeah, well, I'm still waiting for that phone call. But nevertheless, the point is that your writing style has to be contagious. It has to be you've got don't get it in the way of your story with your writing style. And I mean, that has to do with structure, character development, and also how you put the words on the page period. So all of those things have to come together. What was the question? Oh, what do I do I just sit down and write or do I? No,

Alex Ferrari 37:01
no, the question was just to talk a little bit about the the the whole optioning and making

John Winston Rainey 37:07
Oh, yeah, yeah, well, yeah. So you can make a whole living without ever being on IMDB

Alex Ferrari 37:13
which, which I've met. I've met so many of those screenwriters, some, some of them literally have no IMDb credits, or like one or two little ones. And then there's other guys or gals who actually have one big credit one monster credit. And then silence nothing. Yeah, but there but in town. They're known as they're doing script doctoring there. And that's a whole other script doctoring. And in that kind of world that dude make a living doing that.

John Winston Rainey 37:44
Yeah, john sales, john sales. Oh, he makes a living doctoring scripts, rewriting scripts. He makes, you know, a ton of money from the studios doing that we're used to I don't know where he is now. And then he'll take that money and he'll go and make his own indie films, you know, on you know, you know, you basically Well, now he doesn't have to find that his own films, but yeah, and melius used to do that as well. back then. He

Alex Ferrari 38:11
was he was he was amazing. Screaming he's amazing script doctor.

John Winston Rainey 38:15
Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 38:16
he wrote, I don't know if you knew this. He wrote the scene. The scene in jaws when they're drunk, right before that whole scene was on the boat in

John Winston Rainey 38:26
the boat. Getting where they get out. That's Milly's.

Alex Ferrari 38:30
Yeah Spielberg Spielberg called him it's like can you do me a favor? And he's like sure. All right, that's he for he wrote that scene like the night before.

John Winston Rainey 38:37
fingerprints all over that.

Alex Ferrari 38:40
Millie's has his fingerprints all over it all the movie brats stuff he touched at one point or another

John Winston Rainey 38:46
well and the thing is is guys like that. You know, if you give them a thank you, you know they're fine with it. Just pay me basically that's what it really is. You know, just I I've got some skill. I've got the craft and you know, I got it down. Just you know, pay me

Alex Ferrari 39:03
is like gunslingers basically you're like, yeah, you're exactly. You're good. You're a gunslinger. Like, how do you how do you clear out this? Do you need me to clear out this outlaw for you in this town for me? I just I'm I'm a mercenary.

John Winston Rainey 39:17
Yeah. IBG pieces are a few dollars more exact have gotten out of Gun Will Travel.

Alex Ferrari 39:25
Yes, no, I remember those. I remember those.

John Winston Rainey 39:28
You remember, Paladin? The Richard Boone character? No,

Alex Ferrari 39:31
I didn't remember that one. I've read. I've seen so much stuff. And especially I worked in a video store. So I saw a lot of stuff when I was very young Jared, you know, I was five years in a video store for all through like before High School and after high school and then maybe a little bit after high school before I went to college. I worked at a video store. So I watched. I watched it. I was watching films at a time or I could literally watch everything released that week. Can you remember like it was like, because they would release five movies? Six movies a week? Yeah, I would watch all of that. That was a moment in time where you could actually do that. Now that's absolutely. I need multiple lifetimes just to catch up with what's right. Now, I mean, you've worked with a lot of screenwriters in your time, what is the biggest mistake you see screenwriter, especially young screenwriters make?

John Winston Rainey 40:23
Other than writing style?

Alex Ferrari 40:25
Yes.

John Winston Rainey 40:26
Other than using too many adverbs, too many passive verbs and that sort of thing. Would you guys be crazy? Or overdoing your dialogue? Another one, I'm listening a bunch of go for. And first of all, a screenplay is a lot like a short story. And people have to absorb that is not a novel. Short Story. Yes. You know, you you have to get in under two hours, because that's about as long as the bladder lasts for your audience member. Yeah, seriously. Yeah. And, and they need to sell more salt and sugar. Yep. In the

Alex Ferrari 41:06
backend? Well, back when, when we used to be able to go to the movie theaters, not so much anymore. So we'll see what we're at.

John Winston Rainey 41:14
I mean, there, there are a bunch of them. And I actually, and I talked about writing style, because I used to say the same things over and over and over again. And I finally just wrote a book. And when somebody wants me to consult with him, I just send them to book, you know, but the other thing is not setting up the emotionally challenging decision that drives the story. I, I don't know if this is proprietary or not. But I talk about emotionally challenging decisions are dilemmas and decisions and decisions of the main character are what drive the story basically. And then you have a reaction from the antagonist. And so they have to reconsider and revise. And so the intention changes, but the object, the objective remains the same. And those decisions are not well set up. And often people will put those major emotionally challenging just decisions off screen somewhere. And you can't do that. You got to put it on the page. And also overriding shame. That's another one. You know, that's a technical issue. So

Alex Ferrari 42:38
you mean to tell me this should be as little whitespace on this on the page as possible?

John Winston Rainey 42:44
As much?

Alex Ferrari 42:45
Exactly.

John Winston Rainey 42:47
Yeah, this is a case in screenwriting. This is a case where less is definitely more but you have to have the you have to have the correct less. In the right words. Choose every single word.

Alex Ferrari 43:02
I mean, I'll tell you when I wrote I mean, I've written screenplays in my career. But uh, but I've written I read I read a both I read two nonfiction books. One was based on a story of my life because my life was very interesting, sir, thank you very much. And it, but I found it so freeing writing a book. Because I did not have to be so easy. I found it's so much easier writing 60,000 words than it is writing whatever the amount of words is in a 90 minute screenplay. Because in the screenplay, you have to be so surgical, so surgical with your words, but in a novel, you could just and that he floated across the screen, and he did this. And you could just, you could just like, paint the picture. You could take a paragraph just to discuss how the wall looked if the wall is really important, but in the screenplay, you've got three words to explain the wall.

John Winston Rainey 44:00
Yeah, no, that's a designer's job.

Alex Ferrari 44:04
Right,

John Winston Rainey 44:05
but how can we make this wall important? There's a character in the story. So how can Yeah, yeah, so yeah, that and the way to do that Alex is you know, I'm a big one for avoiding adverbs at all costs. And if you choose the correct action verb, you will not need an adverb do not need the modifier. Also, never, ever I've written entire screenplays with not a single adverb, passive verb helping verb or passive present tense. And I challenged myself all the time there time. There are times when, you know, I'll spend an hour on a sentence on a single sentence, you know, and and I'm Believe me I'm, I'm not shy about going to thesauruses dictionaries and I'll look all around. So yeah, next to songwriting and writing poetry within a particular form, screenwriting is right up there with those guys.

It's like the Haiku of writing. It is Haiku. If you approach it like it's Haiku, yes, you will get you will get better. Absolutely. No, you cannot you cannot just sit there and, and splashing on the page, you have to, you know, maybe that's good for you to get your story out, then go back and rework that damn thing. So yeah,

Alex Ferrari 45:32
like if you I remember reading Shane Black's early screenplays and the the way he describes the scene, his descriptions were so vivid and so beautifully written, and so concise. It was wonderful. Then I read other scripts like that, literally, it's three or four paragraphs just to talk about like the alley. I'm like, dude, like, you need to move along here guys like I did the alleys. Not that. But in the writers I like the alley is. So

John Winston Rainey 46:00
the alley, the alley is for the location manager location scout.

Alex Ferrari 46:04
And that's something else I feel that a lot of young screenwriters make a mistake in is that they feel that they're almost proxy directing. When the writing I mean, worst thing you could do is put a camera move in, don't ever put a camera move in.

John Winston Rainey 46:17
I just took that note this morning, actually, I was working, I was consulting on it on the script. And I said leave the directing to the director, I said, you got you, you must acknowledge that you've got co creators here, you must lend them the space to do their work. Just all you do with a word is Be as specific as possible. And then you let them expand upon it.

Alex Ferrari 46:44
I mean, it's very similar like to an architect, the architect lays out the blueprint but blueprint. The blueprint is the foundation of everything as you're building the building. There's going to be a couple of shifts here and there. And there's going to be in the in the guy who's paying for it. This isn't Isn't this the way it is in Hollywood, the guy who's putting up the money that the finance this building is going to go You know what, I want to move that wall over there. I want to paint the pink cuz my girlfriend wants or the orange or

John Winston Rainey 47:12
what have you probably do is say, instead of making these, these studs 16 inches, what can we make them 19 inches apart? right? Exactly. It's it's all the time. And then a lot Yes, building code, but nevertheless,

Alex Ferrari 47:26
right? And they'll start doing that. And then that's when the building just doesn't if it all comes crashing down. But that's what happens in Hollywood,

John Winston Rainey 47:34
all the time. Where the structure just absolutely sucks. Now, I'm not a big one to talk about structure up front. Because I want because everything for me comes from character, right? Even structure comes from character because you have this symbiotic relationship between plot and theme. But if all of these elements together don't co here, because a producer wants to throw in because his girlfriend is acting as though she can't do that. Can she do it this way? No, no, we can. No it because it screws up your story. And I'm I'm actually amending my words here. But it yeah, it messes with the story. You can't do that, you know, write another screenplay. Don't use this one.

Alex Ferrari 48:20
Yeah, it happens.

John Winston Rainey 48:22
That's what happens in Hollywood, is they'll buy a property, and then they'll totally jacking around and rewrite them bringing theirtheir own kitchen sink for writers. And no one's communicating with anybody else. It's like, you know, well, I

Alex Ferrari 48:38
mean, it depends on I think the smart. I mean, look what Marvel did it the best as far as like they understand their properties, and they have complete control and this and when they went away from their model early on, and you can see that in I'm not sure how verse you are in the MCU. But the first film, I remember when Hulk came out angley did a Hulk years ago with Eric Bana. And oh, yeah, remember that one? It was a while ago when when the visual visual effects really not know. It didn't work out. Hulk was horrible. But they let the director and the creatives force rewrite the mythology of the Hulk. And it was this hodgepodge of craziness. He really was angry because of what his dad did to him and all this like supercycle, it was like, that's not the Hulk. We, we want to see Hulk Smash. That's what we wanted to see. We want to see Hulk Smash. I don't understand Hulk Smash. It's not complicated, but because all these other people came in. But then from that point on, they took control of their properties and and kept going. But

John Winston Rainey 49:50
yeah, but this goes back to our original topic of is there are there other stories other than the hero's journey, right? In this case, yeah, you know, and you know, I mentioned the hangover and other things like that, where you tell a story purely for entertainment, you know. And I, I had trouble getting on board with that. But

Alex Ferrari 50:17
apparently, a lot of other people didn't because it did very, very well and sponsored

John Winston Rainey 50:23
a lot a lot of movies, a lot of people just want like my brothers. I asked my brother, I said, Why do you go to the movie? She says to escape? And, okay, that's, you know, and that's what I think that's with a large a large demographic is I just wanted to go and let go of my life. What I mean?

Alex Ferrari 50:41
Yeah, absolutely. But if you look at hangover, hangover, I agree with you. They don't really change at all. I mean, there's not a change in the characters. They just don't

John Winston Rainey 50:52
they go on an adventure, essentially. But not only that, a lot of it wasn't funny to me. I mean, I could tear that thing apart, you know, but the funniest part to me actually was when the the naked Vietnamese guy. And that guy was funny.

Alex Ferrari 51:11
He's so great. Ciao. Ciao was great. There it looks so I mean, comedy is always relative. Some people will look at an airplane and go and be Blazing Saddles and get offended,

John Winston Rainey 51:20
like, Well, no, no. Okay, guy you just mentioned two of my favorite, which they're amazing.

Alex Ferrari 51:27
I mean, the airplane is is an absolute classic and so is Blazing Saddles. But there's a lot of people who look like my wife will watch airplanes. She's like, this is ridiculous. Why would I watch that? She's she does not get it. And there's so comedy is also relative. But on a structural standpoint,

John Winston Rainey 51:42
I'm so lucky. I'm still looking for the whacking material.

Alex Ferrari 51:49
Or the the the chanting or non chanting section, which is which is great, but they are Christians. But if you look at hangover, hangover one hangover two and a half or three are essentially the same.

John Winston Rainey 52:01
I don't I quit.

Alex Ferrari 52:03
When I went to see hangover two, which was basically hangover one. But in Thailand, it was all it was. It's just the exact same story.

John Winston Rainey 52:10
But just a bit Alex's because the audience loved hangover one. They love that structure. So let's give it to him again.

Alex Ferrari 52:19
Absolutely. But that same director then wrote directed Joker, which was arguably one of the better films in the comic book genre. In my opinion, I don't know what you felt about Joker, I haven't I haven't seen it. So Joker is basically a taxi driver. It's taxi driver, but with a comic book villain. And he's Travis Travis critical to the point where they hired Travis Brickell to be in the movie. So Robert De Niro is in the movie. And Scorsese was gonna originally produce it, he had to walk away from other products, because he had other projects. But I mean, it was it was so involved. So if you haven't seen Joker yet, you should watch Joker purely because it's taxi driver. That's why people were losing their mind. People were like this is because if you if you released taxi driver today, Peter wasn't that disguised? Oh, I mean, to anybody who's ever seen taxi driver could go, Oh, this takes place in the 70s. It's really I mean, he's not literally a taxi driver. But the themes, the everything. The aesthetics,

John Winston Rainey 53:26
it's like the psychotic.

Alex Ferrari 53:28
Yeah, the, the break the psychology, the psychotic breakdown, the the aesthetics of how its shot. It is so clearly taxi driver, and they make no bones about it. They're like, Oh, yeah, we weren't completely inspired by it was it was a combination of Kingdom Kingdom comedy and taxi driver. It's a mesh of those. Okay. Oh, go watch.

John Winston Rainey 53:48
You've got a lightweight. Speaking of taxi driver. You know, our title of our book is you're talking to me. The thing is, is it's a book about dialogue, how to write dialogue. Yes. I'm being revealed here. That line was improvised. Yeah, I know. It wasn't written.

Alex Ferrari 54:07
The funny thing is I one of my friends who passed away he was the first date. I think it was the first ad or the UPM on taxi driver, and he was in the room when they showed me that. Okay, so you know, he told me the solar He's like, yeah, that was just like the kind of Marty just gonna

John Winston Rainey 54:27
read it. No, no, Scorsese asked De Niro. He says, We need something with the mirror. Can you? Can you improvise something? And change? Oh, yeah, exactly. Did it once. And the gun mechanism didn't work. Right. So they had to do it again. Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 54:41
it was nuts. But those are the things that people also a lot of screenwriters also think that like, Oh, that was a genius writing like no, a lot of times they do come up with it on the set.

John Winston Rainey 54:51
Now here's, here's the thing. If I were directing something that I had written, we would first of all have a lot of table reads and I would make sure The script is ironed out. See, because I'm from the theater now. Yeah. And I've done Shakespeare and I've done Sam Shepard, and I've done all of these, you know, things in between. and I would want them to nail down the dialogue. Before we get in front of the camera. I don't want people you know, let's make sure that we have it. And we know what our beats are. We know what our our motives and intentions are. And let's, let's do it right, if you're good actors. I've worked with those actors who say, Oh, I don't want to mess up my creative thing when I would just say go back to acting school.

Alex Ferrari 55:38
Agreed. Actors need but like, like structure and understanding the craft, you need to understand the basics first, but have to have some leeway to play.

John Winston Rainey 55:47
Okay, I'll tell you that I watched, interestingly enough, I don't know how well, Jennifer Aniston is. But I saw some outtakes of her doing the same scene over and over and over again. She stuck to the script. Exactly. But every single take was different.

Alex Ferrari 56:06
Yeah, she just presented it.

John Winston Rainey 56:08
That's that's great skill. No, I think that she's in the moment. I think she's right there in that moment, and that's what what was it? Is it Sanford miser, or somebody who says that? a great actor. No, is Antonin Artaud is, the French crazy guy wrote a theater in his double. He said, a great actor is one who is able to repeat a moment as it for the first time. And that's what I'm getting at. If if the line doesn't work, let's fix the line. But then when you're in front of the camera by God deliver,

Alex Ferrari 56:51
right, exactly. But But with that said, there's also those magical moments that you can't write like in like a Midnight Cowboy in Midnight Cowboy crossing the street. I'm walking,

John Winston Rainey 57:01
walking here, yeah,

Alex Ferrari 57:03
that you can't write that you can't write. And then there was a taxi. He's like waving his hands like so.

John Winston Rainey 57:09
We actually had the same Bible on that. That that was absolutely a lot of people don't know that. That was an ad. And that taxi driver was real real.

Alex Ferrari 57:21
He almost almost ran over Dustin Hoffman.

John Winston Rainey 57:26
Writing character, though. I mean, it was brilliant. It was absolutely brilliant. Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 57:31
I know. We could keep talking for at least another two or three hours. So but I'm going to I'm going to ask you a few questions. I ask all my guests. What are three screenplays every screenwriter should read? Oh, God,

John Winston Rainey 57:43
I had no idea. I

Alex Ferrari 57:50
I I don't think three of your favorite screenplays any of them? Boy.

John Winston Rainey 57:58
Chinatown is a good one for me.

Alex Ferrari 58:03
And hang over obviously.

John Winston Rainey 58:06
You got that one? Yeah. China's chown

Alex Ferrari 58:19
if you can't come up with any other ones, that's fine.

John Winston Rainey 58:21
I mean, I I've got so many of them that I don't want to like

Alex Ferrari 58:26
me, it's not gonna be on your gravestone. You could just throw it out three names. It's fine.

John Winston Rainey 58:32
Okay, you know what? Butch Cassidy and back in the day, you know, William Goldman was the go to guy. And, and I constantly quote one of his or explain one of his scenes about, you know, Sundance, not wanting to jump off that cliff, but he has to make the emotionally challenging decision not because he's afraid of dying, because he's afraid of humiliating himself, which I think is just a brilliant, brilliant choice. You know, you know, for an actor to me. You know, that was emotionally that's what when I talk about emotionally challenging decisions. That's one of the things I talk about is fear of death. Is is less than the fear of public speaking or Yeah, or humiliation. Yeah, humiliating yourself. Yeah. So. Oh, god. What? I think you're good, man. It's a good

Alex Ferrari 59:31
it's such a crazy Sorkin Yeah. Sorkin Yeah.

John Winston Rainey 59:36
I wouldn't recommend godfather only because Coppola did his own thing. And I think for a new writer would be you know, it would take them off in a track they can't quite

Alex Ferrari 59:48
well. It's kind of like it's kind of like studying, you know, Beethoven and Mozart at the start at the start.

John Winston Rainey 59:56
Before Yeah, let's let's start with the baby stuff.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:02
Let's Yeah, exactly. Let's start reading hang over first and then we'll go into the Godfather

John Winston Rainey 1:00:08
would be would would be a distraction.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:13
Well, no, no, no, we got him. We got it. We got it.

John Winston Rainey 1:00:16
Well, no, I gave it to you know, I did copy North by Northwest but I totally changed the content, right? Well, my agent at the time he said take an old classic and then contemporize it and disguise it. And then so I had another very close friend say Oh, do North by Northwest. And so I did. And so I think that's a

Alex Ferrari 1:00:44
that's those are those are three. Great. Those are three great starting points.

John Winston Rainey 1:00:47
All right. Okay, so I'll leave that at that.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:49
Now. What advice would you give a screenwriter wanting to break into the business today?

John Winston Rainey 1:00:54
What advice when I give them? Yes. Well, what you just said read lots of screenplays, watch lots of movies, but read all the beginning books you know and read. I would suggest other than for the first two books I suggest for new writers is Bulger's book. And David tried two years book and read Linda's book to read Linda's making a good script. Great. Yep, read those three you can read the Sinfield book in the in the Michael Hague book. But also in conjunction with those books. Also study Darren Mark's book inside story because it's all about character character character character, DERA and I feel the same, that everything in a in a story comes from character, you name me something and I will take it I will track it all the way back to carry the only thing that doesn't is the outside the story genre. So the mood, the tone, the pace. And a good example of that is,you know who? Well you know who Dr. Anton Chekhov was? Yeah. And he wrote four great plays, you know, a seagull cherry orchard, three sisters and Uncle Vanya, and a bunch of one acts. And he wrote them as social satires. They were social satires and standard philosophy read them. And Constantine Stanislavski. But he says, No, no, no, these are not satire. These are tragedies. And so, and the rest is history. He produced them as tragedies instead of a social, but what I would love to do is take those plays and direct them as social satires. Okay, but anyway, the point I'm making is that everything comes from character except that except possibly genre.

Alex Ferrari 1:02:43
Now, what lesson took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

John Winston Rainey 1:02:50
Letting go

Alex Ferrari 1:02:53
Yes.

John Winston Rainey 1:02:55
Yes. Realizing that you cannot. And I actually, my father said this when I was 11 or 12 years old. But I didn't get it until many years of actually teaching piano and also consulting on screenplays that you cannot teach anything. You can facilitate another person's learning when they are ready to learn it. That's good. And, and even then you have to be able to I think the true gift of a teacher is understanding what doors are open that you can enter, and what knowledge can be dispensed as a result that will build upon what's already known. But you cannot teach and you cannot impose knowledge on anybody. That's the biggest thing I had to learn. That's great. In my obsessive compulsive manner, I had to learn to let go of needing to get other people to get something.

Alex Ferrari 1:04:06
Fair enough. And where can people find you and your work and your new book with that you wrote with Linda

John Winston Rainey 1:04:13
Well, the book is on Amazon,

Alex Ferrari 1:04:15
And the name of the book again.

John Winston Rainey 1:04:18
You talking to me? How to write great dialogue. And they can find me at john Winston rainy.com. And what else?

Alex Ferrari 1:04:29
That's pretty much covers and you do swip Consulting, and

John Winston Rainey 1:04:34
I do Yeah, I do. I I yeah, consulting analysis, but those are not the real fun things. The fun thing is just writing a good screenplay. And I do that on, you know, people hire me all the time to write a screenplay, and I'm pretty fast. Alright, and I actually am still not in the Union by design by choice. Because I can charge whatever I want to charge.

Alex Ferrari 1:05:02
Fair enough. JOHN, thank you so much for being on the show and dropping the knowledge bombs on the tribe today. I appreciate it, my friend.

John Winston Rainey 1:05:11
Well, it was it was a joy. It is absolute joy. I hope it works for you.

Alex Ferrari 1:05:16
I want to thank john for coming on the show and dropping those knowledge bombs on the tribe. Thank you so much, john. If you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, including links to his books, you talking to me how to write great dialogue and screenwriting style that sizzles. Head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/093. And if you haven't already, please head over to screenwriting podcast.com and leave a good review for the show. It really helps us out a lot. Thank you so much for listening. And as always, keep on writing no matter what. Stay safe out there. And I'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 092: Creating the Ultra-Violent World of John Wick with Derek Kolstad

Today we have a special CROSSOVER episode of the BPS Podcast. Our guest is Derek Kolstad, the genius behind the extremely successful John Wick franchise. An ex-hitman comes out of retirement to track down the gangsters that took everything from him. With New York City as his bullet-riddled playground, JOHN WICK (Keanu Reeves) is a fresh and stylized take on the “assassin genre”.

He is also the screenwriter of One in the Chamber, The Package (starring Steve Austin & Dolph Lundgren). This episode is from the archives of The Make Your Movie Podcast with Dave Bullis available from the IFH Podcast Network. Dave chats with Derek about bad movies, screenwriting, the film business, and working with Keanu Reeves.

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Alex Ferrari 0:05
Now guys, today we have a special cross over edition of the bulletproof screenwriting podcast I have today on the show, Derek Kolstad, who is the creator and screenwriter of the amazing john wick. Now this episode originally aired on the make your movie podcast hosted by Dave Bullis, which is part of the indie film hustle Podcast Network. And I had to bring this episode to the bulletproof screenwriting tribe because it is pretty remarkable. If you want to know how Derek was able to create this insanely wonderful world that john wick lives in, and how he was able to get the project up off the ground and how Keanu got involved in the whole ball of wax. This episode is for you. So enjoy this special cross over episode. Without any further ado, here is Derek Kolstad.

Dave Bullis 2:51
Joining me today is Derek Kolstad. Derek is a screenwriter of john wick, and the upcoming john wick to Derek, how are you doing today, sir?

Derek Kolstad 2:59
Doing well, man tired, I can't remember the last time I had a weekend. But those are good problems to have.

Dave Bullis 3:04
So, so just to get started, could you give us a little bit about your background?

Derek Kolstad 3:08
Yeah, I grew up in Madison, Wisconsin. You know, I'm 41 this year. And when I was a little kid in the early 80s, that's when the VHS boom happened. And, you know, people ask me how I got into this. And, you know, a lot of people don't remember but like in line at shopko, or wherever you shop, you'd have a bargain bin of VHS tapes. And my mom would would purchase them and we don't have cable, we could afford it on Sundays, especially Sunday nights PBS would actually show like the conversation of the Godfather, that kind of stuff. And so it's not downstairs, and my love of movies, you know, just began there. And what's really interesting though, is, you know, growing up Madison, Wisconsin, you have a very red family, very conservative, very supportive, like an ally coming home from sneaking into the theater, and they asked me what I had seen, and I'd seen Robocop which any other kid would have gotten into some serious trouble about. But in reality, they they looked at each other after I told them and just said, Hey, you know, we should probably support them in this. And so, you know, being a Midwestern kid though the idea of getting into film was a dream. And so when I went to college, it was for business, but I kept writing and became I worked for Dale Carnegie in Chicago. And what got me out here is my little brother called, and he's asked me how is doing like, broke down and started crying. And I'm not an emotional guy. And the realization was, I had to come out here to see if I was going to fail. It wasn't a matter of success, you know. And so I had my little golf PDI and half the backseat was taken out by a large fucking Dell computer and a CRT monitor and drove out here. You know, I was 15 years ago and apparently 15 years is an overnight success. So that's a little bit of a background man.

Dave Bullis 5:00
It was a great movie to pick By the way, Robocop.

Derek Kolstad 5:03
Oh, dude, dude. Yeah, you know the other favorite story I tell almost everyone I meet I was allowed to see, you know, raise last arc but Temple of Doom was to demon, you know? So my parents went saw it and they got back and I'm so excited to have I had my dad Sit down. Tell me that the movie right from beginning and it was awesome. So three years later realize my dad is falling asleep in the movie and just make up a story. It's still my favorite man.

Dave Bullis 5:32
That's absolute. Did you actually when you saw the movie? When you finally saw the whole movie? Did you go Wait a minute, this is nothing like what my dad said.

Derek Kolstad 5:39
Well, I could it was funny because I could tell the point where he fell asleep. You know, it was the opening sequence in Japan, which is you know, just legendary. And then you have that kind of slow jaunt between the first and second act. And my dad, my dad's notorious for falling asleep in movies, most notably animated ones. And so I mean, some of the stories we all share, is we the mood start, and I'd hear from the end of the hour. Oh, it's animated. 30 seconds later, you heard him snoring. So good guy, but still.

Dave Bullis 6:11
Yeah, my, my dad fell asleep at Star Wars Episode One. And he had like, afterward somebody asked him about the movie. And he was like, I had no idea. I don't even remember anything. So you know. So Derek, when you say, you know, you were you were in college for business? Did you actually graduate with a degree in business?

Derek Kolstad 6:32
I did. I did. And I went, got Business Administration, and then a minor in English. Well, a lot of minors, because let's be honest, it's pretty easy a bunch of minors. And then I went and worked for the family company back in Mesa, Maine, Wisconsin, which is WIC homes, which was a construction company. And then I moved to Chicago. And during this time, I was still writing, but I wasn't. I was writing short stories and screenplays I wasn't really sending them off. I was reading books about screenwriting is just in college, I suffered from insomnia. And the only thing that could actually get me to sleep is putting my dreams down on page, you know, and it wasn't until that phone call from my brother where it's like, fucking, I gotta try, you know.

Dave Bullis 7:15
So when we were writing, were you focusing on screenplays? Or do you actually, you'll focus on just writing like, you know, short stories, long stories or anything in particular,

Derek Kolstad 7:23
you know, I have huge respect for people who write novels, simply because, you know, the screenplay. It's like feigning exterior interior. It's one sentence and you read a great novel, and it's like, holy crap, they're spending time to just craft the world. And what I'm trying to do is, tell a good story that fits in 90 minutes, you know? And so what I loved about screenwriting, what I still love, love screenwriting is, I'm a tourist and fast, but more importantly, I can move from one story to the next. And that's why I like short stories as well. In fact, you know, when I was a kid, I was the guy who was teased at sleepovers because everything scared me. And so as a, you know, as a temperament to that I got into reading Stephen King and Stephen King short stories to this day, you know, are are a massive influence, and I still have them all. Behind me on my bookshelf. I mean, that, that's glory, dude, I can't I want to do what he can do in the short form, but he's the master.

Dave Bullis 8:19
Oh, absolutely. Did you have his book on writing?

Derek Kolstad 8:23
I do. It's one of the few books on writing that I I've read.

Dave Bullis 8:27
So I just what other books on writing? Do you do you recommend? You know?

Derek Kolstad 8:34
Not many. My thing is, like, just write, you know, I remember someone, I don't know what the book was, again, I'm a more of a writer nowadays and a reader. But someone told me once about the 10,000 hour rule. I don't prefer that. Yeah. In reality, like, I look at the stuff that I wrote even like four years ago. And it pales in comparison how I'm writing now simply because I've been doing it for so long, that it's not writing and rewriting especially that's where the skill comes in, it becomes like an algorithm like, it becomes something outside of the English language like you. If you make one change on page three, you know, the ripple effect, you know, to look for and to get to that stage. You just need to do it. So you know, people always like get the bad screenplay out of you in reality is that you first screenplay is terrible. And then you keep writing and writing and writing, rewriting. And at a certain point, you find your stride, not saying that everyone will become a writer, but you get better over time. And the other thing too, is, especially when I talk to college kids nowadays, I watch the films of my grandparents and my my parents. A lot of people haven't watched the films of their parents nowadays, like I'm very fluent in film, but a lot of people nowadays when you hear they haven't seen Casa Blanca are the godfathers if you name them, like you look around my office like Butch Cassidy or frickin Pulp Fiction or Miller's Crossing which is arguably my my Best Film my best. My favorite film. Watching right man? Listen.

Dave Bullis 10:06
What's that movie called? castle? What? fucker was funny? I heard Robert McKee whenever he does one of his seminars. You know, I don't know if you've read story by him, but he always shows Casablanca, like day two, or three or whatever. And he says, has anybody in here truly never seen this before? Or more people are raising their hands. And, you know, he's like, well, well, we're gonna spend the next 10 hours on this movie. So, you know, get conference funny, too.

Derek Kolstad 10:35
Because, you know, you hear when people do their top 10 lists of films, and you find yourself almost rolling your eyes like, of course, Citizen Kane. But then you put it in, and you watch it at minute 30 minute, five, you're like, God dammit. That's good. You know, and even if you're, you know, I know a lot of people who won't watch black and white films, which astounds me, you know, and yet you watch, like, for instance, it's a wonderful life. Everyone's like, Oh, that's a smarmy piece of Hollywood crap. It's an incredibly dark drama. I mean, he's killing himself. I mean, stuff like that. And when I encourage people to watch film, it's like, dude, ask your grandfather, ask your mom and dad, like, what their favorite movie movies was. Because even though, you know, the timing of movies has changed. You look at the Blue House horror movies compared to those in the 60s and 70s. They're sprinting, you know, Rosemary's Baby is really extremely slow. It's genius. But it's slow. But you have to watch at least once to respect what was going on, like, Lawrence of Arabia, you have to see once, I'm not gonna watch it again, it's long, but you have to see it once you know, just to know that everything on screen is real. They really shot that into respect that and learn from it.

Dave Bullis 11:53
Yeah, and very true. I remember in one of my film studies class in college, by the way, I have a degree in business administration, too. And I right, so you and I are very similar already. So

Derek Kolstad 12:03
I gotta admit, though, the BA degree is kind of bullshit. But you know, we got it.

Dave Bullis 12:08
Every day of my life, I tell everyone how it's bullshit. I sit here and go, like, what I still want to pay my student loan payments. I'm like, What the hell did I learned?

Derek Kolstad 12:18
Yeah, I think the big thing about college though, is it really doesn't matter. Like you know, what your degree is, you learn to learn. And I think you know, when people don't go to college and Come on, you're great. If you do to go to college, come on, you're great. But having a college degree gets you into the mailroom, you know, unless you know someone you still need to have that sadly.

Dave Bullis 12:40
And a true a lot of the positions that I see too for like anything if you want to work at the studio, or you know, like for instance Comedy Central, I just filled out an application to work there. And they all want a bachelor's degree, like that's a minimum requirement. You have to have a bachelor's in something.

Derek Kolstad 12:57
You look at guys like you know, Kevin Smith and Tarantino, br our flat men not flashing pants wrong saying they mean they're one a billion mean, these guys are incredibly talented forces nature, and yet, they're one of a kind, you know, not very few of us are, you need to actually have that degree in your belt to get into the industry. Even when it comes to, but when it comes to like screenwriting or acting, they don't care. Yeah, good is good.

Dave Bullis 13:25
Yeah, very true. And especially to cuz, you know, Tarantino, he just took a I mean, from what I've heard, he just got like a two day film course, to get an understanding and when he wrote Reservoir Dogs, that's where he met Terry Gilliam and Terry Gilliam really set him you know, this is what you have to do. And then when he finally got around to making Reservoir Dogs, he was like, prime and ready. I mean, having Terry Gilliam sort of mentor you. I mean, that was just like, you know, one genius showing another genius the way

Derek Kolstad 13:52
Oh, yeah, yeah. Well, and I remember reading an article with Django about Django and changed. And he said, the line that only Tarantino can say, and it was I had to teach myself how to make a Western. No one else can say that. I mean, Tarantino is a guy who devours film devours movies and has a respect for the shitty ones as well which you should I mean, you can you can pile shit on. Roger Corman flex, and the stuff that you know, a lot of these trauma is done and yet you watch you like to kind of get it I kind of get it and yet tanti loves it and he applies it, which is huge respect there.

Dave Bullis 14:28
I always heard Orson Welles too loved. I don't know if it's true or not, but he loved to have film parties at his house and he would show like these odd movies and I will be like, What the hell are you watching Orson? And he was like, No, this is this is just something unique and they didn't know if he was like, you know, making a joke of everybody or uses as this you know, playing is this practical joke everybody or he was dead serious.

Derek Kolstad 14:51
Well, that's what I love, though about where we are technical. Technologically. You know, when you think back that when I was in college, you know, 2020 years ago. I didn't have email yet. And there's no cell phone. And the only foreign movies that the video plays had with the douchey ones, like, of course, it's good, we want to get more that kind of stuff. But then as time progresses, and I remember being living in Chicago, and the video placed on the way had a large Asian section, as suddenly you're introduced to chalian, fat and gently and you're like, holy shit, well, how could I not know about this crap, you know? And now, you know, with Amazon and everything else, like, I can see movies like The Man from nowhere, I can see movies like I saw the devil, these ones that back in the day, I might have stumbled across on cable but now you're like, Okay, I get it.

Dave Bullis 15:43
Yeah, and it's very, it's very true to cuz I remember going to the video stores. And you know, just having like, look at different covers and stuff like that. I remember the some of the first time I discovered it. And it's like, you know, holy crap. This is freakin awesome, man.

Derek Kolstad 15:57
Yeah. Well, it's kind of funny when you think back in the day. Everything in Madison was the video station and you'd go in. And I still have a couple of horror titles just kind of emblazoned on my brain because of the whole how horrific. The VHS box looked. And you and I finally seen the movie like, Oh,

Dave Bullis 16:18
my friends. And I used to have this like little game we used to play where whoever could find the weirdest box art. That's what we did. They would have different deals like I think it was it was five movies for five nights or whatever. Yeah. And for $5. And what we do is we find like the, the craziest, like box art and whoever can find the craziest. That's one of the ones who definitely rent and stuff like that.

Derek Kolstad 16:41
What is funny about that is we used to do the whole, like, who can pick out the worst movie, right? So you get two or three movies. The problem with worst movies is they're boring. You know? You've never I mean, the worst movies that are fun to watch are actually fun to watch. When you do that. Let's find the worst you're gonna be going usually looking at your watch going, Oh, god, it's still going.

Dave Bullis 17:02
What was the worst movie I've ever seen by doing that?

Derek Kolstad 17:07
Let's see. I would argue that man skeeto is up there.

Dave Bullis 17:12
And

Derek Kolstad 17:14
they're kind of I think the worst movies I've seen tend to be the Friday night premieres on sci fi. And yet, what sci fi did is they embraced it. You know, like shark NATO. I get it. You know, you're totally making fun of the shit you're trying to, you know, give us years ago. I'll say this, that I've only walked out of two movies. The first one was the road to Melville, which was with Dana Carvey and a slew of characters back in the day. Do you read that one?

Dave Bullis 17:44
Yeah, Matthew McConaughey was in it. And a few of the I forget who the person was. But yeah, I remember wrote Well,

Derek Kolstad 17:50
it was just it was all and then the second one was sliver with Sharon Stone. Because it was like this psychosexual thriller that nothing happened. And every time we had sex, she like cried, and after about 20 minutes, I'm like, Yeah, I kind of miss the sunshine right now.

Dave Bullis 18:08
Anthony Hopkins, he was in Roseville. That's right. That's right. You know, you know, that movie was actually based off of Kellogg.

Derek Kolstad 18:15
Yeah, I know that guy. I mean, the movie is crazy. But that life story is even crazier. Still. I was really close to walk out of frickin episode one though.

Dave Bullis 18:26
Yeah, I remember episode one didn't leave much of an impression on me either.

Derek Kolstad 18:29
And I and part of the reason I stayed is, you know, everyone I was with was a massive Star Wars fan. So they had like the rose tinted spectacles on, but I was just kind of like going this whole thing's a cutscene of the PlayStation game.

Dave Bullis 18:46
When I was when I first saw it, I you know, I forget how old I was. I was like, you know, something's missing here. I I didn't mind at that point in time. I my my brain I didn't have I didn't wasn't into film like I am now you know. But something was was inside was telling me because I never felt this way about the original three, like the original three, like, I'll just watch and like I'm entertained from beginning to end. Episode One. I was kind of like, what's going on? Who's doing Who's this guy? And

Derek Kolstad 19:15
also, it's like, the plot is the is like a political Trade Organization treaty thing. You're like, wait, this is what we're after. But you know that everyone becomes a cynic at some point because I remember seeing Return of the Jedi in the theater, with my family, a bunch of friends and I was the guy I was one of those guys who was a growing number leaving going I think I hate he walks

Dave Bullis 19:41
Yeah, I don't really I haven't got that point yet where I hate the he walks but you

Derek Kolstad 19:45
will love it. Ah, I don't know why it just happens.

Dave Bullis 19:49
Well, Harrison Ford hated him right away. He called him the teddy bear picnic. You're at college. Where were you got your degree. You should writing your writing in your in your spare time. And you know, so where is it that you started to say like, you know, should I write screenplays was before your brother call to call you? Where's the answer your brother college

Derek Kolstad 20:11
I was actually in high school we went my family one on a Alaska cruise we know we saved up for this thing. And I wrote my first screenplay because I love movies on in longhand on a yellow notepad and came back and at a time, you know, we have WordPerfect and I built up a template. And I wrote it and gave it to my mom, who she gave me back my first notes, and they were brutal. And yeah, looking back and reading that first screenplay and senior notes, she was actually being very kind. I think it was just, I was I wanted to emulate what I loved, you know, and I love and I still love movies, you know, and short stories and movies were what I do, but I just want one show anybody you know, in fact, for a couple of years, the cousins, you know, I come from a large extended family. When I got someone's name, like, for Christmas, I would write them four or five stories and kind of bind it together. And that was my gift. I just enjoyed doing it. You know, it was never, it was never work. And even now, like, I would argue that your first draft of anything isn't work. That's fun. Work is the reracked and making 15 people happy and keeping it afloat, you know. But to answer your question, man, I just, I watched so many movies, and it gave me so much joy. I wanted to emulate that.

Dave Bullis 21:39
So, you know, a little feedback. So I moved to LA and then you you start writing again. So like what was your first, you know, professional screenplay that you would call it, you know, that you actually were using, as soon as I get your foot in the door, so to speak. And as far as

Derek Kolstad 21:59
the first one to get my foot in the door, I was called the wayfair. And it was a it was a sci fi thriller in the vein of matrix by way of the shining what's called and my two leads were African American. And I got a bunch of movies. I mean, got a bunch of meetings. And they were surprised because I'm a six foot two white dude with red hair. You know, they thought it was something else. But I was wanting to see Denzel Washington and who's Murtaugh? I can't remember his name right now. From

Dave Bullis 22:30
Danny Glover.

Derek Kolstad 22:31
Yeah, I wanted them. I wanted them paired up, you know. So got a lot of meetings. And, you know, what happens is, I was used to the, you know, the professional world, but you move out here and you get involved in the industry. It was different. And it was hard. And I just kind of I stepped away for a bit. And then I stepped back and I did a couple of you know, what would you call them direct to DVD or VOD movies was the package and one was one of the chamber. And they were hard, simply because you look at you look at the package. They had like 12 days to shoot. And you have very little money. And you have people who don't care because they pocketed their paycheck and other people who did care. Because it was a movie we known as movie they were part of. And so after, after those two, I was close to quitting again, because to pay the bills. Even with those I was doing a lot of nonprofit stuff like doing videos and websites for NGOs and like, and it wasn't until I wrote this wrote the screenplay called acolyte, aka simple man, that Sonia, who's we lovingly refer to as a script pitch, because she's the first line of defense for quality. She read it, and she said, I think you should try again. And a buddy of mine, Mike Callahan, who was a producer on those two titles I mentioned, introduced me to Mike Goldberg and Josh Adler were a new wave at the time. And they saved me, you know, everyone in their life at some point has individuals who saved them professionally, and those two saves me and they brought me to where I am today.

Dave Bullis 24:17
So, you know, just to dig a little deeper into the script, Eric, when you were writing out You You You told me you don't you didn't see a lot of screenwriting books. I don't know if you if you had read them at that point. But do you did you subscribe to any sort of of you know template, whether it's you know, enter if you read solipsistic Syd field screenplay, or save the cat by Blake Snyder,

Derek Kolstad 24:39
which I did. The cat I didn't say the cat that was great. I haven't read anything by Sinfield. But uh, I think my big thing is, when I was a kid, I was a my whole family were ravenous readers. You know, I would probably read when I was in grade school, I read a book a day, just because you know, I love I loved reading. And I've always been imaginative. But when you read and see where other people's stories go, it's awesome. And my favorite authors at the time were Alistair MacLean. You know, and Dashiell Hammett, and Tom Clancy, and then when I was in high school, it was shipped CIT who wrote the firm.

Dave Bullis 25:21
That was

Derek Kolstad 25:24
crap. JOHN Grisham.

Dave Bullis 25:26
Yeah, it's very, it's on my bookshelf behind me, I could just turn around.

Derek Kolstad 25:29
But a lot of like, especially when we play, you know, hearing of guns of navarone. And what I loved about his stuff is if you look at, for instance, what's the movie? Ronin did it best is? You know, at one point, Max says, ask the question, Do I know you by way of the germ or something like that? It's never addressed again. But by just by having that one line, the world kind of expands a little, like a little bit bigger, and asked him a claim. And Hitchcock especially, they would have these lines that made their their movies seem bigger and more complex than they were, when in reality, they were very simple. You know, you take john wick, I mean, it's a revenge story, but he's not. You know, I'll let people argue about it. But it's more than just the dog. You know. And I think the best movies are that it's more than just the sled, you know, Rose, but it's more than just the ring. It's more than it's it just, it hints at a larger purpose. And I think by not answering what that larger purpose is. That's where the movies I love come into play.

Dave Bullis 26:39
Yeah, and I know exactly what you mean. You know, in in john wick, you know, it is more than when they, when they do whatever happens, the dog. I don't know, if anyone who hasn't watched it yet. I probably should stop now and watch it, and then come back. So I am going to be talking about I do want to delve in deeper to the movie. But be at your I agree with you wholeheartedly. And you know, it isn't I always am fascinated when I ever, you know, talk to an accomplished screenwriter, like yourself, Derek, who, what they've read, and what method methodology they subscribe to. Cuz some people swear by, say the cat, and I've had others here on the podcast who say, Don't ever even read it, keep it away from you at all costs?

Derek Kolstad 27:17
Well, you know, everyone functions differently. everyone learns differently. I don't know, like, people ask me, like, where did these ideas come from? To be honest, I don't know, a lot of it is, you know, what I've read, and who you are and where you are, and where you see and how you see it suddenly comes into play. But what I tell everyone is, as soon as you've finished a screenplay, write the first page and the next one. Because it's kind of like, you have to keep that flame stoked, or else a lot. For me, personally, I've talked to other writers is, when I finished a screenplay, it's kind of depressing. You know, because you've been with this story. And now it's done. You're like, shit, you know, you you are crafting this world. I mean, they hand it off, you have to start the next one, or else you know, for some of us, you know, you know this, when you talk to writers, I understand a great deal why people turn to the bottle, or turn to the needle or turn elsewhere. Because when you get to the end of that novel, bring you the end of that screenplay, or even a short story, you feel very alone. But if you keep it going, you feel very alive.

Dave Bullis 28:26
So Derek, I want to ask you, are you? Are you a part of a writer's group of any kind? I mean, mean? Like, do you have like a group of that you meet with me once a month just to exchange, you know, whatever you're working on?

Derek Kolstad 28:36
I actually I don't, you know, Sonia, is very key. She comes from a house of readers as well. And so between her and Josh and Mike, they tend to be my readers. And but what I am a part of is, you know, a guy named screenwriter named Matt altman invited me to his screenwriter forum on Facebook. I can't remember what it was Josh invited me anyway. And what's really cool about that is the first thing I want to do until I, until after the first week, I realize it's just a bunch of people encouraging each other. And I think that's incredibly important. You know, to have that group of people that when you have a question to ask, they're excited to answer because you were excited to answer them. And I love it.

Dave Bullis 29:25
Yeah, I'm a part of a writer's group right now. We we started about two years ago, when it was a will. A friend of mine got inspired. Because we were watching the Oscars, and Tarantino gave a speech about Django, and it just sort of hit me like a lightning bolt. And I was like, holy crap, why don't I just that story of writers group with some of the people that I know in the area who I trust, and just see what goes from there, you know? Yeah,

Derek Kolstad 29:49
right. And that's the thing though, is like you I'd argue almost in every capacity, you can't be a solitary person. Even though I'm happiest alone. I'm happiest alone with my computer. No music on and just I love that. And yet I know if I stay within that bell jar, I'll get worse because I have to have those outward influences to make what I do better. And, you know, those who writes, I'd argue, you know, seek out even on Facebook or any other site or even locally, people who think like you, because a lot of things that you worry about, they do too. And that's important to actually connect on.

Dave Bullis 30:28
It's a very good point. And so, you know, as we know, we talked about writers groups and everything like that, you know, a little later, I wanted to ask you another question. Sorry, sorry, for the bad segue. But I, I have a note in front of me, I want to ask you say after, afterwards, but you know, as we're writing, you know, I, you, you, you had the May fers, you, and then you I assume now, once you were done that you started your next project. So what was your next project to that?

Derek Kolstad 30:58
I don't know. He's, here's the thing is I write, I write a lot, and I write fast, you know, and, but a lot of times too, and you might have been the same place, like a lot of times write the story to get it on my head. It might not be good, you know, but at the same time, like, it's haunting me that it's still in there. I think I think of stories as people in line at the bank, you know, if it's 15, deep, you're pissed. But if it's 3d be fine, you know, so I try to get those 12 out of the way. But I would argue that acolyte, which is, you know, making the rounds again, that one got me on the radar, and it was john wick. That made me may be able to say that I'm a professional screenwriter now. And you know, what's really fun about the john wick process was, I'd written it, and it was originally entitled scorn. And the character was in his early 70s, because, again, I loved the movie, Ron, and I thought, how cool would it be to grab like a comedy Jones or a, you know, a, you know, just an older actor, and do an action piece that made sense, because, you know, I just wanted to see that the dog was like 15 years old, the wife had passed two years ago. So my, my agent at the time, Charlie Ferraro, well, you know, but over UTA, he called me after the screenplay and went out and he's like, we've got like, three or four offers. And I'm not going to tell you the numbers, but I really think we should take the lowest one because they want to make it now. And you know, you got a great agent who is looking at the long game, you know, it's more important for me to get an okay payday and a made movie than a million dollars and no man movie, you know. And so, they set it up with basil monic, over at Thunder Road. And, you know, we developed a back and forth for a while, and then he went out to directors. And on a Friday afternoon at like, one o'clock, Keanu Reeves called basil. And he's like, Hey, man, I heard about this screenplay. I really liked to read it out. Can you send it over? So they couriered it over? And at 430 Keanu Reeves called back and he said, I want to do it. Now basil called me again. And I grew up with a guy. And I was I was, I was excited. No, because this is a very violent movie. And I'd love to see him do this again. And the first time I went over his house, I walked past his den. In his desk, I shoot, you know, like 200 screenplays. This guy's hobby is reading screenplays. And in that moment, it was probably the most humbling I've ever known going. Holy shit. I was one of those who picked it, you know? So that's how I want Canada and honestly, the title came about because Canada would not refer to it as scorn. You'd always refer to the project as john wick and it stuck.

Dave Bullis 33:44
You know, I, by the way, did you actually get to meet Canada? Oh, yeah.

Derek Kolstad 33:49
Yeah, I mean, Canada is a incredibly bright cat. I mean, you sit down with anyone and their first two notes. You're like, man, oh, shit. He got to his third note. I was like, damn it, that's better than what I had in mind, you know? And so he was. We spent a ton of time together on every character in every scene outside of his own. And he is equally responsible for what's up on that screen. I mean, Chad, Dave, basil, Erica, and I mean, this is an awesome production crew. But at its heart and soul, it's Canada because Canada loves the character. And I can't you know, honestly, I'm not pandering. You can ask around. You've probably heard stories, but he's a genuine dude. And he's, you know, for instance, when we shot in New York, he got to know all the guys at the coffee shop, because he would join them for their smoke breaks. And I was last day it was like saying goodbye to your best friends at camp. And you don't see that a lot with especially guys of his caliber.

Dave Bullis 34:50
Yeah, I've always heard that he is an absolutely awesome guy.

Derek Kolstad 34:53
Oh, yeah. In fact, you know, my, my most surreal story like something like that. Nice guy, but I, I like being alone. He everyone knows his address out here. You know the

Dave Bullis 35:06
little little

Derek Kolstad 35:08
buses that go by with tourists. They stopped by his house and you know all that kind of stuff. My favorite was one day we're working on john wick. His doorbell rang and he's got a little you know, you know, it's like Who's there? And this woman says, Hi, my name is so and so from Boise, Idaho or something. Huge fan of yours or just wondering the the picture and he's like, okay, she goes outside and hangs out with this teenage girl in her family for like five minutes taking pictures then comes back in. Like who does that? That's, it's unbelievable. It's awesome. But that's the kind of guy he is.

Dave Bullis 35:44
Yeah, that is absolutely hilarious. I mean, I don't know if this is true or not. But I saw that apparently, he gave his matrix two and three money away to the special effects guys. I don't know if that's true or not, but it is

Derek Kolstad 35:55
true. And the other thing that I thought was really cool is because you know, Chad was his stunt double in the matrix. He can Oh hired who's the guy who makes the custom bikes motorcycles that Jesse didn't know. I'm talking about?

Dave Bullis 36:12
Yeah, it was Jesse James for a while it wasn't it

Derek Kolstad 36:14
was I think, I think it's Jesse James. But like, Kanno as not only do they give away his bonus money he had everyone on the stunt team made customized motorcycles that were delivered by Jesse James. and stuff like that, where you know, you don't have to do that. And yeah, you could argue that he's a multi millionaire, whatever. But again, he's just he's a unique and genuine, you know, generous man.

Dave Bullis 36:41
And it's no, it's absolutely awesome. And, you know, for him to get into the john wick character, you know, when you finally saw the movie, and you finally you know, saw everything playing out, you know, what, what were your initial thoughts when you finally saw his finished product?

Derek Kolstad 36:54
That's a great question. Because we, when we saw the friends and family, you know, that like the first cut in the movie with I had no idea I because when you get to a point and rewriting, you're not seeing words anymore, you're just seeing kind of numbers, if that makes sense. And so when we saw it, I remember looking over it, it's Sonia, first join. Was it good? Like, I didn't hate it? I didn't I didn't know. And she was and she by her expression. I know, it was, you know. And the moment that hit home for me is we when we did our initial screening at the dome out here at the arclight. We're doing a q&a afterwards and said I don't it's 700 seats, and it is a pretty big forum. But I you know, I showed up and I didn't watch the movie, because at that point, you'd seen it so many times. But I scan the audience to find the people who don't want to be there. And at about minute 20 everyone would have this huge grin. And you know, my favorite movie going experience in my life. And I tell almost everyone I meet is when the raid came out. Have you seen the ride? Oh, yeah, absolutely. Okay, When the rain came out, I love the trailer. And I love to Meranti which are think that's mainly when the movie made before that. We walked into the theater with the arclight here in Pasadena and it's a smaller theater like 130 seats, or even maybe even less. And if you look at the audience, it was every sex every age, every color, every creed. It was weird. It was like a serial killers Daydream. It was bizarre. Like, if you ask people what are they here to see, you know, but we sat down it was sold out. And when the reverse door guillotine happened, I leaned forward and my seat and looked around like you did when you're 12 years old. At the end of the I was a 17 year old Korean man who's doing the same thing. And he pointed at me and mouth.

Dave Bullis 38:44
Did you see that?

Derek Kolstad 38:46
Oh, and when I watched people watching john wick, especially during that house invasion, and to see a guy who's 68 years old lean for as chairman around that may my MA my life man, you know, cuz that's, that's what that's what I wanted to bring out of people. And so I want to bring on people now, you know?

Dave Bullis 39:05
Yeah, it is phenomenal with that, you know, movies can bring people together like that.

Derek Kolstad 39:11
Especially what I loved about a john wick process or even release was the number of older people or, you know, again, yes, action movie, but it's got a huge female fan base. Just because, you know, a lot of people will say, you hear the term grounded, which means deep, elevated, which means good. You know, it's like I want to make an elevated horror, like we you know, we want to make a good horror or good action piece. And what I loved about the john wick process is from this, the original spec of the bones and the muscle mass remained the same. It was just the skin and the hair that was massaged in by everyone involved. And again, Thunder Road and the directors and Kiana about Lions Gate. They just, you know, at any point, any production, everyone hates everybody because you're just tired and yet when we do That q&a following that you just saw the joy in gone. You know, it's, it's a major miracle to have a movie made. It's even more so to have it be anything good or let alone critical and financial success. So I use the term a lot like I'm humbled and I am, you know, because, you know, you look at all the other stuff I have on my platter, it's It's horrifying, because you're like, Can I can I can I do what I just did? We'll see.

Dave Bullis 40:27
And speaking of that, you know, I saw john wick, too, was just announced.

Derek Kolstad 40:30
Yeah, yeah, in fact, I mean, he has got the latest draft his script, and we're going to be talking about this Sunday. He loves it. I mean, the body count is probably three times bigger. And that what I love about piano too, is you look at a guy who is he 5051. I don't remember. But he wants to do. He hates when people refer to what he does his stunts because it's not it's him. He's really doing this stuff. And when you look at that movie, and try to copy what he does, I can't 12 years younger than him, it's like, I can't do that. And yet he beat the shit out of himself. And he did it with a grid. And he is kind of like, you know, he sees that, like, I I love that man's workout.

Dave Bullis 41:16
And that, you know that that's awesome. And that's indicative. Everything I've always heard about Kiana was that he is, you know, a guy that's willing to go the extra mile, you know, and so when so I want to ask you is Derek is? How, from what point did you start working on john wick? Two? Did you know that? I mean, did they did they immediately greenlight it and say, Get to work on it, Derek, or did you start working on it already?

Derek Kolstad 41:39
No. I mean, I, I hadn't started working on it. Because when you start when you get a movie in production, your life is rewrite hell, and it's just, it's continual. And what I learned too, is when I was out in New York, on the shoot, it was hard for me to do anything else. Because every 10 minutes, even though you're doing very minimal labor, you have someone coming in asking, Hey, what's the nurses name? You know, the hospital, like I, who gives a shit, but, you know, they came to me for that. I spent I spent about five weeks just playing civilization five on my laptop, because I couldn't, I couldn't work on anything else, you know. And yet, you know, for a couple of days, every week, Kiana would come back, we'd have lunch, and we'd lunch with a buddy of mine named Todd, who, you know, he does all the, the, we call it all the artwork, you know, all that kind of stuff. And canowindra asked me is like, so you know, where do you see john going next, you know, how many have you seen in your head? And I liked him. I was like, I got seven. I got seven of them. And he laughed, and I pitched him two and three and four. And you could see him kind of not grow pale. But go Okay, let's just focus on the next one. All right. So I didn't start it. And to be honest, it's even in you know, even with the greenlight, we've we've chaotically gone between different storylines. And yet, what we've remained true to is, I don't want to look at it at it as a sequel, I want to look at it as you know, john wick chapter two, because what the Fast and Furious did so well is after the third one is they weren't sequels anymore. They were chapters, and I think those are the best. Those are the best franchises to have, you know, I would you know, Empire Strikes Back is not a sequel is a chapter, you know, most sequels or remakes are the first one. And with this one, you want it to be unique, but familiar, you know?

Dave Bullis 43:38
Yeah. And that's a great way to put it to different chapters.

Derek Kolstad 43:42
Yeah, I mean, and that's why you can't help but respect about the Fast and Furious movies, even if you don't like them. Each one got better, you know, at a certain point. And, you know, people ask me what I watch and like, I gotta be honest, I haven't seen it yet. But you know, I'm gonna love Mad Max. I mean, I've been watching that trailer every day on a deafening TV screen with my arms out wide grinning, because that's what I want to do, you know?

Dave Bullis 44:08
Yeah, everyone I know who was seen as not that. I haven't seen it yet, either. Yeah, did you see fast, furious seven.

Derek Kolstad 44:16
I'm really behind on everything. And you know, what I've learned too is when you when you write like this, or you get to this, you know, degree of success, I would argue, I don't, I don't like going to the theater. Simply because I'm alone most of the time. And when you sit down with a bunch of strangers, it's a bit of anxiety. And you're watching a movie and when you find yourself not liking it, you're suddenly reminded that people don't like what you do. It's weird. You know, I like it. It's It's weird. I mean, I love movies, man, but I like him now in the privacy of my own home.

Dave Bullis 44:50
Did he teach his own you know, and and sometimes I I totally get what you're saying because I sometimes just like to watch movies in my own home too. That's why like when it follows was coming out and they were like, oh, by the way, we're gonna do VOD the same day as theater. I was like, go good. I can just stay home now order a pizza, and I go watch it follows at home and they pulled out the VOD. So I ended up, you know, because it did better in theaters than they expected it was going to do. Yeah. So now I, I've pulled up Netflix and watch or watching something else.

Derek Kolstad 45:19
Well, it's like the event movies. I, you know, I go see in the theater. And to be honest, my favorite movies to see in the theater are the ones that are aimed directly at kids. Because, you know, the cynicism really hasn't sunk in, and to go watch, like, you know, anything by Pixar, you know, are a lot of Disney stuff, and to look across, and, you know, when we saw the movie, Frozen, it was a couple of weeks out, and the little kids in front of us were singing along to every song And in that moment, like, you could be irritated, oh, man, or you can go like, that's movie magic. You know, these little kids love the movie so much. They're singing along and you know, in this day, that was all that's love that memory.

Dave Bullis 46:00
And, you know, that's what movies do. They help me give those memories. Yeah.

Derek Kolstad 46:04
And I mean, you think of the movies that make you cry. I was a little kid. I mean, I wept a frickin Fox in the hound. You know, I wept when he came back to life, you know, then as you get older and older, it's always it changes like what affects you. I think the last movie I cried in was big fish of all movies. Like I was dating Sony at the time. And it's, you know, any kind of father son by any story gets me. And when he tells his father, the ministers breaking down, I was a blubbering mess. And it's like, you got me, man. Congratulations.

Dave Bullis 46:40
Yeah, man, what's

Derek Kolstad 46:41
the last movie that made you cry?

Dave Bullis 46:43
That made me cry? Yeah. I'm not even sure.

Derek Kolstad 46:48
Yeah.

Dave Bullis 46:51
That's a good question. I have to think about that. Derrick.

Derek Kolstad 46:54
My favorite was I went to go see Wally. And I would argue the beginning of Wally's one of the best in cinema, because it just showed you true loneliness. And as a writer, you'll know that you tap into loneliness. And at the end of the island, my buddy JC it's, there's a quiet moment. I just hear I hear quite tears from his eyes like goddamnit Pixar, you got me again.

Dave Bullis 47:21
They are phenomenal at that.

Derek Kolstad 47:23
But they respect the process, man, they take their time.

Dave Bullis 47:26
Yes, they there's so many good points about Pixar that like of what they do with their stories and how they structure them. And the characters and the and everything you know, and it's just, that's why there's so many. I mean, if you go like speed of screenwriting books, if you go like, look online, there's so many screenwriting books now about like doing it the Pixar way, whatever, you know what I mean? Yes, because you know, they are the guys you want to emulate.

Derek Kolstad 47:51
But also, you know, I think the best filmmakers Love, love their characters, you know, in the Pixar movies, you can tell that they love their characters, even the bad guys, you know. And I think that's important. I mean, what's been great in developing john wick, too, is we love john wick, you know, I mean, he was the Baba Yaga. He was the devil. And there may be a bit of that still inside of him. But there's something about that you love, you know. And the best movies are either the ones where everyone hated each other on the set or loved.

Dave Bullis 48:24
Yeah, and I heard there's a lot of frictional madmax it so Oh,

Derek Kolstad 48:27
yeah. Well, did you read that article with Tom Hardy hardy said, as soon as he saw the movie, he apologized to George. Yeah,

Dave Bullis 48:35
that's that's what I saw. And then I saw apparently like it at the Cannes Film Festival. They were like, he apologized for some of his behavior or something, or apparently something. There was some friction about something.

Derek Kolstad 48:45
Well, you know, and that's the thing about the industry that a lot of people don't understand until you really hear is, you can we can bemoan the fact that stars can be odd people who are assholes from time to time, but I do not envy their position. I mean, especially when you see it firsthand how people treat them. And I wouldn't I can never live in that kind of world, you know?

Dave Bullis 49:12
Is it really? Do you ever see anyone ever like trying to treat Kanto bed?

Derek Kolstad 49:17
No, it's not a matter of treating them bad. But it's, it's a matter of going, Hey, I recognize you from all your movies. See, I say we're buddies now, you know. But like when he's having dinner and just having people come up, and, you know, continuously come up to them. I don't get that, you know, New York is different. And I'd argue various sections of Hollywood are different simply because they're used to it and it's a different culture. But when you have you know, people from the Midwest, where I come from, you have two kinds, the kind of comes up to Canada goes, Hey, I love your work and then move on. And then it's the or the Hey, I love your work. We're friends now. Right?

Dave Bullis 49:57
So do you have a lot of friends in the Midwest, calling you They'll be like, hey, Derek, you sold a screenplay. I have a screenplay idea. Do

Derek Kolstad 50:04
you know? Not really, because I, I'd argue one of the greatest things about the Midwest is you're instilled with a work ethic. But more importantly, it's like one of my best friends out here is Austin Bryan, he played a little kid in Last Action Hero, you know, his Lawnmower Man, and all that kind of stuff. And he's a very successful photographer now. And he was kind of stressed one day when he was going to meet my cousin, who was a big fan of his. And my cousin, Joanna, came to a party, she walked up to him, shook his hand said, Hey, I really love your movies. And I went to the kitchen to start cooking something I don't know. That's, that's what I grew up with. And I think that's awesome. But every now and then you have people come out of the woodwork, of course. And that's just kind of nice Facebook is you can ignore them. And yet at the same time, like, the reality is no one helped me, you know. And what I mean by that is, of course, people helped me. But when it came to this, to getting into the industry in the screenwriting, it was years of incredibly hard work and work for free to get to this point. And yet, I kind of wonder, would I be the same guy had the success happened at age 30? Then 40. Hope so. And so a lot of times when students reach out to me, or people reach out to me, those conversations tend to be very healthy, because they're grounded. You know, I'm, I'm a screenwriter, man, the crazies don't come to me.

Dave Bullis 51:30
And sometimes, Derek, do you have annoying people to ask to be on a podcast?

Derek Kolstad 51:34
You know, what I what I love about podcasts, though, is this medium has given so many people like yourselves an opportunity that didn't exist 10 years ago, you know, I love that. And I mean, who knows what the next generation is gonna, you know, face as well. But you have the opportunity to be and create and manage your own brand. And how cool is that?

Dave Bullis 51:56
Yeah, absolutely. Um, you know, and I think the next generation is gonna be robots are just gonna, are gonna call you and they're gonna interview you, and then, you know, just whoever's around, be listening to it.

Derek Kolstad 52:07
Let's see, that's what I like about podcasters though, is, you're not, you're not a cynical bunch. I mean, you're doing what you love. You know, it's one thing doing an interview for the international press. It's nothing doing this because we're, we're fanboys to a certain degree of films themselves. You know? I'm, I have not seen the most movies, any, any person I know. yet. When I see a fellow person who loves a certain movie, like, you know, I asked last night on Facebook, like what movies you watch when you're down or drunk, or, you know, alone. And my response was, like, I've seen cabin of the woods and Evil Dead to too many times to count. And yet, when people hear that, you can kind of see the Amen, brother.

Dave Bullis 52:49
Yeah, it's just so interesting. You know, I remember this, this this anecdote that Kane Hodder, I don't know if you can't hotter race, but he was Jason Friday 13th from seven on. And he wants they actually were talking to him once. And they said, who was the best actor you've ever worked with? And his response was, Charlie's Charlie's Theron. And he said she was just absolutely phenomenal monster. And he said that she just blew everyone away. And he's never worked. Someone you know, it's just it's it was she was just beyond, you know, what he was used to? You know, I mean,

Derek Kolstad 53:22
yeah, a friend of mine who saw Fury Road was just like, thrones, amazing, because she's looking in the rearview mirror. And acting. And you're kind of like, I can't do that. Like to have volumes of backstory in a look. It's huge, you know?

Dave Bullis 53:42
Yeah, absolutely. I mean, that's why I think does work. I mean, I haven't seen it. I'm just here. works behind him as well. But, you know, I mean, you've got Tom Hardy, who's phenomenal. And you have her? who I think is absolutely phenomenal. I loved her. promethease I don't know if you saw previous.

Derek Kolstad 53:57
Yeah, I wasn't the biggest fan of that one, man. I loved her, though.

Dave Bullis 54:02
Yeah, she was I you know, I just have a big soft spot for that movie. I know it has for

Derek Kolstad 54:08
everyone has. That's the thing is everyone has those movies that connect to you on a certain capacity. So there are very there are very few movies I will refer to as horrendous or terrible, simply because you connected with them on a certain level. I mean, I have movies that are indefensible, but I love them. Because they they amuse me in a way that only that movie could, you know?

Dave Bullis 54:30
Yeah, I totally, totally understand. So, you know, they're talking about and an hour now, I know you have, you know, I don't want to have too much your time. So, you know, I have one question or actually two questions that came in from the fans if you don't mind. The first question I actually I briefly referred to earlier was about what the question is, I'm just gonna paraphrase this is, you know, with a lot of talk in the industry about script consultants. Where do you feel that they fit in to the whole screening process?

Derek Kolstad 55:04
You know, it's hard for me because I'm Sony is my script consultant, you know, and so, between her and Josh Adler's my manager. You know, that's, that's where I've gone. But I would argue that, you know, my dad used to say that phrase that when you bring in someone to do a job, and you're getting a quote, get five quotes, you throw out the biggest one, throw out the lowest one, and was screw consulting, is if you look at the numbers, if it makes sense for you, great. And a lot of times, especially nowadays, you can find some good ones that all you need is to hear back. Both that criticism and encouragement make you better, you know, I would argue that a lot of us have people who serve the script, consultation, capacity in some respect. But for the pros, they're reading tons of scripts, they know that they know, they know what's selling, they know what's not. And I think, even though I haven't done it before, I can see the value in it. Just don't spend, you know, an ungodly amount, you know.

Dave Bullis 56:11
So, in your opinion, you know, what's, like, do you think there should be like a cap of $100 $1,000 or something like that?

Derek Kolstad 56:16
But, you know, you can't really say a finger because Who is it? You know, you know, at a certain point, like, if you buy a luxury ice cream container for $8, you're like, Oh, sweet, would you buy it for 80? fuck knows ice cream at a certain point. What is it that you're buying, you know,

Dave Bullis 56:35
very true. Just as a funny side note, I actually just saw in, I think it was Abu Dhabi, or somewhere in the Middle East, they actually have ice cream. Now. That's like $1,000 an ounce.

Derek Kolstad 56:49
What's in it?

Dave Bullis 56:50
gold flakes, got diamonds, and caviar and something else. But it's, but it's like the way they make it is they it's all freeze dried. Right. So they make it literally, they make it right in front of you from scratch everything from scratch. Totally not not not the diamonds, of course, but like the ice cream. And then what they do is they put it into this, they mix it up with everything. And then they top it with gold flakes.

Derek Kolstad 57:13
I don't know who told me this years ago, but they're like, it was when the Trump hotel I think was serving up this $800 hamburger, you know? And he said, If I ever found myself wondering about that burger and ordering it, I should just give that money away. And I think that's the truth or most likely Well, if I find myself wanting to buy a Bentley, I should give that money away if I had it.

Dave Bullis 57:39
So yeah, I know what you mean. Although I would say I probably would buy a Bentley. You know, it's funny. Joe, Esther Haas once said that, there's a there's a great way, if you ever stuck on a screenplay, he has found the perfect way to get unstuck and cure writer's block. And he says what you do as you go down to find your local exotic car dealer, and you either get like a Lamborghini or Ferrari and you take it out for the weekend. And he said, What by the time you get back, you're going to do anything in your power to make sure you come by once you could drive out again.

Derek Kolstad 58:15
I like that.

Dave Bullis 58:17
Yeah, and I'm actually trying to get him on the podcast, by the way. Might be a little subtle. Is he

Derek Kolstad 58:23
still writing? He kind of had a big blow for the industry and kind of took took some time off.

Dave Bullis 58:29
Oh, he's the writing. Okay. And because he is he his last work was actually a book. It's an E book called heaven and mail. And it's all about working with Mel Gibson. Nice. And the other question that came in, Derek was how do I go about getting a screenplay mentor?

Derek Kolstad 58:49
Good question, man. If I look at my own life, find someone in your life who reads and reads voraciously, simply because when you read you, you know what's good, you know, what's, you know, what works. And, you know, the other thing too, is my thing about screenwriting, especially the industry, I said at the beginning is you have to be here. I know you can hate LA and hate New York even but you have to be here. You could honestly move to LA right now. jump online and find a group of people who will read your screenplay in 48 hours because they're trying to do the same thing. And it's kind of like the Brotherhood, the script. And you know, that's the bet if you really want to see if you can fail at this move here, you know, but if you don't and you want advice, seek out the people who love the medium. And it's amazing too. The other thing too is you'll know if you have a good script when you have your friends sit around and read it out loud. Because it's amazing, especially with comedy something that intimidates the shit out of me where It's funny to you. It's funny on a page when it's spoken out loud. It's just like gravel, you know? And that's what I'd say.

Dave Bullis 1:00:09
That's a very good point. Did By the way, directors that sort of add on to that, did you see the blacklist has its own podcast now? They're actually reading some like unproduced screenplays. Oh, really? Yeah. That's a really cool idea. Yeah, the the first one they did was a balls out.

Derek Kolstad 1:00:24
I've I haven't read that one. I've heard of it.

Dave Bullis 1:00:27
Somebody once told me about it. And then I heard Craig Mazin mentioned it again. Craig Mazin, you know, he is right. Yeah. Okay. So he mentioned it, and I looked it up. And I was like, Wow, it's easy to find. And apparently, it's been circling around Hollywood for years, but nobody actually wants to make it. But everyone's like, this is fucking hilarious. Haha. And they just pass it on. And and it's been like, why the hell so? Apparently, it does get like pretty outrageous and stuff. So I'm actually going to read it one of these days. But I've read the first 20 pages. I thought it was hilarious.

Derek Kolstad 1:00:59
Like, have you read the screenplay? passengers?

Dave Bullis 1:01:02
No, I haven't. Dude,

Derek Kolstad 1:01:03
that's that's one right now. I think. I think Chris Pratt attached? I don't know, do the female leaders right now. That's one that every exact I talked to us. Like, that's the best game plan read in five years. But we passed on it. And the realities of this business are it's like, let's say you read a screenplay, and it's your favorite ever. But you're like, that's $120 million. You know, pG 13 R rated sci fi thriller. That's unique. You know, it's not based on anything. You know, you've got shareholders, man, it's, it's a huge risk. So when people pass on certain stuff, like I've talked to a number of people passed on gravity. You're like, wow, and then you realize, Oh, yeah, if you hadn't seen the visuals, and read it, I get it, you know? And yet, every now and then, especially being an aspiring writer, like yourself. Oh, fuck that. You're a writer, you know, is when you go to the theater. You're like, you get 12 minutes into the movie, like, how is this made? And a lot of times, even the people involved like I don't happen.

Dave Bullis 1:02:09
Yeah, there's a there's another podcast too. called How did this get made? And? And I first I was like, What the hell? But But yeah, I know exactly what you mean. You know, they even mentioned you What the hell happened here. But you know, it's funny Derrick member landed the last one that came out with Will Ferrell. Yeah, that that studio, they they bought the book so much on that. And then what happened was when a failed, everyone got fired?

Derek Kolstad 1:02:35
Yeah. That's the kind of thing though, that you can you feel for certain people involved because I remember talking to the producers of Jonah hacks. And they, you know, this was after the fact they were like, Derek, the screenplay was fun. It was a blast. The table reads to great. Three weeks for shooting, they carved off like $15 million for a budget, we thought we do fine. And then when we started seeing dailies, we were like, what happened? It's just, again, it's a miracle, and you get a good movie. And it's simply because, you know, it's it begins and ends with a script, sure. But at certain points, people step in, and the script gets muddied. And things happen, you know, often a bad movie. That's only bad when it hits the second act, you know, that's more often than not.

Dave Bullis 1:03:27
Yeah, very true. Yeah. Something I've always heard is the the second act is where movies go to die.

Derek Kolstad 1:03:34
Yeah, yeah. I mean, I would argue that the movies I write the I love, just actually I love thrillers love sci fi. The work is an act to me an act one you come up with, when you're out for a walk, or you're having a meal. x three is just fun, because you can finish the fucker. But act two. That's where the writing comes in. And when you start receiving notes, all your notes are an act two, not one or three.

Dave Bullis 1:04:06
So you know, Derrick, in closing, uh, you know, I mean, we could talk all day, you and I could tell we have you know, we have we have the same taste in movies we've got

Derek Kolstad 1:04:14
we're both give a shout when the next film comes out, man.

Dave Bullis 1:04:18
Okay, definitely. Because you're both have degrees in business. We both do writing. We both have red hair.

Derek Kolstad 1:04:25
Losing my I shaved my head.

Dave Bullis 1:04:28
But thank you for that writer comment, by the way. Yeah.

Derek Kolstad 1:04:33
I have to stop myself because it's kind of like Kiana said about he doesn't do his he doesn't do stocks. He's really doing it. And so when I talk to people, it's like, you're not to say you're an aspiring screenwriter means you want to be a screenwriter. He's being paid, but to be writers to be a writer. And as soon as you have one person read it, you've affected their entire life. And I think it's it's a difficult career, and yet it's a it's a fun one. I'm not saying john wick is going to be out there changing people's lives but I want making movies that like predator diehard for instance, we are you're at a hotel one night. It's 11 o'clock you're tired. You turn on the TV halfway through predator like fuck gotta watch it. Those the movies I love.

Dave Bullis 1:05:16
I mean, I remember when I when I was beyond the commercials for john wick. I was on Facebook one day and a friend of mine who's kind of a hard guy to please movies actually was like john wick Anyway, you know, dot dot dot the ellipsis anyway, that was pretty fucking good.

Derek Kolstad 1:05:31
See that's the best. That's what I want, you know. And in fact, I had people on Facebook who were like, in their late 70s, early 80s friends of my grandmother, who hadn't seen an R rated movies since maybe the Godfather. They went to see it sparked me there just like that I really enjoyed that.

Dave Bullis 1:05:49
He gigs, I mean that there's a couple things in john wick. Like I said, people if you're listening to this troja job was gonna dig into it. But just you know, real quick, I know, you have to go. But when john wick he was going through the nightclub, and he's all action scene, and we're following the whole time. And it's just everything about that we're just all came together beautifully. And I was like, and I was like, Damn, that's a really good action scene right there.

Derek Kolstad 1:06:11
Yeah, it was fun is, you know, Chad and Dave, their background is, you know, his his stunt direction and that kind of stuff. But what I loved about working with them. And what I love about where he would have now is a lot of the action beats I wrote into the script are on the screen, like to see that john shoots the guy's foot aliens for and shoots his head. And like that was in the screenplay. And so I know for a lot of like the Marvel movies or the bigger properties. They say john wick fights 15 guys, like in the script, they gave me the opportunity to help them along the action, action wise. And what I love about their directing style is there's no quick cuts, they're doing all these moves, they're landing all of these blows. And it's it's kind of like an ode to the kung fu I grew up with, you know, and we had fun with it then and we're gonna have a blast with it when the next

Dave Bullis 1:07:05
is there a rough date for the release date for the next one? Not, not, not

Derek Kolstad 1:07:09
really. Lionsgate really wants one there. They're talking with various people in Cannes right now. So we could shoot in the fall, or we could shoot in the spring. The Lions Gate has been very, very generous. I mean, it's very rare to be in a place where you have a greenlit movie, you know, and it's greenlit, and they're like, the sooner the better. And yet they want to massage this into a franchise and Kanno who's, you know, implicit in all of this is very careful to do so as well.

Dave Bullis 1:07:40
And that's absolutely phenomenal. And you know, Derek, I want to say congratulations on all your success. He's you know, you've definitely earned it. And you know, I wish you nothing but the best with you know, john with two and hopefully john wick three and you know, all the other future products you have.

Derek Kolstad 1:07:54
Thanks a lot, man. I enjoyed talking to you.

Dave Bullis 1:07:56
Oh, my pleasure, man. Anytime we get talking about like movies like anyone who's seen man skeeto or were killed dozer or future or you see rubber. Yes, I did see rubber Yes.

Derek Kolstad 1:08:11
That you know,

Dave Bullis 1:08:11
if you ever really want to punish yourself, and this goes for finale, you Derek or anyone listening? If you want to see the worst film that I've ever seen, I know exactly what it is. And it's called Nuki. What Nuki it's NUK ie, it's a movie about two aliens that crash land in Africa. And it is it was supposed to be like a kid's movie like a ripoff of et. And it is so odd and bad and boring and dead. It's It's It's hailed as you know, they usually have the worst movies ever made. They usually put plan nine on but plan nine is actually entertaining. This is just bad. So so if you ever and I'll link to in the show notes too, if anybody actually wants to venture out to see Nuki but it is absolutely barn on the worst movie I've ever seen in my life.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:01
Obviously, martyrs, martyrs No, that is one of the most disturbing horror movies I've ever seen. So

Dave Bullis 1:09:07
okay, I'll make I'm making a note of that.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:09
That and three extremes is awesome.

Dave Bullis 1:09:12
Yeah, I've seen extreme extremes.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:14
Yeah. And go for hours, man.

Dave Bullis 1:09:17
Yeah, seriously. I mean, we could always be talking I mean, that's a that's what helped me fight you know, find somebody like yourself, who just says seen all these random movies that I've seen. And I'm gonna check out that movie Casablanca you mentioned I

Derek Kolstad 1:09:30
don't Hey, when you're out, man, give me a shout, dude.

Dave Bullis 1:09:35
We'll do Derek.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:42
I don't do Twitter anything.

Dave Bullis 1:09:44
Okay.

Derek Kolstad 1:09:46
I just I just a private guy, man.

Dave Bullis 1:09:50
Cool. And, you know, everybody can find me at Dave bulls.com. You can you can find you can find me I'm a I try to be private but I got way too much social stuff going on. You don't even need channels. Um, but actually, Derek, I want to say thanks again for coming on. And please, anytime want to come back, just let me know.

Derek Kolstad 1:10:08
Sure. Thanks. Good luck, man.

Alex Ferrari 1:10:10
Like I said, that was an awesome, awesome interview. Derek. I'm a huge fan of Derek and I'm a huge fan of the john wick franchise. So if you do want to get more episodes by Dave Bullis on the make your movie podcast, just head over to eye f h podcast network.com. And check out all of the other amazing podcasts that we have in the network that is focused on filmmaking, film history, analysis, and screenwriting. And if you want to take a deeper dive into the mind of screenwriters, definitely check out our new podcast inside the screenwriters mind, which is an archive of all the best screen writer interviews that the IFH Podcast Network has, and you can check that out at screenwritersmind.com. Thank you guys for listening. Next week, we will be back to our regularly scheduled program, and I got some amazing new stuff coming for you in the coming weeks. Thanks again for listening guys. As always, keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 090: Creating a Billion Dollar Horror Franchise with Screenwriter Jeffrey Reddick

Today on the show we have screenwriter and director Jeffrey Reddick, who is best known for creating the highly successful Final Destination horror film franchise. The franchise has grossed over $650 Million world-wide. Not bad for an idea that was first conceived for an X-Files episode.

Jeffrey also co-wrote the story for, and executive produced, Final Destination 2 (2003). Jeffrey made his first connection to the film industry at age 14 when he wrote a prequel to Nightmare On Elm Street (1984) and mailed it to Bob Shaye, the President of New Line Cinema. Bob returned the material for being unsolicited. But the young man wrote Bob an aggressive reply, which won him over.

Bob read the treatment and got back to Jeffrey. Bob, and his assistant, Joy Mann, stayed in contact with Jeffrey for over five years. When he went to The American Academy of Dramatic Arts in New York at age 19, Bob offered him an internship at New Line Cinema. This internship turned into an 11-year stint at the studio.

Aside from Final Destination (2000), which spawned four successful sequels, Jeffrey’s other credits include Lions Gate’s thriller, Tamara (2005), and the remake of George Romero’s classic, Day of the Dead (2008). Jeffrey’s directorial debut is Don’t Look Back.

When a young woman overcoming her traumatic past is among several witnesses who see a man fatally assaulted and don’t intervene, they find themselves targeted by someone, or something, out for revenge.

Jeffrey has had an amazing career so far and I can’t wait to see what he comes up with next.

Enjoy my spooky conversation with Jeffrey Reddick.

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Alex Ferrari 0:52
I'd like to welcome to the show the legendary Jeffrey Redick, how are you doing Jeffrey?

Jeffrey Reddick 3:43
I'm doing well. How you doing? Brother?

Alex Ferrari 3:44
I'm good man. I'm good, man. It's as good as we can be in this horror script of a year.

Jeffrey Reddick 3:52
I know. I know. It's just like when you think you hit the final act, killers dead killer pops back up again. And it's like,

Alex Ferrari 3:59
I mean, like I was talking to another guest the other day about is like this is so on the nose. Like, you know, studio would produce the script of 2020 it's just too It doesn't even make sense.

Jeffrey Reddick 4:11
Yeah, absolutely. No, it's been. It has been like, you know, you try to stay stay grateful and you try to stay positive about stuff but you can't not take in the fact that like the world is like suffering through something really. Absolutely.

Alex Ferrari 4:26
Absolutely. And getting getting crazier and get it getting crazier but but we as filmmakers and screenwriters are insane enough to go yes, I know the world is burning. But how do I get my my screenplay produced? I need the budget for my film.

Jeffrey Reddick 4:44
We can still make this movie we can do it safely.

Alex Ferrari 4:48
This insanity of the psychosis of a filmmaker or screenwriters you're just like how do I get this movie made this crazy this is that I imagined there filmmakers in the Mad Max world and I know we have no gasoline, or cameras, but we got to shoot something.

Jeffrey Reddick 5:05
Yeah, I would say no starting an only fans page, not not doing the stuff that they normally do on there, but just only just me typing just to somebody. I'm sure there are some people out there that will be like, Oh, that's so relaxing to watch every type all day. Just pay me a couple of bucks a month.

Alex Ferrari 5:23
You could just walk why, exactly. It's the it's the new generation of the burning log or the fish tank video. Yes. So Jeffrey, how did you get into the business?

Jeffrey Reddick 5:37
Um, how I, how I got in business is a pretty funny story. It all started when I was 14. And I was a, you know, 14 year old hillbilly living in eastern Kentucky. And I saw this movie A Nightmare on Elm Street that blew my mind. It's still my favorite movie ever. And I went home and I banged out a prequel on my little typewriter. And I found out who owned new lines in it, who ran New Line Cinema, Bob Shea. And I got the address. And I mailed it to him. And he sent it back to me. And he's like, you know, we don't take unsolicited material. Thanks for sending your thing. So I had to look up unsolicited because I'm 14. I didn't know what that meant. And then I wrote him back. I sent it back to him. Because I was kind of perturbed. I was like, Look, sir, I've seen three of your movies. And I spent $3 on your work. So I think you can take five minutes to read my story. And he actually read it.

Alex Ferrari 6:29
But this is so what yours is so we're talking like at this was at five. So this is the time that you could actually call up Bob Shea's office, get a receptionist or get her his assistant and actually maybe possibly get through.

Jeffrey Reddick 6:44
Why didn't get through to him on the phone, but I okay, yeah, I got it,

Alex Ferrari 6:47
but even get through them, period.

Jeffrey Reddick 6:50
Yeah, I think but then I wrote the letter. And and, you know, once I wrote that second letter, he wrote me back and he's like, thank you for your aggressive introduction. And he read the story. And he was very constructive. And basically his assistant joy man who was a wonderful woman, she's not with us any longer. She her and Bob kind of took me under their wing from afar. And so they would send me scripts, and movie posters and just things that, you know, a 14 year old kid in Kentucky like flips out over. And they stayed in touch with me till I was 19. And I went to college in Kentucky at this great University College called Berea College. And I went to New York for study for a summer program to study acting, and Bob and Joyce said, Well, how do you want to intern at new line? I'm like, Are you kidding me? Of course I do. And I got an agent and decided to stay in New York. And you know, my internship turned into a position at new line. And I ended up working there for 11 years, and they ended up you know, producing final destination. So

Alex Ferrari 7:46
that little thing yeah, that little little film that you liked what you just dropped that into? Yeah, that's the final destination. Well, one of the more successful horror franchises in history. Now, how did you get well, first of all, how did you come up with the idea for final destination?

Jeffrey Reddick 8:05
The, the colonel for the idea came when I was I was flying home to get a lot of stuff was as Kentucky base, I was flying home to Kentucky, and I read an article about a woman who was on vacation. And her mother called her and said, don't take the flight you're on tomorrow, I have a bad feeling about it. And so she changed flights. And then the story, they said the flights that she was supposed to be on crashed. So that put the idea in my head, but I didn't know the story to go with the idea. And then, you know, years later, I was trying to get an agent for writing. And so I had to write a spec script for something that was on TV. And I loved the X Files. So I use that idea is a setup for an X Files episode. And I got the agent. And then my friends and newline were like, this is a great idea. Like don't, you know, don't send the script in, like for an X Files episode, like make it a feature. So I ended up writing a treatment, you know, because back in the day, you could sell treatments for her projects are no pitch or a pitch. Yeah, you can do that back then. And now it's like, hey, pitches the story and tell us who your star is.

Alex Ferrari 9:04
And you have and you have 50% of the financing in place already. And you have distribution in place.

Jeffrey Reddick 9:07
Yeah, it's like, yeah, the business is, is changed so much. But But you know, I one of my friends, Chris bender that worked at New Line had just started working for Craig Perry and Warren Zeid, who were producers that had to deal at new line and I knew that even though I worked at new line, and I had a straight kind of pipeline to the creative team, I knew that it would give me more juice if I had producers on board because they would just take it more seriously. But it was a hard Honestly, it was a hard sell. Like they were like we don't get death being the killer. Like you can't see it. You can't fight it. And we're like, that's the point. And so it wasn't until we threatened to take it to Miramax or like we'll buy it. All right, well buy it. It will take a chance on it.

Alex Ferrari 9:54
No, it's a great it's a it's a great idea. It is such a you know in your And you're right. I can only imagine back then, because there was like you had Jason, you had Freddy, you had Michael Myers, you had Chucky and all these, like, you could put that on the poster, you can't put death that has no figure on the poster. So it must be it must have been a difficult sell for the marketing team.

Jeffrey Reddick 10:19
It was and I think they did a great job with Oh, yeah. But, you know, the whole reason that we, you know, the whole reason that I, I want, and I'm glad that when James Wong and Morgan came on, they fought to make sure that that that death never had a forum, and they came up with some some other amazing thing, like the whole Rube Goldberg aspect of it. But the reason that I wanted to not give death a form is because I wanted it to be as universal as possible. And if you put like, if you put like a Western kind of Christian version of death, you know, like Grim Reaper with sickle or something like that, then then it doesn't appeal to people who either are have different religious beliefs or spiritual beliefs or don't have spiritual beliefs. So I thought it was very important to not do that. And, and I think that's why it's been as successful as it has been.

Alex Ferrari 11:05
Yeah, it travels very well around the world, because everybody has death in their culture, that is something that concept is in every culture, the figure of it is different from culture to culture, right. But that's it. You can project they can project their own version of what death is on to the movie, which is fantastic. And I remember the trailers of that film. They just as the sequels kept coming, they kept focusing more and more on the deaths. Like that was like, that was the selling point. Like, what is the craziest way we could kill? So?

Jeffrey Reddick 11:38
Yes.

Alex Ferrari 11:41
That became the the hook I guess, as as these kept going, how many? There was five? Right?

Jeffrey Reddick 11:47
Yeah, there have been five of them. And there will be a sixth one. There. It was definitely in the works before COVID hit and now COVID just kind of put the brakes.

Alex Ferrari 11:56
Are they? Are they good? Are they going to kind of reboot the whole thing? Are they going to just make a straight up sequel? Or you don't know? You can't tell?

Jeffrey Reddick 12:03
I don't Yeah, I mean, I don't. I don't know if reboot. I think reboot is too strong of a word. Um, you know, because it's the final destination, you know, films have their formula, you know, a big set piece at the beginning and then death comes after people. So I don't know if reboots the right word, because that that intimate,

Alex Ferrari 12:23
but bring a new generation, I guess. I mean, but but every but every cast was like you didn't have one cast member that ran through the whole thing.

Jeffrey Reddick 12:30
Did you remember Tony Todd is the is the recurring has been the recurring character and Ali Larter was in the right and second one. Yeah, Tony Todd's been, you know, he hasn't been in every single one of them. But he's been in like, a lot. Yeah. Yeah, he should be in every one of them. There are a few where they can put him in there. And they they they got they got the message that people love Tony Todd. And

Alex Ferrari 12:54
now I do remember when you and I originally met 10 years ago on a panel here in LA, a horror film panel. And I remember you saying on the panel that like, Look, I they can make as many of these as they want. Because every single time they make one I get a check. So yeah, I know. residuals, residuals

Jeffrey Reddick 13:16
know what that sounds like. Good. Yeah. Yeah, that sounds better on a panel. There are people there, then I sound like a douchebag.

Alex Ferrari 13:25
No, no, no, and I don't even I don't mean to make you sound like that. I completely. And I know that and I listen, I look, I know a lot of I've had a lot of screenwriters on board that like they work on a few of the first ones. And then I had the guy who did Air Bud, who created air bug. And they made 12 of those films. He was only involved in the first two or three but every single time they make a new one, he gets a residual check. So that's nothing to be ashamed of as a screenwriter. Well,

Jeffrey Reddick 13:56
I know when it will even as a horror fan, though, it's like I want there to be yes, the money is nice, but I want there to be more because I can't think of any other franchise that's been this successful. And they've only made five of them in 20 years, like every other. There have been like 20 Halloweens and 20 Friday you know there have been like even you know even nightmare downstream there have been like it's like come on, make some more because the fans want it and I need to get some new shoes.

Alex Ferrari 14:27
As we were saying residual checks are nice. They're very very nice. Now how did I wonder I always like to ask this of a screenwriter who has a hit because when Final Destination came out it was a fairly large hit for for the but it was a fairly small budget to I'm imagine it wasn't a huge budget.

Jeffrey Reddick 14:44
No, that was that one. I have to say they It was 20 million which is actually big for a horror movie back then. Big Four horror film. Um, but yeah, it was a it was a big hit. sleeper hit it opened it like number three or four and then the next week it went up and then the next weekend. Number one, so it was definitely a word of mouth hit two, which was nice to see happen. And that rarely ever happens. Especially with horror. Yeah, usually they open big and then they drop. Right, exactly.

Alex Ferrari 15:10
So I always like to ask screenwriters who had that kind of success? How did the trap the town treat you? What was the experience of being in the final destination? hurricane, if you will?

Jeffrey Reddick 15:22
Well, the funny thing is I, I missed the hurricane because I was in New York. So I worked out of the New York office of new line. So I wasn't in LA, we're kind of all the, you know, the hurricane like action happens. So I was, I was aware of how well it did. But I was in a different world. And so I stayed at new line because I, I just loved the company so much. I'm just one of those people, you know, creatures of habit that gets very comfortable. I actually stayed at New Line, until I sold the sequel, the story for the sequel, in 2000, in 2000, and then finally, my bosses were like, you know, everybody knew I was like, we love you to death, Jeffrey, but you sold two movies. Now it's time, it's time to

Alex Ferrari 16:09
go out into the world, Jeffrey, it's okay. Like they were pushing you out of the nest,

Jeffrey Reddick 16:14
out of the nest. And, but I was happy in New York. So I was going to stay in New York. But unfortunately, you know, 911 happened. And I lived in Battery Park City, which is not far from the World Trade Center. So once that happened, I then I decided to move out to LA. So you know, typically, when something like that happens, even when you sell a project, you kind of, you know, looking back, you kind of you know, you move to LA immediately, you milk that movie as much as you can till it comes down. And if it's hit, you're out here, but I kind of missed all all of that stuff. So by the time I got out here, it was funny because people, my agent, you know, I got an agent, he pretty much had to introduce me to the town. Because, you know, James Wong, Lynn Morgan, who, you know, co wrote the movie and also directed it, you know, they were out here in the hurricane. So people didn't really know who I was until I actually got out here. And then they read my script. And they're like, Oh, I'm like, Well, my name is all over the poster. But they don't you know, it's a town where if you're not sitting in a room with somebody, they don't actually go and look at a movie poster in the credits.

Alex Ferrari 17:19
Yeah, out of sight, out of mind,

Jeffrey Reddick 17:20
basically, out of sight out of mind. So, so I missed the craziness of the hurricane, which I think was probably a good thing. For me, just as a person, because I think if I got out here, I may have got sucked into like, just the world of craziness that I wasn't prepared for I I got sober like 15 years ago. So I think if you know, and mine was my my advice was drinking and it was, you know, just wasn't anything like super crazy. It was just kind of more like, sitting at home being sad, drunk and not being happy. So I think if I had been out here, in that celebratory party kind of scene, healthy. I think it would have been very unhealthy for me. So I think it was a it was probably, you know, God looking out for me in that that that way. But um, it's funny now kind of, you know, as the years go by, though, seeing how much of an impact the movie has had, like, you know, when I hear somebody say, this is a final destination moment, like, even when I'm not around, like, they don't know that I'm involved with it at all. I'll just be out in public and somebody's like, Oh, it's like, final destination. And it's like, holy shit. Like, this is like part of the culture now like,

Alex Ferrari 18:31
Oh, it's in the it's in this guy. So yeah, it's it's definitely transcended, like, I mean, I'd argue kind of like a Freddy or a Jason or a Chucky or Michael, but in its own its own very unique space. I mean, you have a final destination is a very unique niche within the horror genre, because there is no killer. Yes. Visual killer. It's a very, you know, very, very unique in that has more than one movie. It has five movies, you know, so that it's in itself, and I guess they kept being successful because it kept making them.

Jeffrey Reddick 19:07
Yeah, absolutely. You know, and it's, you know, it's, it's just as somebody who's been a horror fan my whole life. It's been, it's been very gratifying, you know, it's but it's also a dragon that you're chasing, you know, you find yourself chasing that dragon dragon. Something's like, Well, why don't you bring to something like Final Destination? And I'm like, What? idea and they're like, Oh, that's too much like final destination. Well, that was not enough like final destination.

Alex Ferrari 19:28
So that is something that is something that's real because a lot of filmmakers and screenwriters don't realize that but when you're you're a hit in town for something. That's the box you get put into and you a lot of times have to fight your way out of that box. I know. I know, for a fact that Wes Craven, one of the greatest horror directors of all time, I knew his personal assistant. That was his personal system for many years and he was dying to get out of he wanted to do something different. He'd been doing horror for such a long time. And that movie music The heart which was called 500 violins. The only reason he got that was because they wanted scream to He's like, what do you want me to do scream to Harvey? I need Give me the budget to make. Yeah, to make this. And that's how he got it. But he was I felt that he was, from what I understood. He was frustrated that he was only able to do horror. I know he wanted to venture out as an artist. Yeah, and that happens, doesn't it?

Jeffrey Reddick 20:27
Yeah, they it's it's it's it since I love horror. It's I don't mind being in that box as far as writing goes. But yeah, the idea that it's like, we need you to bring us something like, final destination, that unique thing that you created. But then we didn't actually we were very concerned about it because it was unique until it became a hit. It's just a hard place to be in but you know, I The good thing is I find myself like branching out a little bit like right now I'm working on two animated series for the car for Netflix. You know, in their, their their kid animated series, and one of them has some creepy, fairy tale dark fairy tale elements and the other ones like a spin off of the saga Yojimbo, the Japanese comic. So that's like Samurai rabbits, you know, and it's so much fun to do it. So I'm finding myself Finally, branching out a little bit, but I always will come back to genre like I love this genre so much that

Alex Ferrari 21:22
well, if you love it, you love it. But you but you also want to break out from like, I don't want to write another final destination. I did that. Let's, let's move on.

Jeffrey Reddick 21:29
Let's do something else.

Alex Ferrari 21:31
Now, were you involved with the sequels? I know you were involved with a second sequel? Did you? Were you involved with the other sequels at all?

Jeffrey Reddick 21:37
No, not not not physically involved. I mean, I I'm very good friends with a producer Craig Perry. So, you know, he'll call me up and a lot of times and bounce ideas off of me and let me know what's going on. So I definitely kind of know what's going on with the franchise. And it's, it's actually been fun to see. Other people kind of come in and put their their mark on the brand. I mean, the first one, it's always been this almost incestuous circle with the first four. It's like, you know, I worked on the first one in the second one and James Wong and Glen Morgan worked on the first one and the third one, Eric brass, and Jay maca. Gruber worked on the second one, and then Eric rested the fourth one. And then we brought in somebody due for the fifth one. And it was like, you know, I love the fifth one. But it's just fun to see, like other people kind of come in and take that concept and put their spin on it.

Alex Ferrari 22:21
Right? I'm imagining what the George Lucas feels like with what they've been doing with Mandalorian. And, and all the other cool films and stuff that they're doing with his his baby that he had put out so many years ago? Yeah.

Jeffrey Reddick 22:38
I think it all depends probably on personalities. Like if I like I'm not sure like that, cuz I know some people get very protective and precious of their work. But you know, I think that's part of working at a studio, what that helped me kind of separate my ego from a lot of that stuff. Because I realized, like, you know, once you write a movie and somebody else buys it, you're kind of handing it over to other people. So you just hope to create a good enough relationship with those people that you can have some say and how they execute it. But again, it's a quality problem. It's a quality problem to have if you have other people doing sequels to your stuff. So I definitely don't complain about

Alex Ferrari 23:15
writing first world problems. As I say it's first world problems. Now, you are such a fan and a student of the genre of horror films, what makes a good horror screenplay?

Jeffrey Reddick 23:28
I mean, I think for me, it it all, it starts with the basics of, you know, having relatable characters. I think if you make me fall in love with these characters and care about them, then I will follow the journey wherever it takes me. Sometimes scripts go off into bizarre directions, but if it's grounded in characters that I can really relate to and care about. That's always the most important thing for me. I do think, you know, for horror, you know, you want to, you know, you want to have some kind of hook that can bring people into the story, some kind of concept that doesn't feel like we're reading the same story of, you know, a family moves into a house and, you know, something horrible happened there. And now a ghost is like haunting them. It's like, we've seen that so many times, it's like, you do want something that we haven't seen 100 times unless you're putting a very unique spin on it. scares and suspense are obviously important. And if you're doing a straight up horror film, obviously, the kills in the set pieces are important too. If you're doing a movie, because you you, you're also you're writing something for for people, but you're making it for an audience out there. So there's certain things that the audience expects in a horror film. So you either want to deliver on those expectations or subvert them in a cool way.

Alex Ferrari 24:47
So very cool. Now, what are the biggest problems you see with horror protagonists? Because, you know, it's almost a cliche. You're like, why are you doing like you're yelling at the screen. Don't go in there. The Killers in their The what? What is the biggest problem you see with protagonists in horror films in general?

Jeffrey Reddick 25:06
I think that you pretty much ended on the head. I mean, I think a lot of movies require and you know, and I'm sure, like, there, there are movies that I've written where this happens to. But you know, when you require, because the thing is audiences, I read this somewhere where a psychologist said that that film audiences always think that they're braver and smarter than the people on screen. So like, you know, when a character wouldn't do something in the film, they're not, they're like, well, if I was there, I'd have jumped on that killers back and done it. But the worst thing you can do is have like, an I've seen so many good movies just get undermined by this, where they just have the main characters, stay in a location when any rational person, right have left and do stupid things that any rational person wouldn't do. So if you have a character that keeps making bad choices, just to keep the story going, that's the biggest mistake I see are I wrote somebody scripts where it's like, you know, this is the city, this is any good movie talking. This is like a human being like, I cannot think of any person, no matter how tough they are, that would stay here after what they just saw. Right? You know, like, you know, I read a script recently, where, you know, a person gets invited to like, some mysterious party and doesn't know who invited them and walks in, and there's like, some weird orgy going on. And, you know, she backs up into some strange guy. And he's like, Oh, don't worry about that. Follow me, I'll show you what's where the host is. And I'm like, Oh, this would be gone at that point. You know, she's, she was horrified by the origin wasn't like she saw the orgy was like, that looks fun. She was like, horrified. And so who's gonna follow some strange man, you know? So when I see stuff, like when I read stuff like that in scripts, especially when that happens over and over again, I think that's the biggest mistake I see in horror films is making your characters continually do silly things just to keep the story going. Well, when

Alex Ferrari 27:00
I when I was thinking, thinking of three films, specifically that are horror films that are so good, that they transcend the genre, almost, which is Jaws, Exorcist and Silence of the Lambs. The stories, the characters, everything is so well constructed. There's never a moment in Silence of the Lambs. I'm like, don't don't like why are you doing that? Like jaws is perfectly it's as as perfect of a film, it's period as you can get. And the actresses like, those, the situation is structured in a way where, well, the priest is trying to get the devil out of this girl. So he has to be in there. Because that's his job as opposed to, you know, oh, let's get this all split up in the woods. Yeah, so the killer could knock us off one at a time.

Jeffrey Reddick 27:52
Right? And you don't get a pass because I see a lot of this in the scripts to where people will be like, really? Now you want to split up now? Have you seen a horror movie and then they still split up? It's like, that doesn't give you a pass by

Alex Ferrari 28:04
exactly now, and that was the perfect thing. Well, that started with scream when scream actually was so self aware of its own faults. Yeah, I mean, that is a brilliant script. And that's Yeah, love scream.

Jeffrey Reddick 28:16
I that's one of my favorites.

Alex Ferrari 28:18
I mean, so brilliantly done and the first opening sequence with Drew Barrymore I mean, it's it's the psycho and you killing it. I mean, spoiler alert first 10 minutes drew dies. But, but it like it was shocking for a new generation. It was basically what what psycho did back in the day, but it was so brilliant. I remember when that came out. It was just like a revelate like everybody, it was such a monster hit

Jeffrey Reddick 28:44
at the end because I went to a screening of it and I didn't I you know, I saw the poster in the trailer. I thought Drew Barrymore was the star of it. I just went in there with my sweet ass going, Well, I can't wait to watch Bruce. Bruce scream for like 90 minutes and get and I was like,

Alex Ferrari 28:59
What? What? What's going on?

Jeffrey Reddick 29:01
Oh, it's like one of the most brilliant 10 minutes of cinema.

Alex Ferrari 29:06
Yeah, it's it's amazing. Now, with the blue we know what the problem is with protagonists. But what can you do as a screenwriter to make a horror villain legendary? Because we've already rattled off a handful of names that are all you need to do is just say their first names and in the horror genre, they know what it is. So what do you do? Like what makes Michael Meyers Freddy? Jason you know, those characters so so legendary, as opposed to other horror, you know, other horror either franchises that either come and go, that have those kind of looks from the poster. The same elements is Jason or Freddy, but they don't live up to it and they don't what's that magic? What's that thing? In your opinion?

Jeffrey Reddick 29:54
You know what I think? I don't think that there's I don't think that that that's almost an answer because it's it's almost like catching lightning in a bottle. Because sometimes the characters are so like you mentioned Simon lamb like Hannibal Lecter is such a delectable like, you know with its with just the portrayal and the way that he was filmed and everything is that it's mesmerizing that so you have sometimes you have villains like that, or Freddy Krueger, I think is probably the best example of the of the slashers. Because especially in the first movie, like he was so feral, and so there was just something so wicked about him, like he cut himself, he cut it, people he was just horrible. Like, we'd never seen anything like that. And Chucky had such a distinct, you know, it's a toy, you know, it's like, look like a little toy. You know, you almost had as much fun with the Chucky movies when the dolls getting knocked around, knowing that, knowing that it's possessed, like, so it's, there's something about that. But, you know, I think, you know, with Michael Myers, he didn't say anything. And it was just, he was an embodiment of evil. But also that movie came out at a time, you know, we were kind of in, you know, the suburbs, everything was about the sub suburbs and how the suburbs were safe and the last bastion of safety in America. And, you know, Michael Myers came in and kind of took that over. And with Friday the 13th, you know, like people forget, you know, Jason's mother was a killer. And the first one, he wore like, a sack over his head. And the second one, he didn't get the hockey mask on the third one. And I think that that, that by that point, it you just were our culture was at the time. slashers are so hot. And that just happened to be the one that like exploded Friday, the 13th exploded. I don't know if it's necessarily because of Jason per se. Time Bomb.

Alex Ferrari 31:38
It was timing,

Jeffrey Reddick 31:39
I think with timing on that one. Because again, most people think of him with a hockey mask. It's like, well, he didn't have the hockey mask till the third movie. And he wasn't the killer in the first one. So I think timing has a lot to do with when certain movies take off and when certain movies hit but I think good. No, I was gonna say, but I think when you create a villain for a horror film, especially if it's like a slasher film, you do kind of want to come up with some kind of iconography, some kind of look that's unique, where people will like, they'll remember that, that that killer if your movies fortunate enough to like, really strike a chord with people and take off. Like, that sucks about finals nation. It's like, we could have had a Halloween costume and a toy line, but we don't because it's we don't have a killer. So

Alex Ferrari 32:25
we have five but we have five movies. And hopefully, yes, yes.

Jeffrey Reddick 32:29
But it's funny because it's Yeah, because I love like collecting, like, you know, stat you know, movie posters and statues and tchotchkes. So it'd be nice to have one for mine. But that's our

Alex Ferrari 32:41
they should they should actually sell the statues of the kills. So like the, the sequence of a kill like that chap.

Jeffrey Reddick 32:50
That would be awesome. Like the log going into sheriff's car. Exactly. All those kills a B on the balance beam. And the fifth one, like I love that kill, too.

Alex Ferrari 33:00
Yeah, but you look at things like leprechaun, and I'm like, how did that thing become? How did that become a thing? Like they ran off? Like, how many of those are the things that they just took off? So and then something like candy man did it? Like there should be 20 candy men?

Jeffrey Reddick 33:15
Yeah, there should be. I mean, well, you know, what's interesting, too, is we have to also look at the time when these movies came out as far as what was accessible. So, you know, back when, when I was young, you know, there were like three networks in HBO. So everybody was watching the same things. And so people were seeing the same movies. There weren't as many movies that were coming out as there are now so, you know, you didn't have a, you know, when scary movies came out, like everybody rushed to see them. But everybody across the country was seeing like the same movies and watching the same things on television. You know, like, back in the day, it was like 60 million, you know, viewers was like a hit for a network show. And now it's like, well, we got 10 million viewers, it's a hit. So you know, the country used to be much more the choices used to be a lot more limited. So a lot of the people would get around, especially the horror fans with with reading Fangoria. You know, you'd see what was coming up and Fangoria, and then all the horror fans would rush out and see those movies. And they're, you know, they're cheaper to make and they turn a profit. So I think that's why you have a lot of horror franchises. You know, they seem to have burned themselves out a while ago. Just because I think the marketplaces got bigger with like the streamers and so many theater chains now with so many movies coming out like it's you really have to like rise above all the clutter out there.

Alex Ferrari 34:32
Right and and I can't imagine being I think it's in the camera ready that Jordan Peele remake

Jeffrey Reddick 34:38
Yes, Kenya is gonna come out but they had to push it but you know, Candyman is one of those movies I mean, it's it's it definitely appears in like the top rated you know, as far as it's a it's a beautiful movie. Um, but I do think you know, people you know, I don't I like to say delicately because people get their hackles up when when you start talking about at all, but you know, you have to look at the time when that movie came out. Right. And, you know, it's basically an interracial love story. And, you know, people weren't quite ready for that. I mean, I just read an 85. You know, there was when they put up commando, there was a love scene between Arnold Schwarzenegger's character and the female lead. But when they cast right on Chong, they cut this loveseat out because they're like, the country's not ready for this yet. And there was there was still a lot of that I think itchiness that people had about interracial relationships. And I'm like, screw you. Because if it wasn't for interracial relationships, I wouldn't be here so.

Alex Ferrari 35:37
Exactly,

Jeffrey Reddick 35:38
exactly. But But, you know, it was a different time back then. So I you know, but that I mean, that movies from the acting directing?

Alex Ferrari 35:47
Yeah, I remember it.

Jeffrey Reddick 35:49
I mean, everything is like, it's a I mean, it's a masterful movie, like you. Such a beautiful movie. And I thought the sequel was good, too. I liked I liked the sequel a lot. But yeah, it did. I think the reason it probably didn't take off as it was, it was, it was it wasn't the, you know, hot teenagers getting slashed up. You know, it was like dealing with like, you know, racial inequality and racial injustice. And it also had an interracial love story at the center of it. So I think people you know, I again, I just think people weren't quite ready for that at the time that it came out.

Alex Ferrari 36:22
So how do you see from from the moment that final destination was released to now and moving forward? How has horror changed because I don't see as many slasher films anymore. That's not as in vogue as it used to be. Right. You know, it's not like the 80s the golden the golden era of slasher films and that kind of horror, what kind of and then there was the Was it the horror porn or not poor porn, but, um, so I saw it torture. Yeah, the saw and the hostel and that that whole era of, of kind of horror, where do you see horror going? And it Are we going to come back to some of this, you know, nostalgic slasher, because I know they tried to remake Friday, and they did it. They did as good of a job, but you can't catch that. Robert England is ready.

Jeffrey Reddick 37:12
Yeah. Yeah. I mean, I think right now we're, we're very much in a supernatural kind of

Alex Ferrari 37:19
write up, contract,

Jeffrey Reddick 37:20
kind of horror kind of world. But but I honestly, you know, because I know that the business tries to the business tries to stay ahead of the curve and kind of run the ball about what's going to be popular, but then something popular comes out and then they everybody tries to start making that so everybody's, you know, trying to make the next get out now, like socially relevant kind of horror films. So I think we'll be seeing some more of that coming out for a while, but I think we're just one, you know, fresh slasher film away from having any of these genres come back. I mean, I still love it good slasher movie. You know, I, you know, there have been a glut of zombie movies, like, you know, and I get on Netflix and Amazon Prime and Hulu and everything. I'm like, you know, from every country, it's like, there's a good zillion zombie movies out there right now. So I don't know. I mean, I think people go to see horror films to escape, though the horrors going on in the real world. So I feel like escapism or like supernatural kind of stuff, is probably going to always be popular, and slasher stuff, because that's still escapism if it's not sadistic. You know, like, just mean spirited. I certainly know when COVID first hit, you know, all my friends were like, we're writing a COVID script. I'm

Alex Ferrari 38:41
like, No, no, I said the same thing. And like I had, I talked to some executives, like we got 20 COVID scripts a day, and nobody is going to produce a COVID script. Because the last thing I want to watch is a COVID script. Like you didn't want to watch a 911 movie after 911 or Vietnam movie while Vietnam was going on. Yeah,

Jeffrey Reddick 39:00
yeah. So I think that um, I think the escapism horror You know, I think supernatural still goes strong for a long time, but, you know, I think slasher movies are always going to be popular, it's just you got to, you know, you got to hit that right slasher kind of combination with characters in the slasher together.

Alex Ferrari 39:17
And in the end, that's the one thing I love you said that said something a second ago mean spirited with those those slasher films of the 80s that we all kind of love and grew up with. They're not mean spirited. I mean, Freddie is funny. Like, he got funnier, he got a lot funnier, after sec, the second and third and fourth, he became almost a comedy act, you know, killing people towards the end and towards the end of that series, and, and, you know, it wasn't mean spirited, even Michael and those in Jason who are kind of basically voiceless, they don't say anything. And when Freddy vs. Jason came out, I mean, that was hilarious. That was so much fun, but That is a key isn't it not being mean spirited in the way you do it and I think a lot of those torture kind of torture porn films, kind of, I think a little bit were a little bit mean spirited, like salt one was amazing.

Jeffrey Reddick 40:13
Yeah. And I think that's it, you know, it's all a personal it's a matter of taste for sure. Like I don't, you know, cuz I know certain people, like certain types of movies, but I shouldn't there's, there's a difference, like, and I'll just use hostel as an example. Like I thought the first hostel was very entertaining, like it had an add humor to it. You had, you know, male antagonists for the first time in a long time in horror movies. So and it was also kind of commenting on how like, you know, you know, American men will American anybody will travel internationally and they're just we have an arrogance about it. Like we, you know, we go to like France, and we're like, annoyed that people don't speak English. And then we're here demanding that everybody speak English, but when we travel, we're like, why does anybody speak English everywhere? So they kind of played up that whole thing and made the character you know, the characters were kind of, some of them were sympathetic, but some of them were kind of jerks. And the torture didn't come to later was I think, if you watch saw too, you know, in my humble opinion, I like it. It kind of did everything right that hostile did I think hostile to did wrong? You know, because it had, you know, women it had the, you know, Heather amaszonas character who's like, tied up naked, hung upside down, like begging for life as this woman like, slowly like, slices her for, you know, it's just, there's a difference in tone. Like, there's a Yeah, there's just a mean spiritedness about, like hostile to and there's a mean spirited is about certain of these kind of torture porn movies, where it's, you're not just you know, because you want to go have fun at these movies. It's not like, it's not like watching it. You don't want to go and watch somebody you know, you don't want to watch a mortician dissected the body correct in real life. So for a horror movie, it's not like you want to sit there and watch a killer slowly like to torture a person to death. You know, it's like watching somebody torture academ you know, online it's like, that's not entertaining. That's just feels gratuitous and is mean spirited. And I think that that's why those films don't tend to have as big of an audience because even the Saw movies they're, they're not I don't feel like they're mean spirited. there's a there's a sense of like, with jigsaw, you know, giving people a choice to like, save themselves or save somebody else. You know, sometimes, I don't feel like they're, you know, they're gruesome but I don't feel like they're mean like it feels like you're like

Alex Ferrari 42:30
I remember hospital being like costal was a hostile to specifically was I agree with you was mean. Yeah, like, there there was just like, I don't want to watch this like this is, then you watch Friday. And you're like, well, this is fun. Like it this is this is just fun. Chucky is you know, like, when when my wife saw Chucky the first time she's like, and she watched it years later after it was really she's like, this is ridiculous. I would just kick the damn thing. It's a doll. Like, it's so it's a doll. What's wrong with you people like it's like, but that's kind of what makes it funny, and that he's so wonderfully written and his dialogue and everything is so yeah. And the bride of Chucky and all of that. It's amazing. Now, what do you feel? Because you've I'm sure read a lot of scripts in your day. What is the biggest mistake you see young screenwriters make?

Jeffrey Reddick 43:24
Um, I don't know if this is a quantitative light. If this is like a literal mistake, I can say I think the problem that I find with a lot of young screenwriters is they think they're great. writers are a script. Right? Right away. Yeah. And, and any, in any, you know, just if you think logically, no matter what if you're no matter what you're, if you're an artist, whether you're a painter or a writer, thing, or you get better with practice, and the more you do it, and if you're a craftsman, if you make stuff out of wood, you get better, like the first thing that you carved out of wood isn't going to be the best thing that's ever been carved out of wood before. So I think the biggest mistake that I see with a lot of young writers is they kind of come out with this attitude. Like, I understand that you have to believe in yourself, because trust me, this business is like, you get rejected, you know, 1000 times and then you get one person saying yes. So you have to keep your ego. You know, you have to keep your spirits up and your ego right sighs but I just see a lot of young writers where they're like, this is the best script, you know, I've ever written and you got to read it. And if you read it, you start giving them notes, they start arguing with you. And you know, not that I think that my notes are the end all be all, but it's like, there's an unwillingness to recognize that they're young, like, trust me my first couple of scripts, I went back and read them. I'm like, wow, these are, you know, years later, like, these are crap. You know, these were awful. I can't believe I thought these were great. But you have I think the biggest mistake young writers make is they don't understand that. You know, it takes You've got to keep doing it to get better. And you know, every script that I write hopefully is better than the last script that I wrote. Because I've learned something in between. So I think being open to that process and realizing it takes time, like there's a lot of people that think there's some easy shortcut, like, and I'm sure you've heard this, too, every time. You know, I speak at a, you know, any place, whether it's a high school or a college or a horror convention, or a screenwriting convention. The two questions that people ask me are, how do I get my script to a studio head? And how do I get financing? How do I get an agent? Yeah. And how do you know and it's like, there aren't any. think that there are like, it literally, like I heard, there was a 10 year old somebody, and I can't remember who it was, I wish I could, somebody very smart and famous at the time, it said you have to be if you're an artist, you have to be willing to dedicate 10 years of your life to struggling before you finally succeed. And they said, we say succeed, we don't mean that you're going to all of a sudden be rich and you know, have all the money in the world, we mean to get something done. And, you know, I thought that Rose Bowl, when I went to you know, New York as I was 19, I got an agent, I was interning at New Line, I was like screw that 10 year rule, it was 10 years to the to the year I graduated high school that I sold final destination. So it took all that time of me writing scripts, getting them rejected, almost getting jobs, not getting them, it took 10 years to actually get my first project like produced and made for when I graduated. So people have that's, you know, I think that's a rule that people need to keep in the back of their head. Because there's so much clutter in the business, where you have people who are like, Alright, I'm going to try this acting thing for two years, because my dad has a lot of money, and I'm pretty, or handsome. And if I don't make it, I'm going to quit. So you, you have like people who are dedicating their lives to this plus, you have all this clutter of hundreds of people coming to Hollywood every day, you know, with with rich families, and you know, their good look, the best looking person at their school. So there, they've got to be the most beautiful. And so you have to outline it's almost like survivor, you have to like Outlast

Alex Ferrari 47:04
What is it? What is it? I'll think out last?

Jeffrey Reddick 47:07
Yeah, it's like, You got it, you gotta, you gotta, you gotta be in it for the long haul. Like, you know, this, this isn't a business, you know, like that you that can be kind of a side hobby. You know, it's something you really have to like, jump into the pool, and you have to, like swim in that pool for up to maybe 10 years. So there aren't, there aren't any shortcuts. You know, because it's even this stuff. Like when I wrote that letter, Bob Shea, I wasn't I didn't have any grand plan about oh, this is going to lead to this. And this and this in the future. I was just like, I have a story I want to tell and I want this. He He owns the he does the Friday movies. And I want him to read it. You know, like that was my only goal. Because I had a story to tell that I wanted somebody to read. So I could never have planned that, oh, he's going to kind of take me under his wing. And then I'm going to get it Yeah, I could I you know, I never planned any of that stuff. So I found that what people call like luck has, has often been years of me working really hard over here and it not paying off like I thought it would but then somebody else on this side of the you know, this side of town reads a script. And they're like, oh, let's call Jeffrey and, you know, so there's been a lot of that. So all the work that you put out there will benefit you somehow, but you just don't always know how it's gonna be. So you can't expect like a shortcut, like, somebody at a convention is going to, you know, have their agent sign you and then all of a sudden you're gonna sell your script and then that's it, you know, it's just

Alex Ferrari 48:40
it's no it there is no shortcut. I completely agree with you. And and I, I we both got wrapped up lots of it in our business, lots of shrapnel, lots of wounds, lots of wounds. And when you say put work out there, you know, when I with this podcast I've been, you know, that's why a lot of podcasts fail because they just like I'm gonna do 20 I'm just gonna keep dude like after 20 they're like, well, no one's listening. I'm not making any money. I gotta go. And it's the outlasted almost all of my contemporaries. And by putting out these episodes, it's amazing. Who listens to this stuff. Yes. And all of a sudden, I get a phone call or I get an email going, Hey, I listened to this one obscure episode. And this guy who directed some of the biggest movies ever wants to be on your show, because it'd be a good fit for what he's doing. Right. I'm like, like, what? Like, how is that? But that's the thing. It's it's putting work out there without any attachment to the outcome? I think is I think the biggest piece of advice.

Jeffrey Reddick 49:38
Absolutely. Absolutely.

Alex Ferrari 49:40
Now, can you tell me about how you transitioned from just being a lowly screenwriter to now being a writer, director of a new film?

Jeffrey Reddick 49:54
Well, yeah, it's so funny because you know in features Yes, the writers are like look slowly at TV.

Alex Ferrari 49:59
But yes,

Jeffrey Reddick 50:00
I started, I worked, I worked. I started working in TV recently, I'm like, I've been missing out. On the party, like the good stuff is in TV, oh my god. But you know, it's it's funny, like I, I had a couple projects that I said, I have to direct these because if I give them away, I already know how people are going to change them. And I These are things I want to direct. And when I first went out with good samaritan, I just went out with it as a project I didn't go out with, you know, with the idea of me directing. But the thing with this story is, you know, you're not sure if it's a supernatural force that's after them. Or if it's a killer that's after them over, it's all on the main character's head because she's had some trauma in her past, and every place that wanted to do the movie was like, just make it straight up supernatural, or just make it a straight up killer. And then we'll do it. And I'm like, but that's not the story, I want to tell like, that's, that's kind of the easy story until like, I want to tell something a little different. So I realized that if I wanted to do this movie, the way that I wrote it, then I would have to direct it myself. And I'd been on enough sets and been a have been in the business long enough that I knew the basics, I directed a short in a in a, you know, like an indie music video for a friend. So, you know, I knew that I knew the basics, but you definitely don't know what you don't know until you actually get on a set and start directing yourself. So, you know, that was a little that was some hubris on my part. I'm thinking, well, I've been on a lot of sets. And I did a short, so I'm ready. That's awesome. But I have to say it was like, such, you know, now that now that we're done, it was it was such a fulfilling experience. And it was such a learning experience, too, because now I know the areas that I need to fill in that I didn't know before. So I'm excited to do it. I'm glad that I did it. It was you know, again, and my friends, always, my director, friends were like, well, you trust me, when you direct your first feature, you're going to be like, screw that I'm never directing again. Or you want to do it again. So I definitely want to do it again. But yeah, the reason the reason for me doing it was out of necessity of not wanting them to change. You know, the story into like, just a straight up supernatural movie or straight up, you know, slasher movie. And it's, you know, like Final, but I mean, this definitely didn't have anywhere near the budget of final destination. But like final destination. It was a, it was a concept where the people that wanted to do or like well, it's not horror, supernatural enough to sell it as a horror movie. And if we sell this as a thriller, then you need a list stars. So we have to get a list stars attached so that, you know that whole all that business kind of crap that came up with even with final destination where people weren't there, like, Oh, you can't do something that's not easily put in a box. I'm just kind of motivated me to like do it myself.

Alex Ferrari 52:50
Yeah. Because you were you were trying to go down the road with the film, like traditional like, go to the studios trying to get financing, do it a little bit, you know, do it the normal way. But you kept getting so much stuff, so much resistance on your vision, you're like, well screw it, let's just go do it indie. Yeah. Can you talk a little bit about first of all the name of the movie, what the name of the movie is? And what is it about?

Jeffrey Reddick 53:11
Oh, yeah, the movie is called don't look back. It was originally titled Good Samaritan. Some people might get confused by them. It's called don't look back. And it's about a group of people who see somebody getting fatally assaulted in a park. And they don't help and one of the people and it gets the video goes public, the victim's brother outs, the witnesses and somebody or something starts killing them. So our lead character is a woman named Caitlin who's gone through some trauma in her past. And she's convinced that something supernatural is after them. So she's trying to solve the mystery of who killed the guy in the park. And everybody else is like, there's a killer after us. And then she kind of ends up popping up but a lot of the scenes where the dead people are because she she's kind of seeing these supernatural signs around her that are pointing her into a direction of It's Supernatural, but you're not sure if it's in her head or not. So yeah, that was a bad elevator pitch because I kind of jumped around a little bit.

Alex Ferrari 54:09
I can't I'm gonna have to pass on this one. I can't I can't, I can't I can't finance this one. Jeffrey, I'm sorry. Yes.

Jeffrey Reddick 54:16
Five, six sentences. And, but, but yeah, it's, um, it was it was a really fun film to make. And, you know, again, what was great for me too, is I got to, I just had a lot of creative control, like, again, and there were definitely areas like, with locations and things like that, where we had to, you know, compromise because we didn't have a budget to do certain things. But, you know, I got to work with a wonderful cast. You know, our lead Courtney Bell is a wonderfully talented black actress. And, you know, I got to find the Best Actress for the film who was, you know, a black actress, which, you know, if I done this with a studio, the people that they were throwing at me were, were not, they were like, you know, and you know, that's, that's Always an important that's been important to me for so long because I've written, diverse cast in my films before. And they always end up being cast with all white actors and actresses. And I just tried to explain to people because again, people, when you talk about diversity, it's again, like certain, you know, hackles start rising because people start getting like defensive. But it's, it's, it's more about, you know, when people read scripts in Hollywood, or when they cast movies, their default for every character is a white actor or actress. So that's just the default for a leading, like, we'll send out a casting notice for leading ladies or leading men, and we'll say, you know, all ethnicities, and 99% of the submissions will be white actors and actresses. And even if we send out, you know, note saying, we were looking for black actors and actresses, they'll send us a lot then but then, you know, they're still throwing in more white people at us being like, look at these people first. So for certain roles, people of color are just not in people's brains, even the casting people's brains when it comes to leading roles, and so we're starting to course, correct that now. But it is frustrating when they've cast like, you know, white actors and actresses in roles that were written for people of color. And they always say, well, we just went with the best person. But I've seen so many, I've been in the rooms with casting with people casting projects, and their thinking is what is going to be the most palpable to people across the United States and across the world. And that's why they make that decision most of the time. So now we're seeing that course corrected a little bit. And I've just seen so many wonderfully gifted, lead talented actors and actors of every race, you know, white, Latino, man, you know, Asian, black, it's, there's so many talented people, that just giving people an opportunity that, you know, like Courtney would not have been cast as the lead in a horror film, if it was done by a studio, but I think what people see your performance now they're gonna be like, holy shit, who is this girl? So I'm really excited about that.

Alex Ferrari 57:00
Well, I'm looking forward for it to get to released and I will put links to all of that in the show notes. I am going to now ask you a few questions. I ask all of my guests. What are three horror screenplays every screenwriter should read?

Jeffrey Reddick 57:17
Um, well, I am going to say A Nightmare on Elm Street. I think that's a really, really strong script. I think the A because I consider aliens or a sci fi ish.

Alex Ferrari 57:31
It's it dances the line of horror I get you, I get exactly where you're coming from. There's a monster. a predator arguably is is a monster film. I mean, if you think of monsters of the Frankenstein, and Dracula of our generation is aliens and predators. Yeah. But they they danced the line between action sci fi horror. But yes, aliens. Aliens is just an amazing film period.

Jeffrey Reddick 57:54
And it's a it's such a great script. And that's a script where you can tell a director wrote the script, because when you visualize the movie, you visualize exactly what ended up on the screen. So that's how James wrote that script. But that's probably not a good rule, because I always tell screenwriters not to direct in their scripts.

Alex Ferrari 58:13
But alien, the alien script also was terrifying. Yeah, the original the original alien was terrifying as well.

Jeffrey Reddick 58:21
And what's another great script? I feel like I'm cheating because it's just like, I just think of silence the lambs to like, that was another script that I read that, you know, I'm trying to think of those obscure horror scripts. Like, you know, the scream script is really fantastic.

Alex Ferrari 58:37
Yeah, but extra ILOG extra extra cyst obviously, is is a good screenplay. jaws. I'm not sure if the screenplay is as powerful as the film. I haven't read the screenplay. Have you read the screenplay now? Yeah, I don't know if that translates. But But I think the exorcist if I remember correctly reading that script. That was pretty terrifying.

Jeffrey Reddick 58:59
Yeah, yeah.

Alex Ferrari 59:02
Okay, what advice would you give a screenwriter wanting to break into the business today?

Jeffrey Reddick 59:11
Write a lot. By, you know, reading scripts online, I think finding a genre that you're passionate about is very important, because they again, the business does tend to pigeonhole you or put you in a box based off your first kind of hit. So I think, you know, if you like, horror, if you like sci fi, feel like action. Find some of your favorite movies in that genre and find the scripts online because reading scripts will give you a lot of, you know, a lot of inspiration and, you know, even instruction on how to write stuff. So I think that's really important. And I tell people to it's like, you know, we live in an age now where people can shoot movies like 4k movies on their iPhone. And, you know, the reason you write a script is because you want to get it made. And if you're I think if you're a young screenwriter, especially surround yourself with the creative people like find a good friend of yours who's a director. You're especially if you're in like school, studying screenwriting, you know, like, I was talking to Craig Perry at UCLA to like their screenwriting class and Craig asked the class you know, screenwriters, raise your hands, directors, raise your hands. And he's like, how many of you all hang out together, and none of them did. And Craig's like, guys, you're crazy. Like, you're a writer, you should be a director, you should be hanging out with the writers because you need scripts to write. And I think people don't think that way. When you're, when you're younger, it's like you think a little bit more myopically. And I think if you think about that, you know, connecting yourself with a good director writing a really amazing short and having a director direct, it can get you a lot of attention. You know, I think that that those are the things like it's, it's continued making sure that you keep growing as a as an artist, like, have friends who will give you honest feedback, you'll, you'll find out your friends pretty quickly, you'll have the friends that hate everything you do, like, you don't need those friends to give, because they just hate it, they're gonna hate everything you do. And you don't want your mom reading your script, because she's gonna love everything you write. But you'll find that right balance that people who give you constructive criticism, and it's just be open in that to be open to learning more, because you're always going to grow as an artist.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:13
And what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

Jeffrey Reddick 1:01:21
What if I haven't learned it completely. Trying to control things that I have no control over? is, is, is the lesson of life that I still also struggle with? You know, I still try it. I try not to, but I think it's a very important lesson is to, to, you know, let go and let God because there are certain things, you know, you can beat your head against the wall for 20 years trying to do something or, or be angry about something that you have no control over and kind of letting that go as much as possible, I think, let you have a much less stressful life. And you can kind of go along with the flow of life. Like when you know, when the acting thing hit a wall for me. I didn't quit the business. I started writing, you know. So it's kind of going with that flow and seeing what life brings your way being open about. Jeffrey, I

Alex Ferrari 1:02:09
really appreciate you being on the show. Thank you so much. I want to congratulate you on making the jump from screenwriter to Writer Director and finally getting I know that's a big step. It is a big step. It's not done very often. It's definitely not done well very often. So I am I am I congratulate you. And thank you for bringing Final Destination into our into our world into the Zeitgeist. It is still very entertaining when I go back and watch those films. So thank you so much for everything you do my friend and I continue success.

Jeffrey Reddick 1:02:45
Thank you for all your support. And yeah, yeah, just now you got me all like blushy Yeah, I just really, I do. I appreciate the support. You've been a great supporter for so long. So and you know, you know, I've got your back on this side, too.

Alex Ferrari 1:02:59
Thank you, my friend. I want to thank Jeffrey for coming on the show and dropping the horrific knowledge bombs on the bulletproof screenwriting tribe today. Thank you so much, Jeffrey. Please don't forget to check out his new film, don't look back and get links to that. And anything else we spoke about in this episode, after show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/090. And if you guys haven't checked it out already, please head over to ifhacademy.com. And check out all of our amazing courses, including screenwriting courses, how to get money for your film, how to produce a film, film distribution, blueprint and so many more courses and education to help you guys on your path. So thank you again for listening. If you are going to go trick or treating, please, please be safe. And as always keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 085: From Legendary Flop to a Moneymaking Machine with Waterworld’s Peter Rader

Today on the show we have the writer and creator of the legendary film Waterworld Peter Rader. I wanted to bring Peter on the show to discuss what it was like to be a part of one of the biggest budget films in Hollywood history at the time.

After the melting of the polar ice caps, most of the globe is underwater. Some humans have survived, and even fewer still, notably the Mariner (Kevin Costner), have adapted to the ocean by developing gills. A loner by nature, the Mariner reluctantly befriends Helen (Jeanne Tripplehorn) and her young companion, Enola (Tina Majorino), as they escape from a hostile artificial island. Soon the sinister Smokers are pursuing them in the belief that Enola holds the key to finding the mythical Dryland.

For those of you who may not know Waterworld was considered one of the biggest box-office flops in history. The production was plagued with production issues, the script was re-written too many times to count and the budget soars from $100 million to $172 million. The film was a punching bag for the press. Waterworld ended up making $265 million at the box office. That with the revenue generated over the years from television rights, VHS, DVD, special editions Blu-rays the film turned out to be one of the most valuable films in the Universal library.

Where the money machine really gets turned on is from the Waterworld: A Live Sea Stunt Spectacular attraction at Universal Studios Hollywood. The show has been a mainstay at the park for over 20 years, replacing the Miami Vice Stunt Show. The attraction has also been duplicated four other times around the world including Universal Studios Japan and Singapore and has generated Universal hundreds of millions of dollars over the years.

Peter Rader has worked as a film and television writer for 20 years. He has developed numerous projects for other studios, and industry leaders such as Steven Spielberg, Dino De Laurentiis, and John Davis.

He has worked as a cinematographer, editor, and producer on a number of award-winning documentary projects, including AWAKE: The Life of Yogananda, which THE GUARDIAN dubbed the Indie sleeper hit of 2014, following its extensive worldwide theatrical run.

Peter was raw and candid with me about his amazing journey with Waterworld, which is celebrating its 25-year anniversary this year, and his other Hollywood adventures. Enjoy my eye-opening conversation with Peter Rader.

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Alex Ferrari 0:47
I'd like to welcome to the show Peter Rader, man, how are you doing, Peter?

Peter Rader 5:13
I am great. Thanks for having me.

Alex Ferrari 5:15
Oh, man, thank you so much for coming on the show you you've been a, you've been on my other shows, as a documentarian, as a producer as a self distribution guru. And it's so odd because when I first I was so excited to meet you, and we had that lunch that day in that ridiculously expensive Indian restaurant. I still never forgot that, like, how much is the buffet. But we were sitting there and I was so excited about the movie you did with called awake about Yogananda that I really never realized that you were the writer of water was only like, months, or maybe even a year later. I was like, we I think we're gonna do another interview. And I was like, Oh, let me just check out what else he's done. And I was like, Oh my god, he wrote Waterworld. I'm like, I can't believe and I'm a fan of the movie actually loved the movie when it came out. And and I'm like, Oh, I gotta get him on the show. So thank you so much for coming on the show to talk all things Waterworld and your experience writing it and dealing with it and all the stuff that came out of it.

Peter Rader 6:17
So yeah, I mean, it's, you know, I have existed on both two extremes of the entertainment business. I've written you know, gigantic movies for the Hollywood Studios. And I've also you know, produced indie documentaries about a spiritual master. So those two very Yeah, I've got stories stories to tell.

Alex Ferrari 6:37
So I so for for everyone listening, how did you get into the business as a writer?

Peter Rader 6:43
So I had a light bulb go off in college, I took a film production course. And I was like, this is it. Got it. This is it. This is my life. I'm making movies. I'm telling stories. I love that I love the technology. I love you know, the whole idea of the narrative and, and, and, you know, just the logical archetypes and telling epic stories, all of that got the bug. I thought I was on a directing track. That's, that's I was like, I'm gonna direct I'm going to be a director, because I just loved you know, just that whole thing. Just controlling the whole process is particularly post production. Got to Hollywood moved out here and did some independent, like, music videos. I did a couple of music videos as a director, you know, I was hustling and actually did a couple of low budget features. I did a gothic horror movie called grandmother's house, which was great. And, and another genre movie called hired to kill which was dirty dozen with women.

Alex Ferrari 7:42
Nice.

Peter Rader 7:44
Both are the same producer. And but it was kind of like this thankless thing where it wasn't kind of getting to me, getting me to the kind of stories that I wanted to tell. And meanwhile, sort of on the side, I was kind of doing some writing. I never saw myself as a writer that was so interesting. It actually took me years to realize, you know, I'm a writer, even after what, I didn't realize I was a writer. But I had developed this story. And interestingly, the genesis of the story did come out of low the low budget world. Up until that point, in my early and mid 20s. I was thinking What can I do for no money? Like what can I do on in, you know, in one location on a weekend, you know, like every young filmmakers thinking like, what can I contain contained contained small, small, small, and this one guy invited me in for a meeting, he worked for Roger Corman, his name was Brad crevalle. And he actually went on to produce a bunch of the Farrelly brothers movies, you know, pretty big producer, but at the time, he was kind of hustling and raising money for Roger Corman, by any means necessary. So in this case, he said, okay, Peter, here's the deal. I've got some South African money, okay, I got some South African investors, and they want to make a Mad Max ripoff. If you write it, I'll let you direct it. Okay, so it was like, Okay, I'm being asked to moral questions here. was straight

Alex Ferrari 9:07
straight up Mad Max rip off. Got it. Okay.

Peter Rader 9:10
Yes. So, am I willing to take the South African Blood Money? Okay, because it was still the apartheid era.

Alex Ferrari 9:17
Yeah, Jesus, right. Yeah. So

Peter Rader 9:19
there's that and then second was I would like to do a Mad Max rip off. Okay. So unfortunately, the answer to the first question was, yes, if it was gonna get me my directing break, you know, whatever. I'm gonna do it. I'm gonna do it. Second question was was I willing to write another one of these Mad Max rip offs that were a dime a dozen that everyone was developing that was you know, everyone was bringing to MIPCOM and AFM here. I got this. I got, um, you know, I got gasoline blowing up in the desert. I got all beat up cars. I got machine guns. It was just completely oversaturated and boring. And it wasn't exciting to me. But I remember walking, you know, in the marina here in LA, and a bunch of us had like, charted. Botha river we're gonna go sailing whatever and I looked around I was like I got one of those light bulbs is like on water madmax on water that's how we redefined the genre show happens all the time. It's like you know, Star Wars is a Western space like you take a

Alex Ferrari 10:14
die hard diehard on a boat Die Hard to build a die hard a plane. Yeah,

Peter Rader 10:18
I heard with a blind guy, whatever you change up one huge one element and it becomes a completely different story, because we are rehashing the same stories over and over again. Anyway. And Waterworld is a Western. I'll get to that in a second. But I did come up with that idea, which is let's set it on water flooded planet. How cool would that be? boats jet skis. Boom. So I went back to Brad and I said, Okay, Brad, here I got, we're gonna do Mad Max on water. And he looked at me, are you gonna have your friggin it's gonna cost a fortune. A movie like that. Literally, it's gonna cost us $5 million dollars.

Alex Ferrari 10:53
Fine, easily $5 million?

Peter Rader 10:55
Easy. He wants to spend like 50 grand. Right? Right, right. 100 times his budget? No. So he said no. And I said, I still like this idea. So I wrote it on spec. And I was so fearless. You know, when you're young and you don't know the rules, and you don't know all the rules that you're breaking. That's a good time. That's a beautiful, creative time. And I think I just cranked out some a draft in three weeks. And then at the time, I knew no one I knew no producers. No, right? No. My cousin was dating a writer who was working on a TV series. And I said, Would you take a look at this? Would you read it? The guy read it. And it goes, he gave me a man, you know, and I was like a man. It was a knife in the heart. So I said, Okay, I'll put this on a shelf. I'm putting this on a shelf. And I went off and I pursued these other opportunities that I mentioned the two low budget movies, okay. In the second movie, I was so disillusioned, I was like, Oh my god, this is a path to nowhere. You know, do I really want to do these movies. And I opened the drawer, I dusted off the script. And I said, this thing is not bad. I wrote it in 86. In 89, I took another look at it. I was like, This is not bad. I did a quick rewrite. By the way, I wrote the original draft on the original Macintosh computer, that the one

Alex Ferrari 12:12
Yeah, sure. I got it nice.

Peter Rader 12:16
Anyway, dusted it off. I rewrote it on a slightly later version of the Mac, I think. And, and then it was one of these just Hollywood dream stories were like, at that point, I didn't know a few producers, I gave it to one. They're like, this is really good. I'm gonna I'm gonna give it to this guy. I got an agent. I got a lawyer. Before I knew it. It was handed to john Davis. You know, it was a big producer, who had a deal at Fox. His father ended up buying Fox later. But that's a separate story. His office was in the diehard building, you know, and, and he said, I know who's perfect for this. Larry Gordon. So margins, Larry Gordon. And you know, within three weeks, I had a deal. And it wasn't just one, you know, they bought this back script. And then my crazy agent at the time, who was ICM, and then he moved to CIA in the room said, you like this thing? I you know, you know what his next project is? I don't want to talk about it. But you know, I want you to commit to two pictures. They he got me a to picture deal sight unseen on a script that didn't even exist in my imagination. I had no Wow. So, so and then, and then began my, my Baptism by fire. Because I was so naive at the time that I didn't even realize that a writer could be fired. You know? I'm the runner.

Alex Ferrari 13:41
It's my idea. What are you talking about?

Peter Rader 13:44
Yeah, exactly. So you know, development. Hell, it was just crazy. All the executives got in there. Everyone had an opinion. Everyone put a pin on the script, you know, get this I did this darker, grittier, you know, blah, blah, blah, more more edgy, more Mad Max more this, you know? And I did, I ended up doing seven drafts. You know, some new ideas came into it that were good. But mostly it was like horizontal changes are actually kind of a diminishing of the, you know, the sort of energy and

Alex Ferrari 14:13
a watering down if you will, no pun intended.

Peter Rader 14:19
And I'll take a sip of water. And, and then, you know, there was a series of writers that came on. So when Kevin Reynolds and Kevin Costner came aboard, I had one creative conversation with Kevin Reynolds. And then he basically said, look, I think it needs a new voice. You know, we're gonna bring in another writer. And of course, you know, Kevin Costner had someone in mind they brought in you know, who whoever I don't remember the sequence Exactly. writers, but there were five writers who actually participated in the arbitration. There was one writer Joss Whedon worked on it without any credit or whatever. He was like a script doctor literally onset but ultimately, the original Funny drafts. And you know, the thing was arbitrated. And you know, I got, of course, first position credit. And I shared with David Lee, who, you know, ended up doing some, you know, some good, good, good work on the one piece.

Alex Ferrari 15:15
Now, do you have the original script still like your version of it? I do have is it available anywhere for anybody to read?

Peter Rader 15:23
It might even be on the web. And I people have seen it. It's, it's been the subject of various I mean, we're probably going to get into this, but it was, we did various arbitrations at one point, we had to find the story of origin and trace it back. And, and here's, this is the quintessential Hollywood Story. Three months before production, so I sold the script in 1990. They went into production in 94. And in 95, the movie came out. And in fact, we're celebrating the 25th anniversary this year, um, three months before production in 1994. Chuck Gordon, Larry's brother, who was also a producer on the movie took me out to lunch, just to kind of let me know what was going on and stuff and you know, connect and, and he said to me, you know, Peter, you know, the deal is that we don't, we still don't have a script that's as good as your original spec script. I was like, You gotta be kidding. Just Just use the real. Yeah, should be written exactly, thank you shoot the original. And he said, too late. The train has left the station, we've built a set, we've committed to it, we've committed to producing this other script. And even though it's not as good as your original, it loses the energy, when you write it into the ground, there's something about you know, original ground.

Alex Ferrari 16:44
Well, let me ask you a question. Because you were, how old were you? When this happened?

Peter Rader 16:48
Let's see. I was around one, seven, I think.

Alex Ferrari 16:51
All right. So that's fairly young, to be thrown into the deep end of the pool here, cuz you're, you're at this point playing at the upper echelons of Hollywood, and, and you're playing with some really big players of the day. So when someone you know, I want writers listening to understand that, it's not always the best script that gets made. It's just not. There's politics, ego, money, there's so many things that get thrown into the mix. And that he took you out to lunch and said, Hey, I wish we never got anything as good as your original script. That's a great definition of Hollywood, isn't it? Like it's like, oh, we we had something really good. We watered it down to appease all of the egos and all of the politics involved. And now we're this man, wish we could just go back to what we what we originally bought. Now. Unless you are Joss Wheaton, Christopher Nolan in Tarantino Sorkin you know, very established screenwriters. And even they depending on guarantee knows much, but maybe even they still have to deal with some of this stuff. They would, they would have had the juice to push back a bit. You had no juice, because you were just happy. You were happy to be there.

Peter Rader 18:05
Yeah. And and also, um, this goes to another question that is really some point to make, which is in in the Hollywood structure, you're assigning your copyright, you give away your copyright in about an hour. And they buy they buy you out, which is unlike Europe, you know, and unlike playwrights, you know, in Europe, writers retain their copyrights and they give a license and extended license, you know, to to the producer, and you know, playwrights control their material and on Broadway, they own the copyright in you know, hollywood the pact with the devil. The money is big, the upside is big, you know, there's fame, fortune, all these things, but you are giving away your copyright, which means they can do whatever they want with the material. And this is going to tie into a conversation that I hope we get to which is this whole idea of separated rights, which is certain rights that the writer retains even in the the Writers Guild contract. No, such as novelization, you have the right to turn your work into a novel, dramatic stage rights, you have the right to adapt your your work into a play version. Right. They have free rein,

Alex Ferrari 19:19
so Okay, so you so you're a few months away from production. You've been obviously there's been a barrage of writers on board at that at this point in the game. And now you've got Kevin, who, at that point was already an Oscar winning director. And and All right, I'm not sure if he didn't, right. Didn't dances, right? No,

Peter Rader 19:41
yes. But he's not directing.

Alex Ferrari 19:42
No, no, no, Kevin. No. Kevin Reynolds is directing. Yeah, I know. But but he still was a Oscar winning. Yeah, he was. He was he was it in the in the

Peter Rader 19:52
90s. It was principes he was coming off of a hit movie. The problem of movie so right but he

Alex Ferrari 19:58
was Yeah, and dances. Well, before that and Field of Dreams and all the stuff that he's been doing during that time, he was in his in the heyday of a thing. So Kevin, from what I understand, I've spoken to a few people who worked with him before after, and during that time, he pretty much controlled the show. Like he like whatever Kevin wants. Kevin gets. So if he wants a new writer to come on board, guess what, everybody that new writers coming on board, he wielded a lot of power. And that's also the almost I think the, the height of the of the of the movie star in the movie start with the movie star power. Not as much today, there are still so obviously movie stars, but not, you know, before you could literally put Kevin Costner reading a back of a cereal box. And you got 20 million opening? Yeah. You know. I mean, essentially, that's the way it worked back then. So how are you? So the movie gets started? And they're, they're producing it? And I mean, I'm assuming you went on set? I did. So okay. How was it? Because the stories are legendary of how I mean, you you're shooting on water? That like is rough. That's a rough you. You're working in the elements. It wasn't a tank, for the most part, if I'm not mistaken, right? No, it was no tank at all.

Peter Rader 21:14
In fact, here's the I understand that Kevin Reynolds, in in pre production decided to call the one guy who could give you a lot of advice about how to shoot on water. He called Spielberg. And he said, Hey, Steven, here's the deal. I'm doing Waterworld. We're doing a water. You know, do you have any advice for me? Steven Spielberg said unequivocally Do not shoot. Water. dope. I mean, in other words, you're gonna get VISTAs set out second unit, get your big shots on water. You know, whatever, your drones and helicopters. We didn't have drones back then. But do everything on a tank, everything in a tank or you know, in a stage, everything, everything everything. And Kevin Reynolds decided to disagree with Spielberg. And it just was a bizarre decision, you know, but I understand it. I want to defend Kevin Reynolds and Costner. I'm sure Costner was part of that decision. They wanted the verisimilitude. They wanted that gritty no denying it, we are out in the frickin middle of nowhere. And they did get that they don't get that. This is God forsaken flooded planet city. You know, it's out in the middle of nowhere. But the cost of that, you know, the price of that was that, you know, they went wildly over budget. And also, there's a certain ugly ugliness to the movie. Because, you know, the first shot of the day always ended up being like an 11 o'clock or noonday sun, even though their call was like 6am or 530. By the time they got all the freaking boats out there, that picture boat, catering boat, the prop boat, this boat, you know, you're not, you know, you're looking at 11. And then you've got this ugly sun. So they really ended up getting like five or six setups a day. And you know, then the one beauty shot like as that sun as the sun ball was setting in the thing, they would get that one beauty shot. That was it. That was their day,

Alex Ferrari 23:07
you know, it and I mean, there was a there was a storm to hit that right to

Peter Rader 23:12
Yeah, just before production. So here, I'm going to set up my visit to the set. So about three weeks into production, I show up on set. And I'm so excited. You know, this is my first feature. I mean, there was already a little bit of that negative press, you know, going around, but you know, I didn't care presses press it was so exciting. Movie, you know, and I flew to Hawaii, where they were shooting big island off the west coast and and I show up and I I'm getting this energy, like from the crew, like everyone is like glaring at me. Like why they glaring at me. And everyone was like, that's the fucking writer, you know,

Alex Ferrari 23:48
that's the guy who will put us through this.

Peter Rader 23:51
Exactly. That's what it was, you know, and, and I suddenly realized that you know, I here I am arriving three weeks into production. And they're like two and a half weeks late. Already, all they got was like two or three days of shooting, you know, three weeks in and everyone saw the writing on the wall. It was a disaster. A couple of weeks before production, that enormous set that floating set that sank it saying I need to rebuild it from scratch.

Alex Ferrari 24:17
Yeah, that's a Dennis Hopper of like, fourth thing.

Peter Rader 24:21
Yeah, no, not the Dennis Hopper thing. The good guys the eight. Oh,

Alex Ferrari 24:24
that's right. That's right. That's right. That's right.

Peter Rader 24:25
Yeah. Yeah, that that thing sank and you know, it was just a little bit of a disaster. So in that way,

Alex Ferrari 24:33
so just for everybody listening, if you're on if you're doing a movie, and on day one, you're a page behind. You're already in trouble. You got to pick that up. If you're two and a half weeks in and you've got what was a three day shoot or two and a half days of actual shooting

Peter Rader 24:52
rereads and they've gotten three days of shooting correct on them. This is

Alex Ferrari 24:55
an absolute disaster. You can pull your way out of it, it would be a miracle and the only thing that can fix that as money, that's that there's no catching up. It's just a money hose. And at the time, what was the starting budget of the film? If you don't want to ask me?

Peter Rader 25:15
I'm gonna guess, you know, there was one point at which we were actually looking at another director, this I guess he was Norwegian, his name was Niels gout. And he was, you know, a talented indie guy, but you know, he was not. This was where they were thinking, you know, we're gonna make this thing for 60 million or something. Well, you know, we'll really contain it. By the time we got, you know, movie stars in and stuff, it was it was up there was, you know, pushing whatever. 8090 ultimately, I think the budget was 175, which made it the most expensive movie of all time for five minutes. Because it was immediately eclipsed by like, 30 other movies, including that. The the Batman one with Schwarzenegger, and Clooney, and all Batman and Robin, which was just, yeah. So the above the line alone was like 16 million on that, you know, right. So they so so it was like, you know, short lived record for the most expensive movie of all time. But, you know, that's not the only reason it became a punching bag. It was all it also coincided with, you know, as you said, Costner himself was, you know, wielding his enormous power, and yet, he was very vulnerable. He was his marriage was falling apart, there was some scandal involving, you know, some affair that he had in Hawaii. And, and the press just decided, let's go to town. But here's, here's a good story. You know, we're over budget, you know, Heaven, you know, where they call it Kevin's gate for a while.

Alex Ferrari 26:37
Yeah, Kevin's instead of Heaven's Gate. Yeah,

Peter Rader 26:39
this star fish star. This is great. This is a story. And then it's that story turned out to be a myth, you know, and we're gonna get to that which is ultimately, you know, that water, the

Alex Ferrari 26:52
legacy, the legacy of the AI, so you're going on set, so everyone hates you? What else happened on that day when you were there?

Peter Rader 26:59
I, you know, went out on the boat and hung out with Costner and we chatted and Hopper, I think was in the scene, or no, maybe I saw him earlier, whatever. And we, it was all very pleasant, you know, and, and it was exciting for me. But, you know, ultimately, it was, you know, it was a mixed blessing. On the one hand, I was super pumped and super excited. And also, I was hard. So I was heartsick. Because I was, I was realizing that the essence of what I had written was not really in there. You know, Chuck Gordon had told me as much but I was also feeling and I was sensing it, you know, they had made a series of choices that were really kind of taking the heart out of the movie a little bit, and just making it kind of, you know, edgy and kind of the wrong way, in my opinion. So, so it was like, okay, you know, I stayed there for a week, I went to the set a couple times, and then I went home.

Alex Ferrari 27:50
So that I mean, so you're 27, around that age, and you're walking on at the time the most expensive movie ever made. And, and that's your script. I mean, that catapult I mean, there has to be a thrill. Regardless of the punching bag, regardless of the press, I would be so excited. And it's just such a massive film, like the size of it. I mean, on the water, and the, it was a fairly epic film to be shot.

Peter Rader 28:17
It was, you know, I have to say that the I think two to two moments in that story were bigger than that. When I actually sold that script, no spec script, and there was like a little bit of a bidding war and everything. And I was part of that whole spec script thing. I mean, that that moment for me was like, oh, man, you know, this is great in my dream, you know, and I remember that Christmas, it was just before Christmas in 89. That my father was coming out to visit, you know. And, and, you know, he, you know, I just ended up renting renting like a limo and pick him up to live on chef David stuff. It was a lot of fun. I mean, I was 27 you know, I was so young. And so unprepared for that voyage, you know, and, and, and the sad moment, you know, had this kind of bittersweet feeling to it. And then, ultimately, you know, then finally, the third moment was the premiere, you know, this huge Hollywood premiere at the Mann's Chinese. And, you know, again, another limo and you know, this whole thing, and, you know, I brought the 20 friends and that was really exciting. And, again, it was a mixed feeling there. The first part of it was super exciting. Kevin Reynolds idea to deconstruct the universal logo, you hear you have the universal logo, the globe and the letters wrapping around and then they float away and you see the globe and you see the continents disappearing, disappearing, disappearing and drilling in all the world and it's all water and then you come in on on Kevin, you know, on the timer, and I was like, oh, Like, it's a great moment, like, they nailed it. And then you know, the first scene of the movie was the first scene of every draft that was written, you know, which never changed was my scene, which is pices, puts into a contraption, filters it, and he drinks his home urine that tells you visually sets up the whole movie with, say, the words, you know, which is really,

Alex Ferrari 30:23
which is, and I want to just jump on that for a second, because, as opposed to a lot of a lot of writers will write it because you needed to establish what was going on, in a very quick and efficient way. I can't think of another way that you could have done it better, obviously, because after 400 writers or people wrote on it, they didn't change that, because it was so well constructed. Because without one word, you're right, you know, oh, this is a Waterworld. There's no land. And freshwater seems to be an issue.

Peter Rader 30:59
Yeah. Yeah. You know, it's interesting. I have a friend of my son's goes to USC film school and was taking a sort of interest, screenwriting class, and I forgot the professor's name. But, you know, basically, he was talking about, you know, grabbing the audience in the first five minutes and setting up. And he said, Who here has seen knows the opening of Waterworld actually use Waterworld as a case study. And, of course, no one raised their hand. But this one kid by my son's friend knew the film that I and it was that scene, that idea of just you know, the economy of really no sending up the whole thing and just, you know, visually,

Alex Ferrari 31:37
so when, so the movie comes out. And it's already I mean, you know, like, I've had other I've had other writers and creators on that have been in like, cultural Zeitgeist moments, like, we had the creators of Blair Witch, which was like a complete. I mean, I had to ask him, like, How did it feel being in the center of that storm? I have to ask you the same question, the negativity, the I mean, it was it was a punch line. Waterworld was a punch line for a long time of being a flop and like, Oh, my God, and it was like, an example of Hollywood excess and the powers of movie stars and all this stuff, which, obviously, none of this was your fault. But you get some of that blame some of that energy goes to you. What was it like, as, as a writer, and that's just as a human being to be caught up in that?

Peter Rader 32:28
Yeah, you know, um, it was interesting, very intense. And amazing. It was, it was amazing. I have to say that even the bad press was was kind of exciting on some level for me, because, as you said, it wasn't really, it wasn't my fault. You know, I created an idea. And then it basically got taken over and, you know, a series of decisions were made that I had nothing to do with. And here we were, on the other hand, you know, it was being written about, you know, in every newspaper, every round the world knew about that word, you know, that, that that title, it became part of the Zeitgeist, you know, it still is to this day, it has cult status, I still get residual checks, substantial residual checks every quarter from that movie 25 years later, because it has it kind of struck a chord of some kind. I mean, I think part of it, of course, is, you know, the origin story, which is the flood myth, every culture has a flood myth. And I was recently someone was telling me, you know, what that potentially was caused by which is, you know, there was a, there was a meteor strike potentially back way back in the day, but it wasn't just one. It wasn't just one Meteor because it wouldn't have affected all these different continents. It was this huge rock that broke up and then bom, bom, bom bom. So it had a whole bunch of splashes, and apparently, you know, wiped out a lot of cultures and hence, the, you know, that the flood myth, you know, the Noah's Ark, and every every civilization has this myth. And I think the combination of that idea, which is probably built into baked into our DNA, and also this kind of obsession with post apocalyptic movies, which everyone seems to have,

Alex Ferrari 34:13
when and in today's world, not so much, it's not so much fiction anymore.

Peter Rader 34:18
Exactly, exactly. In fact, I was invited to the United Nations to talk about Waterworld. We can talk about that if you're interested. How,

Alex Ferrari 34:24
what? Please, elaborate,

Peter Rader 34:29
okay. Not long ago, around six months ago, I got a call out of the blue from National Geographic journalist who was saying I'm organizing a roundtable at the United Nations to discuss the feasibility of floating cities. In other words, we're dealing with two crises at the same time simultaneously, habitat loss, you know, from rising oceans and an increasing population What are we going to do with like, for instance, Bangladesh, like, you know, you have five feet, and that's millions people displaced. But you know, what are we going to do with them? Is it possible to create floating cities that are actually self sustaining? And could you know, lava bumps? So they brought in a whole team of architects, you know, a rockstar architect from Denmark and engineers and drama, and they brought in a screenwriter, you know, because basically, the model that they created, the prototype model looked exactly like the a tall, you know, so, here I was, you know, talking to the undersecretary general and a whole bunch of bigwigs at you know, about about this idea. And, you know, it makes perfect sense that they should involve screenwriters, I'm going to tell you one little other anecdote that is that might be interesting to your, your audience, which is, I heard, in fact, I know some of the people that were part of this, that after 911, the National Security Agency brought in a bunch of created a writers room of Hollywood screenwriters, and said, Listen, we want you to tell us what's next. Because 911 was not a failure of intelligence. We knew these guys, we knew they were going to flight school, it was a failure of imagination, we didn't make that leap of faith that they would weaponize airplanes. What do you got? You writers who think about this stuff all the time? You know, so it's like, you know, writers have a place at that table, which is thinking about the most incredible implausible ideas that could actually help us in the future.

Alex Ferrari 36:33
Yeah, absolutely. I mean, I still, I still remember days after 911, like, when the plane would fly by i would i would have like, literally have like, you know, reactions, physical reactions to it. And, and I, and what's what we're going through right now, with with Corona and the COVID, of the COVID crisis, I promise you that the hangover, even after a vaccine, and after this kind of goes away, which could be yours, there's going to be a hangover of a generation of people who are going to be like, I don't want to go to a concert. I, you know, and I, and that's something I've had, I've talked about a nauseum on my other podcast as well, which is, you know, how many people are really going to want to go back to the movie theater all the time, you know, like, it's gonna, I'd love to, I'll throw that out, throw that out to you just out of curiosity. You know, I know I want to go I want to go see Tennant and up in a big screen, I want to go see the next big Marvel movie, or a big event film in the big screen and IMAX or something like that. But you got to balance it out. Like is it worth the risk, and even a year from now, even two years from now, it's going to take a minute before you go back in like any, like any trauma?

Peter Rader 37:42
Yeah, yeah. No, the business has changed, for sure. And we don't exactly know how but you know, even in our world, I mean, we're now we're distributing a movie online, a virtual distribution of movie where, you know, using whatever on streaming technology and doing a whole thing and completely, you know, rewriting the rules as we go along, because we have to figure it out.

Alex Ferrari 38:06
Now with with all this, you know, negative press that happened when when Waterworld came around? How did the town treat you as a as a screenwriter? Because you were hot stuff for a minute, because you were there's a bidding war, you've got a to picture deal? How did that play out?

Peter Rader 38:20
So, um, I was spared the, you know, I got a lot of assignments after after Waterworld. And unfortunately, they were all huge, epic sci fi things that never got made. Nobody was gonna do it again. You know, but that's the thing. They said, you know, you're the world creator, let's create a world over here, let's create a world over there. You know, I did a whole bunch of them. And they ended up in development hell, and and that's actually one of the things that informed my pivot to, you know, to indie filmmaking and distribution, which is what I'm doing now with my wife, um, you know, I met my wife, she was she said, Let's go to the Sundance Film Festival, you know, and I was, like, I suddenly just got excited again, like, I was in college about, you know, making movies where you're actually making the movies, you know, and, and then, you know, I joined her in the, in the company, and, you know, we've been doing a number of projects, ever since then. And it's hands on, it's, it's like, really fun, you know, and, you know, it's not the same money and there's trade offs and stuff, but, you know, you're always making choices between, you know, the pack with the devil and, and your hearts truth, have, you know, those things. So, so that's an ongoing thing, but I do think that the business has changed. And, you know, it's, it's, it's up to us to sort of redefine how we're going to re engage. Now,

Alex Ferrari 39:43
can we talk a little bit about the, the legacy of Waterworld because so many people think of it, you know, especially of a certain generation, that kids nowadays, you know, unless they look it up, they weren't, you know, in this it wasn't in the Zeitgeist of them growing up like it was was with me like it was with you that we knew Waterworld but it was considered a flop like I remember when Ishtar was like nobody knows now knows remembers his chart but I remember it start being like the punch line. And Heaven's Gate is a legendary punch line. And Titanic By the way, just a couple years later took the throne as like this is gonna suck. This isn't a complete disaster This is not gonna make any money whatsoever. It's 200 million plus, who's this James Cameron think he is? Well, that worked out okay for James. But what is the what is the legacy of the actual numbers of the film because it was considered a flop but it's the truth is different. Yeah.

Peter Rader 40:39
I mean, everyone the 25th anniversary, everyone is writing a story, which is you know, Waterworld was so not a flop. In fact, I'll go on the record saying that Waterworld is one of the most profitable titles in the universal catalog. And it all comes from the theme park exploitation. So what happened? You know, a couple years after the film came out was Universal Studios, hollywood had this Miami Vice stunt show, which was you know, it had a water tank and you know, boats and stuff. And they were like, no one's going to stunt show, no one's going to cares about my advice. We got to reinvent this or, you know, upgrade it, and we're like, water, let's do water. Well, you know, so they suddenly created a water world show, that show has been running at that park for, you know, 25 minus two years. So

Alex Ferrari 41:26
that's it. I see. I've seen it a ton of times. I love that part. I love that show.

Peter Rader 41:30
arena seats, two and a half, 1000 people, and they have a dozen shows a day. And it Park is open before COVID was 365 days a year. So you can do the math there. That's 10s upon 10s upon 10s of millions, if not 100 million in that theme park. Then they opened one in Osaka and Singapore. And now they're opening 120 21. Supposedly, let's see what happens in Beijing. And in that in the Beijing universal theme park, there's a water world zone. Okay, it has its own zone. It's a land, like a land, like Jurassic like transformers, like a hope of Harry Potter, you know, movies that have had franchises that have had seven eight titles in them, you know, get their zones, and then water will get to zone. Now why is that? It's because the demand the interest, the fascination with water roll has no limits. And, and also because it's you know, a splash zone or whatever, it's, it's a fun, it's a fun zone for you know,

Alex Ferrari 42:33
it's a good brand. It's a good brand. It's a good, it's a good IP for the university

Peter Rader 42:37
athletic brand. You know, I'm still getting the residual checks. And if you do the math on for theme parks, you know, we're talking about hundreds and hundreds of millions of people have been exposed to this Waterworld idea. Now, the great thing about that is that the Writers Guild right after that theme park was open approached me and David Tuohy, the two credited writers and said, You know what, no writer has ever been paid for theme park exploitation of their work. But we think that we have a chance to argue that this this constitutes a exploitation of the dramatic stage rights, which is one of those separated rights that a writer retains in a writers go contracts, we were saying that the you know, the waterworks done show is basically a stage version of, of the show, 20 minutes version. It's verbatim dialogue, it's the same characters, it's the same story. And you know, the universal through a ton of money, and a ton of lawyers to fight us fight, fight, fight, fight fight. And the smoking gun moment, this was brilliant, was we got a transcript of their, you know, of the stump show or whatever, verbatim line transcript. And there was this block of dialogue like three or four sentences in I think the deacon, you know, the bad guy, speech or whatever. It wasn't in our final scripts. It wasn't in any of the final movies. But it actually that verbatim three sentences, paragraph of dialogue appeared in a script that wasn't used. So they had gone through the whole stack of scripts, and they have cherry picked stuff. It was proof that they were using our writing in their show. And at that point, the arbitrator found in our favor, and we got a huge settlement. And we established a precedent So from now on, you know, Writers Guild writers are paid a minimum for the theme park exploitation.

Alex Ferrari 44:31
So the Simpsons Simpsons creators, the the ET writer, the the Fast and Furious writers, all those guys get something now from all those all those guys. Yeah. That's amazing. And then out of curiosity, like and I'm not going to ask numbers, but like, how do you Is it a percentage of like, how do you how do you get a residual off of a show that is based off of an entry price? There's no charging for the show. How does that work?

Peter Rader 44:56
Yeah, so that was difficult to figure out, right? You're right. It's a turnstile. You're paying

Alex Ferrari 45:01
for all of it. Yeah, you're paying Harry Potter for Transformers everything.

Peter Rader 45:04
So how do you assign it to here to here to there. So they did a buyout, they did a flat fee for us. And it was substantial. And then in the Writers Guild contract, there's a minimum, there's a, you know, whatever it is, I'm not sure what it is. It might be, is it 75,000 it might be if your work is turned into a theme park ride, you get a minimum of this, and you can negotiate above scale, but it's a flat fee. It's a buyout, basically. Okay, so

Alex Ferrari 45:28
so for that 25 years, you're not getting percentages of anything, you just got a big flat out payoff, which was substantial. Wasn't a minute, which is not the minimum.

Peter Rader 45:39
Correct. And, and it was for every time they opened it in a new park, we got another payment. So I think that's true. And that writers go contract too, which is, you know, you get this payment for one use. And if there's another one, you get another payment, etc.

Alex Ferrari 45:52
Got it and whatever. And then, but you have the power to negotiate at that point,

Peter Rader 45:55
if they want to negotiate above scale, if your name is john, sweet, you're gonna get more than that. Yes,

Alex Ferrari 46:02
right. Yeah, exactly.

Peter Rader 46:03
But Joe Schmo, you're gonna get the minimum. Got it. But something.

Alex Ferrari 46:08
Yeah, it's, it's something, it's something to to give you. And you're still getting residual checks off off the exploitation of that film. Right. That's insane. That's insane. I mean, 25 you would think a film like that. And it's Waterworld is such an interesting is such an interesting legacy. Because, I mean, it's a movie that has still stayed in the Zeitgeist. And I, because there's a lot of movies in that was made in that time. Like, there was that other really big stinker that Kevin did, which was a postman.

Peter Rader 46:42
That's right after another post apocalyptic another,

Alex Ferrari 46:45
which is now gaining traction again, people are going back and finding it because everyone's thinking about post apocalyptic things because of

Peter Rader 46:51
keeping the posts alive. Yes. Because that and, you know, I'm Alex, I was paid the biggest compliment recently. Um, you know, most most people that I talk to, when they find out that I wrote water, will they go, I love that movie, I think, you know, got so much fun. Yeah, so much mumbo jumbo, you know, but this one kid said to me, kid, I mean, whatever, you know, he's in his 40s or something. But he said to me, that was my first my eye opening moment where I started thinking about climate change, like that movie. Yeah, makes made me think about the oceans, you know, would rise or whatever. And, you know, it's interesting, because, conceptually, when I write anything sci fi, when I create worlds or whatever, I always like to have, you know, ontological authenticity, like to the extent that I can I like things to make sense like to really, you know, and ultimately Waterworld a sea change so many things that didn't make sense. But anyway, so but I think that every movie gets one leap of faith like one you get one, like, excuse a good user, give me Okay, and in the case of water roll, it was the amount that the ocean would rise. In fact, if if all the ice were melted on the earth, you know, and I remember researching at the time, and it was like, if all the ice melted, it would be like 35 feet or whatever. Okay. Um, in my version, a part that they took out of the movie, which this was the biggest loss when the when the mariner leaves dry land at the very end and goes and sails off and Helen and inola are at the top of the mountain. They watch him sailing away. And by the way, that's a Western moment.

Alex Ferrari 48:27
Yeah. What is that? Let's talk about the western in a second, but go ahead,

Peter Rader 48:29
okay. They see something underfoot. It's a plaque, they dust it off and on it says here in the year I forgot what the year was 53 Sir Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay summited this peak. Everest, it's now that they took that out, took that out, they took that out. And that was the thing that got Kevin Reynolds interested in directing the movie, he said, this is the Planet of the Apes moment. This is the Statue of Liberty. This is right. That's Yeah. And, and, and it got him so excited. But, you know, Kevin Costner did take over the edit, and he decided to excise that moment. And I understand that choice also, because there's this sort of emotional thing that's happening between you know, the girl who's, you know, saying the man or sell off sale off and you kind of maybe want to stay in that part space and not add a gimmick onto it. So I get it, but for me, that was like, it was from the moment you know, that yes. Okay. So

Alex Ferrari 49:31
how is because you said that before? How is Waterworld a Western?

Peter Rader 49:36
Well, so there's two parts of the writing process for me. First is the concept. You know, what, you know, what's the what's that, like? That idea that really lights you up and says, Oh, my God, I can't wait to sink my teeth into it. So Mad Max on water. That was the idea there. But then the the other one and this is the much more devilish one is what's the structure? What's the three x what's the Story, you know, and and, and, you know, when you're writing something on water that's really challenging, like, you know, there's no geography like, where you go from point A to point B, what's point A and what's point B? Like, you got to make all that stuff up. And, you know, is it it's a boat floating over here, then how does it make sense? And is it a coincidence? And there's lots of stuff that you got to think about. And another breakthrough for me was I suddenly remembered the movie, Shane. Yeah. And, of course, Shane, yeah, homesteaders are trying to live peacefully, um, you know, the Wild West, and you got your bad guys, you're pirates. You want to take advantage of them. And here comes that, you know, lone cowboy with a dark past that you don't want to talk about. You don't ask questions about okay. He rides into town Shane, you know, he walks into that bar. You can tell he's killed a lot of guys. And the bad guys mess with him and he decides to take side with the homesteaders. He spends off the pirates and then he rides away. That's the structure Waterworld. It's a Western

Alex Ferrari 51:02
I Shane has been stolen so many times as far as structure is concerned. I mean, from I think Joe Osterhaus did it for nowhere to run with junk. lavon DOM, I remember that was Shane Logan, Logan, as more recent as they literally put Shane in the movie like Logan's watching shade that like wink, wink, nudge nudge. It's shame guys. But it's with a mutant. Shane is such an amazing at that structure of that, that. That idea of that character of being this, the lone wolf, who has a dark past, but yet he, he comes back, he comes back towards the light by doing good, even though he might have killed. God knows how many people in his past. He's such a powerful character. Why do you think that is? Why does that resonate so wonderfully with with the audiences? You know?

Peter Rader 52:00
And I teach, I teach writing my wife and I do a creative workshop. And one of the things that we talk about is the fall from grace, the fall from grace moment, all stories, it's part of the fall from grace. I mean, you know, the Garden of Eden, even your birth is a fall from grace, in some ways, um, you know, your womb, it was all glorious. It was

Alex Ferrari 52:20
all good. We were born fed, everything was good. We hit the like, people love this inside, like his mom loved us.

Peter Rader 52:26
So the question is, you know, it's this a really good exercise for writers is, think about the fall from grace for your principal character. It's where is it going to be in the movie structure? And what is the tone of the fall from grace? So for instance, in a broad comedy, like a Jim Carrey movie, that fall from grace is front and center. It's in the first 10 minutes, and it's highly humiliating. It's like, Oh, my God, here I am with my pants down in a court of law or whatever. You know, it's one of those moments or Ben Stiller moments, it's a broad slapstick fall from grace, right? In film noir, are in sort of a darker, edgier movie. The fall from grace happens in the distant past. And it is never discussed. It's something that's not talked about. It's like the very child child from the Sam Shepard play. It's that thing that no, it's Chinatown. Chinatown is Jake had a fall from grace in Chinatown. It's never discussed. And there's it haunts the movie. So that energy of that character, why is he so mean? Why is he so shut down? Why is he a loner? Well, he obviously has some stuff from his past that he doesn't want to talk about. In various drafts. We wrote those scenes, like the murder of his family and stuff like that. We just decided to take them out. It's much more interesting to not be discussed. You know what I mean?

Alex Ferrari 53:46
Oh, yeah, because your imagination builds something else up. So that was the whole thing with Obi Wan Kenobi. And Star Wars like this older Jedi like and he would just talk about certain things like the Clone Wars and, and I had a I had a student who killed you killed your father, and then it turns out to be Darth Vader. Sorry, spoiler alert for anybody who hasn't seen Star Wars. But, but that character was so powerful. It had so much weight behind him purely because of like, all this stuff. And they even talked about it gossiping, like Oh, you don't want to go see Ben Kenobi. No, no, no, no. It was so it was really interesting. But you're right, that kind of it's a very powerful character. A tool for your character is if you have this backstory, specifically a fall from grace is extremely powerful depending on your story. That that drives it drives a current narrative like in like in Waterworld. So Peter, I wanted to thank you for coming on and being as raw and honest about Waterworld and your experience with Waterworld as you have been because it is. I mean, again for my generation, I just know how much of a beating that film took and I just love knowing because I even said that to myself like I was sitting there watching Waterworld. The show on Universal, and I'm like, How can this be such a big flop? If it's still heat, like this thing is still going, you know, and, and what I, what I've discovered now talking to you is that there is something about the concept of Waterworld, which madmax has, has longevity as well, just the concept of Mad Max that post apocalyptic, everything's gone, you got to find gasoline and water and all that stuff. But Waterworld takes that and kind of amplifies it because now you throw in the flood myth, which then everybody in the planet knows that the flood myth they it's like you said in their DNA, and then you have the ecological aspect of it, like, oh, global warming and all that stuff. So it has it's, it's hitting on so many cylinders. And it's honestly very ahead of its time, because in the mid 90s, when you wrote when you thought about it, which was in the mid 80s. Climate change wasn't a thing, really. At that point, it was talked about very, very minimally. So it's really interesting how it is grown, and it continues to grow is the popularity of the of the concept. By the way, why hasn't universal done a sequel a reboot? Something else? Are they just scared to death of it? Because you can make that film much more affordably now?

Peter Rader 56:15
Yeah, yeah. This is an excellent question. And I'm actually restricted in what I can say about it.

Alex Ferrari 56:21
Nice.

Peter Rader 56:24
But um, yes, there's there's lots of complicated machinations behind what's going on right now with the rebooting water with the

Alex Ferrari 56:32
with the brand, because universal in general doesn't have Marvel doesn't have DC. They don't have they don't have like a 3000 characters. They don't have Harry Potter, they don't have Star Wars. So they have Fast and Furious, which they are definitely exploiting, without us without it. And they have a handful of, of IP and brand, but they don't have a lot of like, IP, like, like Waterworld could be a thing. Like you could do

Peter Rader 57:03
a three picture deal. The thing is, they are rolling out sequels in the form of theme parks. So in other words, this idea that, you know, that's the safe way of exploiting that IP is just do another theme park. Now we know exactly how much that's gonna cost. We can totally contain that. And let's just do it in China, we'll do a whole zone, you know,

Alex Ferrari 57:22
but there's but there it's there a little bit, a little bit gun shy because I like the first one went went 175 million, we weren't really expecting to spend 60. We can't take the three or $400 million hit. So I guess it has to be the filmmaker behind it, what to do and where to go. But, but I know like I've spoken to the guy who created final destination. And that that horror series he goes, every time they make one he gets a check. I met the guy who wrote fast and furious and just like he hasn't written Fast and Furious in a long time. But every time they make one, he gets a check. So I'm I'm praying for you, sir, that they make 20 more of those films. Now I'm going to ask you a few questions. I asked all of my guests. What are three screenplays every screenwriter should read?

Peter Rader 58:10
Um I think Tootsie is bones. Yeah. And mostly in the way there's so many subplots and there's so well integrated, you know, these these incredible things that all have payoffs. And they all come to a culminating head in that one moment, or Michael Dorsey rips off his wig. You know, it's just brilliant, the way that's structured, not that I'm a comedic writer, but that is a brilliant script. What else do I love? I love Peter Weir is Picnic at Hanging Rock for how minimalist it is, and how he never reveals what happened on that rock. You know, just that kind of brooding, quiet patient, you know, sort of teasing out about just basically a brooding mood. You know, that's a lot of us in the filmmaking, but I think it's in the script also. And what else am I going to go for? 31 um I'll go to something indie like do the right thing now.

Alex Ferrari 59:29
Which wasn't indie I mean, that was a universal release but but it was low budget and definitely not that Waterworld budget level. Though. It would be very interesting to see do the right thing it on water. No, that film is that film. I mean, people went back every year to a spike lee movie in hopes of getting the same feeling they got when they saw do the right thing. It was just it's a masterpiece. Now what advice would you give a screenwriter wanting to break into the business today?

Peter Rader 1:00:00
So, writing is a discipline, and it should not be results driven. So fall in love with process. You are a writer, if you show up on a regular schedule at your computer for a given amount of time, and it doesn't matter how much you produce, as long as you're sincere, you stand there, look at that blank page. And you and you, you, you clock in and clock out. You're a writer. Don't fall in love with the highs and don't sink, the lows, the middle path, the middle paths, just stay committed to process that's long term success in this business is all about the willingness to take ego death to take the spear in the heart and just let it go. Let it go move on, resurrect, get back to the get back in the saddle and type another sentence.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:52
What did you learn from your biggest failure?

Peter Rader 1:00:58
Yeah, same thing resilience, and being willing to just do it again, do it again. It's not about the results. It's not about the results. And it's so tempting to get wrapped up in the results, especially the successes. Those are really insidious. It's like,

Alex Ferrari 1:01:17
it's so much. Oh, yes. It's like, it's like a drug, you get that you get that high. And then and especially if you associate yourself with that high and associate your work with the high that you need that every time if you're done. Cuz you know, nobody, nobody in our industry is at the top all the time like that not everyone hits home runs every time.

Peter Rader 1:01:38
Yeah, yeah. And I'm gonna say one other thing, which is either I did have a period of writer's block, that was pretty intense, like three, three months or so I think every writer does. And so it's interesting to talk about it. But I have a metaphor that I like to introduce, which is the intersection of indecision, there is a temptation to stay in the intersection of indecision, which means you kind of stare at the screen and you think and you scratch your chin and you make your cup of tea No, and you think and you bubble bomb, and you're sitting in that intersection, not making a choice, you've got to make a choice. Get out of that fricking intersection as quickly as you can, and write the shitty sentence and here's the other metaphor, which is back in the old day when when pipe was made out of, you know, whatever. Not copper, but where you know, you're you were out of town for a few months. You ran your bath water came out, it was brown, right?

Alex Ferrari 1:02:32
You know, iron, iron,

Peter Rader 1:02:34
iron, iron pipes, brown water. Okay. When you ran that brown water? Did you go into a tailspin? Did you panic? Did you call the plumber? Were you like, Oh my god, what's going on this? Is this the apocalypse? No, it was simply brown water. What comes after brown water, clear water. Be willing to write the brown sentence write the shitty sentence, right? The brown water and other stuff comes the flow begins. Get out of the intersection, fall in love with process, write the brown sentence. And that's that's what you do. I love that.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:06
I love to write the brown sentence. That's that's a great, that should be a T shirt. Now, where can people find you and the new work that you're doing with your company?

Peter Rader 1:03:17
So My website is beaterator.com. And our production company is this is CounterPoint. films.com. This is counterpoint films.com where we're doing all sorts of cool things.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:30
And if you guys haven't seen awake, the paramahansa Yogananda story, if you guys have listened to me for a while, you know that it's one of my favorite documentaries of all time. You should definitely watch that. And I know they have a ton of other good stuff that they're doing over there, counterpoint films. Peter, again, thank you so much for being on the show. I truly, truly appreciate your time and your candor, with the amazing now a very profitable Waterworld. So thank you again, my friend.

Peter Rader 1:03:59
Thanks Alex. It was really fun.

Alex Ferrari 1:04:02
I want to really thank Peter for coming on the show. And being so raw and vulnerable and honest about his experience, writing and being part of Waterworld, considered one of the biggest flops of all time, but as you now know, it is not it is not all what they say it was that that film has done an insane amount of business and continues to do an insane amount of business and we will see what Universal Studios will do with the IP if they decide to reboot it and what they plan to do with it i'd i'd be interesting to see an updated version of Waterworld with today's technology and and see what actually could be done with it and in the right hand. So I'm really, really curious about that. But thank you again, Peter, for coming on the show if you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, and if you haven't seen it if you want to watch Waterworld, just head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/085. And I also want to let you know guys that I I am teaming up with john Truby, the legendary story Master, and author of the best selling book, the anatomy of story. And we are going to bring you a free webinar training called stories that sell. And john will explain his system to help you structure and layers genres characters, story, worlds themes, and everything else within the individual screenplay. Now, if you want access to this free webinar, just head over to truby.com forward slash hustle. That's true v truby.com. forward slash hustle. Thank you again for listening guys. As always, keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 082: The Indie Film Screenwriting Process with Joshua Caldwell

Today on the show we have writer/director Joshua Caldwell. Joshua has been on the Indie Film Hustle Podcast three times before and all his episodes went viral.

Joshua and I discuss what it takes to write an indie film, how you need to change your mindset, and how to best position it to actually get produced. His latest film is INFAMOUS starring Bella Thorne, Jake Manley, Amber Riley.

His first feature film was Layover (available on IFHTV), a $6000 micro-budget film he wrote and directed.

In this French-language feature film debut from writer/director Joshua Caldwell, Simone (Nathalie Fay) is a young Parisian en route to her wedding in Singapore. But when the airline cancels her connecting flight, she’s forced to spend the night in Los Angeles. She decides to make the best of it and contact an old acquaintance, Juliette (Bella Dayne), who is going through a rough patch in her marriage. Invigorated by her friend’s arrival, Juliette insists on taking Simone out for a night of club-hopping.

With little regard for her friend, Juliette soon disappears with a stranger, leaving Simone stranded downtown without a ride. When an attractive motorcyclist (Karl E. Landler) appears and offers her a ride, Simone cautiously accepts, leading to an evening of adventure that results in her questioning her life’s direction and, ultimately, if she’s truly ready to make her connection in the morning.

Enjoy my conversation with Joshua Caldwell.

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Alex Ferrari 0:49
I'd like to welcome the show Joshua Caldwell, man, how you doing, brother?

Joshua Caldwell 4:00
Good, how are you?

Alex Ferrari 4:01
I'm good, man. I'm good. You are a returning champion on the indie film hustle podcast, but this is the first appearance or sample of the bulletproof screenwriting podcast, and it was I thought it would be very interesting to have you come on. From your, your background in the industry, it's, I think you have a very unique perspective. So for the audience who don't know who you are, sir, can you tell us a little bit about how you got into the business?

Joshua Caldwell 4:30
Yeah. I'm a writer, director, producer. And I started making films when I was younger in high school. And ended up going to Fordham University in New York City where I studied, I didn't study film, I just kind of started making movies on my own. And one of those movies was a short film called The beautiful lie, which I got nominated for one and MTV Movie Award. Golden popcorn back in 2006. And that kind of kicked off my desire to move to Hollywood because it is I was going to you know, and I basically was like, Alright, now I gotta move to LA and I'm gonna be the shit. And I'm gonna be like the big they're gonna give you the key today, because you have the golden, the golden, the golden block. I mean, obviously, everybody saw it. And that didn't happen. And, you know, so I started writing scripts and trying to meet people. And I eventually interned and then eventually landed a job at working for Anthony zeichor, created CSI. And I worked for him for a couple years as an exec and then started directing on my own. And I've been directing, basically writing directing since 2013.

Alex Ferrari 5:36
So the lesson of that story is that the golden popcorn does not open the doors that you might have thought it

Joshua Caldwell 5:41
open. Yes, exactly. Does that

Alex Ferrari 5:45
I actually I'm actually not. It's not

Joshua Caldwell 5:50
a here's the thing. You know, it was one of those things where you think you get this thing you go, you're on the MTV Movie Award? Oh, yeah. On the MTV awards, right. And of course, like in the press release, they leave off your category. And so nobody really knows I got so much. I got like, not so much. I got some interest from managers and stuff, when they announced the nominees, because if there was a big announcement in The Hollywood Reporter variety, or something like that, and I was actually listed there, but then when they announced the winners, and they had the winners, press release, they didn't put that category in. And like the thing is about the Movie Awards is it's hilarious because you've got, you know, you win Best kiss, like who gives a fuck, you know, like, you win. You win. Best Movie. Who cares? Nobody cares. It's like a popularity contest. But like, I was this kid just out of college. Yeah, I

Alex Ferrari 6:43
was gonna say I must have been a kid. Yeah.

Joshua Caldwell 6:45
Like, and you get a thing for Best Film on campus. best student film. You know, it's like you think it's like a cool big deal. Oh, my

Alex Ferrari 6:54
God, I couldn't even imagine. What would have happened to my head. Oh, I got it. Oh, look at that. Look at that. 2000 I'm gonna put that right next to, to my blockbuster award. Yeah. choice. People. Now listen deeply before People's Choice Awards a little bit grander. Yeah, exactly. But it doesn't open the doors that it used to sir. Right. Right.

Joshua Caldwell 7:28
Exactly. So but, you know, I, what I talked about, I've talked about this with some people, I don't know as much anymore. But it was, it was, it was such a great lesson in humility. Because you, you come out, you think you're gonna be the hot shit. You're not. And so very quickly, like, very immediately, I was like, okay, like, I could, you know, just because I want this thing, it doesn't mean anything. And the only thing that's gonna get me somewhere is the work, you know, and so that I really, I put the popcorn, I like kind of pissed off, but I put it under my bed, like, wrapped it up. It was like, fuck this thing. And then, but you know, and then really started just hustling and working my way up and trying to get what I could, and just never put myself in a position where I was, I was relying on accolades. So it's a very good lesson early on to say, like, none of that matters. And, and I was bitter about it for a while, because I was like, Well, something should have happened, you know, something should have something should have happened. And I did get a manager out of it for a while, like a junior manager, who's a great guy, but still, at the end of the day, you just feel like, you know, I was a little bitter about it. And then over time, I started seeing, okay, well, like, that doesn't matter, you know, and you start to turn over and go, Well, what is success? What's the goal? What do you want to be doing? And it takes 10 years but eventually get to that place where the success is doing the work, you know, it's not whatever that response to the work ends up being because you can't control that all you can control is what you're doing which is either writing or directing or whatever it is that your your thing is, you know, but yeah, so I made it guy got the Movie Award, it was really cool at the time, but then really I came out to LA I moved out to LA and I just started you know crank and I just started trying to take whatever I could and get whatever I could doing music videos and writing scripts and writing script after script and you know, getting one option and then not going anywhere and kind of doing the whole the whole thing for a long time.

Alex Ferrari 9:29
So getting it an option and then that being produced that's a that's a rarity in Hollywood. Obviously that doesn't happen very often. That you get the option and it doesn't get produced. Are they exempt?

Joshua Caldwell 9:39
Yeah, well, I didn't pay money for it. So

Alex Ferrari 9:41
Oh, that's alright, so this let's go let's do

Joshua Caldwell 9:46
Oh, yeah, con. Okay. They it was it was it was one of those. I didn't I didn't necessarily mind it because it didn't feel predatory. Sure, it was with it was with Todd Comber Nikki who produced. What else? Okay, well, and like really great guy like really knows his stuff like his big, you know, as a friend now and, and that kind of thing. But it was just one of those things where it was like, oh, and then the other the other great thing about all of this was literally moved out to LA, October 2006. And at boom, writer strike, and it just completely changed everything in Hollywood. And we were trying to get stuff made after that, you know, and it was like, this was one of those movies it was, I'm gonna put it out there because maybe somebody will want it, but it was called glory days of Chet steel. And for anybody that's seen my movies, this is gonna be also out there. But it was the second movie wrote my writing partner at the time. And I and basically, the story is, it's about this guy named Chet steel, who in high school was a hot shot quarterback, right. He was like one of the best High School quarterbacks in Texas, and 20 years later, he's the bum sitting up in the stands, you know, loser, typical formula, right? But then what happens is, he finds out this new hot shot quarterback named Cody powers, is going to courses is on track to beat his all time passing record. And what Chet doesn't understand is that his record is not a permanent record. He doesn't understand that it can't, somebody can't come in and beat it. And when he finds that out, his whole world gets shattered. And basically, through a loophole, the No Child Left Behind Act, he's able to go back to school, because he didn't graduate to a good app to high school rejoins the football team, at 40 years old. And now of course, the team sucks. And so he has to get them better in order to protect his record. And along the way, he learns the importance of teamwork. And,

Alex Ferrari 11:55
of course, of course,

Joshua Caldwell 11:56
oh, that's just just our pitch was its Will Ferrell and shoulder pads pads playing football with college with high school kids, you know, and the thing about it was we wrote it. So specifically that everyone that read it was like, Well, unless you get Will Ferrell, there's no way to make, like, no, there's other people that could do this. Like

Alex Ferrari 12:14
that actually would be a funny Will Ferrell film, I have to admit,

Joshua Caldwell 12:18
it will be hard. Todd, the thing was, we thought, okay, like, Look, maybe they'd give us a couple grand, you know, for an option. Who cares? Like, I got the experience of working with Todd on node rewrite, working with a real producer. And also like he had made a movie with will, you know, we're successful. So probably the best chance we have. But of course, the problem that we ran into was post writer's strike. It just disrupted everything. And so everyone was like, Well, if you don't, it was the age old thing. But it was even harder now. Which was like, Well, if you don't have an actor, you can't go after well, until you have money. You can't go after money until you have an actor. Nobody wants to touch it. So ended up dying, unfortunately. But that was like one of our second experiences. And

Alex Ferrari 13:01
so what was your How did you get your first paid writing gig?

Joshua Caldwell 13:06
What was my first paid writing yet? trying to remember. I think it was actually more recently. Let me think about this. I've had I just had a weird I've had a weird career. I've never, I've only sold technically one script, which was infamous. And that's to the producers, basically. Because I'm not a spec writer. Right now. Like, I'm not going out and just writing spec after spec up to spec trying to get a soul we did. I used to what was my first paid thing, trying to think? I don't think I made very much even if it was something Oh, you know what it was like kind of in, I think it was in 2000. As a writer, I got paid to, like, nothing money to try and adapt a graphic novel. Okay, which didn't end up going anywhere. And probably rightfully so, because I wasn't quite right for it. But it was like that, if you want to know how that came about that came about from, you know, I recently signed with CAA. So this was in 2016. So yeah, 2016 I mean, you know, 10 years before I really got my first job, you know, first paid thing as a writer.

Alex Ferrari 14:21
So that's how you got it. And that's how did you get the attention of CAA?

Joshua Caldwell 14:26
So, well, it's almost like you got to go all the way back to the beginning. But basically, I'd had a manager for a while and went through, you know, script after script and short after short, and eventually, you know, I started I did a couple shorts, I got some experience and then really, it was the thing that really kicked off my career was layover. layover was the thing that started everything. You know, in 2010. I made a short film called Digg, which I still think is some of my best work but It was like 26 minutes long, you know, and it just never went anywhere in terms of in terms of festivals, you know, never got me anything, but it was a great experience. I spent, you know, cost like 40 grand and make it. I've been there, but it was period, you know, and you want to good actors and whatever you want in five days of shooting. So I, you know, basically did that. And then I made a $6,000 wrench in the movie with no stars. And that's the thing, that guy has gotten me every job.

Alex Ferrari 15:32
Okay, so that's okay. So because we and I'll put that in the show notes. You know, you've done about, you've done two episodes that have aired. Yeah, that aired on on indie film hustle. The first one was about layover, which was basically a $6,000. Now that we've done three, the third one hasn't released yet. Yeah, correct. Yeah. So layover was a $6,000 feature. And that's how we met originally. Because I'm always fascinated by low budget micro budget films that actually are successful in one way, shape, or form.

Joshua Caldwell 16:02
Still, I still don't know how.

Alex Ferrari 16:05
So? I don't know. So you wrote that, but you wrote it. You translated it all in French.

Joshua Caldwell 16:11
Yeah. So I wrote it. I wrote in English. And, you know, I'd written with a partner for years, you know, I came out because I always felt like I was a writer who I was, I felt like it was a director who wrote, as opposed to a writer who directed and I liked the idea of working with a partner. But like anybody, you start to get niche, you start to go maybe, you know, maybe this I'd want to write on my own or, or, you know, maybe I want to try something and layover was the first thing, right, I kind of went into it going, I'm just gonna start. And then if I peter out after 30 pages, then don't bring someone else in, you know. But I just basically sat down and pounded it out. You know, I did it in about two weeks, and it just kept going. And that was a weird because I sort of knew the beginning and the end, but the middle I kind of made up like the whole concept of the motorcyclist just came out of nowhere. I was like, she's just going to meet a guy. And then I'm writing right around like, oh, what if he's on a motorcycle? What if it's this? What if it's this, you know, and, and that skipped script, the first draft of it really came together? by actually typing it not typing up outlines, and all that kind of stuff. But I wrote it all in English. And then Carl landler, who plays the motorcyclist, who's from Paris, he basically did all the translation from the script, which is why in the movie I gave him I gave him credit, as Translation by, you know, on the same card as my, I think on the same card as my screenwriting credit. So I felt like he was so contributive I mean, you know, it's like a whole other language, not just like,

Alex Ferrari 17:40
literally, literally a whole other language, literally.

Joshua Caldwell 17:44
It's a completely different language than English. So no, but what I'm saying is not it's not like you're just going to Google Translate and typing it in.

Alex Ferrari 17:53
No, you gotta, there's nuances. Of course, yeah,

Joshua Caldwell 17:54
there's watches and they're sayings that don't exist that in French that are in English, you know, to make it work,

Alex Ferrari 18:01
so so I don't think I've ever asked you this. Why the French?

Joshua Caldwell 18:09
Okay, so, a couple years prior, there was a movie. What was it called? I think it was Maria, full of grace. Yeah. And basically, I remember every single article about that movie was about the fact that the director did not speak Spanish. And did a movie in Spanish. Right, right. Did you? Look, you're looking for that hook?

Alex Ferrari 18:36
Yeah. It's something you were trying to do what you were trying to set up.

Joshua Caldwell 18:40
You were setting Brando longer beta movie. You know, nobody cares, a movie. So I just that was that stuck in my head? I was also, you know, look, I mean, layover is largely modeled after a French New Wave approach to filmmaking, right. But the other thing that's stuck with me was just this notion that so often, when you see a Foreign Language Film, it's because it's set in the country where the language is spoken. And I just thought it'd be really interesting to see a Foreign Language Film that's set in America. And would that, would that tweak somebody? Would that tweak somebody into LA and their understanding of La if it's seen through the eyes of somebody that not only doesn't isn't familiar with the city, but doesn't even speak the language. And so I just like the idea, all those things combined with the idea that for me from a character perspective, the story of a girl traveling from New York to Singapore, and she gets stuck over in LA is not that interesting. It's not that hard to find your way around LA and know what to do and know what's going on when you speak English. But if you don't speak the language at all, it can be extremely confusing place to anybody who has ever gone to a different country. You know, you don't know the customs. You don't have language. You don't know what people are saying you Don't know what things are. And I just thought that would be a really interesting obstacle. You know, that would prevent certain things from happening, that would be really easy to happen if she spoke English, right? It's like, Oh, I'm stuck in stuck in the city for a night. All right, I'm gonna veg out and watch TV. Like, you know, it's, it's the second city and and then she goes out with a friend, the friend speaks English, but she doesn't speak English. And then once she loses the friend, she meets a guy who speaks French, and she feels Well, I don't I don't know what's going on. Like, you know, my big thing was whether people are going to buy into her going with the guy, but Carl is really charming. So

Alex Ferrari 20:36
and this also suspense of disbelief is

Joshua Caldwell 20:38
expensive to believe. But the fact that she speaks French and she meets a guy that speaks French, there's an instant comfort level

Alex Ferrari 20:45
Sure, of course,

Joshua Caldwell 20:46
right? It she goes with them in a way that she probably wouldn't. If she was like, you know, an American she meet another guy that spoke American it would just be like weird, you know? So that just felt like a really interesting way into it. So there were a number of reasons.

Alex Ferrari 20:59
All right, so that movie when you made that movie for six grand, you were able to you I think if you did get distribution for the film, and you made money with the film, is that the film that got UCA?

Joshua Caldwell 21:11
No. So layover got me another movie. First of all layover got me a series on Hulu that I just directed. I didn't write it, but called South Beach. So I directed that next. And then layover combined with the Hulu show. Got me a movie called be somebody which was this made by this company called Studio 71. Which they had another name before I forget what it was, but anyway, and they, I pitched on it. I went in and pitched on it. And because I needed money basically, and, and got the job. And it was an influencer movie that started this guy named Matt Espinosa who had like 20 million followers online and never been in a movie for this movie kind of the script was from like the mid 90s. And it had been kind of updated and refashioned. But then one of the things about that. And again, like it's weird, because so often people talk about well, I sold this script, right? Or I got paid to write this script. But like I've written on every script that every project I've made, you know, I did writing on the Hulu show, I didn't get credit for it. I didn't get paid for it. Be somebody was a mess. Like what happened was, I got pulled onto it. And then I do a rewrite on the script I do I if I can I rewrite every script that I direct because it's how I get my fingers into it until I get to know it. And then I got to put my own thing onto it. So far, I'm sure that won't happen when some huge writers, you know,

Alex Ferrari 22:46
when you when you when you have you to marvel when you're working for Marvel, certain not so much with the rewrites. Yeah,

Joshua Caldwell 22:51
yeah, exactly. Although maybe, who knows. But the point is, I felt I felt compelled to do it. But this one was like it needed to be done. I mean, it was already too long. The writer was not involved anymore. And but it was 109 pages when I got it. They were like, We need to cut it. I'm like, yeah, so I cut 16 pages out of it, to bring it down to 94. And so then I give it to them, and they come back. And they're like, yeah, so we just did a budget on your script. And it seems like we're like $200,000 over what we want to be. And I go What was the budget on the other draft?

Alex Ferrari 23:29
Was 16 pages more?

Joshua Caldwell 23:31
Yeah. And they go, Oh, we didn't do one. So they never did a budget, they greenlit a movie without doing a budget and budgeting the script. And then I had basically and then I got this script that was still 200 over. And they're like, well, we got to make all these changes. And they're like, Can we cut this? And I'm like, Well, if you cut that you have no ending. So then what's the movie about? Like, what's the whole point of the movie. So they literally for like a couple weeks, up until we started shooting me and this other exact at the company, we're basically rewriting it from scratch. I mean, we literally started over and we knew we had these characters, because we already cast it these locations because we were already scouting. And so the biggest my biggest regret over that movie was basically we ended up shooting effectively the first draft of like a new script. And if you watch the movie, you see that there are like repeated, like lines of dialogue and things that come up like when normally you do have gone through and been like, Oh wait, we already we already did this part, you know. And but it was it was writing under duress. And it was basically a real interesting experience. Because you're like, you got to go movie for a job. Right? Right. You want to make it happen. I was also trying to start I had just closed a deal to do negative. And so I didn't want to push this movie, you know? But and so you're just like, I mean, literally the weekend of Thanksgiving. I was out here in New York, but I was down in my in laws basement like typing up drafts of the script and sending it off to the producer. Like every scene, we just send off a new scene to the producer. And so, you know, I think like, clear, it was clear to me that this was not the way the best way to make movies, you know, and I got really tired.

But for all my problems with that movie, one there, I think it really speaks to a certain age group of, especially girls that I've heard from repeatedly that said, Oh, we love you know, I love B, somebody taught me so much about this. And I love seeing, like the multiracial family. And, you know, you get a lot of feedback about the things that we chose to do in that movie that makes you feel like okay, at least somebody's taking something from this, you know, but the other thing and then the other thing was that that movie because it ended up getting bought and released by Paramount. Got BCAA.

Alex Ferrari 25:46
Got it. And then there you go

Joshua Caldwell 25:48
in conjunction with everything else that I was doing, right, I'd done a Hulu, I'd done this.

Alex Ferrari 25:52
Yeah, sure. You build, you build and build and build. And I think

Joshua Caldwell 25:56
it happened was also really quick that the other thing was when I left zonkers. I also left my current my Venn manager, because it just wasn't working out. Like he wanted to go, he was doing other stuff. And it wasn't I was feeling I was hit pocketed. So as soon as I left, I also started looking for a new manager. And I got introduced to my current manager, Tom sprigs. So he came he, he, I signed with him in 2013, right after I left, you know, right after I left psykers. And then that was a conversation we were having, which was about agents and I kind of basically, you know, as much as I wanted one, I was also starting to get to that place where I said, You know what, like, if this like, I'm not gonna, I'm not gonna even entertain the idea of an agent until they want me. Because if it's, if I want them, then I'm always in that position of like, need and, you know, desire, right, like, and they know that

Alex Ferrari 26:51
you're in a weaker state, you're in a weaker, you're in a weaker position.

Joshua Caldwell 26:54
And if I just keep doing what I'm doing, eventually, they're gonna find me. And they're gonna say we, you know, we'd like to see, but after be somebody, I was just like I said to Tom, I'm like, you think now maybe we should start thinking about an agent, because like, I've got, I've done three movies. Now I've got signing deals, like I did a show for Hulu, like, you know, maybe it's time and he said, Yeah, so we went out to a couple places, but CAA was always the top of the list, because I had a lot of relationships there from working with zeichor, because he was rep there. So funny enough, like my agent, one of my agents. Now Frank Chung, was the guy that I knew well, from my time at psykers, doing stuff in the digital world.

Alex Ferrari 27:28
So So I think this is a really good point to bring up for the audience to understand about managers and agents, because there isn't this kind of myth out there that all I need to do is get a manager and or an agent, and I'm good, they're gonna go out, they're going to get me work, I'm going to get paid, they're going to pitch me they're going to sound good. They're going to sell my scripts, I'm going to get the lottery ticket million dollar buy, like, you know, Shane Black used to do back in the 90s. And more. Yeah, and just like a bidding wars, and it's just your house. And it's all this kind of stuff, right? But But the reality is, or, which is where you kind of just put out is that you shouldn't, first of all, no agents going to be interested in to you in you until you are able to generate revenue for them. Right. So you are perfect example, before these three projects that you did, or three or four projects you had done. You had no true value to an agency because you weren't going to be able to generate revenue for them. So once you got like, Oh, this guy, this is this is a horse that's can can win a couple races. That's basically Yeah, it's it's as crass as that is your basic Nami. Livestock, you're just like, yeah, creative life stock.

Joshua Caldwell 28:39
Because sometimes, you know, and I also didn't have, I didn't have some, like, spec script that people were flipping over, right, which is what it used to be to, like, you wrote a spec script that everybody was enamored with, and you'd have everybody calling you, but I didn't I didn't have that. And yeah, so you're just like, you know, look, the other thing is that it's a transaction, you know, and the thing is, not only is it about well, what do you have? What did you have? Right? Okay, great. Like, the thing is great. He made a movie, so he can demonstrate that he's got value. But what else does he have? What's next? Right? Oh, what everyone's gonna ask anyway. So always What's next? You know, and it was interesting, because I, when I was going out for managers, I met with a couple people. And there was one guy who wrote, you know, who got back to me. And I remember just being like, I sat down with them. And his whole thing was just like, you know, look, this is really hard, man. Like, really tough. It's gonna be what, you know, just this stuff. And I remember coming out of that going, like, I know, it's hard. Like, the amount of calories. I'm not kidding. The question is, what are we going to be doing to try and do what we can do? I don't care if it's hard, you know, but I just recognize that attitude, you know, versus somebody saying, Look, it's not gonna be easy, but I have ideas. I people we could set you up with like, you clearly are demonstrating an ability to make low budget movies, which you know, or spend very little money, which people are going to be attracted to. And we work your way up, you know, but I, I think that like, anytime I do look, and I'm guilty of this, too, having not now been through it, I also think that if you're, if you are asking the question, How do I get an agent or a manager? You're not ready for an agent or manager?

Alex Ferrari 30:25
Exactly. If you've got to ask the question, then you're not ready for this question. You just

Joshua Caldwell 30:28
not ready for it. And that's fine. But like, if you're asking that question, that's a sign that now is not the time, you know, that you've got more work to do. You got more connections to make, you gotta get your material out there. I mean, you know, even when I had a manager, like, right after the movie award, and like, up until 2018, right, like he was, he's a great guy, I love him, but he wasn't able to do a lot for me, you know, I mean, he get us in for some meetings. You know, I remember that we one one opportunity I had that actually came out of this was I had this, I met this guy. And I've come to now think that his story is completely bullshit. But at the time, I thought it was true. Which was he told me this story about how he was like, this is really like kind of secret agent, basically just a little guy. Sure. Now a hairdresser in LA, by the way. So it says there's no honey, it's the Zohan, it's the exact as it's like, got it is really, really crazy story. And it's just like, Man, this is a great idea for a script. And if we could call it a true story, then that's great. So I had this idea I wrote, I wrote up like a sort of a pitch or whatever. And we actually went into we went into participant media. And they so and this is a thing that happens too. And I have to say, like, I was okay with it. But what happened was, we actually like went in there, and it was me and a writing partner. And we said, well, we have this idea. And they said, We like it, we're not gonna buy it or option it with you, but we'll develop it with you. And I said, All right. Like, I'm a young writer, I've got a job as an executive. So I probably shouldn't even be pitching. Right, but the opportunity and we retain the copyright. So we, you know, you guys haven't bought it, you're not paying money for it, you're helping us develop it. But we get, we made that clear, like we retain free use of the script if you guys decide not to do it. And we bought and we we spent like a couple years, like developing this script. And I'm sure it was a learning lead.

Alex Ferrari 32:30
It was just, it was just, it was cool.

Joshua Caldwell 32:32
Yeah. And that's the thing is like, you get to get in and sit in a room with an exec that knows his shit. And you're just storyboarding, and you're not storyboarding, but you're just putting down story and coming up with ideas. And then you got to go away to do the work. So it's like such a, it was such a great exercise, even though the script didn't end up selling, and they didn't end up doing it. It was such a great experience having that because you don't really get it, you know, so often writers are just there, they're off in their room, you know, doing nothing, or not doing nothing, they're off in their room alone writing. And you might get feedback, you might not get feedback, but we had, like, you know, the goal was to get it to a place where they would buy it. You know, it wasn't like, let's just get it. So it's good. It's like, let's get it so it's in a place where we can buy this. We get there. It was a challenging story. And you know, I'd probably make back my own ideas about I would change it but

Alex Ferrari 33:20
but you need to you need to call Adam Sandler's people because he obviously stole the idea with four don't mess with this. Oh,

Joshua Caldwell 33:26
it was a drama. Probably. The guy probably met Sam at some point and told him the story. And Sandra was like, we're gonna I mean,

Alex Ferrari 33:33
oh, yeah. And I'm gonna eat a lot of hummus. And that's just the way it is. Yeah. All right. So let me know.

Joshua Caldwell 33:40
But that was something that I came up with the idea. I told my manager about it. He pitched participant he got us in the room, you know. And so that's an example of something happening, but it wasn't like, Oh, they bought the script. I sold the script,

Alex Ferrari 33:51
or it's just so I mean, I just want i and that's what I try to do on the show, man. There's so many myths out there first, especially for young screenwriters, or, you know, you know, people who are new to the business, who just, they think that the business runs in a certain way, and it just doesn't and they don't understand. And I'm not trying to be a killjoy, but the difficulty of no yeah, getting something actually produced and getting credit for that. And it's just this. It's just this, it's so difficult to do. And it's not possible. And I don't want to be that guy that you were talking about, like, Oh, it's just really hard. It is. It's super hard. No question about it. It's probably one of the toughest things to do on the planet. But, but one thing I love about you is that you've been able to create your own projects, and you are able to produce your own things. Which brings me to my next question, do you recommend young screenwriters are screenwriters starting out to write a low budget option for a screenplay that they could either produce themselves as the director or partner with some One who could produce it at a budget of 10,000 15,000. right to say that they have a produce script of produced film? And is that actually have value in the marketplace as a screenwriter?

Joshua Caldwell 35:13
It's a good question because I'm, I like three things about it. And two are two sides of the same coin, which is, I think, I think that the more you as a writer can get produced. And of course, that's the goal. But I'm saying even if it's a student film, a short, anything, the more experience you have seen your work turned into a movie, the better you will be as a writer, because when you write, man falls out of a window, you have no concept of the take soul shit that is going to go into getting that on film. And, and so you have done an understanding of Oh, this one line is a million dollar stunt. Right? Like I had a great, great, great example of this was when we were doing the glory days thing, right? We had written this scene, it was a half page scene. And it was Chet was out with the friends and it was part of a montage. But the idea was they were out at a burger restaurant. They're all laughing and having fun together clearly becoming friends. Right? And I remember, I remember the producer, Todd was like, Look, man, like this. That's like a half day shooting. That's a company move. And so what is it doing? Like he wasn't being mean about it? He was just like, what is the scene contributing to the movie that we don't already know? And does it have to happen at this location? Right? Because that's a half day of shooting. That's a company move. That's this much. And you're going Oh, yeah, like, You're right. I wasn't thinking about that when I wrote it. Because you're not thinking about that stuff. Traditionally, when you're a writer, but when you have the experience of seeing what it takes to not only bring what you wrote to life, but to see the level of collaboration that ends up going into that, right, the way in which actors come in with their own ideas that might be different than when you thought the director comes in with a different idea than what what you thought, like, the understanding that you need to be not only okay with it, but work with that, you know, to get the best out of what you can, like that experience is invaluable. So that I think the more writers can see their work produced, whether it's a workshop, whether it's just like a table read, like hearing actors say their lines, seeing what it takes to bring something to life is super important. The other side of it is like, the question is, as a writer, as solely as a screenwriter, how much value do you get out of a, say sub $100,000? budget movie? I'm not, I'm not convinced there is that much. Because basically, they just tend to be small dramas, maybe if you wrote a sci fi, right? Like some people don't really want an action, or an action,

Alex Ferrari 38:05
you know, or obviously horror?

Joshua Caldwell 38:06
Yeah. It might. It's possible, I can say that if it's under $100,000 Drama, it's probably not valuable. Oh,

Alex Ferrari 38:14
no genre, if it's, if it's a $3 million drama is gonna generally not be valuable. barrels in it.

Joshua Caldwell 38:22
You know, like, I think of somebody, just some separate writer had written layover, it wouldn't have done anything for them. You know, I just don't think anybody said, Oh, this guy can write something. But because I was a writer, director, it changed the conversation. The other side of it, is that, you more than that, what you said, living in that genre world? And the idea that you also are that a produce screenwriter, right, which like is what everybody's trying to go for. And Hollywood is one of those one of those towns where people just, they want to have some comfort in knowing that, you know, what you're doing. And the easiest way for them to determine that is if somebody else has already given you money to do it. Right? Like, oh, this guy's already directed something. Okay? Good. You know, doesn't matter whether it's good or bad. It's just the fact that you've done a feature says to them, okay, this guy did a feature, he didn't collapse. He didn't freak out. He didn't go massively over budget. Like, you know, he made something pretty good. Like, let's do the next thing. That's what they're always looking for. So even with writers again, it's also not just the writing, it's like, Who are you as a person? Are you abrasive and annoying and not fun to work with? Like, nobody's gonna want to work with you? Oh, you know,

Alex Ferrari 39:41
that's that's the bottom

Joshua Caldwell 39:42
too. I mean, I've been asked in meetings about scripts thinking that I was the shit and that like, you know, what I wrote was like, you know, golden you know, the written in Golden ink. You know, and and you just very soon you get over that, you know, and you realize that no, like, you know, I always thought like with Chris McQuarrie, chris chris McQuarrie, always had that great response was like, the minute I stopped thinking about what I could get out of it, everything changed. Instead, it was how do I help you get what you want out of it. And then I'll do it the best way that I can, right, but it's not. It's not Oh, I'm the smartest guy in the room. And these are my ideas. And this is what it's going to be, especially when you're starting out. You know, but if you go in there, and your goal is to deliver something that they can sell and make money on, people are gonna want to hire you again. So I think any writing is valuable. I think, like, Look, if you've got an idea for for a low budget, genre movie, or even help low budget drama, like do it. There's no reason to stop. Stop you. But the other thing is, you got to think about well, okay, well, me as a writer, what do I want to be right? Because let's say you get that under $100,000 genre movie written? You know, no, say you have some drama that you really wanted to make. But then you've got a spec. That's 100 million. Yeah, sci fi space epic. Right? No, not gonna work. Yeah. And

Alex Ferrari 41:03
also, let's just put that on the side $100 million space epic that's not based on an IP that's existing already, or a toy, or some sort of thing is not going to get produced in today's Hollywood. It's just one.

Joshua Caldwell 41:15
I don't even know if like, I mean, I just think like, also, it's tough. Like, who's gonna buy it? You know, it's weird, because I know a couple people that have written these they've written really big budget things that everybody reading, but nobody bought it.

Alex Ferrari 41:27
Right? Because of that, because that's not the studio, right? I just can't make they're not what you're not. Right.

Joshua Caldwell 41:33
But what you're taught is Oh, right, that high concept, no script,

Alex Ferrari 41:39
from what I think the new rules are, is write a wonderful indie, or write a good series or be a good writer on a series or something like that. And then possibly, you'll get bumped up to a bigger budget situation to like, if they like your voice or something like that to to write the next Black Panther or, or that kind of scenario. But they're also looking a lot of those. I mean, have any of the Marvel's not been writer directors? Like I know, I'm sure that I don't know. But a couple of them have. But But I mean, a couple more. I'm right off the top of my head, I have not, I can't think of a director of a Marvel film, I'm going through them in my head that was not a writer on it in one of your co writers write that. So that so that

Joshua Caldwell 42:28
intro, I'm not as familiar with Marvel, but

Alex Ferrari 42:31
but any of those, any of those big, you know, epic studio projects, generally speaking as a writer, director. Yeah. It's a it's the, yeah, the big epics, especially for the studios, you know, unless you're, like, Pirates of the Caribbean or something like that, which dress is different. But that's just the world we live in. Yeah.

Joshua Caldwell 42:51
Yeah. I mean, so much has changed, you know. And there's also now opportunities in that digital in the digital world, you know, like, right, smaller, smaller stuff, you know, getting written. I mean, I don't know about with COVID. But, you know, for a while there, there was a lot of lot of opportunity, you know, in the writing, but I also think like, one of the real challenges that I see is just how tough it's got to be if you're just a writer, you know, it's just that I

Alex Ferrari 43:18
have more than ever,

Joshua Caldwell 43:20
that I'm gonna write a script. And that's all I all I want to be as a writer, that is, that is a tough world, man, I've seen a lot of people bow out, you know, a lot of people I knew, you know, for a couple years, like they just gave up, because it was just very, very challenging.

Alex Ferrari 43:34
My feeling is, this is just my opinion, I think that you if you're a writer out there, right now, try if you can't, if you don't want to direct and don't want to produce your own stuff, partner with someone who can, and make that make low budget stuff and start start small and start building up and, and all of a sudden you have 2345 of these things under your belt, then you start getting and then you all these kind of lower budget genre pictures or lower budget streaming series, they will you have an opportunity to get to get a foothold into that. If you think you're going to be making the next Marvel forget if you think you're gonna be making the big next studio movie. It's the competition for those jobs is so big. It's so competitive. And there's basically what are we talking about 100 guys, and unfortunately, they're mostly guys, you know, that are are vying for those who have $200 million plus films on their resumes. So you've got to work your way up there. I that's my I'm more of a you know, me. I'm an entrepreneurial, entrepreneurial kind of guy like you are. So we like I'd rather have control of my own property. And at the end of the day, you have to ask yourself, what's the angled? Do you just want to write for the writing sake or do you want to make a living as a writer, and then there's two different approaches.

Joshua Caldwell 45:00
Yeah, and it just takes time, you know, it takes takes a lot of a lot of build scripts, a lot of starts and stops a lot of ideas that just don't pan out, you know, and sometimes you got to go down and get a script written, even if it's not the best idea, because you got to have the experience of having written it, you know, and, and, you know, and it's about getting feedback is also about being, you know, I think the other thing too, is like, you know, it's also about being in a place where you can start making connections, you know, if you don't have that agent, you don't have that manager, like, you know, it contests can only take you so far. You know? And, you know, as a writer, there's a lot of benefit to being in LA, you know,

Alex Ferrari 45:43
you have to spend your time here purely being a writer, you know, you got to spend you otherwise, you got to do time. Yeah, look, I'm not saying you can't, I've interviewed people on the show before who've made a living selling scripts that are outside of the Hollywood system. It's rare, but it does happen. But if you want to play the game, you've got to be worth what the players are, unfortunately, yeah. And I think everyone, even if they like you, you spend time here, you did your time, right? Did you get that you're sentenced to live in LA for a certain period of time. And then after that, you can either stay here for the rest of your life, or you can move to get out, or move to a more reasonable place to live. Yeah.

Joshua Caldwell 46:18
You know, I mean, it was like it, you know, and it's funny, because, like, with, with the glory days, yeah, like that. We got that to Todd, because I was in an internship. And I was just talking to the guy who was the assistant there guy named David Clark, who's a friend now. But he was like, you just talking about I was like, Ah, you know, I'm a writer, like, I want to move your word. And, you know,

Alex Ferrari 46:39
I love that you just, well,

Joshua Caldwell 46:41
yeah. Right. I'm like, I'm an intern, you know, right, getting paid. Right. Right. But, um, but I was, you know, if I warmed up to the person, I would tell them otherwise, I try not to say anything. But, you know, basically, like, I just told him I was, you know, I've got a script, it's this. And he's like, Oh, that's, that's actually kind of funny. I'd like to read that. So I gave it to him. And he was the one that got it to, you know, ended up going through the rigmarole to get it to Todd, you know, and so even though it didn't lead anything, it's still like that. That's a clear example, like he could have it could have sold huge, like, I have no idea. You know, and that

Alex Ferrari 47:17
and that does happen. Yeah. And and that's also the importance of networking in this business, right. So, so, so important to build out relationships, authentic relationships with people, authentic relationships with people, I always tell people, like what Chris Macquarie said, you? How can I be of service to you? How can I help you not? I need you to do this for me. Yeah, how can I be of service to you? And

Joshua Caldwell 47:44
even he's huge, and he still takes it with that kind of thing? You know, and that kind of attitude? Without question.

Alex Ferrari 47:49
Now, how did you you've worked with a lot of studios and producers, how do you deal with notes? as a creative?

Joshua Caldwell 47:56
So you know, it's interesting, because I, how do I deal with notes, I get the notes, and then I yell and scream and pillow. Sure

Alex Ferrari 48:09
parent and

Joshua Caldwell 48:10
do some working out punch things. Right? And then I settle? No, I mean, I think that I've learned to take, I've learned to just accept that everybody's trying to make the script better, right? There might be different versions of better, but everyone's just trying to, in some cases you're trying to contribute. And it's a multi prong thing, because sometimes notes or just a note to give a note, right, and they don't care about it. Other times, they're like, super passionate about it, you know, and so what I usually do is I, the best method that I found is if you're doing a call, or whatever, just take the notes. And if they ask for your feedback during the call, just say look like, just give me the notes. Let me just absorb these. And let me think about it. And then let me come back to you. If I have any questions, right? So you take all the notes, and then you sit with them. And then you just do the notes that you agree with. You know, so you you implement those notes, and then you give it back to them. And they're like, what about this, you're like, Well, you know, I didn't feel that this one work, because then you make it a discussion right now. Because most of the time, they're not going to remember that they even gave you the note, depending on the level of investment that they have in the project, right? If it's working with a producer, then that's different than if it's working with an exact who's reading 50 scripts a night, you know, but what I found is that if you if you've shown that you can do the work that you that you've implemented notes that you've taken what they've had to say, and you've done it in a way that you can you think is best. They tend to let the stuff that you don't do go unless they feel very passionate about that. You know, and so, but really, it's it's It's kind of just going well, what's the feedback and it's different situations, are you taking notes from a group of friends that you're just trying to get feedback from, and you can blow them all off if you want to, or you being ordered to implement this set of notes, you know, and so it's a fine line, I think, like, if you if you disagree with something, you should feel free to stand up for it and explain why. You know, or you feel like, you're not going to do that no justice because of these reasons. But I think like, you know, I say this down, which is like, a good idea can come from anywhere. And I will 100% steal that idea. If it's good. Amen. Amen. Brother, preach, you know, preach. And, and there's also just, there's so many steps that you're going through, right? Like, if you're in an early stage of doing a script, you're like, this, I just don't know about this scene, whatever. But you're like, we are 20 steps away from ever filming this scene. And so much can change between now. Right? So like, if it's a short term game, right? Like, it's going to make the exec happy, it's going to make this guy happy. Nobody's to say because all they need to do is go to the director and say, What do you think about the scene, the director is probably gonna say the scenes fucking sucks. Like, we need to change it. And then the director goes to the exact we're changing this. And these echoes, okay, whatever. You know what I mean? There's always there's, there's a politicking that goes on, in film production, you know, that, that a lot of people don't have an ear for, or an eye for. And it can be really important servicing you, you know, as you go through it. But you know, it's a, it's a challenge, especially when you're really passionate about something, especially the

Alex Ferrari 51:37
less experienced you have, the more passionate you might, might be.

Joshua Caldwell 51:42
Oh, and I say all of this, having gone through that thing, where I said, like, Fuck you, like you don't know what you're talking about? Like, you know,

Alex Ferrari 51:48
I'm a genius.

Joshua Caldwell 51:49
This is a perfect, Chris, why aren't you writing me a check right now? Right, like total and total entitlement. But I think like notes are best served by just having some distance to them. And then going, like I the best example I can give because I haven't had that many situations where I've really disagreed with notes in a script stage. But I had a situation with my producer on infamous where we were in the Edit. And he was giving notes. And there were some notes that I sentimentally disagreed with, like I was like, I absolutely disagree with these notes. Upon initial reflection, right, like, literally, it was like, none of these notes are good, I'm not doing any of them. And then what I did was I just took some space, I stepped back from it, right? I put the notes down and went fishing, let it sit, I came back. And I said, Alright, I'm gonna see if I can even let me just see if I can even do them. Right. Let me see if I can even do execute the note. Because sometimes people are giving you a note, they have no idea if it's doable. And then I go, Okay, then how now? So I do them what I can, and I go, how do I feel about this? I'm like, yeah, I'm okay with that. I'm alright with that. Okay, this one I can live with, you know, and and eventually, I ended up doing in the process of the Edit, I did, like 60, I don't know, I probably did, like 80% of their notes. And then the ones that I just didn't agree with, I just didn't do. And then when they saw the next cut, there were a couple that I hadn't done, where they came back and said, We feel very strongly about this. And then we had a very, very passionate back and forth about it. And I ended up doing, I ended up executing in a way that was a compromise between him and I. But then a lot of the other ones, he just kind of let go of, you know, and I felt like we ended up getting to a good place. And what it required, though of me was stepping back and saying, Okay, let me just see if I can even do it. Because Am I am I reacting to the fact that I'm being given a note more of my reaction to the note. Right? And it's very easy to let your ego get in the way and it proved to be the first one. And not the second one. Fair enough. And and there might be some gems in there. You know, there might be some stuff that in there, like, Great example is that the so spoiler alert for those who haven't seen it, but at the end of the layover, originally, we had her give the whole speech about what's going to happen when she arrives and meets her boyfriend. And then it cuts to the next morning and the next morning is just played over music, right. And I had a buddy of mine who came to a screening, we just did a screening to see that see what it was going to turn out like. And my buddy said, you know, and he's he's an editor, but he said, You should try. You should try taking that last part, the montage of her like going onto the plane and put that under the story. And I was like,

Yeah, I don't know, like maybe, like a good idea, you know, and this guy, he was gonna like, whatever no idea, you know, but I was like, I was like, yeah, maybe I'll try it, you know, and I got I was, but originally I was like, No, like, I don't want to do that. Yeah. And then I just like, Well, let me just try it. And I did it. And I was like, ah, I kinda I kind of like that like that. That actually is really good. You know, and I could have tried it and been like, yeah, it doesn't work as well for me, you know, and then gone back to the way I had it. But the Act of just trying it opened up a whole new meaning to the movie for me. And a whole new way of ending that film that I never would have thought of on my own. You know? And so that's why I say I'll take a good idea from anywhere and and, and I'll steal it. I'll make it mine.

Alex Ferrari 55:17
Now your latest film infamous, got released during COVID. How did how did the the driving I saw some numbers on it didn't do bad. It actually did. Okay, pretty well. Yeah. Not being Yeah, we

Joshua Caldwell 55:31
end up being like number two, like, right, we were the number one new movie number two overall, you know, and it did it did pretty good business over four weeks. Like it was, you know, I think it took it over 400,000 that's, you know, that's not bad at all.

Alex Ferrari 55:46
That's awesome. Yeah,

Joshua Caldwell 55:46
it was brutalized by some of the critics. But

Alex Ferrari 55:51
well, that's just the way it is. It doesn't matter. The critics or critics. We've all taken, we've all taken our slides. Anytime. Anytime I get a bad review. I always just go to go to Google. And I type in Shawshank Redemption, bad review. And then I read those. And I go, Okay, yeah, or go just write godfather bad review. Star Wars, bad review. You know,

Joshua Caldwell 56:16
the other thing is, for me what was so perplexing about it, that's a whole other podcast, probably, but the whole idea, the whole thing that was so perplexing, was like I've had my other movies, and I know the negatives of it, right? Like, I sort of know Okay, this this is probably not going to work or I get back critique. And I look at like, I mean, I love him for this. Like, I love the work I did on it. I love the movie I made and I'm I feel like everybody that saw it that didn't. I knew people weren't gonna like it, but a lot of people that like really venomously are hate that movie. I feel like they saw a totally different movie than I saw.

Alex Ferrari 56:52
But that's the way it is with all art. And all I know is that that's just the way it is. Yeah, I mean, I mean, Kubrick every single time Kubrick put something out everybody was like, This is horror, like 2001. Horrible. Clockwork Orange, horrible. The Shining horrible Full Metal Jacket horrible Eyes Wide Shut Horeb. Like, it doesn't matter. It is you as an artist. Get it out there. And if it reaches an audience, that's all that you can do. I'm going to ask you a few questions. Ask all of my guests sir. What are three screenplays every screenwriter should read?

Joshua Caldwell 57:27
Whoo. Let's see. What are some that I have? I have I have in there. I think that. I mean, I think that let me think about it. I think that Magnolia is one of them.

Alex Ferrari 57:46
I think it's it you can't go wrong with PT. Yeah, what can go wrong with PT a go wrong? Oh, no, no, he can't he

Joshua Caldwell 57:54
there's just so many rules that are broken.

Alex Ferrari 57:57
Yes. You know,

Joshua Caldwell 57:58
by his writing that I think it's worth reading that. Gosh, what else? I think that

Alex Ferrari 58:08
it's a good question.

Joshua Caldwell 58:09
I don't I don't go through and read a lot of scripts. What do I have? I have like, I'll tell you what I have. I have Mystic River, which I thought was really really good. traffic. Yes. Which is really interesting. I think, you know, people have kind of come around on it. But I think Chinatown is still a really good example of, of screenwriting.

Alex Ferrari 58:28
Yeah, of course.

Joshua Caldwell 58:30
And I, you know, it's weird, though, because I look, I like to look at specific movies like movies I really love I'll go read those scripts. Sure. Because I like to just see, you know, just how it got put down on the page. You know, like, you know, so I love reading like Oliver Stone scripts. I love reading. I mean, Chris Nolan, certainly, but like, you know, PT Anderson, I just like, I like reading so much. I like reading the scripts of movies that are not traditional. Right? They're not an obvious type of film. Because then you start to look at it and go, Well, how is this even put together? You know, and you start to see all the ways in which like the traditional screenwriting rules like mark it here, too, which I think is really exciting and really opens up really opens up new possibilities when you see that occur and other scripts and you go like, let me try that. You know, I mean, it's the same thing with layovers. Like, let's, let's, let's make a 10 minute dialogue, and you're just like, nobody wants to do that. You know, right, right. All right.

Alex Ferrari 59:31
What is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

Joshua Caldwell 59:38
What is the lesson that took me the longest to learn, go business or in life? That is own that is really only about the work that you do? That it's not about people's reaction to it. It's not about whether people like it, it's not about whether it's solar cells, like You have to be happy with the work that you do, because that is the only thing that's in your control.

Alex Ferrari 1:00:06
And what did you learn from your biggest failure?

Joshua Caldwell 1:00:12
Biggest failure? Well, as a writer, I don't know if I have that as a writer, I would say that as a director, my biggest failure was moving away from an approach and a style that I liked and felt good about and an effort to try to. I don't want to say elevate something in an effort. It was with the serious South Beach like I tried to do something in a style that wasn't me. Right? And stetic That wasn't me because I felt I needed to try and make it feel not brighter but more I don't know like slicker more no produce and I realized after the fact that that was a mistake that I should have gone the stylistic route that I'm most comfortable with you know, and that I feel the best with because that I felt is what gets me better performances and better movies.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:08
And where can people find you and your work and all the stuff you're doing

Joshua Caldwell 1:01:13
I'm on Twitter at Joshua underscore Caldwell that's a good place to start because everything leads out from there and then my works I mean, you know, movies are now available. They're all available on iTunes, Amazon, VUDU, YouTube kind of wherever wherever movies are sold.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:30
Brother man I appreciate you coming on the show and and sharing your wisdom of the in the shrapnel that you have taken always. And your movie award sir.

Joshua Caldwell 1:01:42
I had to slip that in some hips.

Alex Ferrari 1:01:44
I've never actually seen so close. I've never actually seen it so close before so I appreciate that. Now listen, I I bust your balls about the movie award. I would have killed for a movie award. I would kill me for what

Joshua Caldwell 1:01:57
It was awesome is the coolest night of my life so far.

Alex Ferrari 1:02:00
Dude, I got my first award at a film festival. I still have it. It's on my shelf. It was like a bet. It was like a best picture for my short and I have a picture of me looking at it. Yeah, and I literally just like in awe of like, Oh, yeah, like they love me. They like like they really like. So a pleasure as always brother. Thanks again, man.

Joshua Caldwell 1:02:22
Dude, take care. Have a good night.

Alex Ferrari 1:02:24
I want to thank Joshua for coming on the show and dropping those indie film screenwriting knowledge bombs on the tribe today. If you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/082. And thank you all the tribe members who signed up for the new podcast inside the screenwriters mind, which is going to be a bi weekly podcast. And if you have not checked it out, please head over to screenwriters mind.com sign up. It is going to be the best of all of our podcasts in the indie film hustle Podcast Network so you guys can take a flavor of all of the podcasts that we have at the ifH Podcast Network. So thank you for listening guys. As always, keep on writing no matter what. We'll talk to you soon.


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BPS 081: Screenwriting for Schwarzenegger & Stallone with Miles Chapman

Today on the show we have Miles Chapman, the screenwriter behind the successful action franchise Escape Plan starring the legendary Sylvester Stallone. The premise was simple but great.

When a structural-security authority finds himself set up and incarcerated in the world’s most secret and secure prison, he has to use his skills to escape with help from the inside.

Then add Sly and another legend, Arnold Schwarzenegger to the mix and you have action nirvana. Miles and I discuss how the project came to be, some extremely entertaining stories from the set and what it was like working with legends.

The first Escape Plan was such a big international hit that the producers spawn off to more sequels, which Miles wrote as well.

Enjoy my conversation with Miles Chapman.

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I like to welcome to the show Miles Chapman, man How you doing story short, we had a theatre company in New York that was good. I wrote I wrote a play and realized that the writing of it was so much more fun to me than the acting of it, I realized it wasn't writing parts for myself. And then my wife who was still an actor, she started testing for pilots out here. I was writing more plays than anything else that I would transition into being a trying to be a TV writer and then got a got hooked up with a manager on the film side. Now this is a while ago, so back then you could still do movies or tv nowadays managers, you know, kind of have to do both. And that was kind of how I got started. just knew I wanted to tell stories knew I wanted to write and after having read and written a couple plays just felt like I wanted to be a little more I don't know. expand my horizons a little bit. Alex Ferrari 5:05 Now, when how well first of all, when did you when you get your manager? How many screenplays had you had written prior to getting that manager? Miles Chapman 5:14 Right So, first manager I had who's not what was not home with now, I was through a connection. It's a funny story. Um, my wife who had been testing for pilots out here in LA and flew home one time with a fella in a wheelchair. She got to talking to him, he was a writer. He had some connections in LA so when I flew out to try to meet some people, he had very kindly taken a few I've written I think I had written a west wing and a Buffy the Vampire Slayer spec so it tells you Yes. And it was back when you wrote TV specs. I hear now that it kind of fluctuates sometimes. Sometimes specs are in sometimes original scripts are in. So he had passed those along. Also, you know, friend of a friend. My wife had taught acting in Georgia with Tony Shalhoub, sister Tony Shalhoub, the cheerful Alex Ferrari 6:05 monk. Miles Chapman 6:06 Yes. And so my wife shot a little movie in New York that Tony was the star of Tony found her in her dressing room chair instead of you, Erica, Erica Yoder. And anyway, Tony had passed a few of my things along to so that kind of all happened one week out here in LA, I was still living in New York and I, I ended up meeting the fella in the wheelchairs manager. And that became my first manager experience. Alex Ferrari 6:34 That is such an LA story. Miles Chapman 6:38 You know, my wife, my wife is the most social person in the world. She saw him zipping around the gate, and then ended up sitting right next to him on the airplane, they got to talking. He's a lovely guy, and was nice enough to pass along my material. So you know, it. It worked out. I wasn't when I was with the manager of just a couple years and I to answer your question. I had never, I had never finished a film script before, Alex Ferrari 7:03 really, really Miles Chapman 7:04 written these two TV pilots for us. And I'd written a couple plays, none of which had gone to Broadway. Alex Ferrari 7:13 And it was so not Hamilton, it wasn't the not so much. wasn't anything like so but also but to for the audience to understand that. That would not happen more than likely today. In today's marketplace that you would just pick up with two pilots. Unless the pilots were written like, you know, it was Tarantino and Aaron Sorkin had a kid. Miles Chapman 7:34 Yeah, yeah. I think so much of that era. 2000 or so was about potential. I think I think managers back then were still looking for agents as well. Potential who, who seems like they can write it seems like they have a commercial sensibility, whatever they're looking for. That appears to happen less so today. That it today It seems more like and again, I should preface this by saying like, you know, we all have our own experiences, what I say I'm sure you've had, you know, you've had 1000s of screenwriters come on and talk but in my experience, you know, if you don't have a piece that somebody feels like they can do something with actively, they're probably not going to sign yet. I don't know what your experience has been. But it's my reading of the market today. Alex Ferrari 8:21 Yeah. And it's and it could be Yeah, I've seen people get like a sign based off of potential there is still a little bit of potential, not as much just a couple of pilots but like if they have a screenplay, or a pilot that's really powerful or more like a screenplay that has it's a good writing sample, and just go Alright, this guy has or This girl has potential, they might sign it or they might I've heard of heard of managers and agents also just like putting them on the shelf and like stewing them is a term like let's let's let's nurture them. Let's see where they come let's keep writing carpet pocketing. Miles Chapman 9:01 That was a famous Alex Ferrari 9:02 Yeah, it was kind of like a hip pocket. Yeah, like I'm hip pocketed at a hurt. I've heard a I've heard filmmakers and screenwriters say I'm hip pocketed by an agent in CAA. I'm like, that means nothing. Right. Miles Chapman 9:15 It was one of the and I think really in thinking back Alex, those guys probably were hip pocketing May the guys I first got with because we weren't we I had an original idea for a script and we worked on it together. And you know, it didn't really get any better. And so we agreed to kind of part ways after about a year, year and a half. And, and it was right after that. I went off and as I say I went off and kind of learned how to write a movie. I think I had some arrogance like a lot of people coming out to LA I've seen a lot of movies. I must know how to write one. Alex Ferrari 9:45 It's It's It's the only business I know of you never go and go look at that cake in the bakery. That, oh, I just heard a symphony. I can write that. like no other. I Oh, look at that building. I can build that. No but screenwriting specifically, even worse, it's worse than filmmaking. Miles Chapman 10:05 It's tricky. No, my wife who acted for a while she doesn't anymore. But you know, she did a pretty high budget short film, where they fell in directing it. You know, who was awesome. He was a former editor, he had a great crew, he had everything. You know, the one thing they hadn't hammered out, as well as everything else was the script. And, you know, it sounds like you're to your point like that, that sometimes is like, well, if I can see it, I've got these great visuals in my mind. And that doesn't always lead to great filmmaking. Alex Ferrari 10:38 A lot of times in my experience, filmmakers a lot of times get so caught up in the the the romantic, the romantic image of Kubrick, or Nolan or Fincher or Spielberg, or Scorsese and the, and the shots, but the thing that they don't understand this, those are all masters of the craft. And understand story, first and foremost, before they got all these cool, technical aspects of it. I mean, Kubrick is an amazing example of that, you know, Miles Chapman 11:09 in a weird way, like, so I left that manager and then kind of learned how to write a movie, I kind of said, okay, maybe I should take this a little more seriously. Not that I thought that I wasn't I moved out here and everything. But sure. And then, and then I wrote a script or two. And then actually, that got read by the manager, who is still my manager today. And so this is back in 2004, maybe. And that one, but they were cool. They wanted to work with me on it and see where we landed rather than it is made at least back then there was a lot of this Oh, sign with us. And we'll give you our notes. Yes. Isn't Alex Ferrari 11:46 that happened today? Miles Chapman 11:49 Think do the manager thing was a lot newer back then there were a lot of people trying to kind of carve their niches managers. And therefore they wanted they wanted volume, I guess, Alex Ferrari 12:01 and potential potential because they wanted to get as many kernels of corn in the in the pan to see which one pops? Miles Chapman 12:08 Yeah, fair enough. Fair enough. But that that's kind of how, and then through working with them, we worked well together. They then submitted that script to some agencies. And that's how I got my first agent. And and I always just want you to I always, anytime someone comes on who has, you know, credits and experience and are obviously professional writers, Alex Ferrari 12:30 I want you to just please lay this without an agent is only interested in people that they can make money with. And an agent is not a guaranteed check is not a guarantee that they're getting a worker. Miles Chapman 12:44 Yeah, yeah, that first thing you said? Yeah, I have this conversation all the time when people are like, do you like your agent? Well, then there's a second question is that are you making your agent money like that, that, you know, you probably don't like your agent, if you're not making and they're not really calling you a lot if you're not making them money, that's that's the Alex Ferrari 13:06 business transaction. Miles Chapman 13:08 Yeah, everyone who loves their agent, it's because things have worked out. Alex Ferrari 13:12 Either they've made a tremendous amount of money for them in the past, and that kind of goodwill carries you over. But that does wear out to even these big movie stars that were once making 10 or 15 million when their star starts to dim. You see them change to new agencies, Miles Chapman 13:26 I've been with through for three or four agents over my career I have liked as people like them all. And, you know, someday they the relationship is based on what's happening in the workplace, you know, if they usually when you sign up, if you're a fortunate you get a kind of a honeymoon period. And if you don't convert for whatever reason, that kind of dissipates because, you know, especially at the bigger agencies, they just got way too many other clients to to try to serve. Alex Ferrari 14:01 It's whichever horses making the money. It's, it's as brutal as that is one horse is making the money. Miles Chapman 14:07 So good to point that out, though, because the romanticized notion of the agent. I think creating I'm a big one on not wasting energy and emotional energy. Specifically, what we do takes a lot of time, it takes a lot of banging your head against the wall. And I'm not good when I'm in chaos. Some writers are some creative people are I'm good when I'm locked in. And spending energy worrying about why my agent hasn't called me in 14 hours. You know, I'm watching the clock called him yesterday at noon. Why haven't I heard about it? It's just not something that I do anymore. And, and some of it is having enough experience to recognize that if I do my thing, right, hopefully, they will be calling me. Okay, man, you never know. But But and I can't expect them. If I'm not getting calls. I need to write a new thing. You know, like sit around and badger them over the over Escape Plan, which came out now seven years ago, is used, like there's no, there's no, you know, unless you want to just get frustrated and say bad things about the industry, which is what that leads? Alex Ferrari 15:14 Well, yeah. And also to, for writers, you know, we we look for any excuse not to write. So we're like, Well, you know what I'm not gonna write today because I'm gonna be pissed off at my age and and I'm gonna, and that's an Am I am I right? We look for reasons like tomorrow Oh, but I'm gonna I have something else to focus myself on and it's you if you're doing your job just right, just right you shouldn't be waiting for someone to call you you should be writing and constantly creating product or potential product that can get you to the next level. And if you'd like you said it was such a great comment. If you're doing your job, right, they will call you Miles Chapman 15:54 think so? I think so. Like and and, you know, we I think we've all had friends, I probably done it myself who, you know, you say Oh, so and so loved my script. Okay, that's all great that in a free bowl of soup gets you a free bowl of soup. So if your script is being loved 10 times, but you've not gotten a job, you've not sold it you're not you start. It's a look in the mirror moment. I'm a big, big one on those two, like, how can I I can't fix somebody had ca or somebody had, you know, imagine or I can only take care of myself. And if I'm not getting the results I want maybe that script that I thought was so great. Maybe it's a lot easier to say we love it, then they sit down and give notes that are really helpful. That's another thing I've found to be true that I do think people have the best intentions in terms of saying stuff. But if you say you're lukewarm on something, you have to explain why. And it takes time, especially to give giving good notes is think is one of the hardest, most time consuming things to do. And, you know, some people just don't want to spend that time on a script script they thought was an so they say it was great. It was great. But you know, we'll see what we can do with it. Alex Ferrari 17:05 So do you do you also, I mean, in LA specifically, you can be loved to death. Like, there's so much love, everyone's loving your script. Everyone's you're the next hot thing. I'm like, Yeah, but the checks aren't coming in, the jobs aren't coming in. I've never and I've said this 1000 times, this is the town that gives you the best FAQs I have ever seen. anywhere in the world. There's it's an art form here. They will never straight up tell you. This story sucks. Your writing sucks. You shouldn't be in the business. I will never hear that from a major agency or I mean, just because you just don't the reason why they don't do is because you don't know. You know? I think that's Miles Chapman 17:47 right. You know, you never know if that thing with the dread tweak or the right twist or the right rewrite. Alex Ferrari 17:53 or five years down the line. He writes Titanic. Miles Chapman 17:57 You don't want to be the guy who said or the woman who said, Man, you suck, you should leave to go back to Iowa or go back to Philly or go back to, you know, Massachusetts, wherever you came from. Like Yeah, no, I agree. I agree. And and I do think it's it's, it's so hard to figure out. The other thing, another great, I'm gonna give your audience a lot of ways to waste your time and energy. Fantastic ways I used to waste energy. I'm like, Well, wait a minute. I saw that movie. That movie was written by person x. And that movie wasn't that good. But then person x got to write another movie. And that movie wasn't that good either. Why is person x so much further along than I couldn't be a bigger, more natural but bigger waste of time? Like Yeah, because as you know, the things that go on behind the scenes and what goes well, what ends up on the movie screen sometimes has very little to do with what that writer actually wrote in that first draft that got everybody excited and got every attachments popping and got the studio buzzing by the time that thing ends up being filmed. It can be sometimes it can be a lot better, but sometimes it can be a lot worse. Like it's such a The thing that I always call it the castle wall like the writer starts out outside the castle wall in the studio and the green light is on the other side of the castle wall. And everything we're doing is to try to get through that cap over that castle wall and it feels like it is the hardest thing that's ever been done in the writing world right? How have you ever get over it whether with studio executive they attach a big star then it's like it seems like everything speeds up it's all about just getting that movie made and the care and the time that maybe happen outside the castle wall now you've got to go movie it gets a little crazy it gets a little so many moving parts so much money Alex Ferrari 19:50 yeah, especially when you get you know director egos involved producer egos involved actors egos involved. I mean if you read if you read Shane Black's his last boyfriend out. And you watch last Boy Scout. It's just, you know, completely different. just completely different. The script, his script is amazing. And the movies not bad. I enjoyed it because it was Tony Scott and all that good stuff. But it was so much better on the page. Yeah. And on the opposite side, you read the original pretty a woman. And you read the film version of it, which then Garry Marshall, Garry Marshall did. You know, I knew a producer who worked on that. And he told me the whole story. And it was just brilliant. Because the this is such a screenwriter thing to do. He wrote this gritty ending to Pretty Woman it was I think the movie was called 1000 bucks or 3000 bucks or something like that, if you remember, right. Yeah. And then at the end, Richard Gere's character literally throws Julia Roberts out into the street and just throws the money at her and drives off in the limo. And that was pretty woman, a Gary, Gary Marshall came in and did the master work that he did. And then after the first screening the screenwriters like, that's not my vision. That's not what I wrote. When I made $200 million. He's like, I did that. That was me. Miles Chapman 21:11 And that's, you know, it's funny, I think, right here, you know, you sit, you sit in your bunker, if you write by yourself, and don't have a writing partner, sit in your bunker by yourself. It's a kind of insanity while you're doing it. And, and so sometimes you have very legitimate things that people screw up or change screw up means. That's, that's an that's an interpretation word. It's changed. And you feel in your soul as an artist that that was the wrong choice. But other times, I call it scar tissue. We have banged our heads against it for so long, that any sort of change on it feels wrong to us, but it's not like it's better or worse, it's just different and different. Feels very weird when you've spent six months to a year, you know, wrestling with something, and and so I always try to be I try to remember that film at the end of the day. It's a collaborative thing. It's a collaborative art form it you know, and if you take the money to shut up, that's my honor. Unless you're giving it back, I don't think anybody wants to hear about it. Alex Ferrari 22:16 I may have to take that quote from you. If you take the money Shut up. Miles Chapman 22:23 Unless you're giving it back unless you're ready to give it back. I don't think anybody really wants to hear about what studio did what to your script. And isn't that the other thing? I mean, Alex Ferrari 22:31 you could pull up James Cameron and just not get paid for Titanic and just give all his money back and just so you have creative control and then it works out at the end. Miles Chapman 22:37 Yeah, and you know what I am let's be clear. If you've written your Opus, your film that it but just don't sell it, you know, like, if you if you want to control it, don't sell it. Like it seems very. Yeah, that that's Words To Live By, right? Alex Ferrari 22:57 Yes, absolutely. Now, your first gig, sir, if I may. If I may be correct. Your first gig was Roadhouse. Two. Is Miles Chapman 23:05 that correct? That. That is That was my first job. Alex Ferrari 23:08 So I have to ask because Roadhouse is it's a masterpiece. It's a masterpiece of 80s action. I mean, there's just no question about it as on my probably the top 10 if not top 15 of 80s action movies. And that's high praise because 80s action is pretty, pretty high competition in the 80s for action films. And, and Patrick and everything. So they come to you and go, do you want to write Roadhouse too, and I'm sure you go is Patrick in it? And he's like, No. Miles Chapman 23:39 Well, first, so Alex Ferrari 23:41 tell me at the start. I'll tell you. Miles Chapman 23:42 Yeah. Um, so Roadhouse somehow gotten locked up, I guess was MGM D original Roadhouse. I can't remember Alex Ferrari 23:51 it was Yeah. Was this was a silver Yeah, silver produced it. Miles Chapman 23:54 Yeah, but and somehow Sony had gotten control of it. And Sony was very hot back then. In the mid 2000s, on doing direct to video sequels, binding, binding. And here's the thing that I'm sure you understand. And that I will I will crow to the cows come home, okay. It's happened to me a number of times now. Everybody had in these processes. I do believe everybody had good intentions to try to make a decent movie, okay. But when budget is not made clear to the writer, and shooting schedule, it's Pim, it's pivotal people like this disconnect between producer and studio, saying, we're gonna we're not going to be a huge budget. That means one thing. That's but that's not a 17 day shoot, like, you know, 17 no action movie should really be shot in 17 days unless it's like one location, right, you know, anything that and so they came to me and I was trying to get the job. So I love my drought. I don't know where it if I even still have in my original draft of Roadhouse to, um, it was supposed to be Swayze in it, doing kind of an Obi Wan Kenobi in the bouncer world kind of thing like teaching a younger character to sort of take the mantle. Now, if I was a little more savvy back then I would have known that there was no way he was going to do this thing like it was in the budget wasn't there? You know what the budget wasn't there. Any any established movie star like him would see how long you shooting this for? and be like, no, it's not a theatrical Alex Ferrari 25:28 in a way. Yeah. Miles Chapman 25:30 I mean, but they always say if it's good, we'll go theatrical. But Alex Ferrari 25:36 that in a cup of soup gets you a cup of soup. Miles Chapman 25:38 Yeah, yeah, maybe maybe they don't say it anymore. But, um, so but but it's still I wrote what I thought was a great I love the first one. I'd seen the first 120 times. Oh, really, you know, and can I can I drop obscenities on this? Alex Ferrari 25:55 If we allow one per episode, so go for it. Now. Go ahead. Miles Chapman 25:59 If I'm quoting, maybe the greatest line in Roadhouse. I say, go for it. You know, Jimmy across the river to Swayze I used to fuck guys like you in prison. It's one of the great moments. I remember the first time I saw that, like, oh, it is so good. Anyway, so I tried to write a real worthy sequel to and through the production process. Like with a lot of things where the budget isn't, you know, the first budget of the first one was huge. Like it was a big budget. It was a you know, Alex Ferrari 26:34 Joel Silver production, right? Miles Chapman 26:36 Yeah. And the corners get knocked off. I think that's a fair way to say it. Like, yeah, they're just certain things that happened. And so I was happy to have had the job. It was amazing. While I was working on it, to be able to tell people in parties that I was actually writing the sequel Roadhouse. I had a guy at one party tell him that movies when he realized he was gay, you know, those things like, you know, a seven, awesome, watching Patrick Swayze do Tai Chi in his sweatpants, you know, that turned to got it. Right, right. So it was a cool first experience, you know, the finished product is well, it was a it was a little bit of a mess. Alex Ferrari 27:18 But again, that's that's that's the the hazard of all screenwriters, even the biggest screenwriters on the planet they unless they are producers or unless they're directing or unless they have you know, their their Sorkin scripts that wasn't what's working on it. There's, you know, Tarantino is probably different because he directs everything but Shane, black, Miles Chapman 27:38 all these guys, if I can say anything to producers out there listening or one of the producers or is it is I don't understand this, this is something we're still after my 15 years in the business, I still don't get it. That step where they could have come to me and said, our budget is exactly this. We have three action scenes in it. We have let's go through it. I could have written that movie would have been 20 times better. And same budget same, because we would have problem solved based on what they had. Instead, they tried to take what I had written and in pre production, which was not very long, kind of just jamming Oh. And and that's a really, that's a really hard thing to do for a dedicated writer who's there to only do that, let alone the line producer and the director who are trying to, you know, figure out 5000 other things every day. So Alex Ferrari 28:29 and also, I remember that time period in Hollywood when DVD market was just exploding that they were just trying to shove as much product into the marketplace and honestly, they were just using the Roadhouse as Roadhouse was the star Roadhouse was the star. Miles Chapman 28:46 I think they could have, they could have carried on a few more roadhouses if there, there wasn't a lot of you know, I think when you do something like that, you need to have somebody who's at least looking out for the fans of the original little bit, throwing, like, you know, we wanted to bring back Jeff Healey the blind there. But they wanted to use a band from Sony record, you know, like they weren't, you know, and I get the commercial crossover. But you know, when the fans have that first one, if you throw in little bones, they appreciate it. Fans are great. Fans of these movies, know them by heart. And they appreciate when you said, Hey, the fan base is rabid about sways his car that he drove and that are these, you know, I had a guy come from direct tv in my house work and asked me what I did was working on it. And he's like, Oh, you got to put that car and I forget what kind of was but he's like, Oh, yeah, that car has to be in the sequel. Like, you know, it wouldn't have killed anybody to put, you know, I have because it turned out to be it was like Swayze his nephew. That's who the character was in the sequel, right jab, his nephew sort of driving, you know, anyway, I Alex Ferrari 29:48 think there were subtle things that could have been done to it. So improve that film, it wouldn't have cost much more. Miles Chapman 29:53 And oh talk though, was somebody because who knows? Who knows if there are any executives on it? Who even knew the first one You know, there's a lot of turnover there's a the game plan was like you said to get a lot of product out there, recognizable quick hitter Oh Roadhouse to I'll give that a try. Right You know, I'm trying to build word of mouth they're trying to take advantage of the marketplace and that marketplace really exist back then. But you got it. I mean, it did but now like it does now, I mean, it's part of every, you know, pitch conversate or do movie kinda is their IP. Alex Ferrari 30:27 So let's talk about escape plan. Now, when I first saw escape plan, the trailer I was like, Oh my god, finally, this is happening. Why did it take so long? And I first I need to know how it came into being. I have so many questions, but my first The one thing I don't know if you wrote this or not, but which I think is funny. Now, you hit like a vegetarian. I did write that. I am a vegan sir. I take tremendous a fencer to the line. I've every time someone is talking to me about being a vegan, they'll use that meme of Arnold like you it's like a V neck adventure daddy and with Arnold, but now he's a vegan. So that's Miles Chapman 31:17 that that line actually came at a really lovely moment. That fight scene wasn't originally the script went through so many incarnations as you can imagine. That line the Arnold and sly, but I thought there should be a fight scene between the two characters. Yeah. And I happen to be I was on set for a little while. And I was Arnold was not there that day. And I actually had the chance to kind of block the fight scene standing in for Arnold with Sly and the director. It's a great, great honor. I'm actually from Philly. He was one so the whole thing was really cool for me. And, and they there had been a scene that actually ended up getting cut out of the movie of them in the dining hall. Arnold tries to give I think he tried to give some steak or something to Stallone and Stallone and Breslin stones character says I'm a vegetarian. Now whether he really was or not, he didn't want that steak. And so in the fight it was when slight hits on on the stomach, we're marking it out. He says, what, what would you say here? And I was like, maybe, you know, cuz they'd come up with the scene. Maybe you hit like a vegetarian. So that was kind of how Alex Ferrari 32:28 such a great, great, great light. All right, so how did it go? Like, how did you get the gig is original Was it an original idea Miles Chapman 32:37 was it was a spec I wrote called the tomb back in the late 2000s. And it went through it got picked up by summit after a crazy you know, you got with us. Back then there was a pretty specific way you went wide with a spec, you know, you went out to like, you know, tons of producers on Monday, or on Tuesday, hopefully, every you know, you're trying to get a good producer who has a deal with a big studio, you want to go into all the studios with good producers. And we had a pretty good producer day and we went into everywhere and there was lots of excitement. And we didn't we didn't get bought in that first week. And it was you know, it was one of those learning experiences really don't get too high. Don't get too low because it really looked like we were going to and we did anyway summit. I'm going to do a shout out to a producer named Robbie Brenner who became a real champion of that script and wouldn't let it go away which as you know, after a spec kind of goes out and has its it can it's like it never happened if you don't get a bite and she did not let it go away. Got it. summit eventually picked it up. And I think I can't remember if it was before Twilight after Twilight, you know, because I've seen so much for Twilight is so mad after Twilight were two totally different companies. And so there were always two row two roles like the Arnold and the sly role. And there was always Breslin was always kind of that character. But the Arnold character went through all sorts of changes. And, you know, when when I think when Arnold signed on, the character was a like a Portuguese poet philosopher. It may be like, Dante and Shakespeare and and so that, you know, but I don't really like the idea of that challenge. And and so we it almost happened once with a director named Jeff wadlow. It almost happened with Antoine Fuqua and Bruce Willis. And then it finally landed with Sly and he liked it, and the Emmett furla guys came on board and they were great. And, and then Michael hafstrom, came on as a director, and then at that point, they were trying to get the other character. And I think if I remember right Right. There had been a flirtation with Arnold when Anton fubo and Bruce Willis we're gonna do it. I feel like we had a big meeting at summit was scones in the middle of the table. You know, it's an important meeting, if scones when and they were like 19 people to table and I I remember doing the good writer thing I said no, I sat there but then Arnold didn't do it then but then like a year later, or Antwan and moved on, Bruce had moved on. He did decide to come on. We had a lovely meeting with him and his house, man, the director. Alex Ferrari 35:37 And hold on, stop for a second because I love these stories. I love these. I love these Hollywood stories, because I've been involved with some of them. And they're epic. You, You you you go to a movie stars house. Miles Chapman 35:52 Well, so let me see. Let me set it up a little bit. Yeah. I remember we weren't sure I remember emailing the one of the producers and saying Okay, so this is is this a Arnold's is in and we're talking about how we're going to rewrite his character meeting? Or is this a we need to convince Arnold to be in the movie meeting? And I got a one word answer both exclamation point. Alex Ferrari 36:12 Fantastic. Fantastic. Miles Chapman 36:13 I think I still have that email, because I forwarded it to the director and, you know, He's, uh, I don't know if you know, Michael house Don't be directed. 14. Oh, I forget the name of it. It's a great. It was a Joel Silver based on a Stephen King book with john Cusack. Oh, no. Alex Ferrari 36:31 Yay. I know Tony's talking about Yeah, that's a great movie. Miles Chapman 36:34 Yeah, he's super guy. Really, really great. Um, so we go over there. And so anyway, that that was sort of the preface to it, we don't really know exactly why we're going over there. Alex Ferrari 36:42 So you're gonna see you're going over to Arnold's house, you drive up to this, Miles Chapman 36:46 man, you know, you got to check one and you roll up. Now. Also, it was doubly amazing, because not only had he been the biggest movie star in the world, but he's the former governor of California. So there's this secret service. There's security, there's, there's, and you know, he was married to a candidate. So that's also in that, you know, so it was really incredible. Like, honestly, when you think about, and he was great, like, super down to earth? We had a lovely chat. And I you know, I think I guess it helped getting him to do it. Because he he, he signed on and and and Alex Ferrari 37:22 so, do you geek out? Do you like when you walk in and you see him for the first time? I mean, you your 15 year old self is probably going yeah, of course, oh my god, the only thing Miles Chapman 37:32 that always strikes me is that, in reality, it's funny. You're never as big as you think they're going to be because you're used to seeing them in a movie script, right? A human big hands, you know, but very quickly put us at ease, you know, and, and you know, and then we were chatting, he liked the script, it probably couldn't play it the way it was written, you know, what, what, what some ideas we might have about what we would tweak it and his ideas. And, you know, it was a good back and forth. And my classroom showed him his lookbook about, you know, how he saw the movie and how he imagined it, and blah, blah, blah, so, but it did go through a lot of a lot of rewrites all through this all through that, like, and, and you know, it's funny, and this is another thing for the listener out there. Um, my wife, God bless her was very protective of me, would always get outraged whenever I would tell her about changes that were being done or being met and, and I kept saying, you know, what, I want to be a part of this movie, one. And two. You know, a lot of people involved here have made an awful lot of money at the box office. I have made $0 at the box office. So Alex Ferrari 38:44 listen, Miles Chapman 38:45 you try on I you know, you just want to mitigate. Like I said before, some of these need, I'm not knee jerk, but some of these things that you think you're certain because maybe they're not the Batman, you know, I had a reason for why I did everything. But that doesn't necessarily mean it can't be done another way or it can't be done, you know. And then of course, when it got to physically shooting in where the locations where they shot it in New Orleans, and you know, we have to we have to do some tweaking on the script for just the locations they had and I was happy that I could be a part of that. It was actually the whole thing was a really interesting incredible learning experience. Alex Ferrari 39:22 And when so you're working with sly which obviously is a hero of yours as well so coming from Philly in such a huge fan arguably slice one of the the best in my opinion and people could crap on him all he wants because he's popular, but he's he created two of the most major characters and franchises in movie history himself, Rocky and Rambo, and he's also done The Expendables and he's also done this other like and continues to keep building these things. So when you have an awesome he's an Oscar in Mt. They win the Oscar Miles Chapman 39:55 for the screenplay Rocky, Alex Ferrari 39:58 right. So so you have an Oscar. Winning screenwriter and a legend. How is it working with him as a screener? Because Miles Chapman 40:04 he obviously knows story he obviously knows character. And to be fair, he, you know, I don't know how he works with, you know, writers have a have a higher level than myself. Because let's not be silly, you know, like that matters. Um, but it's pretty much his show. Like he he'll he'll rewrite, he'll he'll rewrite scenes for the dialogue, he'll change stuff. I think he brought a writer in to help at some point, you know, like that Alex Ferrari 40:33 Polish things up? Sure. Yeah, that happens, everything that happens with almost anybody. And Miles Chapman 40:38 so it really wasn't a conversation for most of it. It you know, it's like, the things that he wanted to get done. You know, I could always shoot my suggestions, ideas, you know, not directly to him, but through through the studio or through the, you know, through the great terms with the director. So that was there. But yeah, you know, he is going to trust his gut. And he's going to go with what's worked for him. And fair enough. Alex Ferrari 41:04 But so but you've also now worked on the last the next two as well. So, yeah, so obviously, he liked you enough. Yeah. And it was, Miles Chapman 41:16 there was a world. It wasn't always an interesting tension in the original state plan for me. And I don't know if he liked it or not. But I always thought the fact that the character was such an you know, and a lot of ways an intellectual character. You know, he's a engineer. He's a security guy, he sees the angles of everything inside the prison with Stallone's energy and Stallone's persona, which is a little bit opposite that but he has this primal emotional force that I really loved. And I think I think one of the reasons the movies interesting is because of that, that that it's an interesting because the only thing about slides and unbelievably smart, bright and cute, incredibly successful businessman and credit, like you know. So that element of him, I think really like engineer the. And so I think in terms of world building, they thought I'd be a good way to go and the sequels the sequels suffered a great deal, Alex from what I was talking about before budget versus script. That was another thing and again, why I have it's one of my big pet peeves now, like, all three Roadhouse, too, and the two sequels to escape plan would have been. I can't give a percentage but noticeably improved if they just told you the budget, or if I had been told and what within that budget, what does that mean? Like? What are we allowed? What can we do? I love it. I love when producers say don't limit yourself, okay, fine. But I've got I've got three weeks to write this draft, which is what I had on the sequels. I'm not exactly an ideal situation there either. You mean, you wrote the full script in three weeks? Yeah. And we did some rewrites after that. But they needed the first drafts is really alone. And, and again, I would let anybody read my original drafts on those two scripts. They were they were thought out there. They're probably the first one went through such a baking period that it's, it's stronger than the other two. But I certainly but the shooting schedule, the budget, all these things really, really made it hard on the final movie. So you know, and to slice credit, again, he appreciates writers, that doesn't mean he's going to just keep everything you write. But he understands that writings are he understands that he's done a lot of it himself. And so you know, but it's pretty much though, you know, I do my thing, give it to them, and then they do what they need to do with it. Alex Ferrari 43:46 Because he's, he's the 800 pound gorilla. Yeah, Miles Chapman 43:49 I'm the first one. I did come down to the set while they were shooting to solve some problems. But on the sequels, no, it was you know, it was that was often running and you know, they had to make a lot of decisions based on practical boots on the ground. Fair Alex Ferrari 44:05 enough. Now, what's the biggest lesson you learned working on the Escape Plan franchise? Miles Chapman 44:11 It was that one of have tried to find out as much as you can about what what what their capabilities are to really shoot what you're writing. action movies are expensive. I like to do it. There's a reason why so many of those, which I'm sure you saw a lot of them back at the video store. So many straight to video action movies have shootouts in a warehouse at night. There's a lot of reasons for one of them is that they're cheap. You got a big space Yeah, cap guns. Everybody shoots at each other in Roadhouse to two or three action scenes that were really carved out that I really carved Am I really worked on got turned into just flat, you know, people standing there shooting at each other scenes because again, you know, like I was like to talk about Casino Royale the first day or so. The opening action scene and the action scene at the airport with the truck probably took one to shoot as the entire movie of Roadhouse to, Alex Ferrari 45:07 oh, easily. Yeah, Miles Chapman 45:09 those scenes are so scripted, and they're so written, and there's character in them. And there's so many pieces to them. And, you know, and so as a screenwriter, you want to write those you want to really show off you want to, but if your budget it couldn't afford to do one of those scenes, let alone a whole movie. You've got to try to figure that out. Otherwise, things are just gonna suffer by so do. Alex Ferrari 45:31 So that's Let me ask you a question, then. Would you recommend a screenwriter writing a script today? If it's a spec script? Should you let your imagination roll wild? Or should you work with in a budget? Miles Chapman 45:43 I think I think if you're writing a spec, it's your original idea. Go for it. And to be clear, I'm not I'm not a believer in curtailing a writer's imagination. I mean, that's where all the good stuff comes from. What I'm talking about is very specifically when you've got to go movie, and you know, the money is going to be there for it. And back into it. Yeah. And you're and and, and so they know, they know, it's not, you know, when you write a spec, if you write a big globe hopping spy movie, you don't know that, you know, Will Smith and Brad Pitt aren't going to sign on and you're gonna, and you could very well get a $200 million budget, you don't know that. If that's the kind of movie you want to write. Man, go for it. I love those movies. But if you're, if you're being hired to write the sequel to escape plan, and you know, it's getting released, and you know, it's greenlit, you know, it's gonna be shooting in April and it's December. Try to get as much information as you can on what are the resources, what do they really have to shoot with? Because otherwise you're gonna write a script that not it's not gonna fit in the box. And, and, and they'll suffer, Alex Ferrari 46:45 suffer and have to be Miles Chapman 46:47 Frankenstein at the last minute. And very few good things come about when that happens, Alex Ferrari 46:51 right? Because you can write it as $100 million movie, but if you only got 20, Miles Chapman 46:56 exactly, but you know, get your spec. You know, you can always Hey, if somebody wants to do it for less money, and you can rewrite it, and that's great. And yeah, that's awesome. Alex Ferrari 47:03 These are, these are good problems to have. Miles Chapman 47:06 Right? But but so that's definitely one. every movie is so different than I've worked on. The other thing is to try not to get to be open and the notes process. I know it's hard. Alex Ferrari 47:23 How do you deal with that? How do you deal with those? Because that is something that professionals understand it. Yeah, but newbies get so precious about it. It's, it's Miles Chapman 47:32 first thing you got to remember is that unless you've written a really, really unique Charlie Kaufman, Alex Ferrari 47:43 in my mind, Miles Chapman 47:45 where where the tone and the voice of this thing is so particular to the thing, you know, if you wrote the tune, which is what I wrote, which is a, you know, hopefully a high end thriller, but it's still a prison break movie at the end of the day, right? Everybody reading in is going to bring their history with Prison Break movies, you know, what actor do they see playing Breslin, what, you know, how do we should go this way? Should it be a little grittier? Like, you know, happy on or should it be a little more Tango in cash? Like should it you know, like, there. So you as a writer, you can think okay, my scripts perfect or I know or I can defend every decision I made. Let's put it that way. But let's suppose you know, you're Alex Ferrari 48:30 being Jim being john malkovich. Miles Chapman 48:33 Right. I mean, the outward you know, the eternal spot to Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind was one of my favorite movies of all time. Um, uh, you kind of get what that movie is when you read it and you're not thinking Oh, man, maybe we have a few more. Maybe we hated it. You know, we hate the character. You know, like, however a genre movie Romantic Comedy, Action Adventure. I mean, a perfect example. Alex is the born versus bond dynamic correct. with Matt Damon rolled along the net firstborn movie, you know, the Bond movies still felt a certain way. They were a little heightened. Almost like the way that fast and furious has gone from gritty Point Break at the beginning to you know, circus chart Alex Ferrari 49:17 likes. It's James Bond meets circus. Olay Miles Chapman 49:20 right? But if you let's say you wrote a movie about an IT, you know, international global group of car thieves avoiding the police. Well, you could go in the direction of the first one totally. Or you could go in the direction of assuming you don't have a car turning into a rocket ship in the script, but but So my point is, is that going back to the idea of nodes, a lot of people are gonna have a lot of things to say it's a good thing if like universal comes to you and says, Hey, we loved your script. But we will we see it as being like Hobson Shaw. Not that, you know, or rather they don't give you the option. They they buy it and you're thinking I'm amazing universal just spent You know, whatever, six, seven figures on my script, and then you're like a notes call, what do you mean a notes call, I'm perfect. I can't even tell you, the amount of friends I've known who have sold movies for a lot of money, only to then give me really pummeled by the notes calls, like, and then the movie floats off into oblivion. So a studio pays a ridiculous amount of money for it, and wants to change it. And, you know, but but as the writer, you got to try to figure out how to make that work like that, that, you know, you can't tell universal, you know, unless, again, you don't want to take their money, or get taken off the project or your two options. Because you can say, after you've taken the sale, hey, I don't want to know not doing that. And I can say Good for you. Alex Ferrari 50:49 That's not how that works out for you. Miles Chapman 50:50 But by now we respect your integrity, and then they'll move on. And you'll never call you again. I can't you know, I don't I can't speak to that. My my notion is, you know, and again, like I said, I'm sure there are plenty of writers out there who've stuck to their guns on some notes, and it's worked out and they, you know, like, Don't Don't misunderstand me, I just feel like however you work with the notes, write, figuring out a way yourself to work with the notes is important like that, that, that there are a process and for every you know, I've been maybe I've been lucky to I feel like in general, I've worked with on things where there were going to be two and three drafts, I've had good notes, calls, and I feel people, people coming from a place of trying to make the movie better. We may not agree, but not a kind of callous. Oh, there was a character like this and this other movie. So let's put a character like this and in your movie, you know. Alex Ferrari 51:44 And that's the thing. I just want to kind of spotlight this for a second. screenwriters don't understand a lot of times because they're just they're just focused on the writing, that there's so many politics that go on after the film is greenlit, there's so many moving parts, as you said, something as simple as, Oh, the executive or the EP, the executive producer, his girlfriend's in the movie, and we need to add that character, as cliche as that is, Miles Chapman 52:12 I have done there, Alex. Alex Ferrari 52:15 I mean, and you have to write that character in and I'm like, Oh, you know, and then the best is when that actress or actor, depending on the situation comes to you and goes, and they they're like, you know, a kid and never done anything. And they go, I saw this movie the other day on Cinemax. And I love this character. And can we do something like that? And you're just going? Oh, my God. Yeah, sure. And like, but that's the that's the reality of being a screenwriter. I mean, we all again, it's the same kind of romanticism as Kubrick in the screenwriting world, it there's a romanticism in Sorkin or Shane Black, or Tarantino that you know, that they just have complete control and they could do whatever they want. Like, even even guys like Shane Black, still have, Miles Chapman 53:04 you know, you know, it's an incredible point. And I think the thing to always remind everybody is how much money it takes to make a movie. I mean, think about this low budget movies are like five to $10 million. million, like, that's become chump change in the movie business. Think about that, like, so when you've got when you start getting into, you know, a million set. Oh, forget it. There are a lot of people with a lot riding on it. And so that and that's going to create things that's gonna create personalities, it's going to create tension, it's going to create needs, it's going to create a lot, and, you know, just be kind of ready for that. Try to have fun with it. Alex Ferrari 53:46 I mean, if we're lucky, if you're lucky enough to get there. Yeah, you know, I, Miles Chapman 53:51 I got it. I love popcorn movies, the James Cameron aliens to the original Terminator. They were the movies I grew up on. Those are the movies I wanted to write. And so I always try to have fun, like the point of the movie is to be fun. We're not healing. Sadly, we're not healing the Coronavirus here. You know, we're not we're not curing cancer, we are delivering hopefully, smart, cool, fun entertainment, you know, the smart sometimes wavers Alex Ferrari 54:24 depending on the day. Miles Chapman 54:27 And so, you know, instead of, but it is, it's a trigger point. It's a dream job. I've never stopped loving it as a kid from the suburbs of Philadelphia, who had no connection to this business and know, like, it's just been, you know, and it's, you know, and it's super fun. I mean, how many people have a job where they can tell these fun stories or talk about these ridiculous things that Alex Ferrari 54:51 you know, I make a living now with that. It's great. It's, you know, as you know, You know, all of my, all of my podcasts, all my shows, I try to be as realistic as humanly possible. And try to be brutally honest, because I would much rather you hear it on a show of mine, than when you're sitting across from a producer, or a director or an actor, and you get sideswiped by many of the things that we've just discussed right now that they would have never, ever thought of, if they're ever blessed to be in that scenario. Miles Chapman 55:26 Yeah, I mean, perfect example was, like, you know, with, you know, for years, I tried to get the tomb go and like, it was so close, it was so close. Oh, yeah. And then Stallone came aboard, and it really started happening, and there was a director, but then, you know, instead of instead of, you have this amazing thing, feeling which is deserved, and true, but then right after it is the Well, now you've got one of the major superstars in the world on it, and it's going to be his movie, you know, and however that goes is how it's gonna go. And you may be a part of it, you may not be, Alex Ferrari 56:02 you know, just be grateful, just be grateful you're on the ride. Miles Chapman 56:04 Right. And, and, and again, every sick, sir, to the Sixth Circuit, I'm sorry, every circumstance is different, different, you know, one of the fun things and tough things about the movie business as it is very personality driven how people interact, is, you know, there aren't, you know, in, in big corporations, you know, there's HR, and there's a way of behaving, and some people go but but in the movies, you know, companies are, you know, very much they take on the form of like the principal, who who's the who's the person and so, you know, you get a lot of different personalities, obviously, you get a lot of different visions, different ideas, different paces different. So it just, you know, it behooves a writer to stay, you know, thankful for getting to that place and just stay open, try to stay open, try to have fun with it, try to do the best work, you can, under circumstances sometimes that are moving in a different direction. Alex Ferrari 56:58 Like and your story reminds me of quitting, quitting when he when he sold Natural Born Killers to Oliver Stone. If you've ever read Tarantino's version of Natural Born Killers, it's it's not even it's not even the same ballpark other than the character names. Stone who's arguably the 800 pound gorilla in that situation at that time, completely rewrote it and had a different vision for a script. But you know, he can no control at the time. You know, it happens. It happens to every every major screenwriter. It has had has had, it has happened to everyone. Miles Chapman 57:40 And and you know, I don't know what why that story made me think of just it's a little bit like the classic William Goldman quote, like, nobody really knows anything. Right? Which is been around so long, because it is so true. I mean, whether it's you know, the common joke is like if the script of Chinatown got submitted today, as a spec, it would get ripped to shreds. Yeah. Right. Yeah. You know, the opening of Inglorious Basterds, which is one of my favorite movies is like 25 minutes. No bastard show up yet? No, no, it doesn't. But it's incredible movie and credit. So you know, this. There, there's so there's such, the road is so unpredictable. And just when you think everything we're saying is true, the exact opposite will happen. And you just you just can't. And that's why I feel like another thing I've learned all these years is like when I was young and out here, and I was like, because I had been an actor for a while too. And I so I knew what it took to not make it as an actor. I already had that. Alex Ferrari 58:40 So you had shrapnel. Miles Chapman 58:42 I had this somewhat naive idea that well, people when they give up acting or writing or directing or their dreams, you know, it's because they don't have what it takes. That was my young person. Alex Ferrari 58:53 Mm hmm. Miles Chapman 58:53 And as I got older, I realized that that was that's partially true. But the thing that thing that they don't have isn't, isn't wasn't the thing I thought it was. I was thinking back then it was the talent. What it really is, is the personality type to survive. The the downs, absolutely. Like after, when I heard, you know, escape plan was gonna get made. I'm like, I will never had a I will never have a down year again, as a writer. The very next year, I had a down year as a writer. I mean, you know, like, this notion, like I remember an actor friend of mine, he's like, he got cast in a Broadway play. And he's like, I've arrived and did the play for eight months, and then didn't get work for another year, like, you know, like, so it's the personality type. And I get it. My brother is a fantastic writer would never in 1000 years be able to live check to check like I used to before, you know, I got lucky. Yeah, you know, and so that, that's the thing that when you don't have what it takes, it's you don't have the personality that can sort of live with the ebbs and flows of the arrows, the craziness, the the the unpredictability, the, you know, you're up one down, you're up, you're up one day, Alex Ferrari 1:00:12 you're hot one day, and not do nothing the next kid Miles Chapman 1:00:18 again, so maybe you don't that's another thing I've learned Try not to buy into that. That that idea, although there's truth to it, I mean, honestly, when I've been busiest it's been right after like I did a rewrite of a script years ago that Denzel get this isn't washed it never attached to, but he was circling it. He was Alex Ferrari 1:00:38 God, certainly Miles Chapman 1:00:41 two or three jobs from that. Manager being I think that's what it was because my writing samples didn't change. You know, I didn't. It's not like I just popped off a couple new scripts overnight. Because you were attached to that potential. Alex Ferrari 1:00:56 It's just insane. Our business is ridiculous. It's insane. It's ludicrous. But we're in love with it. And what are you gonna do? I can't quit. I can't quit Miles Chapman 1:01:06 the crazy. And if it suits you, you know, and if it suits your personality, if you're okay with the ride, as it were. It's great. Alex Ferrari 1:01:14 You know, and it's a long ride. Miles Chapman 1:01:15 There's nothing like it. It's a you know, every day I'm a phone call can change your whole perspective. But also every day, you cannot get a phone call. But sometimes, more likely, Alex Ferrari 1:01:28 and much more likely. And the thing is that sometimes people wait 20 years for that phone call, and it never comes completely. Yeah. as brutal as that statement is. Unfortunately, it's the truth. And look, I'm still waiting for Kevin Fahey to give me a call. And if Kevin, if you're listening, I'll take the meeting. I'm I'm a fan, sir. And I can do something for you. So I've said that 1000 times on my show one day, Kevin will call me. But until then I'm working on other things and not waiting by the phone for him to come. Miles Chapman 1:02:01 Yeah, Alex Ferrari 1:02:02 so I'm going to ask you a few questions. I asked all my guests. What are three screenplays every screenwriter should read? Miles Chapman 1:02:11 Wow. That's tricky. I'm pausing because we've just talked about how some done the screenplay. And the movie don't necessarily Alex Ferrari 1:02:24 just a screenplay, regardless of how the movie came out. Just like the craft. Like I said, like last Boy Scout, or long kiss goodnight on Shane Black. Those scripts are amazing compared with the film's Miles Chapman 1:02:35 Okay, so there was a movie. You know, there were writer director George nolfi. I don't he George, the Adjustment Bureau. Alex Ferrari 1:02:44 He joins Yes, yes, yes, yes. Yes. Yes. I love that. Miles Chapman 1:02:47 Yeah. Do you mean published and produced screenplays? Because this this one I'm going to? Alex Ferrari 1:02:53 Yeah. Anything that's been published in produce? Yeah. All right. Because the one is one of my favorites is one of George's that never got made. because too many people. There's so many. There's so many of those scripts flying around. I've read some of them. I'm like, how is this not an Oscar winning film? Like I don't understand it? Yeah, Miles Chapman 1:03:09 that's a good question. Let me think. See, I always go back and read. Okay, I say this because of the opening 15 pages screen by Kevin Williamson. So did you want to, we were talking about this with my son the other day, I have a 13 year old son and that. I remember reading that and the rest of the movie is really good. That opening is just it wrong. foots you over and over again. And really, and it reads like a little mini play as it rolled that great screenshot. That's one I've read the for what you can do with an epic scope. I'd read The Dark Knight Alex Ferrari 1:04:08 almost anything, Nolan. Miles Chapman 1:04:09 Yeah, yeah. It's funny, though. Um, I knew a bunch of executives who read momento before it got and they passed on it because they couldn't get through it. I couldn't. That it's such a it's such a clear piece of film. It's one of my favorite movies. Sure. Alright, so the first sort of first sort of scope epic, you know, grounded storytelling. The Dark Knight is kind of kind of one of my one of my favorites to read. Um, Alex Ferrari 1:04:37 Chinatown. Chinatown is not bad. Can't go wrong with Chinatown. Miles Chapman 1:04:39 But I just figured that a lot of people say that, like everyone's gonna read Chinatown, right. Everyone's gonna probably read that. I'm trying to think of some things that um, and I mean, it's one of my favorite. I'll throw out the Eternal Sunshine as well as mine. Because again, coffee, what you can what you can do with character and imagination. Like you're wearing Not tethered. I mean that's it that is about as emotionally realistic movies you will ever see. And yet it has nothing to do with reality. Like you know, another one Royal Tenenbaums the way I understand movie that is about it's fine on a movie about family as you'll ever see. And yet it doesn't really doesn't look like anybody's it's, it's a fantasy as Wes Anderson it, and yet emotionally, it is what we all go through with our dysfunctional families. And that's the beauty. I much prefer those to a movie that looks and smells like a real family movie. But doesn't get deep, like those two do, like doesn't really get. Alex Ferrari 1:05:40 Alright, so we'll go with those. All right. And then, uh, what is what advice would you give a screenwriter wanting to break into the business today? Miles Chapman 1:05:49 With the asterisks that I broke in 17 years ago, yes, I'm not living. do good work, do good work. Put your nose down and do good work you can be proud of stop worrying about how our movies are in. I've had that conversation so many times a friend of mine, I'll be like, hey, a bunch of horror movies just sold or this movie was number one at the box officer. And I'm like, do you love horror movies? Because there's 40,000 writers in LA who love horror movies. They're all writing one right now. And it will be better than your horror movie because you don't love horror movies. So do good work. Write what you love. Not necessarily what you know. People say write what you know. I'm a big imagination guy wrote what you love? Alex Ferrari 1:06:33 And what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life? Miles Chapman 1:06:41 I'm still learning it. And that would be I've talked a lot about collaboration and when to put my foot down and really stick out for myself. Like really, really are the Matt. I definitely had a fear when I first got into the business about getting replaced getting fired, getting you know, all those things that no, you can Yeah, yeah. And, and so I'm still trying to manage that. So that because there are there are times where you're being you're being paid for your professional skills, in your opinion. And if somebody really wants it, or is pushing on it, you're being paid to give it so that goes a little bit counter to some of the things we were talking about. Right. But there there is a time and a place, you know, recognizing that, that at the end of the day, your name is on the script at the end of the day, if you're lucky. Or your names out as the director of the movie and so that you know, so So yes, realizing what what battles to really go hard for. Oh, very cool. Yeah, still still figuring that one out. Alex Ferrari 1:07:50 Miles has been an absolute pleasure meeting you, man and having you on the show. great stories. I'm sure there's tons more that you could tell about your your misadventures in Hollyweird, but I appreciate you coming on and, and dropping the knowledge bombs on the tribe brother, I appreciate that man. Miles Chapman 1:08:07 My pleasure was super fun interview and I'm happy to come on anytime you want me. So thank you. Alex Ferrari 1:08:14 I want to thank miles for coming on the show and dropping the knowledge bombs on the bulletproof screenwriting tribe today. If you want to get links to anything we spoke about in this episode, head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/081. 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BPS 076: Screenwriting a Multi-Million Dollar Movie Franchise with Aaron Mendelsohn

Today’s guest is a screenwriter, director, professor, and Secretary-Treasurer of the Writers Guild of America West Aaron Mendelsohn.  He is best known for co-creating and co-writing the successful AIR BUD family film franchise, which sired eleven sequels and generated millions of dollars over the years. If you have kids then you probably already have seen an Air Bud spin-off film.

Aaron has a number of projects in development including the drama pilot BAD MEDICINE with ITV America and the action-comedy ARMOR HERO with Alpha Pictures.  His romantic comedy LIKE CATS & DOGS aired recently on the Hallmark Channel.  He recently wrote the animated feature PRINCES for Warner Bros, the drama pilot THE ASSOCIATE for Sony, and the animated pilot HOODS for Cartoon Network.

Other produced projects include the perennial ABC Family holiday movie THE 12 DATES OF CHRISTMAS, the Lifetime TV movie CHANGE OF HEART, the Fox TV series KINDRED: THE EMBRACED, the kid’s TV pilot THE ADVENTURES OF TAXI DOG, the family feature THE THREE INVESTIGATORS: THE SECRET OF TERROR CASTLE, and the independent feature CHAPTER ZERO, which he also directed.  Aaron has also written film and TV projects for Fox, New Line, Showtime, Paramount, the Spike Network, New Regency, Hasbro Studios, Bob Yari, Lightstorm, and Arnold Kopelson.

Twenty years into a successful screenwriting career and he still loses his way in the thickets of story-breaking and script-writing. Aaron assembled The 11 Fundamental Questions: A Guide to a Better Screenplay to help guide his path, and they’ve been his road map ever since.

“This is a VERY smart way to deconstruct and demystify the job of screenwriting.”
– Billy Ray, Oscar-nominated screenwriter of “Captain Phillips”

Starting out as a personal story-breaking method and evolving into a masterclass that Aaron has taught around the world, THE 11 FUNDAMENTAL QUESTIONS is now an ebook (newly revised and expanded for Amazon/Kindle) that shares the secrets of his successful technique. Simple and intuitive, each question in the book is strategically designed to elicit key story points, challenge lazy writing, and stimulate ideas.

Wherever you are in the writing process, and whether you’re writing for film, television, new media, or books, asking yourself the 11 FUNDAMENTAL QUESTIONS is a great way to enhance your creative process and sell more projects.

This is a fun episode. Get ready to take some notes. Enjoy my conversation with Aaron Mendelsohn.

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Alex Ferrari 2:02
I like to welcome the show Aaron Mendelsohn man, how you doing?

Aaron Mendelsohn 4:12
I'm good. How are you Alex?

Alex Ferrari 4:14
I'm good, man. I'm good. Just you know hanging in here in this this crazy, wacky world that we're living in?

Aaron Mendelsohn 4:20
Yeah, likewise, where are you? You're based

Alex Ferrari 4:23
I'm in L.A I'm in Burbank.

Aaron Mendelsohn 4:25
On Burbank. All right, so if I threw a rock really hard from city to city, I might, it might land in Toluca Lake,

Alex Ferrari 4:32
It might it might land in Toluca Lake and ripples might splash on to me. Yes. Exactly. Yeah, it is a crazy time. I can't even I've talked about it so much as far as the the the COVID thing, but you know, we're doing what we can and the industry is changing on a daily basis. Nobody knows where the hell anything is going.

Aaron Mendelsohn 4:53
Oh, whenever did by the way.

Alex Ferrari 4:55
This is obviously obviously, but now even more so like before, there was some sort Have some sort of guidance, like, you knew that on Friday there was going to be released a blockbuster movie in the summer, and it was going to generate X amount of dollars more unlikely we had that certainty. Yes, we don't have that now.

Aaron Mendelsohn 5:16
Now it's true. It is. But it makes it interesting. I think it it kind of it was good for the world and Hollywood to kind of have a reset have a little bit of a pause button. You know, it's interesting that the, the Black Lives Matter issue has really risen to the forefront during this time of reflection and reset, because, boy, I'm hearing a lot in the writers community. how, you know, we think we're this progressive, liberal, egalitarian community and new probably compared to a lot of others we are, but there's so much even systemic racism, and bias that happens in the writing community in the screenwriting community and television writing, that this has given us a opportunity to kind of reflect, yeah, reset and see how we can do things differently going forward. There's,

Alex Ferrari 6:11
there's, there's no question about it. Um, I mean, I mean, I growing up I remember watching, you know, I'm a Latino man, have been all my life. And, and I remember watching Looney Tunes, and watching Speedy Gonzales, and I'd be just like, and I never thinking twice about it, but like, as I got older, like, Whoa, that's pretty messed up. Yeah, it's fairly, like, Okay, all right. So look, it's it's, it's something that's in Britain, and I'm bred in this, but it's ingrained in the in the fabric and fortunately, and something hopefully, we'll be able to do. And we, as filmmakers, and writers have the power to really do some change because filmmaking, movies, television, storytelling is the most powerful medium to start that change, without questions. So we started off heavy, so we're gonna go a little lighter now. So how did you get started in the business?

Aaron Mendelsohn 7:16
I got started, I knew I was going to be a screenwriter since I was five years old living in Anchorage, Alaska. And I knew I was going to go to UCLA and I was going to be a screenwriter. Even when I was in kindergarten and Mr. And Mrs. McKinnon's class, obviously, I knew it. And I made it happen. I went to UCLA, I studied screenwriting at UCLA, and then emerging into Hollywood with a script under my arm that everyone passed on. Everyone's shot has died. It was it was a terrible script. So it's not surprising. And then I wrote another one and I wrote another one I got over this sort of illusion that you write one screenplay And the world's gonna be the path to your doorstep, it really was an iterative process. For me, and and my screenplays got better. But what was interesting is the thing that really broke through for me is that I wrote a script about my family. I wrote a script about how my dad came out of the closet, after 27 years of marriage, and how, you know, obviously, that threw something of a hand grenade into the family, I mean, ultimately a good one because he needed to be himself. But it was something of a disruptive event. So I wrote a movie about that in the early 90s. And everyone passed on, it

Alex Ferrari 8:35
wasn't the right time.

Aaron Mendelsohn 8:36
It was not the right time, they were just not doing it. And finally, lifetime, the lifetime network stepped up. And we made the movie with Jean smart playing my mom, and john Terry, who you may remember from last play, playing my dad. And it was something of a little groundbreaking film. And so that was sort of my, that was one of my first projects. And it really took kind of like stepping back and writing something that was kind of highly personal. That that broke me through.

Alex Ferrari 9:12
So it's the opposite of everything that everyone tells you. It's not to write something personal. Like don't get yet don't write a movie about your family that's never going to sell is basically the the advice I've heard 1000 times.

Aaron Mendelsohn 9:24
I know it depends on the family. True. Families are interesting. You know, I have my aunt Dina, let me tell you her stories. No. And Tina's not interesting. You know, your dad coming out of the closet and and marriage, you know, kind of breaking up because of it. That's a little more interesting, although even now, that's passe.

Alex Ferrari 9:47
Yeah, well, I mean, Grace and Frankie alone. I mean, they built the series based on that concept. That's right. And they took the whole thing and added a bunch of a bunch of spice to it. If you as they say, Yeah, but it and that's another thing really interesting to talk about is timing. Because sometimes they're the certain script or certain movies, certain filmmaker all everything has to come together kind of like in this vortex and hit all at the same time for certain projects to go. We're five years earlier 10 years earlier, it doesn't happen as like the script like you were walking around with a script that you remember. I remember what Unforgiven was bouncing around Hollywood for like, 2030 your bodyguard was bouncing around Hollywood for like, 30 years.

Aaron Mendelsohn 10:33
Yeah, well, they're gonna make westerns until finally, you know, Clint Eastwood stepped up and said, you know, hey, I'm the western guy. Let's let's make this Western bodyguard, you know, they had to get Whitney Houston, you know, a big kind of iconic celebrity to do it. So yeah, a lot of it's timing, luck. It's just courage. You know, someone, a producer, a studio has the balls to say, yeah, I'll take a chance with this. It's not it's not a superhero film. It's, you know, a strange social commentary with a black lead in a white liberal neighborhood. And it's a horror film. I'll take a chance on that. And, and then they're surprised when people are like, God, I've really wanted to see that. I've never seen that before. But there's just not a lot of courage in this town. To know that it's, you know, they wanted to have some precedent.

Alex Ferrari 11:28
But isn't, but I mean, even it's, I've said this before, in the show, man, this whole town is run on fear. I mean, the entire town is run on fear, and, and, and mitigating a loss, not gain, taking risks for gains, but mitigating loss. Because if you lose, you lose your job, you lose your reputation. And it's like one, it's like before, I remember back in the even in the 80s, in the 90s, where studios would take multiple swings at the Bat every year with their films, they do 3040 movies that take some risky stuff, they do some study stuff. But now it's like, every single one has to be a homerun or people get fired. Studios might even go down depending on the size of the budget.

Aaron Mendelsohn 12:09
Yeah, it's a shame. It's sort of a Reggie Jackson approach. You know, it's all homeruns are nothing like you said there has to be those. They were happy to have singles and doubles with these kind of lower budgeted dramas, the 70s were filled with film, you know that we're, you know, the conversation and you know, these great blow up and these great taxi driver, taxi driver. I mean, imagine it had you have to turn taxi driver into a superhero or supervillain movie, in order to get it made today and

Alex Ferrari 12:44
what they did they did the job.

Aaron Mendelsohn 12:47
That's the only way they'll do it. If we could put the Joker in it, then maybe we'll give you 20 million bucks to make this film.

Alex Ferrari 12:54
How much was the Joker make? It wasn't that

Aaron Mendelsohn 12:56
Joker was probably 80 or 90.

Alex Ferrari 12:58
Yeah, but that's and that's still pretty low in it. Cuz it's not a it's a character piece. It's not a special effects movie. This

Aaron Mendelsohn 13:04
is the King of Comedy, but with a guy with makeup on his face. And it's funny because Robert De Niro and Scorsese was attached as a producer at one point. So

Alex Ferrari 13:12
it's just it just comes full circle.

Aaron Mendelsohn 13:14
See, you could see what's his name Todd. Who did? He probably said, Okay, guys, I know it seems like an art film. But the reality is this film has been made before and it did well is can you comedy taxi drivers. So you know, and we add the superhero thing. So it's a hit.

Alex Ferrari 13:32
If I get some money, and they made a lot of money with that film.

Aaron Mendelsohn 13:36
A shift out of money was a trick question the other day that said the Joker was the largest the highest grossing R rated film in history worldwide.

Alex Ferrari 13:43
It did it finally did it break that? Indeed, yeah, that's and that says something to Hollywood that we want this kind of storytelling, we want this kind of story to our our are not pG 13 are tough, tough, tough themes. I mean, that's a disturbing Joker's a disturbing film.

Aaron Mendelsohn 14:05
Yeah, it is.

Alex Ferrari 14:05
I mean, it's a disturbing film, and his performance is so just really busy. And I knew this is going to happen here and I knew this was gonna happen. We're just gonna keep going. We digress. Um, so with all of this, we were talking about great Cinema of the past. You have to tell me a little bit about your time at the Criterion Collection sir.

Aaron Mendelsohn 14:25
Criterion Collection was a dream job. So when I was at UCLA, I saw I answered an ad to go work for a company called the voyage.

Alex Ferrari 14:34
composure forge a company major boy

Aaron Mendelsohn 14:38
wager company got I forgot. And they were doing the early days of the Criterion Collection in these movies on LaserDisc they had just come out with Citizen Kane and and did their first few films on LaserDisc and C A, B, or C lb. lb. C. So

Alex Ferrari 14:53
now you see you're talking a completely different language than most people listening. I understood everything you said. So I know What a CSV is, I know what a CSV is. And I also know what a LaserDisc is. So for the kids listening a LaserDisc is imagine a DVD, but the size of a record. And then you would have to flip it. You have to flip it

Aaron Mendelsohn 15:16
as a cat's ass

Alex Ferrari 15:18
is in the shot.

Aaron Mendelsohn 15:20
I'll just do this.

Alex Ferrari 15:24
I don't have the rights to his ass. So if we can move him along, that'd be great.

Aaron Mendelsohn 15:29
I think he popped by the way. He's a punk punk.

Alex Ferrari 15:33
So a laser This is imagine a DVD that's a much bigger, but then the quality is still standard definition. So it's very still, but better than VHS. Bye. Bye, bye miles. But you would have to midway through the movie, get up and flip it. Flip it like a pancake, and then put it back in and continue watching it. Now that on CLV. is now we're doing a LaserDisc tutorial. On CLV you would have lesser quality but more time on the side of the disc. I don't remember what the timing was. I know, on ca beats

Aaron Mendelsohn 16:09
per side.

Alex Ferrari 16:11
I thought I thought ca v was half hour per site. I think you might

Aaron Mendelsohn 16:13
have been an hour out CLB was one hour and ca B also gave you the opportunity to interact more you could you could do more interaction with the CA v LaserDisc. And so the Criterion Collection as you may remember, would always have special edition. You know, a supplemental material at the end of the LaserDisc. So you're not the Civ version of of a 2001 A Space Odyssey which I produced. We had a whole side filled with extra goodies straight from Stanley Kubrick's estate that we added on to the to the end of the film so you can take a real deep dive into the the library materials went into it. Did you speak to Mr. Cooper cuddle?

Alex Ferrari 16:59
Are you in touch contact with

Aaron Mendelsohn 17:01
our my boss did. He was you know he never left England, Brett sent to a new cut though he sent us like a two inch. He did a new transfer for the crew. He was a big fan of the Criterion Collection. So we did a new transfer of his film and fixed a couple of things. And so we got a really pristine, beautiful print on two inch to strike the sounds. I'm not sure that means but

Alex Ferrari 17:30
it was a two inch tape. It was like a mastering tape back in the day. It was in two inches, like you know, pro pro you're at

Aaron Mendelsohn 17:38
now it's probably like 80 inches. But now it's all digital but but the greatest pleasure I had was that I got to produce a special edition laser disruptive graduate which is my favorite film it's and so much fun. We got a second audio track from this UCLA Professor Howard I can't remember his name. But he did this amazing second I Oh, he new film like the back of his hand.

Alex Ferrari 18:04
I got it. I was telling you off off air that the graduate is one of my favorite LaserDisc because when I was in high school, when I saw it, I was collecting criterions back in the day. And it was the first kind of experience to like film theory like real, real film theory. And I mean, he analyzed every frickin frame of that it was just magical to listen. And for people listen, for people that are listening, you have to understand that they think criterion was the one that came up with the concept of director commentary. I don't think it was a director commentary prior to that.

Aaron Mendelsohn 18:43
There may have been one or two special editions here or there. But it really became our whole mudiay. And and the supplemental materials and it really became Criterion Collection became the, you know, kind of dependent while the senate fireplace kind of files. Exactly. And I think they still, you know, they have a criterion channel, they still come out DVDs. So it's but that was really you know, for someone who was in film school at UCLA at the time, it was a dream job. And it taught me a lot about storytelling.

Alex Ferrari 19:15
So yeah, and we could talk about criterion for about another hour, but we will we shall move on. And now I'm going to pitch you a movie. It's about a dog who plays basketball for a high school as I think high school team. Would that pitch work?

Aaron Mendelsohn 19:35
No. That's a terrible idea.

Alex Ferrari 19:40
It's a horrible, horrible, absurd

Aaron Mendelsohn 19:42
it's absurd, silly idea. And by the way, we did pitch it like that we we pitched Air Bud and everyone said That's ridiculous. So we ended up my old writing partner Paul Thomas. He and I SPECT the script for Air Bud and We didn't just, you know, think of this, that that ridiculous idea and then write it and then go find a dog. We met the dog first. Obviously, there, you know, there was a we were with the Broadway Danny Rose of agents. Back then he represented us he represented dogs he represented, you know, one legged bearded ladies got it fair enough.

Alex Ferrari 20:25
So hot, like the operacional got it,

Aaron Mendelsohn 20:27
upper echelon of agents. And so we came in the office one day and and there was buddy, sitting there, and our agents like guide guide, you gotta check out this dog. This dog's remarkable. He's obsessed with balls. We're like, Ah, that doesn't sound like no, no, you gotta. And he started throwing balls at this dog. And, you know, and the dog would, you know, bounce them back to us and catch baseballs and hockey pucks. And he's like, you got to write a movie for this dog. He's David Letterman's favorite, stupid pet trick. And we're like, okay, it's not exactly what we envisioned for ourselves. When we got out of film, school. Writing, we're gonna write taxi driver and stuff.

Alex Ferrari 21:09
And we all are

Aaron Mendelsohn 21:10
obviously, gay, my gay father story. By we saw that this was a pretty remarkable dog when we realized, okay, it's a pretty stupid pet trick really, that this dog can do. We'd be doing halftime shows and stuff like that. But we realized that really, at the core, if we wrote a movie, that's a really a love story between a boy and a dog. And that the reason that the dog plays basketball, is because he realizes the boy loves basketball. And the boy is lonely, he just moved to this new town. While he sees like playing basketball with this boy would actually, you know, awaken this boy and enliven him and and empower him. And then we knew we knew when we had that little post it note of, of kind of what I call the the central idea, which is everything that dog does, he does for the boy, once we knew we had that emotional through line. That Foundation, we knew that we could prop up this move we could build a movie on on this kind of silly gimmick. And, and the movie just kind of flowed from us at that point. And we we wrote it. And but then all the studios passed on the script. They're like, this is ridiculous. You know, dog doesn't play basketball. We're like, well, we have one that does. They cannot be bothered. Yeah, right. Really, you know, talking about courage. This little Canadian production company, Keystone productions had made one or two, like erotic thrillers at the time. skinemax gonna make style match films. They saw the they saw the promise in this film.

Alex Ferrari 22:55
This should be this should be a script on how

Aaron Mendelsohn 23:00
the making of the start off with softcore porn. Yeah, I wouldn't even tell you about the strip club. They took me to when they were shooting this film, because this is a family,

Alex Ferrari 23:11
obviously, obviously, obviously.

Aaron Mendelsohn 23:13
So I resisted existed, you know. So we wrote the Dave love the script. They optioned it. And then they brought on Charlie Martin Smith to direct Charlie Martin Smith, you may remember was an actor in American Graffiti and a lot of other films never cried wolf. He was kind of that Toad toady character.

Alex Ferrari 23:34
Yeah, I remember him.

Aaron Mendelsohn 23:36
So he worked with Carol Ballard. On never cry wolf. Carol Ballard did the Black Stallion. Yes, his most beautiful moving films ever, and a boy in a horse. And so Charlie brought that kind of ethos to the film, kind of a carol Ballard s gentle moving, not a ton of dialogue. I mean, he really kind of like, in our rewrite encouraged us to really kind of make it more moving and more emotional and quiet and more like Old Yeller, and all these films. And so I think that he did a beautiful job of conducting this film directing this film, and making something that you know, we thought was just as kind of little a little silly film, right? And it's kind of become, it's become a thing.

Alex Ferrari 24:25
Oh, no, it's, I mean, I remember when Air Bud came out, and I was like, like anybody else who saw the poster? It's this ridiculous, by the way. Yeah, they're right. Yeah, they're right there. They're behind you. It's really it's a dog play basketball, like double HUBZone play basketball, but also for everyone listening while Disney picked it up to distribute it

Aaron Mendelsohn 24:48
yourself from the grave came out said to them and but we actually we were at AFM in 97 or whatever. After we shot the film. The film was even finished. There was a, a promo reel at Keystone made. And there was a bidding war over the film just based on the promo reel, because they saw the dog was actually doing this and that ends a good film.

Alex Ferrari 25:13
And they bought it so and so Disney bought it at a like hit Disney heard about it at AFM and there's like, No, no, no, we need I mean, it is a Disney film, if you're gonna do it, that's that's a that's a good route to go back then even Disney would never release that a million years today. But again, it's about timing. Right? It's about that Disney plus would release it. But Disney's twice.

Aaron Mendelsohn 25:35
Yeah, it's too small. I mean, it's a $4 million film, it looks like a little tiny character. It sort of has a as a very low budget of vibe to it. But you but they recognize the sweetness of it. They also recognize there was a 10 film franchise in this thing. And they're like, a minute.

Alex Ferrari 25:55
Well, I mean, so you got Air Bud going. So now it gets released. And it does it does fairly well. Yeah, it does. How much it didn't Did you remember how much it made?

Aaron Mendelsohn 26:05
I think it you know, it made like 30 million at the box office, which is not a ton but for $4 million dollar film was great hearing. But on.

Alex Ferrari 26:14
But video It must have just sold

Aaron Mendelsohn 26:18
hundreds of like on DVD outs my house in Studio City I bought from the first residual check I got from the release of the bill.

Alex Ferrari 26:28
Oh, my God. Yeah. Yeah. And I can only imagine so. So how did the town treat you as a screenwriter? Because you're the Air Bud guy now like air bug guy can't he can't write taxi driver? That's just not it? Yeah, right. Taxi Driver. So how did the town treat you what doors opened up, because I always love when I have someone on the show who's had not only success, but phenomenal success in a in a small in a way in an area of our business. You know, I'm always fascinated to see how that took you to the next place or what opportunities presented itself or how the town treat you. Because a lot of times there's this, this kind of myth of like, Oh, they just must have just pulled up the truck and just dumped money on him. And he could do whatever he wants. I'm like, man, something.

Aaron Mendelsohn 27:15
It's an interesting line, you know, writing a film that was very specific like that, and very, very genre sub genre like that. It did open up some opportunities. My partner and I sold a couple of pitches. After that we were hired on a couple of things. They're always family films, you know, so we definitely got pigeon holed family comedy, that kind of thing. But we also, you know, because Air Bud was so so narrow that it wasn't like we were suddenly on the a list. It was very small bucket. However, what's happened since is that ever since is that whenever we would try to or I we broke up a couple years later, and I went off on my own. Whenever I tried to do something, which is really my forte, which is character driven drama. They're like they look at 13 films on my you know, I get credit on all the Air Bud movies, I only wrote the first two. But they see this huge IMDB page filled with Air Bud credits, and then a couple of other family films that I've done. And they don't believe that I can do drama. Right. So I've had to try to reinvent myself by specking Drama scripts drama pilots to really to show and prove that I'm more than just kind of a one. A one trick dog.

Alex Ferrari 28:36
As like you said that that franchise went on to spawn with 12 other movies don't sequels? I think, because my daughters have seen all of them. I'm sure. It's the space buddies, the spooky buddies, the treasure buddies, the and I can imagine, I can imagine they're just sitting around because I know you don't have anything to do with these. So but I'm sure there's some executive somewhere sitting around like Alright, what can we do? It's got a bunch of puppies and put them on a treasure hunt. Oh, then now they're in a haunted house. Oh, now

Aaron Mendelsohn 29:07
let's put them in space. Yeah, sure.

Alex Ferrari 29:09
Like a superhero. There was a superhero one too. I mean, they all got superpowers as dogs like it. And they talk now where Air Bud didn't talk. No other dogs.

Aaron Mendelsohn 29:20
It's become something of a twisted. There. There are a lot of negative words I can say. But at the same time. They you know, they would send us a check every year when they would make these things so I can't complain. You know, we originally envisioned maybe three buddy films because the original dog, the trilogy, basketball trilogy, he could play basketball, which was remarkable. He could play football, which became the second film because he could catch these huge spirals. He also could play soccer. So we envisioned three maybe four because of hockey and you know, volleyball. I

Alex Ferrari 29:55
mean, maybe Yeah,

Aaron Mendelsohn 29:56
well they did. I think they ended up doing volleyball. You know, I mean, we I envisioned at least it's sort of staying within sports and we wanted to stay real, where it really felt like this was a dog and a human world. And, you know, but then eventually, the sports movie started running out of steam and the Keystone people came up with the quite brilliant idea to base it on the puppies. And those puppy videos made a fortune. They made a fortune they just kept they make them for like, you know, three or $4 million every year. And they would sell like hotcakes. And because kids love they're talking puppies.

Alex Ferrari 30:32
I mean, it's it's talking puppies. I mean, it's not a it's it's not hard. Like, I always tell people like if you want to write you want to make a successful movie, have a dog save Christmas, like that's, yeah, you got a dog saving Christmas. You're good.

Aaron Mendelsohn 30:48
When you should say that.

Alex Ferrari 30:50
Because my next film, sir, is about talking puppies who save Christmas. And I think that's already been done.

Aaron Mendelsohn 30:55
They're fully grown dogs. But they do say Christmas. Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 31:00
So what I'm hearing from you is that you're very upset that these This company has not taken the true essence of what you had in mind the seriousness of what art is the art of the basketball, playing dog in the original film and have bastardized it for money.

Aaron Mendelsohn 31:18
For money, of all things. I mean, we saw Hollywood by business, we went into the earbud business for the art of it for the artistry. And, you know, we wanted to make the Joker of of dog

Alex Ferrari 31:34
of basketball playing dog movies. Alright. And

Aaron Mendelsohn 31:36
he went off to make the Green Lantern. You know,

Alex Ferrari 31:39
I mean, the the horror, sir, the horror. And I'm assuming that you're so again, you're so upset about this, that every time they send you that residual check, you just rip it up.

Aaron Mendelsohn 31:49
I just give it to charity. Give it to dog rescue. Yes.

Alex Ferrari 31:54
Fair enough. Fair enough. So it's very interesting, very interesting. The whole Air Bud saga

Aaron Mendelsohn 32:01
in its you know, you mentioned the I I teach. I teach a couple of classes at Loyola Marymount, I've been teaching there for a few years and a big conversation we always have is do you brand yourself as a certain kind of writer? Or do you follow your Muse because you may want to write a whole bunch of different things. And it really is a dilemma. Because if you do brand yourself, you actually can be at the top of or you can be on the lists, as you know, like Zack Penn, very early on branded himself as a great action writer, action adventure kind of writer. And he's formulated a tremendous successful career out of this, you look at Jordan Peele and these other guys that are, you know, are kind of sticking in their lane in terms of the kind of things they write and they have a lot of success. But as writers, we often you know, we want to write different things. But then the problem is then the town doesn't know what kind of writer you are. So here I am the earbud guy, they're like, Oh, we bought a dog I get approached with every dog movie Lassie, you know, Rin Tin, tin, every dog movie, or TV show comes my way, which is great. However, I'm really interested in writing, you know, more like the taxi driver. I'm really interested in true stories. So it's, it is hard. It's a bit of a dilemma. I almost feel like, because I did fall on my muse into independent film. Shortly after I did Air Bud. I went off to Florida and shot of our rated independent character drama. And it did nothing for my career. It set me back. It's a matter of fact, right? Because I came back and they're like, wait, aren't you the Arab guy? What is this?

Alex Ferrari 33:48
Well, this is very interesting conversation because the town in general, they need to put you in a box that they can't comprehend someone who's multifaceted that could do multiple kinds of storytelling. I mean, we all don't have the privilege of of Tarantino's career, who jumps genre and does whatever the hell he wants. But that's a that's an anomaly. He's an anomaly in the writing space. Sorkin even Sorkin stays kind of in his lane?

Aaron Mendelsohn 34:14
Yeah. Well, even you know, Tarantino stylistically, the style of writing his films is kind of the same. You could say the same thing about Shane Black, Shane Black or a Wes Anderson. You know, a lot of these guys they do move around into different genres, but the style is the same. But this town does want to put you in a box, then that's so so the question is do you like like your students saying,

Alex Ferrari 34:42
Do you brand yourself because like, when you were saying you like I got niched, down to this little bucket. I but when you were saying that in my mind, I'm like, Yeah, but you were at the top of that bucket. Middle, middle button. No, but the point is like every dog movie in the dog, dog family little space, which is like a niche of a niche of a niche of a niche. You're the top dog, oh guy had to say it Oh, so bad. But you're but you, but you're, you know, you're getting those phone calls. So as a working writer, it is it is a good thing to kind of niche yourself down and create this kind of brand for yourself. But as a creator, you might want to go out somewhere and do other things. Has there ever been in in Hollywood? I know there has to have been, but there's been like a, you know, let's say you know that the Air Bud guy, which is you, decides to write taxi driver, but sends it out under a pseudonym. And then it gets a whole lot of heat. And then who is this? Who is this writer, and then your agents like nice. He's like very Charlie Kaufman style you He doesn't even want to talk to anybody. And they're like, and that just builds up the hype even more to the point where they're spending millions of dollars. But who's the guy? I'm like, I can't tell you. I can't tell you. He's my client. client privilege. I can't Can you imagine you should do that?

Aaron Mendelsohn 36:01
I'm saying that's a brilliant idea. I should have done that. I should have done that. Yeah, I still can. That's right.

Alex Ferrari 36:09
Absolutely could because by the time that they've already sent you the checkout Oh, here we're gonna give this guy $2 million. For this this script. We need to know who he is. And like after the check clears, we'll tell you who he

Aaron Mendelsohn 36:21
review it

Alex Ferrari 36:22
will reveal. So imagine if they've got you've got Shawshank Redemption in their hands that they just bought. And they're like, well, who wrote is like what's the airbag guy? What? The reveal

Aaron Mendelsohn 36:34
blood draining from their faces. What have we done?

Alex Ferrari 36:39
It was like when Peter Jackson got Where? What's this guy that I use when I used to run on new new line. He hired Peter Jackson off the pitch for the Lord of the Rings films. And Peter had done The Frighteners and a couple other films. Suddenly Creek and heavenly which was a fantastic film Heavenly Creatures and and and Frighteners, which is also great. But look, he's not Cameron. I mean, he didn't have a snuff. Spielberg didn't have a history of like, massive films. And then they saw one of his first films, I forgot the name of it, but it's like this really bad. I think it's called Bad, something bad. It's literally called something bad, or like, the word and then Bad, bad, bad taste. I think it's called bad taste. And it's like this. corpsman style heads exploding horror, comedy ish thing, like really bad. And then they said, Oh my god, we've just given this guy $200 million dollars. Like, what are we doing?

Aaron Mendelsohn 37:44
Well, and that's a shame because that was early on in his career. Right. It was a certain type of film. Yeah, they, you know, he proven himself since and but yet,

Alex Ferrari 37:53
they they still scared. They were still scared. Fear here. Like you said, fear, fear, fear fear. So let's talk about your book. You have a book called the 11. fundament? Well, first of all, it's it's called the 11. fundamental

Aaron Mendelsohn 38:08
questions, questions, questions, a guide to a better screenplay. Right? So

Alex Ferrari 38:13
what, um, so let's talk about that. What are these questions, and you have to give you the whole kit and caboodle away now,

Aaron Mendelsohn 38:19
but you have to buy the book,

Alex Ferrari 38:21
obviously, but let's talk about a couple of questions.

Aaron Mendelsohn 38:24
Well, first, you know, the, the inspiration for the book, I've, I've had a story breaking technique for probably 15 years now. Where I would ask myself, a series of questions that were meant is kind of like a stress test, to test the story, the storytelling, and, and then I started teaching that technique in seminars. And then people started saying you should you should put it into a book. And so finally, I wrote a book, it was actually 10 questions, initially, and then Billy Ray, who, who I sat on the board of directors of the Writers Guild with for many years is a fellow Bruin, like me. He suggested in 11th question, which became question number three. And so I added that because you know, when Billy Ray suggests things, you just you

Alex Ferrari 39:21
I'm telling you 10 fundamental questions doesn't work as well as 11. There are actual there is science behind the number 11. The number seven and the number nine, on on the psychology of like, if you if you ever looking you'll never see a top four. List.

Aaron Mendelsohn 39:39
Yeah, never.

Alex Ferrari 39:40
You'll never see a top four, you'll see a top five, you'll see a top 10 and maybe a top three, maybe, but never like a top six or eight. But you will see a top but you will see a top seven every once in a while. Yeah, what are the seven best or something like that? So there's something to do. would not like if you said 12 fundamental questions, doesn't it doesn't ring. Oh, isn't

Aaron Mendelsohn 40:05
it? It's weird, right? It's weird. And 11 I get to say that my book goes to 11

Alex Ferrari 40:12
are all for all those Spinal Tap fans out there?

Aaron Mendelsohn 40:17
You know, it's funny as another digression speaking of those numbers, one of the things I did at the Writers Guild was start the 101 best screenplays greatest screenplays list. That was a project of mine. And we got the, you know, the membership of the Writers Guild west and east to vote on it. And we decided it should be 100. But really, no, it's still 100. Why? Because that's kind of interesting. It's like what just missed? Well, let's add that to the list. But what? So interestingly, when we did the 101 funniest screenplays list, and had it voted on, you know, we have had the votes come in from you know, our 10,000 members. I swear to god number 11. On the funniest screenplays list was no,

Alex Ferrari 41:01
no, no,

Aaron Mendelsohn 41:03
we did not make it happened. It landed on number 11. It was so perfect. And everyone thought, Oh, this is rigged. You rigged it like no, it was number 11 I swear to God. And you know, the

Alex Ferrari 41:14
funny thing is with that movie, I saw the other day that I saw, it was flying by my feet or I saw Rob Reiner. Come on. He's like, Yeah, when the movie first came out, people were like, why did you make this movie about this horrible band? Like this is Cisco like, these guys are horrible. Like they truly thought it was a documentary. Like they had no understanding that it was a mockumentary. That's the success. You've like Blair Witch like it, you you hit it, you've hit you've hit exactly the the bullseye of that.

Aaron Mendelsohn 41:42
The dog show people are like, you know, I thought you were funny. You were doing a very straight documentary on dogs show people.

Alex Ferrari 41:51
Exactly. No. So. So let's take the top three, the top three questions you would like to discuss in out of your 11? What would be?

Aaron Mendelsohn 42:00
Well, the first question is seems like the easiest and most obvious, but it's actually really important. The first question is, what is my story about? And what's interesting about that one, is it it forces the writer to distill their story into I have it broken down into one sentence, and then a four sentence log line. And you'd be surprised at how hard it is for us. We writers we, for we us writers, to often distill our stories into a simple into like a simple one sentence log line that tells the story and that often tells us that our story is too complicated or it's unformed. So like I have an example here of what I think is a really good one sentence log line. You'll you'll figure out the movie here real quick. Hold on. Let me find it.

a good hearted but insecure king who suffers from a debilitating stutter? It's worse to work with an eccentric speech therapist to deliver the speech that will save his kingdom

Alex Ferrari 43:19
print. It's clear as day that's a wonderful logline for obviously, that's air but to actually think it was air but to the electric air but to the Electric Boogaloo.

Aaron Mendelsohn 43:30
What's good about that logline is not only describes the central character, his best his best attribute as well as his fatal flaw, which by the way is not his stutter, but is actually his insecurity. The his stutter is an antagonistic force, we get the context, he's a king, and is forced to work with an eccentric speech therapist that tells us really the whole spine of the film, the whole second act of the film is him having to work with an eccentric speech therapist, we know there's conflict there because he's eccentric. And this king is insecure to deliver the speech that will save his kingdom is the third act climax of the film. It's also the stakes of the film. So all of those really, key story elements are baked into that one sentence. And if you can't do that, with your film, you may have a film or a story that's overly complicated. So I always start there. I do a one sentence log line, and then I'll do a four sentence log line.

Alex Ferrari 44:31
Yeah, and that's one thing I found even when I did my writing, and I've in all the scripts of stuff of groups that I've read over the years is that sometimes writers, they the stories, they think they're so cool, and they're so complex, that it's not about being the most complex script. It's about being the simplest getting the message across because you have 90 minutes you have 90 pages to tell. You've got this much to do. That's right. And that's it. And

Aaron Mendelsohn 45:02
you can have a really complicated story. But there has to be going back to Billy Ray, he likes to say, what is the simple emotional journey? What is the simple, which is goes to your point? It can't be the basic story can be an emotional journey, what's the emotional element that's going to really hook your audience? You notice, even in some of the best action films, there's always this emotional undercurrent of family. It's about brothers. It's a mother, daughter of you know, or father daughter story of my cats knocking my computer on. There's always some kind of, you know, it's a family, like, you know, in the Fast and Furious movies, there's always an emotional story that winds through what could be the biggest twist is Mission Impossible movie ever. So what is the simple emotional journey is another good way of sort of summing up question number one, which is, what is your story about? So that's an important one, I would say. Question four, which is kind of two questions is very important. I'm just looking at it here to get it right. Who is the central character? And what is their conscious and unconscious desire? So obviously, who is the central character? It's good to really kind of hone in on is this a, you know, who's who's the one who is really the hero of the story that that has the biggest art? Or is it a two hander? Or is it not humble, but more importantly, what is their unconscious, their conscious and unconscious desire. And this is something after studying many, many films, that that really kind of formulated in my mind, invariably, your character, your heroes, sets out with a want a conscious desire, I want this, I need this money, because I'm broken, they're gonna break my legs, if I don't pay off the debt, or I'm in love with this girl, or, you know, they want something, their conscious desire, they go on a journey to get it, they have a flaw that's inhibiting them from a fatal flaw, which is another question that's inhibiting them from being able to get to it. You know, they're fearful, they're insecure, they're greedy, they're whatever they are, or they're even too Noble. However, during the course of the film, they often start to see that there's something else that they really want an unconscious desire. And so then you get that tension between what they thought they wanted, and what they discovered that they really want. So if like in the matrix, if Neo, where he really wants at the beginning of the film is just find out the truth about the matrix. Find out the truth about the matrix. But he never imagined in a million years that he would have anything to do with his unconscious desire, which is to be the one to acknowledge that he's the one. And you know, and bring down the matrix. He is so far from that at the beginning of the film. He just wants to know the truth. He's a cog. And his fatal flaw is his belief that all he is, is really a cog in the machine that he is too weak of a human to be the one. And so are you low point of the film, which is when he says to the, the Oracle, I am not the one because he's given into his fatal flaw.

Alex Ferrari 48:28
Right now. I want to I want to take a character and put this on to the test a character we all know. And I'd love you to analyze Rocky. So, okay, so Rocky, we all have seen Rocky, it's one of the most enduring characters of all time as the 150 movies. He's catching up to Air Bud in the amount of sequels. But Stallone is getting up there. So I don't know how many more of these we can.

Aaron Mendelsohn 48:56
Well, yeah, he's had puppies and Apollo Creed had puppies. Right? Exactly. Oh, it's kind of the same. They've stole our thunder.

Alex Ferrari 49:06
Oh, sure. That's exactly what's the load thought when he was making the next ones. Alright, so Rocky, so what is his his external goal? And what's his subconscious goal? Yeah. So

Aaron Mendelsohn 49:17
there are some movies where you have a noble character, a character who does have a noble conscious desire, but it's an impossible journey. So I always say either you have a character who is flawed and they have kind of this conscious desire, which is a selfish desire. But then along the way, they kind of fix themselves and find a selfless desire that that we as an audience want them to attain. However, there are movies like Rocky, where you have a character who does have a noble conscious desire, he wants to be taken seriously as a boxer. He wants to be taken seriously as a boxer. He really feels like that. He He's contender he's he should be taken seriously and no one's taking him seriously. That is a noble conscious desire. However, in his case, he has an impossible journey. He has an impossible journey where the entire world is basically against him achieving his conscious desire, which is to be taken seriously. In this case, the you know, inciting incident is that he gets plucked, he gets plucked by God to, to fight in this championship fight, but it's a gimmick. You know,

Alex Ferrari 50:33
right. And he and he turns and he completely turns it down. Yeah, he sees he knows he's like, No, no, no, this is I'm gonna get my ass killed. I'm not ready for you, champ.

Aaron Mendelsohn 50:43
Right. So that's a that's a case where he actually, you know, he's a reluctant hero. He saw something that an opportunity that was brought to him, but he knew at that place in the movie, in the first act of the film, he's in no place, no condition to be able to go after that particular golden ring. But then with the, you know, the encouragement of this, of his brother in law, and this girl, you know, when Mickey, his old trainer, you know, people who used to believe in Him or the girl down the block, who has Ryan, you, usually it's love, it's family that sort of encourages the hero to overcome their trepidation, and go on the journey. And so he does. And he's able to actually achieve even though he doesn't when he achieves his conscious desire, which is to be very much taken seriously, as a fighter. By the end of the film, he also achieved something of an emotional goal, which is he finds love, which is a nice again, whether Stallone knew about great storytelling, or he just kind of instinctually stumbled into it. He had this great plot, which is the boxing plot, and the training to become a fighter plot. But he also had this wonderful couple of emotional subplots, one involving Adrian, one involving Adrian's brother, another one involving Mickey, he was kind of the Father mentor figure. And it created this emotional journey that was under the boxing journey. And, you know, but that's, that's one where the conscious desire actually is the same as the unconscious desire, but the journey that is the impossible

Alex Ferrari 52:26
journey, and the vignettes. And I think that that little vein that he tapped into, with the emotion of Rocky, because prior to Rocky, there were some boxing movies. But nothing, nothing of that stat of that. Not winning the Oscar and all that kind of stuff. But to sustain that character, who is absolutely loved throughout the world and made but he made six rocky movies and to Apollo Creed movie a Korean movies. And yet, we're still on that journey. And we're actually going on that journey with him as he ages. And he's not hiding it anymore. He did I think in five I think he I think well, five. We just went from Florida to six. Let's just yeah, we'll

Aaron Mendelsohn 53:18
forget five we'll forget five thanks, man for Yeah,

Alex Ferrari 53:22
yeah, the quest for peace, obviously. But But there's something about that character. And I think you're right. It's not just the boxing, because if it's just about boxing, who cares? Like if it's just about a dude wanting it because you can only see that movie. So many times about him going to get the championship or losing the champion. Like there's only so many of those stories you can do. But it's that emotion. It's Adrian. It's it's Mickey like when Mickey was spoiler alert when Mickey got killed in Rocky three. Or when Apollo, you know that that emotion is what kept kept going. Because it's not about you know, it's not about boxing, kind of like Air Bud is not about a dog who plays basketball.

Aaron Mendelsohn 54:02
actly Exactly. And the word the films that fail are the ones that lean too heavily on their main plot, which is usually kind of an intellectual exercise, whether it's an action film or you know, that kind of three thing it's it's the films that really go back and forth between or really more more effectively unite the emotional plot with the main sort of intellectual plot and have them bump into each other and we see how you know Rocky's pursuit of the of the crown is filtering into his relationships with Adrian and Mickey and, and Bert. His name was not bird but bird, brother.

Alex Ferrari 54:45
Yeah, I know. Oh, my God. It's gonna drive me nuts. Now I can't believe I can't remember what his

Aaron Mendelsohn 54:51
was an Italian name. Was it like, Saul? No,

Alex Ferrari 54:55
no. Okay, hold on. Okay, keep while while you're while you're Discussing the next, the last question, we will go over in this episode

Aaron Mendelsohn 55:04
I will look at. Okay, so I'm gonna say that, although now you're distracted, so

Alex Ferrari 55:09
I'm not gonna know. But the audience is listening.

Aaron Mendelsohn 55:13
Oh, good. I think you'll ask questions that have nothing to do with the thing I'm saying. You will look it up the third. I'm gonna go back to question three and this is actually the

Alex Ferrari 55:24
poly poly poly, sir. Let's move on. Let's now we can move on properly, sir, it's polyphonic.

Aaron Mendelsohn 55:32
These are the important things. Yes, exactly.

Alex Ferrari 55:35
And third of the of the 11 questions you would like to discuss.

Aaron Mendelsohn 55:39
Okay, so the third of the 11 questions I'd like to discuss is actually question number three. A lot of my initial questions in the 11 questions are kind of foundational first act backstory kind of questions. And then you know, the later ones address low points and all that stuff. This question number three is the one that Billy Ray suggested to me, which is what is the central idea? So this is an important one because it's not to be confused with the logline is different from the logline. The central idea, as I say, in my book is the overarching notion or a theme that drives the story forward and is tested in every scene. It's it's like the thesis of your story. Okay. So, and the question that it poses is often finally addressed by the critical test at the end of the story. So an example might be well, When Harry Met Sally is interesting, because Nora Ephron I'm pretty convinced thought of this central idea. before she even came up or wrote the script, which is can men and women be friends without getting in the way, that thesis, so she's like, I want to test that thesis. And so she, you know, introduces this woman who's coming off to this relationship, and this man who just seems to be it's all about getting laid, and he throws them together, where they form, they start to form this friendship. That's this awkward friendship that starts to really grow over the course of the second act. But as it grows, there starts to become this sexual tension between them. And we, as an audience start to wonder and worry, are they we want them to hook up. And yet, we're worried that if they do, run it, it'll ruin it. And in fact, you get the low point of the film that wonderful shot after they've been in bed together. And you start on Sally, and she's smiling, you know, because she's happy. And she thinks that you know, and then you pull out you see Billy Crystal with this look of horror. So in that respect, is central the question posed by the central idea? Can men and women be friends without sex getting in the way? The answer is no.

Alex Ferrari 57:47
According to Nora, sir, according to Nora,

Aaron Mendelsohn 57:49
according to Nora, but however they work it out, because you know what they do by Act Three, they go back to the foundation of their friendship and realize that actually, what makes a relationship so successful is having a foundation of friendship. So in a way, they turned that fatal flaw, they turn that, that tension into actually something that made them grow as human beings, and able to come together and have a permanent relationship. So that's a key if you can turn the low point into what I call critical test, which is then drawing from your failure and realizing what you need to do to overcome your fatal flaw. And actually, you know, self actualized as a character, in that case, Harry and Sally needed to realize that, oh, we can actually combine the two are the friendship that we formulated over several months is actually the key to having a successful relationship. Once you're able to acknowledge that rather than run the other direction. That's when they were able to come together and have a you know, successful climax as it were.

Alex Ferrari 58:55
And anyone anyone listening to this as has not has thought of even thinking about writing a romantic comedy has not watched When Harry Met Sally, shame on you and stop listening to this right now and go watch it. I mean, Jesus,

Aaron Mendelsohn 59:07
When Harry Met Sally was I think, if not the highest one of the highest rated ranked films in the 101 funniest screenplays list exceptional script by Norris.

Alex Ferrari 59:18
And I mean, I'm assuming I think any Hall is any one. Yeah, that's it. It honestly should be I mean, it is a masterpiece.

Aaron Mendelsohn 59:31
masterpiece. It's

Alex Ferrari 59:33
a masterpiece.

Aaron Mendelsohn 59:34
What one thinks of Woody Allen aside that at all is a is truly was a was a masterful film. And I guess that would be that would be considered romantic comedy, too. Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 59:47
I mean, they are absolutely I mean, it's just with with his his wonderful writing. in it. I always I always put up certain films of a certain time period in my life, if they were really good. Good, because if I watched something from 1988 to 9394, which is my video store years, my high school years, where I thought john Claude Van Damme was the greatest actor of all time and Steven Seagal should have won an Oscar in that time period of my life. If I watched a movie like and I remember vividly watching Annie Hall like God, that was good. You know? And and watching Shawshank Jesus, that was good, you know, and it didn't have anyone you know, breaking a leg. It was amazing. That's just amazing story and When Harry Met Sally, obviously, and that's just amazing, really well crafted story. And like we were talking about King's speech earlier. You know, on paper. I don't want to watch a movie about a prince who's got a stutter. Yeah, he's gonna and he's gonna learn he's gonna have this guy teach him how to speak for a speech like that. That's That does not sound good. But you watch it did when the one best picture that year as Picture and Best Screenplay for David Seidler and that was a spec script that that no one would take a chance on.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:01:04
It he he likes literally stuck it in in either the actor's mailbox or the director's mailbox. Got it to you know, because no one had read it didn't have an agent. But he believed and it was because even though it seemed like a ridiculous idea, there was such a strong emotional story underneath it and so much at stake for delivering this speech. And you know, and it was a family his story of two guys that become sort of brothers and you know, a relationship story and his family and he was in the shadow of his of his brother who abdicated who was supposed to be the king. And he was never supposed to be the king. If you if you

Alex Ferrari 1:01:43
as a screenwriter can connect emotionally. Genre goes out the window. Like the main plot almost a lot of times but I'm like, if you can connect with the audience, on an emotional level, all the addressing of plot and structure and character. I mean, obviously all that's needed to connect emotionally without it you can't. But like, I mean, I've seen it look of sometimes I've watched a movie with my daughters and it's like something on Disney plus or something, you know, like it's something that I would have never in a million years watched by myself. And but they have this little nugget just to slip in. It's not it's not King speech. It's not going to be something that's long it's not a meal, it's a snack, but that little snack of emotion holds me just a little bit and it just goes you know that got me just and it might just be me because it was a daughter story or, or something that happened to me in my past that connected with me, but it connects when it connects even on these like like lifetime like look at lifetime I mean and Hallmark. I mean, they made a living at doing nugget, nugget, I'm coining a phrase nugget screenwriting sir nugget emotional nugget screenwriting but it's but it's true like if you can connect emotionally how many people watched earbud and cried, cried, cried balled because of the dog just because of the dog and the boy relationship which is completely fabricated because that's obviously a dog doesn't think this way. This is the suspense of disbelief here. But emotionally like I remember watching what's Marlene? Me? Oh, Jesus. Oh, two killer. Oh,

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:03:31
cried Marley and me and dad. The film in the with the dog waiting at the train station.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:41
Oh, oh, Hidalgo or something like that? height. Yeah, that one. Archie.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:03:50
Kids to this day make fun of me because I had to leave the room.

Alex Ferrari 1:03:55
Right now in the grand scope of things. Hitachi. I've seen that

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:04:00
film. And it's all different things. Archie,

Alex Ferrari 1:04:03
Hachi, Hachi. Hachi, Hachi. But I saw that film. And I had similar feelings towards that film, there might have been a tear to the busted through my eyeball at that time. But in the grand scheme of cinema, not something that's on the list. Or that story, not an important story, not something that's studied. But when you watch it if you've had a dog, connect, and that's what that's why that's why the dog that saves Christmas movie, or the dog that does anything kind of movie. If you can connect to the emotion of having a dog anybody who's ever had a dog will connect to emotionally

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:04:46
even if it's a project, so much purity to our dogs, so much purity, their motives, their loyalty, their love is so pure, that we project all these kind of human qualities on onto them. So when they're distressed or when they're going off after some, you know, impossible quest or whatever it is, we get pulled in emotionally. But it's the same with brothers, sisters, fathers, children, whales,

Alex Ferrari 1:05:14
Free Willy wait. Free Willies were there there was like five of those.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:05:22
I don't really well you know, but again it goes to the best friend the whale is the best friend that hits emotional. Og is the best friend. It's all about these emotional connections. And this is why when my students, they turn in their scripts, and they're really the, you know, complex action or horror or comedy silly comedies. You know, they're just so I'm like, I read three pages, and I'm zoning out because there's nothing pulling me in. And I just drill into them. Every day, every class, you've got to insert them even in the silliest comedy scariest horror film, you have to insert these emotional elements, family elements, friends, mentors, Dumb and Dumber

Alex Ferrari 1:06:05
got Dumb and Dumber, like the original Dumb and Dumber? absolutely absurd. Like it's absurd. absurd. The whole the humor is absurd. I love it. By the way, it's crazy. But there's so much emotion and purity to their not only their friendship, but their journey because he wants to, he saw this girl and like you're saying there's a chance and that that's what drives the story. But there's emotion.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:06:30
It's not just two dudes just walking around doing fart jokes all day. Right? And it'll go emotional and their relationship is emotional. Right? So it's, you know, so a lot of times, but going back to the question, what is the central idea? A lot of times, what I'll do is try to think about the arc of the character and the emotional journey of the character and bake it into the central idea. So for instance, the matrix, which is a very heady, but it really is about self discovery. And certainly ultimately Love is the thing that convinces him that he is the one, you know, because she's whispering in his ear. Right? I knew that up because I said, you know, the Oracle.

Alex Ferrari 1:07:13
That's not a very good impression of Carrie and masum. Just say,

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:07:18
I feel much better. Larry Fishburne the Exactly.

Alex Ferrari 1:07:23
Neo Neo, exactly.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:07:26
So the central idea for for the matrix is Neo can only get over his sense of being a cog in the wheel. And accepted he should be the one is when he accepts that he is the one when he believes that he's the one. So if you think of the shape of like the ark of Neo over that film, he wants to know what what the matrix is he wants to know the truth. After he learns the truth, he's kind of happy to be a foot soldier in, in morbius, his little army, but God forbid, he doesn't want the responsibility on his shoulders, he's resisting, he still believes he's a cog. Hmm. Like we all kind of do that we're powerless. It's only when he gets over his belief that he's a cog, and believes that he is the one when he is able to to be the one. And that is really the central idea of the film. And it really that notion is tested in almost every scene in the movie in one way or the other, that thesis neocon only one when he believes he's the one is tested in every scene in the movie in some form or another. So that's why it's really important to have a central idea, because what it does is create something of an emotional spine that ties your story together. Otherwise, you might have something that kind of meanders, or feels episodic, and and isn't cohesive.

Alex Ferrari 1:08:55
And that's why that film, and that franchise, specifically that film, though, has has aged so well. And people look at it as it's a masterpiece, it really is truly a masterpiece of its time. There's a lot of films that came out in that era that were visual effects, heavy an action and all that stuff. But we don't speak about that. But because they're not held at the same level as the matrix is why because of that emotion, that that because at a little philosophical here, we all have to once we believe we can do we do you know,

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:09:33
is it a movie about faith? It is not fake,

Alex Ferrari 1:09:37
right? And generally in our industry as a whole and I'm really going to go deep here. We won't achieve what we want to achieve until we believe we can achieve it. And if that's the starting point, like if you can't believe you're going to write a screenplay. You're not going to write a screenplay. As like as Henry Ford was at Henry Ford. I think he said like, if you believe that you can or you can't. You're right.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:09:59
Okay,

Alex Ferrari 1:10:01
I mean, if that's your absolute if you really can't or you really can't, you're right. So it's up to you to believe to move forward. I do want to ask one more question. Before I ask you my series of questions asked all my guests, because we could talk for hours. I know. Can we put it? Can we put the test to the three questions we've just talked about? to one film that I'm I'm just beating it up in my head. And I haven't seen in a while and actually have to watch it again. Are you ready? You ready? See, we could test this one. All right. airplane. Airplane airplane. So yes, so

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:10:34
I remember it. You tell me what what is the emotion simple emotional journey of airplane?

Alex Ferrari 1:10:42
Well, obviously to survive the plane. It Well, I mean, there's that there's that the plot, the plot is the land. But if I remember, it happened again, I haven't seen it probably in like 10 years, other than like, in a sitting, I've seen clips of it over over the last 10 years. But if I remember correctly, the main character, who was the pilot, there was an emotional, there was some sort of emotional attachment to the stewardess. Stewardess, flight attendant, sorry, they call their students back then a flight attendant. And there was that kind of there was something drawing those two together. And there was a love story at the end of the day, if I'm not if I just remember all the funny parts. I don't.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:11:21
Because it's funny. If you remember the Robert, what's his name? Robert. Robert Hayes. Yeah. He was a broken broken guy with a drinking problem. You know? Yeah, he drink frozen his eye. He had a drinking problem because he led a mission. Yes, yes. George zipper or whatever. crash. Right. So it was funny, but at the same time, it's it's a true emotional thing. He led a failed journey as a pilot. He people died under his watch. It's led to him having a broken kind of life, where he could love or be loved. And he is stuck on this plane and he gets pulled reluctantly into the pilot's seat and he's able to do it by virtue of Julie Haggerty. She's kind of see love for him.

Alex Ferrari 1:12:12
Yeah. Oh, now I remember at night I thought y'all came coming back. But that's right. So you so that's the driving force of it. I mean, the movie is remembered because it's just so damn funny.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:12:25
It's still add an emotional story. But

Alex Ferrari 1:12:29
But without but listen again without that emotion. You don't the story can't move. The reason it's just a bunch of gangs. It just then it just gets comedy at that point. You know what sketch comedy get out after one sketch comedy kit and there's no emotional throughput or line or foundation. So I just wanted to bring our planet because it's a it's a unique because that's a slapstick comedy. And well, yeah, this

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:12:54
is why those those slapstick spoofs and you know, the scary movies and things they get God's word most of them get terrible reviews, a lot of them fail. They have to be under 90 minutes because they just cannot sustain airplane is kind of considered a classic because not only are they Is it funny as hell and the jokes really work and most of them some of them some of them wouldn't play so well today

Alex Ferrari 1:13:22
right well Blazing Saddles the same thing I mean Jesus I doubt right

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:13:27
but they had but even blazing trails to there's no strong optional there Oh, root interest in that we it's a friendship between a broken you know, shooter who was shot you know, Gene Wilder and cleavon little who's a a hero who happens to be black at a time where you cannot be a hero and a black and black right so and they formed this friendship this this was love story between these two guys suck you rooting for them? All right.

Alex Ferrari 1:13:57
I'm just I'm play as we're talking a playing back scenes in my head. I'm just laughing because I mean Blazing Saddles. Just Oh, my God is so good.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:14:06
It's, it's I'm not sure if Blazing Saddles would work today or not. But it's, you know, time racing racist film.

Alex Ferrari 1:14:14
No, Mel actually talked about that he did the Hitler like, was that Hitler movie?

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:14:22
This is

Alex Ferrari 1:14:23
not silent movie. But the. Yeah. History of the World. Part Two. Yeah. Then well, history the world Part Two had like, Hitler, one of the producers, the

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:14:36
producers, for God's sakes. It's a producer's one of the greatest

Alex Ferrari 1:14:39
I mean, it's a it's about a play. Yeah. So but I actually I actually just saw a recent interview with Mel. Mel Brooks, the writer of Blazing Saddles, who said that it is today It wouldn't get produced. There's no way a studio It would produce that from today. But if you look at it, it is an it's an anti racist. It's completely making fun of it. And you when you make fun of things like that those image, that imagery, that that kind of toxic stuff that they're talking about, it just brings them down, it takes them off their pedestal. And I can't learn like I you know, obviously like, you know, springtime for Hitler. I mean, he destroyed him. Chaplin did it. Chaplin did it as well in the in the dictator and the Great Dictator. So there is a there's a place for that. Now will offend people, obviously it's gonna offend somebody because that's the world we live in. But, again, Aaron, we could talk for at least another two hours about story and this is fantastic. I love this interview. I'm gonna ask you a few questions. I asked all my guests. What are three screenplays every screenwriter should read?

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:15:56
Whoo. Okay. I would say when it caught me off guard. I would say Shawshank Redemption.

Alex Ferrari 1:16:07
Yes. And after my own heart.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:16:09
I love that one. I would say I love network. I love the screenplay for network, a written by what's his name? You know,

Alex Ferrari 1:16:21
the guy with the dude in this stuff?

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:16:23
Yeah, got that guy I'm doing I'm really bad at names. And it's bad. Because, you know, screenwriters are always forgotten. They've like who who wrote

Alex Ferrari 1:16:31
that? Yeah, it doesn't matter. It doesn't matter. who's who's the DP. Yeah.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:16:42
And so I would say network in terms of really great sort of, like societal, societal, kind of like being able to tell a story that really holds a mirror up to society's foibles, and, and all of that,

Alex Ferrari 1:16:57
and I think you could release it in theaters today, and it would probably get the same reaction. You know, it might even be more relevant.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:17:06
What else I actually really liked, I would say get out would be a good one to study. That's a really great script. Because it's, it's a great script, it works as a pure genre film, it works as a great character story, it kind of is it follows the formula of the eight sequences, which I teach in my three x eight sequences, you know, first act second act, midpoint, it has a low point. So it follows a lot of the sort of the formula of good writing, or typical writing, but it also then, also kind of like has this undercurrent of satire to it. That's very kind of put

Alex Ferrari 1:17:49
it in there in horror, and I mean, there is satire or like, Oh, God, George Romero did a night of living dead but Day of the Dead. Was it day to day was the one the

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:18:01
Dawn of the Dead? Yeah. In a mall.

Alex Ferrari 1:18:03
Yeah, the mall one that was completely satirical about everything he was trying to say there. Right, horror can do that. Yeah. Okay. So that's it. Those are very three good choices. What advice would you give a screenwriter wanting to break into the business today?

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:18:19
Okay, so this kind of goes back to what we were talking about earlier. I know that what people the inclination might be that I need to write my Avengers or I need to write something that is like, you know, a home run big box office film, but what people are really looking for are unique voices. And they're looking for disruptive stories. So and this today, better than any time in history is a great time to tell a story from a point of view that has not been told before. Whether it's LG LGBTQ stories, you know, of African American stories, Latino, Asian stories, it's time it's a good time now to, to tell stories that are not just white male heroes stories. You know, and you don't have to be. And that's the other thing is that I often my writers of color that are in my class, the women, you know, they feel this pressure to write stories about women and writers of color, and they really want to write something else and like do it write something else, there's no better time than right now, to write something write the story that you want to write even though it seems fringe or weird or, or plays with structure. agents, producers, they are looking for fresh voices, wild stories, you know, stories told from the fringes. But again, even in those kind of stories, as long as there's an undercurrent of human emotion that we all can relate to. This is Why parasite did so well, parasite is really a story of a family who is aspiring to be greater than they were. And they kind of went the wrong route to do it and slightly paid the price. But, you know, it's a family story, but it was twisted as hell. So I would say the advice is to write something disruptive write something that's going to surprise, not something that people are going to expect.

Alex Ferrari 1:20:29
Fair enough. What is the lesson that took you the longest to learn whether in the film business or in life?

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:20:35
You know, it really is about character. And this is such an I tell my students is to I used to come up with these really big gimmick, great high concept movies. And I would just sort of like, you know, pour everything into the concept and not think enough about the character. You know, this character, what is, what's their what's their central major flaw? What, what do they want? What do they think they want? Who are they? What are their? What's their personality? What's their backstory? Where do they come from? So now I really forced myself to think a lot about my character. How can I make my heroes different? Than you know, usually, you make the supporting characters really interesting, but the hero is really vanilla and generic. How can I make my you know, maybe instead of a, you know, white male lead in this horror film, I'll make it a diminutive, mute cleaning lady of a woman. And maybe my film will be more interesting. With a character like that, who I've really thought about her backstory that she's you and yet, she's also full of Spitfire and spunky. She loves watching, dancing. You know, she believes in you know that monsters are not necessarily monsters, she yearns for love, but also knows when to let it go. You know, think about all those character traits. Before I actually write sounds familiar.

Alex Ferrari 1:21:57
Sounds familiar?

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:21:58
I don't. It should be a movie, I think

Alex Ferrari 1:22:00
I think it should write down to a movie. Absolutely. When you were saying that there was a character that I was remembering, that is such a wonderful character Leon from the from the professional or Leon, john Renault, he loved watching old, like, you know, he took care of a plant. Like that was a thing. You were used to me. I'm assuming you see that movie, right? Here's, yeah, he took care of the plan he used to watch. I think Charlie Chaplin or no dancing he Fred Astaire. So he, he was an innocent child, like that's so different of a hitman, than a hitman would have been, like, imagine if that would have been just a gruff Dude, that was a war that appreciate, right? But he's completely different, and that he has to take a girl and then he has to teach a girl How to be a hitman. That's, that's interesting,

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:22:50
Far more interesting, far, far more. And that's true. And if you take the time, and sometimes it takes half a day, you know, or a day to really think about your character without like, you know, getting into the script and the plot. Think about the character, and how to make your character actually my question to in my thing is, how are you honoring and disrupting your genre? You want to do the same thing with your central character? How is your central care? How are you honoring your genre with your central character? But how are you also disrupting the genre with your central character? You know, how can you make them different, something that makes them pop that makes him interesting? You know, Cameron Crowe is really good at creating characters like that, you know, as good as it gets, and no, that's James. James L. Brooks. Yeah. James Brooks and Cameron Crowe, they spent a lot of time thinking about their characters, gretta Gurwitch, before they actually even think about what the plot is.

Alex Ferrari 1:23:48
Now, what is what was the biggest fear you had to overcome to write your first screenplay?

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:23:56
That I would be exposed as a fraud? Yeah.

Alex Ferrari 1:24:01
You know, I don't think we'll get that answer.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:24:03
Yeah, it's just, you know, my concern that I would write this thing, and it would suck and people would hate it. And you know, what, my first screenplay, probably half the people did hate it. And the other half of the people said, You got promised, but Call me later kid. And it was them. It was the positive constructive encouragement that I got from the handful of people that saw that in my first script, that I had some promise that I was I was going for something that encouraged me to write the second one and do it better. But boy, getting over the fear of failure and rejection. It's a big one.

Alex Ferrari 1:24:43
And then what is and what did you learn from your biggest failure?

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:24:48
The character thing, okay. You know, one of the first films that my old partner and I wrote was some kind of jack in the beanstalk story, and it was just filled with joy. MX, and we just didn't spend any time really thinking about Jack's character. And it was this huge It was like it went out to the town it was going to be this auction, the agency was all thought this was gonna this was like, I think right after Air Bud was getting made, and we were, you know, kind of hot. And, or after Disney bought it, but it hadn't come come out or something. And it just everyone passed. And it's because they just emotional thing. They were pulled in emotionally with this character, his journey. And, and that's when I realized I have to spend more time thinking about character and emotion.

Alex Ferrari 1:25:38
Now, where can people find out about the book about your work and and find out more about you?

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:25:44
Well, you can go to my website, Aaron mendelsohn.com. And that's Mendelssohn Soh n.com. Or you can also find my book the 11 fundamental questions on Amazon. But on my website, there's a link to the Amazon page through through the website, you can also sign up, you know, to be on my mailing list and get updates and that kind of thing.

Alex Ferrari 1:26:07
Very cool. Aaron, thank you. It's like I said, Well, we can keep talking for at least another two or three hours. So I do appreciate you taking the time out to talk to the tribe and hopefully help them along their screenwriting path. So thank you so much, brother. I appreciate it.

Aaron Mendelsohn 1:26:20
It's been my pleasure. Thank you, Alex.

Alex Ferrari 1:26:22
I want to thank Aaron for coming on the show and sharing his knowledge and experience with dog to play basketball as well. So thank you, Aaron. If you want to get a copy of his book, or reach out to Aaron, please head over to the show notes at bulletproofscreenwriting.tv/076. And if you haven't already, please head over to screenwriting podcast.com and leave a good review for the show. It really helps us out a lot. Thank you guys for listening. And as always keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.


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Top Ten Screenwriting MasterClasses

Top Ten Screenwriting MasterClasses

What you are about to listen to is probably the equivalent of taking at least five years of screenwriting courses or classes at a top tier film school.

BAFTA (The British Academy of Film and Television Arts) has an amazing collection of FREE screenwriting lectures from some of the biggest and most successful screenwriters in the world.

There’s easily between 15-20 hours of remarkable content here. Take a listen and get ready to take notes from these masters of the craft of screenwriting and storytelling.


Charlie Kaufman – Screenwriting MasterClass

Kaufman – one of the few contemporary screenwriters whose name commands top-billing status alongside his films’ directors – has quickly established himself as an uncompromisingly original and imaginative talent.

1999’s Being John Malkovich, in which the eponymous actor plays a fictional version of himself, earned Kaufman a BAFTA Film Award for Best Screenplay – an award he picked up again for Adaptation (2002) and Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind (2004).

Failure is a badge of honour. It means you risked failure.


Nancy Meyers – Screenwriting MasterClass

Screenwriter and director Nancy Meyers is an Academy Award nominee for her script Private Benjamin(1980) and Golden Globe-nominated for her screenplay It’s Complicated (2009).

Across a career spanning 35 years her credits include Father of The Bride (1991), The Parent Trap (1998), Something’s Gotta Give (2003), The Holiday (2006), and The Intern (2015), starring Robert DeNiro and Anne Hathaway.

In an inspiring lecture laden with advice for up-and-coming writers, Nancy Meyers discussed creating characters, producing and directing her own work, and her concerns for the film landscape in Hollywood.


Brian Helgeland -Screenwriting MasterClass

Brian Helgeland stands out as one of Hollywood’s master screenwriters of intelligent crime films.

After cutting his teeth in horror (Nightmare on Elm Street 4 was an early credit), he quickly jumped to A-list status with an Oscar® win for the pitch-perfect noir thriller LA Confidential and Oscar® and BAFTA nominations for Mystic River.

As a writer, Helgeland is highly prized for smart, muscular thrillers like Green Zonedirected by Paul Greengrass, and The Taking of Pelham 1 2 3and Man on Fire, both directed by the late Tony Scott, as well as Paybackwhich he wrote and directed himself.

On writing crime film, he says:

“It strips people down to their basic elements. It gets to the hunting-gathering heart of the matter. I don’t want to write about the ennui rich people feel. I could care less. I want to write about what’s in people’s heads, hearts and between their legs when they either are in prison, might go to prison, have a gun in their face or are pointing one”.

In this lecture, Helgeland urged screenwriters to ‘fight’ to assert themselves in front of studio executives, argued that films should be ‘commercial’ (that is, profitable on some level) and paid tribute to Cool Hand Luke screenwriter Frank Pierson.

 


Scott Frank – Screenwriting MasterClass

Scott Frank, a remarkably diverse writer whose films have grossed over a billion dollars at the box office. During writing the screenplay for Kenneth Branagh’s 1991 thriller Dead Again that he says he really learned his craft.

Frank cemented his growing reputation with a brace of Elmore Leonard adaptations – Get Shorty and Out of Sight– and has since gone on to pen films as diverse as Minority Report, The Lookout(which Frank also directed) and Marley & Me.

Frank began his candid, funny, and informative lecture by explaining that when writing he finds it useful to follow a set of rules that he has laid out for himself.

He confessed that they are a set of rules that may only work for him, whilst also noting that

“rules are something to cling to when ideas fail.”

His first and possibly most important rule was

“why you decide to write something doesn’t matter, but how you do it is important.”

Frank revealed that he was initially motivated to write Out of Sight because he wanted a bigger house but that it ultimately turned out to be

“the single most enjoyable job of my career, and is perhaps the work that I’m the most proud of.”

He explained,

“It’s okay to write something just for the money, and it’s also okay to write something just because you want to.”


John Logan – Screenwriting MasterClass

The man behind Russell Crowe’s brilliant line “At my signal, unleash hell” in Oscar® Winning film Gladiator, John Logan is widely regarded as one of Hollywood’s most prolific writers.

John Logan has collaborated with some of the most visionary directors of our time: Tim Burton, Martin Scorsese, Ridley Scott, Steven Spielberg.

He is notable for the diversity of his projects: in 2011 alone his writing is at the heart of the Academy Award® Winning animated comedy Rango, Ralph Fiennes’ directorial debut Coriolanus, James Bond’s Skyfall directed by Sam Mendes, and Martin Scorsese’s The Aviator and Hugo.

What I say to to young writers is: read your Shakespeare. Read your Shelley. Read your Keats. Read your Byron. Love language.

He discusses the techniques of writing for the big screen.


Guillermo Arriaga – Screenwriting MasterClass

Arriaga came to screenwriting relatively late in life, having been a university teacher and novelist before meeting his collaborator Academy Award® Winning Director  Alejandro González Iñárritu, with whom he made some of his better-known films –Amores Perros, 21 Grams, and Babel. His work is famous for utilizing a fragmentary, non-linear approach to plot, which contributed to Amores Perros’winning countless awards.

The first rule of screenwriting, or any art, is having no rules.


Emma Thompson – Screenwriting MasterClass

The writer and actor’s feature screenwriting debut Sense and Sensibility(1995) remains one of the definitive Jane Austen screen adaptations.

In 2001 she wrote the Golden Globe-nominated Witfor director Mike Nicholls, and in 2005 penned the family hit Nanny McPhee. She returned in 2010 with the sequel Nanny McPhee And The Big Bang.

Emma Thompson described how her writing routine involves yoga and Hoovering, reflected upon her early acting experiences at Cambridge Footlights, and explained why ‘if you can’t fail, you can’t do this job’.


Aline Brosh McKenna – Screenwriting MasterClass

Relatively new to the industry but with a string of commercial successes to her name already, Aline Brosh McKenna is one of Hollywood’s current ‘It’ writers, with a particular finesse for a romantic comedy.

A first feature credit on Three To Tango (1999) led to Laws Of Attraction (2004). McKenna’s feature script was for the box-office hit The Devil Wears Prada (2006) was adapted from Lauren Weisberger’s novel.

McKenna’s sharp and sassy screenplay for The Devil Wears Prada was nominated for a BAFTA and a Writers Guild of America Award.


Nick Hornby – Screenwriting MasterClass

Nick Hornby is an Oscar-nominated screenwriter and award-winning author. His most recent screenplay is an upcoming adaptation of Colm Tóibín’s acclaimed novel Brooklyn(2015), directed by John Crowley, many consider a front runner for Best Picture at this year’s Oscars®.

Prior to that, he adapted Cheryl Strayed’s NY Times bestselling memoir into the film Wild(2014) which was directed by Jean-Marc Vallée and starred Reese Witherspoon.

Nick was Oscar® and BAFTA-nominated for his screenplay adaptation of Lynn Barber’s memoir An Education(2009) directed by Lone Scherfig and he adapted his own memoir for the screenplay of Fever Pitch(1997) starring Colin Firth.

Bill Kelly: The ‘Enchanted’ Hollywood Screenwriter

I recently had the great pleasure of interviewing Bill Kelly, the screenwriter of the Disney film Enchanted starring Amy Adams. His other screenwriting credits include Premonition with Sandra Bullock and Blast From The Past with Brendan Fraser. As we noshed on breakfast he graciously answered those questions that I had about being a working Hollywood screenwriter.

DF: What is your writing process?

Bill Kelly: I get up in the morning, I have some coffee, and start working. I put on some bland 70s love songs that are the equivalency of white noise. In other words, there’s no music that would be challenging or interesting to me. I can’t write in silence so it gives me the distraction to go out of the present and disappear into your mind and imagination.

DF: How much of the writing is done behind the desk, and how much of it is done when you are walking or doing other activities?

Bill Kelly: The truth is I don’t use a desk, I use a laptop so I will move around the house with the Mac Book Air; fool myself that I’m in different places. But knowing what you are going to write is a huge part of it. Knowing what you want to write, knowing the story you want to tell. And then in writing leaving yourself open to the discovery and exploration that process provides. Finding out things about the character and about the story. In the ideal Zen state of it all, you will literally find yourself caught up in the story and you’re transcribing… your characters are talking to you – you’re like a court stenographer. You’re just listening to those voices go back and forth in your head.

DF: Is that when you know that a story is working for you?

Bill Kelly: Yeah, that’s one indication. I think the big thing is – this is like screenwriting 101 – what does the character want? What is their goal? Who is trying to stop them? What is the conflict? Is it interesting and something you care about? Set the windup toys in motion and see where they go.

DF: As you were learning the craft of screenwriting who were the writers that inspired you?

Bill Kelly: I read the book Adventures in the Screen Trade by William Goldman – which referenced his screenplay for Butch Cassidy and The Sundance Kid and Marathon Man – I really loved his writing style. He’s such a great writer – The Princess Bride is one of my favorite movies. He has a very much, “Sit down, I want to tell you something.” There is a casualness. I was an assistant where I had to read a lot of scripts; so you would read these script by people who were trying to impress you. Like ACTION, GUN, BOOM, THE HOTTEST GIRL YOU’VE EVER SEEN – you feel like you’re being sold something like someone is trying to push Amway on you. Are you telling me a story or are you trying to show me how cool you are in terms of telling the story? I love the affability of William Goldman’s writing. This goes to all the great writers I connected with like Billy Wilder. It’s that idea, “let me take you by the hand; I’ve got a great story – we’re not going to rush – let’s walk down here together.” There are strength and confidence in that.

DF: Are there movies that inspired you?

BK: Close Encounters of the Third Kind. I remember going to see it on the big screen – the mystical experience – I was just sucked in. My favorite stories are when extraordinary things happen to ordinary people. I’m probably less more so a fan of fantasy in an entirely different world: like when it’s on Planet X and it’s a bunch of weird, made-up names – I don’t relate to it. But if I’m telling a story and I’m in the 7-Eleven getting a Slurpee, and suddenly a giant Lizard foot crushes a Volvo in the parking lot – I’m all over that. I really like the prism of our everyday life – something extraordinary happening to an ordinary person.

DF: Do you think that’s what most people respond to when they go to the movies?

BK: I think it’s totally subjective. I think there’s an appeal in that I’m not watching someone other than me… I am me. It’s the human element. i’m Peter Parker. I’m a college kid. I know what it’s like. I’m on this boring tour and I get bit by this spider, and now suddenly I can spin webs and climb buildings – it’s fun.

DF: Did you go to film school?

BK: No, I have a sad but helpful two year Community College degree in journalism. It was very helpful in that we would have to literally write on typewriters – that’s how long ago it was. We were forced to come up with a story. It wasn’t like, “Do you feel like writing today? What’s your mood? Is the muse with you?” It’s like go, “Make mistakes. We need five hundred words in ten minutes!”

DF: So you think that regimen of being a journalist helped you as a screenwriter?

BK: Yeah, the big dictum for journalism is efficiency of language: how do you say the most with the least amount of words. And that’s a hugely helpful thing in terms of screenwriting because the minute you get verbose and self-indulgent you’re not serving the story, you’re serving yourself, and everything has to be a slave to the story.

DF: Do you think in your work, you’re trying to say something about not only you but for humanity as a whole?

Bill Kelly: I don’t think anyone should try to teach a lesson, but I think a movie has to have a thematic underpinning to resonate because those are the movies that stick with you. They’re the ones that you remember. A lot of movies – they’re fun and they’re popcorn – but they’re nothing new and they’re not about anything. You forget them by the time you eat dinner. But the one you think about three days later, five years later, you think God I love that movie because it connected to something bigger. So I think thematics are huge, but never being didactic or to proselytize.

DF: What were some of the mistakes you made early on when you were starting out? What did you learn from them?

Bill Kelly: I think my biggest mistakes were I came up with ideas and wrote scripts based on thinking this is an idea that someone else would like. And that’s just the path to failure. Trying to second guess what someone else wants. To be original, to be striking, to set yourself apart you have to ask yourself first – at least for me wanting to have a more commercial audience – “Do I love this story?” Because I’m going to have to devote my time and energy and ignore the people I love for months and months. And then you have to ask yourself will someone else connect with this as well. I was doing it the other way around: what is something that someone else will like and I’ll write that as opposed to what do I love… what’s really interesting to me. If it’s really interesting to you [as a writer], then there’s a pretty good chance it will connect with somebody else.

DF: Did you have that experience when you were writing Enchanted?

Bill Kelly: Thematically, yes. It was very much the idea of naked innocence confronting cynicism, fearlessly. And you needed a character that could do that fearlessly. The joke in Enchanted is never on Giselle; the joke is always on the people who are cynical because she’s pure and pure-hearted. That’s what I love about that.

DF: Do you have a technique for generating new ideas?

Bill Kelly: I’m not proud, I’ll watch old Twilight Zone episodes – I’m a hooky kind of guy. I like big premises and big ideas. Can I see a movie – what if there’s a certain part of that idea – and I can twist it. I’m not a fan of theft, but I’m not above an homage [laughter].

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DF: Anything from Richard Matheson [writer on the original Twilight Zone series]?

Bill Kelly: I love Richard Matheson. You look at Twilight Zone you’ll find all the movies that came out of them. Those stories had great little gimmicks and twists, but they also had a thematic underpinning.

DF: What are your criteria for what works as a story idea and what doesn’t?

Bill Kelly: It’s sort of a gut thing. If I like an idea I talk to the people around me. You can tell in their response. I love an idea that generates enthusiasm in other people. Where they ask, “And then what happens?” If they simply say, “I don’t get it,” then I have to ask myself maybe something’s not there.

DF: As a writer does your friendships or relationships influence the stories that you write?

Bill Kelly: Yeah, your life experiences would intrinsically be influenced by the people around you. Enchanted is the story of a single father, and I was a single father. A lot of that language talking to his daughter is just me, verbatim, how I spoke to my son. Any time you can draw on that I think is great. And to see people around you that might represent a piece of a character, and their behavior and how they would act I think is enormously helpful.

DF: What inspired you to continue through the struggle as a screenwriter before you made it, and now that you have, how much of the struggle still continues?

Bill Kelly: I was too stupid, too broke, and I had nowhere else to go. I was Richard Gere in An Officer and a Screenwriter. So I was fortunate that it finally played out, but it took a very long time. I was literally at the quitting line. It was a Sunday night and my car was in the shop; I didn’t have the money to pay for it. My son – I carried him home to our little one-bedroom apartment on my back – and I realized I had to move back home to Chicago, not because I wanted to but because I was all out of tricks. And then the Tuesday after that I sold my first script. And is it still hard? It’s really hard. It’s harder than ever. That’s the hard-learned lesson: that there is no point that you say that I’ve arrived and everything is easy. It’s climbing a sheer cliff rock, and if you’re lucky you’ll get a ledge this big [indicates with his hand the space between his thumb and forefinger]. So you take a breath and there’s another sheer cliff rock, and that’s all there is.

DF: Do you see a change in the industry for screenwriters, and if so in what way?

Bill Kelly: I think it’s a much more challenging environment for original material… IPs [Intellectual Properties], sequels… those kinds of rule the day, because you have people who are operating not creatively or out of gut instinct but out of fear; and they have these lovely jobs with lovely parking spaces [and they ask themselves] “how do I keep them?” The easiest thing is to be risk-averse. In terms of original material, it’s a night and day.

DF: So that would explain why you see a lot of movies that were made in the 80s coming back.

Bill Kelly: Yeah, the Reboots: based on original material, but because it’s from a movie it’s no longer original material – it has the legitimacy to it.

DF: How can writers have more control over their scripts, or does Hollywood know what’s best for those scripts and the best way to change them?

Bill Kelly: Hollywood doesn’t know the best way to change them. The best way a writer can maintain control – I’m not even sure control is the right word because it is a collaboration. I think it’s a talent to navigate personalities, and rooms, and situations – to maintain and retain as much of your original vision as you can while being open to collaboration with other people that have talented things to offer.

DF: If someone were to come up to you and ask, “How do you break into screenwriting?” what would you tell them?

Bill Kelly: Now, if I was nineteen I would NOT go to film school. I would get a Netflix subscription and internet connection: anything you want to know about screenwriting is for free on the internet. Find out who the great filmmakers. I would get a camera. Learn to be your best critic and your biggest fan, and I’d go out and make a movie.

DF: Are there any projects that you’re working on now?

Bill Kelly: I have a movie called Timeless. It’s a science fiction story about a man who loses his wife, doesn’t believe in forever, discovers that this girl he only knew slightly is this heiress to a fortune. He decides to spend every dime to do the modern-day Manhattan Project version of a time machine to go back to her for one moment.

DF: That sounds REALLY exciting.

Bill Kelly: Yeah, I’m really excited about that.


David R. Flores is a writer and artist (@sicmonkie) based in Los Angeles. He is the creator of the comic book series Dead Future King published by Alterna Comics and Golden Apple Books. Website: www.davidrflores.com